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DOSTO BAHOT LAMBE SAMAY KE BAAD HUM IS PORTAL PE AAYE HAE KYU KAHE KO IN SAB BATO KA KOI MATLAB NAHI KYU KE AAP LOG YAHA APNA MANORANJAN KARNE AATE HAE HUM WRITERS KI SAMASAYE SUNNE NAHI . TO HUM AAP SAB SE MAFI CHAHTE HAE KI ITNE SAMAY BAD AAYE HAE AUR KOSHISH KAREGE KE AB AESA NA HO.
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TO KAHANI YE THI ABI TAK KE
Aghori - bakwas na kar aur ja apne room me………….. kanika ise iska kamra dikha ke mere pas aao kuchh kam hae.Kanika - thik hae aghori mae abhi aayi.
Fir kanika aage aage chalne lagti ahe aur uski nangi gand ko apni aankho se choidte hue pipasu bhi uske peeche jane lagta hae.
UPDATE 261
Thodi der ke baad kanika wapas aa jati hae lekin uski chuchiya poori lal padi hui thi aur uske baal bhi bikhre hue the.
Aghori - us janwar ne tera bhog to nahi laga diya?
Kanika - itna bhi asan nahi hae mera bhog lagana aghori. Aur jitna usne kiya wo to ye samajhta hae usne apne bahubal se kiya mujhe majbur kar ke lekin use ye pata nahi ke agar mae khud use itna karne ki chhut na deti to wo mujhe chhu bhi na pata . par wo tumhara mehman hae aur uski ahmiyat mae samajhti hu isliye use itna bardasht kar liya maene.
Aghori - chutiya hae sala, murkh kahi ka , gadha. pata nahi aaj rat kya hoga. Ye gurudev bhi aaj kal mere pas nahi aa rahe hae pata nahi kaha vyast hae. tum mere liye jam banao aur manika kaha hae?
Kanika – wo andar hi hae apni sadhna me bulau kya use bhi?
Aghori - nahi rahne do abhi uski jarurat nahi hae bas aaj ki rat jaesa maene socha hae agar waesa ho jaye to tum dono ko kai dino tak ek sath choduga aur tum dono ko khush kar duga ye thodi pareshani khatam ho jaye bas.
Kanika muskrate hue - Sachme? hame bhi us pal ka intjar rahega aghori .
Isi tarah rat ho jati hae aur pipasu bahar aata hae us kamre se us kamre me jagah jagah khoon bikhra hua tha jo pipasu ne piya tha ek taaraf sharab ke gilas pade the aur bistar pe ek ladki ki nangi lash padi thi jise pipasu ne aage peeche se chod chod ke udhed diya tha aur akhir me usi ka khon poora chus ke kamre se bahar nikla tha.
Pipasu - aghori mere hisab se ab sahi waqt aa gaya hae un par hamla karne ka. Isiliye mae jata hu.
Aghori - ja lekin mujhse kisi tarah ki koi ummid mat rakhna kyu ki ye ladayi mae pishachraj ke sath ladne wala tha par wo nahi aaya to ab tu khud hi sambhal.
Pipasu – mujhe teri koi jarurat bhi nahi padne wali tu waha ja kar bhi kuchh nahi kar pata waese bhi mae hi sab nipta deta. To mae hi jauga tu yahi rah aur apni dasi ki baja mae aata hu.
Pipasu bahar nikalta hae aur apni sena ko dekhta hae jo ke koi 1000 ke aaspas sainiko ki thi sabhi is waqt taiyar khade the.
Pipasu - to sathiyo ab wo waqt aa gaya hae jiske liye hum log yaha aaye hae hum log jis gaanv me ja rahe hae waha pahle hame apne dushmano ko marna hae unhe bina koi mouka diye aur jab wo sab khatam ho jaye to un dushmano ke alava jise jo aurat ya ladki pasand ho wo use bhog sakta hae aur kisi ka bhi lahoo pee kar apni pyas bujha sakta hae agar koi bahot pasand aa jaye to use apni biradri me shamil kar ke hamesha ke liye use apni dasi bhi bana sakta hae aur jindagi bhar use bhog sakta hae bachhe bhi paeda kar sakta hae. waese suna hae ke yaha ki aurate bahot hi sundar aur kamuk hae. to lag jao apne kam par lekin pahle dushmano ka nash fir apna kam samajh gaye na tum log
Sabhi sainik - haaa…………….
