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Rohit875

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Bahot khoob shaandaar
Durmukha ko abhi tak samajh nahi aaya ki use bewakoof banaya gaya tha bechare apna sena pati or ek jija ko kho dia iss jung m mesha ka tow bahot bura haal h apni pati ke maut per dekhte h kia karegi woh ab dand nayak or Anjali or sweety k saath
Idher aisa kia h jise soch ker itna pareshan ho sarita ji kia hoga 22 saal k baad Arjun k saath
Or kerne wali vikas k saath Karn Pishachini
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Update 54


Ab tak

ladki > karn pisachni hai mera name ye kahte hue bo hasne lagi

*hah ha ha ha ha ha *

uski bat sun kar us ladke ki rahi sahi himmat bhi jabab d gyi aur bo behos ho chuka tha


jaise hi usne dekha ki vikas behose ho chuka hai use vikas ko uthaya aur baha s gayab ho gyi

vampirelad-UXKosw-F9

Jab vikas ko hose aaya to dheere 2 usne apni aankhe kholi to usne dekha uske samne hi koi baitha hua hai ankhe lal chehre par bane hua lal khoon k nisan aur bade bade kale lahrate hue bal hath m khoon ka gilas liye aur usi hath m chamkti ek ring usne apne samne dyan s dekha to apne samne etni bhayank aurat dekh kar uski dar k mare gighhi bandh gyi


vikas dar k mare thar thar kanp rha tha aaj jindgi m pahli bar usne aisa bhayank manjar dekha tha pura sareer paseene m naha chuka tha dar k mare gla sukh chuka tha badi muskil s uske gle s

avaj nikali

k..k..kon ho tum aur mujhe yaha kyo lekar aayi ho mujhe jane

bichare k muh s dar k mare avaj hi nhi nikal rhi thi

uski bat sun kar us pisachni ki hasi us pure mahal m gunj jati hai fir us khoon ko peete hue chatkare Lete hua bolti hai

Hayyyy.... Umaah...mja aa gya es insani khoon ki to bat hi kuch aur hai

fir use dekhte hua kya puch rha tha tu

VIkas uski bat sun kar kanpne lagta hai

ohh .. ha tu puch rha tha main kon hu

to sun
mera name karn pisachni hai aur m yaha apne maksad ko pura karne aayi hu suba hai dand nayak bapas aa chuka hai mujhe badla lena hai usse apne apman ka badla


*hahahahaha hahahahahah*

karn pisachni hu etni aasani se peecha nhi chhodungi ek ichha hi to jatai hi thi mene use pura nhi kar ska bo ha

gusse m uski ankhe ek dam lal ho chuki thi apni bhayank ankho s vikas ko ghurti hai

tu janta hai kya bo dand nayak kaha hai

VIchara vikas uske to kuch pallle hi nhi pad rha tha aur thoda bahut kuch samjha to dar k mar sab kuch dimag s nikal gya aur ladkhdati aavaj m bola

VIkas > k.kk kon dand nayak aur aap mujhe s kya chahti ho pls mujhe jane deejiye

uski bat sun kar bo fir s gusse m boli

pisachni > apna muh band rakh varna kinds ka hi khoon pee jaungi baise bhi garm garm khoon m bat hi kuch aur hoti hai


eska chalne dete hai apne jra hero ko bhi dekh l

Arjun jaise hi apni baheno ko lekar baha pahucha to sabhi n use dekh kar hath Jode aur yaha ki bhasa m namste karne lge badle m Arjun n bhi jode aur uski baheno n bhi

Rohit

bhai kya hume en logo sach bta dena chahiye

Arjun > nhi abhi uska samay nhi aaya hai

d dev

kaise hai aap log aur aap thik to hai na miss sweety and anjali

d dev ki bat sun kar Anjali aur sweety confusion k chalte Arjun ko dekhti hai fir in ha m sir hila kar bta deti hai

Arjun un dono k kan k najdeek jakar bolta hai

Arjun > in logo ki madad s hi hum tumhe dind paye hai thank you bolo inhe

dono ek sath > aap sabhi ka bahut bahut sukriya hume bachane k liye

sabji d ek sath bole > aap hume sarminda mat kijiye hum yaha s gujar rhe the to kuch lutero n humla kar diya uss ek admi k muh apka name suna tha usse kuch der pahle hi hum log inse mile the jab hume lga koi gadbad hai to apne admi ko bhej kar inko yaha bulva liya jhoot)

uski bat sun kar dono sahmat ho jati hai k tabhi sweety bolti hai

sweety > lekin hum to baha par us mahal k bade kamre m kaid the to hum yaha par kaise aaye

Sweety ki bat sun kar bechare d dev bhi soch m pad gye ki kya javav d tabhi Arjun n unke man m kuch bola to unke chehre par smile aa gyi

d dev > darasal bat bat y hai ki m megition hu thoda bahut jadu bhi aata hai esliye jab mene uske muh aap dono k name suna to uske mastishk m jakar aap ko dund liya aur yaha bula liya

uski bat sun kar dono n ha to kar di kintu unke chehre k bhav dekh kar lag rha tha ki bo puri tarah santusht nhi hai

tabhi rohit Arjun k kan m bola

Rohit > bhai ek bat bta y dono to baha thi fir yaha par kaise

uski bat sun kar Arjun hasne lagta hai aur bolta hai


Arjun > tujhe nhi pta jab koi apne god ko yad karta hai to kya uski suni nhi jati hai


Rohit > suni jati hai bhai tabhi to y dharm surakshit hai

lekin eska esse kya lena... Abhi bo bol rhi tha ki use kuch yad aata hai

Ohh Teri ab samjh aaya avaje jo tu sun rha tha bo kaha aa rhi thi

Eska matlab hmari y dono hi unka ansh hai

Arjun uski bat sun kar serous ho jata hai

aur bolta hai do nhi 3 hai

uski bat sun kar rohit bhochkkka sa use hi dekhta rah jata hai

Rohit ki ankhe ascharya k mare failti chali jati hai

bo bola ....kyaaaaaaaaa

Arjun > ha



Rohit > kon hai bo aur kaha hai hume pta kyon nhi


Arjun > abhi nhi fir kabhi btaunga sahi samay aane par tab tak y had rakhna bhul kar bhi is bat ka jikar nhi hona chahiye

Rohit > thik hai bhai

Sweety Arjun ko hilati hai

Sweety > bhai kya soch rhe ho kaha kho gye aap

Arjun> kahi nhi gudiya kuch soch rha tha

Rohit > tum ghar jao aur in dono ko bhi l jao main thodi der m aata hu


Rohit > ok bhai

sweety > bhai aap nhi chal rhe aap bhi chaliye na nhi to m nhi jane bali ha muh fulate hue boli

anjali > Arjun tum yaha kya karoge hmare sath chalo chup chap samjhe

Arjun > di aap log chaliye m aata hu thodi der m inse thodi jaroori bat karni hai

anjali > tu chal rha hai ki nhi

ankhe dikhate hue boli to sabne jab dekha to sab mand mand muskura rhe the ki jis dand nayak name s bade s bada saitan bhi moot deta hai bo apni bahen k samne bheegi billi hai

jab Arjun n dekha ki sab use hi dekh rhe hai to bo hadvda jata

Arjun > pls di jaiye na m aata hu

sweety aur anjali ek sath hum jayenge lekin hamari ek sart hai

vichara Arjun


Arjun > mujhe manjur hai

dono > are pahle sun to lo

Arjun > hum log ghar bat karenge kahte hue Arjun n jab un dono ko dekha to unki ankho m ek shararti muskan thi

jise dekh kar Arjun samjh chuka tha ki usne ko gadvad kar di hai

Rohit un dono ko lejar chla gya


idhar jab sevak us kaksh m pahucha to dekhta hai ki ....

aur ek jor ko aavaj gunj jati hai


*maharajjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjj*


Aj k liye Etna hi

ab aage kya hoga janne k liye bane rahiye hmare sath.

dhanybad

 

Xabhi

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Jaise hi d raj n Arjun aur uski baheno ko dekha to unhone sab kuch badal diya aisa lag rha tha jaise aaj k time m yudh hota hai chutki bajate hi sab kuch badal chuka tha

idhar jaise hi in dono ka badh hua durmukha ka dut turant hi pahuch gya saitan lok m



dut > maharaj ki jai ho

abhi durmukha Aram farma rha tha sham ka samay tha


durmukha > haste hue ! Kya khabar laye ho ?
kya hum yudh jeet gye hai ?

