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Fantasy दिव्यास्त्र.[The power of five elements](action,advanture,fantasy,magic,thriller) ( Completed )

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UPDATE 53












Jaise taise raat nikal gyi. And next day apne routine se utha naha dhokar dhyan me baith gya. Or thodi hi der me gurudev aagye



Main- pranam gurudev.




Gurudev- vijayi bhav.vats.



Main- achha hua aap aagye gurudev me aapse baat karne hi Bala tha.




Gurudev- isiliye to aaya hu. Or usse pehle tumhe bahut bahut shabassi ki tumne mayasur jaise shaktishali asur ka ant kar diya.




Main- ye sab aapke aasirbaad ke kaaran hi sambhav hua hai guruvar. Lekin mujhe ek sandeh hai ki kya vo asli mayasur tha ya usi ka koi alag rup. Kyuki un asuro ki yojna ke hisaab se mujhe nahi lagta ki vo mayasur ko itni jaldi Marne denge.





Gurudev- bahut sahi prasn Kiya hai vats. Parantu unki yojna thodi ulti pad gyi. Kyuki Jo mara tha vo sach me mayasur hi tha. Unki yojna to yahi thi jaisi tumne abhi batai hai. Lekin usse pehle hi tumne mayasur ko dhundliya. Balki unki yojna ke anusar mayasur khud tumhare samne aane wala tha. Jo ki ek nakli mayasur hota. Lekin vo nakli mayasur aapata usse pehle hi tumne unki yojna per pani fer diya.unko thoda samay chahiye tha. In sab ke liye. Lekin tumne unhe bahi nahi diya. Sabse pehle tumne jaldi hi unke kavach ko tod diya. Jisse unki sari yojna dhari ki dhari reh gyi. Or fir mayasur ka pakda Jana unki dusri nakaamyabi thi. Lekin aakhiri daav me tumne unhe Charo khane chitt kar diya. Unke mayajaal ko bhi toda or unke sathiyo ko bhi bandi banaya Jo baad me chhut gye. Lekin uska koi afsos nahi. Or tumne apni budhi ka bakufi prayog kiya jo tumne unke mayajaal me apne ans ko bahar nahi nikala. Verna sab gadbad ho jati.




Main- gurudev unhe is baat ki jaankari kaise mili ki aap mere guru hai or me aapse kis tarah baate karta hu. Or unhone mere andar ise kaise kiya.





Gurudev- vats. Ye sab unhe kabhi pata nahi chalta. Lekin jab tum unke mayajaal me fase to sab kuch unke hisaab se hone laga. Vo jo chahte the vo kar rahe the. Tumne jab mera aawahan Kiya tab unhe pata chal gya. Or unhone fir aage ki yojna per karya kiya. Or meri aawaj me tumse baat ki. Lekin tum unki chaal ko samaj gye.us mayajaal me jo bhi tumne dekha or suna vo sab unki Maya ka hi prabah tha. Us jaal me tum jo bhi soch rahe the vo sab unhe pata tha. Or is bajah se unhe Aalia or Prachi dono ke bare me jaankari mil gyi hai.




Main- parantu gurudev mujhe is baat ka pata kyu nahi chala ki ye sab mujhe sun or samaj rahe hai.



Gurudev- kyuki baha ki nakaratmak urja tumhe aisa sochane per majbur kar rahi thi ki tum jo bhi kar rahe ho is bare me unhe koi jaankari nahi hai. Or usi urja ki bajah se tum ek pal ko apna ans bahar nikalne ke liye maan bhi gye the. Lekin tumhari teesri aankh me tumhe jaldi hi sachet kar diya or fir vo hua jiski ummid un asuro ko bhi nahi thi.




Main- aapne sahi kaha gurudev. Ab vo asur kafi kuch jaan gye hai. To isse hame koi khatra to nahi hai na.




Gurudev- nahi vats. Vo bhale hi jaan gye hai lekin kar kuch nahi sakte. Halaki kosis jarur karenge. Parantu unhe har baar haar hi milengi. Meri taraf to vo sabhi aayenge nahi. Baki bache tum or vo do Prachi or aalia. To bo aoni raksha karna janti hai.




Main- ab mujhe aage kya karna chahiye gurudev.




Gurudev- jald hi tumhe ek safar per nikalna hoga. Jiski manjil hogi vo dusra ans. Bas uske liye tum tayyar raho.




Main- kaha Jana hoga mujhe guruvar.



