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Village politics ko is story me kaise likhu? politics aap kehisab se kis par par based honi chahiye?

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hemendra

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Me sab logo ko batana chahunga ki story me me kuch chije real incident hai jese ki politics baaki aap log kya real n
ahi hai ye jaan hi sakte hai , aur politics aane bohot time hai lekin uske liye kuch chije change karni pad jayengi poll ke hisab se, aur me naya hoon likhne me to kuch galtiyaa hui ho to jarur batana.




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He bagh Mitra story khup changali ahe. Pan storitil sarv female jya tuzya gharatil ahet. Mhanaje aai bahini chulti chulat bahini aatya Ani tichya muli keval tuzyashich lagir zalya pahijet. Rahul tuza chulta Ani baherache keval halvat basle pahijet. Tuzi heroine tuzya sarv bahini asu de. Aai chulti Ani atya keval tuzyasathi reserve asu de. Yana tuzyaahivay konich hath lavata kama nahi. Keval tuch yancha sarvasv asava. Bahini Ani tyamchya aayansathi tuch parameshwar asava Ani itar he tyamchyasathi 0 asavet.
Storit adla badli tuzya gharatil striyanchi dusaryanshi hou naye
 

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Bhau bagh shweta hi main heroine ahe Ani hero Ani main heroine kuna dusaryabarobar jast dakhau naye. Sarv bahini keval Suraj Suraj ch kele pahije. Sarv bahininche Prem suraj var hoyala pahije. Keval swatala Suraj chi bayko samjali pahijet gharatil sarv striya including aai chulti aatya Ani yanchya sarv muli hi.
 
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hemendra

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Mai utha to sham ho gai thi ,
Ab shweta bhi aa chuki thi aur vo dono didiyo ke sath baat kar rahi thi.
Tabhi papa bahar se aaye
Pitaji- tu ek kaam karega?
Main - haa

Pitaji- tujhe Jana hai , sarpanch ke ghar
Main - kyu ?
Pitaji- aaj unke ghar , gao valo ke liye bhojan rakha hai , har ghar se ek purush aana hi hai, to tu jayega
Main - haa thik hai ,
Pitaji - aur waha Jaa kar sirf khana nahi khana hai , madat bhi karna .aur sunny bhi to aayega uske ghar se.
Main - thik hai me chala jaunga uske sath.

me aur sunny sarpanch ke ghar par jane lage, tabhi hamare do purane dost mile , main ab unse jyada baat nhi krta tha kyuki vo hamesha mujhe nicha dikhane ka sochte rahte the.phir vo bhi hamare sath chalne lage
Panya - haa , bhai Suraj kaisi chal Rahi hai jindagi , koi mili kya?

Pavan - haa koi hogi hi nahi sirf padhai me hi rahta hoga .
Sunny - haa , yaar iski to koi hai nahi tu hi patwake de hame.
Pavan - haa kyu nahi dunga , waise bhi tumse kuch hone wala hai nahi , mene jis tarah se panya ka bandobast kiya usi tarah tumhara bhi karunga.
Main - tune kya kar ke bandobast diya hai panya ko .
Panya - Abe usne mujhe ek kadak maal patake di hai ,
Sunny - kon?
Panya - ab tumse kya sharmana meri bua .
Main - kaise ?
Pavan - tu puch kyu raha hai tuze bhi du kya patake ek mast phataka item .
Main - kon dega patake ?
Pavan - aur kon ,jo gao me sabse khubsurat hai , teri maa .

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Mene use ek jor dar thappad mara ,
Main - teri himmat kaise hui , mere maa ke khilaf is tarah se bolane ki,
Phir panya aur sunny ham dono ko sambhalane lage the pakadkar.
Pavan - sale , mujh par hath uthata hai , tuzse to koi aurat kya ladki bhi nahi pategi , me teri madat kar raha hoo , to jyada nakhre kar raha hai.
Main - mujhe teri koi madat nahi chahiye mera jise man karega use pata sakhta hu , tere jese parivaar me ijjat lutata nahi phirta.

Pavan - haa , bahut pata sakta hai n tu , ek aurat patake dikha , phir me tuze mard bolunga.
(Main phir apne ' ahankar 'me aakar bol pada)
Main - tu ek kya kitni bhi aurate bol , me pataunga, lekin tere jaisa ghar me hath saaf karvana nahi sikha.


Pavan - tu to ese bol raha hai jaise koi raha hai, tuzse ek bhi nahi pategi, agar itna hi jor hai to jise bolu use patakar dikhayega .
( Is bich sunny mujhe bahot samajhane laga lekin mene uski ek n suni)
Main - haa bol , darta hoo kya kisise .

