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Fantasy दिव्यास्त्र.[The power of five elements](action,advanture,fantasy,magic,thriller) ( Completed )

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UPDATE 29













Main baha pahucha jaha Maine vo kavach banake dekha tha. Baha pahuchne ke baad maine bahi neeche baith gya yog ki mudra me. Or apni aankho ko band karke Maine apni thirdeye kholi or fir se us kavach ko banane laga. Lekin alag aakaar me. Like jaise ek bahut badi or bahut unchi tanki ke aakaar me. Jisme me ab sabhi pisacho ko bharne wala tha. Jaise hi ye bankar ready hua me khada hua. Or apne aap ko adrishya kiya. Or light ki speed se ud gya. Me badalo ko cheerta hua ja raha tha. Meri speed itni thi ki badalo me ek alag sa rasta ban gya tha mere nikalne se or ye achha tha ki aakash me is waqt pakchhi bagera nahi the. Verna pakka meri gati ki hawa me unka santulan bigad jata or vo sayad neeche gir jate. Me sabse pehle pahucha mumbai. Or mujhe lagbhag kuch hi second lage honge yaha Tak pahuchne me. Uske baad me gya un pisacho ki jagah per jaha vo the. Pore Mumbai me hi akele 50 se jyada pisach moujood the. Me inke ilake me gya jaha charo taraf sunsaan machi hui thi. Halaki itni jaldi yaha sote nahi hai log lekin gharo me jarur ghus jate hai. Mujhe sabhi ki jagah pata thi. Isliye me gayab me hi un jagah per gya or apni soch se ek adrishya shakti ko pore ilake me faila diya. Is shakti ka prabhav bahut hi jyada tha. Is shakti se koi bhi nahi Bach sakta tha fir chahe vo kitna hi powerful asur hi kyu na ho. Jaise ye shakti baha moujood sabhi logo ke dimaag me ghusi sabhi ek hi jhatke me so gye. Pora ilaka kuch hi second me gehri neend me pahuch gya tha. Uske baad maine apne hatho ko failaya or un sare pisacho ko yaad kiya or unki body Jo is waqt insani rup me thi. Unko apni taraf kheecha. Kuch hi der me mere samne se karib 20 insano ke sarir udte hue pahuche gye. Maine apne hatho ke ishare un sabhi ko usi jagah per fek diya. Jaha vo kavach ki tanki bani hui thi. Or me dekh raha tha ki ye seedhe us me hi gire. Or hua bhi aisa hi kuch hi sec. Me ye log seedhe us kavach ki tanki me ja gire. Or jaise inki body ne us tanki ki satah ko chhua inki body jalne lagi.or jalan mehsus hote hi inki aankhe khul gyi or ye log jor jor se chillane lage. Lekin usse bahar nahi nikal sakte the. Or kuch hi sec. Me ye jal kar rakh me badal gye.


Or iske baad aise hi dusre ilako me ja ja ke maine sare pisacho ko ek ke baad ek us kavach me fek diya. Or karib 2 ghanto me jitne bhi pisacho ko maine dekha tha vo sare ke sare khatm ho chuke the. Ab maine socha ki abhi bhi bahut time baki hai. To dekha jaye ki koi or bach to nahi gya. Isaliye maine fir se dhyan lagaya or aise hi jeevo ko dhundne laga. Or me hairan reh gya kyuki kal ke moukable inki sankhya bahut bad gyi thi. Jise dekhkar me hairan tha ki ye kab bade or mujhe pata bhi nahi chala. Khair ab maine socha time hai to inko bhi thikane laga diya jaye. Or fir se mera safar suru hua. Or Maine pore 3 ghanto to me pore desh se pisacho ka namo nishan mita diya. Kam se kam main to aisa hi soch raha tha.








Bahi dusri taraf kumbh hairan tha ki uske dwara banaye gye sare pisach ek dum se gayab ho gye hai. Or unke bare me koi bhi jaankari nahi mili ki kaha gye vo. Isliye vo foran hi andar gya jaha suresh ek kamre me baitha hua tha.
Usne kumbh ko dekha to vo thoda achambhit hua.