Pipasu - chalo fir chalte hae apne nishane ki taraf
Pipasu aage aage badh raha tha sab ke hatho me khatarnak kintu ajeeb hi tarah ke hathiyar the. Wo log aage badhe chale ja rahe the. Pipasu apne poore sainiko ke saath jungle se bahar aa jata hae aur aage badne lagta hae use ye nahi pata chalta ke jaese hi wo log sab ke sab jungle se bahar aaye nagarjun ki adrashya deewar ne jungle ke bahar bhi apna jal bicha diya ab jungle ke andar baethe aghori ko bahar sab shant hi najar aane wala hae waha hone wale ghamasan ki use koi khabar nahi milne wali. Ek tarah se pipasu apne poore sainiko ke saath nagarjun ke chakrvyuh me kaid ho chukka tha aur aghori se uske sare connection cut chuke the lekin wo is bat se anjan apni hi masti me aage badha chala ja raha tha.
Tabhi use ghoda aage badte badte ek dam se ruk gaya. Pipasu ne use aage badane ki bahot koshish ki lekin ghoda ek kadam bhi aage nahi badh raha tha. Pipasu ghode se neeche utar ke aage kadam badata hae to wo khud bhi aage nahi ja pa raha tha.
Pipasu ki ankhe gusse me jalne lagti hae - dhokhaaaa..
Lekin tab tak bahot der ho chuki thi. Gurum ki shaktiyo se waha charo taraf dhamake shuru ho chuke the jisme kai pishach to bina baat ko samjhe hi ud gaye un me afra tafri mach gayi ek taraf se un par nilam ne apne vaar karne chalu kar diye to dusri taraf se channo ne . sabse aage gurum tha aur sabse peeche yani jungle ki taraf ka morcha nagarjun ne sambhal liya ek tarah se wo pishach charo taraf se ghire hue the aur un par charo taraf se hi hamle ho rahe the aur unke shareer toofan me tinke ki tarah ud rahe the unke ang hawa me ud rahe the. Koi apni jagah pe khade khade hi rakh ke dher me badal raha tha. Aur ye sab pipasu boukhlaya hua beecho bich khada dekh raha tha. Tabhi use apni peeth par bahot tej dhar se war mahsus hua aur uski peeth pe ek aag ki lakeer ban gayi ye koi aur nahi balki poonam thi jo akeli pipasu ke samne kadhi thi. uski mout ban kar.
Pipasu - tum logo ne dhokhe se waar kiya hum par……….
Poonam - ha tu to hame nyota dene aa raha tha na yudh ka . sale neech tu khud hame dhokhe se marne ki niyat se hi aa raha tha na? hamne koi dhokha nahi diya ise sirf apni sawdhani kahte hae apni seemao ki raksha karna kahte hae tune hamare ilake me aakar ham par ghat lagane ki koshish ki. Khud ko taqatwar , hoshiyar aur hame bewakoof samajha to ye bewkoofi teri thi isme hamari taraf se koi dhokha nahi tha hamne nahi kaha tha ki tu hame yani apne dushmano ko kamjor samajh. Tune khud hi hame kamjor samjha aur Ab ro raha hae?
………….. aur kya kah kar apne sainiko ka manobal badha raha tha hamare sathiyo ko maar ke hame aur yaha ki aurto ko le jane wale the na tum log. To ab aurto ke hatho se hi mar tu.