Pavan - tu kisise nahi darta na , to sarpanch ki biwi ko patake dikha .
Main - haa , pataunga lekin uske baad tuze apni bahan ki dilwani padegi.
Pavan - pahale sarpanch ki biwi to pata ke dikha lekin agar nahi kar saka wo bhi 13 tarikh Tak to teri maa ke sath mera taka bhidwake dega .
( Mujhe maano kis baat ka ahankar ho gaya tha , me bhi apne Josh me aakar )
Main - bahan ko mere niche letane ka intajam karle , ab tu .
Pavan - thik hai ,dekhta hu teri nunni kya kar sakti hai .tuze bahut hi ghamand hai pahale khud ki taraf dekh le , wo sarpanch ki biwi sarpanch se kahakar sarpanch ko teri gaand marwane ko kahegi.
Main - dekhte hai .

Aur phir wo dono aage chale mein aur sunny piche piche Jane lage.
Sunny - chutiye , kya bol raha tha tuze malum hai tune kya bola hai, are uski biwi kisi aur insan ki taraf dekhti bhi nahi hai .
Main - haa lekin ab kuch to karna padega .
Sunny - kya karega ab sirf 20 din hi hai , hamare pass.tu bhul Jaa is baat ko vese bhi tuzse patane ke baad vo uski bahan ko dega iski guarantee .
Main - ab kuch to karna padega bhalehi ab kuch bhi ho jaye.
Sunny- main teri har bat pe sath deta hu lekin mujhe lagta hai ki tujhe is chij ki chinta chhod Deni chahiye.
Me kuch bolta usase pahle sarpanch ka Ghar aa gaya tha jo ki thoda door tha hamare ghar se.
Andar pahuch kar ham Jaya khana aur kagaj ki thaliya rakhi thi vaha gaye.
Phir Pavan ne mujhe dhire se ek taraf ishara karate hue kaha - is aurat ko to bhale bahadur me bhi patane ki himmat nahi hai .lekin tuze teri sharat yaad to hai na kyuki 13 agle mahine ki tarikh kahi hai.

Main phir muskurate hue - tu ye soch le ki tu kaise litayega mere niche teri bahan ko.
( Fir kuch der me khana parosane ke baad room me mai ,sunny , Pavan aur sarpanch ki biwi aur uske bhai ki biwi thi jo ki khana nikalke dene me madat kar rahi thi rotiya side ke room me rakhi hui thi , panya aur kuch log bahar sabji aur roti paros rahe the logo ko unke sath sarpanch bate kar raha tha aur kisi ko koi pareshani nahi yah dekh raha tha)
 
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Main- Sarita tumhare bacche ka janm din hai aur vo dikh nahi raha hai ,

Meri ye baat sirf Pavan aur sunny ko sunai di, jyoki shock ke sath sath dar bhi gaye the, vahi baaki sab parosne main busy the aur Sarita ki jethani roti katne ke liye baju vale kamre gai thi , jaha fan vagere band tha rotiya thand na ho is liye.
Sarita ne meri taraf dekha aur ajib si najaro dekh rahi thi ki kehna chahti ho mai ye kya kar raha hoo.

Main - ( Kan me dhire se) tu bahot hi katil dikhti ho ,mujhe to tere pati se jalan ho rahi hai.


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Sarita sharmayi lekin thodi jyada dar gayi thi.
Sarita - ( dhire se) tumne kaha tha na tum kuch nahi karoge ,

Hamari bate Pavan aur sunny sun to nahi paye , lekin thode shock bhi ho gaye the, ki me kisi shadisudha ke sath khusur pusur kar raha hu itni himmat to koi nahi krta.

Main - haa , lekin mujhe laga tha ki tere bhole pati ke sath dhoka hoga ye sab, mujhe nahi malum tha ki tum us harami ki patni ho, to tumhe kisiki chinta kar ne ki jarurat nahi hai.

Sarita - logo ko pata chala to meri bohot badnami hogi aur jinda jala bhi denge kaam padne par. Aur vah sab hamari galti thi .tum use bhul jao.

Main- mere liye vo ek hasin pal tha vo,lekin ye baat kisiko nahi pata chalegi.


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Sarita - mene nahi kaha, ab bass .
S jethani tabhi roti vale kamre se aai aur kaha ki vo dusre kamre me jaa rahi jaa rahi hai jaha bacche hai , unke liye alag se khana bana tha . Tha vaha ki vyavastha dekhti hai.

Sarita phir roti katne ke liye side ke room me chali gayi.
Me bhi Pavan ko aankh maar kar vaha se chala gaya ,
Sarita andar bade se bartan me rotiya kat rahi thi .
Mene andar akar dhire se darwaja laga diya agar koi aaye to me satark ho jau.


