Adultery कामुक काजल -जासूसी और मजा

[Shikari_golu]

Kyun na garam ho dimag...
dekha nahi aapne us bichari juhi sath kya hua... ye sab us kajal ki wajah se ho raha hai...
aur ab to kajal ko masoom banane ke chakkar mein dev aur juhi ko hi abbal darje ke paapi bana denge...
Kajal kya karti phir rahi hai usse mujhe kya hi fark pare, lekin usko innocent dikhane ke chakkar mein story ke real innocent story characters ko negative characters ke roop mein dikhana, is baat par mujhe aitraaz hai

Hahaha.....Are yaar...aap itni purani reader hai...aur dr ko acchi tarah se janti hai ki uski story ka maqsad kya hota hai....to fir apna keemti gussa kyo waste kar rahi hai.....

Wo pyaar ho ya gussa....wahi dikhao jaha uski kadr ho....but hum dono jante hai ki yaha gussa dikhane ka koi fark nhi padega....kyoki dr to kajal ko hi accha sabit karega aur baki characters ki band bajayga....

Ye sab naye readers ko karne do....aap to bas ye dekho...ki is baar dr koun sa flashback lata hai aur fir kajal ko bechari, dukhyari dikha kar uske karmo ko sahi thahrata hai....samjh rahi hai na....haha...

 

[kingkhankar]

Phir to Shayad kajal ki jagah Madhuri ko hi as a lead character le lenge story pe Dr sahab

Do no hi ek se badh kar ek hey. Dono hi King Khan ke saath hit movies diye hein......

 

[Tiger 786]

Finaly kajal is back

 

[Naina]

Hahaha.....Are yaar...aap itni purani reader hai...aur dr ko acchi tarah se janti hai ki uski story ka maqsad kya hota hai....to fir apna keemti gussa kyo waste kar rahi hai.....

Wo pyaar ho ya gussa....wahi dikhao jaha uski kadr ho....but hum dono jante hai ki yaha gussa dikhane ka koi fark nhi padega....kyoki dr to kajal ko hi accha sabit karega aur baki characters ki band bajayga....

Ye sab naye readers ko karne do....aap to bas ye dekho...ki is baar dr koun sa flashback lata hai aur fir kajal ko bechari, dukhyari dikha kar uske karmo ko sahi thahrata hai....samjh rahi hai na....haha...

Pata nahi Dr sahab ko kya maja aata hai dev juhi jaise kirdaaro ki aisi ki taisi karke... shayad apni chaheti kirdaar kajal ke aage baaki kuch dikhta hi nahi...

 

[Shikari_golu]

Pata nahi Dr sahab ko kya maja aata hai dev juhi jaise kirdaaro ki aisi ki taisi karke... shayad apni chaheti kirdaar kajal ke aage baaki kuch dikhta hi nahi...

Iske jawaab me dr ke liye ek purana muhabra hi boluga......""DIL AAYA GADHI PAR TO PARI KI KYA FIKR""....samjh gai na.....

 

[Chutiyadr]

romanchak update ..ye kya ho gaya ,kahani kis mod pe aa gayi ..
kajal koi purani baate yaad kar rahi hai aisa lagta hai ..
kajal ka rape hua hai aur usko jyada matra me drugs bhi diya gaya hai jisse usko kuch yaad na rahe ..
dev se shadi honewali hai aur dev usko dhanda karnewali ladki keh raha hai to lagta aisa hi hai ki kajal apne beete huye waqt ko yaad kar rahi hai .

ya phir usko behkaya jaa raha hai ..
kajal ke maa baap bhi hai ,aur pehle unka kahi bhi jikr nahi hua tha ..
dekhte hai kya hai ye maamla jisme kajal ko kuch bhi yaad nahi .

धन्यवाद leon mask bhai
kahani hai idhar udhar to ghumte hi rahegi dont be counfuse ye kajal ka flashback chal rha hai

 

[Chutiyadr]

wtf Damn..... fuse hi uda diya uska
urri baba.... to finally Chutiyadr sahab ne chaal chal hi di....ki ab kaise readers ke saamne kajal ko masoom banayi jaaye... good work Dr sahab

flashback mein le jaake pehle kajal ko Sidhi sadhi dikhane ki koshish, phir uske sath ye hua, wo hua.. phir kajal ye ban gayi, wo ban gayi... jo ki har story pe yahi sab hota hai...isbaar dimag ki batti hi bujha di...Matlab totally short circuit Waise style naya hai par formula wahi xp wala...

ye style bhi naya hai aur formula bhi naya hi hai , aage dekhte jaao aur bhi battiya udengi
maja aayega padhne me , bas mujhe likhne ka time milta rhe

Btw Main to big bang ke jamane se hi kehti aa rahi hun.. ab dekh lena kahani ke antim bhaago mein dev urf akrit aur juhi ulta kajal se hi maafi maangte huye nazar aayenge

Khair.. mujhe kya bhaad mein gayi kajal
Waise ye Dr chutiya urf rocky bahot purana aashiq hai... dekho kaise chori chupke sahi milne aa hi gaya ushe

Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills

dhanywad naina ji

 

[Chutiyadr]

Writer saab yeh proof karna chahte hein ki clarity and confusion ek coin ka do sides hey. Ek ke bina dusre ka koi wazood hi nehi hey.

sahi pakde hai

 

[Chutiyadr]

Nice update

To de shahab kajal ne is liye dev ko dhoka di hai kajal ke sath kuch bura kiya hai dev ne

magar kajal ne dev samaj kar ankurit ko dhoka de diya kya kajal pahle se janti thi ki ye dev nahi ankurit hai mujhe lagata hai kajal janti hai ki dev nahi ankurit hai to phir dhokka q diya

Next update sir jee

dhanywad bhai ....
dont be counfuse ye kajal ka flashback chal rha hai
abhi dev aur uski shadi nahi hui hai , dheere dheere samjh aayegi puri kahani

 

[Chutiyadr]

bhai dactar sahib flashback story start kahan se ki hai ? kajal ki shaadi nahi hui means story shaadi se pehle hi start hi hogi ?

yaar ye har story mein kajal ka past bahut hi emotional kyon hota hai ? kyon wo super heroine hai

dhnaywad sir ji
yup story wanha se start hai jab dev aur kaajl ki shadi nahi hui thi aur dev dev hi tha , akrit dev nahi bana tha , abhi iske ander bhi kuchh flashback chalenge , story thodi complicated ho sakti hai but dheere dheere sab kuchh samjh aane lagega
thoda emotioal past rhe tabhi to maja aata hai aise isme aisa kuchh dekhne nahi milega , isme bakiyo ka past thoda emotional ho sakta hai ... i think aage dekhte hai