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Fantasy इच्छाधारी देव

Boby

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Hello friends kuchh jyada nahi sirf sorry hi kahuga aap logo ko itna intjar karwane ke liye. aur itne dino me mere bahot se readers ne mujhe comment kiye hae kai sare naye readers bhi jude hae jinhone is story ko padha hae mae aap sabhi ko dhanyavaad dena chahta hu. thank you very much all. aur ab time hae ek mast update ka to chaliye naye update ki taraf chalte hae.
 

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UPDATE – 167




Gurum– Thakurrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr………… teri ma ka bhosda, bahanchod suar…sale gandi nail ke keede…………………



tune babu ji ki ye halat ki…….. tu to gaya …………. Gurum thakur ki taraf lapakne laga.



Thakur - josh me mat aa bachhe. Tu meri jhant bhi nahi ukhad sakta yakeen na ho to chala goli gun tere hath me hae hi. Lekin usse pahle is raand savitri ko bhi dekh lo . lao re us chhinal ko…….



Tab dusra aadmi savitri ko balo se pakad ke ghaseetta hua laya uske badan pe is waqt sirf blouse aur peticot tha aur wo blouse bhi bas latak hi raha tha uske gore chucho pe kharochne ke nishan the jisse khoon ris raha tha., uske chehre pe bhi maar ke nishan the hotho se khoon bah raha tha. Peticot bhi jagah jagah se fat chuka tha aur uski gori janghe bhi kai jagah se khoon baha rahi thi jaese unhe bhi kharocha gaya ho., nocha gaya ho ya danto se kata gaya ho. Ye sab dekh kar jaha gurum aur nagarjun ne aankhe band kar li aur unki ankho se aansu nikal aaye wahi.



Shalaka – thakur kutte ki aulaaaaaaaaaadd…… mae tera khoon pi jaugi haramjade. Tu nahi janta tune apni bhayanak mout ko awaz di hae. inhe to hum le ke jayege. Aur tu marega aaj bahot buri mout marega tu.



Mannu - Chinta mat karo is savitri ki ye halat sirf maar ki wajah se hae abhi tak hum me se koi iske upar chada nahi hae sirf iske jism ko jakhmi hi kiya hae. is ke upar chadne ka man to bahot ho raha tha is umar me bhi jawan ladki ko maat dene wala badan hae iska. lekin tum logo ka hi intjar tha kyu ki hum ise tum sab ki specialy deva ki ankho ke samne chodna chahte the. Chalo deva na sahi tum sab to ho waese Ye chhamiya kaun hae bahot kadak mal dikh rahi hae jara naqab to hata meri jaan aur apna khubsurat mukhda dikha mujhe fir tujhe nangi kar ke yahi choduga, mannu side se nikal ke bola.



Nagarjun - ohhh to saanp ke saath sapola bhi hae. tabhi ye saanp itna fadfada raha hae.



Vithhal – A kabutaro tum log ka naach gana khatam hua chalo hathiyar dal do. Varna



Gurum - vithhal……… to tu hae in ke saath mujhe janta hae tu?



Vithhal - kaun hae be tu sala?



Gurum - wahi jiske naam se poora underworld kaanpta hae madarchod. mae hu ye dekh aur gurum ne apna mask utar fenka



Vithhal – ohhh teri …….. gurum? Abe tu inke saath kahe ku khada hae idhar aa tujhe jitna mal mangata hae apun dega tere ko. Le aa is chhamiya ko.



Gurum – tu kya mujhe maal dega kutte, tere jaese 100 vithhal yahi khade khade khareed ke fenk sakta hu mae. Tu meri keemat nahi laga sakta kyu ke uske liye jigar aur jameer chahiye jo tere pas nahi hae tu in jaese kutto ko khareed sakta hae. bas.



Itna kah kar gurum ne apni gun seedhi ki aur waha khade gundo pe firing kar di. Shalaka ne bhi do shot mare aur vithhal aur mannu ke hatho se gun nikal gayi. Thakur hadbada gaya. Inki aesi furti aur dileri dekh kar kyu ki ye log aesi harkat aese halat me kar jayege unme se kisi ko sapne me bhi ummid nahi thi. Gurum aur shalaka dekh chuke the ke nagarjun ne savitri aur DN ko special shield cover de diya hae ab na to unki jnidagi ko koi khatra ho sakta tha na hi unhe waha koi chhu sakta tha.

In teeno ke alava.



Andhadhundh firing hone lagi gurum , nagarjun aur shalaka beech hall me khade ho kar charo taraf firing kar rahe the kyu ki in pe goliya asar karne nahi wali thi. thodi der ki firing ke baad teeno ne apni gun wahi fenk di aur apni Katanas nikal ke bache hue gundo pe toot pade. Aur unhe kaatne lage. Itna bhayanak manjar dekh kar. Vithhal ki halat kharab ho gayi aur wo mannu ka hath pakad ke side me le gaya .



