Incest तीनो की संमति से .....

[Funlover]

मेरे सभी पाठको को से एक नम्र निवेदन आवेदन अरजी request या फिर जो भी आप समजते है

आप मेरी द्वारा लिखी गई कहानी आप को मनोरंजन देती है मै नहीं

कृपया मुझे अपना मनोरंजन का साधन ना समजे उसी में सब की भलाई है ( मेरी भी और आपकी भी)

अपने आप को कंट्रोल में रखना आप का काम है मेरा नहीं

जैसे आप कहानी पढ़ के मनोरंजित होते है वैसे ही दूसरी महिलाए भी अपने आप को मनोरंजीत करने आती है अपनी नुमाईश या अपने शरीर द्वारा आप का मनोरंजन करने नहीं

महिलाओं को अभी उतना ही हक है जितना आपको है महिला को सन्मान दीजिये

अगर आप ऐसा नहीं कर सकते तो आप को निवेदन है की मेरा ये थ्रेड आपके लिए उचित नहीं है .............................

आप कहानी पे किसी भी पात्र पे कोई भी कोमेंट करे लेकिन लिखनेवाले पे नहीं ..........

आप की हर कोमेंट आवकार्य है बस थोडा सा कंट्रोल के साथ ....


आप सब की आभारी हु ......

 

[Mass]

Btw, on a lighter note...hope Pooja'a husband would be a cockold...enjoying the scenes between Dipu, Manju and Pooja

Funlover

 

[Funlover]

Btw, on a lighter note...hope Pooja'a husband would be a cockold...enjoying the scenes between Dipu, Manju and Pooja

Funlover

.hope Pooja'a husband would be a cockold.

That part you already read ...............

enjoying the scenes between Dipu, Manju and Pooja

Possible yes let us see

 

[Mass]

That part you already read ...............


Possible yes let us see

Thank you. Yes, cuckold part was when DIpu and Pooja were enjoying in his presence...now the twist in the plot is...as you wrote that her husband "also has a crush" on Manju..seeing Dipu and Manju enjoying in front of him would be super sexy and erotic.

I hope you too will agree.... Thanks once again.

Funlover

 

[Mass]

Btw, just curious to know..aap mere story pe kahan tak pahunche ho??
aapka msg padha..will reply soon...will post the next update also soon. Thanks.

Funlover

 

[Funlover]

Thank you. Yes, cuckold part was when DIpu and Pooja were enjoying in his presence...now the twist in the plot is...as you wrote that her husband "also has a crush" on Manju..seeing Dipu and Manju enjoying in front of him would be super sexy and erotic.

I hope you too will agree.... Thanks once again.

Funlover

I think yes i would agree with you in somehow but by doing such things the story will get stretch, you know the original story had just 7K words and having just 4 a4 size papers but the innovating by many writers this got now atleast 27 parts
we are already at i suppose 27 and i had addedin such episodes as well in the same serial........

I took this story transforming in to hindi due to a story which was on keyboard and rolling on so by that time this story may get engage me as well as readers

Now my story as almost on it's cpmplete roll and ready to flash

But I will try to get them as you said to make it attractive

You know I am converting this story in english and gujarati as well and it eating my spare time

 

[Funlover]

Btw, just curious to know..aap mere story pe kahan tak pahunche ho??
aapka msg padha..will reply soon...will post the next update also soon. Thanks.

Funlover

to be frank with you your story is being reading by 2 persons

earlier i was used to put mark page number as comment but now hard for me and now both are commenting on same way
sometimes I do refer the last post and found it been already read

but I am sure i read your post stating marriage ki taiyaari which i suppose exact on 300th page

 

[Funlover]

Thank you. Yes, cuckold part was when DIpu and Pooja were enjoying in his presence...now the twist in the plot is...as you wrote that her husband "also has a crush" on Manju..seeing Dipu and Manju enjoying in front of him would be super sexy and erotic.

I hope you too will agree.... Thanks once again.

Funlover

ek episode aisa bhi likh dungi kya fark padta hai ............. radio me ek prograam aata tha jab ham chhote the vividh bharti par "AAPKI FARMAYISH"

 

[Mass]

ek episode aisa bhi likh dungi kya fark padta hai ............. radio me ek prograam aata tha jab ham chhote the vividh bharti par "AAPKI FARMAYISH"

haha...good one Madam...meri "farmaaish" pe dhyaan dene ke liye

Funlover

 

[Mass]

I think yes i would agree with you in somehow but by doing such things the story will get stretch, you know the original story had just 7K words and having just 4 a4 size papers but the innovating by many writers this got now atleast 27 parts
we are already at i suppose 27 and i had addedin such episodes as well in the same serial........

I took this story transforming in to hindi due to a story which was on keyboard and rolling on so by that time this story may get engage me as well as readers

Now my story as almost on it's cpmplete roll and ready to flash

But I will try to get them as you said to make it attractive

You know I am converting this story in english and gujarati as well and it eating my spare time

I agree...the original story was short and crisp even though it had a lot more potential...you, by adding your own thoughts, are giving more "flesh" to it..
And if you have noticed, in less than a months time...this story of your has 2.7L views which is great..i think one of the fastest story to achieve such large views in a short span of time...

Btw, if I understand correctly, even you have written a story..so, look forward to it as well.

Funlover

 

[Funlover]

I agree...the original story was short and crisp even though it had a lot more potential...you, by adding your own thoughts, are giving more "flesh" to it..
And if you have noticed, in less than a months time...this story of your has 2.7L views which is great..i think one of the fastest story to achieve such large views in a short span of time...

Btw, if I understand correctly, even you have written a story..so, look forward to it as well.

Funlover

Ohh really !!!!!! I never ever checked the viewers

thank you very much for highlighting to me ...............................