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Naik

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Ab Aage >

jab Arjun dono baheno ko lekar ghar pahucha to Sarita ne gate khol diya aur teeno ghar k ander aa gye

UN teeno ko dekh kar Sarita boli


  • sarita > kaha the tum log etni der time dekha kitna ho gya muje kitni tension ho rhi thi tumhe kuch fark padta bhi hai ya nhi
Aur tum dono y to hai hi aisa tum dono ko to dhyan rakhna chahiye tha na ki hume jaldi ghar aana chahiye

sarita ki Bat sunkar dono ek dam se hadvada gye aur Arjun ki taraf dekhne lge

Arjun n unhe relex rahne k liye Ankho se ishara kiya aur fir dono n thodi Rahat ki sans li

Arjun ek dam s sarita k gle lag gya aur bola


Arjun. > Arme chil karo na kuch ni hua we are fine aur gal par kis karte hue l love you so much mom umaah

Arjun k aise ek dam gale lgane s sarita k chehre par bhi smile aa gyi aur bo bhi Arjun ko khud s chipkate hue boli love you to beta lekin aise let mat hua kar pta hai jan nikal jati hai jb tu ghr s bahar jata hai to


Sarita k Etna emosional hone se Arjun ko bda pyar aaya aur bola


  1. Arjun > mom etna bhi pyar mat karo kahi aisa na ho k m apko dad s cheen lu aur hasne lga to Sarita usse boli
Sarita chal badmash kahin k Etna bhi asan nhi hai samjhe chalo ab hath muh dho lo jakar m halka nasta teyar kar deti hu tab tak ok

Arjun > ok mom aur ek gal par kiss kar k jhor s sarita ko gle lga liya jisse sarita k muh ek halki si siski aaahh nikal gyi kyonki sarita k boobs Arjun ki kathor chhati m dav gye lekin Arjun to n to sirf apni ma ko gle lgaya tha uska abhi tak koi galt irada nhi tha


sarita > (man m ) kitni kathor chhati hai iski mere boobs aise dab gye jaise kisi mashine k neeche aa gye ho fir ek dam se hadvada gyi aur boli

Are beta ab kya sari rat aise hi goe lga kar rakhhega kya

Arjun bhi smile karte hue bola ohh sorry mom bo apko gle lga kar hatne ka man hi nhi kiya aur Etna bol kar Arjun Apne room m pahuch gya

yaha city s thodi doori par ek sunsan sadak par ek bahut khoobsurat ladki lift k liye khadi thi pas m hi kar thi sayad uski kar kharab ho gyi thi


tabhi ek blue car uske samne aa kar ruki aur usme se do ladke bahar nikale aur bole kya hua madam gadi kharab ho gyi kya

ladki > ha kya aap muje lift de sakte hai muje thodi hi dur is rod par hi jana hai


dusra ladka uske jism ko ghurte hue usne pahle se ankho hi ankho m kuch isara kiya aur dono k chehre par ek rahsyamayi mushkan aa gyi aur pahla bola

Are kyon nhi aa jaiye baise bhi aap etni rat m kaahan bhatkengi

etna surn kar ladki bhi smile karte hue ghadi m baith gyi aur boli

ladki > thank you muje bahut dar lag rha tha kafi andhera ho chuka hai m aaj let ho gyi thi aur es gadi ko bhi abhi khrab hona tha


ladka > gadi aage bda deta hai aur bolta hai koi bat nhi kabhi kabhi ho jata hai dura ladka ladki k bagal m hi baitha hua tha to bo uski gand par hath rakh kar smile karne lgta hai to ladki uska hath hta deti hai


pahla ladka bhi front mirror m sab dekh rha tha aur smile kar rha tha


US ladke n gadi beech m hi rok di kyonki y sus San rasta tha aur andhere ki bajah s koi unko asani s dekh bhi nhi sakta tha.

ladki > aapne gadi kyo rok chaliye m let ho rhi ho


ladka > haste hue etni bhi kya jaldi hai chle jana thoda mje to lene do Etna bolte hi bo ladka us ladki fat jhapat padta hai lekin agle hi pal ek bhayank cheekh us sunsan elake m gunj jati hai aur ek bahut bhayank daravani aur bhari aavaj m ladki bolti hai


haste hue > ha ha ha mja aa gya sikar karke uske bade bade nakhun aur bhayank chehra dekh kar aache ache ki gand fat jaye etni bhayank thi bo un dono ko marne k bad bo baha s gayab ho jati hai

Jate jate ek bat bol kar jati hai


dand nayak m bapas aa chuki hu apna badla lene k liye tumhe mujhse duniya ki koi takat nhi bacha sakti bacha sakte ho to bacha lo khud ko aur apne parivar ko "ha ha ha ha

aur tabhi Arjun ki Ankh khul jati hai vo pura paseene m nahaya hua tha aur hanf rha tha


y kon thi jo mujhse badla lene k liye es kadar pagal hai

kuch to bat hai


aaj k liye Etna hi



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Arjun uth kar baith chuka tha vo yaho soch rha tha k y sab kya ho rha uski jindgi m etne sare mod aa chuke the kaha vo ek simple life ji rha tha aur kaha ek dam s uski life ne mod l liye the


usne time dekha 3 baj the tabhi us vo tha aur fresh ho kar aaya aur apna clone bna. Diya use samjha diya vaise clone kya pratiroop bilkul same ek jaisi shaktiya thi apni Aatma ka vibhajan kiya tha usne

fir vo dand nayak k roop m aa gya


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Arjun dand nayak roop m


aur pahuch gya d lok m abhi d raj bhi apne singhasan par baithe kuch soch rhe the


Kya soch rhe ho d raj

Arjun ki aavaj sun kar d raj n jab sar utha kar samne dekha to unke chehre par jo chinta thi pal bhar m gayab ho gyi

d raj > pranam dand nayak

Arjun > pranam Dev Raj


Arjun > teyariya ho gyi ya nhi Dev Raj

D Raj > ji dand nayak jaisa apne kaha tha uske mutavik sabhi teyariya ho gyi hai kintu ek shanka hai

kya hum sahi kar rhe hai

Arjun > uske papo ka ghda bhar chuka hai d raj

ji dand nayak jaisa aap uchit samjhe

D Arjun > muje sena se milna hai


Dev Raj

JI chaliye us taraf aur Arjun d raj chal diye senya kaksh ki taraf baha s nikalte hue vo ek medan m pahuch gye jaha par teyariya chal rhi thi sena n bhi teyariya karke aram kar liya tha

Arjun n dekha ek vishal sena hai jo ek tej se s chamak rhi hai uske chehre par mushkan aa gyi jise dekh kar d raj bhi soch m pad gye aur Arjun ko dekhne lge

d raj

kya hua dand nayak aap aise mushkra kyo rhe hai koi khas bat hai kya

Arjun

Aaj ek bar fir burai par achhai ki jeet hogi

d raj

ji dand nayak aap n uchit kaha hai hmari sena aakram k liye teyar hai


Arjun

Durmukha ko sandesh bhijva diya apne


d raj

ji dand nayak bhijva diya hai
Aur usne kaha hai ki vo devo ka ant karke Vo dev lok ko apne adheen karne bala hai aur usne kaha hai ki bo apki baheno se vivah karega


Arjun ko gussa to aaya lekin usne kuch react nhi kiya Thodi hi der m sena teyar ho chuki thi

Arjun n sena ki taraf dekha aur bola

Arjun

aap logo ko aaj ek fir se ek aur dharm yudh m bhag lene ka sobhagya prapt hua hai aap logo m s koi kuch kahna chahta hai


puri sena ki ek jor dar aavaj aai hum sabhi dharm yudh k liye sajj hain

sabhi dev bhi teyar the


d raj

dand nayak ab hume prasthan karna chahiye surya ki pahli kiran m kuch samay shes hai

Arjun


Ji Dev Raj Aur Etna bol kar Arjun sena ki taraf apna hath kiya aur uske hath s ek neeli kirna nikal kar sabhi sainiko m sma gyi kiran k samate hi sainiko m ek naya utsah bhar gya jaise unki takat dugni ho chuki thi


d raj bhi Arjun k is karya par chakit ho gye

aur fir Dev Raj n sabhi prasthan karne ka aadesh diya diya aur sabhi devo n sena ki taraf apna apna hath kiya aur sabhi gayab ho chuke the


kuch hi der m Arjun n shaitan lok par puri sena k sath prasthan kiya vaha charo aur udaseenta aur nakaratmakta k sath andhera charo aur fela hua tha

Arjun n dekha abhi to tak baha par durmukha nhi aaya tha


kuch der m ek kali roshni k sath us jagah par andhera chha gya aur jab bo andhera hta to sne ek bahut hi Vishal sena khadi thi jise dekh kar ek bar to d raj bhi ghabra gya jab unhone apni bagal m dekha to baha s Arjun gayab ho chuka tha d raj chintit ho gye ki aise samay m dand nayak kaha chale gye


idhar Arjun garun lok m pahuch gya tha jaha par garun lok ki rani apne mahal m singhasan par baithi hue thi jab Arjun unke samne pahucha to bo uske samne jhuk gyi aur shinghasan s neeche utar kar Arjun ko pranam kiya



maharani > pranam dand nayak aap etne samay bad aaye hai hun kab s aapki pratiksha kar rhe the


D Arjun

Ji maharani hum apne vachan ki nibhane gye the jo humne aapse kiya tha

Arjun ki bat sunkar maharani ki khushi ka thikana na rha aur khushi k Aanshu unki ankho se neeche girne lage

Arjun >

aap ro kyo rhi hai maharani

IDhar jaise hi y bat Arjun boli ki Arjun apna vachan pura karne gya tha to pure mahal m upashthit aurte mahal k darbar m ekkthe ho gye aur khushi m jhumne lage edhar maharani ki dono putri aa gyi thi jo chori chori Arjun ko dekh rhi thi t bat Arjun s chhipi na rah saki Arjun k chehre par anayas si mushkan aa gyi


Arjun


maharani ab aapko es kavach m rahne ki koi aavashyakta nhi hai bahut hi jald us dusht ka ant ho jayega


