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Fantasy दिव्यास्त्र.[The power of five elements](action,advanture,fantasy,magic,thriller) ( Completed )

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UPDATE 33












Chhat per pahuchne se pehle maine apne aap ko gayab kiya.or fir uper gya. or Maine socha pehle in kale mayabi badalo ko hatana padega. Fir hi in jaanvaro ko dekhenge.



Maine apni aankhe band ki
Or apne dono hatho ko failaya or TRINETRA se in mayavi badalo ko hatane ka aavahan kiya. Aisa kehte hi mere hatho se adrisya roshni nikalne lagi or seedhe badlo me Jane lagi jaise hi vo roshni badlo me gyi. Achanak se bahut tez bijli kadakni start ho gyi. Itni tez ki sunkar hi logo ko heartattack aajaye. Itna shor hone laga tha jiski koi seema nahi thi. Or mere hatho se lagatar roshni nikal rahi thi.dheere dheere sare kale badal hatne lage the or aasman saaf hone laga tha or karib 5 min. Me Sara shor khatm ho gya or sath me kale badal bhi. Ab Suraj apni chamak charo taraf bikherne lage the. Or jaise hi suraj ki roshni un sare jaanvaro per padi vo jalne lage. Or jitne bhi jaanvar bahar ghum rahe the vo sare dekhte hi dekhte rakh me badal gye. Lekin abhi bhi bahut aise jaanvar the jo gharo me ya fir kisi aisi jagah per ruke the jaha unko dhup chhu bhi na sake. Jinme se 2 jaanvar to usi clg ki building ke andar ghum rahe the. Or sungh rahe the logo ko. Jinme renu- or surbhi bhi shamil the. Or mujhe khud hi unke samne jana hoga.

Ye sochkar me udd gya. Or seedha pahucha sabse pehle clg. Halaki abhi bhi me adrisya tha. Or mujhe koi nahi dekh sakta tha. Main un dono jaanvaro ke samne hi khada tha lekin vo mujhe nahi dekh sakte the or nahi sungh sakte the. Jaise hi ek jaanvar mere pass pahucha Maine use hawa me uthaya or bahar dhup me fek diya. Or jaise hi dhup use lagi vo jal kar rakh me badal gya. Or ye seen dekhkar dusra jaanvar charo taraf dekhne laga ki yaha akhir hai kon. Kisne use feka. Or vo sunghne laga. Or isi mouke ka fayeda utha kar maine use bhi bahar fek diya. Jisse vo bhi dhup me jal kar rakh ban gya. Or ye seen sare student ek kamre me chhip kar dekh rahe the. Unhe bhi kuch samaj me nahi aaya ki ye kaise hua. Uske baad me har jagah gya jaha per vo jaanvar moujood the. Maine sabhi ko utha utha kar dhup me patak diya. Or sare jaanvar jal gye dhup me. Ab sehar me jaanvar to nahi the. Lekin sare log bahut jyada dare hue the. Isliye mujhe ab ye yade mitani hogi sabhi ke dimaag se.



Isliye main aasman me gya. Or aankhe band karke hawa ek sath sabhi ke mind ko control karne laga or sabhi ke dimaag se ye sari yade mita di jisme unhone aaj bhayanak jeevo ko dekha tha. Unhe kuch bhi yaad nahi tha. Or jin jin ne tv ke dwara ye sab dekha tha unke mano ko vo control Kiya or unke andar se bhi ye sari bhayanka yade nikal di. Or is sabme mujhe karib 1 ghanta lag gya. Lekin aakhir kaar sab normal hogya. Lekin Jin logo ko un jaanvaro ne maar diya tha. Unke liye main kuch nahi kar sakta tha. Sivay iske ki unki mout ko kisi durghatna ka sikaar Batane ke siva. Isliye in logo se jude jitne bhi log the Maine un sabke man me ye daal diya ki inki mout kuch pagal kutto ke hamla karne se hui hai. Jinhone inke body ko kaat diya hai. Or vo kutte sehar se bahar bhag gye hai.



Ab sab theek ho chuka tha. Lekin me samaj gya tha ki kuch to aisa hua hai jo mujhe filhaal samaj me nahi aaraha hai. Vo mayabi badal kuch alag prakar ke the. Jarur mayasur ki yojna mujhe samne lane ki hogi. Lekin me adrishya hu. Ab pata nahi usne mujhe dekha hai ya nahi. Na hi dekha ho to theek hai..


