Fantasy दिव्यास्त्र.[The power of five elements](action,advanture,fantasy,magic,thriller) ( Completed )

[Rahul0087@]

Ek no update Rahul bhai , dimagi ghode daudata hamara apna deven abhi tak bilkul sahi ja rha hai.jesa gurudev ne kaha ki tum shaktiyo ke adheen nahi balki sakriya tumhare adheen hai, is baat ko sach kerne ka samay aa gaya hai . Aur pichle 3 update se me Gaur ker rha hu ki commissioner saab ki ladli bitiya Prachi kafi mature ho gyi hai aur baato ko samazne lagi hai jo ki sahi me bahut accha laga, ye shayed sangat ka asar hai . Wahi Aaliya bhi tan man se deven ki madad ko tatpar hai , ye deven ka Ahsan chukana bhi ho sakta hai aur aesa bhi lagta hi uske man me ek soft corner hai apne hero ke liye magar wo jahir nahi ker pa rhi , wese inka Milan kerwa sakte hai bhai ,kyu ki rani pari ne ek baar kaha tha ki Aaliya aur pariyo jesi nahi hai wo alag hai ,shayed deven ya fir kahe Divyastra dharak ki madad kerne ke liye hi uska janm hua hai. Dekhte hai lekhak mahodaya ki kalam aage kya kya jadu bikherti hai ?????

Aapne sahi kaha ab dimagi ghode daudane ka hi samay hai. Or hero APNA ye kaam bhi bakhubi kar raha hai. Baki rahi baat aalia ki to jald hi is baat ka faisala ho jayega ki aalia ka future kya hai. Kya vo next heroine banegi ya fir bapis chali jayegi. And rahi baat prachi ki to. Use ab ehsas ho gya hai. Ki samjhdari se kaam lena padega. Or uske pass jo powers hai unse uske dimaag ke kafi dheele screw ko kas diya hai. Jis bajah se vo ab befaltu ke kaam nahi karti. Lekin jo birth swabhav hota hai vo kabhi nahi badalta hai. Baki ab dekhte hai ki dev kaise apni dono behno ko bachata hai.....







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[Rahul0087@]

UPDATE 69













me kafi confuse tha ki ye sab akhir ho kya raha hai. Or aalia ki baat se to confusion or bad gyi thi.



Aalia- kya soch rahe ho




Main- yahi ki jara tum batao ki tumhare pass kafi shaktiya hai or aise me tum apne kisi dushman ko kidnape karte ho. To kya tum aise hi itne sare sabut chhodte hue aage badoge. Balki jadu se ek hi jhatke me kahi gayab ho jaoge. Ye sab ka jhanjhat Kyu karoge.




Aalia ne meri baat suni or samjhi.



Aalia- tumhara kehna sahi hai. Agar ye asur hai to aise gadi me Kyu bhag rahe hai. Ye to jadu se kahi bhi ja sakte hai na.




Main- me bhi yahi keh raha hu. Pichhli baar kuch asuro ne Prachi ko kidnape Kiya tha.bahut buri tarah se. use jadu se daraya or use fir gayab karke vo aisi jagah le gye Jo thi prithvi per hi lekin us koi dekh nahi sakta. Or uske baad unhone mujhe chunoti di ki use bachana hai to ans unke hawale kar du. Lekin Prachi ne mujhe aawaj di jis bajah se me us Tak pahuch gya. Or use kisi tarah bacha liya. Lekin is baar sab alag ho raha hai. Ye agar asur hai to insano ki tarah kaam kyu kar rhe hai. Mujhe bas yahi baat paresan kar rahi hai.





Aalia- me tumhari haalat samjh sakti hu. Lekin tumhe aise himmat nahi haarna chahiye. Vo jo koi bhi ho. Fir chahe insan ya shaitan. Use uske Kiye ki saza tumhe deni hogi. Use jald se jald dhundna hoga.





Mujhe uski baat sahi lagi. Lekin kisi tarah me uski next chal ko samaj pata to inhe pakadne me aasani hoti. Lekin filhaal ek kaam tha jo jaruri tha. Isliye maine lagaya call comm ko.
Usne jald hi utha liya.



Comm- kya pata chala tumhe.




Main- usne dono toll nake cross kar liye hai. Or agar vo seedhe ja rahe hai to agle tak bhi pahuchne wale honge. Isliye me chahta hi ki aap teesre wale ko call karke use sari jaankari de do. Or unse kaho ko vo car agar gujre to use rokne ki kosis kare. Or ho sake to police walo ko bhi baha per khada kar do. Me unke peeche ja raha hu.





Comm- theek hai me unhe inform kar deta hu.



Main- aapko koi jaankari mili unki. Unke address per ya kahi or se.




