Erotica जोरू का गुलाम उर्फ़ जे के जी

[komaalrani]

Dhamak

Dhamakedar raat ka intejar rhega

Update Post bhi ho gaya hai bas aapke comments ka wait rahata hai

aur Chhutaki par bhi update kab ka aa gaya hai

 

[komaalrani]

Part 230 ko index me add nhi kiya abh kar diya hai

 

[komaalrani]

The "Jugalbandi" of Rinu and Guddi with their bhaiyya/jeeja was awesome..as you rightly described the proceedings with their timing and precision...
Honestly, I thought that I write the sex scenes in my story in a good descriptive way...but the way you write such scenes...well, you take them to the next level and in comparison my scenes description look quite amateurish
Your scenes are really laced with erotic bawdy language which enhances their impact on the scenes.. ex "the description in the part "गुड्डी -गुड्डी के भैया"..
The "sandwich" of Guddi was too sexy and erotic...wonderfully described by you..as well as the dildo/strap-on part...
The Les scene was equally erotic...
and finally the "climax" ....pièce de résistance...the gang-bang of Guddi...wow..that was the high point of this update..

super!!

Overall, wonderful update...clap worthy..

komaalrani

Thanks for your comments, worth the wait.

More scenes of Guddi are going to come soon

Thanks again

 

[komaalrani]

Niche Guddi upar Reenu aur vo in dono ke bich sandbitch. Romantic update

एक ओर बहन हो बचपन का माल, कच्ची अमिया वाली

और दूसरी ओर साली हो, रीनू जैसी, इससे बढ़के कौन सी फैंटेसी हो सकती है और ये पूरी हुयी इस सैंडविच में। मरद तो बहुत बार बनाते हैं आज लड़कियों का मौका था।

 

[komaalrani]

Thanks, friends,

the story has crossed 30 Lakh views thanks to your best wishes

 

[Rajizexy]

Thanks, friends,

the story has crossed 30 Lakh views thanks to your best wishes

Congrats dear lovely Komal didi for getting 3 million views on the story .
Raji is happier than Komal on her well deserved honour.

 

[Mass]

Heartiest Congratulations Madam on your story achieving 3 M/30 Lac views.
Totally awesome!!

@komaalrani

 

[prkin]

30 Lakh Views ki badhai ho!

 

[Mass]

Thanks for your comments, worth the wait.

More scenes of Guddi are going to come soon

Thanks again

Thanks...looking forward to both...( more scenes of ) Guddi..and your visit to my story whenever you find time.
Much Thanks though and Congrats once again!!

komaalrani

 

[Delta101]

छुटकी वाली कहानी आपके कमेंट का इन्तजार कर रही है। इस बार उस का अपडेट थोड़ा अलग सा है इसलिए मुझे आपके कमेंट का विशेष रूप से इन्तजार है

भाग ९१ पृष्ठ ९४३

https://xforum.live/threads/छुटकी-होली-दीदी-की-ससुराल-में.77508/page-943

aap itna pyaar se pukaarengi to humein Modi ki meeting ko bhi chhodkar aapke updates padhne ke liye aana hoga.

just read the given update, sach me bahut alag aur mazedaar hai....bus isi tarah likhte rahiye