Naik
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Bahot shaandaar lajawab update manu bhai
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amazing update hai maanu bhai,
Behad hi shandaar aur lajawab update hai bhai,
Aaj ka poora update jaypur trip par nikal gaya,
Karuna ke liye aapke dil mein feelings aa sakti thi, lekin uski buri aadaton ki vajah se aisa nahin hua,
aur iss dosti ke liye aapko baar baar maa pitaji se bhi jhooth bolna para hai,
khair kuchh chhoti moti galtiyon ke baad bhi jaypur trip successful raha hai,
Ab dekhte hain ki aage kya hota hai,
Waiting for next update
अगर आप अंत में धन्यवाद दोस्तों लिख देते तो १०००० शब्द पुरे हो जाते।
बहुत बढ़िया कहानी चल रही है. आप शब्दों को अच्छे से पिरोते हो अपनी कहानी में.
Bahot shaandaar lajawab update manu bhai
Very Nice update bro
In today's time, it is not easy to get a job but with ability and effort, everything is achieved. I am very upset with the decision to marry, I want to go to the village one last time, maybe you do. Old wounds are not healing and life is giving new wounds. Friendship with karuna is neither good nor bad. Almost everything is going well. I also like to spend the night waking up on the journey, I have said this to you earlier.
As always the update was great, You are writing very well, Now let's see what happens next, Till then waiting for the next part of the story.
Thank You...
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Shandar update Maanu Bhai, mujhe is Karuna ka character kuch samajh nahi aa raha ek bepravah apne aap me hi uljhi hui aur kuch kuch matlabi si ladki lag rahi hai, ho skata hain aage ke updates me iska dusra rup ssamne aa jaye, lekin filhal mera nazariya karuna ke baare me yahi hai..
Waiting for next mega update