Comm- vo address nakli hai. Or Jin ladko ki photos us club me dikhi thi. Unka koi record nahi mil raha hai. Clg ki friends se pata karne ki kosis ki to unhe bhi unko jaankari nahi hai. Yahi baat samaj me nahi aarahi hai ki inki jaanpehchan kaise hui hai un dono se.unke naam tak nahi pata chal pa rahe hai.






Main- aap lage rahiye. Me jata hu peeche. Baha inform kar dena sabko.



Comm- ha me abhi karta hu.



Maine phone kata.



Main- tum us car ko dhundne ki kosis karo. Photo hai na tumharr pass. Or ho sake to udd kar jao. Or tezi se.
Me car se hi aaunga.




Aalia- theek hai.


Aalia baha se udd gyi and Maine car ko bhagaya full speed me. Mujhe lagbhag 75 km ka rasta jald se jald paar karna tha. Like kuch hi Minto me. Meri aankhe road per har car ko pehchanne ki kosis kar rahi thi. Karib 3 min. Me main pahucha dusre wale toll ke pass. Baha Maine unse baat ki. Or fir car ko bhaga diya aage ki taraf. Agle 10 min. Se bhi kam me mujhe us toll tak pahuchna tha.isliye car udd rahi thi. Vo to achha hai ki petrol full tha Verna haalat kharab ho jani thi. KHair aadha rasta paar karne ke baad ek dhabe per mujhe bahi car dikhai di. Maine turant hi car ko slow Kiya or u turn leke peeche aaya. Kyuki speed me aage nikal gya tha me. Car ko aaram se dhabe per park Kiya or bahar nikla. Vo car mere samne khadi hui thi. Or uske andar filhaal koi nahi tha.keval dikki check karna baki tha. Me aaram se car ke peeche gya or dikki ko pakad kar jor se uper ki taraf kheech liya.uska lock toot gya or dikki khul gayi. And jaise hi andar najar mari to dikki khali thi. And ab mera bheja fir se fry ho gya. Kyuki ek yahi ummid thi ki sayad vo isi car me hai. Lekin nahi mili. Or isi frustration me maine dikki ko jor se patak diya. Or uski aawaj sunke sabki najar meri taraf aagyi. Jinme sayad is car ko jo le kar aaye the vo bhi shamil the. Or mujhe dekhte hi vo baha se bhagne ki kosis karne lage. Jise dekhkar mujhe shak hua ki. Ye mujhe jaante kaise hai. Lekin bhale hi vo bhage lekin mujhse jyada door nahi bhag sakte the.


Vo peeche ke raste se bhagne lage. Or me unke peeche. Jaldi hi main dono ke barabar per aagya. Or ek ek punch diya dono ke thobdo per. Dono gire neeche. Or me agla punch maarta usse pehle hi unhone bas bol diya.




Main- itni jaldi. Abhi to maine start kiya hai.




Ladka- ham sab batate haina. Maarne ko jarurat nahi hai.




Main- to bolo jaldi.




Ladka- sir hame kisi ne kaam sopa tha unse dosti karne ka or fir unhe baha se ek jagah per lane ka. Uske baad baha se vo undono ko le jate. Or yahi hua hai.




Main- kisne diya tha kaam.naam kya hai




Ladka- sir uska naam hai Sameer. Vo kon hai kya hai hame kuch nahi pata hai.




Main- mujhe kaise jaante ho.




Ladka- sir usne hame photos dikhai thi un dono ki jinme aap bhi the. Hamne unse puchha to unhone bataya ki aap unke Bhai ho.




Main- achhi kahani hai. Ab mujhe ye batao ki pehle or dusre toll per tum teen log the car me. Lekin abhi sirf 2 ho. Baki ka bacha hua vo kaha hai. Or mujhe pura yakeen hai ki dono usi ke pass hai.




Vo abhi kuch bolte usse pehle hi mere kano me kuch aawaj padi.




Ladka3- vo yaha hai. Chhod do dono ko. Verna tumhare liye achha nahi hoga.




Main- jara dikhao mujhe ki kaise mere liye achha nahi hoga.



Maine ye bola or achanak pata nahi kaha se mere charo taraf logo ki bheed si lag gyi. Sayad 30-40 log honge.




Main- kya ye rokenge mujhe.


Ladka3- ha rokenge. Ab faisala tumhe karna hai.




Main- vo me kar lunga lekin pehle ye batao ki tum ho kon. Kya tum sameer ho. Sirf ek baar confirm kar do





Ladka3- nahi me sameer nahi hu. Ha lekin uske kiye kaam jarur karta hu.




Main- kaisa kaam.





Ladka3- kya karoge jaankar.




Main- Jo karna hai vo me kar lunga. Filhaal mere sawalo ke jawab do. Or batao ki ye kon hai or isne meri behano ko kyu kidnape Kiya hai. Vo kya chahta hai.