IDhar ranbhumi m Dev Raj n pavak dev ko sena pati niyukt kiya tha


aur udhar durmukha k mahal m

durmukha singhasan par baitha hua tha aur sweety aur Anjali ko ek room m rakhha gya tha unka har tarah s khayal rakhha gya tha

yudh se ek din pahle



durmukha


kanthka hmare putra aur putri ko ko is bat ki suchna d di jaye k devo aur asuro yudh hone vala hai

Kanthka ji maharaj aur kanthka n apne ek sipahi ko bulaya

kanthka


Rja sur aur jakar yuvraj aur Raj kumari ko is bat ki suchna d do

ji senapati jaisi apki aagya


aur vo gayab ho gya

durmukha

hmare putra agneya sur aur makra aur ko bhi suchit mar do


kanthka sur

ji maharaj

kanthka

maharaj rajkumari shesuri ko suchna deni hai ya nhi

durmukha


nhi kanthka use is bare m pta nhi chlna chahiye kyonki hum apni putriyo ko kisi prakar ki hani nhi pahuchana chahte hai

kanthka aur apki bahene

Dushti aur mesha ko

durmukha

nhi fir hasne lga kanthka bahut din s humne apni baheno k sath sambhog nhi kiya hai unhe suchit karo ki humne unhe yad kiya hai


kanthka

unke patiyo ko maharaj


Durmukha unko kaho ki bo jald hi yahan prasthan kare aur yudh m bhag l kyonki bo bahut hi balvan aur Mayabi hai

kanthka sur ji maharaj aur Etna bol kar kanthka gayab ho gya

uske jate hi


mahal m ek bahut tej prakash bikhar gya aur charo taraf roshni fail gyi jisse sabhi ki ankhe band ho gyi

jab vo prakash hta to samne ek shaksh khda hua tha aisa lag rha tha jaise ko maha yodha khda hua hai pura sudol sareer aur chehre par tej jisse achhe mohit ho jaye


ek bar ko to durmukha n jb Arjun ki ankho m dekha to bo khud hi kho gya jab Arjun n dekha to Arjun bola

Arjun > chhi chhi sale m us type ka nhi samjha muje ghurna band kar


aur Arjun ki bat sun kar sabhi ki tandra tut gyi aur durmukha hadvada gya aur bola

Durmukha

kya bakvas kar rhe ho dand nayak aur tumhari yaha aane ki himmat kaise hui sipahiyo bandhi bna lo es beech ko aur fir smile karte hue


durmukha > isi k samne eski baheno fir shetani mushkan k sath nhi nhi premikao k sath vivah karunga aur fir dva k chodunga

uski bat sun kar Arjun ko gussa to aya lekin Vo apni yojna ko khrab nhi karna chahta tha

Arjun

samne dekha achi bat hoti hai lekin rat m sote samay din m dekhna achhi bat nhi

durmukha

dekh kya rhe ho bandi bna lo ese aur agle hi pal hajaro seniko n Arjun par hmla kar diya

Arjun n ek smile durmukha ko di aur bola


m yaha santi ka prastav lekar aaya tha mene socha tha tujhe ek avasar d diya jaye lekin tu kutte ki dum hai kabhi nhi sudhrega

fir bola jinke shath tu shadi k sapne dekh rha hai na vahi Teri mout ka karn banegi


y kahte hue hasne lga aur usne ek chutki bja di

durmukha k sare senik ek jagah jam gye

fir Arjun bola tune avsar kho diya hai durmukha aur jo tune bola hai na bo tu nhi m karunga aur apni premikao s to m shadi karunga hi lekin Teri baheno aur betiyo ko bhi m hi chodunga samjh gya aur ek shaitani muskan di jise dekh kar

durmukha aag babula ho gya aur chhilaya dand nayak m tujhe chhodunga nhi tu marega mere hatho s

uski bat sun kar Arjun bola chal bi chuje


aur apna ek pair jamin par d mara jisse ek bayani aavaj dhadam ki aayi aur durmukha k hajaro seniko ko Antriksh ki gahrai m gayab kar diya


durmukha


kya kar lengi vo dono tab to m un dono s vivah karne bala tha kintu ab unhe apni rakhel bnaunga dono ko dekhta hu kon bachata tum logo ko mujse


Arjun


haste hua tu sach m pagal hai v jinke liye tere hajaro seniko ko ek chutki m khak milane bala dand nayak bhi unka dur ban kar aaya hai soch vo kitni shakti shali hongi

etna bol kar Arjun gayab ho gya

aur edhar durmukha hath malte rah gya


present time

Arjun

maharani aap sabhi tab tak yahi rahenge jab tak m na kahu

Lekin Arjun ki bat sun kar maharani aur uski putriyo bhoye tan gyi aur Arjun ko ghurne lagi

Teeno hum bhi jayenge baha us kutte ki bajah s hmara garun lok tabah ho chuka hai hmare sabhi purush jati khatm ho chuki hai uska dand to dena ho hoga

hum etne bhi kamjor nhi hai ki hum lad na sake Etna kahte hua unki ankho m Anshu aa gye jab Arjun n sabhi traf dekha to sabhi dukhi thi sabhi ki ankho m aashu the


Arjun >

thik hai jaise aapki marji lekin thoda savdhan rahna aur aap sabhi yahi rahogi thik hai


sabhi ji dand nayak

Arjun ki bat sun kar vo teeno khush ho gyi aur


aur agle hi pal unke chehre par krodh dikhne lga pratishodh ki jwala jo dafan thi vo bahar aa chuki thi jab Arjun n in teeno ko dekha to dekhta hai rah gya yudh k vastro n vo bahut hi hot lag rhi thi kale rang ka livaj peeeche supar hero ki tarh kavar ka kapda jo gle m ek bandha hua tha jaise loyer k gle m bandha hotha hai kuch is tarah

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Maharani


Dikh rhi thi maharani (dosto m name bhul gya hu to adjust Kar lena agle update m name dunga )


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Aaj Arjun n pahli bar kisi ladki ko dekha tha es taraf k kapdo m esliye uska muh khula ka khula rha gya aur aur jab un teeno n Arjun ko apni taraf aise dekhte paya to teeno Sharma gyi aur Idhar sabhi aurte mushkra rhi thi


Aj k liye Etna



Dosto apne comments aur like jaroor d apko update kaisa lga apna review dena na bhule

thank yu






Tow dev lok ki sena pahoch gayi shetan lok badhiya h
Dand nayak tow pahoch gaye garun lok ab waha se maharani or dono putriya bhi aa rahi jung ladne
Halanki dand nayak Durmukha ko ek mauka dia shanti ka lekin usne gawa dia
Ab dekhte h Dand nayak iski kia halat kerta h
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Update 49

Arjun n dekha ki y log nhi manne bale to baha s aa gya antriksh m usne apni powers ko active kar liya tha aur surksha kavach lga liya tha aur Arjun apni dono bahno k upar bhi surksha kavach lga rakhha tha idhar durmukha ki bahene mahal m aa chuki thi
jo kuch es tarah ki dikh rhi thi bahut jyda sexy baher ko nikali hue gand bade bade baksh teekhe nain naksh puri tarah bharpur yovan tha






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Mesha




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Dushti

Jaise hi dono bahene mahal m pahuchi apni baheno ko samne dekh kar durmukha khush ho jata hai aur bolta hai

Durmukha

Swagat meri pyari baheno ko apne bhai k mahal m

Apne bhai ki bat sun kar dono bahut khush hoti hai

Mesha aur dushti

Maharaj ki Jai Ho


Kya bat hai bhrata apne hume ati shighra aane k liye kiyo kaha koi bahut hi jaroori kam tha kya shochte hue bolti hai tabhi dushti ki najar apne bhai ki tango k beech bane ubhar par jati hai aur bo samjh jati hai k uske bhai n unhe kyo bulaya hai

Aur shaitani mushkan k sath bolti hai apko hmari etni yad aai

Mesha bhi samjh jati hai ies bakt bo log akele the kyonki un dono k aate hi durmukha n sabhi ko bahar bhej diya tha

Mesha samjh sakte hai bhrata bhavi ki mirttyu k bad apne us aurat ko apni patni bnana chaha kintu us dand nayak ki vajah s ki bajah se usse vivah karne m asafal rhe

Dushti

Ki tu bhrata apke liye aurto aur ladkiyo ki kami to nhi hai fir apne hme kyo yad kiya

Durmukha ho gya tum dono ka ab hum bole


Dono haste hue "> ji kahiye

Durmukha

Us kamine dand nayak ki bajah s na to hum garun lok ki shtriyo aur baha ki maharani ko apne bas ma kar paye aur na hi hum us dust kulta Yamini se vivah kar paye agar hum Devika aur uski putriyo s vivah karne m safal ho jate to aaj bhrahmand m sabse shaktisali shali hote hum kintu su dust dand nayak aur indra k chal ki bajah s hum asafal ho gye aur fir us dand nayak n garun lok m m kavach lga diya use marne m hum pichli bar safal to ho gye kintu hum uski kisi premika ko apne bas m na kar sake kyonki jo uski sabhi priya raniya thi un sab n uske sath hi aatm hatya kar li thi jiske karn hum apni yojna m jeet kar bhi har gye aaj 25 sal bad fir s bahi hone ja rha hai aur is bar hum kisi bhi keemat par nhi harenge

Uski bat sun kar dono serious ho gyi aur boli hume kya karna hoga bhrata

Durmukha

Haste hue tumhe kuch karne ki aavashyakta nhi hai tum to hmare yaha aakar baitho apni dono jangho par ki taraf ishara karte hue


Uski bat sun kar dono abhi aage badne ho bali thi ki tabhi unke dono k pati baha par aa jate hai jiske karn dono apni apni jagah par ruk jati hai

I dono k name hai ketka sur mesha sur


Dono

Maharaj durmukha ki jai ho

Durmukha apni baheno k patiyo ko dekh kar bahut khush hota hai kyonki dono hi maha Shakti shali aur maha Mayavi jinki maya k samne bade s bade yodha bhi mat Kha jate the esliye durmukha n apni baheno k vivah in dono se kiya tha

Aaj k liye Etna hi


apne vichar rakhna na bhule m dekh rha hu bahut s logo ko story pasand aa rhi hai kintu bo log koi pratikiriya nhi d rhe hai to meri aap sabhi vinti hai ki aap log apne comments jaroor d



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Update 53 (karn pichani ka aagman )

Jaise hi d raj n Arjun aur uski baheno ko dekha to unhone sab kuch badal diya aisa lag rha tha jaise aaj k time m yudh hota hai chutki bajate hi sab kuch badal chuka tha

idhar jaise hi in dono ka badh hua durmukha ka dut turant hi pahuch gya saitan lok m



dut > maharaj ki jai ho

abhi durmukha Aram farma rha tha sham ka samay tha


durmukha > haste hue ! Kya khabar laye ho ?
kya hum yudh jeet gye hai ?