Itna kah kar poonam ne apna hath aage kiya aur us par apni shakti ka vaar kiya jise pipasu ne apni mayavi talwar pe kaat diya aur ulta waar poonam pe kar diya to poonam ne bhi uski shakti ko sirf jhukai dekar vifal kar diya. lekin tabhi pipasu ne lagatar poonam pe waar shuru kar diye. To poonam ne bhi apne hath me ek chamakti hui talwar prakat ki aur bijli ki teji se apni jagah pe ghumne lagi poonam ki teji itni jyada thi ke pipasu ki ankho kea age sirf dhool ka bawandar hi najar aa raha tha wo chah kar bhi poonam ki speed ka na to mukabla kar pa raha tha na hi use rok pa raha tha, aur na hi use dekh pa raha tha.
Udhar gurum , nilam, channo, rajni, aur nagarjun bhi sare sainiko pe mout ban kar baras rahe the.
Tabhi nagarjun ko ek sainik ki talwar paero me lagi aur wo jameen pe gira to ek sath kai sainiko ne use gher liya aur apni talwaro se hi use marne ko lapke nagarjun is waqt buri tarah se ghira hua tha. Un ke beech aur kisi ka bhi waar us par chal sakta tha. Lekin un sainiko ne nagarjun pe ek saath hamla kiya aur kai talware nagarjun ki taraf badh rahi thi lekin tabhi teji se do talware lapki jisse un sainiko ki gardane alag hoti chali gai aur ek bahot bad dhal aakar giri nagarjun par jisse us tak pahuch chuki kuchh talware us dhal se takra kar bekar ho gayi ye the nilam, channo aur gurm jinhone akhri samay pe nagarjun ko ghire dekha to teji se ghumte hue sainiko ki garden kaatte chale gaye aur channo ne apni peeth se dhal utar kar nagarjun ke upar fenk di thi. bas itna waqt kafi tha nagarjun ke liye wo furti se utha aur use ghere khade sainiko ke pet katta chala gaya. Charo taraf kohram macha hua tha. Sare sainiko ki cheekhe hi cheekhe gunj rahi thi .
Is yudh me bhi mayavi shaktiyo ke alava sharirik bal ka istemal ho raha tha.
Tabhi kuchh sainiko ne channo ko gher liya ek sainik ki talwar channo ki peeth pe chali jisse wo cheekh padi lekin turant hi khud ko sambhal liya wo sainik apni talware aur gandase liye channo ko gherte ja rahe the aur us par hans rahe the tabhi ek sainik ne channo ko peeche ki taraf se pakad liya aur uski garden pe apne dant gadane hi wala tha ki uske peeche gurum pahucha aur aur us sainik ko sir se paer take k hi waar me cheer ke rakh diya. ye dekh baki sainik krodh me un par lapke to gurum ne channo ka hath pakda aur use hawa me utha diya aur khud se door kar diya . fir turant sare sainiko ke beech pahuch kar unhe kaatna chalu kar diya.
Udhar pipasu poonam ke saath uljha hua tha. Aur poonam ne use jakhmi bhi kar diya tha. Jisse wo samajh gaya ke poonam us par bhari pad rahi hae. to usne yaha waha najar ghumayi aur uski najar padi nilam par jo usse kuchh hi door khadi uske sainiko ko kaat rahi thi aur uske sainik uska mukabla nahi kar pa rahe the. Usne teji se aage badh kar nilam ka haath pakda aur use lekar hawa me upar uthta chala gaya. Ab nilam ki garden pipasu ke hath me thi.
Poonam ne jab ye dekha to – pipasu chhod use varna anjam achha nahi hoga .
Pipasu - hum yaha kisi ache anjam ke liye aaye bhi nahi hae janeman. ya marege ya tum logo ko maar dege. Aur ab to ye mere kabze me hae agar tumme se koi bhi aage badha to iski garden mae tod duga. Itna kah kar usne nilam ki garden pe apni pakad sakht kar di.
Poonam - kayar hae tu kyu ki agar tujhme ek yodhaa hota to tu mukabla karta is tarah dhamkiya dekar darane ki koshish na karta agar tu sach me ek yodha ahe to mukabla kar mera. Chhod use aur mere samne aa.