Vithhal - mannu ye log to trend hae be. Kaatte hi ja rahe hae sabko. Nikal yaha se. Dubara aayege idhar waese bhi tera badla poora ho chuka hae wo dekh DN aakhri saanse gin raha hae. bach bhi gaya to kisi kam ka nahi raha ab.



Mannu – lekin vithhal bhai mera baap abhi fansa hua hae. mae nahi ja sakta.



Vithhal - chhote Mumbai me tere pas sab kuchh hae. kahe ko chhote se lafde me pad ke apni jindagi barbad karta hae kabhi kabhi peeche hatna samajhdari kahlata hae. tera ek dushman khatam ho gaya ye DN ab tere dusre dushman ka welcome apun Mumbai me karega apne bap ki ye halat dekh kar wo waha jaroor aayega jaha apun majbut hoyega. Tere baap se pooch wo chalta hae to le chal use bhi. Aur do goli aur maar de DN ki chhati me.



Mannu dheere dheer thakur ke paas pahuchta hae. – babu ji yaha se nikalna hae. chalo mere saath.



Thakur – kaesi bat karta hae us madarchod deva ne hamara khandan chod dala aur tu aese hi jana chahta hae.



Mannu - use bhi dekh lege abhi use chot to de hi di hae aur waese bhi abhi wo yaha hae nahi . jab lautega to hamare peeche jaroor aayega tab use lapet lege niklo yaha se abhi.



Udhar nagarjun , shalaka aur gurum ne bache hue gundo ko maar diya tha. Aur thakur vithhal aur mannu ko dhundh rahe the. Lekin wo log nikal chuke the.



Gurum - - mae unke peeche jata hu. Unhe aaj mita duga mae. Itna kah kar gurum teji se bahar bhaga jaha se vithhal ki car ja rahi thi. gurum ki speed bahot jyada tej thi jaese koi gadi 150 ki rafter se chal rahi ho. Usne chalti car me hath dal ke vithhal ka gala dabaya aur use khincha bahar jo khidki se bahar nikal aaya car lahrati hui samne ke ped se ja takrayi gurum ne apna hath upar kiya aur uske haath me katana aagayi. Usne teji se katana chalai aur vithhal ke tukde karna chalu kar diya kuchh hi palo me waha vithhal ki kati fati laash padi thi. mannu ki ye dekh ke hi gaand fat gayi wo apne bap ke peeche jane laga to gurum ne wahi se fenk ke katana mannu pe mari jo gol gol ghumti hui mannu ki ek tang ko ghutne se swiftly kaatti hui nikal gayi. Gurum daud ke waha pahucha to uske samne thakur aa gaya aur thakur ne mannu ka hath pakda aur kuchh mantra padhe jisse wo dono turant gayab ho gaye. Gurum unhe dhundhne laga lekin wo nahi mile. To gurum wapas aaya.



Gurum – vithhal ko to kat diya maene aur mannu ki abhi ek tang hi kati thi ke thakur use le ke gayab ho gaya uske pas aghori ki taqat thi wo ab nahi milne wala lekin usko dhundhne ki koshish karo tum shalaka.



Shalaka – nahi unhe dev ke liye chhod do. Hum unhe mita sakte hae lekin abhi nahi. Nuksan to hamara bahot hona tha. Lekin sab thik hae kuchh jyada gadbad nahi hui. ye aghori ko mitana pahle jaroori hae.



Tabhi shalaka chonk uthi.



Shalaka – ohhhhhhhhh dev…… deev aa gaya… wo log aa gave hae gaanv me. Mujhe dev bula raha hae mae jati hu tum inhe sambhalo mae sabko yahi lati hu abhi



Udhar tilismi chakra me …………….



Trikal – mujhe chhute hi mani samne aa jayegi kyu ki mani ko pata chal jayega ke uske asli varis aa chuke hae. Fir wo mujhe chhod ke tumhare pas aa jayegi.



Dev aur poonam ne ek dusre ki ankho me dekha aur aage badh ke mahakal yani Trikal ko chhua. Trikal ke shareer me current sa daud gaya, ek jabardast roshni ka dhamaka hua jisse kuchh pal tak to in logo ki aankhe bhi chundhiya gayi. Fir wo roshni thami aur samne ek khoobsurat chamakdar kapdo me shaks khada tha jo mahakal yani Trikal tha.



Trikal – dhnyawad dev, poonam . aaj aap logo ki vajah se mujhe is kaid se mukti mili.
 