* hah hah ha haha *

dut (kanpte hue) m... Maharaj prandan dijiye

durmukha >(bhoye tante hue )
thik hai diya
ab bolo

dut > maharaj Saina pati kanthka aur mesha sur mare gye


jaise durmukha n suna bo apne singhasan s khda ho gya ek dam gussse se lal ho chuka tha durmukha

durmukha > (gusse ) m kya bak rhe ho tum in devtao m etni himmat aur takat kaha s aa gyi ki unhone in dono ko mar diya

agar sabhi devta ek sath bhi ho jaye tab bhi unme s ek ka bhi bal banka nhi kar sakte



y sab hua kaise *bolo* ek dam chilaate hue usne kaha jiske karn bichara dut to khde khde thar thar kanp rha tha


durmukha* > kya dand nayak n yudh m bhag liya tha usne us dut ko ghurte hue kaha


*boloooo* es bar etni takat s cheekha k mahal m lage kanch k seeso ki khidkiyo k kanch tut kar bikhar chuke the

aur dut to that thar kanp rha tha


idhar dono baheno n jaise hi apne bhai ki avaj suni to in dono ki bhi need khul gyi bo dono bhi room s bahar aa gyi

dushti aur mesha bahar aate hue

kya hua bhaiya aap Etna cheekh kyon rhe hain


durmukha apni baheno ko dekh kar chakit ho jata hai ki ab kya jabab d

durmukha kaisa bhi ho lekin apni baheno dukhi nhi karta tha

durmukha > kaise btau bahen

kahte hue bo soch m pad gya

dono ek sath aap bta kyo nhi rhe hai kya bat mujhe ajeeb sa lag rha hai mesha n y bat sochte hue kahi kyonki usse thodi china ho rhi thi

unhe y bhi nhi pta tha k unke pati yudh m bhag le chuke hai

durmukha lambi sans lete hue >(huh ahh )darasal mesha sur yudh m veer gati ko prapt ho chuka hai aur hmara Saina pati bhi yudh m mara gya hai y kah kar bo chup ho gya

dukh to use bhi hua tha esliye jyda kuch nhi bola

mesha > kyaaaaaa yudh ! Lekin kis k sath yudh aur hume btaya kyo nhi chilate hue mesha n durmukha s kaha

besak bo durmukha s yon sambandh banti thi kintu apne Pati s bhi prem karti thi pachle dasko s durmukha k sath sambandh nhi bnaye the

uski ankho m aansu aa gye aur bo

*dhadammmmm* ki aavaj k sath neeche gir gyi dushta n use sambhal liya uski ankho m bhi Anshu aa gye the apni bahen ki aise dasha dekh kar


dushta > y sb hua kaise aur unse yudh karne ka kya karn tha jo apne unhe chunoti di aap nhi jante ki un logo s bhidna kitna ghatak ho skta hai

durmukha uski bat sun kar chup ho gya ab bo kya bolta ki do ladkiyo k liye usne yudh kiya hai

tabhi achank s uske dimag m ek bat aayi are bo ladkiya

durmukha apne sevak ko bulata hai


durmukha *> jao jakar dekho un dono ko kaha hai bo log

sevak > ji maharaj

durmukha dut s

humne kuch pucha jai jabab do

*Kya dand nayak n yudh m bhag liya tha ya nhi ek dm uska gla pakada aur use upar utha diya ek jordar garjana ka satha bola


*jababbbbbb doooooo suna nhi tumne *

dut kanpte hue > m m mharaj dand nayak n yudh m bhag nhi liya tha bo tha hi nhi baha par


uski bat sun kar durmukha ko ek jhatka lga * kya bola abhi abhi k dand nayak n bhag nhi liya aur y sunte hi uski aascharya ki seema hi na rhi


herani k mare uski ankhe failti chali gyi usse kuch second to bilkul kuch bhi samjh nhi aa aya aisa but ki tarah khda rha

fir achank use dushta kia avaj s hosh aaya bola


kk..kya.bola tumne usne bhag nhi liya ttt to un dono ko kisne mara *bolo * uske alaba kon hai jo y sab kar sakta hai



dut bichara dar k mare thar thar kanp rha tha

aur bichari mesha to roye ka rhi thi aur dushta krodh m jal rhi thi aur mesha ko sambhal rhi thi

Dut > maharaj un dono ka bhadh un teeno n kiya hai garun lok ki maharani Devika aur uski putriya

dut ka Etna kahna tha ki bechara ladkhda kar gir gya uske to dimag n hi kam karna band kar diya tha fir jab bo hosh m aaya to ek dam gusse garja

*devikaaaaaaa*



tujhe chhodunga nhiiiiiiiiiíiiiii

uski etni bhayankar aavaj thi ki pure shaitan lok m gunj gyi

mesha jab thode hosh m aayi to usne fir s durmukha k sabal kiye


mesha > bhaiya aap batate kyon nhi aakhir es yudh karan kya tha jo app yudh m par utar aaye kya har chhoti chhoti bato k liye aap yudh ladna abhi bhi nhi bhule rote hue usne kaha

durmukha > bahen y koi chhoti bat nhi thi bat y hai ki June do sundriyan pasand aa gyi thi dharti lok par kintu unhe lana Etna aasan nhi tha kyonli.bo dand nayak ki bahene thi


m chahta tha ki ek bar m un dono a vivah lar lu dand nayak kuch nhi kar payega agar unhe m ek bar bhog kar un s vivaah kar leta to m amar ho jata kyonki dand nayak ki bahene hi meri mirttyu ka karn hai esliye m use hi khatm kar dena chahta tha lekin dand nayak n in d logo s sahayata mang li jiski bajah s y sab ho gya

m uski baheno ko uthane m to kamyab ho gya ki tu vivaah karne aur unhe bhogne k liye y yudh jeetna jaroori hai kyonki harne k bad dand nayak kuch nhi kar payega

uski bat sun kar do o bhochhaki si durmukha ko dekh rhi thi dono k muh khule hue tha aascharya k mare jab durmukha n unhe aavaj di


durmukha > kya hua sab thik hai na

dono hadvdate hue *h hn Haan sab thik hai *

durmukha to y tha karn fir haste hue sali dono ki dono us kaksh m band hai ek bar in dono s vivah kar lu fir btataunga es dand nayak ko kahte hue uski ankhe krodh m lal ho chuki thi

mesha (man m) > dand nayak tune acha nhi kiya hai y sab karke tujhe chhodunga nhi m

jin baheno k liye tune mere pati ki hatya ki hai unka bo haal karbaungi tere hi hatho s ki tu soch bhi nhi skta ki sab hua kya hai

idhar rat k 9 baj chuke the anil bhi ghar aa chuka tha sabhi khana kha kar apne ki teyari kar rhe the aur dheere dheere apne apne room m chale gye

Arjun ki ma apni soch m gum thi pta nhi bo kya soch rhi thi y to bahi janti thi ki bo kya soch rhi hai

aaj pahli bar aisa nhi hua tha k bo es tarah soch gum thi aksar bo apni soch m rat k samay aise hi gum rahti thi
jab bhi aise aise soch m gum hoti thi k uski ankho m Anshu aa jate the

bed par leti hue bo ek tak chat ko ghur rhi thi na jane kya soch kar uski ankho m aanshu aa gye the
tabhi anil n karbat li aur dekha k sarita kisi soch m gum hai aur uski ankhon m aanshu aa gye

anil > sarita kya hua kya abhi bhi tum bahi sab soch rhi ho

sarita n jab anil ki avaj suni to use koi herani nhi hue

sarita > kitna bhi bo sab bhulne ki kosis karti hu lekin nhi bhul pati kya aap bhul paye hai bo sab

