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Fantasy दिव्यास्त्र.[The power of five elements](action,advanture,fantasy,magic,thriller) ( Completed )

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UPDATE 21













lunch time Tak ham class me hi rahe. Or me unhi ke ware me hi sochta raha ki akhir inse kaise nipta Jaye. Tabhi mujhe ek baat yaad aai.jo gurudev ne mujhe batai thi. Ki inhone jinka roop liya hai unko kisi jagah per kaid karke rakha hai. Or mujhe unko bhi bachana hai. To maine socha raat me unka pata lagane ki kosis karunga.


Lunch me ham canteen me gye jaha chirag or lucky dono hi mujhse puchhne lage ki kal kya hua tha. Tab maine unhe Bata diya surendra ke ware me. Or uske sath kya kiya ye bhi Bata diya. Thoda ghuma fira kar. Kyuki sach ye log sayad hajam nahi kar pate. Jise sunne ke baad undono ne mera thoda hosla badaya. Jiske liye maine unhe thanks kaha. Aise hi hamara vo pora din clg me nikal gya. Sham ko maine chirag ko uske ghar chhoda or seedha apne ghar aagya.jaha Renu to jaise Mera hi intjaar kar rahi thi. Kyuki uski car jo me le gya tha. Jaise hi andra ghusa vo mere samne aagyi.





Renu- key pls.




Main- ye lo.




Renu- to kaisa tha aaj ka din.




Main- hmmm thik hi tha.





Renu- or meri car.





Main- ek no.






Renu- kal bhi jana chahoge isse.





Main- nahi mera man bhar gya aaj me hi.




Renu- kyu? Tumhe car chalane me maja nahi aaya kya.




Main- aaya na bahut maja aaya. Lekin vo kya hai. Ab ye tumhari car hai. Or agar galti se mujhse ye kahi thuk gyi to tum meri band Baja dogi. Or ye risk me nahi lena chahta. Isliye ab nahi chahiye. Me apni bike me hi kush hu.





Renu- soch lo baad me mujhse maangna mat.





Main- soch liya.




Renu- ok tumhari marji. Achha ab ye batao ki baat kuch aage badi.




Main- kisse.



Renu- daffer us ladki se jo tujhe msg karti hai.




Main- ohhh Prachi se.



Renu- ha usi se.




Main- kuch khass nahi. Abhi use sayad time lagega.





Renu- Abe gadhe ladkiya kabhi pehle prapose nahi karti hai.pehal tumhe hi karni padegi.




Main- aisa koi niyam hai kya.





Renu- kuch aisa hi samaj lo. Use sabse pehle tumhe hi prapose karna hoga. Tabhi baat aage badegi.





Main- me filhaal to aisa karne se raha. Lekin ha agar usne mujhe pehle bola to fir sochunga. Baki me to abhi nahi bolne wala.




Renu- fir to ho gya kalyan. Na vo kabhi pehle bolegi. Na tu. To fir baat aage kaise badegi. Nahi gol gol ghumti rahegi.





Main- vaise mujhe lagta hai vo hi mujhe pehle bolegi. Vo bhi jald hi.




Renu- or tujhe aisa Kyu lagta hai.




To fir maine aaj subah jo chirag- ne mujhe bataya tha nahi sab use dohra diya.jise sunne ke baad uske chehre per bhi hasi aagyi.





Renu- kya vo aisa keh rahi thi.




Main- ha jaha tak maine suna hai.




Renu- to to fir baat aage bad rahi hai. Or tera shak bhi sayad sahi ho jaye jaldi hi




Main- isiliye to me filhal wait hi kar raha hu. Baki aage dekhenge.




Renu- sahi hai karo wait. Lekin jyada mat karna. Verna pata chala ki vo tumhara wait kar rahi hai or tum uska. Or baji koi teesra maar le jaye.




Main- theek hai yaad rakhunga. Filhaal mujhe fresh hona hai baki baad me sochenge.




Renu- theek hai.




Uske baad me apne kamre me Chala gya. Badiya fresh hua kapde change kiye.or bahi kamre me baith gya. Or us Praveen ke ware me sochne laga.to khayal aaya ki unlogo ka pata lagaya jaye pehle.




