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Fantasy दिव्यास्त्र.[The power of five elements](action,advanture,fantasy,magic,thriller) ( Completed )

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Rahul ji ye mera first comm. Hai aapki story per mahadev parshuram ji ko gurudev kese khe sakte hai jabki khud mahadev parshuram ji ke guru hai sayed ho sokta hai ham galat ho kyoki aap ek story maker ho sorry
Tum Sahi Ho dost.... Mahadev prashuram ji ke guru bhi aur aaradhye bhi hai

Bro aap dono ka kehna sahi hai. Galti mere se hi Hui hai. Isliye jaise hi aapke comments pade turant hi maine post ko edit kar diya. Or vo kya hai ki abhi tak me persuram ji ko gurudev kehke hi sambodhit karta aaraha tha. To vo baisa hi dimaag me chhap gya or mere se baisa hi likha gya.
sorry for that.


and thanks ki aapne meri galti ko mujhe samjha Diya.. aage bhi agar koi galti ho to mujhe aap log bejhijhak bata sakte hai. Me jarur use sudharne ki kosis karunga......





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Fantastic update
Sandarrrr update bhai
Superb Update Bro...
Waiting For Next
Superb..........
Nice update brother
Awesome fabulous update
Devi ne aacha fasaya h
Keep posting
बहुत ही खूबसूरत अपडेट भाई

Thanks bhai log apke sath ke liye.....



ummid hai ye story aap sabhi ko badiya se entertain kar rahi hogi. Or aage karti rahegi...


aaj ka UPDATE post kar diya hai. Ummid hai pasand aayega sabhi ko....




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UPDATE 35













Subah me apne routine se utha badiya fresh hua nahaya or chhat per chala gya. Aasan bichhaya or dhyan me baith gya. Or sabse pehle hi maine gurudev ka aavahan kiya.


Or mera aavahan karte hi gurudev ki aawaj mujhe aane lagi.




Main- pranam gurudev.




Gurudev- Ayushman bhav. Vats.




Main- gurudev vo kal raat me ek sapna aaya tha mujhe jannat hai ki kahi is sapne ka ishara us Divyastra ki taraf to nahi tha na.





Gurudev- tumhe kya lagata hai vats.




Main- mujhe lagata hai vo divyastra ka hi ek bhag tha jise maine sapne me dekha tha.




Gurudev- tumhara anuman bilkul satya hai vats. Divyastra ne tumhe apna swami chun liya hai. Isiliye usne tumhe us jagah ke darshan karaye jaha vo is waqt moujood hai.





Main- parantu gurudev jis jagah per vo ans moujood hai vo jagah to puri tarah band hai. Usme na to andar jane ka rasta hai or na hi bahar jane ka. Or Maine sapne me ye bhi dekha ki kuch logo ne us jagah ko tod kar rasta banane ki kosis ki to us ans ne baha moujood sabhi ko bhasm kar diya or uske baad us Puri jagah ko ek bade visfot se tabah kar diya.






Gurudev- iske aage kya hua.




Main- iske aage me kuch dekh pata usse pehle hi meri neend khul gyi. Kyuki vo visfot itna bhayanak tha ki uska kampan mujhe apne andar tak mehsus hua tha.





Gurudev- me samaj sakta hu. To jo tumne dekha hai Uska keval ek hi Matlab banta hai. Or vo ye hai ki agar koi bhi is ans ko prapt karne ki kosis karega vo ans un sabka vinash kar dega or us jagah se kahi or chala jayega. Taki fir use koi dhund na sake.






Main- to kya abhi vo usi jagah per hai jisko maine dekha tha.




Gurudev- ha vo abhi usi jagah per moujood hai.




Main- parantu gurudev me is gufa ke andar kaise jaunga. Or sabse pehle to ye ki me us pahad ko dhundu kaise. Yaha to kai pahad hai.






Gurudev- tumhe is bare me chinta karne ki jarurat nahi hai vats. Jab us ans tumhe apni jagah ka pata bataya hai. To vo khud hi tumhe is tak pahunchane ka marg bhi dikhayegi. Tum bas sabse pehle ye pata lagao ki vo jagah akhir hai kaha. Lekin apni shaktiyo se nahi balki apne dimaag ke istemaal se. Tumhe saansarik sadhanon ka istemaal karke use jagah ka pata lagana hoga. Fir hi tumhe aage ka rasta milega.




Main- theek hai gurudev. Aapane jaisa kaha hai me baisa hi karunga.




