Fantasy दिव्यास्त्र.[The power of five elements](action,advanture,fantasy,magic,thriller) ( Completed )

[The Immortal]

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[nikhilbramhane]

Awesome

 

[Sandeep singh nirwan]

Awesome

Iske aur pahle ke parts bhi h

 

[nikhilbramhane]

Nice story bhai

 

[drx prince]

Very nice story bahu pasand aayi ye story ab iske next season ka intzar hai

 

[Tiger 🐅🐯]

Mast updated Bhai

 

[leomahesh]

uffffff kya story hai.....

 

[Raj kalita]

Bhai iss story ka next part kab tak ayega...

 

[Tri2010]

UPDATE 1








Kehte hai. Is brahmmand me bahut se raj chhipe hue hai. Jo insan kafi nahi jaan sakta. Chahe vo kitani hi kosis Kyu na karle. Jab tak us perbrahm ki ikchha nahi hoti tab tak ek tinka bhi nahi hilta hai.

Aisa hi kuchh is kahani me bhi hua hai.


Croro saal pehle. Jab danav or devtao me yudh hota tha. To anek दिव्यास्त्रों ka istemaal Kiya jata tha. Jinme is pore brahamand ko khatm karne ki shaktiya hoti thi. Or aaj bhi hai. Lekin ye दिव्यास्त्र samay ke sath vilupt ho gye. Or ye tabhi samne aayenge jab swayam bhagwan ki ikchha hogi. Aise hi ek दिव्यास्त्र ki ye kahani hai.


Darashal shukracharya ne kai varsho tak tap karke Brahm Dev ko prasann Kiya.



Brahma- aankhe kholo vats. Mango kya vardaan chahte ho tum.



Shukracharya- he bhagwan. Me to bas mere asuro ka kalyan chahta hu. Me chahta hu ki unhe bhi devtao ke saman hi samman or shaktiya mile. Lekin vishnu bhagwan ne hamesha hi hamare sath chhal Kiya hai. Or asuro ko jo bhi vardan milte the. Un vardano ko unhi ke khilaaf istemaal kar dete hai. Isliye Me nyay chahta hu aapse.



Brahma- shukracharya ham aapki vani ko samaj rahe hai. Iska aap hi koi upay bataiye ki hame kya karna chahiye.




Shukracharya- prabhu me chahta hu aap mujhe koi aisa दिव्यास्त्र ya shakti pradan kare jisse me पंचतत्व ko apne adheen kar saku. Or danavo ko uski shaktiyo se amar bana saku.




Brahma- shukracharya. Is sansar me koi bhi amar nahi ho sakta. Lekin aisa ek दिव्यास्त्र me tumhe pradan kar sakta hu. Isse danav amar nahi honge lekin vo पंचतत्व ko apne adheen jarur kar payenge. Lekin aap is दिव्यास्त्र ko apne kisi ek danav ko hi de sakte hai. Agar usne ye दिव्यास्त्र kho diya ya vo kisi tarah parajit ho gya to ye दिव्यास्त्र is sansar me vibhajit ho jayega. Or jab is दिव्यास्त्र ki ikchha hogi tabhi ye samane aayega.




Shukracharya ne is per vichar kiya or bahut sochne ke baad Brahma ji se ye दिव्यास्त्र lene ka faisala kiya.




Shukracharya- prabhu mujhe swikaar hai. Aap kripa kar ye दिव्यास्त्र mujhe pradan kare.




Ye sunkar Brahma Ji ne TATHASTU bol diya. Or isi ke sath ek naye दिव्यास्त्र ki rachna hone lagi. Or thodi hi der me ye pori tarah se bankar ready hogya.



Isme पंचभूतों ke pratik ke rup me 5 alag alag stone lage hue the. Har ek stone ka matlab ek shakti se tha.



AAKASH (SPACE)

VAYU (AIR)

JAL (WATER)

AGNI (FIRE)

PRITHVI (EARTH)



Ye दिव्यास्त्र brahma ji shukracharya ko deke antardhyan ho gye.