To me neeche turant hi dhyan me baith gya. Or jab thirdeye khuli to Maine un logo ko dhundne ko kaha. Or fir suru hua safar. Thoda samay me peeche Jane ka.meri aankh mujhe sab dikha rahi thi. Ki kab ye yaha aaye or uske baad inhone kya kya kiya. Mujhe ab pata chal gya tha ki ye total 4 log hai. Or Charo ne alag alag rup rakha hua hai. Lekin inke dimaag me kya chal raha hai ye me nahi jaan pa raha tha. Lekin mujhe itna andaja ho gya tha ki inko sayad mere uper sandeh ho gya hai. Or inki agli chal usi per aadharit hogi. Or sabse jaruri. Baat mujhe ye pata chal gyi ki in charo detyo ne un charo insano ko satpuda ke ghane jungalo me ek gufa me chhipa rakha hai. Ab ye detya the to itna confirm tha ki ye gufa jitni simple dikh rahi hai utni hogi nahi. Jarur kuch tagdi maya bichha rakhi hogi unhone baha per. Taki koi bhi andar na ja paye. Or agar jaye to bapis na aa paye. Ab ye sab to mujhe nahi jakar pata chalega. Isliye maine socha ki raat me sab ke sone ke baad hi baha jaounga. Lekin jau kaise. Ha BAYU mujhe baha tak le jayegi. Vo bhi jaldi se jaldi. Ya fir shayad kisi or shakti ka istemal karna padega. Dekhnge tabhi.



Ye sochkar maine apana dhyan band kiya or apni aankhe khol kar baith gya. Maine Google per is gufa ki location dhundne ki kosis ki to exact to nahi lekin mota moti tour per usne Bata diya ki mere ghar se vo jagah karib 1300 km. Door tha. Ab agar kisi or bahan se jau to bahut time lagega. Or utna time hai nahi. Kyuki agar unko bhanak lagi to vo unko maar bhi sakte hai.




Uske baad maine neeche gya. Jaha dinner ki tayyariya chal rahi thi.




Main- or dadu kaisa raha aaj ka din.





Dadu- badiya. Tu bata




Main- badiya hi tha. Baise Renu tum logo ko kab Jana hai delhi






Renu- 3 din baad jayenge ham. Hamari chhutiya khatm ho jayengi us din. Agle din se clg Jana padega hame.





Main- (man me) matlab 3 din hai un logo ko chhudane ke liye or un detyo ko marne ke liye. Hmmm jaldi hi sab karna padega.






Surbhi- kya soch rahe ho.





Main- Bas yahi ki mujhe kitne din ki chhutiy leni padegi. Kyuki mama or Mami itni jaldi mujhe aane nahi denge






Surbhi- vo kya me bhi nahi aane dungi. Kamse kam 1 week Tak rukna padega. Verna mujhse bura koi nahi hoga tumhare liye.






Main- iske bare me mom or dadu se permission le lo. Agar unhone kaha to reh jaunga. Verna next flight se bapis.






Surbhi- aise kaise bapis. Me nahi aane dungi. Tumhe ek kamre me band kar dungi. Or rahi baat permission ki to vo me le lungi. Tum uski fikr na karo.






Main- theek hai fir mujhe kya dikkat. Lekin is pore hafte tumhe mere sath rehna hoga or mujhe dekhi ghumana hoga.






Renu- sirf surbhi se hi keh rahe ho. Me bhi ghuma sakti hu tumhe.






Main- tumhara bharosa nahi. Mujhe kahi per chhod kar bhag gyi to me ghar kaise bapis aaunga.







Renu- kho jane ke liye tu koi chhota bachha hai kya. Bada aaya. Or ab tune ye kaha hi hai to pakka me tujhe kisi jagah per chhod ke aajaungi.






Surbhi- theek hai tu use chhod dena. Dev me tumhare sath hi rahungi to tumhe me bapis le aaungi.





Main- bas isiliye maine tumse kaha tha. Khair ab chhodo ye sab. Mom bhook lagi hai. Jaldi khana dedo. Mujhe padna bhi hai fir.





Mom- bas 5 min. Or wait karo beta la rahi hu.