Gurudev- pata chal jayega. Thoda Dheeraj rakho. Ab apna Dhyan pura karo. Or ha Prachi ko bhi bol do ki subah subah dhyan lagaye. Jisse uski shaktiya or badegi. Or Bhavishya me vo shaktiya tumhare kaam aayegi. Usi tarah jis tarah kal aai thi.





Main- Jo aagya guruvar. Me use keh dunga.




Gurudev- Ayushman bhav vats.



Uske baad vo chale gye. Or me dhyan me baitha raha. Baki 2-3 ghante baad utha or fresh hoke ready hogya clg ke liye. Jaldi se nasta Kiya or nikal gya clg. Raste se chirag ko pick Kiya. Or ham nikal gye clg ke liye.




Chirag- Abe kal pata hai kya hua tha



Main- kya hua tha




Chirag- pata nahi yaar meri mom bahut hi ajeeb behave kar rahi thi. Mujhe or khud ko nuksan pahucha rahi thi. Mujhe saman fek fek kar maar rahi thi. Mujhe to kuch samaj me hi nahi aaraha tha. Maine tujhe phone kiya to kisi ne pick hi nahi kiya. Baad me jab me ghar se bahar nikala to charo taraf yahi mahila tha. Log ek dusre ko maar rahe khud ko noch rahe the. Aisa lag raha tha jaise unke sarir per kuch reng raha ho or vo use door bhaga rahe ho. Or khud bhi usse door bhag rahe ho. Lekin baha aisa kuch bhi nahi tha.




Ye sab sunke mera dimaag fat gya ki Prachi ne sabhi yaaddast nahi mitai.



Main- kya teri mom ko yad hai unhone kya kiya tha.




Chirag- yahi to sabse hairani ki baat hai. Vo ye sab karke behosh ho gyi or jab jagi to unhe kuch bhi yaad nahi tha ki unhone abhi kya kiya hai. Or yahi haal sabka tha. Kisi ko bhi kuch bhi yaad nahi tha. Me bhi behosh hua tha Lekin maine sab apni aankho se dekha tha isliye mujhe sab yaad bhi hai. Lekin ye sab me batau kise yahi samaj me nahi aaraha hai. Baise tu kya kehta hai. Mom ko kisi doctor ke pass le jau kya. Sayad unhe koi fobia ho gya ho.




Main- Abe aisa kuch karne ki jarurat nahi. Or Jara soch ki pura sehar agar aisa kar raha tha to usme teri mom ki kya galti.sayad koi gas bagera leak ho gyi hai. Jiska ye sab side effects ho. Or jab uska asar kam hua to sab theek ho gya ho. Mere ghar per aisa hi haal tha. Lekin baad me sab normal ho gya. Or kisi ko kuch yaad hi nahi tha. Isliye maine fir unse kuch bhi nahi kaha.




Chirag- lekin news me to kuch nahi aaya aisa




Main- sayad log dar na jaye iskiye news nahi dikhai hogi. Baki lagta hai ab sab theek hai.




Chirag- sayad tu theek keh raha hai. Aisa hi kuch hua hoga.



Main- ha or ab ye baat kisi se mat kehna. Verna log tujhe pagal samjhenge. Kyuki unhe to kuch yaad bhi nahi hai.




Chirag- already samaj chuke hai.meri mom or mere padosi.




Main- isiliye chup rehna. Jaldi hi iska pata chal jayega ki akhir ye sab kya tha. Or na bhi chale to bhi koi chinta ki baat nahi hai




Chirag- ha baise sabhi theek hai to koi chinta ki baat nahi hai. Lekin agar aisa fir hua to kya karenge.




Main- agar aisa fir hua to me khud CM ko kursi se utha kar yaha launga or unse hi ye sab puchhunga ki ye sab kya matter hai. Tab tak ke liye bhul jao sab. Theek hai.




Chirag- ok boss



Hamari inhi bato me clg aagya. Or me soch raha tha ki jis kavach ko maine chirag ke uper banaya tha usi ke asar ke bajah se Prachi ki shaktiyo ne chirag per kaam nahi kiya hoga. Iska matlab ye tha ki lucky ko bhi sab yaad hoga. Or mujhe uski yaad ko bhi palatna hoga. Isliye maine car me baithe baithe hi uski yado ko chirag se mila diya. Matlab ki jaisa is waqt chirag soch raha tha theek yahi sab vo soch raha tha. Yani ki ye koi gas leak ki bajah se hua tha or kisi ko iske bare me nahi batana hai kuch bhi. Khair ham clg pahuche to hame dono mil gye. Or lucky ki bato se hi me samaj gya ki ye baat ko samaj gya hai. Iske baad ham canteen me gye.