Anil > n jab suna to usne pahle to Sarita l chehre ko dyan s dekha aur bola

sarita > samjh sakta hu Etna aasan nhi hai bo sab bhulna aur ek na ek din to bo sab samne aayega hi


etna sunte hi sarita ki ankho m ruke hue Anshu bahne algte hai

sarita > use jab pta chalega to kya bo humse nafrat to nhi karega na

anil > sarita sab samay par chhod dena hi thik hai jo bhi hoga achhe k liye hoga aur aur abhi bo sirf 20 ka hua hai abhi 2 sal aur hai dekhte hai kya hota hai jo bhi hoga sab achha hoga

chalo so jao ab

fir thodi der m hi dono need ki badiyo m chale gye


city dur ussi sunsan road par rat k andhere m koi chla ja rha tha peeche s dekhne par aisa lg rha tha koi ladki hai jo chali ja rhi hai

tabhi baha ek car aa jati hai to ladki use lift k liye hath deti hai

ladka > kya hua madam etni rat ko aap es sunsan raste par kar kya rhi hai.

ladki > ji m ghar ja rhi thi bo aate samay auto khrab ho gyi to baha s mujhe pedal aana pda kya aap mujhe aage tak lift de sakte hai


ladka.bichara thoda dra hua tha to bo bola

thik hai madam aap peeche baith jayiye m aapko chhod dunga Etna kahte hi usne gadi satrt ki aur bo ladki peeche ki seet par baith gyi


ladki > ji kya m apka name jan sakti hu ?

ladka > uski bat un kar chounk gya aur bola

ladka > j ji mera name Vikas hai

gadi ki light jali hue thi to sab kuch dikhai d rha tha

bo ladki apne hontho par jeebh firati hai aur fir s bolti hai

ladki achha name hai apka

ladka > apka kya name hai

ladki > ki aavaj es bar bilkul badal chuki thi ek dam kadak karari aur mardana aavaj m boli *hah ha ha ha ha *

mera name ashtika hai

*ha ha ha ha ha*

uski aavaj sun kar ladke ke roungte khde ho chuke the dar k mare paseena aa chuka tha use pura badan thar thar kanp rha tha uska

ladki karn pisachni hai mera name ye kahte hue bo hasne lagi

*hah ha ha ha ha ha *

uski bat sun kar us ladke ki rahi sahi himmat bhi jabab d gyi aur bo behos ho chuka tha



aaj k liye Etna hi


aap log response nhi d rhe hai kya kahani m koi kmi hai to apne comments karke bta to skte hai aise muje kaise pta chalega ki kya problem hai ya kya kami hai




Is durmukhasur ke 2 hath to Kat gye pr abhi uske bete or ek damad bcha hua hai...
Meshasur ko devika ne mar diya arjun ki bahno ki shakti milne pr vahi uski betiyo ne senapati ko... Mesha ko jb pta chla ki uska pati yuddh karne gya tha or ab vo mara gya hai to Apne Bhai ko dosh na dekr vo dandnayak ko doshi bna rhi hai or use sabak sikhane ka kah rhi hai dekhte hai ye kya kr paati hai arjun ka...
Arjun ki MA akhir Kis soch me gum hai kahi vo isliye to dukhi nhi ho rhi ki arjun unka beta nhi hai or jab usko ye baat pta chalegi to vo unhe chhod kr chla jayega... Vahi arjun ke dad ne yah kyo kaha ki abhi 2 saal baki hai us sab ko hone me...
Ye andheri sabko pr logo ka sikar karti kyo ghum rhi hai akhir kya maksad hai uska, kya talash kr rhi hai Vo... Superb update bhai sandar jabarjast lajvab
 

Xabhi

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Update 54


Ab tak

ladki > karn pisachni hai mera name ye kahte hue bo hasne lagi

*hah ha ha ha ha ha *

uski bat sun kar us ladke ki rahi sahi himmat bhi jabab d gyi aur bo behos ho chuka tha


jaise hi usne dekha ki vikas behose ho chuka hai use vikas ko uthaya aur baha s gayab ho gyi

vampirelad-UXKosw-F9

Jab vikas ko hose aaya to dheere 2 usne apni aankhe kholi to usne dekha uske samne hi koi baitha hua hai ankhe lal chehre par bane hua lal khoon k nisan aur bade bade kale lahrate hue bal hath m khoon ka gilas liye aur usi hath m chamkti ek ring usne apne samne dyan s dekha to apne samne etni bhayank aurat dekh kar uski dar k mare gighhi bandh gyi


vikas dar k mare thar thar kanp rha tha aaj jindgi m pahli bar usne aisa bhayank manjar dekha tha pura sareer paseene m naha chuka tha dar k mare gla sukh chuka tha badi muskil s uske gle s

avaj nikali

k..k..kon ho tum aur mujhe yaha kyo lekar aayi ho mujhe jane

bichare k muh s dar k mare avaj hi nhi nikal rhi thi

uski bat sun kar us pisachni ki hasi us pure mahal m gunj jati hai fir us khoon ko peete hue chatkare Lete hua bolti hai

Hayyyy.... Umaah...mja aa gya es insani khoon ki to bat hi kuch aur hai

fir use dekhte hua kya puch rha tha tu

VIkas uski bat sun kar kanpne lagta hai

ohh .. ha tu puch rha tha main kon hu

to sun
mera name karn pisachni hai aur m yaha apne maksad ko pura karne aayi hu suba hai dand nayak bapas aa chuka hai mujhe badla lena hai usse apne apman ka badla


*hahahahaha hahahahahah*

karn pisachni hu etni aasani se peecha nhi chhodungi ek ichha hi to jatai hi thi mene use pura nhi kar ska bo ha

gusse m uski ankhe ek dam lal ho chuki thi apni bhayank ankho s vikas ko ghurti hai

tu janta hai kya bo dand nayak kaha hai

VIchara vikas uske to kuch pallle hi nhi pad rha tha aur thoda bahut kuch samjha to dar k mar sab kuch dimag s nikal gya aur ladkhdati aavaj m bola

VIkas > k.kk kon dand nayak aur aap mujhe s kya chahti ho pls mujhe jane deejiye

uski bat sun kar bo fir s gusse m boli

pisachni > apna muh band rakh varna kinds ka hi khoon pee jaungi baise bhi garm garm khoon m bat hi kuch aur hoti hai


eska chalne dete hai apne jra hero ko bhi dekh l

Arjun jaise hi apni baheno ko lekar baha pahucha to sabhi n use dekh kar hath Jode aur yaha ki bhasa m namste karne lge badle m Arjun n bhi jode aur uski baheno n bhi

Rohit

bhai kya hume en logo sach bta dena chahiye

Arjun > nhi abhi uska samay nhi aaya hai

d dev

kaise hai aap log aur aap thik to hai na miss sweety and anjali

d dev ki bat sun kar Anjali aur sweety confusion k chalte Arjun ko dekhti hai fir in ha m sir hila kar bta deti hai

Arjun un dono k kan k najdeek jakar bolta hai

Arjun > in logo ki madad s hi hum tumhe dind paye hai thank you bolo inhe

dono ek sath > aap sabhi ka bahut bahut sukriya hume bachane k liye

sabji d ek sath bole > aap hume sarminda mat kijiye hum yaha s gujar rhe the to kuch lutero n humla kar diya uss ek admi k muh apka name suna tha usse kuch der pahle hi hum log inse mile the jab hume lga koi gadbad hai to apne admi ko bhej kar inko yaha bulva liya jhoot)

uski bat sun kar dono sahmat ho jati hai k tabhi sweety bolti hai

sweety > lekin hum to baha par us mahal k bade kamre m kaid the to hum yaha par kaise aaye

