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Next update tumko pasand aayega.... Nayna aur anshul pr jyada focus hoga usmeBhai likha to bhut jyada accha hai
Bilkul sabkuch dikha ke bhi chupane ki kala i love this
Nayna ke saath bhi acha karna bhai i hope.
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Next update tumko pasand aayega.... Nayna aur anshul pr jyada focus hoga usmeBhai likha to bhut jyada accha hai
Bilkul sabkuch dikha ke bhi chupane ki kala i love this
Nayna ke saath bhi acha karna bhai i hope.
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Abhi flash back nhi likha bhai jab likhunga i will make sure tumhari saari baat puri hoBhai flashback mein Padma ko itni jaldi Ashu ke niche mat lana. Thoda sa Padma maa-bete ke rishte ki maryada ke karan jhijke, par Ashu use apne sacche pyar se jeet le.
Just a suggestion.
Achha lage toh include kijiye nahi toh jesa aapne socha hai vesa hi likhiye.
Shukriya bhaiSabse pehle ek nayi kahani shuru karne ki liye bahut bahut shubhkamnaye moms_bachha Bro
Bahut hi badhiya shuruwat he kahani ki
Keep rocking Bro
Thax bhaiWell written story
Saturday yaa sunday ko aayega bhaiWaiting for next update bro