Or ye astra pake shukracharya bahut khush hue. Kyuki ab punchbhut unke kabu me jo aagye the. Isse pehle keval mahadev hi in punchbhuto ke swami rahe hai. Isiliye unhe Bhutnath bhi kehte hai.


Ab shukracharya ke samne sabse badi problem ye thi ki is astra ko diya kise Jaye. To unhone ye astra Tarkasur ko de diya. Kyuki Tarkasur ka ant keval Shiv ke putra ke hatho hi ho sakta tha. Or filhal shiv ji aisa kuch bhi karne ka mood nahi tha. Unki to abhi tak shadi bhi nahi hui thi. Yani ki vo amar tha. Or is astra ke mil jane se vo or bhi shaktishali ho gya tha. Usne pore brahmand me hahakar macha diya tha. Devtao se yudh hota to usme bhi vo aasani se sabhi ko parajit kar deta. Kyuki sabhi devta kisi na kisi tatva ke pratik the. Jaise Surya Dev agni ke pratik. Varun dev jal ke pratik. To is astra ki madad se Tarkasur ne sabhi devtao ko apne kabu me kar liya. Unki shaktiya bilkul samapt ho gyi thi. Bas vo jinda the kisi tarah. Vo Brahma Ji ke pass gye unse madad ki guhar lagai. Lekin vo bhi kuch nahi kar sakte the. Unka kehna tha ki keval Shiv ka ans hi Tarkasur ka ant kar sakta hai.

Lekin devtao ke aagrah per Brahma or visnu ji ne aadi shakti se prarthna ki. Ki ab aapke or shiv ke milan ka samay aagya hai.

To is per vichar karke aadi shakti ne SATI roop me Prajapati daks ke yaha per avtar liya.


Or aage chal kar unka vivah bhi shiv ke sath ho gya. Lekin kismat ko kuch or hi manjoor tha. Prajapati ke dwara ek yagya me apne pati ka apman devi Sati seh Na Saki or unhone bahi per aatmadah kar liya. Jisse Tarkasur or bhi khush ho gya. Or usne or tabahi machana prarambh kar diya. Kyuki shiv bhi ab Sati ke gum me doob chuke the. Or apna deviye roop tyag chuke the. Jis bajah se tridev bhi khandit ho gye the. Or sabhi ki shaktiya dheere dheere kam hone lagi thi. Tab sare devta ek baar fir se aadi shakti ke pass gye or unse punah avtar lene ki ikchha pragat ki. Tab unhone Parvati ke roop me janm liya. Or unhone kai varsho tak ghor tapasya ki tab Jake vo shiv ko pa saki. Unka vivah hua. Or unki pehli santan hui KARTIKEY. jinhone Tarkasur ka vadh kiya. Or is srishti ko maha vinash se bacha liya.


Tarkasur ke ant ke sath hi vo ASTRA bhi prithvi ke punchmahabhuto me vileen ho gya. Or uska kabhi kuch bhi pata nahi chal paya kisi ko bhi. Danavo ne use khojne ki bahut kosis ki lekin use nahi khoj paye ye log. Lekin shukracharya ko ye pata tha ki kabhi na kabhi ye ASTRA apne aap ko samne jarur pragat karega. Bas use ishare ko samajne ki jarurat hai. Jis din is ASTRA ne apne hone ka praman is sansar ko diya. Tabhi samaj lena ki danav ise fir se prapt karne ke liye koi bhi had paar kar jayenge.




Bahi dusri taraf ye dar sabhi devtao or tridev ko bhi tha.
Isi dar ko apne sath leke Indradev brahma ji ke pass gye.





Brahma- kaho indra kaise aana hua yaha per.




Indradev- prabhu aap to sab jante hai. Mere yaha aane ka kaaran bhi aap jante hi hai.