Sweety ki bat sun kar bechare d dev bhi soch m pad gye ki kya javav d tabhi Arjun n unke man m kuch bola to unke chehre par smile aa gyi

d dev > darasal bat bat y hai ki m megition hu thoda bahut jadu bhi aata hai esliye jab mene uske muh aap dono k name suna to uske mastishk m jakar aap ko dund liya aur yaha bula liya

uski bat sun kar dono n ha to kar di kintu unke chehre k bhav dekh kar lag rha tha ki bo puri tarah santusht nhi hai

tabhi rohit Arjun k kan m bola

Rohit > bhai ek bat bta y dono to baha thi fir yaha par kaise

uski bat sun kar Arjun hasne lagta hai aur bolta hai


Arjun > tujhe nhi pta jab koi apne god ko yad karta hai to kya uski suni nhi jati hai


Rohit > suni jati hai bhai tabhi to y dharm surakshit hai

lekin eska esse kya lena... Abhi bo bol rhi tha ki use kuch yad aata hai

Ohh Teri ab samjh aaya avaje jo tu sun rha tha bo kaha aa rhi thi

Eska matlab hmari y dono hi unka ansh hai

Arjun uski bat sun kar serous ho jata hai

aur bolta hai do nhi 3 hai

uski bat sun kar rohit bhochkkka sa use hi dekhta rah jata hai

Rohit ki ankhe ascharya k mare failti chali jati hai

bo bola ....kyaaaaaaaaa

Arjun > ha



Rohit > kon hai bo aur kaha hai hume pta kyon nhi


Arjun > abhi nhi fir kabhi btaunga sahi samay aane par tab tak y had rakhna bhul kar bhi is bat ka jikar nhi hona chahiye

Rohit > thik hai bhai

Sweety Arjun ko hilati hai

Sweety > bhai kya soch rhe ho kaha kho gye aap

Arjun> kahi nhi gudiya kuch soch rha tha

Rohit > tum ghar jao aur in dono ko bhi l jao main thodi der m aata hu


Rohit > ok bhai

sweety > bhai aap nhi chal rhe aap bhi chaliye na nhi to m nhi jane bali ha muh fulate hue boli

anjali > Arjun tum yaha kya karoge hmare sath chalo chup chap samjhe

Arjun > di aap log chaliye m aata hu thodi der m inse thodi jaroori bat karni hai

anjali > tu chal rha hai ki nhi

ankhe dikhate hue boli to sabne jab dekha to sab mand mand muskura rhe the ki jis dand nayak name s bade s bada saitan bhi moot deta hai bo apni bahen k samne bheegi billi hai

jab Arjun n dekha ki sab use hi dekh rhe hai to bo hadvda jata

Arjun > pls di jaiye na m aata hu

sweety aur anjali ek sath hum jayenge lekin hamari ek sart hai

vichara Arjun


Arjun > mujhe manjur hai

dono > are pahle sun to lo

Arjun > hum log ghar bat karenge kahte hue Arjun n jab un dono ko dekha to unki ankho m ek shararti muskan thi

jise dekh kar Arjun samjh chuka tha ki usne ko gadvad kar di hai

Rohit un dono ko lejar chla gya


idhar jab sevak us kaksh m pahucha to dekhta hai ki ....

aur ek jor ko aavaj gunj jati hai


*maharajjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjj*


Aj k liye Etna hi

ab aage kya hoga janne k liye bane rahiye hmare sath.

dhanybad


Ye karn pishachani US ladke ko le gyi pta nhi kya hoga ab uska Vahi arjun Rohit ko yah Btata hai ki Uski Jo ye bahne hai vo kiska ansh hai or ye 2 nhi 3 hai pr sath hi hidayat bhi deta hai ki Samay aane pr inhe khud hi pta Chal jayega tum bhul ke bhi mat bolna is bare me...
Vahi arjun Apni dono bahno ke jidd or unki gusse se dekhti ankho ko dekh mnane Lagta hai Jise sare Dev dekh lete hai or man me sochte huye hasne lagte hai, Dekhte hai arjun se kya sart manvana chahti hain vo...
Jabardast update bhai sandar superb
 

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Update 54


Ab tak

ladki > karn pisachni hai mera name ye kahte hue bo hasne lagi

*hah ha ha ha ha ha *

uski bat sun kar us ladke ki rahi sahi himmat bhi jabab d gyi aur bo behos ho chuka tha


jaise hi usne dekha ki vikas behose ho chuka hai use vikas ko uthaya aur baha s gayab ho gyi

vampirelad-UXKosw-F9

Jab vikas ko hose aaya to dheere 2 usne apni aankhe kholi to usne dekha uske samne hi koi baitha hua hai ankhe lal chehre par bane hua lal khoon k nisan aur bade bade kale lahrate hue bal hath m khoon ka gilas liye aur usi hath m chamkti ek ring usne apne samne dyan s dekha to apne samne etni bhayank aurat dekh kar uski dar k mare gighhi bandh gyi


vikas dar k mare thar thar kanp rha tha aaj jindgi m pahli bar usne aisa bhayank manjar dekha tha pura sareer paseene m naha chuka tha dar k mare gla sukh chuka tha badi muskil s uske gle s

avaj nikali

k..k..kon ho tum aur mujhe yaha kyo lekar aayi ho mujhe jane

bichare k muh s dar k mare avaj hi nhi nikal rhi thi

uski bat sun kar us pisachni ki hasi us pure mahal m gunj jati hai fir us khoon ko peete hue chatkare Lete hua bolti hai

Hayyyy.... Umaah...mja aa gya es insani khoon ki to bat hi kuch aur hai

fir use dekhte hua kya puch rha tha tu

VIkas uski bat sun kar kanpne lagta hai

ohh .. ha tu puch rha tha main kon hu

to sun
mera name karn pisachni hai aur m yaha apne maksad ko pura karne aayi hu suba hai dand nayak bapas aa chuka hai mujhe badla lena hai usse apne apman ka badla


*hahahahaha hahahahahah*

karn pisachni hu etni aasani se peecha nhi chhodungi ek ichha hi to jatai hi thi mene use pura nhi kar ska bo ha

gusse m uski ankhe ek dam lal ho chuki thi apni bhayank ankho s vikas ko ghurti hai

tu janta hai kya bo dand nayak kaha hai

VIchara vikas uske to kuch pallle hi nhi pad rha tha aur thoda bahut kuch samjha to dar k mar sab kuch dimag s nikal gya aur ladkhdati aavaj m bola

VIkas > k.kk kon dand nayak aur aap mujhe s kya chahti ho pls mujhe jane deejiye

uski bat sun kar bo fir s gusse m boli

pisachni > apna muh band rakh varna kinds ka hi khoon pee jaungi baise bhi garm garm khoon m bat hi kuch aur hoti hai


eska chalne dete hai apne jra hero ko bhi dekh l

Arjun jaise hi apni baheno ko lekar baha pahucha to sabhi n use dekh kar hath Jode aur yaha ki bhasa m namste karne lge badle m Arjun n bhi jode aur uski baheno n bhi

Rohit

bhai kya hume en logo sach bta dena chahiye

Arjun > nhi abhi uska samay nhi aaya hai

d dev

kaise hai aap log aur aap thik to hai na miss sweety and anjali

d dev ki bat sun kar Anjali aur sweety confusion k chalte Arjun ko dekhti hai fir in ha m sir hila kar bta deti hai

Arjun un dono k kan k najdeek jakar bolta hai

Arjun > in logo ki madad s hi hum tumhe dind paye hai thank you bolo inhe

dono ek sath > aap sabhi ka bahut bahut sukriya hume bachane k liye

sabji d ek sath bole > aap hume sarminda mat kijiye hum yaha s gujar rhe the to kuch lutero n humla kar diya uss ek admi k muh apka name suna tha usse kuch der pahle hi hum log inse mile the jab hume lga koi gadbad hai to apne admi ko bhej kar inko yaha bulva liya jhoot)

uski bat sun kar dono sahmat ho jati hai k tabhi sweety bolti hai

sweety > lekin hum to baha par us mahal k bade kamre m kaid the to hum yaha par kaise aaye

