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Fir dev aur rudra aate hae apne mahal me. Aur dev waha se bhi ijajat le kar seedha tilism nagri aata hae. isme hi dusri aadhi raat ho chuki thi.
Is samay tilism nagri me sabhi ek saath baethe the.
Dev – dekhiye ab rudra aur mere jane ka samay ho gaya hae. hum log subah hi nikal jayege. Aur baki tum logo me se nagarjun, gurum, aur shalaka tum teeno wo gang ko khangal dalo aur mere aane tak sab jankari ikatthi kar lo. aur ha nagarjun tum hamare ghar ka to dhyan rakhoge hi. Lekin yaha se kuch sainik le jakar unhe haweli pe bhi lagwa lo. jisse koi khatra waha na aane paye. Sare sainik adrashya rahege. Security me kahi koi dheel nahi honi chahiye. Poonam tumahra kya programe hae?
Poonam – dev mae to apne ghar pe hi rahugi gaanv me. Aur bangle pe bhi jati rahugi. Sath hi in dono jagaho ka dhyan rakhugi. Aap kab tak lautege?
Dev – kah nahi sakta. Lekin jaldi aane ki koshish karuga. Tum log chinta mat karna. Chalo abhi so jate hae.
Fir sab log tilism nagri me hi so jate hae aur do dino ki bhagdaud ke baad ab kahi jakar unhe thoda sukun mila tha.
Subah hote hi shuru ho jati hae dev aur rudra ki ek romanchak yatra jisme aage kya hone wala hae ye na to dono ko malum tha na hi fakeer baba ko jisne inhe bheja tha. Ye log waha se adrashya hokar neel sagar ki or nikal padte hae. kintu kuch hi samay baad ye apne aap na chahte hue bhi adrashya awastha se samanya awastha me aa jate hae. ye log is samay ek bahot bade aur anant faile hue jungle ke samne khade the. Bas ek kadam aur inka pravesh us jungle me ho jana tha.
Dono hi ek ajeeb uttejna mahsus kar rahe the kyu ki is yatra me fakeer baba ki pahli bat sach nikli thi ke is van ke aage unki shaktiya kam nahi karegi. Dev ne dradta se rudra ki taraf dekha ankho hi ankho me dono ne nishchay kiya aur apna kadam aage bada hi diya. aur us jungle me pravesh kar gaye. Ye log paedal chale ja rahe the. Dono ek najar dekhne me hi mahaveer najar aa rahe the. Dono ki peeth pe X akar me talware lagi hui thi. Aur kamar me chhoti lekin bahot tej. Steel type ki kulhadiya. Ye dono bahot savdhani se aage badh rahe the. Kintu bahot der chalne ke baad bhi inke samne koi khatra nahi aaya tha. Lekin ye asawdhan ek pal ke liye bhi nahi hue the. Kyu ke dono hi jante the ke yaha aswadhani ka matlab hae durghatna aur ye har mushkil ke liye taiyar the. Aage rudra chal raha tha aur peeche dev. Dono hi charo taraf najar ghumate hue aage chale ja rahe the.
Tabhi eka ek dev ne rudra ko pakad ke peeche khinch liya. Rudra ka sirf ek kadam use mout ki nind sula sakta tha.
Rudra – kya hua bhai?
Dev – pas padi ek moti daal utha ke rudra ke aage fenk di. Jaha rudra ka kadam padne wala tha. Waha daal ke girte hi. Teji se ek khanjro ki bani deewal uth ke teji se khadi hui. yadi waha rudra hota to sare khanjar rudra ke shareer ke aarpar ho jane the.
Deva aur rudra dono ke chehre pe paseena aa gaya.
Rudra – iski maa ka…….. ye kya hae yar.
Deva – ye un logo ka suraksha ka tareeka hae. ab tak sadharan van tha shayad ab van raj ki Seema hae yaha se.
Rudra – to bahanchod koi samne kyu nahi aata. Hum kaun sa unki biwi bhagane aaye hae yaha?
Dev – uttejit mat ho intjar karo wo jarur aayege samne. Aao aage chale lekin sawdhan rahna.
Dono fir se thoda doori se aage badhe hi the ke kai sare teer unke paero ke paas aakar gire. Aur jaha teer gire waha ki jameen kali ho gayi
Rudra – sala jahar wale teer hae ye to. Hare patte kale pad gaye dev.
Dev – ha dekha maene. ……………
Dev chilla ke - kaun hae samne aao agar mukabla karna chahte ho to.
……………………………….koi awaz nahi
Dev – chhupkar waar karna kayarta hae. hum ladne se nahi darte na hi marne se na maarne se. himmat hae to samne aao.