Brahma- ha me janta hu Indradev. Aap us ASTRA ko leke chinta me hai.



Indradev- ha brahm dev. Agar vo ASTRA fir se pragat ho gya or kisi danav ke hath lag gya to anarth ho jayega. Sabhi devta fir se danavo ke adheen ho jayenge. Aapko iska koi hal sochna hoga.




Brahma- hame iska upay gyat hai indradev. Lekin is upay ke liye ye samay upyukt nahi hai. Usme abhi samay hai.




Indradev- brahmadev. Iska upay kya hai aap hame Bata sakte hai.




Brahma- jab samay aayega tab me swayam Aapko iska upay bata dunga. Or is upay ko karne me aapka bhi ek bahut bada yog daan hoga.



Indradev- jaisi aapki aagya brahma dev.



Uske baad indradev bapis swarg chale gye.



Or iske baad kai Arab saal nikal gye lekin vo astra abhi tak samne nahi aaya kisi ke bhi.danav abhi bhi iski talash jari rakhe hue the.unhe ummid thi ki jald hi ye astra samne aayega.



Is ke crore saal baad.





Uttrakhand ki rajdhani dehradun ki khubsurat badiyo ke bech bane ek hospital me ek aurat bahut jor jor se dard me chilla rahi. Ye dard jo use ek naya sukh dene wala tha. Darashal vo kisi bache ko janm dene wali thi. Docters pori kosis kar rahe the ki normal delivery ho jaye. Or vo aurat vo apna pora jor laga rahi thi. Or raat ke karib 11:29 min. Per us aurat ne ek bahut hi khoobsurat ladke ko janm diya. Jaise hi us ladke ne janm liya or rona start Kiya. Achanak se sare badal me jordar bijli kadakne lagi. Or musladhar baris bhi hone lagi. Sabhi isse thoda dar bhi gye the ki achanak se ye sab kya hone laga. Bahi us ladke ki maa us ladke ko dekha or Behosh ho gyi. Docters ne unhe check Kiya to paya ki unki dhadkane dheemi padti ja rahi hai. To docters ne apni kosis ki or us aurat ko oxygen lagaya. Or electric shok diya. Tab Jake uski condition me sudhar aaya. Uske baad docters ne us aurat ko ek injection diya jisse vo so gyi. Bahi vo ladka bhi ab aaram kar raha tha. Or mousam bhi saaf ho chuka tha.


Ward ke bahar ladke ke dada or usse 2 saal badi bahen uska intjaar kar rahe the.


Docters ward se bahar gye to dono ne unhe gher liya.


Dada- docter bahu kaisi hai.



Doc- ghabrane ki jarurat nahi hai. Ab vo theek hai. Or khusi ki baat ye hai aap ko pota hua hai. Or aapki bahu bhi sahi salamat hai. Kuch ghanto baad unko hosh aajayega tab aap unse mil sakte hai. Or ha filhaal aap apne pote ko dekh sakte hai. Halaki vo abhi so raha hai



Ye sunke dada to khusi se nachne lage. Kyuki unki beintaha doulat ka baris jo aagya tha.unhone khusi se ladke ki badi bahen ko God me utha liya or usse bolne lage ki tumhara Bhai aaya hai.


Vo ladki bhi bahut khush thi. Use khelne ke liye ek khilona Jo mil gya tha.




Maine abhi tak aapko in sabka intro nahi diya. Chalo de deta hu.




Jagdish sinha- ye hero ke dada hai. Inki age karib 50 hai. Inke pariwar me ab yahi ek mard bache hai. Inki kafi pustaini jaydad hai. Jinhe abhi tak inke bete ne sambhala hua tha. Lekin 3 mahine pehle ek accident me unki mout ho gyi. Jisse ek baar fir se sari jimmedari jagdish ji per aagyi thi. Or unhe is baat ki bhi kafi chinta thi ki unke Jane ke baad is sab ka kya hoga. Lekin ab unki chinta dur ho gyi thi. Inki shadi 18 saal ki age me hi ho gyi thi. Or 2 saal baad inke ladke ka janm hua. Jiska naam inhine viswas sinha rakha tha. Or iske baad inko koi or santan Hui hi nahi.