Sweety ki bat sun kar bechare d dev bhi soch m pad gye ki kya javav d tabhi Arjun n unke man m kuch bola to unke chehre par smile aa gyi

d dev > darasal bat bat y hai ki m megition hu thoda bahut jadu bhi aata hai esliye jab mene uske muh aap dono k name suna to uske mastishk m jakar aap ko dund liya aur yaha bula liya

uski bat sun kar dono n ha to kar di kintu unke chehre k bhav dekh kar lag rha tha ki bo puri tarah santusht nhi hai

tabhi rohit Arjun k kan m bola

Rohit > bhai ek bat bta y dono to baha thi fir yaha par kaise

uski bat sun kar Arjun hasne lagta hai aur bolta hai


Arjun > tujhe nhi pta jab koi apne god ko yad karta hai to kya uski suni nhi jati hai


Rohit > suni jati hai bhai tabhi to y dharm surakshit hai

lekin eska esse kya lena... Abhi bo bol rhi tha ki use kuch yad aata hai

Ohh Teri ab samjh aaya avaje jo tu sun rha tha bo kaha aa rhi thi

Eska matlab hmari y dono hi unka ansh hai

Arjun uski bat sun kar serous ho jata hai

aur bolta hai do nhi 3 hai

uski bat sun kar rohit bhochkkka sa use hi dekhta rah jata hai

Rohit ki ankhe ascharya k mare failti chali jati hai

bo bola ....kyaaaaaaaaa

Arjun > ha



Rohit > kon hai bo aur kaha hai hume pta kyon nhi


Arjun > abhi nhi fir kabhi btaunga sahi samay aane par tab tak y had rakhna bhul kar bhi is bat ka jikar nhi hona chahiye

Rohit > thik hai bhai

Sweety Arjun ko hilati hai

Sweety > bhai kya soch rhe ho kaha kho gye aap

Arjun> kahi nhi gudiya kuch soch rha tha

Rohit > tum ghar jao aur in dono ko bhi l jao main thodi der m aata hu


Rohit > ok bhai

sweety > bhai aap nhi chal rhe aap bhi chaliye na nhi to m nhi jane bali ha muh fulate hue boli

anjali > Arjun tum yaha kya karoge hmare sath chalo chup chap samjhe

Arjun > di aap log chaliye m aata hu thodi der m inse thodi jaroori bat karni hai

anjali > tu chal rha hai ki nhi

ankhe dikhate hue boli to sabne jab dekha to sab mand mand muskura rhe the ki jis dand nayak name s bade s bada saitan bhi moot deta hai bo apni bahen k samne bheegi billi hai

jab Arjun n dekha ki sab use hi dekh rhe hai to bo hadvda jata

Arjun > pls di jaiye na m aata hu

sweety aur anjali ek sath hum jayenge lekin hamari ek sart hai

vichara Arjun


Arjun > mujhe manjur hai

dono > are pahle sun to lo

Arjun > hum log ghar bat karenge kahte hue Arjun n jab un dono ko dekha to unki ankho m ek shararti muskan thi

jise dekh kar Arjun samjh chuka tha ki usne ko gadvad kar di hai

Rohit un dono ko lejar chla gya


idhar jab sevak us kaksh m pahucha to dekhta hai ki ....

aur ek jor ko aavaj gunj jati hai


*maharajjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjj*


Aj k liye Etna hi

ab aage kya hoga janne k liye bane rahiye hmare sath.

dhanybad


Nice update bhai waiting for next update
 

Saili

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Update 54


Ab tak

ladki > karn pisachni hai mera name ye kahte hue bo hasne lagi

*hah ha ha ha ha ha *

uski bat sun kar us ladke ki rahi sahi himmat bhi jabab d gyi aur bo behos ho chuka tha


jaise hi usne dekha ki vikas behose ho chuka hai use vikas ko uthaya aur baha s gayab ho gyi

vampirelad-UXKosw-F9

Jab vikas ko hose aaya to dheere 2 usne apni aankhe kholi to usne dekha uske samne hi koi baitha hua hai ankhe lal chehre par bane hua lal khoon k nisan aur bade bade kale lahrate hue bal hath m khoon ka gilas liye aur usi hath m chamkti ek ring usne apne samne dyan s dekha to apne samne etni bhayank aurat dekh kar uski dar k mare gighhi bandh gyi


vikas dar k mare thar thar kanp rha tha aaj jindgi m pahli bar usne aisa bhayank manjar dekha tha pura sareer paseene m naha chuka tha dar k mare gla sukh chuka tha badi muskil s uske gle s

avaj nikali

k..k..kon ho tum aur mujhe yaha kyo lekar aayi ho mujhe jane

bichare k muh s dar k mare avaj hi nhi nikal rhi thi

uski bat sun kar us pisachni ki hasi us pure mahal m gunj jati hai fir us khoon ko peete hue chatkare Lete hua bolti hai

Hayyyy.... Umaah...mja aa gya es insani khoon ki to bat hi kuch aur hai

fir use dekhte hua kya puch rha tha tu

VIkas uski bat sun kar kanpne lagta hai

ohh .. ha tu puch rha tha main kon hu

to sun
mera name karn pisachni hai aur m yaha apne maksad ko pura karne aayi hu suba hai dand nayak bapas aa chuka hai mujhe badla lena hai usse apne apman ka badla


*hahahahaha hahahahahah*

karn pisachni hu etni aasani se peecha nhi chhodungi ek ichha hi to jatai hi thi mene use pura nhi kar ska bo ha

gusse m uski ankhe ek dam lal ho chuki thi apni bhayank ankho s vikas ko ghurti hai

tu janta hai kya bo dand nayak kaha hai

VIchara vikas uske to kuch pallle hi nhi pad rha tha aur thoda bahut kuch samjha to dar k mar sab kuch dimag s nikal gya aur ladkhdati aavaj m bola

VIkas > k.kk kon dand nayak aur aap mujhe s kya chahti ho pls mujhe jane deejiye

uski bat sun kar bo fir s gusse m boli

pisachni > apna muh band rakh varna kinds ka hi khoon pee jaungi baise bhi garm garm khoon m bat hi kuch aur hoti hai


eska chalne dete hai apne jra hero ko bhi dekh l

Arjun jaise hi apni baheno ko lekar baha pahucha to sabhi n use dekh kar hath Jode aur yaha ki bhasa m namste karne lge badle m Arjun n bhi jode aur uski baheno n bhi

Rohit

bhai kya hume en logo sach bta dena chahiye

Arjun > nhi abhi uska samay nhi aaya hai

d dev

kaise hai aap log aur aap thik to hai na miss sweety and anjali

d dev ki bat sun kar Anjali aur sweety confusion k chalte Arjun ko dekhti hai fir in ha m sir hila kar bta deti hai

Arjun un dono k kan k najdeek jakar bolta hai

Arjun > in logo ki madad s hi hum tumhe dind paye hai thank you bolo inhe

dono ek sath > aap sabhi ka bahut bahut sukriya hume bachane k liye

sabji d ek sath bole > aap hume sarminda mat kijiye hum yaha s gujar rhe the to kuch lutero n humla kar diya uss ek admi k muh apka name suna tha usse kuch der pahle hi hum log inse mile the jab hume lga koi gadbad hai to apne admi ko bhej kar inko yaha bulva liya jhoot)

uski bat sun kar dono sahmat ho jati hai k tabhi sweety bolti hai

sweety > lekin hum to baha par us mahal k bade kamre m kaid the to hum yaha par kaise aaye

Sweety ki bat sun kar bechare d dev bhi soch m pad gye ki kya javav d tabhi Arjun n unke man m kuch bola to unke chehre par smile aa gyi

d dev > darasal bat bat y hai ki m megition hu thoda bahut jadu bhi aata hai esliye jab mene uske muh aap dono k name suna to uske mastishk m jakar aap ko dund liya aur yaha bula liya

uski bat sun kar dono n ha to kar di kintu unke chehre k bhav dekh kar lag rha tha ki bo puri tarah santusht nhi hai

tabhi rohit Arjun k kan m bola

Rohit > bhai ek bat bta y dono to baha thi fir yaha par kaise

uski bat sun kar Arjun hasne lagta hai aur bolta hai


Arjun > tujhe nhi pta jab koi apne god ko yad karta hai to kya uski suni nhi jati hai