Suresh- kya hua kumbh.




Kumbh- mere malik kuch hua hai. Lekin samaj me nahi aaraha hai.





Suresh- kya hua.





Kumbh- malik hamare dwara banaye gaye sare pisach ek dum se gayab ho gye hai. Or sirf naye pisach hi nahi balki jo pisach mere khas the or jinhen me kal apne sath laya tha vo bhi gayab ho gye hai. Unke bare me koi bhi jaankari nahi mil pa rahi hai



Or jaisa socha tha theek baise hi. Ye sunte hi Suresh orf mayasur ki dunia hi lut gyi. Use samaj me hi nahi aaraha tha ki ye akhir sambhav kaise hai.




Mayasur- tum kya keh rahe ho ye pata bhi hai.




Kumbh- me sach keh raha hu malik.




Mayasur- bhala tumhari najro se bach kar vo gayab kaise ho sakte hai.





Kumbh- malik sabhi pisach seedhe mere man se jude hai. Vo jab bhi mujhe pukarenge mujhe turant hi suchna mil jati hai. Lekin unhone aisa kuch bhi nahi kiya. Or jab maine unhe dekhne ki kosis ki to mujhe koi dikha hi nahi.






Mayasur- tum ek kaam karo. Abhi jaao or sabko dekho or dhundo ki akhir vo hai kaha. Apni shaktiyo ka istemaal karo. Or mujhe puri khabar do.





Kumbh- ji mere malik.



Ye kehkar vo bahase hawa bankar gayab ho gya.



Or mayasur apna sir pakad kar baith gya.



Mayasur- akhir ye kaise sambhav hua. Kahi us shakti ka hi to kaam nahi ye. Lekin kaise use uski jaankari kaise mili. Abhi to unhone kahi per bhi kuch bhi nahi kiya hai. Or apne aap to ye gayab honge nahi. Fir jarur ye usi shakti ka hi kaam hoga. Or agar ye sach hai to bakai me ye kafi chatur chalak or shaktishali shakti hai. Usne meri yojna ko suru hone se pehle hi khatm kar diya. Kash ek din or ruk jata to Maja aajata. Lekin achha hai. Isse mujhe itna to pata chal hi gya hai ki iske sath khelne me maja aayega.



Yahi sab soch raha tha vo. Or tabhi kumbh baha aagya.




Mayasur- bolo kumbh kya khabar mili hai.






Kumbh- mere malik. Kisi adrishya shakti ne unhe apne vash me karke khatm kar diya. Unko to kuch pata bhi nahi chala ki akhir hua kya unko





Mayasur- kis adrishya shakti ke bare me baat kar rahe ho. Or uske bare me tumhe pata kaise chala.




Kumbh- maalik Maine apni shaktiyo se bahaper jo kuch bhi hua use mehsus kiya. Or mujhe saaf saaf sanket mile kisi adrishya shakti ke. Uske baad unke sarir jis disha me gye baha Jake Maine unka peecha Kiya unki gandh se. To baha per mujhe un sabhi ki rakh mili.





Mayasur- to Mera shak sahi tha. Achha hai.




Kumbh- aap kis bare me baat kar rahe hai maalik.





Mayasur- yaha me aise hi nahi aaya hu. Ek shakti hai jiska janm hua hai. Gurudev ne khas mujhe us shakti ka pata lagane ke liye bheja hai. Halaki me chahta tha ki pehle meri yojna suru ho jaye. Lekin vo shakti bahut hi chalaak nikli or usne pehle hi meri yojana per pani fer diya. Or isse itna to tay ho gya hai ki ye shakti bahut Matlab bahut hi jyada shaktishali hai.






Kumbh- aapka kehna sahi hai mere maalik. Baha jis shakti ko maine mehsus kiya tha. Vo bakai me bahut hi shaktishali thi. Lekin ab ham aage kya kare.





Mayasur- filhaal mujhe kuch sochne do. Tum tab tak jao or pehra do. Kahi vo yaha na pahuch jaye




Kumbh- ji mere maalik.



