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Adultery कामुक काजल -जासूसी और मजा

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Chutiyadr

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लेखक को कामुक काजल ही दिखाना था तो उसको माणिक, शरद, कबीर, क्लब के सभी से चुदवाते रहते पर यहाँ तो काजल को दूध की धुली बना दिये की अपने पति की खुशी के लिए दूसरे से चुदने को तैयार हुई।
randi ke chudane se maja nahi aata, sharif ladki ke chudane se maja aata hai , aur jab wo aapki biwi ho to gand bhi jalti hai , jaise aapki jal rahi hai :lol1:
 

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मै तो अब इस चूतिये की कहानी पढ़ना बंद ही कर रहा हूँ,

इस फोरम मे बहुत से बेहतर लेखक है जो ढंग की लॉजिक की कहानी लिखते है, उनकी ही कहानी पढ़ूँगा।

कोई लेखक फिजूल के फालतू तर्क देकर सिर्फ चुदाई लिख दे, :fuck1:
वैसी घटिया कहानी के लिए अपना समय क्यों लगाए,

उससे बेहतर तो यही होगा कि दूसरे अच्छे लेखक की कहानी पढ़े।
sahi hai koi logic wali story mile to mujhe bhi bata dena main bhi padhunga, kyoki is forum me to log maa bahno ko hi chudwa rahe hai , isse inlogical kya hoga ...:lol1:
ya to hero ko super power wala bata dete hai jisse ko ibhi pat jaati hai , yaa to ladki ko aisi randi bata dete hai jo kisi se bhi chud jaati hai , mujhe to yanha kisi story me koi dhang ka logic dikha hi nahi , aapko mile to batana :lol1:
aise aapko faniswar prashad renu aur premchand jaise logo ko padhhna chahiye , wahi logical likhte hai , warna fantecy likhne walo ko logic se thoda dur to jana hi padta hai , aur jasusi novels me to gahnta koi logic hota hi nahi ,,,
good luck for your search .. mile to link dena story ka :approve:
 

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हम्म कहानी पूरी पलट गयी है काजल के साथ साथ हीरो भी विल्लिअन बन गया है इसी वजह से कहानी का फ्लो टूट गया है और ये अपडेट तो अधूरा सा ही रहा
aa jayega flow me kaha jayega
 

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Haan to dev sahi to soch raha hai....Aaj randi Kajal purn roop mein randipane pe utar aayegi us dalal chunnilal ke randikhane mein...
Toh ye kapde kyun pehni hai kajal ne... Nangi kyun nahi chali gayi bahar :lol:
waise Kajal jaisi BITCH ki jameer aur aatma chad chuki hai toh us whore ko koi haq nahi kapde pehne ki :D
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Point to be noted :D
haramzadi Kajal ko pehle se sab pata hai yahan tak ki us bitch ko ye bhi pata hai ki dev ke private part ke sath kya kiya dalla chunnilal urf rocky ne...
Yaani ki iska matlab saaf hai ki haramzadi Kajal koi farak na pare uska pati jiye ya mare..
to ye haramkhor bitch whore Kajal ye pyar ka dhong kyun rach rahi hai ki dev ke pyar aur maje ke khatir ye sab kar rahi hai wo..
Sidhe sidhe bol nahi sakti Kajal ki Kajal pehle jo apne hi baap aur bhai ke sath sex karti thi, phir pure maholle ke sath sex karti thi to ushe aadat si lag gayi sex karne ki.... isliye apni hawas ki aag ko bujhane ke liye ye sab kar rahi hai :D
Shayad shaadi se pehle Kajal jab apne ghar ke bahar sex karti thi gair mardo ke sath tab shayad Kajal ke baap aur bhai cuckold bante the :lol:
ab jab wo log nahi hai par aadat se majbur hai kajal isliye dev ko cuckold bana rahi hai us dalle chunnilal ke sath milke :D

Koi kisiko jaal mein nahi fanshaya hai is story pe sab hawas ke pujari-pujaran hai.. jinke liye maa baap, bhai bahan, dost, pati, ristedaar koi mayene nahi rakhte, bas hawas ki aag bujhni chahiye.. chahe samne wala koi bhi ho isse farak nahi padta nahi in kirdaaro ko bas sex chahiye in haramiyo ko :D
Randi Kajal ne chunnilal ki baat maankar dev se shaadi ki just because dev ek janmjaat cuckold hai.. aur yahin akhiri sachhai bhi hai :D

Jab sex hi karni hai cuckold hi banne hsi in haramkhor kirdaaro ko toh itni taam jham kyun... ye sajna sawana kyun aur ye kya chutiya khel, khel raha hai kirdaar, sex karo aur niklo udhar se :D
. ye sab chutiyapa kis liye akhir wo club hai to ek randikhana hi... to ye sabhi haramzade kirdaar randi gigolo jaise behave kyun nahi kar rahe.. :D
ek aur important baat ye dalla chunnilal urf rocky apni maa aur behan ko nahi laya kya us club mein.. after all uski maa aur behan bhi maje kar leti udhar aur un dono ko wahan ke mardo ke sath sex karte dekh, dekh ke dalla chunnilal ur rocky Masturbation kar leta :roflol: :roflol:

Biwi karname se hi yeh sab karti aa rahi chinnar Kajal... isme naya kya hai :yawn:
Haan agar Kajal apni maa ko bhi le aati us club Numa randikhane mein to dev shayad aur bhi khush ho jata :lol1:

ye jo kar raha wo gatar ki paidayas chunnilal... sach mein lage ki wo sirf dalla hi nahi balki mansik roop se vikriti bhi hai... :D
ek mansik vikriti khayalato wala gandi nali kida kirdaar hai chunnilal urf rocky.. :sigh:

Khair... shayad aaj ke liye itna revo kaafi hai :D
Let's see ab aage us randikhane mein aur kya kya hota hai :mahboi:
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills Dr sahab :yourock: :yourock: :yourock: :yourock:
Edited :D ~ dev ki khushi ke liye Kajal ki baap bhai bahan aur maa ko le aaya jaye us club mein :protest::lol:
bahut achcha rebu tha :good;
aapke sare sawalo ka jawab
dhanywad naina ji for beautifu comments :D
 

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Unjhelable update tha ye,,,,,:dazed:
Dr sahab is update me ye kaisa raayata failaya hai aapne. Dev ke character ko nakli dev bana diya jo ki kisi kobra sangathan ka sadasya tha aur usne dev naam ke aadmi ko maar kar uski jagah dev ban gaya. Ye sab kya chakkar hai. Sab kuch sir ke upar se nikal gaya hai. Khair aage dekhte hain shayad kuch palle pade,,,,,:confuse:
dhanwyad subham bhai :)
 
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