Main- ok mom.




Hamne thodi der ke gappe Mari uske baad mom ne ham sabhi ko khana parosa or maine bharpur khana khaya or uske baad me sabko goodnight bolke kamre me ghus gaya.



Raat ke 11 baje tak thodi padai ki. Or fir ek round neeche ka lagaya ye dekhne ki sab so gye ya nahi. Jab confirm ho gya tab bapis se me apne kamre me aaya. Or dhyan lagaya. Or jaise hi eye open Hui use Maine usi gufa tak mujhe le jane ko kaha pore sarir ke sath. Or ye kehte hi. Baha kya hua kuch pata nahi. Bas 1 min. Baad mujhe aankhe kholne ki aawaj aai. Maine aankhe kholi to me jungle me tha. Ye bahi jungle tha jaha un logo ko chhipa Kar rakha hua hai. Lekin mujhe vo gufa nahi dikh rahi thi. To main us gufa take pahuchne ka rasta yaad karne laga. Maine aaspass dekha to mujhe kuch ped jane pehchane lage. To main usi disha me aage badhne laga. Jaise jaise aage bad raha tha mera rasta clear hota ja raha tha. Mujhe yaad aaraha tha ki kaha mudna hai or kaha seedhe Jana hai. Pore jungle me is waqt sirf mere kadmo ki aawaj aarahi thi or kuch keedo makodo ki. Or kuch frogs ki. Jisse lag raha tha ki aaspass koi nadi ya talab hai.lekin mujhe baha nahi jana tha.me charo taraf dekh kar chal raha tha. Kyuki mujhe aabhas ho raha tha ki ye jitna simple lag raha hai utna hoga nahi. Sabhi taraf dekhte dekhte me akhir kaar pahuch hi gya gufa Tak. Charo taraf ghani jhadiyo ki bajah se iska darwaja puri tarah se band tha. Kisi ko bhi ye gufa din ke ujale me bhi na dikhe fir to ye raat thi. Lekin me apni thirdeye se ise dekh chuka tha isliye mujhe ye mil gyi. Ab sawal ye tha ki andar kaise jau. Or andar kya kya khatra ho sakta hai. Ab yaha se me aise sadharan insan ki tarah aage nahi bad paunga ye me janta tha. Isliye ab yaha se mujhe meri shaktiyo ka istemaal karna hoga. Isliye maine apne hath jode. Apni aankho ko band kiya or man me OM NAMAH SHIVAY ka jaap kiya.or thodi hi der me jab meri aankhe khuli to mujhe aisa najara dekhne ko mil raha tha jaisa dekhna kisi bhi insan ke liye impossible tha. Mujhe jungle me mere aaspass moujood har ek jeev fir chahe vo chhota sa chhota keeda ho ya fir ek vishal ped ya jhadiya or kuch or. Mujhe sabhi ka aisa rup dikh raha tha ki me sabdo me varnan nahi kar sakta tha. Pedo ke andar se aisa divya pravah dikh raha tha. Ki kya batau. Unki jado se hota hua uper ki taraf ja raha tha or Charo taraf fail rahi thi. Ye oxygen thi. Jo pedo se kaise bahar nikalti hai mujhe saaf saaf dikh rahi thi. Aise hi sabhi jeevo ke andar is waqt kya ho raha hai vo me dekh pa raha tha. Kaise unka heart beat kar raha hai. Unke pet me kya hai. Sab kuch. Khair ye itna sundar lag raha tha ki me Bata nahi sakta tha. Lekin filhal ise dekhne ka waqt nahi tha mere pass. Isliye maine apne hatho ko un jhadiyo ki taraf Kiya or fir apne dono hatho ko kuch is prakar se alag disha me ghumaya. Or mere aisa karte hi samne ki sari jhadiya aaju baju me safal gyi. Or mujhe andar jane ka rasta mil gya. Main aage bada un jhadiyo ko paar karke me gufa ke darwaje ki taraf bada. Or jaise hi pass pahucha me bahi per ruk gya. Kyuki gufa ke muh per ek kavach banaya gya tha. Jisse Jo bhi takrata vo ya to mar jata ya fir kai ghanto ke liye behosh ho jata. Ab mujhe is kavach ko hatana tha. Lekin samaj me nahi aaraha tha ki ise hatau kaise. Tab maine apni aankhe band ki or thirdeye se ise todne ka upay manga. To unhone mujhe bataya ki is kavach ko keval bijli ke majbut prahaar se hi toda ja sakta tha. Ise todne ke liye mujhe utni hi bijli chahiye thi jitni swayam indra ke bajra ke ek prahaar me hoti hai.