Yahi sochkar me pahucha seedha apne ghar jaha mami so rahi thi. Maine unke sir per hath rakha or unhe jaga diya or unke man se bhi sari bate gayab ho chuki thi. Or vo apne aap ko sota hua pakar bahut hairan bhi thi.




Mami- me soi kab.



Main- vo aapke sir me thoda dard tha to maine hi aapko tablet de mar sulaya tha. Aapko yaad nahi.


Maine ye baat unke dimaag me daal di. Or unhone turant hi yakeen kar liya.




Mami- ha yaad aaya. Chalo tablet ne asar kar diya ab dard nahi hai. Chalo me lunch bana deti hu.



Usme baad mami uthi or seedhe kitchen me chali gyi. Or me apne kamre me.







Bahi dusri taraf mayasur ne sari ghatnayo ko dhyan se dekha. Or use turant hi suchna mil gyi ki shakti aagyi hai. Lekin vo adrishya thi. Isliye mayasur fir se shakti ka chehra nahi dekh paya. Or uski sari yojna dhari ki dhari reh gyi. Kyuki dev jab adrishya hota hai tab vo puri tarah se hawa me badal jata hai. Uska koi rup nahi hota hai. Jis bajah se mayasur ne kai kosis ki dev ko pragat karne ki lekin uska koi bhi asar nahi hua dev per. Infact use pata bhi nahi chala ki mayasur ne us per koi mantra ka war Kiya hai.

Or yahi sab sochkar mayasur bokhlaya hua tha ki itni tagdi yojna bhi kaam nahi aai. Uske mayabi badalo ne bhi uski jyada madad nahi ki. Ha agar dev pehle jaanvaro se nipatne jata to sayad badal uski kuch madad kar dete lekin dev ne pehle badalo ko hi hataya or baki kaam to apne aap ho gaya.






Mayasur- ye shakti akhir hai kya cheez. Itni shaktishali hai isne meri maya ko kitni aasani se tod diya. Or mere mantro ka bhi is per asar nahi hua. Isne mujhe do baar hara diya. Or me abhi tak uska chehra bhi nahi dekh paya hu. Dhikkar hai mujhper. Ab mujhe gurudev se hi sahayta mangni padegi. Vo hi koi upay bata sakte hai mujhe.




Ye sochkar mayasur baha se seedha nikal gya shukracharya ke pass







Nahi dusri taraf indradev ne jab ye sab dekha to unki tension bhi kam ho gyi. Kyuki kaam bhi ho gya or jyada nuksan bhi nahi hua. Or unhe ab pora viswas ho gya tha ki arnav har tarah ki paristhiti ko sambhal sakta hai.koi bhi detya uske samne jyada der tak nahi tik payega. Ye viswas unhe ho gya tha. Or vo ab chinta mukt ho gya the.




Bahi mayasur seedha pahuch shukracharya ke pass. Jo is waqt apni aankho ko band kiye hue prithvi ke sare najare dekh rahe the or unhe bhi sab jaankari pata chal gyi thi. Jaise hi mayasur ne unhe pranam Kiya unhone apni aankhe khol li.




Shukracharya- MAYASUR ye sab kya kar rahe the tum.





Mayasur- gurdev mere pass koi rasta nahi tha. Use samne lane ka. Lekin ye rasta bhi safal nahi ho paya.





Shukracharya- me tumhe bahut aklmand samajhta tha lekin tum to ek no. Ke bebakof nikle. Agar aise hi tum tabahi machate rahe to. Is shakti ka to pata nahi lekin me jarur tumhara vadh kar dunga






Mayasur- mujhe shama kare gurudev. Isiliye me aapke pass aaya hu mujhe koi rasta dikhaye ki me kya karu. Meri budhi prithvi per jake bhrasht ho gyi hai.






Shukracharya- vo to mujhe dikh hi raha hai. Ab mujhe hi kuch karna hoga. Ye kaam kisi ke bas ka nahi lag raha hai mujhe.





Mayasur- aisa na kahe gurdev. Mujhe ek or avsar pradaan kare. Me is baar jarur uska pata laga lunga. Lekin uske liye mujhe aapke margdarshan ki jarurat hai.