Ye kehkar kumbh fir se gayab hoke ghar ke bahar aagya or adrishya hoke pehra dene laga. Or uske baki ke teen sathi bhi pehra de rahe the.


Bahi andar mayasur apni hi soch me gum tha ki aisa akhir kya kiya jaye jisse us shakti mere samne aa jaye. Lekin mujhe dekh na sake.





Bahi dusri taraf devraj indra is sab ko dekhkar bahut hi kush the or sath me thode hairan bhi ki itni aasani se arnav ne ye kaam kar diya. Jabki unhe kuch or hi hone ki sambhavna dikh rahi thi. Lekin jo bhi hua usse vo bahut hi kush the. Or is Jeet ka aanad Mana rahe the.





Bahi maine ab ghar bapis Jane ka faisla kiya. Kyuki aaj ka kaam pora ho chuka tha. Maine apni aankhe band ki seedha pahucha apne kamre me. Or jaise hi me kamre pahuch kar peeche muda. Samne ka najara dekh kar me pora hil gya. Mujhe samaj me nahi aaraha tha ki is per me kaise react karo. Abhi raat ke 3 baj rahe the. Or mere samne Renu baithi hui thi. Lekin achhi baat ye thi ki uski aankhe band thi. Matlab ki usne mujhe is prakar gayab hokar aate hue nahi dekha hai. Jo mere liye achhi baat thi. Sayad isne bahut der tak mera intjaar Kiya hoga. Baith kar. Or fir isiprakar uski aankh lag gyi hogi. Uske hath me mobile tha. Sayad time pass ke liye. Ab mujhe kuch karna tha Verna subah hote hi iske sawal jawab suru ho jayenge. Me dheere se uske pass gya. Or halke hatho se uske sir ko pakda. Or uski memory ke sath chhed chhad karne laga. Maine uske dimaag me ye baat daal di ki vo mere kamre me aai hamne thodi gappe lagai or uske baad vo yahi so gyi. Use ab ye bilkul bhi yaad nahi rahega ki me apne kamre me nahi tha. Fir maine use sahi se litaya uska mobile Maine side me table per rakh diya or fir light band karke uske baju me so gya. Halaki keval 2 ghanto ke liye.








Bahi dusri taraf mayasur raat bhar nahi soya vo sochta raha ki kaise or Kya Kiya Jaye. Bahut sochne per use kuch idea aaye jinper usne vichar kiya. Use ek baat to samaj me aagyi thi ki filhaal sena se kaam nahi chalega. Vo shakti pori sena ko inhi pisacho ki tarah chutki me khatm kar sakti hai. Ab vo koi solid plan soch raha tha. Ki jisme us shakti ko samne aana hi pade. Or isi me usne kuch tay kiya. Ki ab kaam kuch alag tarike se karna hoga. Tabhi use ik idea aata hai. Or vo sochta hai ki agar aisa kiya jaye to nischit hi vo shakti samne jarur aayegi. Or vo sochkar khush ho jata hai. Or vo turant hi apne plan ko kaamyaab banane ke liye lag jata hai ……….







Bahi subah 5 baje Maine utha badiya nahaya or chhat per chalegaya.


Bahi or dhyan me baith gya.


Dhyan me baithte hi gurudev ki aawaj aai.




Main- pranam gurudev




Gurudev- vats tumne jo karya Kiya hai aaj or jis chapalta se kiya hai vo bahut hi uttam tha. Mujhe garv hua ki tum mere sisya ho





Main- ye sab aapke aasirbaad ke bina sambhav nahi ho pata gurudev. Aapne mujhe rasta dikhaya or Maine usi ke anuroop karya kiya.





Gurudev- ye to tumhara badappan hai vats. Or me prasann hu. Lekin samasya abhi samapt nahi hui hai. Mayasur ab bahut hi sachet ho gya hai. Use is. Baat ka aabhas ho gya hai ki tumhare andar bahut shakti hai. Isliye ab vo kuch alag or bahut hi khatarnaak yojna bana raha hai. Jiske liye tumhe apna sampurna bal or budhi ka upyog karna hoga.