* hah hah ha haha *

dut (kanpte hue) m... Maharaj prandan dijiye

durmukha >(bhoye tante hue )
thik hai diya
ab bolo

dut > maharaj Saina pati kanthka aur mesha sur mare gye


jaise durmukha n suna bo apne singhasan s khda ho gya ek dam gussse se lal ho chuka tha durmukha

durmukha > (gusse ) m kya bak rhe ho tum in devtao m etni himmat aur takat kaha s aa gyi ki unhone in dono ko mar diya

agar sabhi devta ek sath bhi ho jaye tab bhi unme s ek ka bhi bal banka nhi kar sakte



y sab hua kaise *bolo* ek dam chilaate hue usne kaha jiske karn bichara dut to khde khde thar thar kanp rha tha


durmukha* > kya dand nayak n yudh m bhag liya tha usne us dut ko ghurte hue kaha


*boloooo* es bar etni takat s cheekha k mahal m lage kanch k seeso ki khidkiyo k kanch tut kar bikhar chuke the

aur dut to that thar kanp rha tha


idhar dono baheno n jaise hi apne bhai ki avaj suni to in dono ki bhi need khul gyi bo dono bhi room s bahar aa gyi

dushti aur mesha bahar aate hue

kya hua bhaiya aap Etna cheekh kyon rhe hain


durmukha apni baheno ko dekh kar chakit ho jata hai ki ab kya jabab d

durmukha kaisa bhi ho lekin apni baheno dukhi nhi karta tha

durmukha > kaise btau bahen

kahte hue bo soch m pad gya

dono ek sath aap bta kyo nhi rhe hai kya bat mujhe ajeeb sa lag rha hai mesha n y bat sochte hue kahi kyonki usse thodi china ho rhi thi

unhe y bhi nhi pta tha k unke pati yudh m bhag le chuke hai

durmukha lambi sans lete hue >(huh ahh )darasal mesha sur yudh m veer gati ko prapt ho chuka hai aur hmara Saina pati bhi yudh m mara gya hai y kah kar bo chup ho gya

dukh to use bhi hua tha esliye jyda kuch nhi bola

mesha > kyaaaaaa yudh ! Lekin kis k sath yudh aur hume btaya kyo nhi chilate hue mesha n durmukha s kaha

besak bo durmukha s yon sambandh banti thi kintu apne Pati s bhi prem karti thi pachle dasko s durmukha k sath sambandh nhi bnaye the

uski ankho m aansu aa gye aur bo

*dhadammmmm* ki aavaj k sath neeche gir gyi dushta n use sambhal liya uski ankho m bhi Anshu aa gye the apni bahen ki aise dasha dekh kar


dushta > y sb hua kaise aur unse yudh karne ka kya karn tha jo apne unhe chunoti di aap nhi jante ki un logo s bhidna kitna ghatak ho skta hai

durmukha uski bat sun kar chup ho gya ab bo kya bolta ki do ladkiyo k liye usne yudh kiya hai

tabhi achank s uske dimag m ek bat aayi are bo ladkiya

durmukha apne sevak ko bulata hai


durmukha *> jao jakar dekho un dono ko kaha hai bo log

sevak > ji maharaj

durmukha dut s

humne kuch pucha jai jabab do

*Kya dand nayak n yudh m bhag liya tha ya nhi ek dm uska gla pakada aur use upar utha diya ek jordar garjana ka satha bola


*jababbbbbb doooooo suna nhi tumne *

dut kanpte hue > m m mharaj dand nayak n yudh m bhag nhi liya tha bo tha hi nhi baha par


uski bat sun kar durmukha ko ek jhatka lga * kya bola abhi abhi k dand nayak n bhag nhi liya aur y sunte hi uski aascharya ki seema hi na rhi


herani k mare uski ankhe failti chali gyi usse kuch second to bilkul kuch bhi samjh nhi aa aya aisa but ki tarah khda rha

fir achank use dushta kia avaj s hosh aaya bola


kk..kya.bola tumne usne bhag nhi liya ttt to un dono ko kisne mara *bolo * uske alaba kon hai jo y sab kar sakta hai



dut bichara dar k mare thar thar kanp rha tha

aur bichari mesha to roye ka rhi thi aur dushta krodh m jal rhi thi aur mesha ko sambhal rhi thi

Dut > maharaj un dono ka bhadh un teeno n kiya hai garun lok ki maharani Devika aur uski putriya

dut ka Etna kahna tha ki bechara ladkhda kar gir gya uske to dimag n hi kam karna band kar diya tha fir jab bo hosh m aaya to ek dam gusse garja

*devikaaaaaaa*



tujhe chhodunga nhiiiiiiiiiíiiiii

uski etni bhayankar aavaj thi ki pure shaitan lok m gunj gyi

mesha jab thode hosh m aayi to usne fir s durmukha k sabal kiye


mesha > bhaiya aap batate kyon nhi aakhir es yudh karan kya tha jo app yudh m par utar aaye kya har chhoti chhoti bato k liye aap yudh ladna abhi bhi nhi bhule rote hue usne kaha

durmukha > bahen y koi chhoti bat nhi thi bat y hai ki June do sundriyan pasand aa gyi thi dharti lok par kintu unhe lana Etna aasan nhi tha kyonli.bo dand nayak ki bahene thi


m chahta tha ki ek bar m un dono a vivah lar lu dand nayak kuch nhi kar payega agar unhe m ek bar bhog kar un s vivaah kar leta to m amar ho jata kyonki dand nayak ki bahene hi meri mirttyu ka karn hai esliye m use hi khatm kar dena chahta tha lekin dand nayak n in d logo s sahayata mang li jiski bajah s y sab ho gya

m uski baheno ko uthane m to kamyab ho gya ki tu vivaah karne aur unhe bhogne k liye y yudh jeetna jaroori hai kyonki harne k bad dand nayak kuch nhi kar payega

uski bat sun kar do o bhochhaki si durmukha ko dekh rhi thi dono k muh khule hue tha aascharya k mare jab durmukha n unhe aavaj di


durmukha > kya hua sab thik hai na

dono hadvdate hue *h hn Haan sab thik hai *

durmukha to y tha karn fir haste hue sali dono ki dono us kaksh m band hai ek bar in dono s vivah kar lu fir btataunga es dand nayak ko kahte hue uski ankhe krodh m lal ho chuki thi

mesha (man m) > dand nayak tune acha nhi kiya hai y sab karke tujhe chhodunga nhi m

jin baheno k liye tune mere pati ki hatya ki hai unka bo haal karbaungi tere hi hatho s ki tu soch bhi nhi skta ki sab hua kya hai

idhar rat k 9 baj chuke the anil bhi ghar aa chuka tha sabhi khana kha kar apne ki teyari kar rhe the aur dheere dheere apne apne room m chale gye

Arjun ki ma apni soch m gum thi pta nhi bo kya soch rhi thi y to bahi janti thi ki bo kya soch rhi hai

aaj pahli bar aisa nhi hua tha k bo es tarah soch gum thi aksar bo apni soch m rat k samay aise hi gum rahti thi
jab bhi aise aise soch m gum hoti thi k uski ankho m Anshu aa jate the

bed par leti hue bo ek tak chat ko ghur rhi thi na jane kya soch kar uski ankho m aanshu aa gye the
tabhi anil n karbat li aur dekha k sarita kisi soch m gum hai aur uski ankhon m aanshu aa gye

anil > sarita kya hua kya abhi bhi tum bahi sab soch rhi ho

sarita n jab anil ki avaj suni to use koi herani nhi hue

sarita > kitna bhi bo sab bhulne ki kosis karti hu lekin nhi bhul pati kya aap bhul paye hai bo sab

Anil > n jab suna to usne pahle to Sarita l chehre ko dyan s dekha aur bola

sarita > samjh sakta hu Etna aasan nhi hai bo sab bhulna aur ek na ek din to bo sab samne aayega hi


etna sunte hi sarita ki ankho m ruke hue Anshu bahne algte hai

sarita > use jab pta chalega to kya bo humse nafrat to nhi karega na

anil > sarita sab samay par chhod dena hi thik hai jo bhi hoga achhe k liye hoga aur aur abhi bo sirf 20 ka hua hai abhi 2 sal aur hai dekhte hai kya hota hai jo bhi hoga sab achha hoga

chalo so jao ab

fir thodi der m hi dono need ki badiyo m chale gye


city dur ussi sunsan road par rat k andhere m koi chla ja rha tha peeche s dekhne par aisa lg rha tha koi ladki hai jo chali ja rhi hai

tabhi baha ek car aa jati hai to ladki use lift k liye hath deti hai

ladka > kya hua madam etni rat ko aap es sunsan raste par kar kya rhi hai.

ladki > ji m ghar ja rhi thi bo aate samay auto khrab ho gyi to baha s mujhe pedal aana pda kya aap mujhe aage tak lift de sakte hai


ladka.bichara thoda dra hua tha to bo bola

thik hai madam aap peeche baith jayiye m aapko chhod dunga Etna kahte hi usne gadi satrt ki aur bo ladki peeche ki seet par baith gyi


ladki > ji kya m apka name jan sakti hu ?