Or hero ki dadi bhi bahut pehle mar chuki hai. Inka jyada bada pariwar nahi hai.



Nirmala devi- ye apne hero ki mummy hai. Inki age filhaal 25 hai. Kafi fit dikhti hai. Or Sadi me to qehar girati thi hero ke dad per. Lekin jab se unki death hui hai. Ye keval apni beti ke liye hi jinda hai. Or ab inke ladke ke liye bhi.
Ye bhi kafi padi likhi hai. Or dadaji ke sath business sambhalti hai.



Renuka- ye apne hero ki badi bahen hai. Inka janm hero se 2 saal pehle hua hai. Kafi cute hai. Jo bhi ise dekhta hai sabse pehle uske gaalo ko khechne ki ikchha hoti hai.

To dosto ye tha ek chhota sa intro. Aage or bhi character aayenge jinka time per intro karwata rahunga….











To be countinue……………...

Nice introduction

 

[Tri2010]

UPDATE 2









Ek hafte baad nirmala ko hoshpital se chhutti de di gyi. Dadaji unko Ghar le aaye. Ghar per sare noukar bagera moujood the. Or sath me nirmala ji ke bade bhai bhi



Kamal sinha- ye hero ke ek loute mama hai. Inki age 28 saal hai. Inke pariwar me kaval teen log hai. Ek inki patni. Or dusri inki beti jo renuka ki hi age ki hai. Ye bhi kafi bade businessman hai Delhi me. Ye delhi me hi rehte hai. Jab unhe is khushkhbari ka pata chala to ye next day hi yaha per aagye.




Rashmi sinha- ye hai Kamal ji ki patni. Or inki age hai. 24. Ye ek house wife hi hai. Ye bhi niramala ji ko manti hai unki ijjat karti hai. Or renu ko bhi bahut pyar karti hai.




Shurbhi- ye Kamal ji ki ek louti ladki hai.ye filhaal renu ki age ki hi hai.




Unlogo ne sabhi ka behatreen swagat Kiya. Nirmala ji sabhi se milke bahut khush thi. Unke hatho me unka nanha sa beta tha. Jo sabhi ko dekhkar muskura raha tha. Or use dekhkar sabhi ke chehre khil uthe te.



2 din baad dadaji ne unke khandani pandit Ji ko ghar per bulaya taki vo bache ki kundali bana sake or uska naam karan kar sake. Subah se hi sabhi log Ghar ko sajane me lage hue the. Or dadaji or hero ke dad ke kuch dost or imploy Ghar per aane lage the. Kyuki inhone sabhi ko invite kiya tha.


10 baje pandit ji aaye. Unhone pehle ghar me poja path Kiya. Satyanarayan ki katha kahi. Uske baad unhone hero ki kundali banai. Jise dekhkar hi pandit ji ki aankhe choudi ho gyi.lekin unhone iske bare me kisi ko kuch nahi bataya.



Dada- pandit ji ham kya naam rakhe apne pote ka.



Pandit- jagdish ji aapka pota kafi bhagyashali hai. Iske aapki jindagi me aate hi sare sankaton ne apna rasta mod liya hai. Or iska jeeta jagata saboot ye hai ki. Nirmala beti ki aayu iske janm ke sath hi samapt hone wali thi. Lekin jaise hi aapke pote ka janm hua aapki bahu ki aayu or lumbi ho gyi hai. Or is pariwar se sare sankat door ho gye hai. Ab vastav me aapke achhe din aane wale hai. Or me jitna dekh pa raha hu. Is balak ka janm ek mahan uddeshya ke liye hua hai. Ye sabhi ke dukho ko har lega. Or sansar me Shanti or khusi la kar dega. Isliye iske me do naam rakhna chahunga. Kyuki iske gun kisi ek naam me pore nahi honge. Fir baad me aap chahe to kisi ek naam se ise bula sakte hai.