Main- me iske liye tatpar hu gurudev. aagya kare Mujhe kya karna chahiye.






Gurudev- vats tum bas apni budhi ka or shaktiyo ka sahi tarike se istemaal karna. Vo mayasur hai. maya me tumhe fasane ka prayas karega. Parantu tumhe apna santulan banaye rakhna hai. Chuki ab uske vo pisacho ka ant ho chuka hai. Isliye ab tumhare liye koi bhi samay uchit hai. Fir chahe vo din ho ya raat.






Main- me samaj gya gurudev. Aapki aagya ka palan hoga. Me apna sampurn bal or budhi se us mayasur ka mukabla karunga or kosis karunga ki is asur ka jald se jald ant ho jaye. Parantu guruvar mere man me ek sawal aaraha hai.






Gurudev- puchho vats.




Main- gurudev agar is MAYASUR ka ant hua to shukracharya fir koi alag danav ko yaha bhej denge. Or ye kram yu hi chalta rahega. Vo ek ke baad ek asuro ko bhejte rahenge mere liye jisme kai masumo ki jaane jati rahegi. Kya iska koi upay nahi hai.






Gurudev- ham tumhari bhavnaye samaj rahe hai vats. Parantu yahi tumhari niyati hai. Or isi liye tumhara janm hua hai. Sansar se asuro ka vinash karne ke liye. Or rahi baat iske upaay ki to iska koi bhi upaay nahi hai. Ye ladai yu hi chalti rahegi hamesha. Or har yudh me tumhari bal or budhi ki pariksha hogi. Lekin ek baat jarur hai. Is ladai per kuch varso ka viraam jarur lag sakta hai. Or vo upaay kya hai ye me tumhe samay aane per batadunga. Jab tak ke liye tum apne isi kartavya ko aage badate raho.







Gurudev ki bate sunkar me kush tha ki chalo kuch to rahat hogi aage.



Main- gurudev me samaj gya. Me us samay ka intejaar karunga.




Gurudev- bas isi tarah sache man se apna kartabya nibhate raho vats. Vijayi bhav.




Maine gurudev ko pranam Kiya or fir gurudev chale gye or me lag gya mantra jaap me.





Bahi subah karib 8 baje Mera dhyan samapt hua or me fresh hoke neeche pahucha. Mami se thodi gappe ladai or nasta bagera kar ke baith gya. Or sochne laga ki ab kya chal chalega mayasur. Vo jarur koi nai maya rachega. Lekin kya ho sakta hai uske dimaag me is waqt. Mujhe pata lagana hoga jald hi. Kyuki agar der ho gyi to bahut nuksaan ho sakta hai.




Main- mami chalo aaj ghumne chalte hai badiya shopping karenge or bahar hi lunch karenge. Kya khayal hai.






Mami- bahut hi badiya khayal hai. Tu ruk me abhi ready hoke aati hu. Tu bhi ready hoja tab tak.




Main- ok mami.



Uske baad me kamre me gya. Badiya kapde pehne or ek dum dashing ban kar ready ho gya. Or jab maine apna mobile hath me liya to meri band baj gyi. Karib 300 msg aaye the. Or sabhi me keval ek hi baat likhi thi ki call me. Or yemsg kisi or ke nahi balki Prachi ke the. Or ye dekhkar mujhe yaad aaya ki in pisacho ke chakkar me kal use call hi nahi kiya hai. Ab jarur ye meri band bajayegi. Maine uper se msg dekhe to kal dopehar se hi msg aane lage the. Lekin maine inper jyada dhyan nahi diya tha. Me dhyan me jo baitha tha…


Ab mera kya hoga yahi soch soch kar meri haalat kharab ho rahi thi. Kahi ye ladki kuch ulta seedha na kar le……..












To be countinue..........…………..
 