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UPDATE – 167




Gurum– Thakurrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr………… teri ma ka bhosda, bahanchod suar…sale gandi nail ke keede…………………



tune babu ji ki ye halat ki…….. tu to gaya …………. Gurum thakur ki taraf lapakne laga.



Thakur - josh me mat aa bachhe. Tu meri jhant bhi nahi ukhad sakta yakeen na ho to chala goli gun tere hath me hae hi. Lekin usse pahle is raand savitri ko bhi dekh lo . lao re us chhinal ko…….



Tab dusra aadmi savitri ko balo se pakad ke ghaseetta hua laya uske badan pe is waqt sirf blouse aur peticot tha aur wo blouse bhi bas latak hi raha tha uske gore chucho pe kharochne ke nishan the jisse khoon ris raha tha., uske chehre pe bhi maar ke nishan the hotho se khoon bah raha tha. Peticot bhi jagah jagah se fat chuka tha aur uski gori janghe bhi kai jagah se khoon baha rahi thi jaese unhe bhi kharocha gaya ho., nocha gaya ho ya danto se kata gaya ho. Ye sab dekh kar jaha gurum aur nagarjun ne aankhe band kar li aur unki ankho se aansu nikal aaye wahi.



Shalaka – thakur kutte ki aulaaaaaaaaaadd…… mae tera khoon pi jaugi haramjade. Tu nahi janta tune apni bhayanak mout ko awaz di hae. inhe to hum le ke jayege. Aur tu marega aaj bahot buri mout marega tu.



Mannu - Chinta mat karo is savitri ki ye halat sirf maar ki wajah se hae abhi tak hum me se koi iske upar chada nahi hae sirf iske jism ko jakhmi hi kiya hae. is ke upar chadne ka man to bahot ho raha tha is umar me bhi jawan ladki ko maat dene wala badan hae iska. lekin tum logo ka hi intjar tha kyu ki hum ise tum sab ki specialy deva ki ankho ke samne chodna chahte the. Chalo deva na sahi tum sab to ho waese Ye chhamiya kaun hae bahot kadak mal dikh rahi hae jara naqab to hata meri jaan aur apna khubsurat mukhda dikha mujhe fir tujhe nangi kar ke yahi choduga, mannu side se nikal ke bola.



Nagarjun - ohhh to saanp ke saath sapola bhi hae. tabhi ye saanp itna fadfada raha hae.



Vithhal – A kabutaro tum log ka naach gana khatam hua chalo hathiyar dal do. Varna



Gurum - vithhal……… to tu hae in ke saath mujhe janta hae tu?



Vithhal - kaun hae be tu sala?



Gurum - wahi jiske naam se poora underworld kaanpta hae madarchod. mae hu ye dekh aur gurum ne apna mask utar fenka



Vithhal – ohhh teri …….. gurum? Abe tu inke saath kahe ku khada hae idhar aa tujhe jitna mal mangata hae apun dega tere ko. Le aa is chhamiya ko.



Gurum – tu kya mujhe maal dega kutte, tere jaese 100 vithhal yahi khade khade khareed ke fenk sakta hu mae. Tu meri keemat nahi laga sakta kyu ke uske liye jigar aur jameer chahiye jo tere pas nahi hae tu in jaese kutto ko khareed sakta hae. bas.



Itna kah kar gurum ne apni gun seedhi ki aur waha khade gundo pe firing kar di. Shalaka ne bhi do shot mare aur vithhal aur mannu ke hatho se gun nikal gayi. Thakur hadbada gaya. Inki aesi furti aur dileri dekh kar kyu ki ye log aesi harkat aese halat me kar jayege unme se kisi ko sapne me bhi ummid nahi thi. Gurum aur shalaka dekh chuke the ke nagarjun ne savitri aur DN ko special shield cover de diya hae ab na to unki jnidagi ko koi khatra ho sakta tha na hi unhe waha koi chhu sakta tha.

In teeno ke alava.



Andhadhundh firing hone lagi gurum , nagarjun aur shalaka beech hall me khade ho kar charo taraf firing kar rahe the kyu ki in pe goliya asar karne nahi wali thi. thodi der ki firing ke baad teeno ne apni gun wahi fenk di aur apni Katanas nikal ke bache hue gundo pe toot pade. Aur unhe kaatne lage. Itna bhayanak manjar dekh kar. Vithhal ki halat kharab ho gayi aur wo mannu ka hath pakad ke side me le gaya .



Vithhal - mannu ye log to trend hae be. Kaatte hi ja rahe hae sabko. Nikal yaha se. Dubara aayege idhar waese bhi tera badla poora ho chuka hae wo dekh DN aakhri saanse gin raha hae. bach bhi gaya to kisi kam ka nahi raha ab.