Isliye maine apni aankho ko band hi rakha or aasman ki taraf apne dono hatho ko faila diya. Or aawahan Kiya bijli ka.



Mera aisa karte hi aasmaan me itne ghane baadal chh gye ki chanda mama to pori tarah se chhip gye. Or jungle me Charo taraf itna Ghana andhera chha gya ki apne khud ke hath bhi na dikhe. Kuch or dikhna to door ki baat thi. Mere lagatar aawahan se itni bhayanak bijli seedhe mere hatho me aane lagi. Karib 2 min. Tak lagataar aasman se kadakti bijli seedhe mere hatho me jane lagi. Or jab mujhe laga ki ab paryapt ho gyi hai to maine apni aankhe kholi or apne dono hatho ko seedha gufa ke muh ke andar daal diya. Ab gufa ke muh per kavach tha or mere hatho me bijli. Jaise hi mere hath us adrishya kavach se takraye. Mere hatho se bijli nikal kar seedhe us kavach per failne lagi or vo kavach ab khuli aankho se bhi dekha ja sakta tha. Jaise hi bijli ne pore kavach ko cover kar liya. Usi ke agle pal is kavach ka pori tarah se vinash ho gya. Or gufa ka darwaja ab khul chuka tha. Main der na karte hue andar chala gya.andar bahut andhera tha lekin meri aankhe is andhere me bhi sahi se dekh pa rahi thi. Mujhe pata tha ye gufa kafi lumbi hai. Or iske ant me hi vo log hai. Isliye me jaldi jaldi iske aakhiri kone Tak jane ki kosis karne laga. Mujhe karib 20 min. Lag gye iske chhor Tak pahuchne me. Or is beech gumraah karne ke liye kuch or jaal bhi bicha rakhe the unlogo ne lekin meri thirdeye ne mujhe pehle hi iska sahi rasta Bata diya tha isliye me Bina kisi sankoch ke aage badta gya. Or pahuch gya.




Baha pahuch kar maine dekha ki Charo log aise hi neeche baithe hue hai. Charo ki aankhe khuli hui hai. Or Charo sunya ko nihaar rahe hai. Unhe kisi bhi baat ma koi hosh nahi tha.ve kaha hai kya kar rahe hai kuch nahi. Unke Charo taraf kuch keede makode bhi ghum rahe the. Or unke liye to ye Charo kisi bhojan se kam nahi the. Chintiya jagah jagah inme chipki Hui thi. Makdi ne inhen apne jaal me fasa rakha tha.



Ab mujhe inka ye bhram door karna tha. Isliye pehle maine dekha ki ye kya soch rahe hai. Inke dimaag me akhir chal kya raha hai.