Ye sab sunke sabhi log bahut khush the unhe jeene ki ek nayi ummid Jo mil gyi thi.



Pandit- ji iska pehla naam hoga.



" ARNAV" (अर्णव)


iska matlab hai punchtatvo ka pratik.



"DEVAJ" (देवज)



Iska matlab hai. Devtao dwara janma.


Ab aap indono namo me se kisi ek se ise bula sakte hai.




Dada- dono hi naam bahut achhe hai. Ham aisa karte hai. Isko DEV kehke bulainge. Or iska pora naam school me Arnav likhba denge. Jisse ye dono namo se jana jayega. Kya kehte ho aap log.




Mom- bapuji bahut hi achha vichar hai. Ham ise Dev kehke hi bulainge.



Mama- ha ye achha naam hai. Isko suit bhi karega or bade hokar isko koi sikayat bhi nahi rahegi ham se. Ki hamne iska achha naam nahi rakha.




Mama ki is baat per dadaji or baki sabhi has pade. Kyuki ye ek aam baat thi. Or bacho ka naam isi liye bahut soch samaj kar hi rakhna chahiye.



Naamkaran ho chuka tha. Kuch din or rukkar mama ka parivar bapis se delhi chala gya. Or renu dadaji or mom teeno hi ghar me jab bhi time milta dev ke sath khelte rehte. Jaisa pandit ji ne bataya. Theek baisa hi hua. Dadaji ka business ab tez raftaar se doudne laga tha. Unko itna munafa hone laga ki unse ye sambhalna hi muskil hone laga tha. Mom or dadaji din raat mehnat karne lage or business ko badane lage. Or isi me kab 20 saal nikal gye pata hi nahi chala.



Dev ki ab school ki padai pori ho chuki thi or use ab collage me admission Lena tha. Bahi renu ab 22 year ki ho gyi thi. Or filhal vo delhi ke ek clg me 2nd year me B.com pad rahi thi. Kyuki uske mama use yaha se le gye ye kehke ki surbhi ke sath ye bhi padlegi or dono ko ek dusre ka sath bhi rahega.


Lekin Dev ko uske dada ya mom usse door nahi Jane de sakte the. Kyuki fir Ghar pura suna suna ho jane wala tha. Isliye unhone dev ka admission yahi Dehradun me hi karwa diya ek clg me. Jo khud dev ka hi tha.

Or is baat se dev ko bhi koi aitraj nahi tha.


Vo bhi dono se door nahi hona chahta tha.


Isliye usne khusi khusi yahi per padne ka faisla kar liya. Halaki mama ne dev ko bhi delhi me padane ki kosis ki thi lekin dadaji ne unko mana kar diya. Or mama ji bhi samaj rahe the ki dev ke jane ke baad ye ghar suna ho jayega. Isiliye ye use nahi Jane dena chahte hai.




Ab yaha se story start hoti hai.




Subah Ghar ki bani gym me ek ladka pasina baha raha tha. Abhi ye 20 saal ka hi hua hai. Lekin iski muscle dekh kar koi nahi keh sakta tha ki ye keval 20 saal ka hi hai. Kya jabardast body banai thi isne. Kisi bhi ladki ko apni taraf kheech le.

Ye or koi nahi main hi hu. Subah 4 baje uthna or sabse pehle gym me pasina bahana. Subah agar exercise karlo to pura din isfurty me nikalta hai. Din bhar thakan ka namo nisan nahi rehta hai. Aaj mere clg ka first day hai or me aaj late to hona hi nahi chahta tha. Isliye maine 6 baje tak khub mehnat Kiya or uske baad me bapis chala apne room me. Thoda rest Kiya. Or uske baad seedha ghus gya bathroom me. Jaha badiya se shower liya. Or jaldi se ready hoke me neeche aagya.


