Adultery गुजारिश

[Mr.X796]

new story

 

[HalfbludPrince]

new story

थैंक्स

 

[HalfbludPrince]

Congrats for your new story sir

thanks bhai

 

[HalfbludPrince]

for new story yara bas iski ending thoda pyari karna hamesa ki tarah

kosish to puri rahegi bhai

 

[HalfbludPrince]

Congratulations for new thread bhai

thanks

 

[HalfbludPrince]

Jabardast starting...
Prologue is simply superb....
Perm... Jisko sampoorn roop se paribhashit karna asambhav hai... Fir bhi pyar ke kuchh ehsas ko shabdon me sanjone ka anutha prayas....
So kahani ka pehla update ka besabri se intezar rahega....

puri kosish karunga ki ek behtar prem kahani likh saku

 

[HalfbludPrince]

Soon

 

[VIKRANT]

First.... for the new thread...

Prem ki paribhasha sach me koi nahi de sakta...fir bhi aapne bahut sundar baate kahi....

Aapka writing skill bahut achha laga

Aisa lag raha hai jaise aapke dwara ek behtareen love story padhne ko milegi

Keep posting
Keep rocking :biggboss::biggboss:

 

[Loveshuda111]

1st update achha tha abhi story ka plot samajhne me time to lgega
jaise jaise update aate jayenge samajh aate jayega
E ek raja ke vansh ki khani lgti jo kisi karan se ghar se warso dur rha ab louta h

Dekhte h aage kya hota h

 

[VIKRANT]

Waah bro fantastic update....Shuruaat jabardast hai

Story ka first update padhne ke baad ab utsukta badh gayi hai ki kya huwa tha past me????

So waiting for the next