Adultery खूबसूरत डकैत (Completed)

[MS DHONI]

Dr sahab agar fursat mile to BHABHI MAA ki kuch updates dijiye...Aur intezaar nahin ho raha hai....plzzzz

 

[Rockstar_Rocky]

Kya rocky bhai wo to understanding wali bat hai,ki wo chot pyar ke khel ka tha jo ,mongra ne champa bankar ajay ke sath khela tha, update 12 me aur pahle ... Isliye to balvir jism ki chot ko dekhkar gussa ho gaya

सर जी मुझे लग रहा था की आप प्रॉपर सेक्स सीन लिखोगे....पर आपने तो बस ऊपर-ऊपर से लिख दिया! अब इसमें समझने के लिए ज्यादा दिमाग लगाना पड़ेगा!

 

[Chutiyadr]

Dr sahab agar fursat mile to BHABHI MAA ki kuch updates dijiye...Aur intezaar nahin ho raha hai....plzzzz

Bas dhoni bhai safer me nikla hu abhi ghar pahuch jau fir dalunga...1-2 din ki aur bat hai,bas itna intjar kar lijiye...

 

[Chutiyadr]

सर जी मुझे लग रहा था की आप प्रॉपर सेक्स सीन लिखोगे....पर आपने तो बस ऊपर-ऊपर से लिख दिया! अब इसमें समझने के लिए ज्यादा दिमाग लगाना पड़ेगा!

 

[TheBlackBlood]

दोस्तों ये स्टोरी मैंने xossip में लिखी थी जो कि पूरी नही हो पाई थी,मै इसे यंहा पूरा कर रहा हु

Dr sahab, mujhe lagta hai ki main ye story padh chuka hu. Ye alag baat hai ki puri nahi padh paya tha. Mere khayaal se ye wahi story hai jisme do judwa bahne hoti hain. Ek daaku ban jati hai aur kisi thakur se badla leti hai. Ek police wala hota hai jo daaku ko pakadne aata hai aur wo ek se pyaar kar baithta hai. Magar use baad me pata chalta hai wo jisse pyaar kar baitha hai ya usse jo ladki pyaar karti hai wo asal me daaku hi hai.

Aisi hi kuch story thi iski shayad.

 

[Ben Tennyson]

क्या मस्त स्टोरी थी भाई !!

 

[Ben Tennyson]

पिछले ६-७ दिन से पढ रहा था अद्भुत

 

[Vikram singh rana]

Hello bro....

So finally I'm here for the reviews....
First of all thank you....to gave us a very beautiful and brilliant story to read...

Ab baat karte hai story ki to....
Sach kahu to mujhe jyada thrilling nahi lagi story....lekin lekin...
Jo suspence or uske saath confusion ka combo aapne rakha hai....that was really awesome....and I like it.....
OR upar se har ak scene ko aapne kaafi achche se describe kiya hai....kai kai jagah mai scene itni achchi tarah defined the ki mujhe laga ki ye sab mere saamne hee ghatit ho raha ho....very good...

Ab baat kare characters ki to .....
Aapne shuruwaat se hee champa or mogra ke bich kaafi confusion rakhi hai....
Jo ki story ki main usp thi.....

Mogra main character hai... lekin uske alawa bhi aapne kai saare characters ko kaafi achchi tarah dikhaya....

Jaise thakur ki wife.....mogra ke father....OR saath mai apna naam bhi....

Waise kuch loop holes bhi the liye kind koi na.....

A very good story....with good writing.....
So keep writing
Entertain us..
Thanks....

OR gayi.....apki koi running story ho to mujhe bataaye... kyoki
Running story par review dene ki baat hee alag hoti hai.....
Thanks again.. .

 

[Chutiyadr]

Dr sahab, mujhe lagta hai ki main ye story padh chuka hu. Ye alag baat hai ki puri nahi padh paya tha. Mere khayaal se ye wahi story hai jisme do judwa bahne hoti hain. Ek daaku ban jati hai aur kisi thakur se badla leti hai. Ek police wala hota hai jo daaku ko pakadne aata hai aur wo ek se pyaar kar baithta hai. Magar use baad me pata chalta hai wo jisse pyaar kar baitha hai ya usse jo ladki pyaar karti hai wo asal me daaku hi hai.

Aisi hi kuch story thi iski shayad.

yahi story hai bro

 

[Chutiyadr]

क्या मस्त स्टोरी थी भाई !!

dhanywad ben bhai