Rohit > suni jati hai bhai tabhi to y dharm surakshit hai

lekin eska esse kya lena... Abhi bo bol rhi tha ki use kuch yad aata hai

Ohh Teri ab samjh aaya avaje jo tu sun rha tha bo kaha aa rhi thi

Eska matlab hmari y dono hi unka ansh hai

Arjun uski bat sun kar serous ho jata hai

aur bolta hai do nhi 3 hai

uski bat sun kar rohit bhochkkka sa use hi dekhta rah jata hai

Rohit ki ankhe ascharya k mare failti chali jati hai

bo bola ....kyaaaaaaaaa

Arjun > ha



Rohit > kon hai bo aur kaha hai hume pta kyon nhi


Arjun > abhi nhi fir kabhi btaunga sahi samay aane par tab tak y had rakhna bhul kar bhi is bat ka jikar nhi hona chahiye

Rohit > thik hai bhai

Sweety Arjun ko hilati hai

Sweety > bhai kya soch rhe ho kaha kho gye aap

Arjun> kahi nhi gudiya kuch soch rha tha

Rohit > tum ghar jao aur in dono ko bhi l jao main thodi der m aata hu


Rohit > ok bhai

sweety > bhai aap nhi chal rhe aap bhi chaliye na nhi to m nhi jane bali ha muh fulate hue boli

anjali > Arjun tum yaha kya karoge hmare sath chalo chup chap samjhe

Arjun > di aap log chaliye m aata hu thodi der m inse thodi jaroori bat karni hai

anjali > tu chal rha hai ki nhi

ankhe dikhate hue boli to sabne jab dekha to sab mand mand muskura rhe the ki jis dand nayak name s bade s bada saitan bhi moot deta hai bo apni bahen k samne bheegi billi hai

jab Arjun n dekha ki sab use hi dekh rhe hai to bo hadvda jata

Arjun > pls di jaiye na m aata hu

sweety aur anjali ek sath hum jayenge lekin hamari ek sart hai

vichara Arjun


Arjun > mujhe manjur hai

dono > are pahle sun to lo

Arjun > hum log ghar bat karenge kahte hue Arjun n jab un dono ko dekha to unki ankho m ek shararti muskan thi

jise dekh kar Arjun samjh chuka tha ki usne ko gadvad kar di hai

Rohit un dono ko lejar chla gya


idhar jab sevak us kaksh m pahucha to dekhta hai ki ....

aur ek jor ko aavaj gunj jati hai


*maharajjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjj*


Aj k liye Etna hi

ab aage kya hoga janne k liye bane rahiye hmare sath.

dhanybad


Waiting for next update bhaiya ji
 

Rohit875

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Rohit un dono ko lejar chla gya


idhar jab sevak us kaksh m pahucha to dekhta hai ki ....

aur ek jor ko aavaj gunj jati hai


*maharajjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjj*

ab tak *

durmukha n jaise hi peeche mud kar dekha to sevak khda hua kanp rha tha

durmukha >( gusse me ) kya bat hai kyo cheekh rhe ho ha

aur tumhe to mene uno ladkiyo ko dekhne bheja tha khana diya unko tune ghurte hue kaha durmukha n


sevak > maharaj prandan dijiye

sevak bat sun kar uski bhoye tan gyi aur bola kya bat hai

sevak > maharaj bo dono ladkiya mahal kar kamre s gayab ho chuki hai

etna sunna tha k pure darbar m Sanatan chhha gya kyonki jinke liye usne y sab kiya tha

apne bhai jaise jeeja ko kho diya, jinke liye liye apni bahen ka suhaag ujjad gya tha bo to dono mahal s hi gaya. Ho chuki thi

* lekinnnnnnn
kaiseeeeeee hooooo sktaaaaaa haiiiiiiii yyyyyyyyyy*

cheekhte hue *asambhavvvvvvvvv hai koi mamooli ladkiya mere mayajal

ko kaise tod sakti hai usne ek saitani dahad k sath kaha

sab k sab kanp rhe the​

sevak pta nhi maharaj kitnu Etna to hai k jab m gaya tab bhi bo kavach lga hua tha to bo log gayab kaise ho gye

gusse m durmukha n apne dodo hath gusse m upar utha liye aur cheekhne lgta hai

uski cheekh k karn pure saitan log m mayusi andhkar apavitrata no pahle s hi charam par thi aur bhi bad jati hai

yaha tak ki prathvi lok aur garun lok ki tarah anya loko par bhi aisa mahol tha par bhi eska asar dekhne ko milta hai jiske karn badal jor a garjne lgte hai aur tej havao k sath varish hone lagti hai


jab Arjun un sabhi k pas pahucha to sabhi n use hath jod k kar pranam kiya to dand nayak n bhi badle m sabhi ki pranam kiya

d raj > d nayak hum y yudh to jeet gye kintu jaise hmari halat hai hume nhi lgta hum jeet payenge y kahte hue jab unhone apne seniko ki taraf dekha to thode mayus ho gye kyonki kafi sainik ghayal ho chuke the

UNki bat sun kar m bhi thoda soch m pad gya tha

MUje sochta dekh kar devika boli

devika > kya soch rhe hai Arjun aap hum n un logo ka samna kiya hai to aage bhi karenge

Unki bat sun kar m ha m sar hila deta hu

meri samjh nhi aa rha tha aage kya karna kafi der tak m sochta rha fir mene bolna suru kiya

Arjun > hmare kitne sainik ghayal hai

rohit > kafi sainik ghayal unme s kuch ladne layak ho chuke hai jinhe jyada chot nhi aayi thi
aur kuch subhah tak recover ho jayenge ladne k liye jo jyda ghayal hai unke liye sanjeevni mantra chahiye hoga jo sirf aur sirf Asur guru sukra charya k pas hai aur uske bad mahadev k pas

uski bat sun kar m ha m sar hila deta hu kyonki m bhi y bat janta tha

tabhi mujhe kuch yad aaya

Arjun > d raj jab rahu ketu name k Asur n amrat ka pan kiya tha tab uska pan karte samya kuch bunde neeche giri thi kya hua tha unka apko kuch pta hai

meri bat sun kar dev raj chounk jate hai

Main > kya hua app aise kyon chounk rhe hai jaise mene apse apki bibi mang li ho

meri bat sun kar sab hasne lgte hai to d raj ka muh latak jata hai aur idhar teeno ma beti mujhe ghurne lagti hai to m to m hadvda kar bolta hu mera matlab hai aap aise chounk kyo gye

d raj > kuch nhi apne sval hi aisa kiya hai kyonki aaj tak uske bare m devo k siva kisi ko pta nhi chla kyonki agar uske bare m asuro ko pta chla to bo kisi bhi keemat par use pane s nhi chukenge us samay to rahu ketu ki gardan katne k karan jo bhi vivad hua uske bad kisi ka dhyan us taraf nhi gya

to apko kaise pta chla

main muskurate hue samay aane par bta dunga pahle mujhe btatiye kaha hai bo

d raj > trdevo n use teen surksha chakkro k beech surakshit rakhha hua

use pana etna aasan nhi hai d raj ki bat sun kar m thoda niras to hua lekin muje y karna tha esliye m bola mujhe jagah btayiye kaha h bo

d raj > apko anant nag k anant lok jana hoga kintu ek bat ka dhyan rhe agar aap chuke to bapas nhi aaoge

d raj ki bat sun kar devika aur uski betiya khadi ho gyi aur boli

Teeno > kyaaaaaaa

d raj > ji ha kyonki amrat pana matlab mirttyu par vijay pana hai to etni aasani s to prapt nhi hoga chahe bo koi bhi kyo na ho teeno god k sivay

main > kab jana hoga


d raj> abhi Jana hoga aur apke pas sirf 2 gante ka samay hai jaise hi aap anant lok m pravesh karenge aapka samay suru ho jayega

main > thik hai

d raj > hath aage kiya aur ek portal khol diya

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Mene jaise hi us par hath rakhha to m ek darvaje k samne khda tha