Shukracharya- hmmm. Theek hai tum abhi yahi raho me kuch sochta hu. Baise mujhe lagta hai jab tak vo astra samne nahi aata tab tak ye shakti bhi hamare samne nahi aane wali. Tumhe or mujhe itna to pata chal chuka hai ki ye sadharan shakti nahi hai. Bahut hi shatir or shaktishali hai. Usne kitni aasani se tumhari maya ka ant kar diya. Aisi kya shakti hai uske pass or vo hai kon. Hame filhaal kuch bhi pata nahi hai.






Mayasur- ha gurudev. Agar meri pehli yojna safal ho jati to jarur uske bare me kuch pata chal hi jata lekin vo suru hone se pehle hi khatm ho gyi. Isliye ab hame kuch alag soch rakhni hogi. Lekin kya?



Shukracharya- ham chahe kitne hi detyo ko baha bhej le or vo chahe kitne hi shaktishali kyu na ho. Lekin is shakti ka mukabla sayad nahi kar payenge vo sabhi. Or ab is shakti ke sath kya karna hai ye mujhe pata chal chuka hai.




Mayasur- kya karna hoga hame gurudev.





Shukracharya- ek yagya karna hoga. Usme mujhe 100 saaf or Masum jeevo ki bali deni hogi. Agar ye yagya safal ho gya to hame sari jaankari mil jayegi is shakti se sambandhit.





Mayasur- gurudev agar ye rasta pehle se hi tha to aapne abhi tak Kiya kyu nahi





Shukracharya- kyuki mujhe tum sab per kuch jyada hi bharosa tha. Lekin ab us yagya ke siva koi or Rasta nahi hai. Ab mata paatalbhairavi hi hamari aakhiri ummid hai. Bahi hame rasta dikha sakti hai. Ham chahe kitni hi Maya kyu na rach le. Lekin hame safalta sayad hi mile. Ek baar agar us shakti ka srot pata chal gya fir ham uske bare me jyada soch sakte hai.






Mayasur- gurudev aapka kehna uchit hai.




Shukracharya- aaj ratri me yagya suru hoga. Jao or uski tayyariya karo.





Mayasur- jo aagya gurudev.




Ye kehke mayasur baha se chala gya. Adhira ke pass. Or use ye sab suchna dene ke liye. Or jab adhira ko ye sab pata chala to use bhi bura laga ki mayasur us shakti ka pata nhi laga paya. Lekin shukracharya per use bharosa tha ki vo jo yagya kar rahe hai usse unhe jarur safalta milegi. Or yahi sab soch kar usne sevako ko yagya ki tayyariyo ke liye bhej diya.








Bahi dusri taraf prithvi per ab sab theek ho chuka tha. Lekin mujhe lag raha tha ki ye asur kabhi bhi yaha aake tabahi macha sakte hai. Agar me prithvi ke charo taraf ek aved suraksha kavach bana du to sayad or naye asur prithvi per nahi aa payenge. Or jo yaha per hai unhen me aasani se dhund lunga. Or agar koi is kavach ko tod kar andar aata bhi hai to kam se kam mujhe uski jaankari to mil hi jayegi ki koi aaya hai. Ha ye rasta mujhe theek laga. Or maine soch liya ki ab prithvi per koi bhi asur pravriti vala nahi aasakega. Ha agar vo mujhse jyada takat var hua to aajayega. Or agar nahi hua to vo kavach hi use khatm kar dega.

Yahi sab soch kar maine decide kiya ki raat me ye kaam karunga me.






Or raat tak sab kuch normal hi raha. Raat me vo dono mere kamre me aai.




Main- hii



Renu- ye batao tumne ye kaise kiya.




Main- hairan hote hue. Kya kiya maine. Tum kis bare me baat kar rahi ho.




Renu- bhole mat bano. Sach sach batao.





Main- are mujhe batao to ki tum kis bare me baat kar rahi ho.





Surbhi- vo actually un dono ne aaj sare clg ke samne hamse or 3-4 ladke or ladkiyo se mafi mangi or sabke samne kubul Kiya ki vo drugs bechte hai.or unhone police ko bhi surrender kar diya hai. To ham yahi janna chahte hai ki ye sab hua kaise.





Main- jaise bhi hua ho. Isme mera hath kaha se aagya Jara ye batao. Tum dono ko aisa kyu lagta hai ki is kaam ke peeche me hu.