Mannu – lekin vithhal bhai mera baap abhi fansa hua hae. mae nahi ja sakta.



Vithhal - chhote Mumbai me tere pas sab kuchh hae. kahe ko chhote se lafde me pad ke apni jindagi barbad karta hae kabhi kabhi peeche hatna samajhdari kahlata hae. tera ek dushman khatam ho gaya ye DN ab tere dusre dushman ka welcome apun Mumbai me karega apne bap ki ye halat dekh kar wo waha jaroor aayega jaha apun majbut hoyega. Tere baap se pooch wo chalta hae to le chal use bhi. Aur do goli aur maar de DN ki chhati me.



Mannu dheere dheer thakur ke paas pahuchta hae. – babu ji yaha se nikalna hae. chalo mere saath.



Thakur – kaesi bat karta hae us madarchod deva ne hamara khandan chod dala aur tu aese hi jana chahta hae.



Mannu - use bhi dekh lege abhi use chot to de hi di hae aur waese bhi abhi wo yaha hae nahi . jab lautega to hamare peeche jaroor aayega tab use lapet lege niklo yaha se abhi.



Udhar nagarjun , shalaka aur gurum ne bache hue gundo ko maar diya tha. Aur thakur vithhal aur mannu ko dhundh rahe the. Lekin wo log nikal chuke the.



Gurum - - mae unke peeche jata hu. Unhe aaj mita duga mae. Itna kah kar gurum teji se bahar bhaga jaha se vithhal ki car ja rahi thi. gurum ki speed bahot jyada tej thi jaese koi gadi 150 ki rafter se chal rahi ho. Usne chalti car me hath dal ke vithhal ka gala dabaya aur use khincha bahar jo khidki se bahar nikal aaya car lahrati hui samne ke ped se ja takrayi gurum ne apna hath upar kiya aur uske haath me katana aagayi. Usne teji se katana chalai aur vithhal ke tukde karna chalu kar diya kuchh hi palo me waha vithhal ki kati fati laash padi thi. mannu ki ye dekh ke hi gaand fat gayi wo apne bap ke peeche jane laga to gurum ne wahi se fenk ke katana mannu pe mari jo gol gol ghumti hui mannu ki ek tang ko ghutne se swiftly kaatti hui nikal gayi. Gurum daud ke waha pahucha to uske samne thakur aa gaya aur thakur ne mannu ka hath pakda aur kuchh mantra padhe jisse wo dono turant gayab ho gaye. Gurum unhe dhundhne laga lekin wo nahi mile. To gurum wapas aaya.



Gurum – vithhal ko to kat diya maene aur mannu ki abhi ek tang hi kati thi ke thakur use le ke gayab ho gaya uske pas aghori ki taqat thi wo ab nahi milne wala lekin usko dhundhne ki koshish karo tum shalaka.



Shalaka – nahi unhe dev ke liye chhod do. Hum unhe mita sakte hae lekin abhi nahi. Nuksan to hamara bahot hona tha. Lekin sab thik hae kuchh jyada gadbad nahi hui. ye aghori ko mitana pahle jaroori hae.



Tabhi shalaka chonk uthi.



Shalaka – ohhhhhhhhh dev…… deev aa gaya… wo log aa gave hae gaanv me. Mujhe dev bula raha hae mae jati hu tum inhe sambhalo mae sabko yahi lati hu abhi



Udhar tilismi chakra me …………….



Trikal – mujhe chhute hi mani samne aa jayegi kyu ki mani ko pata chal jayega ke uske asli varis aa chuke hae. Fir wo mujhe chhod ke tumhare pas aa jayegi.



Dev aur poonam ne ek dusre ki ankho me dekha aur aage badh ke mahakal yani Trikal ko chhua. Trikal ke shareer me current sa daud gaya, ek jabardast roshni ka dhamaka hua jisse kuchh pal tak to in logo ki aankhe bhi chundhiya gayi. Fir wo roshni thami aur samne ek khoobsurat chamakdar kapdo me shaks khada tha jo mahakal yani Trikal tha.



Trikal – dhnyawad dev, poonam . aaj aap logo ki vajah se mujhe is kaid se mukti mili.
Bahot behtareen shaandaar update bhai
Shalaka or gurram n milker DN or Savitri ko bacha lia Gurum n tow vithal ki boti hi bana di manu ka bhi namber lag jata lekin use thakur leker gayab ho gaya dekhte h kab tak bachta h
Tow aakhir kaar itni kadi mehnat k baat Dev or poonam ko woh mani mil hi gayi or sabhi log wapas bhi aa gaye ab dekhte jab Dev ko iss sabka pta chalega tow Aghori or Thakur ka kia kerta h
Behad shaandaar lajawab update bhai
 

krish1152

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Nice update
 

Lib am

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UPDATE – 167




Gurum– Thakurrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr………… teri ma ka bhosda, bahanchod suar…sale gandi nail ke keede…………………



tune babu ji ki ye halat ki…….. tu to gaya …………. Gurum thakur ki taraf lapakne laga.