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Kuch aisa jaise hi mene use hath lgaya samne do snake aa gye aur bole

(Main inhe snake 1 aur 2 likhunga )

Snake 1 >kon ho tum aur yaha kyo aaye ho bapas chale jao yaha s samjhe

Main > m yaha s bapas nhi ja sakta m mujhe aapki sahayata chahiye mujhe ander jana hai bahut hi jaroori hai

Snake 2 > humse kya help chahiye aur tum ander kyo jana chahte ho aur ho kon Tum

Main > m mera name Arjun hai aur log mujhe dand nayak k name s bhi jante hai

Meri bat sun kar ek pal k liye to dono ghabra gye fir pahla bola

Snake 1 > dand nayak kahi tum bahi to nhi jinhe god n chuna hai univers ki surkhsha k liye

Main > ji main bahi hu kintu ap log mujhe kaise jante hai

Snake 1 ek taraf dekh kar bola

(Bhai kahi koi locha na ho jaye khud dand nayak annt lok aaye hai matlab kuch to hai lekin hum inhe ander to nhi jane d sakte kyonki gods k alava aur koi nhi ja skta hai

Baise tumhe kya lgta hai yahi bo jinhe yaha par aana tha

S 2 > kuch kaha nhi ja sakta chal dekhte hai kya hota hai )

Fir Arjun s

S 1 > hume maf kijiye kintu hum apko ander nhi jane d sakte

Arjun> mera jana jaroori hai varna m etni fir yaha nhi aata

Dono > hum vivas hai hmare hote hue aap ander nhi ja sakte hai

Mene Etna sunte hi apna roop badal liya jise dekh kar bichare ander ander kanp rhe the

Arjun> jaise apki marji aap yudh chahte hai to yahi sahi

Tabhi dono n bhi apna roop badal liya aur apne talvar s ek ek lejar atteck kiya mere upar jise mene apne talvar s rok diya jise dekh kar dono ghabra gye gye

Fir mene apna per jameen m mara aur vo dono usme sama gye aur darvaja khul gya

Main nhi chahta tha ki un dono ko koi nuksan ho kyonki vo apna kartvya nibha rhe the

Esliye dono ko bandi bna diya

M ander pravesh kiya to bahut hi sunder jagah thi y m aise hi aage badta gya to mujhe ek mandir dikha purana tha ki tu bahut hi bhavya tha kafi sunder dikh rha tha

Jaise hi mene kadam badaye baha ek aavaj gunj gyi bahut bahyank thi aavaj agar m pahle bala Arjun hota to dar k mare moot deta

Aavaj > kyo aaye ho yaha tumhe pta hai na yaha ana manushyo k liye varjit hai fir tum yaha kyo aur kaise aaye

Bahut hi tej aavaj aayi > boloooooo

Main > aap kon ho

Aavaj mujhse puch rhe ho pahle mere sval ka jabav do samjhe

Main > Arjun name hai mera m yaha amrat k talas m aaaya hua d raj k aadesh anusar

Aavaj > bapas lot jao yaha s samjhe bachhe yaha tumhara koi kam nhi hai aur amrat ka kya karoge tum jo is sansar m aaya hai use jana bhi padega


Main > mujhe apne liye nhi chahiye apne sainiko k liye chahiye jo yudh m ghayal ho chuke hai

Aavaj > tum unhe kis liye bachana chahte ho taki unhe fir s ladva sako esliye

Aavaj ki bat sun kar Arjun ko ahsas hota hai ki bo apne swarth k liye kitne sainko ko bali chda rha hai tabhi tabhi use uske gurudev ki aavaj aati hai

Putra > y sammohan dhvani hai tumhe apne path s bhatka rhi hai eski bato m mat aao ander pravesh karo


Main > pranam gurudev kintu m esme pravesh kaise karu m kar hi nhi pa rha

Guru dev > putra har samshya ka samadhan hota hai bas use dudne ki der hai Etna bol kar guru dev ki aavaj aani band ho gyi u

Kuch m nhi aaya kya karu to mene apne hath s ek roshni samne chhodi to ek pardarshi deevar mere samne thi mene us par kai par har kiye kintu koi asar hi nhi ho rha tha

main > kon ho tum aur tum mujhe rokna kyo chahte ho

avaj m koi bhi hu tumhe usse kya

jaise hi aavaj deevar s takrai usme kampan hone lga to meri ankho m chamak aa gyi

ab samjha guru dev kya bolna chah rhe the matlab es par kisi bhi tarah ka force kam nhi karega bas y aavaj hi eska tod hai

fir mene use bhadkane k idara kiya kyonki jitni tej bo bolega utni jaldi mera kam ho jaye ga esliye kafi bate use sunai jo aage pta chalegi aur fir m use tod kar aage bad gya aur kai sari aise musibato s nikal kar aakhir kar m baha tak pahuch hi gya kaha par hva m ek chota lota latka hua tha

mene jaise hi hath badaya baise mere hath m ek tej karant lga




aaj k liye Etna hi

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Update 55 (amrat ki khoj)


Rohit un dono ko lejar chla gya


idhar jab sevak us kaksh m pahucha to dekhta hai ki ....

aur ek jor ko aavaj gunj jati hai


*maharajjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjj*

ab tak *

durmukha n jaise hi peeche mud kar dekha to sevak khda hua kanp rha tha

durmukha >( gusse me ) kya bat hai kyo cheekh rhe ho ha

aur tumhe to mene uno ladkiyo ko dekhne bheja tha khana diya unko tune ghurte hue kaha durmukha n


sevak > maharaj prandan dijiye

sevak bat sun kar uski bhoye tan gyi aur bola kya bat hai

sevak > maharaj bo dono ladkiya mahal kar kamre s gayab ho chuki hai

etna sunna tha k pure darbar m Sanatan chhha gya kyonki jinke liye usne y sab kiya tha

apne bhai jaise jeeja ko kho diya, jinke liye liye apni bahen ka suhaag ujjad gya tha bo to dono mahal s hi gaya. Ho chuki thi

* lekinnnnnnn
kaiseeeeeee hooooo sktaaaaaa haiiiiiiii yyyyyyyyyy*

cheekhte hue *asambhavvvvvvvvv hai koi mamooli ladkiya mere mayajal

ko kaise tod sakti hai usne ek saitani dahad k sath kaha

sab k sab kanp rhe the​

sevak pta nhi maharaj kitnu Etna to hai k jab m gaya tab bhi bo kavach lga hua tha to bo log gayab kaise ho gye

gusse m durmukha n apne dodo hath gusse m upar utha liye aur cheekhne lgta hai

uski cheekh k karn pure saitan log m mayusi andhkar apavitrata no pahle s hi charam par thi aur bhi bad jati hai

yaha tak ki prathvi lok aur garun lok ki tarah anya loko par bhi aisa mahol tha par bhi eska asar dekhne ko milta hai jiske karn badal jor a garjne lgte hai aur tej havao k sath varish hone lagti hai


jab Arjun un sabhi k pas pahucha to sabhi n use hath jod k kar pranam kiya to dand nayak n bhi badle m sabhi ki pranam kiya

d raj > d nayak hum y yudh to jeet gye kintu jaise hmari halat hai hume nhi lgta hum jeet payenge y kahte hue jab unhone apne seniko ki taraf dekha to thode mayus ho gye kyonki kafi sainik ghayal ho chuke the

UNki bat sun kar m bhi thoda soch m pad gya tha

MUje sochta dekh kar devika boli

devika > kya soch rhe hai Arjun aap hum n un logo ka samna kiya hai to aage bhi karenge

Unki bat sun kar m ha m sar hila deta hu

meri samjh nhi aa rha tha aage kya karna kafi der tak m sochta rha fir mene bolna suru kiya