Renu- vo is liye kyuki tumne kal raat ko kaha tha ki tumne hame kal hi ye sab kyu bataya is.baat ka jawab aaj subah doge tum. Or subah se hi news chal rahi hai ki police ne kai kilo drugs baramad kiye or unse jude sare log bhi mare gye hai. Or uske just baad vo dono aake ham sabhi se mafi mangte hai. Ye sab koi coincidence to nahi ho sakta.






Main- jitna Tum soch rahi ho. Utna kuch nahi hai. Ha iske peeche Mera hi hath hai. Lekin sirf hath. Maine police comm. Ko tip di drugs ki. Or un dono ladko ki. Police ne unhe pakda or unse sach ugalwa liya. Vo dono jiske liye kaam karte the uska naam samne aaya. Police baha gyi. Usse puchhtach karne per koi or aaya hoga. Or isi tarah sab kaam chalta gya or police ne sabhi ko pakad liya. Or vo dono me se ek ACP ka beta tha aisa tumne bataya tha mujhe to sayad unhone use samjhaya hoga or vo samaj bhi gya hoga. Isiliye usne sabse mafi mangi or jail chala gya. Ab mujhe puri kahani to nahi pata lekin sayad aisa hi hua hoga.





Ye sab sunne ke baad dono ke muh khule reh gye.




Surbhi- kya sach me.




Main- ha mujhe un dono or us insan ke bare me pata chal gya tha jo unhe drugs supply karta hai. Isiliye maine ek gumnam call Kiya or sari jaankari unhe de di. Or unhone foran hi action le liya. Or aaj dekho sehar me ek gram bhi drugs nahi hai. Jo ki achhi baat hai.





Renu- kya sirf itni hi baat hai. Ya or kuch bhi hai.




Main- bas itni hi baat hai.




Renu- tune sach me kamaal kar diya. Ek raat me drugs ka sara business khatm ho gya. I m proud of you.mere Bhai.





Main- ha theek hai lekin ye baat hamare beech hi rahe. Kisi ko bhi nahi pata chalna chahiye ki maine hi police ko call kiya tha. Samaj me aaya. Is baat ko yahi bhul jao.




Surbhi- bhool gye.




Main- badiya. Chalo ab so jao. Kal me bapis ja raha hu dehradun. Clg me padai ka bahut nuksan ho gya hai.





Surbhi- kya itni jaldi. Lekin or kuch din ruk jao na.





Main- yaar sach kahu to me bor ho gya hu. Tum dono clg chali jati ho. Me reh jata hu akela. Isliye me bapis ja raha hu. Baha kam se kam clg ke bahane time pass hota rahega.






Surbhi- baise ye baat bhi theek hai. Ham us din ke. Baad se kahi bhi ghumne nahi gye. Boor to tum hoge hi.




Renu- baise agar ruk to kal ham kahi bhi ja sakte hai.





Main- baad me aaunga kabhi jab tum dono ki chhutiya hogi. Tab aaram se ghumenge or INJOY karenge. Filhaal Jana hoga yaar mujhe sorry ha.




Renu- chal koi baat nahi. Baise mama ko bataya ya nahi.




Main- abhi to nahi btaya hai. Kal subah Bata dunga or sham ki flight se nikal jaunga.



Surbhi- theek hai. Subah milte hai. Good night..




Main- ha good night lekin ek baat yaad rakhna aage se agar tum dono ke. Bare me mujhe kuch bhi aisa baisa pata chala to dekh lena me kya karunga fir.





Renu- nahi tumhe aisa mouka kabhi nahi denge ham.



Main- badiya. Chalo jao so jao.



Vo dono chali gyi aone apne kamre me.


Tabhi mera phone Baja .maine dekha to as usal Prachi ka hi call tha. Maine received Kiya call or usse bate karne laga. Maine use nahi bataya ki main kal aaraha hu. Use kya kisi ko nahi bataya udhar.


Hamari normal baatchit chalti rahi. Karib 30 min. Tak jo bahut jyada thi. Lekin theek tha. Ab raat ke 11 baj gaye the. Isliye maine socha ki ab samay aagya hai vo kavach banane ka.





Maine kamre ko lock kiya. Or gayab hoke seedha chhat per pahucha. Or bahi per baith gya. Or aankhe band kare dhyan lagane laga. Or kavach ka aavahan karne laga. Tabhi gurudev ki aawaj aai mujhe.














To be countinue……………….