Gurudev- Or ha tumhe ek suchna or deni hai mujhe. Ki ab tumhe jyada satark rehne ki aavashyakta hai. Kyuki detyaguru shukracharya ko tumhe dhundne ke liye kuch shaktiya pradan ki hai. Or ab vo tumhara chehra dekh sakte hai. Agar unka koi bhi asur tumhare aaspass hua ya fir tumhari usse ladai hui. To vo tumhe pehchan sakte hai




Ye sunkar me bura chaouka.




Main- gurudev agar aisa hai to me kya karu. Kya unse ladna chhod du.




Gurudev- nahi tumhe ladna chhodne ki jarurat nahi hai. Agar unko tumhare bare me pata chal bhi jata hai tab bhi tumhe keval satark rehne ki jarurat hai. Or apne parivar or pore prithvi ke insanon ki suraksha bhi karni hai.





Main- me samaj gya gurudev. Me satark rahunga or unki har chal ko nakam karke dikhunga.




Gurudev- bahut hi badiya vats. Ab tum dhyan lagao.



Main- pranam gurudev.



Maine unhe pranam Kiya or vo chale gye or me dhyan me hi baitha raha or apna mantra uchharan karta raha.


Bahi karib 7 baje me dhyan se utha fresh hua or neeche chala gya.jaha filhaal sabhi log moujood the. Me bahi sofe per baitha or mami ne mujhe coffee di. Tab maine socha ki sabhi ko bata hi du



Main- mama me sham ki flight se bapis ja raha hu



Ye sunte hi mami or mama dono shok. Baki un dono ko to pata hi tha




Mami- kya hua tujhe. Jo achanak jane ka man bana liya.sab theek haina



Main- mami sab theek hai. Vo kya hai mera clg ka bahut syllabus peeche reh gya hai. Or abhi 2-3 hafto baad midsem exam bhi suru hone bale hai. Or meri tayyari kuch bhi nahi hai. Isliye mujhe Jana hoga taki kuch pad saku. Padai ka bahut loss ho raha hai




Mama- ha ye baat to hai. Theek hai ham rokenge nahi tumhe. Lekin ha chutkiyo me bapis aana padega. Or me pehle se hi office se chhuti lekar rakhunga taki tumhe waqt de saku. Is baar bilkul bhi time nahi de paya tumhe.




Main- koi baat nahi mama agli baar aaunga tab ye kasar bhi puri kar lena.




Mami- theek hai beta. Tum chale jayenge to yaad to aayegi lekin chala lenge ham.



Main- kya mami aap to senti ho rahi ho. Aisa karna abki baar aap sabhi baha per aajana. Mom se bhi milna ho jayega or sath me chhuti bhi. Kya kahto ho mama.




Mama- baise idea achha hai. Yahi karenge ham.


.tabhi mami ne mama ko kuch ishara kiya or mama fir mujhse bole.




Mama- beta tumhari mami or me tumhe ek gift dena chahte hai pls Mana mat karna




Main- kaisa gift.



Mama- vo jaisa bhi ho tumhe Lena padega. Bas.




Main- lekin batao to.ki gift kya hai.




Mami- beta gift Jo bhi ho use le lete hai ye nahi puchhte ki kya hai kya nahi.




Main- theek hai me le lunga. Ab to batao ki kya gift hai.



Mama- aao mere sath.



Mama ne meri aankho per hath rakha or mujhe kahi le jane lage. Or fir ek jagah per ruk gye. Or fir unhone meri aankho se hath hata liya. Or jab maine aankho ko khol kar samne dekha to baha per ek chamchamati brand-new car khadi thi.

MERCEDES BENZ AMG GT.



main- ye kya hai mama….




Mama- ek chhota sa gift.or tum ise mana nahi kar sakte. Tumhe Lena hi hoga.tumne abhi andar kaha tha




Main- lekin iski jarurat kya hai. Mere pass bike hai.




Mami- vo to hai hi. Lekin car nahi hai na. Mujhe pata chala tha ki tumhari car ko kisi ne tod diya tha. Isliye hi maine inko kehke car manga li thi.




Main- mami mujhe abhi cars ki kya jarurat hai. Kahi aana jana to hai nahi. Khadi rahegi be faltu me.




Mama- kyu clg to jate ho na. Bahi le jana. Or baise bhi dev Sinha bike per clg jaye ye achha nahi lagta isliye ab kki sawal nahi. Ye rakho chabi or sham ko ttum ise se jaoge ghar.




Mama or mami or sath me surbhi ne bahut kaha to fir me Mana hi nahi kar paya unko. Maine unka diya hua gift accept kar liya or unko thanks kaha. Car bakai me mast thi. Black colour me. Kehar dha rahi thi.