ladka > uski bat un kar chounk gya aur bola

ladka > j ji mera name Vikas hai

gadi ki light jali hue thi to sab kuch dikhai d rha tha

bo ladki apne hontho par jeebh firati hai aur fir s bolti hai

ladki achha name hai apka

ladka > apka kya name hai

ladki > ki aavaj es bar bilkul badal chuki thi ek dam kadak karari aur mardana aavaj m boli *hah ha ha ha ha *

mera name ashtika hai

*ha ha ha ha ha*

uski aavaj sun kar ladke ke roungte khde ho chuke the dar k mare paseena aa chuka tha use pura badan thar thar kanp rha tha uska

ladki karn pisachni hai mera name ye kahte hue bo hasne lagi

*hah ha ha ha ha ha *

uski bat sun kar us ladke ki rahi sahi himmat bhi jabab d gyi aur bo behos ho chuka tha



aaj k liye Etna hi


aap log response nhi d rhe hai kya kahani m koi kmi hai to apne comments karke bta to skte hai aise muje kaise pta chalega ki kya problem hai ya kya kami hai




Bahut hi badhiya update diya hai Rohit875 bhai....
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Update 50 (maha yudh ki suruaat )


Idhar jab dodo mahal m pahunchte hai to durmukha apni baheno s kahta hai

durmukha

aap dono apne kaksh m jaiiye jakar aaram kijiye hume kuch jaroori bat karni hai

jaisa aap uchit samjhe brata aur y kahkar dono apne apne kaksh m chali jati hai

durmukha

aap dono to jante hai ki kya chal rha hai yaha mujhe us dand nayak ka sar chahiye kisi bhi haal mera y kam aap dono kar sakte hai hai

mesha sur


thik maharaj durmukha m abhi jata hu aur uss dand nayak sar apke kadmo m rakh deta hu y kahte hue pahli jaise saitani hasni hasne lagta hai


durmukha

mesha use kam ankne ki galati mat karna savdhan rahna devo ki tarah chaliya hai hai vo

mesha

thik hai maha raj

Durmukha

thik hai tum jao fir apne senapati ko kuch samjha deta hai aur bo dono nikal jate hai un dono k jane k bad

ketka su bolta hai

maha raj aapne mujhe kyo nhi jane diya

uski bat sun kar durmukha kahta hai

durmukha

haste hue use marne k liye tum dono m s ek hi kafi hai kyonki abhi uski shkatiya puri tarah jagrat nhi hai jab tak bo apni premikao ko prapt nhi kar leta tab tak usse hume darne ki jaroorat nhi hai

fir kuch sochte hue

lekin fir bhi bo bahut shaktishali ho chuka hai kyonki es naye janm m usse kuch nhi shaktiya bhi prapt hue hai

ketka sur

ji maharaj mene bhi suna hai ki bo garun lok yatra par jab nikla tha to use golden mani aur Neel mani prapt hue thi shath m ek aise sena bhi jise khatm karna asambhav hai

uski bat sun kar durmukha k paseene chhut jate hai lekin fir ghamand to tha hi fir bola

durmukha

ha ha ha ha kuch nhi kar payega bo meri maha sena k aage aur mesha sur ki maya k aage bo jyda der tik nhi payega aur jaldi hi mesha uska sar kat kar le aayega

durmukha mene suna hai prathvi par dand nayak k naye dushman paida ho chuke hai jo use khatm krne k liye kali shaktiyo ka shahara le rhe hai

ketka sur

ji maharaj aur insan hi hai jo ek ashori ki sahayata s shaitan ko khush karne ke liye kal yagya kar rhe hai

uski bat sun kar durmukha k chehre par ek kutil mushkan aa jati hai

durmukha

do dekh kya rhe ho jao aur jakar unki sahayta karo unhe kuch shaktiya d do taki bo apne yagya m safal ho sake

ketka

maha raj kal yagya k liye ek shakti shali shareer chahiye jo sirf aur un charo m se ek ho manushya ka hai aur bo hai rocky

rahul name ka manushya bhi y kar sakta hai kintu rocky es kam k sahi hai

durmukha

jao jakar kaise bhi karke unhe apne jal m fanshao aur unhe shaitan bna do bilkul khoonkhar

ketka

ji maha raj y kahte hue baha s nikal jata hai

uske jane k bad durmukha paglo ki tarah hasne lagta hai

idhar Meha aur sena pati pahuch jate hai yudh bhumi m mesha Jab dekhta hai ki dand nayak to yaha hai hi nhi to bo soch m pad jata hai fir use durmukha ki bat yad aati hai k bo devo ki tarah mayabi hai

idhar jab sabhi det Mesha ko dekhte hai to ghabra jate hai kyonki Mesha bahut hi jyda shakti shali tha aur mayabi bhi

D Raj

y dand nayak kaha chale gye

tabhi baha par Devika aur uski putriyo aa jati hai jinhe dekh kar dev raj soch m pad jate hai


Devika > sabhi devo ko Devika aur uski putriyo ki taraf s pranam swikar kare maharaj

sabhi > aayushman bhav

Pavak dev > devi yaha yudh bhumi bo bhi yodhao k vastro m

sabhi ashcharya chakit the un teeno ko dekh kar

devika

ji pavak dev aap jo soch rhe hao bahi shayya hai

Abhi y log bate kar hi rhe the ki tabhi mesha sur ki aavaj aati hai


mesha sur

hah ha ha hi ha kya hua devo bhav gya na tumhara bo dand nayak aur kiske bharose tum yudh karne yaha aaye ho

tabhi uski najar un teeno par padti hai

uske jeebh lar dalne lagti hai

mesha

hah hah ha acha devo tum sabhi ki mrityu k bad him sabhi milkar in teeno kanyao ko bhogeneg kitna adbhut yovan hai inka pahle m hi inko chakhunga y kahte hue hasne lagta hai

upar Arjun sari bate sun rha tha lekin y to uski yojna ka bhag tha esliye usne kuch nhi kaha kyonki bo janta hai eska kya parinam hone bala hai

idhar mahal m ek kaksh m

sweety > didu mujhe dar lg rha hai bhayiya abhi tak aaye kyo nhi hai aur hum kaha hai

dar to bichari anjali ko bhi lag rha tha kyonki bo thi to wo aam insan hi kyonki use na apne bare m kuch pta tha abhi na hi sweety k bare ek aad abr usne sapne m kuch jhalkiya dekhi thi bas

anjali sweety ko apne gle lga leti hai aur bolti hai
are to dar kyo rhi hai m hu na jab tak m hu tujhe kuch nhi hai hoga samjhe aur y kahte hue use apni seene s lga leti hai

anjali soch rhi thi u sab ho kya rha hai usne aisa aaj tak kabhi nhi dekha tha

idhar Arjun soch rha tha aage kya kiya jaye


dev raj

apni juvan ko lgam d murkh mesha sur tu janta bhi hai kiske samne kya bol rha hai

devika

durmukha ka kutta hai to ussi ki bhansa bolega na

uski bat sun kar mesha sur gusse pagal ho gya aur bola

aakraman

jao inhe sabk sikha do Asur veero


Pavak dev n bhi y sunte hai hi apni dev sena ko aadesh d diya

aakramn

dono maha sena ek dusre s bhdne lagi edhar senapati kanthka sur aur mesha sur n bhi dhava bol diya

senapati aur pavak dev ek dusre s bhid gye dono ek s ek bhayankar teero ki varsha karne lge ek dusre par kabhi pavak dev bhari padte to kabhi kanthka sur bhari padta lekin kathka sur bahut shi jyda shakti shali tha aur dheere dheere bo pavak dev par bhari padne lga lekin jaise hi pavak dev n apne Dhanush par ban chdana chaha ek ban aakar unki Dhanush par lga aur uske do tukde ho gye



kanthka haste hue

kyo apni mot ko davat de rhe ho pavak dev

Jao tumhe Val's diya mene aur
uski bat sun kar pavak dev ka gussa bad gya aur unhonne Agni ka abde bade gole fekna aarmbh kar diya jisse kanthka buri tarah jhulas gya


Idhar dev raj n jab dekha ki mesha sur sena ko ani pahucha rha hai to unhone kaha

D raj

Sadharan seniko par apni shakti ka pradarshan karke khud ko yodha kahte ho mesha sur agar himmat hai to mujhse mukabla karo y akhte hue dev raj uski tarah dekhne lge d raj ki bat sun kar mesha sur gusse s pagal ho gya aur bola

teri etni mjal k tu mesha sur ko lalkare aaj tera sar dhad alag kar tere singhashan ko apne bas m kar lunga
Ab dekhta hu tujhe ko bachata hai mujhse

d raj

Yodha apna jabab muh s nhi yudh k medan m shahstro s diya krte hai

mesha sur ka sherya jabav d gya aur usne dev raj par ek s ek bhayankar bar karna suru kar diye dev raj bho uske baro ko bakhubi jabav d rhe the dheere dheere yudh bheeshan hone lga charo bhayankar dhuvaniya gunj rhi thi aisa lag rha tha ki sab khatm hone bala hai

Aur Pavan dev to apni shakti se auri sena ko hava m patak rhe the kabhi edhar r to kabhi udhar unhone dekha ki pavak dev par kanthka bhari pad rha hai to bo bhi unki sahayata k liye pahuch gye lekin pavak dev bahut hi ghayal ho chuke the fir pavan dev kanthka par var karna suru kar diya

kantha

are waah aa gye tum bhi ese bachane ese bachane to tum aa gye aur tumhe mujhse kon bachayega


edhar mesha sur bhi dheere dheere d raj par bhari padne lga Arjun jab dekha khi dev sena har rhi hai to usne apne sena pati ko apne ander s bahar aane ka aadesh diya tabhi Arjun k shareer bahut hi bahyankar Asur aur janvar ka mile jule roop ka ek yodha nikla



aaj k liye Etna hi


update kaisa sabhi mitra apni pratikiriya jaroor d taki mera aatmvishvas bde jaise bhi update lge apne vichar rakhna na bhule


Dhanyavad






















Bahot zaberdast jung ladi jaa rahi lekin abhi tak asur sena dev sena per bhari pad rahi h ab dekhte Arjun ka sena pati kia ker pata h
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Update. 51