Rahul0087@

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Very nice update bhai
Keep great going
Congratulations for complete this story 100 pages
Well done bro
Nice update bro
Bhai congratulations ? pages pure hone par aap ko ?:congrats::congrats::congrats::congrats::congrats::congrats:??????????????????????????????????
बहुत ही शानदार तरीके से लिखी गई कहानी
Superb Update Bro...
Waiting For Next
:congrats: for ? pages
Congratulations Rahul for century
Awesome update
Yaha planning ko apply karne ka time aa gaya h super
Keep posting

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aap logo ke sath ke bina ye itni jaldi sambhav nahi ho pata... Itne jaldi aaplogo ne 100 pages pore karwa diye. Ye mere liye bahut badi baat haj. Or me ummid karunga ki ye story aise hi aaplogo ko entertain karti rahe or aaplogo apna pyar u hi barsate rahe ....



or ha aage dekhiye ki dev kya karta hai un pisacho se nipatne ke liye.....







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shandar update bhai :perfect: :applause:....to Arambh hone wala hai Yudh ka Mayasur ke sath aur uske sathiyo ke sath......kitna Kamyab rahega Dev unko mat dene me aur apni Pahchan chupane me. Dekhte hai kya hota hai aage.

Ha bhai chunoti to badi hai. Lekin dev bhi kam nahi hai. Vo jarur koi na koi rasta nikaal hi lega in sabse nipatne ka. Ab vo kya karta hai janne ke liye sath bane rahe.....





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Sandarrrr update bhai
good update
fantastic update brother
Superb .............
Mast adventure story hai bhai padhne mai achha lag rha hai
Keep writing keep posting
Bahot khub
Brilliant update writer sahab... Great going :applause: :applause:
Zaberdust update
Very nice update
Waiting for next
Nice n fantastic update
Super fabulous update bhai
Now action time. Let's see without knowing about new enemies how he control or overcome that topic and find a solution

Thanks bhai log.....


apna sath banaye rakhne ke liye.... Or 100 pages hone ke liye aap sabhi ko badhai.. or ummid karta hu ki ye pages ki ginti aise hi badti jaye or aap sabhi ka pyar is story per u hi barasta rahe ...


aaj ka UPDATE post kardiya hai... Jisme aap dekhna ki dev kaise un pisacho se nipat ta hai.......






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मस्त अपडेट।अब आयेगा मजा।जब पिशाचों का संहार होगा और मायासुर अपने बाल नोचने के अलावा कुछ नही कर सकता। उसे तो पता भी नही चलेगा कि यह किसने किया है।

Sahi kaha Bro aapne. Kuch aisa hi hone wala hai... Mayasur ko filhaal koi andaja nahi ki kaise or kya hone wala hai. Or jab use ye news milegi tab uski haalat dekhne wali hogi. Lekin ek baat or bhi hai ki vo itni aasani se haar manne walo me se to nahi hai. Ye to uska pehla hi waar ha. Iske baad pata nahi vo kya karega ....



dekhte hai ...





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Kaam toh pishaachon ne bhi achchha hi kiya hai ab agar dev ne dimaagh se kaam lekar abtak kitne logon ko pishach bana diya gaya hai yeh pata nahi kiya toh.... Dev inhi pishaachon mein atka reh jaayega aur rishi shukracharya ka mantavya siddh ho jaayega.... Isliye dev ko ab bina doodh se jale hi chhaachh ko phoonk phoonk kar pina hoga.....
I think iska ek maqasad yeh bhi hai ki divya astra ke prakat hone tak agar dev samne na bhi aa sake toh bhi uska dhyan bhatka rahe..... Aur asur guru jo chaahate hain woh unhein mil jaye

Aapki theory sahi hai. Bro. Kuch isi prakar ka plan to hai inlogo ka. Or ye ummid bhi hai ki agar vo shakti inke samne aagyi to ye log uska tod dhundne lagenge jaldi hi. Taki us divyastra or inke beech koi bhi na aaye. Lekin dev inke irado per dheere dheere pani feeta ja raha hai. Or asuro ko dukh is Baat ka hai ki unhone kitane hi asuro ki bali chadha di lekin unhen abhi tak koi safalta nahi mili is shakti ka pata lagane me. Halaki dekhte hai kab tak aisa chalta hai. Ya fir unhen jaankari mil jati hai ki dev hi vo shakti hai.








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