Uske baad mami ne nasta bagera diya or hamne sath me nasta finish Kiya or fir sabhi apni apni manjil ki or nikal gye. Ab ghar me keval me or mami hi bache hue the.

Sham tak me aise hi time pass karta raha. Thoda bahut mami ke sath gappe lagai or bas apne samaan ko pack kiya. Sham ko sabhi jab ghar per aaye to me ready hi tha Jane ke liye. Sabhi ne mujhe goodbye wish Kiya. Or me baha se nikal gya apni nai car me. Me karib 5 baje nikla tha. Or ek ghanta to mujhe delhi ko paar karne me hi lag gya. Uske baad highway per pahucha or car ko speed deke bhaga liya. Adhera hone laga tha dheere dheere or rasta bhi adhiktar Khali hi chal raha tha. Bas ikka dukka gadiya hi dikh rahi thi. Or kuch private buses.rasta jyada lumba nahi tha. Or me achhi speed se ja raha tha. Or bina koi tension ke aaram se me dehradun pahuch gya. Karib 8 baje tak. Highway se me ghar ki taraf nikla or aaj jab dehradun pahucha to aisa laga jaise verso baad aaya hu yaha per. Isse ye baat mujhe samaj me aagyi thi ki chahe puri dunia ghum lo lekin jab ham apne hometown me pehla kadam rakhte hai uski baat hi alag hoti hai. Or Ghar chahe kaisa bhi ho. Lekin vo hamare liye kisi jannat se kam nahi hota. Theek aisi hi feeling aa rahi thi mujhe. Background me swadesh ka title track baj raha tha. Pata nahi kaise. List me kaha se aaya ye song pata nahi. Lekin bilkul swadesh ke mohan Bhargav jaisi feeling aarahi thi mujhe. Khair yahi song sunte sunte me ghar pahuch gya. Guards ne jab anjan car ko dekha to gate nahi khola. Tab ek guess chakkar car ke pass aaya or jab usne mujhe dekha to turant hi sorry bol diya or gate khulwa diya. Or maine bhi uske kaam ki sarahna ki jise sunkar vo bhi kush ho gya. Or me andar chala gya. Car ko maine gate ke pass roka. Sara saman nikala to raju aagya. Usne madad ki kuch saman usne kiye kuch maine.




Main- or raju bhai kya chal raha hai aajkal.



Raju- bas



Main- ha ha ye mat bolna ki fogg chal raha hai….



Raju hasne laga.


Raju- kya bhaiya aap bhi. Sab badiya hai.



Main- achhi baat hai. Achha ye batao tifin dene jate ho pundit ji ko.




Raju- ha bhaiya kabhi me to kabhi dadu le jate hai.or aaj ka me de aaya hu.or pandit ji aapke bare me puchh rahe the.




Main- ha mil lunga kal unko.



Raju- dekhna sabhi aapko achanak dekhkar shok ho jayenge.



Main- isiliye to achanak aaya hu.


Ye baat karte karte ham andar pahuch gye.jaha dadu or mom deno ne mujhe dekha to shok hi ho gye. Kyuki unhe sayad ye ummid nahi thi.




Mom- tu aagya. Kya baat hai badiya surprise diya hai tune.



Dadu- ha Bhai maja hi aagya. Dill khush ho gya. Tere bina to sab suna suna lagta tha.




Main- koi baat nahi ab aa gya hu to sab pehle jaisa ho jayega.



Maine dono ke pair chhuye. Or aasirbaad liya. Fir dono ne mujhe gale lagaya. Dono se milkar me bhi khush tha.


Uske baad me kamre me gya fresh hua kapde change kiye or Jo gift me mom or dadu ke liye laya tha vo neeche le aaya. Or tabhi mujhe yaad aaya ki Raju or bakio ke liye kuch nahi le paya. Sala yaad hi nahi raha. To socha unko sellary bada kar de dunga vo sabhi apni pasand se kharid lenge.


Maine dono ko gifts diye. Jo unhe bahut pasand aaye. Mom ke liye badiya suit or dadu ke liye badiya stylish kurta. Like modi. Dono hi kush ho gye.



Main- dadu is mahine sabko thoda bonus de dena. Me unsabhi ke liye kuch le hi nahi paya. Bonus se ye khud le lenge apne liye.



Dadu- theek hai kal hi de dunga.



Mom- chal aaja khana kha le.



Uske baad hamne khana khaya. Or raat me Maine Prachi se baat ki or use bilkul nahi bataya ki me aagya hu. Usse kaha ki kal ya perso Tak aaunga. Jise sunkar vo or sad ho gyi. Lekin kl clg me use surprise jarur Milne wala tha itna tay tha. Aise hi usse baat karke me so gya.