Jaha dadaji pehle se hi moujood the. Vo newspaper pad rahe the



Main- good morning dadu



Dada- are good morning mere sher. Aao baitho.



Main unke pass gya. Unke pair chhu kar unka aashirvad liya. Or unke baju me baith gya



Main- or sunaiye kya haal.




Dada- sab badiya hai aapki daya se.




Main- kya dadu ye dialog mera hai.



Dada- aaj maine bol diya.



Or dadu has pade.



Dada- or sunao aaj first day hai clg ka kaisa lag raha hai.



Main- baisa hi jaisa pehle lagta tha. Normal.




Dada- kya yaar tu to bahut boring hai. Kuch exitment to laya kar apne andar




Main- ab jaisa hu to hu. Ab isme me kya kar sakta hu.




Dada- ha ye bhi hai. Lekin thoda life ko injoy bhi kiya kar. Koi girlfriend bagera bana lena clg me. Time achha katega.






Main- mom dekho dadu mujhe galat salah de rahe hai.




Maine jor se chilla diya. Or ye sunke dadu pure sutt pad gye




Dada- kya yaar har baat apni mom ko batane ki jarurat nahi hai tujhe.




Main- achha or vo bhala kyu.




Dada- ab tu bada ho gya hai. Or adult bhi.




Main- isse kya fark padta hai. Aapke liye to me bacha hi rahunga na.





Dada- tere se koi nahi jeet sakta bato me. Achha chal nasta kar le. Or Maine tere liye ek gift kharida hai aaj usse hi clg Jana.




Main- kya hai gift me.





Dada- aaja tujhe dikhata hu.





Dadu mujhe bahar le gye. Jaha ek brand new BMW khadi thi. Two seater. Open roof wali.




Jise dekhkar me exited tha. Lekin itna nahi.



Main- iski kya jarurat thi. Mujhe jyada show off karna pasand nahi hai. Aapko to pata hai.





Dada- beta pasand ho ya na ho. Lekin tum hamare ek loute chirag ho. Or itna kya isse jyada me kar sakta hu. Lekin tujhe ye sab pasand nahi hai. Isliye sasti car li hai. Verna tere liye is pori dunia ki sabse mehgi car leke aata me. Isliye ab ye key rakh. Or is car ko accept kar. Verna me tujhse baat nahi karne wala samaj Lena.





Main- kya dadu aap mujhe emotional blackmail kar rahe hai.




Dada- ab ise tu jo chahe samaj.




Main- theek hai dadu aapka ye gift mujhe accept hai. And thanks for this loving car.





Dada- injoy or meri baat yaad rakhna.





Main- konsi baat.





Dada- itni jaldi bhool gya. Are gf wali baat.




Main- kya dadu aap bhi. Apni age to dekhiye. Aapko mujhe ved purano ki siksha deni chahiye. Na ki ye sab.





Dada- vo bhi dunga. Jab teri age ho jayegi. Filhal Teri age ye sab karne ki hai. To ye sab Gyan de raha hu. Samjha. Ab chal nasta kar le.




Uske baad maine nasta Kiya. Jo mom ne khud mujhe parosa. Maine nasta finish kiya. Or fir mom ke pair chhukar aasirbaad liya. Or bye bolke clg ke liye nikal gya. Apni nai car me.



Mera ek school ka dost hai. Jiska naam hai.




Chirag dube- ye banda kafi sahi hai. Iska sense of humar bhi kamaal ka hai. Hamesha sabka mood thik ho jata hai iski bate sunkar. Khaskar mera. Agar mera mood off ho to. Jo abhi tak isne hone nahi diya. Iski age bhi mere jitni hi hai. Or body bhi theek thak hai. Lekin mere jitni kya mere aas pass bhi nahi hai ye. Lekin dum bahut hai.




Main seedha iske ghar ke bahar pahucha. Or jor se car ka horn bajaya.