Baha per nasta karte hue gappe lada rahe the. Tabhi meri najar ek ladke per gyi Jo kafi chupchap baitha hua tha. Sayad kuch soch raha tha. Kafi paresan bhi tha. Ye ladka hamari class se nahi tha. Lekin paresan to tha. Isliye maine uski bato ko sunne ka faisla kiya or apni aankho ko band karke uske dimaag se jud gya. Or uski soch ko padne laga.




Ladka- ye sab kya ho raha hai.un logo ne mujhe dekha to nahi hoga na. Na hi dekha ho to badiya hai. Verna vo mujhe nahi chhodne wale. Lekin me kya karu. Kya police ko bata du. Sayad vo meri madad kar sake. Ha yahi sahi rahega. Mujhe police ko sab batana hi hoga. Ab bahi meri madad karenge. Verna agar un gundo ko mere bare me pata chala to sab bigad jayega. Lekin abhi unhe nahi pata hai or agar police me khabar ki to jarur unhe pata chal jayega mere bare me. Or fir bo mujhe nahi chhodenge. Hay bhagwan kya karu me. Kuch samaj me nahi aaraha hai.




Ye sab sunne ke baad mujhe mamla samaj me nahi aaya ki ye akhir kiski baat kar raha hai. Isliye maine uski yado me peeche gya. Or sab dekhne laga ki ye akhir kyu dar raha hai.


To maine dekha ki subah ke waqt ye jogging karne ja raha hai. Tabhi ise kisi ke chillane ki aawaj aati hai. To ye us taraf jata hai. Lekin chhipkar. To thoda aage jane ke baad ye dekhta hai ki 3 logo baha khade hue hai. Or unme se ek ne chaku ko ek aadmi ke seene me gused rakha hai. Or vo insan dard se tadap raha hai. Or ye sab dekhkar ye dar gya or foran hi baha se bhag aaya. Lekin uski aahat un logo ne sun li. Or vo baha se bahar nikle ise dekhne ke liye lekin unhe uski sirf peeth dikhi. Or uske baad unhone ek ko iske peeche bhej diya. Or baki ke dono ne us body ko bahi jungle me ek jagah per fek diya. Or bahar nikal aaye.

Or ab ye soch raha hai unhe iske bare me kuch pata nahi hai. Lekin unhe iski sari jaankari mil chuki hai or filhaal vo clg ke bahar iske liye setting bicha rahe hai. Taki lout te samay iska bhi game baja sake…


Ye me kaisi language ka istemaal kar raha hu ..


Ye sab bolke maine uski bato ko sunna band kiya or socha iske samne hi unki band bajani padegi taki uske andar ka dar door ho sake. Isliye maine bhi chhutti hone ka wait kiya. Vo log andar nahi aane wale the clg me. Kyuki unhe pata tha ki andar student hai teachers hai or unka daav unhi per bhari pad sakta hai. Vo jo bhi karenge vo bahar hi karenge.


Uske baad ham class me gye or bahi boring sa din nikalne laga. Bahi boring se lacture or baki sab. Lekin nikalna to tha hi.





Bahi dusri taraf Aalia jab apne ghar pahuchi to baha ka mahol dekh kar vo bilkul hairan thi. Use samaj me nahi aaraha tha ki ye sab kya hai. Khubsurat sa dikhne wala pari lok pura bikhra hua tha. Charo taraf hahakaar macha hua tha. Log bhag rahe the. Or kuch ajeeb se dikhne wale jaanvar baha per vichran kar rahe the. Or logo per hamla kar rahe the. Ye sab dekhkar Aalia bahut ghabra gyi. Lekin ab ghabrane ka samay nahi tha balki himmat dikhane ka samay tha isliye usne apni chhadi ko ghumaya or uske chhadi se tez roshni nikalne lagi. Or vo roshni jaise hi ek jeev se takrai vo bahi per jal kar khak me badal gya. Ye seen dekhkar Baki logo ne uper aasman ki taraf dekha to unhone Aalia ko baha paya. Jisse sabme ek naya utsah sa aagya or sabhi Aalia ki jay jay kaar karne lage. Lekin use ye kuch bhi samaj me nahi aaraha tha. Isliye vo jald jald se apne maa pita se milna chahti thi. Isliye vo baha sabhi ko chhod kar apne mehal ki taraf chali gyi. Jaha per darwaje per hi vo jeev khade hue the. Lekin vo us waqt keval 2 ho the. Isliye Aalia ne unper bhi bahi roshni feki or vo bhi jal kar rakh me badal gye. Uske baad vo andar gyi. Jaha ki haalat kharab thi. Sabhi log use theek karne me lage hue the. Vo seedhi ki darwar me jaha abhi darwar laga hua tha or baha ke mantri bagera sab soch vichar kar rahe the ki ye sab kya hai kyu. Tabhi Aalia ne apne pita ko aawaj lagai.jise sunkar uske pita apne singhasan se uth gye. Or unke chehre per kushi or hairani dono ke bhav the.