Dand nayak k samne ek bahut bhayank aur khatrnak janvar aur insan ka mila hua roop tha jiske ek hi var s badi s badi chttan bhi mitti m mil jaye
(Y bahi h jo Arjun ko barfile ilake m mila tha apni yatra k douran geedado ka raja )


geedad manav >

Pranam dand nayak

Arjun > pranam

Geedad manav > etne samay bad muje kaise yad kiya dand nayak



Arjun> kyonki tumhe bhi is dharm yudh m bhag lene ka sobhagya prapt hua hai


Geedad manav> y to sach m mera sobhagya hai ki mujh jaise shaitan ko bhi darm yudh m bhag lekar burai ka ant karne ka absar prapt hua


Arjun > tum sayad bhul rhe ho ki burai sirf ho aur sirf neeyat m hoti hai shaktiya achhi ya buri nhi hoti hai balki unko istemal karne bala acha ya bura hota hai uski soch par hi achhai aur burai nirbhar hoti hai

Geedad manav > ji dand nayak samjh gya

kahiye mere liye kya aagya hai

Fir Arjun n apne ander s geedado ki baki sena ko bahar nikal diya

jo lagbhag s bhi jyda the

y tumhari sena hai jao aur jakar dev raj ki sahayata karo aur khatm karo es yudh ko


idhar dev raj kafi jakhmi ho chuke the lekin fir bhi unhone har nhi mani thi

mesha sur

har man lo dev raj kyo apni mirttyu ko davat d rhe ho

ha hah ha ha ha ha ha ha ha

Aur hasne lagta hai

dev raj

kabhi nhi mesha sur m kabhi har nhi manunga samjhe tum aur dev raj fir s bheeshan prahar karne lgte hai jiske karn mesha sur dur jakar girta hai

mesha sur

Cheekhte hue devvvvvv rajjjjjjjjjjj tumne mere sabar ka imtehaan le rhe ho tujhe main chhodunga nhiiiiiiiiiíiiiii


aur Etna kahkar vo dev raj k upar ek bahut hi bhayankar prahar karta hai lekin uss prahar ko koi beech m hi rok deta hai

devika

etni bhi kya jaldi hai mesha sur mujhse to mil lo


mesha sur haste hue

hah hah ha ha ha

tumhe ladna nhi chahiye striyo k hath m shastra sobha nhi dete bo to bardo k bistar ki sobha bdane k kam aati hai

tumhe bhi m ek moka deta peeche hat jao aur bad m tumhe m apne bister par aane ka moka dunga samjhi

uski bat sun kar devika bhadak jati hai aur Apni talvar ko hava m ghuma kar kisi cheez ko katne ki style m talvar marti hai jisse ek bhayankar prahar ban kar mesha sur ki traf jata hai jaise hi vo prahar mesha sur s takrata hai mesha sur ki bhayanak cheekh pure yudh medan m gunj jati hai
nhiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii Ahhhhhhhh marrrrrr gyaaaaaaaa
tujhhhhheeeee chhodunggggaaaa nhiiiiiiiiiíiiiii


jisse ek pal k liye to sabhi ruk jate hai


Devika


acha pahle pakad to l

dusri taraf Ritika pavak dev k samne aa gyiiiiiiiiii thi unhe bachane k liye

ketka sur

Aarre waah kachhihhhiiiii kali esko m hi mashlumga samjhe tum log , aaahhhhhh ,kya javani hai eski

ritika uski bat sun kar aur jyada gusssaa ho jati hai

ritika

Tu mujhe masalemga sale 6kkke tera khda bhi hota hai ya aise bhonk rha hai teri bibi to mene suna hai kisi aur k neeche let jati hai

lagta hai tujhe pta nhi chla abhi tak fir Etna shaktishali hone ka kya labhh



bichare ketka sur ko ritika ki bate kisi teer ki tarah chubh rhi thi gusse m pagal ho gya aur apna Dhanush utha kar ek bad ek bheeshan bar karne lga ritika bhi koi mamuli ladki nhi thi bo uske har var ko vifal kar deti jisse uska gussa bhi bad gya to usne apni gda utha li aur bhid gya ritika n bhi utha li lekin ketka sur par esme bhi ritika bhari pad rhi thi

ketka

agar aise hi chalta rha to jaldi y mujhe hra degi mujhe kuch aur karna hoga

tabhi uske chehre par ek kamini mushkan fail jati hai

ha ese bal s nhi ese chhal s harana hoga

ketka sur

ritika kyo apan time aur shakti barbad kar rhi ho tum duniya ki sabse bhadi maharani ban sakti ho socho tumhare pas besumar paisa hoga sab tumhari aagya ka palan karenge tum duniya ki ha r subhidha ka labh l sakti hai tumhare jaise dusra koi nhi hoga

dheere dheere ritika k prahar rukne lagte hai aur vo uske lobh pansh m bandhne lagti hai aur uske jal m puri taraf fansh chuki thi uske charo taraf ek raashi aa jati hai


idhar devika ko bhi esha sur n apne mayajal m fansh liya tha uske charo taraf sarp hi sarp the mesha sur n devika ko nag pansh m bandh diya tha

devika

M Yaha kaise aa gyi m to us dusht mesha sur s yudh kar rhi thi y sanp etne sare kana s aa gye ab n kaise nikali yaha s y to mere najdeek hi aa te ja rhe hai ab m kya karu

Hey dand nayak meri sahayta kijiye

idhar kanthka sur n bhi devika ki chhoti putri ko apne varo s thka diya tha dono thak chuke the sabhi to ashahay ek dusre ki taraf dekh rhe the kyonki unki shaktiya lagbhag samapt ho chuki thi thakne k karn
aur tabhi kanthka sur n apne hath s ek lejar jaisi kiran nikali aur usse Komal ki taraf kar diya

thake hone k karn bo usse bandhan ko tod na saki aur usi m bandh kar murchit ho gyi

jaise dand nayak n apni sena ko aadesh diya tabhi uske samne ek tej divya prakash utpann ho gya aur usne s ek aavaj aai

ruko dand nayak

jaise hi Arjun n Avaj sun kar samne dekha to chounk gya




Ajj k liye Etna hi




kya ye teeno es chakraview s nikal payengi ya dand nayak kuch kar payenge ya is yudh ko har jayenge kon karega dand nayak ki sahayata aakhir ko tha es prakash k peeche aur dand nayak ko usne kyon rok diya

y sab janne k liye bane rhiye agle update k liye

Dhanyabad






Mesha n devika ko apne maya jaal m fasa lia tow udher Ritika ko Keta sur n fasa lia tow komal ko Kantha sur n dekhte h ab yeh log kaise maya jaal se nikal paati h
Ab yeh kon aa gaya Dand Nayak ko rok dia achcha khasa dand nayak parhaar kerne jaa raha tha
Baherhal dekhte h kia hota h
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Update 52 > pahle din ki samapti aur sena pati aur mesha ka vadh


Rukkkkkkkkkkkkk jaaaaooooo dand nayakkkkkkkkkkkk

Aavaj > jo tum kar rhe ho eske liye uchit samay nhi hai jo tum rasta apna rhe ho kya tum bhul gye apne yukti ko kis liye tumne apne chakraview ka nirman kiya tha


Arjun > nhi p.......
m kuch bhi nhi bhula kintu m nhi chahta ki bo log kisi musibat m pde agar unhe kuch ho gya to sab kuch barbad ho jayega

tum bhavnao main bah rhe ho dand nayak sayad tum bhul rhe ho tumhe mastishk s kam lena hai na ki hirdaya samjh gye

Arjun

kintu p......

Avaj > mera kam tha tumhe samjhana jo tumhe uchit lge bo karo uske bad kuch bhi hoga uske jimmedar tum khud hoge samjhe


kshama kahta hu... p............

Are y to chle gyeeeeeeeeeeeee

ab main kya karuuuu

tabhi use sunai deta hai ki devika ritika aur komal tr....... de...... Ka avahan kar rhi hai


Devika

hey tr.......... De........ Hmari sahayta kijiye y dust nari abla samjhta hai es hrakar btana hoga ki striya kisi kam nhi hoti hai

aise hi ritika aur komal bhi dand nayak ko guhar lga rhe the us urja k jane k bad dand nayak apne dyan m baith gye the kyonki unhe kuch samjh nhi aa rha ya sach kaha jaye to jan kar bhi an jab ban rhe the kyonki jo bo karna hi nhi chahte the agar krte hai to bahut risk tha


idhar Anjali aur sweety eka ek hi achank s yudh k medan m pahuch jati hai dono n hath jod rakhhe the ankhe band thi tabhi in dono k sareer s do urja punj nikal kar komal aur devika m sama gye idhar ek shakti punj dand nayak k sareer s nikal kar ritika k sareer m pravesh kar gya
dekhte hi dekhte vaha par Prakash Etna jyada faill gya ki
kisi ko kuch dikhai hi nhi d rha tha sirf dand nayak aur sweety aur Anjali ko chhod kar
aisa kyo hua tha y to aage hi pta chalega


eka ek baha par yudh eshthal m teen vishfot hue aur bo teeno aajad ho gyi lekin unka luk ek dam bilkul badal chuka tha

kuch es tarahhhhhhhhh s

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Devika



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Ritika




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Komal

Devika n ek dam s jor lagaya

dhadakkkkkkk

Ek jor dar aavaj sath ek jor dar visfott hua


bhummmmmmm

aur dekhte hi dekhte

dhdakkkkkkmmm



bhummmmmmmmm







dhadakkkkkkkkkkkkk





bhummmmmmmmm



Ek bad ek jor dar teen vishfot hue aur teeno aajad ho chuki thi


teeno n ek sath cheekh mari



KAnthkkkkkkkkkka

komal k muh s apna name sun kar jo kanthka abhi tak in teen visfoto s ubhra bhi nhi tha ek ruhhh kanpa dene bali avaj m apna name sun kar uski gighhi badh gyi

aaj tak kabhi bo Etna nhi dra tha

aur edhar bahi hall ketka sur aur mesha sur ka tha unka Etna bhayank rup dekh kar un teeno ki ruhhhh kanp gyi thi


