Fantasy दिव्यास्त्र.[The power of five elements](action,advanture,fantasy,magic,thriller) ( Completed )

[Rahul0087@]

Bhai Kya baat hai do do update har roj aayenge lokdown Tak Kya



Or Bhai aapki story 50%baaki jyaadater fantesy story se to aleag he maja aa Gaya yaar Sach me bohot maja aa raha he or Bhai aap ne kuch kuch moment hasane vale bohot hi mast daale he




Or Bhai lock down Tak do do update aayenge Kya roj

thanks Bhai aapko story pasand aayi uske liye.......



and rahi baat roj 2 UPDATE ki to yaar thoda muskil hai. Lekin kabhi kabhi de diya karunga.. roj nahi de paunga yaar sorry.....


baki aapko story se nirash na hone dene ki pori kosis karunga......




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[Rahul0087@]

Awesome update
Bhai kahi aaisa na ho commissioner bole ki Meri saadi hi na Hui ho
Keep posting

bhai yaar kash mere ko ye idea aaya hota likhne se pehle to ye wala point me jarur dalta. Lekin afsos ki me likh chuka tha. Isliye an story me changes karna theek nahi hoga. Baki aapka thought bakai me bahut achha tha ....






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[Rahul0087@]

Nice Update Bhaii
Hero mamle ko aache se sambhala
Hero cool mind h ye aacha h kab kya karna h aachi samaj h jo aage Danvo se yudh m kam aayega

Chalo ladki ki aachi class lagne vali h
MLA ki beti bhii kuch karegi ya iss mamle ko dekh piche hatt jayegi vese lagta to nhii h
Wating for new Update

thanks bhai.......



hero ko isi prakar ka Maine role diya hai. Ki vo shant hai. Lekin uske andar bahut aag bhi hai. Or vo aag jis din bahar aayi tabahi samjho pakki hai. Isliye uska shan't rehna hi behtar hai filhaal to...


or jo baat aapne kahi ki danavo se ladte waqt kaam aayegi vo bakai me sach hai. Hero apne vivek ka istemaal karke hi danavo ko hara sakta hai. Baki dekhte hai aage kya hota hai...........





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[Yellow Flash]

Nice

 

[crazyrex]

Very nice update

 

[Rahul0087@]

Nice

Jabardast ab aayega maja
&
Nice update

Mast upadate maza agya

nice update bhai

Thanks Bhai log.......




and sorry Jo aajka update thoda late hua hai........




and next update post kar diya hai ummid hai aapko pasand aayega ....



apne comments karte rahe ....




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[Rahul0087@]

Rahul0087@ Bhai kahani to jbardust hai mja aarha hai pdhne main bahut Maine aaj hi Sarre update pdhliye very good writing
Hmm
Story to bahut bhadia likh rhe ho and Devaarav Ka character bahut ache se explain kr rhe ho helpful nature ,galat ko galat Kahna good
Ab dekhna ye hai humari story ki heroine kaun hogi meko 2 heroine lag rhi hai
1- Prachi
2- Behan jo hai vo bhi heroine ho skti hai

But ek Story main heroine ek ho to vo hi best hai .... Baki it's up to u
Indradev kese rakshah or guidance denge dekhne layak Hoga ye scene
Shukracharya ne chaal chl di let see who win
Bahut Sahi DSP kesa bnda Hoga genuine or corrupt dekhne layak Hoga mgr abhi tak ke nature se genuine LGA mgr beti Ka naam sunkr aise shock Hona it's confusing

AND BHAI EK REQUEST FONT SIZE THODA CHOTTA RKHO ND APKA EK REVIEW PDHA JISME APKA KAHNA SAHI HAI READ KRNE KO AASAN RHTA HAI ND YAAR PLS THODA BDA BHI KARO UPDATE

Thanks Bhai aapko story abhi tak pasand aayi uske liye ....



.and jaisa aapne kaha hai maine thode chhote font me story ko post kar diya hai. Agar isse bhi chhote chahiye to Bata Dena me kar dunga......

and rahi baat heroine ki to dekhte hai kiski kismat khulti hai...... Prachi ki ya renu ki.

sab aage pata chalta jayega aap bas apna sath u hi banaye rakhe .....






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[Rahul0087@]

Thanku so much for giving another update as we demand. Or ab update har baar ke tarh awesome. Ab dekhna h Dadu or ye Lucky kya kya khichdi pakane wale h baad mai qke mere ko lagta h dono ko sath pasnd aaya. Or Dev ke thinking sahi h use bilkul sabak sikhana chahiye but arrest ye thoda jayda nhi ho jayega. Waise bhi usko bigadne mai uske comm father ka bhi utna he bada hath h.

Ab dekhna h comm kya action lega dev ke is baat pe ya wo apni beti ka support karega ya dev ke complaint pe action lega.

Waiting for next.

i totally agree with u dear.......




comm ki beti ko bigadne me uske perants ka kuch to hath hoga hi. Lekin vo direct hath sayad nahi hoga. Prachi- ne unko examine karke apne andar ye sab Kiya hoga... Baki aage to pata chal hi jayega. And arrest ke khilaf to khud dev bhi hai lekin thoda areenst ka natak to kar hi sakte hai agar dono ki rajamandi ho to. Baki kya karte hai is update me Aapko pata chal jayega.........


and lucky- and dadu aage kya gul khilate hai ye matter bhi aage aayega dekhna dilchasp hoga ki akhir he karte kya hai.........





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[Shahrukh]

Such a wonderful update bhai

 

[Rahul0087@]

Aapke story ko 10 out of 10
Ye story bhi meri one fev story mai samil ho gayi. Keep entertain. Thanku once again for sharing your wonderful story.

thanks for rating my story.......





and me pori kosis karunga ki ye rating kam na ho ulta badti hi jaye.........