Vo uthkar doud kar apni beti ke pass aaye



Aalia- pita ji ye sab kya hai. Kisne hamla kiya hai hamper. Or hame bachane devta kyu nahi aaye. Devraj indra.kaha the.




Rajaji- putri ye kaalnemi ki sena hai. Usne hamper hamla kiya tha. Lekin ab bo ja chuka hai. Lekin uski sena yahi per hai. Or devta hamari madad nahi kar sakte. Kyuki kaalnemi ko koi vardan prapt hai. Jis bajah se vo devtao se jyada shaktishali hai. Or agar devta usse ladenge to sab haar jayenge. Isi liye ham paresan hai ki kya kare or kya nahi.




Aalia- lekin ye hamla hua kyu tha. Or ab bo kaha gya hai. Or uske ye sena yaha per kyu hai.




Rajaji- putri use pata nahi kis ne. Ye khabar de di hai ki hamare pass koi bahut hi shaktishali vastu hai. Or usne ye hamla usi vastu ko hathiyane ke liye kiya tha. Lekin jab use yaha kuch nahi mila tab vo yaha ki sari auraton ko apne sath le gya hai unka apaharan karke or usne hamse kaha hai ki 2 din me agar uski vo vastu hamne nahi di to vo ek ek karke sabko maar dega. Or usme tumhari maa bhi shamil hai.




Ye sab sunke Aalia ke pairo tale jameen hi khisak gyi. Use samaj me nahi aaya ki vo kya kahe. Vo ek dum se pathar ban gyi thi. Uski maa ke bare me sunkar. Tab uske pita ne use jor se hilaya to use hosh aaya



Aalia- lekin aap kuch kar kyu nahi rahe hai. Usper hamla kariye. Ham use parast karke sabhi ko bapis la sakte hai.




Rajaji- nahi putri han uska mukabla nahi kar sakte hai. Kyuki usne achanak hamla karke hamari sari sena ko samapt kar diya hai. Or ab jo bhi bache hai vo aam praja hai hamari. Or hamne usse mukabla karne ki kosis ki thi lekin uski shaktiyo ke aage hamari shaktiyo ki ek na chali or usne hame parast kar diya hai. Baise putri tum kaha per thi itne samay se.




Aalia- pitaji me prithvi per thi. Baha per vichran kar rahi thi me. Aabhi bapis aai hu. Or ye sab dekha maine. Lekin vo konsi shakti ki baat kar raha tha. Or hamare pass hai vo shakti aisi khabar use kisne di. Or aapne use samjhaya kyu nahi




Rajaji- hamne use bahut samjhane ki kosis ki lekin use laga ki ham usse jhut bol rahe hai taki vo shakti uske hath na lage. Or rahi baat us shakti ki to pata nahi vo konsi shakti ki baat kar raha tha. Bas Maine itna hi suna tha jo usne kaha tha ki usme is samast aakshganga or taramandal ki shakti bhari padi hai. Or han aisi kisi bhi shakti ko nahi jante hai. To han use vo de kaise. Or is mamle me Devta bhi hamari madad nahi kar pa rahe hai. Lekin unhone hame ek ishara kiya hai. Ki koi insan hai jo is bare me janta hai vahi hamari madad kar sakta hai. Lekin vo kon hai ye jane nahi pata hai. Ham bahut lachar hai. Ab tum hi hamari madad kar sakti ho putri. Kya tum aise kisi insan ko janti ho jisko uske bare me koi jaankari ho. Tum prithvi per ghi thi kya baha per tumhe aisa koi mila tha.



Ye sunte hi aalia ko turant hi dev ki yaad aagyi. Or use laga ki shayad vo insan dev hi ho. Or use ek bahi ek matra ummid dikhi uski maa or baki sabhi ko bachane ki.



Aalia- ha pitaji shayad me aise ek insan ko janti hu. Or me usse milkar bhi aai hu. Sayad bahi hai jiski tarah Devta ishara kar rahe ho. Parantu hame ye nahi pata hai ki use is bare me kuch pata hai ya nahi.