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Mene sarita ke piche se kamar par hath rakh kar mere thode khde hue lund ko Sadi ke upar se gand me dhakka lagaya .
Mere is achanak hue hamale se vo sakapaka gai ,
Sarita - chodo mujhhhhhe , mei esa nahi kar sakttttiiiiiiiii.


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Main - tum kyo nahi kar sakti jab tumhara pati kisi aur ki tumhe rand banayega to chalega tumhe , lekin jisase khud chudna chahti ho use naa kah rahi ho.
( Mera lund andar fase phase phase hi tight ho gaya jisase Sarita ko mere lund ki motai kaa andaja aa gaya)


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Sarita - yeeee kyaaa kah rahe ho tum chhodo mujhhhhhe .ab tum kisi par bhi iljam lagaoge mera fayda uthane ke liye .
Main phir piche ho gaya , to phir vo meri taraf palti me kya karne vala hu ab ye janne ke liye .

Main - mere pass sabut hai ki tumhara pati ke bare me , ( mobile nikalte hue chacha aur sarpanch ki recording WhatsApp krdi jo ki gormati me thi , aur Sarita bhi gormati hi thi ) agar khudko nhi dusre kisi ko bachana chahti ho to msg krna.

Use kuch samajh nahi aa raha tha,
Aur vaha se ghussa dikhate hue bahar chala gaya.
Phir vaha sunny aur Pavan mujhe dekh kr puch rahe the undar kyu gaya tha piche

Sunny - jyada josh me aa gaya tha kya.

Pavan - aur josh bhi thanda hogaya hoga .
Phir me muskurate hue - josh to ise aur teri bahan ko chodne ke liye bachaya hai.

Phir ham madat me liye aaye hue ladke aakhir me khane bethe , tab hame Sarita paros rahi thi , lekin ab uska chehra Puri tarah se utara hua tha . Shayad usne recording sunli thi.
 
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Hello dosto mai meri ek nayi , Aur pahli kahani likhane Jaa raha hoo ,vaise to me is forum par pehle se padh raha tha lekin ab lagta hei ki , me ek choti


-moti story likh sakta hoon. Meri kuch galatiya ho to mafi chahta hoon.Ho sakta hai ki meri story kuch story se similar ho kyuki mene yaha par padhi he to seen man se nikala mushkil ho jata hai.



Yah story ka title aapne sahi padha "Ahankar", Jo har insan ko nasht krne ke liye kafi hai bhalehi vo kitna bhi bada yoddha ho, ya Raja ho.lekin yah kahani bilkul unse viprit hai. Yah kahani hai ek purush ke ahankar ki ,jo ki pahale bahut hi kamjor hota hai. lekin baadme , usme ahankar aata hai ki ,
har ek stree uski jahagir hai uske Siva agar koi bhogata hai stree ko to uske is jhute ahankar ko thes pahuchti hai,
aap in sab bato se soch rahe honge ki mein kisi Samajik vichar dhara par tippani karane vala hoo ,


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to aap galat hai, Ahankar kabhi kabhi aapko vo aanand dilata hai jo ki aapko aur Shakti shali banne par majboor kar deta hai.:evilgrin: Aap bhale hi aakhir haar jaao lekin aapse ladne kabhi kabhi bhagwan ko bhi utarna padta hai.


Nice start congrats
 

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Mere jivan kaa Aaj bahut hi mahatwapurn din hai , aaj ek to me jivan ki ladhayi jitunga yaa har jaunga.
Kuch pal jindagi me iss tarah ke aate hai hame lagta hai ham jiyenge yaa phir marenge.

Mera aaj neet ka result hai , jo mein tisri baar di hai, aur to aur mere pitaji padhai ka tiraskar karte hai,

Unhe lagta hai Ghar mein kheti hai aur vaha padhne ki kya jarurat hai .ghar dar chod kar.
Upar se mene meri choti bahan kobhi padhane ki maang rakhi thi jo mujse 4 sal choti hai. Jo ki ab dasvi ki pariksha acche no. Se pass Hui hai.
lekin muze lagta hai me pass ho jauga .pitaji sakht hitayad di thi maa ko, ki me pass nahi hua to ghar ke darwaje mere liye hamesha ke liye band.


Meri tarah koi aur bhi aaj bahut pareshan thaa wo thi meri maa(Priya).
maa agar baat kru to inki khubsurti paane keliye hamare hamare gao har koi Jaan dene ko tayyar hai.mere papa ki jaan par bhi khatra rahta hai, ki kab koi unhe maar daale aur maa ko paale.maa ki sirf kamar dekhne ke liye bahut se log taraste hai .


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Maa ki umar kaa Sundar ta se koi lena dena nhi hai , mere kuch purane dost bhi meri maa par lattu hai.Maa ki khol nabhi bhi mil jay to unhe apsara ki yoni se adhik aanand milega.