Thakur - josh me mat aa bachhe. Tu meri jhant bhi nahi ukhad sakta yakeen na ho to chala goli gun tere hath me hae hi. Lekin usse pahle is raand savitri ko bhi dekh lo . lao re us chhinal ko…….



Tab dusra aadmi savitri ko balo se pakad ke ghaseetta hua laya uske badan pe is waqt sirf blouse aur peticot tha aur wo blouse bhi bas latak hi raha tha uske gore chucho pe kharochne ke nishan the jisse khoon ris raha tha., uske chehre pe bhi maar ke nishan the hotho se khoon bah raha tha. Peticot bhi jagah jagah se fat chuka tha aur uski gori janghe bhi kai jagah se khoon baha rahi thi jaese unhe bhi kharocha gaya ho., nocha gaya ho ya danto se kata gaya ho. Ye sab dekh kar jaha gurum aur nagarjun ne aankhe band kar li aur unki ankho se aansu nikal aaye wahi.



Shalaka – thakur kutte ki aulaaaaaaaaaadd…… mae tera khoon pi jaugi haramjade. Tu nahi janta tune apni bhayanak mout ko awaz di hae. inhe to hum le ke jayege. Aur tu marega aaj bahot buri mout marega tu.



Mannu - Chinta mat karo is savitri ki ye halat sirf maar ki wajah se hae abhi tak hum me se koi iske upar chada nahi hae sirf iske jism ko jakhmi hi kiya hae. is ke upar chadne ka man to bahot ho raha tha is umar me bhi jawan ladki ko maat dene wala badan hae iska. lekin tum logo ka hi intjar tha kyu ki hum ise tum sab ki specialy deva ki ankho ke samne chodna chahte the. Chalo deva na sahi tum sab to ho waese Ye chhamiya kaun hae bahot kadak mal dikh rahi hae jara naqab to hata meri jaan aur apna khubsurat mukhda dikha mujhe fir tujhe nangi kar ke yahi choduga, mannu side se nikal ke bola.



Nagarjun - ohhh to saanp ke saath sapola bhi hae. tabhi ye saanp itna fadfada raha hae.



Vithhal – A kabutaro tum log ka naach gana khatam hua chalo hathiyar dal do. Varna



Gurum - vithhal……… to tu hae in ke saath mujhe janta hae tu?



Vithhal - kaun hae be tu sala?



Gurum - wahi jiske naam se poora underworld kaanpta hae madarchod. mae hu ye dekh aur gurum ne apna mask utar fenka



Vithhal – ohhh teri …….. gurum? Abe tu inke saath kahe ku khada hae idhar aa tujhe jitna mal mangata hae apun dega tere ko. Le aa is chhamiya ko.



Gurum – tu kya mujhe maal dega kutte, tere jaese 100 vithhal yahi khade khade khareed ke fenk sakta hu mae. Tu meri keemat nahi laga sakta kyu ke uske liye jigar aur jameer chahiye jo tere pas nahi hae tu in jaese kutto ko khareed sakta hae. bas.



Itna kah kar gurum ne apni gun seedhi ki aur waha khade gundo pe firing kar di. Shalaka ne bhi do shot mare aur vithhal aur mannu ke hatho se gun nikal gayi. Thakur hadbada gaya. Inki aesi furti aur dileri dekh kar kyu ki ye log aesi harkat aese halat me kar jayege unme se kisi ko sapne me bhi ummid nahi thi. Gurum aur shalaka dekh chuke the ke nagarjun ne savitri aur DN ko special shield cover de diya hae ab na to unki jnidagi ko koi khatra ho sakta tha na hi unhe waha koi chhu sakta tha.

In teeno ke alava.



Andhadhundh firing hone lagi gurum , nagarjun aur shalaka beech hall me khade ho kar charo taraf firing kar rahe the kyu ki in pe goliya asar karne nahi wali thi. thodi der ki firing ke baad teeno ne apni gun wahi fenk di aur apni Katanas nikal ke bache hue gundo pe toot pade. Aur unhe kaatne lage. Itna bhayanak manjar dekh kar. Vithhal ki halat kharab ho gayi aur wo mannu ka hath pakad ke side me le gaya .