Rajaji- kya tum janti ho. Fir to bahi hoga. Or hame Yakeen hai ki use jarur is shakti ke bare me kuch na kuch jaankari to jarur hogi. Tum use le aao yaha per. Ab bahi hamari aakhiri ummid hai.




Aalia- theek hai pitaji ham jate hai uske pass or usse puchhte hai is bare me. Agar use is bare me kuch pata hoga to ham use yaha le aayenge.




Rajaji- vijayi bhav putri. Tab tak ham kuch or yojna banate hai usse nipatne ke liye. Taki agar hamare pass koi vikalp na bacha to hame kisi bhi tarah usse sabhi ko mukt karana hoga.



Aalia- theek hai pitaji.



Uske baad Aalia baha se bapis prithvi ke liye nikal gyi.














To be countinue………………..

 

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Superb update bhai. Gajab ki yojna banai thi asuron ne. Ab Alia bechari Dev se pyar kar baithi par kah nahin payi.prachi ko bhi shaktiyan mili hain jo baad kafi madad kar sakati hain.

Sahi kaha lekin inki jindagi aisi nahi chalne wali aage bahut musibate aayengi or inko sabhi ka datkar samna karna padega. Dekhte hai isme ye kis had tak kaamyab hote hai....




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bahot khub:perfect: sala Dev ko hi phasa liya tha Mayasur ko bakra bana ke...lekin Dev ne bhi sujbhuj se samasya ka nivaran kiya.
Mayaja sach me accha tha asuro ka lekin Dev ko rokne ke liye nakam tha.:bigboss1:
Alia bhi shayad Dev ke jindagi me jald hi aane wali hai :D:
shandar update bhai:applause:

Ha Bhai in teeno ki jindagi jud gayi hai ek dusre se. Kisi na kisi raste se teeno aapas me takrate hi rahenge. Or asur to hai hi. Baki dekhte hai ab kya karte hai asur. Dev ko rokne ke liye...




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Nice update
उत्तम अतिउत्तम
Superb , fantastic toh aakhir dev ne Divyastra k pahele ansh ko paa hi liya.....

awesome writing skill. :applause: :applause: :applause:
Ab dekhna hai ki Asur konsi nayi chal chalte hai.
Wonderful update brother
mast update sir jee
Nice update
Superb Update Bro...
Waiting For Next
Fantastic update
Sandarrrr update bhai

Thanks Bhai log apna sath banaye rakhne ke liye.......


aaj ka UPDATE post kar diya hai. Jisme aap janenge ki aage kya hota hai or vo dusra ans kaha hai. Or is tak kaise pahuchna hai. Janne ke liye sath bane rahe...




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Bhai aapka last update bhaut hi acha tha... Dev ki chalaki se Astra v Bach gya aur koi nuksaan v nahi hua... But ek doubt hai...ki unn asuro ko kaise pata chalta ki dev k gurudev swayam bhagwan parsuram ji hai aur unn asuro ne unki awaj mein dev se baat ki.... Iss scene ka abhi tak toh kahin koi update nahi hai jiss se asuro ko pata chalta ho ki dev k gurudev bhagwan parsuram ji hai.......

Ho sakta hai Maine kahin miss kar diya ho per doubt tha issiliye puch liya....

Bro aapka sawal sahi hai. Is ko Maine update me explain nahi kiya tha. Lekin is bale UPDATE me kar diya hai. Aap use dekhkar samaj jayenge ki ye sab kaise or kyu hua. Or iski jaankari un asuro ko kaise mili.




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Awesome update bhai keep posting
bahot khub..
Brilliant update writer sahab..... extraordinary :applause: :applause:
बहुत ही खूबसूरत अपडेट भाई
Boht khoob sala hero apna dimag boht hi zyada chalata ha tabhi to bach gya

Bhai dimaag nahi chalayega to mara hi jayega. Vo to chalana hi padega. Kyuki samne koi aam insan nahi saakshat asur hai or unki maya jiski bajah se achhe achho ki mati kharab ho jati hai. Or us maya se dev ko apna dimaag bhi sahi rakhna hai or uska sahi istemaal bhi karna hai..
Mast update h Bhai
Maza aa gya
Nice update
Awesome update

Thank everyone apna sath banaye rakhne ke liye....




aaj ka UPDATE post kar diya hai jisme aap janenge ki vo dusra and kaha hai or dev is tak kaise pahuchega. Ummid hai pasand aayega sabhi ko....





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