Naina
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Readers ko Dara rahen ho ju..Kaal sarp apne aap mai khud hi chamtkaari hai baba......ya kabhi Aamna Saamna nahi hua is se
Readers ko Dara rahen ho ju..Kaal sarp apne aap mai khud hi chamtkaari hai baba......ya kabhi Aamna Saamna nahi hua is se
Death islandWaise aapki ek kahani zombies ke upor bhi thi naa.....
Wo to maine shuru main hi kah diya tha.....jhelo ab apun ka kaharReaders ko Dara rahen ho ju..
Ab pachhtava ho raha kyaKaal aur sarp dono me se kuchh bhi chamatkari nahi.... Natural hain
Kahani aur writer dono ka nam dekhkar hi padhna shuru kiya tha....
Wo to maine shuru main hi kah diya tha.....jhelo ab apun ka kahar
Mai kabhi koi kahani tabhi adhuri chhodta hu jab usko ya to reader na mile ya phir reader bhi mile to silent wale.....is kahani par kaafi reader h ...ye to jarur puri hogiBhai ek request hai
Ye kahini adhuri mat chhodana
Aur
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ye dono hi mujhse bachke rahte hain....... amna samna bahut bar hua lekin ye bachke nikal jate hain...mujhseKaal sarp apne aap mai khud hi chamtkaari hai baba......ya kabhi Aamna Saamna nahi hua is se
ye dono hi mujhse bachke rahte hain....... amna samna bahut bar hua lekin ye bachke nikal jate hain...mujhse
MAHAKAAL ke bhakt ko kaal, sarp aur kaal-sarp koi bhi asar nahi karta...... AGHORI sab ko ghor (ghol/dilute) ke pee jata hai