Pipasu - ab tu mujhe apni bato me nahi fasa sakti par ha tujh par mera dil aa gaya hae bahot khoob ladaka hae tu tujhe masalne me maja aayega. Agar tu chahti hae ke mae ise chhod du to apni sari shaktiya tyag kar aaja mere pas mae tujhe jaan se nahi maruga balki tujhe apni rani banauga. Aur tere is badan ki khoob seva karuga apni mardangi se. hum dono ke beech ek naya mukabla hoga wo bhi nange ho kar mere shandar bistar par bol karegi bistar pe mera mukabla ?
Poonam - sale namard tu mujhe mardangi dikhayega? Mere mard ka samna agar ho gaya na tujhse to tu yahi moot dega.
Pipasu – fir bhi tujhe chakhne ka vichar nahi chhod sakta mae. Jaldi aa varna mae ja raha hu ise lekar aaj iska hi bhog lagauga.
Udhar ye sari bate gurum, nagarjun, channo aur rajni bhi sun rahe the lekin poonam ne unhe beech me aane se mana kar diya unhe ishara kar ke isiliye wo in se door rah kar apni taraf ke sainiko se hi bhide hue the lekin sabki najar barabar un par thi. gurum bar bar lachari se poonam ko dekh raha tha aur ankho hi ankho me aage jane ki ijajat bhi mang raha tha lekin poonam ne use rok rakha tha. Wo janti thi ke ek ishare ki der hae ye sab pipasu pe toot padege lekin isme nilam ki jan bhi ja sakti hae. isiliye wo inhe aage nahi aane de rahi thi. bas wo ek mouka chahti thi jisse wo pipasu ke kareeb ja sake.
Poonam - thik hae mae aati hu tere pas itna kah kar poonam bhi upar aa jati hae thik pipasu ke samne aakar ……… ab chhod ise aur chal mujhe le chal jaha le jana ho mae taiyar hu.
Pipasu - mae tere jism ka deewaa jaroor hu lekin murkh nahi mae janta hu tu tilismi shaktiyo ki malik hae wo sari shaktiya is bottle me daal aur chal mere saath tab chhoduga ise. Itna kha kar pipasu ne hath aage badaya to uske hath me ek kaanch ki bottle aa gayi
Poonam janti thi ye ek mayavi bottle hae jisme uski shaktiya nasht ho jayegi.
Aghori - bakwas na kar aur ja apne room me………….. kanika ise iska kamra dikha ke mere pas aao kuchh kam hae.Kanika - thik hae aghori mae abhi aayi.
Fir kanika aage aage chalne lagti ahe aur uski nangi gand ko apni aankho se choidte hue pipasu bhi uske peeche jane lagta hae.
UPDATE 261
Thodi der ke baad kanika wapas aa jati hae lekin uski chuchiya poori lal padi hui thi aur uske baal bhi bikhre hue the.
Aghori - us janwar ne tera bhog to nahi laga diya?
Kanika - itna bhi asan nahi hae mera bhog lagana aghori. Aur jitna usne kiya wo to ye samajhta hae usne apne bahubal se kiya mujhe majbur kar ke lekin use ye pata nahi ke agar mae khud use itna karne ki chhut na deti to wo mujhe chhu bhi na pata . par wo tumhara mehman hae aur uski ahmiyat mae samajhti hu isliye use itna bardasht kar liya maene.
Aghori - chutiya hae sala, murkh kahi ka , gadha. pata nahi aaj rat kya hoga. Ye gurudev bhi aaj kal mere pas nahi aa rahe hae pata nahi kaha vyast hae. tum mere liye jam banao aur manika kaha hae?
Kanika – wo andar hi hae apni sadhna me bulau kya use bhi?
Aghori - nahi rahne do abhi uski jarurat nahi hae bas aaj ki rat jaesa maene socha hae agar waesa ho jaye to tum dono ko kai dino tak ek sath choduga aur tum dono ko khush kar duga ye thodi pareshani khatam ho jaye bas.
Kanika muskrate hue - Sachme? hame bhi us pal ka intjar rahega aghori .