abhi bo log es sadme s ubhare bhi nhi the ki ek aur aavaj sun kar unki gand fat gyi kyonki jiski aavaj unhone suni thi use to sapne m bhi nhi bhul sakte the


kya hua bachho gand fatty gyi kyaaaaaaaa


teeno ek sath


dand nayakkkkkkkkkkkk


nhi aisa kaise ho sakta hai bo to yudh chhod kar bhag gya tha naaaaaaaa


fir kaiseeeeeee aa gyaaaaaa

boooo haaa



Dand nayak

abbee bhootni k chachao tum log khud ko Asur yodha kahte ho tum to sirf teen stree yodhao s hi ghabra gye socho aagar bo aa gyin to tumhara kya haallll hoga kabhi socha hai


lekin bo kahte hai burai ki gand m khujli kuch jyada hi hoti ant samne hoga fir bahi dailog


sala jhukegaiech nhiiiiiiiiiíiiiii apunnnnnnnnnn


nhi jhukna to ab khade hokar marbao marvani to padegi

teeno

hum kisi s nhi darte enhe to bo mout denge khud yamraj enhe jate hue sochega ki aise kaise mout hai


un teeno ki bato par dand nayak hasne lagta hai


tabhi

komal

kutte kanthka tune mere pita ko mara tha na usssssss neech kapti durmukha k sath milkar


y le aur y kahte hue usne ek jor dar lat kanthka ko de mari

dhukkkkkkkk

ek aavaj ke sath bo 10 fit dur jakar gira

dhadammmmmmmm


Apne sainapati ko mar khata dekh kuch sainik komal ko rokne k liye aage badte hai lekin gussssse aur pratishodh ki agni main dhadhak rhi komal ki lal aankhe kisi ki bhi ruh knpa d

jaise hi ek sainik n war karna chaha agle hi pal ghumte hue usne apni talvar hva m lehrai aur




khachaaaakkkkkkkkk k sath uss sainik ka sar dhad s alag ho gya aur



dhadammmmmm ki aavaj s uska dhad neeche gir gya fir to jo bhi komal aage aaya ya to uska sar ya fir baju ya tang jo jaha bhi talvar lagti bo hissa alag ho jata

komal k pas k sainiko m bhay biyaaapt ho chuka tha

aise hi marte hue komal kanthaka ki aur bad rhi thi use y bhi nhi pta chla gusse m ki uska rup pahle s bilkul badal chuka hai


edhar devika n bhi mesha sur k upar chhalang lga di aur apna ghutna uske muh par de mara


thuddddddddd


aur uske muh s khooon nikalne lga lekin bo mesha sur tha har kaha manta

usne apni talvar s devika par var kiya aur

kannntaaak kilchhhhhh


ki aavaj ek dusre ki talvaro k takrane ki aane lgi aur deeere deere devika kanthka sur par bhari padne lgi

idhar ritika n jaise hi peeche mud kar dekha to ketka sur n uski taraf doud lga di thi jise dekh kar ritika kuch kadam peeche hat gyi aur fir usne apne hatthhh s ek lejar uske upar chhod di jisse bo kuch kadam peeche hat gya lekin use jyada fark nhi pda to bola

Ketka sur

tujhe kya lgta saliiiiii tu in chhote mote waro se ketka sur ka kuch bigad payegi tujhe main hi chhodunga bas ek war y yudh jeet l fir Teri akad nikalunga m

uski bat sun kar ritika ka para Chad gya aur usne gusse m ek aisa war kiya ketka sur par ki bo 5 fit dur gira


dhadammmmmm dhukkkkkkkk
Aur ek jor dar cheeekkhhhh uski us yudh k maidan m gunj gyi

apne bhai jaise mitra ki aise halat dekh kar mesha sur n uske pas jana jaha kintu bo ja na saka kyonki use devika n rok liya


idhar sweety aur anjali n sor sun kar jab apne charo taraf dekha to unhe kuch samjh nhi aa ya ki y etne sars log kon hai y aise ek dusre ko mar kyo rhe hai

tabhi baha par Arjun aa jata hai

Arjun

are kya bat tum log yaha par

Arjun ko dekhte hi sweety aur Anjali uski taraf doud lga deti hai aur jakar usse chipak jati hai



sweety


bhaiya aap kaha the mujhe bahut dar lag rha tha pta hai hume un logo n ek bde s mahal k bde s room m kai kar diya tha

y kahte hue rone lgti hai

subakkkkkkkk subakkkkkkkk

Arjun ko dekhte hi anjali jo khud ko kab se sweety k liye khud ko sambhale hue thi uska bhi sabar ka bandh tut gya kyonki ander s bo bhi bahut jyada dar gyi thi lekin sweety k liye usne khud ko sambhal rakhha



Anjali

Arjun kaha tha tu pta hai m kitna dar gyi tbi jab bo darina muje aur sweety ko utha kar l gya tha

kahte hue uski ankho m Anshu bahne lgte hai

y teeno ek chhoti si pahadi par khde the jaha par s uss yudh ko khde ho kar aasani s dekha ja sakta tha

Arjun

aare meri Barbi doll rona bad karo are tum log to bahadur ho na fir do kyon rhe ho ab m aa gya na chalo chup ho jao in n dono n Arjun ko aur bhi kas k gle lga liya

tabhi baha par Rohit aa jta jai


khuuuuuk khukkkkkk are besharmo koi jagah to dekh liya karo


dam s kisi aavaj ko sun kar jab un dono n dekha to samne Rohit khda hua tha uski bat sun kar dono jhemp jati hai aur

sharmane lgti hai


sweety

kya Rohit bhai apko pta hai hum kitna dar gye the aur aap log Etna let kyo aaye ha

are chhutki hume tum etne der m mile ho hum khud tumhe dundte dundte tha gye the lekin fir jab hum yaha s ja rhe the to hume y shor sunao diya to hum log idhar aa gye aur tum log hume yaha mil gye (jhoot)


rohit man m (Are bhai ab aage kya karne ka shocha hai dekho bo teeno marne bale hai


jaise hi Arjun n peeche dekha komal n Senapati pati kanthka ka sar dhad s alag kar diya sena pati kanthka k marte hi seniko m bhagdad mach gyi aur sare sanik apni apni jan bacha kar bhagne lge

fir tabhi devika n mesha sur k sar ko bhi dhad s alag kar diya


scrrrrrrrach khachhhaaaaaak


jaise hi ketka sur n y dekha uski gand fat gyi aur bo baha s bhagne lga aur thodi hi der m puri sena bhag khadi hue sham hone s pahle hi bo log haaar chuke the

Jaise hi sabko lga ki bo log dum dva k bhag chuke hai

sena m khushi ki lahar doud gyi aur bo d raj ki jai ho devi devika ki jai ho devi ritika ki jai ho devi komal ki jai ho k nare lgane lge dand nayak ki jai

y sab sun kar dono bahene bilkul confused thi unhe kuch samjh nhi aa rha tha ki y sab ho kya rha hai



fir idhar sabhi ghayal seniko ka upachar kiya jane lga aur aur idhar Arjun sabhi s milne pahuch gya apni bahno ko lekar

jaha par sabhi devta aur devika aur uski putriya baithi hue thi

dono kafi dari hue thi aise bhesh bhusha m un dono n logo ko pahli bar dekha tha

sweety

bhai ghar chalo na mujhe bahut dar lg rha hai y log ko. Hai aur y log apas m lad kyon rhe the

Ajali

Arjun

betu sahi kah rhi hai hume ghar chalna chahiye kafi time bhi ho gya hai mom gussa karengi


Arjun


ok di chalte hai pahle in logo s mil to l jinki sahayta s m aap dono ko dhund paya hu



Aj k liye Etna hi



Kya hoga durmukha ko pta chalega ki bo dono ladkiya mahal s gayab hai

Jab use pta chalega ki uska sena pati aur ek jija mara gya hai tab kya karega

ab kisiki ko bhejega bo ladne ya khud jayega


akhir dand nayak chahta kya hai


(dosto apne vichar jaroor rakhe ap logo apne questions rakhte rahiye m sabke javab dene ki kosis karunga )




Dhanyabad














Yeh tha kon jisne Arjun ko rok dia tha yeh keh ker ki ager aisa karoge tow iska anjam bahot bura hoga or fir Sweety or Anjali jung k medan kaise pahoch gayi or kaisi urja thi jo nikal ker teeno devika ritika or komal m sama gayi jisse unka poora room badal gaya or mesha or kantha ko maar payi or yeh jung jeet paye
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Update 53 (karn pichani ka aagman )

Jaise hi d raj n Arjun aur uski baheno ko dekha to unhone sab kuch badal diya aisa lag rha tha jaise aaj k time m yudh hota hai chutki bajate hi sab kuch badal chuka tha

idhar jaise hi in dono ka badh hua durmukha ka dut turant hi pahuch gya saitan lok m



dut > maharaj ki jai ho

abhi durmukha Aram farma rha tha sham ka samay tha


durmukha > haste hue ! Kya khabar laye ho ?
kya hum yudh jeet gye hai ?