Vithhal - mannu ye log to trend hae be. Kaatte hi ja rahe hae sabko. Nikal yaha se. Dubara aayege idhar waese bhi tera badla poora ho chuka hae wo dekh DN aakhri saanse gin raha hae. bach bhi gaya to kisi kam ka nahi raha ab.



Mannu – lekin vithhal bhai mera baap abhi fansa hua hae. mae nahi ja sakta.



Vithhal - chhote Mumbai me tere pas sab kuchh hae. kahe ko chhote se lafde me pad ke apni jindagi barbad karta hae kabhi kabhi peeche hatna samajhdari kahlata hae. tera ek dushman khatam ho gaya ye DN ab tere dusre dushman ka welcome apun Mumbai me karega apne bap ki ye halat dekh kar wo waha jaroor aayega jaha apun majbut hoyega. Tere baap se pooch wo chalta hae to le chal use bhi. Aur do goli aur maar de DN ki chhati me.



Mannu dheere dheer thakur ke paas pahuchta hae. – babu ji yaha se nikalna hae. chalo mere saath.



Thakur – kaesi bat karta hae us madarchod deva ne hamara khandan chod dala aur tu aese hi jana chahta hae.



Mannu - use bhi dekh lege abhi use chot to de hi di hae aur waese bhi abhi wo yaha hae nahi . jab lautega to hamare peeche jaroor aayega tab use lapet lege niklo yaha se abhi.



Udhar nagarjun , shalaka aur gurum ne bache hue gundo ko maar diya tha. Aur thakur vithhal aur mannu ko dhundh rahe the. Lekin wo log nikal chuke the.



Gurum - - mae unke peeche jata hu. Unhe aaj mita duga mae. Itna kah kar gurum teji se bahar bhaga jaha se vithhal ki car ja rahi thi. gurum ki speed bahot jyada tej thi jaese koi gadi 150 ki rafter se chal rahi ho. Usne chalti car me hath dal ke vithhal ka gala dabaya aur use khincha bahar jo khidki se bahar nikal aaya car lahrati hui samne ke ped se ja takrayi gurum ne apna hath upar kiya aur uske haath me katana aagayi. Usne teji se katana chalai aur vithhal ke tukde karna chalu kar diya kuchh hi palo me waha vithhal ki kati fati laash padi thi. mannu ki ye dekh ke hi gaand fat gayi wo apne bap ke peeche jane laga to gurum ne wahi se fenk ke katana mannu pe mari jo gol gol ghumti hui mannu ki ek tang ko ghutne se swiftly kaatti hui nikal gayi. Gurum daud ke waha pahucha to uske samne thakur aa gaya aur thakur ne mannu ka hath pakda aur kuchh mantra padhe jisse wo dono turant gayab ho gaye. Gurum unhe dhundhne laga lekin wo nahi mile. To gurum wapas aaya.



Gurum – vithhal ko to kat diya maene aur mannu ki abhi ek tang hi kati thi ke thakur use le ke gayab ho gaya uske pas aghori ki taqat thi wo ab nahi milne wala lekin usko dhundhne ki koshish karo tum shalaka.



Shalaka – nahi unhe dev ke liye chhod do. Hum unhe mita sakte hae lekin abhi nahi. Nuksan to hamara bahot hona tha. Lekin sab thik hae kuchh jyada gadbad nahi hui. ye aghori ko mitana pahle jaroori hae.



Tabhi shalaka chonk uthi.



Shalaka – ohhhhhhhhh dev…… deev aa gaya… wo log aa gave hae gaanv me. Mujhe dev bula raha hae mae jati hu tum inhe sambhalo mae sabko yahi lati hu abhi



Udhar tilismi chakra me …………….



Trikal – mujhe chhute hi mani samne aa jayegi kyu ki mani ko pata chal jayega ke uske asli varis aa chuke hae. Fir wo mujhe chhod ke tumhare pas aa jayegi.



Dev aur poonam ne ek dusre ki ankho me dekha aur aage badh ke mahakal yani Trikal ko chhua. Trikal ke shareer me current sa daud gaya, ek jabardast roshni ka dhamaka hua jisse kuchh pal tak to in logo ki aankhe bhi chundhiya gayi. Fir wo roshni thami aur samne ek khoobsurat chamakdar kapdo me shaks khada tha jo mahakal yani Trikal tha.



Trikal – dhnyawad dev, poonam . aaj aap logo ki vajah se mujhe is kaid se mukti mili.
Lagta hai maa babuji ko isiliye chot pahunch wayi gayi hai taaki Dev ko krodh aaye aur wo poori shakti ke saath thakur, aghori aur uske guru ka ant kar sake. Update itne intzaar ke baad bhi chota aur adhura laga kam se kam tilsim waal chapter to close karna hi chahiye tha aur pata nahi agle update ke liye bhi kitne hafte ya maheene wait karna padega.
 