…….. kaun ho tum log yaha hamare jungle me kyu aaye ho?
Dev – chhipkar baat kyu karte ho himmat hae to samne aao hum seena tan ke tumhare jungle me khade hae aur tum apne hi jungle me chip kar baethe ho. Aese hi ise apna jungle kahoge kya?
………itna bolne ki awshyakta nahi. Hum chahe to abhi tum dono ko mout ki nind sula sakte hae. apna parichay do.
Rudra – aji haa… halwa hae kya koi mout ki nind sula dege. Abe hat…
………. Tum logo ko baat karne ka tareeka sahi nahi hae.
Rudra – aur tera tareeka bada sahi hae? bina pooche bina mile mout ki dhamki deta hae kayar. Himmat hae to samne aa na, darta hae kya humse?
Tabhi charo taraf ke pedo se kai sare log hathiyaro ke saath kood padte hae. aur samne se ek lamba tagda shaks jiski kamar pe ghutno tak pattiyo ki chadar bandhi thi samne aakar khada ho jata hae.
………… mae hu is sena ka senapati kunga aur ab mae tumahre samne hu ab bolo.
Rudra – hmmmm senapati kunga, hum do logo ko itne sare sainiko se gher kar bada akad rahe ho kya tumhe apni taqat par bharosa nahi? Ya tumhe ye pata chal gaya hae ke tum hamara samna nahi kar paoge?
Kunga – murkh ye yaha ke prahri hae. aur mae inka sardar hu. Hamara kaam hae ajnabiyo ko yahi pe rokna.
Deva – to kya tumahre maharaj ne tumhe ye aagya bhi de rakhi hae ke bina baat kiye bina pooche tum kisi ki bhi hatya tak kar dalo? Tumne hum se koi bhi baat kiye bina hum par do jan lewa hamle kiye kya ye baat tumahre maharaj ki aagya se hui?
Kunga – chhoti chhoti bato ki aagya hum maharaj se nahi lete hum khud sambhal lete hae.
Rudra – yahi baat maharaj ke samne kah kar dikha dena guru man jauga mae tumhe.
Kunga – tum log bekar me apna aur mera samay barbad kar rahe ho. Tum logo ki koi aukat nahi maharj ke samne khade hone ki mujhse baat karo.
Rudra – abe aukat ki kya baat karta hae bhainse? Hamari to wo haisiyat hae. ke tere jaese hamare paer dabate hae samjha.
Kunga - lagta hae tum log aese nahi manoge tumhe apni jaan pyari nahi hae.
Rudra – abe jaan to sabko pyari hoti hae. lekin ha hame tumse koi pyar nahi aage bada to tujhe yahi sula dalege tameej se baat kar le.
Dev jor se chilla ke – HEY VAN RAAJ YADI AAPKE SAINIKO ME SE KOI MARA JATA HAE TO HUM DOSHI NAHI HOGE AAKRAMAN YE KARNE JA RAHE HAE HAM NAHI.
Kunga deva ki awaz sun ke haeran rah jata hae aur uske bhi maathe pe paseena aa jata hae kyu ki deva ki awaj poore jungle me bahot door tak goonj gayi thi.
Kunga - maro inko, dono me se koi bachne na paaye.
Kunga ki aawaz se sabhi satark ho kar dev aur rudra pe aakraman kar dete hae lekin dev aur rudra ne chalang lagakar khud ko ped ke peeche kar diya jisse un tak koi teer na aa paye. To sainiko ne apni talware khinch li aur un dono ki taraf lapke jaese hi wo un pedo ke pas pahuche waha na to rudra tha na dev. Sainik haeran ho gaye aur yaha waha dekhne lage tabhi upar se rudra kooda pas khade charo sainiko ke beech kood kar apni kulhadi liye hue teji se ghum gaya charo sainiko ki tango me lambe ghaav ban gaye. Aur charo apne paer pakad ke jameen pe gir pade. Idhar dev bhi upar se kooda aur aur jo sainik us ke pas khade the unme se do ki peeth pe talwar se waar kiya aur do ki tango pe uske paas ke bhi charo sainik jameen pe tadapne lage tabhi kunga ne apne dono hatho me talware nikal li aur rudra aur dev ke beech me khada ho gaya.
Dev – rudra samajh le iske saath ldna hae jan se nahi marna
Dev ne apni talwar apni peeth me wapas fansa kar wahi pade ek toote ped par baeth gaya.
Fir dev aur rudra aate hae apne mahal me. Aur dev waha se bhi ijajat le kar seedha tilism nagri aata hae. isme hi dusri aadhi raat ho chuki thi.
Is samay tilism nagri me sabhi ek saath baethe the.