* hah hah ha haha *

dut (kanpte hue) m... Maharaj prandan dijiye

durmukha >(bhoye tante hue )
thik hai diya
ab bolo

dut > maharaj Saina pati kanthka aur mesha sur mare gye


jaise durmukha n suna bo apne singhasan s khda ho gya ek dam gussse se lal ho chuka tha durmukha

durmukha > (gusse ) m kya bak rhe ho tum in devtao m etni himmat aur takat kaha s aa gyi ki unhone in dono ko mar diya

agar sabhi devta ek sath bhi ho jaye tab bhi unme s ek ka bhi bal banka nhi kar sakte



y sab hua kaise *bolo* ek dam chilaate hue usne kaha jiske karn bichara dut to khde khde thar thar kanp rha tha


durmukha* > kya dand nayak n yudh m bhag liya tha usne us dut ko ghurte hue kaha


*boloooo* es bar etni takat s cheekha k mahal m lage kanch k seeso ki khidkiyo k kanch tut kar bikhar chuke the

aur dut to that thar kanp rha tha


idhar dono baheno n jaise hi apne bhai ki avaj suni to in dono ki bhi need khul gyi bo dono bhi room s bahar aa gyi

dushti aur mesha bahar aate hue

kya hua bhaiya aap Etna cheekh kyon rhe hain


durmukha apni baheno ko dekh kar chakit ho jata hai ki ab kya jabab d

durmukha kaisa bhi ho lekin apni baheno dukhi nhi karta tha

durmukha > kaise btau bahen

kahte hue bo soch m pad gya

dono ek sath aap bta kyo nhi rhe hai kya bat mujhe ajeeb sa lag rha hai mesha n y bat sochte hue kahi kyonki usse thodi china ho rhi thi

unhe y bhi nhi pta tha k unke pati yudh m bhag le chuke hai

durmukha lambi sans lete hue >(huh ahh )darasal mesha sur yudh m veer gati ko prapt ho chuka hai aur hmara Saina pati bhi yudh m mara gya hai y kah kar bo chup ho gya

dukh to use bhi hua tha esliye jyda kuch nhi bola

mesha > kyaaaaaa yudh ! Lekin kis k sath yudh aur hume btaya kyo nhi chilate hue mesha n durmukha s kaha

besak bo durmukha s yon sambandh banti thi kintu apne Pati s bhi prem karti thi pachle dasko s durmukha k sath sambandh nhi bnaye the

uski ankho m aansu aa gye aur bo

*dhadammmmm* ki aavaj k sath neeche gir gyi dushta n use sambhal liya uski ankho m bhi Anshu aa gye the apni bahen ki aise dasha dekh kar


dushta > y sb hua kaise aur unse yudh karne ka kya karn tha jo apne unhe chunoti di aap nhi jante ki un logo s bhidna kitna ghatak ho skta hai

durmukha uski bat sun kar chup ho gya ab bo kya bolta ki do ladkiyo k liye usne yudh kiya hai

tabhi achank s uske dimag m ek bat aayi are bo ladkiya

durmukha apne sevak ko bulata hai


durmukha *> jao jakar dekho un dono ko kaha hai bo log

sevak > ji maharaj

durmukha dut s

humne kuch pucha jai jabab do

*Kya dand nayak n yudh m bhag liya tha ya nhi ek dm uska gla pakada aur use upar utha diya ek jordar garjana ka satha bola


*jababbbbbb doooooo suna nhi tumne *

dut kanpte hue > m m mharaj dand nayak n yudh m bhag nhi liya tha bo tha hi nhi baha par


uski bat sun kar durmukha ko ek jhatka lga * kya bola abhi abhi k dand nayak n bhag nhi liya aur y sunte hi uski aascharya ki seema hi na rhi


herani k mare uski ankhe failti chali gyi usse kuch second to bilkul kuch bhi samjh nhi aa aya aisa but ki tarah khda rha

fir achank use dushta kia avaj s hosh aaya bola


kk..kya.bola tumne usne bhag nhi liya ttt to un dono ko kisne mara *bolo * uske alaba kon hai jo y sab kar sakta hai



dut bichara dar k mare thar thar kanp rha tha

aur bichari mesha to roye ka rhi thi aur dushta krodh m jal rhi thi aur mesha ko sambhal rhi thi

Dut > maharaj un dono ka bhadh un teeno n kiya hai garun lok ki maharani Devika aur uski putriya

dut ka Etna kahna tha ki bechara ladkhda kar gir gya uske to dimag n hi kam karna band kar diya tha fir jab bo hosh m aaya to ek dam gusse garja

*devikaaaaaaa*



tujhe chhodunga nhiiiiiiiiiíiiiii

uski etni bhayankar aavaj thi ki pure shaitan lok m gunj gyi

mesha jab thode hosh m aayi to usne fir s durmukha k sabal kiye


mesha > bhaiya aap batate kyon nhi aakhir es yudh karan kya tha jo app yudh m par utar aaye kya har chhoti chhoti bato k liye aap yudh ladna abhi bhi nhi bhule rote hue usne kaha

durmukha > bahen y koi chhoti bat nhi thi bat y hai ki June do sundriyan pasand aa gyi thi dharti lok par kintu unhe lana Etna aasan nhi tha kyonli.bo dand nayak ki bahene thi


m chahta tha ki ek bar m un dono a vivah lar lu dand nayak kuch nhi kar payega agar unhe m ek bar bhog kar un s vivaah kar leta to m amar ho jata kyonki dand nayak ki bahene hi meri mirttyu ka karn hai esliye m use hi khatm kar dena chahta tha lekin dand nayak n in d logo s sahayata mang li jiski bajah s y sab ho gya

m uski baheno ko uthane m to kamyab ho gya ki tu vivaah karne aur unhe bhogne k liye y yudh jeetna jaroori hai kyonki harne k bad dand nayak kuch nhi kar payega

uski bat sun kar do o bhochhaki si durmukha ko dekh rhi thi dono k muh khule hue tha aascharya k mare jab durmukha n unhe aavaj di


durmukha > kya hua sab thik hai na

dono hadvdate hue *h hn Haan sab thik hai *

durmukha to y tha karn fir haste hue sali dono ki dono us kaksh m band hai ek bar in dono s vivah kar lu fir btataunga es dand nayak ko kahte hue uski ankhe krodh m lal ho chuki thi

mesha (man m) > dand nayak tune acha nhi kiya hai y sab karke tujhe chhodunga nhi m

jin baheno k liye tune mere pati ki hatya ki hai unka bo haal karbaungi tere hi hatho s ki tu soch bhi nhi skta ki sab hua kya hai

idhar rat k 9 baj chuke the anil bhi ghar aa chuka tha sabhi khana kha kar apne ki teyari kar rhe the aur dheere dheere apne apne room m chale gye

Arjun ki ma apni soch m gum thi pta nhi bo kya soch rhi thi y to bahi janti thi ki bo kya soch rhi hai

aaj pahli bar aisa nhi hua tha k bo es tarah soch gum thi aksar bo apni soch m rat k samay aise hi gum rahti thi
jab bhi aise aise soch m gum hoti thi k uski ankho m Anshu aa jate the

bed par leti hue bo ek tak chat ko ghur rhi thi na jane kya soch kar uski ankho m aanshu aa gye the
tabhi anil n karbat li aur dekha k sarita kisi soch m gum hai aur uski ankhon m aanshu aa gye

anil > sarita kya hua kya abhi bhi tum bahi sab soch rhi ho

sarita n jab anil ki avaj suni to use koi herani nhi hue

sarita > kitna bhi bo sab bhulne ki kosis karti hu lekin nhi bhul pati kya aap bhul paye hai bo sab

Anil > n jab suna to usne pahle to Sarita l chehre ko dyan s dekha aur bola

sarita > samjh sakta hu Etna aasan nhi hai bo sab bhulna aur ek na ek din to bo sab samne aayega hi


etna sunte hi sarita ki ankho m ruke hue Anshu bahne algte hai

sarita > use jab pta chalega to kya bo humse nafrat to nhi karega na

anil > sarita sab samay par chhod dena hi thik hai jo bhi hoga achhe k liye hoga aur aur abhi bo sirf 20 ka hua hai abhi 2 sal aur hai dekhte hai kya hota hai jo bhi hoga sab achha hoga

chalo so jao ab

fir thodi der m hi dono need ki badiyo m chale gye


city dur ussi sunsan road par rat k andhere m koi chla ja rha tha peeche s dekhne par aisa lg rha tha koi ladki hai jo chali ja rhi hai

tabhi baha ek car aa jati hai to ladki use lift k liye hath deti hai

ladka > kya hua madam etni rat ko aap es sunsan raste par kar kya rhi hai.

ladki > ji m ghar ja rhi thi bo aate samay auto khrab ho gyi to baha s mujhe pedal aana pda kya aap mujhe aage tak lift de sakte hai


ladka.bichara thoda dra hua tha to bo bola

thik hai madam aap peeche baith jayiye m aapko chhod dunga Etna kahte hi usne gadi satrt ki aur bo ladki peeche ki seet par baith gyi


ladki > ji kya m apka name jan sakti hu ?

ladka > uski bat un kar chounk gya aur bola

ladka > j ji mera name Vikas hai

gadi ki light jali hue thi to sab kuch dikhai d rha tha

bo ladki apne hontho par jeebh firati hai aur fir s bolti hai

ladki achha name hai apka

ladka > apka kya name hai

ladki > ki aavaj es bar bilkul badal chuki thi ek dam kadak karari aur mardana aavaj m boli *hah ha ha ha ha *

mera name ashtika hai

*ha ha ha ha ha*

uski aavaj sun kar ladke ke roungte khde ho chuke the dar k mare paseena aa chuka tha use pura badan thar thar kanp rha tha uska

ladki karn pisachni hai mera name ye kahte hue bo hasne lagi

*hah ha ha ha ha ha *

uski bat sun kar us ladke ki rahi sahi himmat bhi jabab d gyi aur bo behos ho chuka tha



aaj k liye Etna hi


aap log response nhi d rhe hai kya kahani m koi kmi hai to apne comments karke bta to skte hai aise muje kaise pta chalega ki kya problem hai ya kya kami hai




Bahot khoob shaandaar
Durmukha ko abhi tak samajh nahi aaya ki use bewakoof banaya gaya tha bechare apna sena pati or ek jija ko kho dia iss jung m mesha ka tow bahot bura haal h apni pati ke maut per dekhte h kia karegi woh ab dand nayak or Anjali or sweety k saath
Idher aisa kia h jise soch ker itna pareshan ho sarita ji kia hoga 22 saal k baad Arjun k saath
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Update 53 (karn pichani ka aagman )

Jaise hi d raj n Arjun aur uski baheno ko dekha to unhone sab kuch badal diya aisa lag rha tha jaise aaj k time m yudh hota hai chutki bajate hi sab kuch badal chuka tha

idhar jaise hi in dono ka badh hua durmukha ka dut turant hi pahuch gya saitan lok m



dut > maharaj ki jai ho

abhi durmukha Aram farma rha tha sham ka samay tha


durmukha > haste hue ! Kya khabar laye ho ?
kya hum yudh jeet gye hai ?