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Gurum– Thakurrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr………… teri ma ka bhosda, bahanchod suar…sale gandi nail ke keede…………………



tune babu ji ki ye halat ki…….. tu to gaya …………. Gurum thakur ki taraf lapakne laga.



Thakur - josh me mat aa bachhe. Tu meri jhant bhi nahi ukhad sakta yakeen na ho to chala goli gun tere hath me hae hi. Lekin usse pahle is raand savitri ko bhi dekh lo . lao re us chhinal ko…….



Tab dusra aadmi savitri ko balo se pakad ke ghaseetta hua laya uske badan pe is waqt sirf blouse aur peticot tha aur wo blouse bhi bas latak hi raha tha uske gore chucho pe kharochne ke nishan the jisse khoon ris raha tha., uske chehre pe bhi maar ke nishan the hotho se khoon bah raha tha. Peticot bhi jagah jagah se fat chuka tha aur uski gori janghe bhi kai jagah se khoon baha rahi thi jaese unhe bhi kharocha gaya ho., nocha gaya ho ya danto se kata gaya ho. Ye sab dekh kar jaha gurum aur nagarjun ne aankhe band kar li aur unki ankho se aansu nikal aaye wahi.



Shalaka – thakur kutte ki aulaaaaaaaaaadd…… mae tera khoon pi jaugi haramjade. Tu nahi janta tune apni bhayanak mout ko awaz di hae. inhe to hum le ke jayege. Aur tu marega aaj bahot buri mout marega tu.



Mannu - Chinta mat karo is savitri ki ye halat sirf maar ki wajah se hae abhi tak hum me se koi iske upar chada nahi hae sirf iske jism ko jakhmi hi kiya hae. is ke upar chadne ka man to bahot ho raha tha is umar me bhi jawan ladki ko maat dene wala badan hae iska. lekin tum logo ka hi intjar tha kyu ki hum ise tum sab ki specialy deva ki ankho ke samne chodna chahte the. Chalo deva na sahi tum sab to ho waese Ye chhamiya kaun hae bahot kadak mal dikh rahi hae jara naqab to hata meri jaan aur apna khubsurat mukhda dikha mujhe fir tujhe nangi kar ke yahi choduga, mannu side se nikal ke bola.



Nagarjun - ohhh to saanp ke saath sapola bhi hae. tabhi ye saanp itna fadfada raha hae.



Vithhal – A kabutaro tum log ka naach gana khatam hua chalo hathiyar dal do. Varna



Gurum - vithhal……… to tu hae in ke saath mujhe janta hae tu?



Vithhal - kaun hae be tu sala?



Gurum - wahi jiske naam se poora underworld kaanpta hae madarchod. mae hu ye dekh aur gurum ne apna mask utar fenka



Vithhal – ohhh teri …….. gurum? Abe tu inke saath kahe ku khada hae idhar aa tujhe jitna mal mangata hae apun dega tere ko. Le aa is chhamiya ko.



Gurum – tu kya mujhe maal dega kutte, tere jaese 100 vithhal yahi khade khade khareed ke fenk sakta hu mae. Tu meri keemat nahi laga sakta kyu ke uske liye jigar aur jameer chahiye jo tere pas nahi hae tu in jaese kutto ko khareed sakta hae. bas.



Itna kah kar gurum ne apni gun seedhi ki aur waha khade gundo pe firing kar di. Shalaka ne bhi do shot mare aur vithhal aur mannu ke hatho se gun nikal gayi. Thakur hadbada gaya. Inki aesi furti aur dileri dekh kar kyu ki ye log aesi harkat aese halat me kar jayege unme se kisi ko sapne me bhi ummid nahi thi. Gurum aur shalaka dekh chuke the ke nagarjun ne savitri aur DN ko special shield cover de diya hae ab na to unki jnidagi ko koi khatra ho sakta tha na hi unhe waha koi chhu sakta tha.

In teeno ke alava.



Andhadhundh firing hone lagi gurum , nagarjun aur shalaka beech hall me khade ho kar charo taraf firing kar rahe the kyu ki in pe goliya asar karne nahi wali thi. thodi der ki firing ke baad teeno ne apni gun wahi fenk di aur apni Katanas nikal ke bache hue gundo pe toot pade. Aur unhe kaatne lage. Itna bhayanak manjar dekh kar. Vithhal ki halat kharab ho gayi aur wo mannu ka hath pakad ke side me le gaya .



