Adultery गुजारिश

[HalfbludPrince]

Super update
Baad main Kyu nahi btaya wo rupa ke sath tha
Keep you

Koi reason raha hoga

 

[HalfbludPrince]

Awesome update bro

Thanks

 

[HalfbludPrince]

Nice update

Thanks

 

[HalfbludPrince]

yes boss.......sab khud ki feelings dekhte hai........samne wale ki nahi....

Jamana hi aisa hai

 

[HalfbludPrince]

both update .....................lajawb ....................

waiting for more.....................

Thanks

 

[HalfbludPrince]

वो तो आपकी लेखनी पर निर्भर करता है ना बन्धु...

Kosish karunga sab sahi karne ki

 

[HalfbludPrince]

Both updates are Amazing Fauji Bhai, suspense to badhta hi jaa raha hain, pehle Rupa gayab ho gayi, fir Nagesh ki entry, aur fir pata chalta hai ki Nagesh to apni talwar Dev ki maa Suahsini se pehle hi haar chuka hain, ab Dev apne pitaji ka kamra bhi khol raha hain.... Too much of suspense

Waiting for next update...

Suspense ka hi maja है bhai

 

[HalfbludPrince]

Superb update

Thanks

 

[HalfbludPrince]

Pehli baat yeh dev khud ke pero pe kulhadi maar raha hai baatein chupke, jiska khaufnaak anjaam ise bhugatna hi hoga.. aur yahin aakhiri sach bhi hai.... aur kahta hai ki ise sukun ki talash hai... roopa ki baat chupake isne bahot badi galti kar di hai... aur ab wohin iski maut ki kaaran banegi
Ab aur ek naya kirdaar nagesh.... yeh wohi hai na harry potter wala
Khair... let's see dev marega ya jinda bachega...
Brilliant update with awesome writing skill

Aisa kuch nahi hai dear, tum jitna is bare me sochogi, sochti hi rah jaogi

 

[HalfbludPrince]

Oh ho.. bada aaya kuch nahi chahiye kahne wala... agar itni hi taklif ho rahi hai toh baant kyun nahi deta sab kuch garib logo mein... phir rah apni jhopri mein



Yeh kya samjhi... mahlon mein rahne wali soch toh sakti hain par samajh nahi sakti.. badi aayi samajhne wali..
iske liye yahin achha hai ki agar khud ki jaan bachani hai toh is dhokhebaz dev ka sath chhod de abhi ke abhi


nasib ke bharose jine wale log....
kuch ho jaye tab bhi nasib ko hi dosh de aur agar kuch hona hai to tab bhi nasib ke hi bharose chhod deta hai sab kuch...


badi aag lagi hai ise toh...
dono hi chahiye ishe.... roopa bhi aur mona bhi
lekin sahebzade ko baat bhi chupana hai...
do kasti per rakhke chalane wale, dekh tere sath kya hoga aage chalke..





dev apne faide ke baatein chupne mein mahir hai... pehle ektara bajane wale baba se roop ki baat chupaya.. Kayi baar puchne par bhi... phir roopa se mona ki aur mona se roopa ki baat ko bade chalaki se chupaya... ab yeh junagarh jaane wali baat chupana kounsi badi baat hai... Saroj ko yeh samajhni chahiye.. hai na
chalo kuch kaam karega ab jaake apni bahan ki shaadi mein....

Khair let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skill

Ab kya kahun main