* hah hah ha haha *

dut (kanpte hue) m... Maharaj prandan dijiye

durmukha >(bhoye tante hue )
thik hai diya
ab bolo

dut > maharaj Saina pati kanthka aur mesha sur mare gye


jaise durmukha n suna bo apne singhasan s khda ho gya ek dam gussse se lal ho chuka tha durmukha

durmukha > (gusse ) m kya bak rhe ho tum in devtao m etni himmat aur takat kaha s aa gyi ki unhone in dono ko mar diya

agar sabhi devta ek sath bhi ho jaye tab bhi unme s ek ka bhi bal banka nhi kar sakte



y sab hua kaise *bolo* ek dam chilaate hue usne kaha jiske karn bichara dut to khde khde thar thar kanp rha tha


durmukha* > kya dand nayak n yudh m bhag liya tha usne us dut ko ghurte hue kaha


*boloooo* es bar etni takat s cheekha k mahal m lage kanch k seeso ki khidkiyo k kanch tut kar bikhar chuke the

aur dut to that thar kanp rha tha


idhar dono baheno n jaise hi apne bhai ki avaj suni to in dono ki bhi need khul gyi bo dono bhi room s bahar aa gyi

dushti aur mesha bahar aate hue

kya hua bhaiya aap Etna cheekh kyon rhe hain


durmukha apni baheno ko dekh kar chakit ho jata hai ki ab kya jabab d

durmukha kaisa bhi ho lekin apni baheno dukhi nhi karta tha

durmukha > kaise btau bahen

kahte hue bo soch m pad gya

dono ek sath aap bta kyo nhi rhe hai kya bat mujhe ajeeb sa lag rha hai mesha n y bat sochte hue kahi kyonki usse thodi china ho rhi thi

unhe y bhi nhi pta tha k unke pati yudh m bhag le chuke hai

durmukha lambi sans lete hue >(huh ahh )darasal mesha sur yudh m veer gati ko prapt ho chuka hai aur hmara Saina pati bhi yudh m mara gya hai y kah kar bo chup ho gya

dukh to use bhi hua tha esliye jyda kuch nhi bola

mesha > kyaaaaaa yudh ! Lekin kis k sath yudh aur hume btaya kyo nhi chilate hue mesha n durmukha s kaha

besak bo durmukha s yon sambandh banti thi kintu apne Pati s bhi prem karti thi pachle dasko s durmukha k sath sambandh nhi bnaye the

uski ankho m aansu aa gye aur bo

*dhadammmmm* ki aavaj k sath neeche gir gyi dushta n use sambhal liya uski ankho m bhi Anshu aa gye the apni bahen ki aise dasha dekh kar


dushta > y sb hua kaise aur unse yudh karne ka kya karn tha jo apne unhe chunoti di aap nhi jante ki un logo s bhidna kitna ghatak ho skta hai

durmukha uski bat sun kar chup ho gya ab bo kya bolta ki do ladkiyo k liye usne yudh kiya hai

tabhi achank s uske dimag m ek bat aayi are bo ladkiya

durmukha apne sevak ko bulata hai


durmukha *> jao jakar dekho un dono ko kaha hai bo log

sevak > ji maharaj

durmukha dut s

humne kuch pucha jai jabab do

*Kya dand nayak n yudh m bhag liya tha ya nhi ek dm uska gla pakada aur use upar utha diya ek jordar garjana ka satha bola


*jababbbbbb doooooo suna nhi tumne *

dut kanpte hue > m m mharaj dand nayak n yudh m bhag nhi liya tha bo tha hi nhi baha par


uski bat sun kar durmukha ko ek jhatka lga * kya bola abhi abhi k dand nayak n bhag nhi liya aur y sunte hi uski aascharya ki seema hi na rhi


herani k mare uski ankhe failti chali gyi usse kuch second to bilkul kuch bhi samjh nhi aa aya aisa but ki tarah khda rha

fir achank use dushta kia avaj s hosh aaya bola


kk..kya.bola tumne usne bhag nhi liya ttt to un dono ko kisne mara *bolo * uske alaba kon hai jo y sab kar sakta hai



dut bichara dar k mare thar thar kanp rha tha

aur bichari mesha to roye ka rhi thi aur dushta krodh m jal rhi thi aur mesha ko sambhal rhi thi

Dut > maharaj un dono ka bhadh un teeno n kiya hai garun lok ki maharani Devika aur uski putriya

dut ka Etna kahna tha ki bechara ladkhda kar gir gya uske to dimag n hi kam karna band kar diya tha fir jab bo hosh m aaya to ek dam gusse garja

*devikaaaaaaa*



tujhe chhodunga nhiiiiiiiiiíiiiii

uski etni bhayankar aavaj thi ki pure shaitan lok m gunj gyi

mesha jab thode hosh m aayi to usne fir s durmukha k sabal kiye


mesha > bhaiya aap batate kyon nhi aakhir es yudh karan kya tha jo app yudh m par utar aaye kya har chhoti chhoti bato k liye aap yudh ladna abhi bhi nhi bhule rote hue usne kaha

durmukha > bahen y koi chhoti bat nhi thi bat y hai ki June do sundriyan pasand aa gyi thi dharti lok par kintu unhe lana Etna aasan nhi tha kyonli.bo dand nayak ki bahene thi


m chahta tha ki ek bar m un dono a vivah lar lu dand nayak kuch nhi kar payega agar unhe m ek bar bhog kar un s vivaah kar leta to m amar ho jata kyonki dand nayak ki bahene hi meri mirttyu ka karn hai esliye m use hi khatm kar dena chahta tha lekin dand nayak n in d logo s sahayata mang li jiski bajah s y sab ho gya

m uski baheno ko uthane m to kamyab ho gya ki tu vivaah karne aur unhe bhogne k liye y yudh jeetna jaroori hai kyonki harne k bad dand nayak kuch nhi kar payega

uski bat sun kar do o bhochhaki si durmukha ko dekh rhi thi dono k muh khule hue tha aascharya k mare jab durmukha n unhe aavaj di


durmukha > kya hua sab thik hai na

dono hadvdate hue *h hn Haan sab thik hai *

durmukha to y tha karn fir haste hue sali dono ki dono us kaksh m band hai ek bar in dono s vivah kar lu fir btataunga es dand nayak ko kahte hue uski ankhe krodh m lal ho chuki thi

mesha (man m) > dand nayak tune acha nhi kiya hai y sab karke tujhe chhodunga nhi m

jin baheno k liye tune mere pati ki hatya ki hai unka bo haal karbaungi tere hi hatho s ki tu soch bhi nhi skta ki sab hua kya hai

idhar rat k 9 baj chuke the anil bhi ghar aa chuka tha sabhi khana kha kar apne ki teyari kar rhe the aur dheere dheere apne apne room m chale gye

Arjun ki ma apni soch m gum thi pta nhi bo kya soch rhi thi y to bahi janti thi ki bo kya soch rhi hai

aaj pahli bar aisa nhi hua tha k bo es tarah soch gum thi aksar bo apni soch m rat k samay aise hi gum rahti thi
jab bhi aise aise soch m gum hoti thi k uski ankho m Anshu aa jate the

bed par leti hue bo ek tak chat ko ghur rhi thi na jane kya soch kar uski ankho m aanshu aa gye the
tabhi anil n karbat li aur dekha k sarita kisi soch m gum hai aur uski ankhon m aanshu aa gye

anil > sarita kya hua kya abhi bhi tum bahi sab soch rhi ho

sarita n jab anil ki avaj suni to use koi herani nhi hue

sarita > kitna bhi bo sab bhulne ki kosis karti hu lekin nhi bhul pati kya aap bhul paye hai bo sab

Anil > n jab suna to usne pahle to Sarita l chehre ko dyan s dekha aur bola

sarita > samjh sakta hu Etna aasan nhi hai bo sab bhulna aur ek na ek din to bo sab samne aayega hi


etna sunte hi sarita ki ankho m ruke hue Anshu bahne algte hai

sarita > use jab pta chalega to kya bo humse nafrat to nhi karega na

anil > sarita sab samay par chhod dena hi thik hai jo bhi hoga achhe k liye hoga aur aur abhi bo sirf 20 ka hua hai abhi 2 sal aur hai dekhte hai kya hota hai jo bhi hoga sab achha hoga

chalo so jao ab

fir thodi der m hi dono need ki badiyo m chale gye


city dur ussi sunsan road par rat k andhere m koi chla ja rha tha peeche s dekhne par aisa lg rha tha koi ladki hai jo chali ja rhi hai

tabhi baha ek car aa jati hai to ladki use lift k liye hath deti hai

ladka > kya hua madam etni rat ko aap es sunsan raste par kar kya rhi hai.

ladki > ji m ghar ja rhi thi bo aate samay auto khrab ho gyi to baha s mujhe pedal aana pda kya aap mujhe aage tak lift de sakte hai


ladka.bichara thoda dra hua tha to bo bola

thik hai madam aap peeche baith jayiye m aapko chhod dunga Etna kahte hi usne gadi satrt ki aur bo ladki peeche ki seet par baith gyi


ladki > ji kya m apka name jan sakti hu ?

ladka > uski bat un kar chounk gya aur bola

ladka > j ji mera name Vikas hai

gadi ki light jali hue thi to sab kuch dikhai d rha tha

bo ladki apne hontho par jeebh firati hai aur fir s bolti hai

ladki achha name hai apka

ladka > apka kya name hai

ladki > ki aavaj es bar bilkul badal chuki thi ek dam kadak karari aur mardana aavaj m boli *hah ha ha ha ha *

mera name ashtika hai

*ha ha ha ha ha*

uski aavaj sun kar ladke ke roungte khde ho chuke the dar k mare paseena aa chuka tha use pura badan thar thar kanp rha tha uska

ladki karn pisachni hai mera name ye kahte hue bo hasne lagi

*hah ha ha ha ha ha *

uski bat sun kar us ladke ki rahi sahi himmat bhi jabab d gyi aur bo behos ho chuka tha



aaj k liye Etna hi


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Nice update bhai waiting for next update
 
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