Isi tarah rat ho jati hae aur pipasu bahar aata hae us kamre se us kamre me jagah jagah khoon bikhra hua tha jo pipasu ne piya tha ek taaraf sharab ke gilas pade the aur bistar pe ek ladki ki nangi lash padi thi jise pipasu ne aage peeche se chod chod ke udhed diya tha aur akhir me usi ka khon poora chus ke kamre se bahar nikla tha.
Pipasu - aghori mere hisab se ab sahi waqt aa gaya hae un par hamla karne ka. Isiliye mae jata hu.
Aghori - ja lekin mujhse kisi tarah ki koi ummid mat rakhna kyu ki ye ladayi mae pishachraj ke sath ladne wala tha par wo nahi aaya to ab tu khud hi sambhal.
Pipasu – mujhe teri koi jarurat bhi nahi padne wali tu waha ja kar bhi kuchh nahi kar pata waese bhi mae hi sab nipta deta. To mae hi jauga tu yahi rah aur apni dasi ki baja mae aata hu.
Pipasu bahar nikalta hae aur apni sena ko dekhta hae jo ke koi 1000 ke aaspas sainiko ki thi sabhi is waqt taiyar khade the.
Pipasu - to sathiyo ab wo waqt aa gaya hae jiske liye hum log yaha aaye hae hum log jis gaanv me ja rahe hae waha pahle hame apne dushmano ko marna hae unhe bina koi mouka diye aur jab wo sab khatam ho jaye to un dushmano ke alava jise jo aurat ya ladki pasand ho wo use bhog sakta hae aur kisi ka bhi lahoo pee kar apni pyas bujha sakta hae agar koi bahot pasand aa jaye to use apni biradri me shamil kar ke hamesha ke liye use apni dasi bhi bana sakta hae aur jindagi bhar use bhog sakta hae bachhe bhi paeda kar sakta hae. waese suna hae ke yaha ki aurate bahot hi sundar aur kamuk hae. to lag jao apne kam par lekin pahle dushmano ka nash fir apna kam samajh gaye na tum log
Sabhi sainik - haaa…………….
Pipasu - chalo fir chalte hae apne nishane ki taraf
Pipasu aage aage badh raha tha sab ke hatho me khatarnak kintu ajeeb hi tarah ke hathiyar the. Wo log aage badhe chale ja rahe the. Pipasu apne poore sainiko ke saath jungle se bahar aa jata hae aur aage badne lagta hae use ye nahi pata chalta ke jaese hi wo log sab ke sab jungle se bahar aaye nagarjun ki adrashya deewar ne jungle ke bahar bhi apna jal bicha diya ab jungle ke andar baethe aghori ko bahar sab shant hi najar aane wala hae waha hone wale ghamasan ki use koi khabar nahi milne wali. Ek tarah se pipasu apne poore sainiko ke saath nagarjun ke chakrvyuh me kaid ho chukka tha aur aghori se uske sare connection cut chuke the lekin wo is bat se anjan apni hi masti me aage badha chala ja raha tha.
Tabhi use ghoda aage badte badte ek dam se ruk gaya. Pipasu ne use aage badane ki bahot koshish ki lekin ghoda ek kadam bhi aage nahi badh raha tha. Pipasu ghode se neeche utar ke aage kadam badata hae to wo khud bhi aage nahi ja pa raha tha.
Pipasu ki ankhe gusse me jalne lagti hae - dhokhaaaa..
Lekin tab tak bahot der ho chuki thi. Gurum ki shaktiyo se waha charo taraf dhamake shuru ho chuke the jisme kai pishach to bina baat ko samjhe hi ud gaye un me afra tafri mach gayi ek taraf se un par nilam ne apne vaar karne chalu kar diye to dusri taraf se channo ne . sabse aage gurum tha aur sabse peeche yani jungle ki taraf ka morcha nagarjun ne sambhal liya ek tarah se wo pishach charo taraf se ghire hue the aur un par charo taraf se hi hamle ho rahe the aur unke shareer toofan me tinke ki tarah ud rahe the unke ang hawa me ud rahe the. Koi apni jagah pe khade khade hi rakh ke dher me badal raha tha. Aur ye sab pipasu boukhlaya hua beecho bich khada dekh raha tha. Tabhi use apni peeth par bahot tej dhar se war mahsus hua aur uski peeth pe ek aag ki lakeer ban gayi ye koi aur nahi balki poonam thi jo akeli pipasu ke samne kadhi thi. uski mout ban kar.