Arjun > hmare kitne sainik ghayal hai

rohit > kafi sainik ghayal unme s kuch ladne layak ho chuke hai jinhe jyada chot nhi aayi thi
aur kuch subhah tak recover ho jayenge ladne k liye jo jyda ghayal hai unke liye sanjeevni mantra chahiye hoga jo sirf aur sirf Asur guru sukra charya k pas hai aur uske bad mahadev k pas

uski bat sun kar m ha m sar hila deta hu kyonki m bhi y bat janta tha

tabhi mujhe kuch yad aaya

Arjun > d raj jab rahu ketu name k Asur n amrat ka pan kiya tha tab uska pan karte samya kuch bunde neeche giri thi kya hua tha unka apko kuch pta hai

meri bat sun kar dev raj chounk jate hai

Main > kya hua app aise kyon chounk rhe hai jaise mene apse apki bibi mang li ho

meri bat sun kar sab hasne lgte hai to d raj ka muh latak jata hai aur idhar teeno ma beti mujhe ghurne lagti hai to m to m hadvda kar bolta hu mera matlab hai aap aise chounk kyo gye

d raj > kuch nhi apne sval hi aisa kiya hai kyonki aaj tak uske bare m devo k siva kisi ko pta nhi chla kyonki agar uske bare m asuro ko pta chla to bo kisi bhi keemat par use pane s nhi chukenge us samay to rahu ketu ki gardan katne k karan jo bhi vivad hua uske bad kisi ka dhyan us taraf nhi gya

to apko kaise pta chla

main muskurate hue samay aane par bta dunga pahle mujhe btatiye kaha hai bo

d raj > trdevo n use teen surksha chakkro k beech surakshit rakhha hua

use pana etna aasan nhi hai d raj ki bat sun kar m thoda niras to hua lekin muje y karna tha esliye m bola mujhe jagah btayiye kaha h bo

d raj > apko anant nag k anant lok jana hoga kintu ek bat ka dhyan rhe agar aap chuke to bapas nhi aaoge

d raj ki bat sun kar devika aur uski betiya khadi ho gyi aur boli

Teeno > kyaaaaaaa

d raj > ji ha kyonki amrat pana matlab mirttyu par vijay pana hai to etni aasani s to prapt nhi hoga chahe bo koi bhi kyo na ho teeno god k sivay

main > kab jana hoga


d raj> abhi Jana hoga aur apke pas sirf 2 gante ka samay hai jaise hi aap anant lok m pravesh karenge aapka samay suru ho jayega

main > thik hai

d raj > hath aage kiya aur ek portal khol diya

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Aur main usme ghus gya to dusri taraf nikal gya to dur dur tak bas ped podhe hari bhari ghash aur pahad hi dikhai de rhe the aur kuch bhi najar nhi aa rha th

Chalte chale m kafi aage aa gya kintu fir bhi kuch nhi dikha mujhe

Jaise hi m thoda aage bda to mujhe ek bahut hi ajeeb tarah ka bda sa pather tha

Mene jaise hi us par hath rakhha to m ek darvaje k samne khda tha

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Kuch aisa jaise hi mene use hath lgaya samne do snake aa gye aur bole

(Main inhe snake 1 aur 2 likhunga )

Snake 1 >kon ho tum aur yaha kyo aaye ho bapas chale jao yaha s samjhe

Main > m yaha s bapas nhi ja sakta m mujhe aapki sahayata chahiye mujhe ander jana hai bahut hi jaroori hai

Snake 2 > humse kya help chahiye aur tum ander kyo jana chahte ho aur ho kon Tum

Main > m mera name Arjun hai aur log mujhe dand nayak k name s bhi jante hai

Meri bat sun kar ek pal k liye to dono ghabra gye fir pahla bola

Snake 1 > dand nayak kahi tum bahi to nhi jinhe god n chuna hai univers ki surkhsha k liye

Main > ji main bahi hu kintu ap log mujhe kaise jante hai

Snake 1 ek taraf dekh kar bola

(Bhai kahi koi locha na ho jaye khud dand nayak annt lok aaye hai matlab kuch to hai lekin hum inhe ander to nhi jane d sakte kyonki gods k alava aur koi nhi ja skta hai

Baise tumhe kya lgta hai yahi bo jinhe yaha par aana tha

S 2 > kuch kaha nhi ja sakta chal dekhte hai kya hota hai )

Fir Arjun s

S 1 > hume maf kijiye kintu hum apko ander nhi jane d sakte

Arjun> mera jana jaroori hai varna m etni fir yaha nhi aata

Dono > hum vivas hai hmare hote hue aap ander nhi ja sakte hai

Mene Etna sunte hi apna roop badal liya jise dekh kar bichare ander ander kanp rhe the

Arjun> jaise apki marji aap yudh chahte hai to yahi sahi

Tabhi dono n bhi apna roop badal liya aur apne talvar s ek ek lejar atteck kiya mere upar jise mene apne talvar s rok diya jise dekh kar dono ghabra gye gye

Fir mene apna per jameen m mara aur vo dono usme sama gye aur darvaja khul gya

Main nhi chahta tha ki un dono ko koi nuksan ho kyonki vo apna kartvya nibha rhe the

Esliye dono ko bandi bna diya

M ander pravesh kiya to bahut hi sunder jagah thi y m aise hi aage badta gya to mujhe ek mandir dikha purana tha ki tu bahut hi bhavya tha kafi sunder dikh rha tha

Jaise hi mene kadam badaye baha ek aavaj gunj gyi bahut bahyank thi aavaj agar m pahle bala Arjun hota to dar k mare moot deta

Aavaj > kyo aaye ho yaha tumhe pta hai na yaha ana manushyo k liye varjit hai fir tum yaha kyo aur kaise aaye

Bahut hi tej aavaj aayi > boloooooo

Main > aap kon ho

Aavaj mujhse puch rhe ho pahle mere sval ka jabav do samjhe

Main > Arjun name hai mera m yaha amrat k talas m aaaya hua d raj k aadesh anusar

Aavaj > bapas lot jao yaha s samjhe bachhe yaha tumhara koi kam nhi hai aur amrat ka kya karoge tum jo is sansar m aaya hai use jana bhi padega


Main > mujhe apne liye nhi chahiye apne sainiko k liye chahiye jo yudh m ghayal ho chuke hai

Aavaj > tum unhe kis liye bachana chahte ho taki unhe fir s ladva sako esliye

Aavaj ki bat sun kar Arjun ko ahsas hota hai ki bo apne swarth k liye kitne sainko ko bali chda rha hai tabhi tabhi use uske gurudev ki aavaj aati hai

Putra > y sammohan dhvani hai tumhe apne path s bhatka rhi hai eski bato m mat aao ander pravesh karo


Main > pranam gurudev kintu m esme pravesh kaise karu m kar hi nhi pa rha

Guru dev > putra har samshya ka samadhan hota hai bas use dudne ki der hai Etna bol kar guru dev ki aavaj aani band ho gyi u

Kuch m nhi aaya kya karu to mene apne hath s ek roshni samne chhodi to ek pardarshi deevar mere samne thi mene us par kai par har kiye kintu koi asar hi nhi ho rha tha

main > kon ho tum aur tum mujhe rokna kyo chahte ho

avaj m koi bhi hu tumhe usse kya

jaise hi aavaj deevar s takrai usme kampan hone lga to meri ankho m chamak aa gyi

ab samjha guru dev kya bolna chah rhe the matlab es par kisi bhi tarah ka force kam nhi karega bas y aavaj hi eska tod hai

fir mene use bhadkane k idara kiya kyonki jitni tej bo bolega utni jaldi mera kam ho jaye ga esliye kafi bate use sunai jo aage pta chalegi aur fir m use tod kar aage bad gya aur kai sari aise musibato s nikal kar aakhir kar m baha tak pahuch hi gya kaha par hva m ek chota lota latka hua tha

mene jaise hi hath badaya baise mere hath m ek tej karant lga




aaj k liye Etna hi

Aage kuch samjh nhi aa rha hai to esliye yahi par rok diya update kosis karunga rat ko aage kuch soch kar aage bday kyonki aise likhne sorry pahle kafi khrab ho gyi thi thank you apne vichar jaroor rakhhe .










Nice updates
 

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