Maine thoda dhyan se ek ek karke charo ke dimaag ka nirikshan kiya to paya ki inke dimaag ki gati ruki hui hai. In charo ka dimaag bilkul isthir tha jo ki tabhi hota hai jab insan mar chuka hota hai. Kintu ye log jeevit the. Inke uper kisi mayabi shakti ka prayog kiya gya tha. Ye to me janta tha. Ab is Maya ko kaise hatau ye sochna tha. Inki kisi jhatke ki jarurat thi. Jisse sayad Inka dimaag reset ho jaye or fir se kaam karne lage. Isliye maine apne ek hath ko aage Kiya or fir se bijli ka aavahan Kiya. Thodi hi der me mere hatho me chhoti chhoti fuljhadi si jalne lagi. Fir Maine apna hath unke sir ke uper rakha or jor se dava liya. Or uske baad mere hath me Jo phuljhadi jal rahi thi unhe Maine dheere dheere pehle ke dimaag me chhodna start Kiya. Ab thi to bijli hi. Jab aam insan ko bijli chhuti hai to jhatka to lagta hi hai. Isiliye maine kam se kam matra me bijli ka aavahan Kiya tha. Jaise hi bijli uske dimaag me gusi. Uska pora sarir hilne laga. Or use behatreen jhatka lagna start ho gya. Vo baithe baithe hi dance sa karne laga tha. Or me ektak uski aankho ko dekh raha tha. Tabhi mujhe ehsas hua ki uski aankho ki putliyo ne thodi harkat ki hai. Jisse me samaj gya ki iska dimaag reset ho gya hai. Isliye maine turant hi apna hath uske sir se hata liya. Or mere hath hatate hi ye banda nahi per gir pada. Or uski aankhe puri tarah se band ho gyi. Maine turant hi uski saase check ki to vo chal rahi thi. Meri aankho ne mujhe uska heart dikhaya Jo ek dum se beat karne laga tha. Uske sare system theek tarah se ab kaam karne lage the. Lekin filhaal ye behosh hi rahe to behtar tha. Fir maine aisi hi karke baki teeno ko bhi bijli ke jhatke diye. Or jab mujhe laga ki ha inme koi movement hue hai to maine apna hath hata liya. Or uske baad vo Charo hi baha per behosh ho gye. Ab inko kandhe per utha kar le jana tha mujhe. Isliye maine 2 bando ko ek taraf or baki ke 2 ko dusri taraf kandho per tang liya. Halaki ye bahut muskil tha. Lekin ab itni mehnat to karni hi padegi. Unko tangne ke baad me bahar ki taraf chal pada or same bahi 30 min. Me main gufa se bahar nikal gya.



Bahar nikalte hi Maine Charo ko neeche patak diya. Or unke sarir ko thodi khuli hawa lagne lagi. Jisse unme fir se movement hui. Sayad unhe thand lag rahi thi.



Ab mere samne ye problem thi ki inko me le kaha jau. Kyuki agar ghar le gya to vo detya inhe fir se kahi or bhej denge. Jab tak vo Charo detya mare nahi jate tab tak mujhe in charo ko kahi chhipana tha. Taki ye baha per surakshit reh sake. Or ye bhi dhyan rakhna tha ki ye behosh hi rahe to badiya tha. Jiske liye maine inke dimaag me ye daal diya ki agle 2 dino tak keval or keval raat hi rehne wali hai. Isliye keval sote rehna hai. Uthna nahi hai. Jaise hi inke dimaag ko ye order mila usne baisa hi kiya or in charo ko 2 din ke liye gehri neend me sula diya. Chalo ab ek kaam to ho gya. Ab inko leke kaha jau. Tabhi mujhe ek jagah ki yaad aai. Ye jagah kahi or nahi mere ghar me hi thi. Jaha kabhi koi nahi jata hai. Salo se baha per koi saaf safai karne bhi nahi gya tha. Ye jagah thi hamare ghar ke underground me bane kamro ki jaha ab keval store room hi bana hua tha. Or Ghar ka kafi saaman baha per pada hua tha. Mujhe bo jagah inke liye theek lagi.



To maine fir se apni aankhe band ki or un charo ka hath pakad liya. Or fir se mujhe ghar me theek usi tehkhane me leJane ko kaha. Or agle hi pal jab maine aankhe kholi to me neeche moujood kamro me se ek kamre me moujood tha. Lekin baha per bahut gandigi thi. Matlab kafi dhool or makdi ke jale. To maine jaldi se mind me is kamre ko pora clean karne ko kaha or uske turant baad mer ishare per pora kamra chutkiyo me saaf ho gya. Us kamre me 2 palang bhi Dale hue the. Jinper Maine do do ke jode me unhe lita diya. Or ab me tension free ho gya. Or uske baad me seedha apne kamre me pahuch gya.




Or seedha bister per late gya. Maine time dekha to abhi 1 bajne wala tha.




Maine socha un detyo ko dekha jaye ki vo abhi kya kar rahe hai.



Isliye maine apnk aankhe band ki or un charo detyo ke bare me socha. Or uske baad mujhe dikhe vo log sham se mujhe dikhana start Kiya tha eye ne. Ki unhone clg ke baad kya kya kiya.