 

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Situation hai toh critical lekin jaisa ki brahma ji ne kaha ki dev in halaaton se nibatne ke qaabil hai puri tarah se aur indra ko chinta na karne aur bhavavesh mein aakar dev ki sahaayata karke daitya guru ke shaq ko pukhta na karne ke liye kehkar thik hi kiya ek tarah se.... Khair dekhte hain ab dev is situation ko kaise handle karega

Sahi kaha aapne. Baise lagta hai devraj samaj gye hai unki bato ko. Ab dekhte hai dev kaise MAYASUR ki maya ko samapt karta hai.or badle me mayasur kya karega. Kya dev ka pata laga payega ya fir kuch or plan karega...


janne ke liye sath bane rahe ..




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Action time aa gaya bhai....lagta hai ab jung khule me ladenge.
Mayasur ne to apna chal start kr diya hai.....ab Dev ka reaction bhi dekhenge.
shandar update :claps:

Ha bro Jung to hogi. Lekin chhoti se. Kyuki dev ki shaktiyo ke samne mayasur ki jyada nahi chalne wali. Ab dekhte hai dev kya karta hai. Or kaise MAYASUR ki maya ka ant karta hai..





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Brilliant update writer sahab... Great going :applause: :applause:
Awesome updates
Nice update bhai waiting for next update
Bhai great update and great story
very nice bro

Thanks Bhai log.... Apna sath banaye rakhne ke liye....


aaj ka UPDATE post kar diya hai ummid hai pasand aayega sabhi ko. Isme dekhiye ki dev kaise MAYASUR ki maya ko samapt karta hai. Or mayasur kya dev ka pata laga payega ...



janne ke liye sath bane rahe ..




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bhai kahani mein lekhak apni soch aur imagination se hi likhe toh maza aata hai.
aur waise aapki kahani ka plot bahut jabardust hai....aur writing skill bhi shandar hai...
yaha padne walo ki sab ki apni apni pasand hai....
agar sab k mutabik kahani mein change aur kuch add karoge toh kahani ka maza hi chala jaayege
jo bhi aap likh rahe hai fantastic hai...
aur aise hi likhte rahiye...

Aapne sahi kaha bro. Lekin sabhi readers ki baat sunna bhi jaruri hai. Or sath me unke sujhav agar achhe lage to unhe apnana bhi chahiye. Isiliye unse puchhna to banta hi hai. Or yaha bhi adhiktar logo ne mera sath diya jis bajah se kahani baisi hi aage bad rahi hai. Agar jyada log iske viprit kehte to sayad. Fir mujhe baisa hi karna padta. Lekin sabhi ne baat ko samjha or mera sath diya... Or ha kahani ko apne hisaab se hi likhna chahiye. Per sabhi ki ikchhao ka bhi dhyan rakhna chahiye ki log hamari kahani se kya ummid lagaye hue hai. Baki to sabhi ki alag alag soch hoti hai.





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Bahut hi shandar likhte ho bahi
ab tak k saare updates padhe....bahut majedar kahanu hai....mann karta hai saare padh lu ....lekin muzhe bhi apni running kahani parr updates dene padhte hai
isiliye jab bhi samay milta ha padh leta hu :applause: :applause: :applause:

Aapke support ke liye bahut bahut dhanyabad bro.

and me ummid karunga ki ye kahani aapka pora manoranjan kare. And aapne jo story suru ki hai uske liye all the best. Or asha karunga ki aapki kahani bhi sabhi ko khub pasand aaye .
 

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Zaberdust update bhai
बहुत ही खूबसूरत अपडेट भाई
Nice update bhai
Awesome fabulous update
Pahle night karta tha lakin lagta h ab samne see war hoga
Keep posting
Nice n fantastic update
Nice n fantastic update
Great update bhai
लवली अपडेट।
Nice update ab suru hoaga dev aur mayasur ke bich action

Thanks Bhai log....


apna sath banaye rakhe . Aaj ka update post kardiya hai ummid hai pasnad aayega sabhi ko.

dekhiye ki dev kya karta hai kya jawab deta hai mayasur ki maya ka. Or mayasur kya dev ki pehchan kar pata hai ya nahi..


janne ke liye sath bane rahe..



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Nice update brother

Thanks bro aapke sath me liye... Aage isi prakar apna sath banaye rakhe. Or me ummid karunga ki ye story aapka pora manoranjan kare...





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