Vithhal - mannu ye log to trend hae be. Kaatte hi ja rahe hae sabko. Nikal yaha se. Dubara aayege idhar waese bhi tera badla poora ho chuka hae wo dekh DN aakhri saanse gin raha hae. bach bhi gaya to kisi kam ka nahi raha ab.



Mannu – lekin vithhal bhai mera baap abhi fansa hua hae. mae nahi ja sakta.



Vithhal - chhote Mumbai me tere pas sab kuchh hae. kahe ko chhote se lafde me pad ke apni jindagi barbad karta hae kabhi kabhi peeche hatna samajhdari kahlata hae. tera ek dushman khatam ho gaya ye DN ab tere dusre dushman ka welcome apun Mumbai me karega apne bap ki ye halat dekh kar wo waha jaroor aayega jaha apun majbut hoyega. Tere baap se pooch wo chalta hae to le chal use bhi. Aur do goli aur maar de DN ki chhati me.



Mannu dheere dheer thakur ke paas pahuchta hae. – babu ji yaha se nikalna hae. chalo mere saath.



Thakur – kaesi bat karta hae us madarchod deva ne hamara khandan chod dala aur tu aese hi jana chahta hae.



Mannu - use bhi dekh lege abhi use chot to de hi di hae aur waese bhi abhi wo yaha hae nahi . jab lautega to hamare peeche jaroor aayega tab use lapet lege niklo yaha se abhi.



Udhar nagarjun , shalaka aur gurum ne bache hue gundo ko maar diya tha. Aur thakur vithhal aur mannu ko dhundh rahe the. Lekin wo log nikal chuke the.



Gurum - - mae unke peeche jata hu. Unhe aaj mita duga mae. Itna kah kar gurum teji se bahar bhaga jaha se vithhal ki car ja rahi thi. gurum ki speed bahot jyada tej thi jaese koi gadi 150 ki rafter se chal rahi ho. Usne chalti car me hath dal ke vithhal ka gala dabaya aur use khincha bahar jo khidki se bahar nikal aaya car lahrati hui samne ke ped se ja takrayi gurum ne apna hath upar kiya aur uske haath me katana aagayi. Usne teji se katana chalai aur vithhal ke tukde karna chalu kar diya kuchh hi palo me waha vithhal ki kati fati laash padi thi. mannu ki ye dekh ke hi gaand fat gayi wo apne bap ke peeche jane laga to gurum ne wahi se fenk ke katana mannu pe mari jo gol gol ghumti hui mannu ki ek tang ko ghutne se swiftly kaatti hui nikal gayi. Gurum daud ke waha pahucha to uske samne thakur aa gaya aur thakur ne mannu ka hath pakda aur kuchh mantra padhe jisse wo dono turant gayab ho gaye. Gurum unhe dhundhne laga lekin wo nahi mile. To gurum wapas aaya.



Gurum – vithhal ko to kat diya maene aur mannu ki abhi ek tang hi kati thi ke thakur use le ke gayab ho gaya uske pas aghori ki taqat thi wo ab nahi milne wala lekin usko dhundhne ki koshish karo tum shalaka.



Shalaka – nahi unhe dev ke liye chhod do. Hum unhe mita sakte hae lekin abhi nahi. Nuksan to hamara bahot hona tha. Lekin sab thik hae kuchh jyada gadbad nahi hui. ye aghori ko mitana pahle jaroori hae.



Tabhi shalaka chonk uthi.



Shalaka – ohhhhhhhhh dev…… deev aa gaya… wo log aa gave hae gaanv me. Mujhe dev bula raha hae mae jati hu tum inhe sambhalo mae sabko yahi lati hu abhi



Udhar tilismi chakra me …………….



Trikal – mujhe chhute hi mani samne aa jayegi kyu ki mani ko pata chal jayega ke uske asli varis aa chuke hae. Fir wo mujhe chhod ke tumhare pas aa jayegi.



Dev aur poonam ne ek dusre ki ankho me dekha aur aage badh ke mahakal yani Trikal ko chhua. Trikal ke shareer me current sa daud gaya, ek jabardast roshni ka dhamaka hua jisse kuchh pal tak to in logo ki aankhe bhi chundhiya gayi. Fir wo roshni thami aur samne ek khoobsurat chamakdar kapdo me shaks khada tha jo mahakal yani Trikal tha.



Trikal – dhnyawad dev, poonam . aaj aap logo ki vajah se mujhe is kaid se mukti mili.
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romanchak update ..sabko bacha hi liya gurum aur uske saathiyo ne .
vitthal ko sahi maut di gurum ne par thakur aur mannu ki jaan nahi le paaya ..par mannu ki taang to tod hi di .
deva aa gaya hai gaon me mani ko haasil karke ..
 
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