Subah apne routine se utha dhyan lagaya or clg ke liye ready ho gya. Or neeche pahuch gya.

Maine badiya nasta kiya or Raju se kehke vo gifts Jo un teeno ke liye laya tha vo car me rakhva diye. Or unka aasirbaad leke nikal gya pehle chirag ke ghar.


Baha pahuchkar me seedha andar jane ke liye bell bajai or kismat se darwaja chiraag ne hi khola or mujhe dekhkar vo bhi pora shok ho gya.



Chirag- kya baat hai bro. Surprise ha. Maja aagya.




Main- maja to ayega hi.



Chirag- or Bata kaisa raha delhi trip.



Main- theek hi tha. Kafi bore hua baha per. Khair ye chhod or ye le gift tere liye. Or chal jaldi late ho rahe hai.



Chirag ne gift liye or unhe bahi khol liya. Or bas use vo watch kafi pasand bhi aagyi. Or usne bahi per pehan li. Or usne mujhe thanks bhi kaha.fir Maine uncle aunty se mila unka aasirbaad liya or nikal gye ham clg ke liye.


Raste me thodi bahut bak bak chalti rahi or ham pahuch gye clg. Parking me car ko park Kiya or lucky or Prachi ka wait karne lage. Thodi hi der me ek ek karke dono aagye or jaisa Maine socha tha Prachi to jaise statue hi ban kar ek jagah khadi reh gyi mujhe achanak dekh kar. Use sayad laga ki me uska koi bahem hu. Lekin nahi me sach tha. Me uske pass gya or use thoda hilaya to vo hosh me aai or mere gale lag gyi. Maine bhi use gale laga liya. Vo mujhe chhod ne ko ready nahi thi. To maine uske kaan me kaha.



Main- Prachi sab dekh rahe hai. Ham clg me hai. Chhodo mujhe.



Ye baat dimaag me jate hi vo mujhse door ho gyi.


Prachi- tum to kal ya parso aane wale the



Main- ha lekin fir socha ki jab mujhe sabhi itne dilo jaan se yaad kar hi rahe hai to bapis aajana chahiye. Isaliye kal sham me hi aagya tha.




Prachi- Matlab jab hamne bat ki thi tab.



Main- ha me yahi apne ghar per tha. Or maine socha subah tumhe badiya surprise diya jaye or dekho mera kaam ban gya




Prachi- sahi kaha tumne bakai me to surprise hi ho gyi thi. Thanks iske liye.



Chirag- bro I think class ka time ho gya hai.




Main- ha hame chalna chahiye.



Usme baad ham class me gye. Or time per pahuch gye. Un sir se pehle. Or mujhe class me dekhkar vo bbi thode surprise ho gye. Halaki unhone mujhe kuch nahi kaha. Or sham tak ham aise hi class attend karte rahe. Sham ko chhuti ke waqt Maine undono me gift unko diye jinhe dekhkar vo bhi kush ho gye or thanks bola. Or ham sab bye bolke chale gye Bapis.

Raste me Maine chirag ko chhoda or seedha pahucha mandir pandit ji se milne ke liye. Maine apni car park ki or uper mandir me jane laga. Jaise hi uper pahucha to dekh kar dang rehgya. Kyuki mandir ki halat kafi kharab bani hui thi. Saman bikhra pada tha or pandit ji kahi bbi dikhai nahi de rahe the. Maine aawaj lagai unko lekin koi bhi reply nahi aaya. To main mandir ke andar gya. Or baha ka najara dekh kar me hairan tha. Ki ye kya ho gya or kaise.













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Mast update h Bhai
Maza aa gya
Nice update
Excellent update.
Awesome updates
Chalo Mayasur ki akal thikane aa gayi....usko pata chala ki wo Dev ka abhi kuch bighad nahi sakta.......Shukracharya ab Yagya kr rahe hai Dev ke bare me sb janane ke liye....lagta hai is bar safalta mil hi jayegi unhe. Waise Dev accha istemal ke raha hai apni powers ka..
shandar update :applause: :applause:
Fabulous update bhai

Thanks everyone apna sath banaye rakhne ke liye ...





aaj ka UPDATE post kar diya hai ummid hai pasand aayega sabhi ko. Jisme aap dekhenge ki gurudev dev ko kya batate hai uske sapne ke bare me.





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Excellent excellent update or ab Guru skuracharya ko pata chal gaya h ke koi sakti h Prithvi pe or ab uska pata lagane ke liye wo koi jarur koi bhut bada sdwantra rahenge. Mahadev ne inderdev ko achi sikh de.