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Meri maa - Aji suniye! aap Suraj ko phone kijiye uska result lag gaya hoga , phir kahega hame yaad hi nhi Raha.

Pitaji - tum kyu tension leti ho wo pass ho jayega , ye lo lagaya call aur karo baat ,wo mujhse bhala kyu baat karega me koi lagta thodi hu uska .

Maa - Aap bhi naa , aap ne kabhi phone lagaya hai use khudse agar phone aabhi Jaye to mujhe de dete ho, kab tak baat nhi karoge usse ab?

Maa- padhna hi to chahta hai mera beta.

(CALL CONNECTED)

Maa -hello!, Lag gaya kya result beta.

(udhar se kuch aavaj aate hue)

Maa samaj jati hai ki aavaj kya hai
Nice update Bhai
 

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Me ab result dekh hi Raha tha ki meri girlfriend Divya ka phone aagaya ,

Divya- hello, kaha ho mujhe tumse kuch baat karni hai . Bahut jaruri hai.

Kuch wakt pahle
Me- Divya abhi Mera result lagne vala hai aur tum ab Milne ko bula rahi, baad me milenge 1 ghante baad call krunga .

Baat katate hue

Divya - Suraj mere pass itna vakt nahi hai jaldi milo ,
Mai ab tension me aa gaya tha kya ho gaya hai


Mai - tum samjhane ki koshish karo , pahale se hi me bahut pareshan hu , result ko leke mai nahi aa sakta aane jane me bahut time lagega.

Divya - main tumhare room ke pass me hi hoon tum vahi ruko Mai aati hoon.

Mujhe kuch samaj nhi aa raha tha , Divya ko achanak kya hogaya hai. Kabhi usne iss tarah kaa baratav nhi kiya
.Ham pahli bar 11 th me milethe tabse lekar usne hamesha meri jaroorato ko aage rakha hai .



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Meri har bat vah poori karna chahti thi.pahle to mene sirf dosto me chaud badhi krne ke liye Divya propose kiya tha . Kyu ki vah class ki main sabse acchi dikhane Vali ladki thi.

Lekin jaise jaise uske pyar ko samjata gaya ki vah mujhase pahli najar me pyar kar chuki thi,vah mujhe pujne lagi thi .
mujhe bhi vah bahut pasand aane lagi uske sath mene apni jindagi soch lo hai.
Iss liya mujhe bahot pareshani hone lagi.

Tabhi vah aa gayi

Mere samne aate hi uske aankho se aansu niche girne lage.

Divya - Suraj mujhe lagta hai ki hame hamara rishta yahi khatam kar dena chahiye.

Ye sunte hi, mujhe kuch samaj nhi aa raha tha, bhale main kuch dino se pareshan tha lekin hamare bich koi aanakani nhi hui thi . Aur main ab kuch kadiya jodne laga Jo mere dimag ko samaj AA raha tha.
Vah yah ki Divya ko mene ek bar ek ladke sath dekha tha , usne mujhe rishtedar hai kahkar samjhya diya.mujhe dusra koi Karan najar nhi aa raha tha.

Mai - kya kami rah gayi thi hamare pyar me jo tumhe yeh kaam karna pad raha hai.

Divya - Suraj tum mujhe galat samjh rahe me sirf tumse pyar krti hu lekin hame ab alag ho jana chahiye .

Maine bich me bat karate hue (dukhbhari lay me): tumne mujhe dokha diya hai Divya ,mere pyar ka majak banaya hai.

Main vahi ghutno ke bal baith gaya.

Divya - Suraj mene hamare rishte ke bare me bahut socha lekin yah rishta khatam kar rah hai . Main chodke nahi jaa rahi hoon , bas hame alag ho jana chahiye .aaj me shahar chodakar Jaa Rahi hoon papa ka transfer ho gaya hai. Adhe ghante me mujhe ghar pahuchana hai.

Mujhe uski koi bhi baat samjh nhi aa rahi thi sivay iske ki vo ab kuch bhi bahane bana rahi hai , apne aap ko bachane ke liye . Me uspar hath uthana chahta tha lekin aurat par hath nhi uthate yah meri maa di hui nasiyat man me baithi hui thi jo ki uthane nahi de rahi thi.

Main (gusse se khada hokar ) - agar tumhe Jana hai to jao n ab tumhe koi nahi rok raha.

Uske kuch bolne se pahle uska hath bahar Kiya aur andar se darwaja laga raha tha .
To wo jor se chillate hue boli - mujhe maaf kardo.tum meri baat samajh nahi rahe ho.hame sirf alag hona hai . Main tumse alag nhi Jaa Rahi hoo .
Aur darwaja band ho gaya.

Main andar aakar khub rone laga . Uski bewafai
Ko pachana mushkil ho raha tha lekin yahi Satya tha.
Nice update
 
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