Or thodi hi der me ye bhaisaab bahar aagye




Chirag- Abe gjb. Yaar ye kab li.



Main- aaj hi dadu ne gift ki hai. Aaja.




Chirag- dadu sach me great hai yaar. Maja aagya. Mere ko chalane Dena.




Main- ha aaja chala le.




Ye kehke me side wali seat per aagya. And chirag driving seat per. Or usne car ko douda Diya speed me clg ki taraf. Raste me ham badiya gane sunte hue ja rahe the. Subah ka waqt tha isliye jyada traffic nahi tha road per. Isliye chirag full speed me car bhaga raha tha. Or me bas side me baitha dekh raha tha.


Aise hi ham clg pahuch gye. Hamne car ko park Kiya. And abhi class me time tha to ham dono bahi parking ke darwaje ki aake ek kone me khade ho gye. Or Charo taraf clg ko dekhne lage. Kya khub badiya clg tha. Badiya atmosphere. Or dehradun ke mousam ke bare me main kya batau. Aapko to sab pata hi hai. Charo taraf greenry or pahad. Ye dekhkar kisi ka bhi man khush ho jaye. Or thand ke mousam me to or bhi Maja aajata hai jab yaha snow rain hoti hai.or ek ye bhi bajah thi mere yaha se na jane ki.


Clg me students aarahe the or ham unhe dekh rahe the.kafi groups me aarahe the. Jinme ladke or ladkiya dono hi shamil the. Me inme se kisi ko nahi janta tha. Na hi ye log mujhe jante the. Jo ki achhi baat thi.




Chirag- dekh to yaar kya khubsurat ladkiya hai yaha per. Kash inme se koi set ho jaye.




Main- kyu teri vo nisha ka kya hua…




Chirag- kiska naam le raha hai yaar subah subah.




Main- aisa kya ho gya




Chirag- ek no. Ki chalu ladki thi. Keh rahi thi ki agar mere sath rehna chahte ho to apne mom dad ko chhod do. Maine usi waqt usko ek thappad mara or usse breakup kar liya. Badi aai mujhe alag karne wali mere perents se.




Main- kya usne aisa kaha.




Chirag- bahi to pehle to mujhe bhi yakeen nahi hua. Isliye maine dobara puchha. Lekin jab usne dobara baat ko dohraya to maine diya ek kheech kar.




Main- baise ladkiyo per hath uthana galat baat hai. Lekin tune ek dum right Kiya. Ab sayad use thodi akl aagyi ho.



Chirag- meri chhod or apni Bata. Tu bhi ab kisi ke sath set hoja. Kab tak hath se kaam chalayega




Main- pehli baat to ye ki me apna hath us kaam ke liye use hi nahi karta hu. Apni soch ko thoda sudhar le. Or dusri baat ye ki. Jab mujhe dikhegi koi aisi ladki to me bhi set ho jaunga. Tab tak ham Single hi achhe.




Chirag- lekin thoda maja to lena chahiye na.




Main- mujhe nahi hai shok in sab ka.




Chirag- kya yaar jo bhi teri bate sunega hasega tujhper.
Kitana boaring hai tu. Pata nahi kaise Maine tere sath itna waqt bitaya hai. Kahi tu gay bagera to nahi hai na.





Main- Abe jaban ko sambhal kar use kar. Verna sari jindagi lucky ki tarah e i o karta rahega samjha.





Chirag- lucky ye kon hai




Main- are lucky ka nahi pata tujhe. Are bahi golmaal movie wala lucky. Abe Tushar kapoor role karta hai jiska.





Chirag- ha yaad aaya. Kya tu uski tarah mujhe gonga bana dega.




Main- agar bakwas bate karega to bana dunga. Samjha ab chal jaldi.



Ham andar ki taraf Jane lage tabhi ek car ke horn ki aawaj aane lagi. Jor jor se. Or kuch student ki aawaj bhi aane lagi bachao bachao karke.