Vo clg wala Praveen clg se seedha Ghar gya. Or vo police wala apni duty per hi raha or baki ke bhi apne ghar gye. Uske baad vo Charo karib 7 baje gharo se nikle or ek sunsan jagah per jama hue.




D2- tumhara shak sahi tha. Vo ladka sadharan nahi hai.




D4- tumhe ye kaise pata chala.




D2- me jab usse Mila to mujhe bhi baisa hi anubhav hua. Lekin bahut kam matra me. Then mere dimaag me kuch halchal Hui. Maine thoda dhyan diya to pata chala ki vo ladka mera dimaag padne ki kosis kar raha tha. Or is se me samaj gya ki vo sadharan nahi hai. Halaki na hi me uska dimaag pad paya or nahi vo mera. Lekin me Dave se keh sakta hu ki use bhi mujhper doubt ho gya hai. Or agar vo jyada hi shaktishali nikla to usne abhi tak ham Charo ka pata kar liya hoga






D1- ye to bahut chinta ki baat hai. Ab hame kya karna chahiye.





D3- mere khayal se ab samay barbaad karne se koi fayeda nahi hai. Hame us per seedha aatack karna chahiye.





D4- tum sahi keh rahe ho. Ab insano ke rup me rehne ka koi fayeda nahi hai. Ha agar use tum Lee shak nahi hota to alag baat thi lekin ab ham jitni der karenge vo utna hi hamse aage badta jayega






D2- me bhi tumhari bato se sehmat hu. Lekin hame us per hamla karne se pehle ye pata lagana hoga ki vo kitna shaktishali hai. Uske pass kon kon si shaktiya hai. Taki use harane me hame thodi madad mil sake.







D1- sahi kaha tumne. Lekin ham ye kare kaise.





D2- mere pass ek idea hai……………..
















To be countinue………………...
 

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अपडेट भाई। वेटिंग ईगरली।
वाह राहुल भैया बहुत सही जा रही है कहानी अपने गंतव्य की ओर
Superb Update Bro...
Waiting For Next
nice update bhai

Thanks Bhai log...........






apna sath banaye rakhe... Aaj ka update post kar diya hai.....ummid hai pasand aayega sabhi ko..........


and thanks gourav bhai... Badi der me aaye aap. Lekin aaye sahi yahi bahut hai....... Ab bas apna sath banaye rakhe . Taki ye aise hi aage badti rahi apne gantavya ki ore.....





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मस्त अपडेट भाई।
Bahtareen update bhai
बहुत ही खूबसूरत अपडेट भाई
Great update bhai
Awesome update
Ab ant karne ki baari h lakin kaise karega ki kisi ko pata na chale
Keep posting
Nice update
Very nice update
Waiting for next

thanks Bhai log. Aapna sath banaye rakhne ke liye..........





aaj ka UPDATE post kardiya hai. Ummid hai pasand aayega... Aab detyo or dev ke beech ke yudh ki shiruwat hone wali hai. Ab dekhna ye hai kiska palda bhari rahega....





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bahot ucch vichar hai Dev ke.....shandar update bhai
dekhte hai kya laksh hai Dev ke jeevan ka....shandar update bhai
to Dev ko apne lakshya ke bare me pataa chala ki use kya karna hai...
To Dev ke Guru Param Shivbhakt Parshuramji hi nikle jo sabse jyada jaldi Krodhit bhi ho jate hai....aur unhone apna Parsu Dev ko diya ...wow....bahot madadgar rahega ye Parsu daityo ke ant ke liye..
Lagta hai Dev ka love chapter bhi jaldi chalu ho jayega..
To akhir Daityo ko Dev ko ekdusre ke bare me pata chal.....ab action time aayega....
shandar update bhai :applause:

ha sakal Bro aapne sahi kaha ab action time suru hone wala hai. Ab dekhna ye hoga ki kiska palda bhari hoga. Nahi rahi baat love chapter ki to ha jald hi start hoga. Bas unhen thode se jhatke ki jarurat hai jo jald hi unko lagega. Ab kaise lagta hai ye dekhne wali baat hai.......






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