Pipasu - tum logo ne dhokhe se waar kiya hum par……….
Poonam - ha tu to hame nyota dene aa raha tha na yudh ka . sale neech tu khud hame dhokhe se marne ki niyat se hi aa raha tha na? hamne koi dhokha nahi diya ise sirf apni sawdhani kahte hae apni seemao ki raksha karna kahte hae tune hamare ilake me aakar ham par ghat lagane ki koshish ki. Khud ko taqatwar , hoshiyar aur hame bewakoof samajha to ye bewkoofi teri thi isme hamari taraf se koi dhokha nahi tha hamne nahi kaha tha ki tu hame yani apne dushmano ko kamjor samajh. Tune khud hi hame kamjor samjha aur Ab ro raha hae?
………….. aur kya kah kar apne sainiko ka manobal badha raha tha hamare sathiyo ko maar ke hame aur yaha ki aurto ko le jane wale the na tum log. To ab aurto ke hatho se hi mar tu.
Itna kah kar poonam ne apna hath aage kiya aur us par apni shakti ka vaar kiya jise pipasu ne apni mayavi talwar pe kaat diya aur ulta waar poonam pe kar diya to poonam ne bhi uski shakti ko sirf jhukai dekar vifal kar diya. lekin tabhi pipasu ne lagatar poonam pe waar shuru kar diye. To poonam ne bhi apne hath me ek chamakti hui talwar prakat ki aur bijli ki teji se apni jagah pe ghumne lagi poonam ki teji itni jyada thi ke pipasu ki ankho kea age sirf dhool ka bawandar hi najar aa raha tha wo chah kar bhi poonam ki speed ka na to mukabla kar pa raha tha na hi use rok pa raha tha, aur na hi use dekh pa raha tha.
Udhar gurum , nilam, channo, rajni, aur nagarjun bhi sare sainiko pe mout ban kar baras rahe the.
Tabhi nagarjun ko ek sainik ki talwar paero me lagi aur wo jameen pe gira to ek sath kai sainiko ne use gher liya aur apni talwaro se hi use marne ko lapke nagarjun is waqt buri tarah se ghira hua tha. Un ke beech aur kisi ka bhi waar us par chal sakta tha. Lekin un sainiko ne nagarjun pe ek saath hamla kiya aur kai talware nagarjun ki taraf badh rahi thi lekin tabhi teji se do talware lapki jisse un sainiko ki gardane alag hoti chali gai aur ek bahot bad dhal aakar giri nagarjun par jisse us tak pahuch chuki kuchh talware us dhal se takra kar bekar ho gayi ye the nilam, channo aur gurm jinhone akhri samay pe nagarjun ko ghire dekha to teji se ghumte hue sainiko ki garden kaatte chale gaye aur channo ne apni peeth se dhal utar kar nagarjun ke upar fenk di thi. bas itna waqt kafi tha nagarjun ke liye wo furti se utha aur use ghere khade sainiko ke pet katta chala gaya. Charo taraf kohram macha hua tha. Sare sainiko ki cheekhe hi cheekhe gunj rahi thi .
Is yudh me bhi mayavi shaktiyo ke alava sharirik bal ka istemal ho raha tha.
