thank u dostAb toh 9 baje sheetal intejar mein hai.shuvam ke shath paheli chudai ka maza kese na ayega.bahut badhia update bhai
thankss dostKisi villain ki entry krao bhai jo nirmala ko fansa kr chode aur apna hero apni maa ko bachaye....
Love ur writing skill bro...
Bhai bht Maja ara hai ap bht behatrin story likh rahe ho seduction vala part best haiDosto sahi sahi bataana kya meri likhi kahani me majaa nahi as raha he.. agar ye sach he ki majaa nahi aa raha he sirf seduction hi he to.. fir me kahani chod dunga.. sach ka hu to me suspense kahani nahi likh Sakta.. agar majaa Lena he to hi kahani a age badhaunga
You are writing wonderful in a unique style... please continue the story... let all ladies bear one child from ShubhamDosto sahi sahi bataana kya meri likhi kahani me majaa nahi as raha he.. agar ye sach he ki majaa nahi aa raha he sirf seduction hi he to.. fir me kahani chod dunga.. sach ka hu to me suspense kahani nahi likh Sakta.. agar majaa Lena he to hi kahani a age badhaunga