Your story is one of best n unique qke is forum pe bhut kam he story aise h nhi to sare story ka them ek jaisa h or achi story bich mai band ho jati please aap isko pura jaror karna.
Very nice aakhir sare detya mare gaye kafi suj buj ka use kiya dev ne or bhut he achi tarike se situation ko handle kiya or 4 ko maraor un 4 insano ko na kewal bachaa parntu unke gahr bhi sakushal pahuchya. Inderdev ne bhi thodi help ke ab ye q gaye h Shiv jee ke pass ye dekhna h excellent update.

Thnaks Aapko upadate pasand aarahe hai...

abhi inke baad bahut kuch hua hai. Aap aage padhiye ki or kya kya hota hai story me. Or dev ke jeevan me.
or me kehna chahunga ki aap sabhi log mera sath banaye rakhe. Ye story kabhi bhi beech me nahi chhodunga me. Ise bhi apni baki story ki tarah complete karke hi dum lunga. Bas apana sath banaye rakhe...







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shandar update bhai :applause: :applause: ......Mahadev ka kahna uchit hai...sansar ke bhalai ke liye kuch kurbaniya to deni hi padti hai. Pr ye kurbaniya kin logo ki hogi ye to waqt ke sath hi pata chal jayega.

Sahi kaha Bro aapne. Ye to waqt ke sath hi pata chalega ki dev ko kaisi kurbaniyan deni padegi. Or dev vo deta hai ya nahi. Sab aage padhiye ki gurudev use kya batate hai uske sapne ke bare me.....






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Toh asur guru ko dev ki sachchai pata lag hi gayi bas abhi unhein yeh nahin pata ki woh shakti dikhti kaisi hai.... Aur uski kamzori yani uske parivaar ka bhi unhein abhi tak toh nahin pata kuch par lagta hai jaldi hi pata lagega
Aur i think ab woh samay bhi aanevaala hai jiske baare mein rishi parshuram ne dev ko bataate samay usse woh vachan liya tha... Khair dekhte hain ab dev in paristhitiyon se kaise nibtega aur kaise woh khud mein nikhaar laate hue sabki raksha karega

Sahi kaha Bro aapane. Itna to tay hai ki dev ki life normal kam hi rehne wali hai. Baki dekhte hai mahadev ke man me kya vichar chal rahe hai dev ke liye. Unhone kya soch rakha hai. Ye baat to unke aalwa koi nahi janta. Bas hame to waqt ka intezar karna hai. Taki dheere dheere sab clear hota jaye...

ab dekhte hai kya hota hai aage...






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बहुत रोमांचक कहानी अच्छा लिख रहे है लिखते रहिए:perfect::perfect::perfect::perfect::perfect::perfect::perfect::writing:
Nice update brother

Thanks bhai log. Aapna sath banaye rakhe. Me aise hi sabhi ka manoranjan karta rahunga...

aaj ka UPDATE post kar diya hai ummid hai pasand aayega sabhi ko.



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Akhirkar arnav ko divyastra ke darshan ho hi gaye.usaki shakti ka bhi abhas hua . Ab arnab ko guru ki pratiksha hai.

sahi kaha aapne ab guru hi use samjhayenge ki kya karna hai use or kaise. Dekhte hai ab ye pehle ans ko pane ka safar kaisa hota hai...






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Super aakhir Dev ko apne guru ke darshan ho gaye or wo guru vandna kamal ke thi. Kafi deep reachersh kiya h aapne. Excellent Dev ko Parshuram jee ka parsha mil gaya. I think wo guru rakhana mai wo divyastr mangege. Dev or chirag ke conversation funny tha but yar ladkiyo ka majak mat udao. Detya ko sak ho gaya h n Dev ko bhi aage dekhte h kya hota h.
Excellent update again or Dev or Renu ke conversation majedaar thi. Ye mere sath ho chuka h bachpan mai mere kamine bhai ne mujhe chor diya tha ghar ke bhar mai bhut dar gayi thi or fir papa mujhe dundh kar ghar le gaye the tab pata chala tha ke bhai ke bhut pitai hui h or wo incident yaad aa gayi abhi padh kar thanku aap bhut kuch yaad dila dete hi aaj kal ke busy life mai jiske karan humari bete hue lamhe yaad aa jate h thanku.

Sahi kaha yahi chhote chhote lumbe bahut kushi dete hai aane wale jeevan me. Or inhi yado ke sahare baki ki jindagi bhi aaram se nikal jati hai. Baki rahi baat research ki to aap sabhi ke liye karna padta hai. Taki Jo bhi likhu vo sabhi ko sahi lage or story me thoda fantasy ke sath sath thodi satyta bhi aajaye or aap sabhi ka intrest bana rahe ...
 
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