Tabhi kuchh sainiko ne channo ko gher liya ek sainik ki talwar channo ki peeth pe chali jisse wo cheekh padi lekin turant hi khud ko sambhal liya wo sainik apni talware aur gandase liye channo ko gherte ja rahe the aur us par hans rahe the tabhi ek sainik ne channo ko peeche ki taraf se pakad liya aur uski garden pe apne dant gadane hi wala tha ki uske peeche gurum pahucha aur aur us sainik ko sir se paer take k hi waar me cheer ke rakh diya. ye dekh baki sainik krodh me un par lapke to gurum ne channo ka hath pakda aur use hawa me utha diya aur khud se door kar diya . fir turant sare sainiko ke beech pahuch kar unhe kaatna chalu kar diya.
Udhar pipasu poonam ke saath uljha hua tha. Aur poonam ne use jakhmi bhi kar diya tha. Jisse wo samajh gaya ke poonam us par bhari pad rahi hae. to usne yaha waha najar ghumayi aur uski najar padi nilam par jo usse kuchh hi door khadi uske sainiko ko kaat rahi thi aur uske sainik uska mukabla nahi kar pa rahe the. Usne teji se aage badh kar nilam ka haath pakda aur use lekar hawa me upar uthta chala gaya. Ab nilam ki garden pipasu ke hath me thi.
Poonam ne jab ye dekha to – pipasu chhod use varna anjam achha nahi hoga .
Pipasu - hum yaha kisi ache anjam ke liye aaye bhi nahi hae janeman. ya marege ya tum logo ko maar dege. Aur ab to ye mere kabze me hae agar tumme se koi bhi aage badha to iski garden mae tod duga. Itna kah kar usne nilam ki garden pe apni pakad sakht kar di.
Poonam - kayar hae tu kyu ki agar tujhme ek yodhaa hota to tu mukabla karta is tarah dhamkiya dekar darane ki koshish na karta agar tu sach me ek yodha ahe to mukabla kar mera. Chhod use aur mere samne aa.
Pipasu - ab tu mujhe apni bato me nahi fasa sakti par ha tujh par mera dil aa gaya hae bahot khoob ladaka hae tu tujhe masalne me maja aayega. Agar tu chahti hae ke mae ise chhod du to apni sari shaktiya tyag kar aaja mere pas mae tujhe jaan se nahi maruga balki tujhe apni rani banauga. Aur tere is badan ki khoob seva karuga apni mardangi se. hum dono ke beech ek naya mukabla hoga wo bhi nange ho kar mere shandar bistar par bol karegi bistar pe mera mukabla ?
Poonam - sale namard tu mujhe mardangi dikhayega? Mere mard ka samna agar ho gaya na tujhse to tu yahi moot dega.
Pipasu – fir bhi tujhe chakhne ka vichar nahi chhod sakta mae. Jaldi aa varna mae ja raha hu ise lekar aaj iska hi bhog lagauga.
Udhar ye sari bate gurum, nagarjun, channo aur rajni bhi sun rahe the lekin poonam ne unhe beech me aane se mana kar diya unhe ishara kar ke isiliye wo in se door rah kar apni taraf ke sainiko se hi bhide hue the lekin sabki najar barabar un par thi. gurum bar bar lachari se poonam ko dekh raha tha aur ankho hi ankho me aage jane ki ijajat bhi mang raha tha lekin poonam ne use rok rakha tha. Wo janti thi ke ek ishare ki der hae ye sab pipasu pe toot padege lekin isme nilam ki jan bhi ja sakti hae. isiliye wo inhe aage nahi aane de rahi thi. bas wo ek mouka chahti thi jisse wo pipasu ke kareeb ja sake.
Poonam - thik hae mae aati hu tere pas itna kah kar poonam bhi upar aa jati hae thik pipasu ke samne aakar ……… ab chhod ise aur chal mujhe le chal jaha le jana ho mae taiyar hu.
Pipasu - mae tere jism ka deewaa jaroor hu lekin murkh nahi mae janta hu tu tilismi shaktiyo ki malik hae wo sari shaktiya is bottle me daal aur chal mere saath tab chhoduga ise. Itna kha kar pipasu ne hath aage badaya to uske hath me ek kaanch ki bottle aa gayi
Poonam janti thi ye ek mayavi bottle hae jisme uski shaktiya nasht ho jayegi.
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