Dev – dekhiye ab rudra aur mere jane ka samay ho gaya hae. hum log subah hi nikal jayege. Aur baki tum logo me se nagarjun, gurum, aur shalaka tum teeno wo gang ko khangal dalo aur mere aane tak sab jankari ikatthi kar lo. aur ha nagarjun tum hamare ghar ka to dhyan rakhoge hi. Lekin yaha se kuch sainik le jakar unhe haweli pe bhi lagwa lo. jisse koi khatra waha na aane paye. Sare sainik adrashya rahege. Security me kahi koi dheel nahi honi chahiye. Poonam tumahra kya programe hae?
Poonam – dev mae to apne ghar pe hi rahugi gaanv me. Aur bangle pe bhi jati rahugi. Sath hi in dono jagaho ka dhyan rakhugi. Aap kab tak lautege?
Dev – kah nahi sakta. Lekin jaldi aane ki koshish karuga. Tum log chinta mat karna. Chalo abhi so jate hae.
Fir sab log tilism nagri me hi so jate hae aur do dino ki bhagdaud ke baad ab kahi jakar unhe thoda sukun mila tha.
Subah hote hi shuru ho jati hae dev aur rudra ki ek romanchak yatra jisme aage kya hone wala hae ye na to dono ko malum tha na hi fakeer baba ko jisne inhe bheja tha. Ye log waha se adrashya hokar neel sagar ki or nikal padte hae. kintu kuch hi samay baad ye apne aap na chahte hue bhi adrashya awastha se samanya awastha me aa jate hae. ye log is samay ek bahot bade aur anant faile hue jungle ke samne khade the. Bas ek kadam aur inka pravesh us jungle me ho jana tha.
Dono hi ek ajeeb uttejna mahsus kar rahe the kyu ki is yatra me fakeer baba ki pahli bat sach nikli thi ke is van ke aage unki shaktiya kam nahi karegi. Dev ne dradta se rudra ki taraf dekha ankho hi ankho me dono ne nishchay kiya aur apna kadam aage bada hi diya. aur us jungle me pravesh kar gaye. Ye log paedal chale ja rahe the. Dono ek najar dekhne me hi mahaveer najar aa rahe the. Dono ki peeth pe X akar me talware lagi hui thi. Aur kamar me chhoti lekin bahot tej. Steel type ki kulhadiya. Ye dono bahot savdhani se aage badh rahe the. Kintu bahot der chalne ke baad bhi inke samne koi khatra nahi aaya tha. Lekin ye asawdhan ek pal ke liye bhi nahi hue the. Kyu ke dono hi jante the ke yaha aswadhani ka matlab hae durghatna aur ye har mushkil ke liye taiyar the. Aage rudra chal raha tha aur peeche dev. Dono hi charo taraf najar ghumate hue aage chale ja rahe the.
Tabhi eka ek dev ne rudra ko pakad ke peeche khinch liya. Rudra ka sirf ek kadam use mout ki nind sula sakta tha.
Rudra – kya hua bhai?
Dev – pas padi ek moti daal utha ke rudra ke aage fenk di. Jaha rudra ka kadam padne wala tha. Waha daal ke girte hi. Teji se ek khanjro ki bani deewal uth ke teji se khadi hui. yadi waha rudra hota to sare khanjar rudra ke shareer ke aarpar ho jane the.
Deva aur rudra dono ke chehre pe paseena aa gaya.
Rudra – iski maa ka…….. ye kya hae yar.
Deva – ye un logo ka suraksha ka tareeka hae. ab tak sadharan van tha shayad ab van raj ki Seema hae yaha se.
Rudra – to bahanchod koi samne kyu nahi aata. Hum kaun sa unki biwi bhagane aaye hae yaha?
Dev – uttejit mat ho intjar karo wo jarur aayege samne. Aao aage chale lekin sawdhan rahna.
Dono fir se thoda doori se aage badhe hi the ke kai sare teer unke paero ke paas aakar gire. Aur jaha teer gire waha ki jameen kali ho gayi
Rudra – sala jahar wale teer hae ye to. Hare patte kale pad gaye dev.
Dev – ha dekha maene. ……………
Dev chilla ke - kaun hae samne aao agar mukabla karna chahte ho to.
……………………………….koi awaz nahi
Dev – chhupkar waar karna kayarta hae. hum ladne se nahi darte na hi marne se na maarne se. himmat hae to samne aao.
…….. kaun ho tum log yaha hamare jungle me kyu aaye ho?
Dev – chhipkar baat kyu karte ho himmat hae to samne aao hum seena tan ke tumhare jungle me khade hae aur tum apne hi jungle me chip kar baethe ho. Aese hi ise apna jungle kahoge kya?
