Bahut maja araha hai.keep goingDosto sahi sahi bataana kya meri likhi kahani me majaa nahi as raha he.. agar ye sach he ki majaa nahi aa raha he sirf seduction hi he to.. fir me kahani chod dunga.. sach ka hu to me suspense kahani nahi likh Sakta.. agar majaa Lena he to hi kahani a age badhaunga
Don't even think about it. You are awesome.I come to this forum just for your story. Keep it up dude.Dosto sahi sahi bataana kya meri likhi kahani me majaa nahi as raha he.. agar ye sach he ki majaa nahi aa raha he sirf seduction hi he to.. fir me kahani chod dunga.. sach ka hu to me suspense kahani nahi likh Sakta.. agar majaa Lena he to hi kahani a age badhaunga
Lajwab ho aap humesha hum pathkon ka yun hi kamuk manoranjan karte rahainBahut maja araha hai.keep going