To maine peeche mudkar dekha to.


Ek car badi tezi se aa rahi thi or car wala hi horn baja raha tha. Or hath dikha kar sabko side hone ko keh raha tha. Sayad uske breakfail ho gye the. Tabhi usne car ke stairing ko ghumaya or car thodi drift ho gyi. And jis taraf vo car ja rahi thi bahi per ek ladki khadi hui thi. Jiski peth meri taraf thi. Or me samaj gya ki vo ladki hat nahi payegi or car seedhi usse takra jayegi.



Maine jaldi se baha per pahuchne ke liye Doud lagai.or me baha kab pahuch gya pata bhi nahi chala. Lekin car bhi bilkul pass pahuch chuki thi. Vo ladki dar ke mare bahi per baith gyi or apne sir ko apne hatho se pora chhipa liya. Or Maine us ladki ko pora cover kar liya. Jaise hi car hamare pass pahuchi. Maine apna hath us car ke darwaje per laga diya rokne ke liya. Or mere hath baha per lagte hi darwaja aadhe se jyada andar ki taraf dhas gya. And car bhi jaha tak pahuchi bahi ke bahi ruk gyi. Halaki speed me hone ki bajah se jab Maine car me hath lagaya to car dusri side se thoda uper ki taraf uth gyi. Kyuki ek taraf Mera pora force laga hua tha. Or turant hi car khadi ho gyi. Uska dusra sira Jo hawa me utha tha vo bhi ab jameen per gir gya.



Ye seen ke baad jitne bhi student baha per moujood the sabhi jaldi jaldi doud kar hamare pass aagye. Or dekhne lage ki kahi koi chot to nahi lagi. Or vo ladki abhi tak apne sir ko chhipaye hue thi. Apne hatho me. Baha per shor hone laga sabhi us car wale ko bahar nikalne ki kosis karne lage.usko thodi chot aagyi thi sir me. Bahi maine us ladki ke hatho ko thoda touch karke use uthane ki kosis ki.



Main- hello miss aap theek hai.



Maine jab 2-3 baar use bulaya tab Jake usne apni mundi ko oper ki taraf Kiya or vo Charo taraf dekhne lagi



Main- aap theek hai. Kahi chot to nahi aai aapko.



Ladki- me kaha hu.




Main- aap clg me hai or sahi salamat hai.




Jab use sab yaad aaya ki kuch sec pehle kya hua tha to vo ek dum se khadi ho gyi.




Ladki- me Bach gyi. Thanks god. Me Bach gyi. Lekin ye car ruki kaise ye to seedhi mujhse takrane wali thi.




Chirag- hamare hero ne ise rok diya. Vo bhi apne ek hath se. Jara car ke darwaje ko to dekhiye.




Ye baat sunke sabhi ka dhyan car ke darwaje ki taraf gya. Or Maine chirag ko khunnas me ghura.



Ladki- oh my god. Aapko kahi lagi to nahi.



Main- nahi me theek hu.


Ye kehke me khada hua or us ladke ko dekha jo car drive kar raha tha.


Main- Abe jab car chalani nahi aati to chalate kyu ho. Abhi accident ho jata to.





Ladka- sorry bro. Actually car ke breaks me koi problem ho gyi achanak se.jis bajah se car out of control ho gyi thi. Isiliye me horn baja raha tha ki samne se hat jao. Lekin pata nahi ye kaha se aagyi samne.



Ladki- kaha se aagyi matlab. Ek to abhi tumne mujhe almost maar hi Diya hota. Or dusra mujhper hi aarop laga rahe ho. Tumhe aaj hi me suspend karwa dungi or tumhara license bhi cancel karwa dungi. Jante nahi ho tum mujhe. Yaha ke police commissioner ki beti hu me.




Ye sunke baha khade sabhi ke hosh ud gye. Or us ladke ke to pata nahi kya kya ud gya.








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