………itna bolne ki awshyakta nahi. Hum chahe to abhi tum dono ko mout ki nind sula sakte hae. apna parichay do.
Rudra – aji haa… halwa hae kya koi mout ki nind sula dege. Abe hat…
………. Tum logo ko baat karne ka tareeka sahi nahi hae.
Rudra – aur tera tareeka bada sahi hae? bina pooche bina mile mout ki dhamki deta hae kayar. Himmat hae to samne aa na, darta hae kya humse?
Tabhi charo taraf ke pedo se kai sare log hathiyaro ke saath kood padte hae. aur samne se ek lamba tagda shaks jiski kamar pe ghutno tak pattiyo ki chadar bandhi thi samne aakar khada ho jata hae.
………… mae hu is sena ka senapati kunga aur ab mae tumahre samne hu ab bolo.
Rudra – hmmmm senapati kunga, hum do logo ko itne sare sainiko se gher kar bada akad rahe ho kya tumhe apni taqat par bharosa nahi? Ya tumhe ye pata chal gaya hae ke tum hamara samna nahi kar paoge?
Kunga – murkh ye yaha ke prahri hae. aur mae inka sardar hu. Hamara kaam hae ajnabiyo ko yahi pe rokna.
Deva – to kya tumahre maharaj ne tumhe ye aagya bhi de rakhi hae ke bina baat kiye bina pooche tum kisi ki bhi hatya tak kar dalo? Tumne hum se koi bhi baat kiye bina hum par do jan lewa hamle kiye kya ye baat tumahre maharaj ki aagya se hui?
Kunga – chhoti chhoti bato ki aagya hum maharaj se nahi lete hum khud sambhal lete hae.
Rudra – yahi baat maharaj ke samne kah kar dikha dena guru man jauga mae tumhe.
Kunga – tum log bekar me apna aur mera samay barbad kar rahe ho. Tum logo ki koi aukat nahi maharj ke samne khade hone ki mujhse baat karo.
Rudra – abe aukat ki kya baat karta hae bhainse? Hamari to wo haisiyat hae. ke tere jaese hamare paer dabate hae samjha.
Kunga - lagta hae tum log aese nahi manoge tumhe apni jaan pyari nahi hae.
Rudra – abe jaan to sabko pyari hoti hae. lekin ha hame tumse koi pyar nahi aage bada to tujhe yahi sula dalege tameej se baat kar le.
Dev jor se chilla ke – HEY VAN RAAJ YADI AAPKE SAINIKO ME SE KOI MARA JATA HAE TO HUM DOSHI NAHI HOGE AAKRAMAN YE KARNE JA RAHE HAE HAM NAHI.
Kunga deva ki awaz sun ke haeran rah jata hae aur uske bhi maathe pe paseena aa jata hae kyu ki deva ki awaj poore jungle me bahot door tak goonj gayi thi.
Kunga - maro inko, dono me se koi bachne na paaye.
Kunga ki aawaz se sabhi satark ho kar dev aur rudra pe aakraman kar dete hae lekin dev aur rudra ne chalang lagakar khud ko ped ke peeche kar diya jisse un tak koi teer na aa paye. To sainiko ne apni talware khinch li aur un dono ki taraf lapke jaese hi wo un pedo ke pas pahuche waha na to rudra tha na dev. Sainik haeran ho gaye aur yaha waha dekhne lage tabhi upar se rudra kooda pas khade charo sainiko ke beech kood kar apni kulhadi liye hue teji se ghum gaya charo sainiko ki tango me lambe ghaav ban gaye. Aur charo apne paer pakad ke jameen pe gir pade. Idhar dev bhi upar se kooda aur aur jo sainik us ke pas khade the unme se do ki peeth pe talwar se waar kiya aur do ki tango pe uske paas ke bhi charo sainik jameen pe tadapne lage tabhi kunga ne apne dono hatho me talware nikal li aur rudra aur dev ke beech me khada ho gaya.
Dev – rudra samajh le iske saath ldna hae jan se nahi marna
Dev ne apni talwar apni peeth me wapas fansa kar wahi pade ek toote ped par baeth gaya.
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Fabulous update bhai
Dev aur Rudra chal pade apne adventure ki our iss baat se anjan ke wahan kounsa khatra hai our apne pahunch bhi gaye apna pahle padwa par ab dekhte hain ki aage kya hota hai
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NICE UPDATE BHAII BHOT AWALA MAZA AYA GIEA PAR AB NEW UPDATE KA INTAZAR HA BHAII
Nice bhai superb fight scene aage ka intezaar rahega well done
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