Ladka3- sach kahu to uske bare me hame kuch nahi pata hai. Sivaay iske ki usne tumhari behano ko kidnape Kiya hai. Ab usne ye kyu kiya hai. Uski tumhare sath kya dushmani hai. Me nahi jaanta.





Main- theek hai to batao ki ye Sameer mahasay kaha milenge mujhe. Me khud hi puchh lunga usse.or meri behane kaha hai.






Ladka3- usi ke pass hai. Or delhi me vo unhe lekar chala gya or hame bhej diya is raste per. Ab kaha gya hai pata nahi.





Main- kaise gya hai vo. Kisi car me ya kisi or transport me. Uska no. Do mujhe.






Ladka3- nahi jaanta. Hamne use un dono ke sath delhi me hi ek jagah per chhoda tha. Or usme baad ham yaha aagye. Ab vo baha se kaha gya pata nahi.




Main- location do mujhe.




Maine use Mera no. Diya or usne mujhe vo location bhej di.





Main- ek baat batao tumne mujhe sari jaankari itni aasani se kyu de di. Kya ye bhi uske plan ka hissa tha.





Ladka3- bilkul theek pehchana tumne. Or usne khas ye kehne ko kaha hai ki tum baha akele jao.




Main- me akela hi jaunga. Lekin tum sab jaoge ab jail.




Maine ye kaha or Aalia ne aoni chhadi ghuma kar baha moujood sabhi ko behhosh kar diya. Aalia baha mujhse pehle pahuch chuki thi. Or maine use dekh liya tha. Or mera ishara milte hi usne bahi Kiya jisme vo maahir thi.uske baad maine lagaya phone.




Comm- ha bolo



Main- sir vo car or usme baithne wale teeno log mil chuke hai lekin unke pass vo dono nahi hai. Ye kisi chouthe aadmi ke liye kaam kar rahe the. Or vo dono usi ke pass hai. Aap in teeno ko ******** dhabe se uthva lo. Me uski talash me ja raha hu





Comm- ruko



Vo bas itna hi keh paye or maine phone last diya. Maine un teeno ko uthaya or unki car per patak diya.or dhabe bale ko bola ki police ke aane tak inhe yaha se jane mat dena. Vo samjhdaar tha meri baat samaj gya. Main baitha apni car me or aalia ko ishara kar diya. Vo chaki gyi baha ke liye. Or maine apni car ko bhaga diya fir se. Or karib 20 min. Me main pahuch gya usi location per. Delhi tak to jaldi aagya lekin andar rasta milna bahut muskil ho raha tha. Bahut hi chhoti galiya thi baha per. Lekin jaise taise pahuch gya. Baha pahuchkar dekha to ek building thi jo aadhi adhuri padi hui thi. Baha koi nahi rehta hai itna to me jaanta tha. Aalia- yaha pahuch chuki thi or usne pata laga liya ki vo konse floor per hai or dono kis floor per hai. Maine Aalia ko bheja un dono ko chhudane ke liye. Or me gya usse milne. Akhir pata to chale ki ye kya cheez hai.



Building ke 10th floor per vo tha or lagbhag 15th floor per vo dono thi. Or sabse maje ki baat ye thi ki ye building keval 8 floor ki thi. Khair Maine paidal seediya chadna suru kiya or uper Jane laga 10th floor per.kuch der me pahuch gya. Or jaise hi andar aaya mujhe aawaj aai.






Sameer- kya baat hai der se hi sahi kam se kam aato gye





Main- ha aato gya. Lekin mujhe samaj me nahi aaraha hai ki me yaha kaise pahucha. Mujhe yaha aane per majbur kyu kiya gya hai.






Sameer- ha samaj sakta hu tumhari manoisthiti. KHair tumhe tumhare sare jawab mil jayenge.





Main- yahi sabke liye achha hoga. To chalo batao ki tum kon ho or ye sab karne ke peeche kya maksad hai tumhara.






Sameer- baise tumhe kya lagta hai. Kon hu me.





Main- me apna dimaag kharch nahi karna chahta jab mere samne puri dictionary rakhi hui ho to. Isliye tum hi suru karo. Me bas yaha sunne aaya hu.





Sameer- badiya jawab diya. Lekin me tumhe kuch batau usse pehle me kuch Janna chahta hu.






Main- kya.




Sameer- yahi ki filhaal tum kaisa feel kar rahe ho. Tumhari shaktiya kamjor hai. Sabhi tum per ghat lagaye baithe hue hai. Or ye sab jaante hue bhi tumne is taraf bilkul bhi dhyan kyu nahi diya.





Ye sunke me chouka to lekin me ab mamle ko kuch kuch samajhne laga tha.






Sameer- kya soch rahe ho.




Main- yahi ki mere ware me itna sab jaante hue bhi tumne ye sab karne ki himmat ki. To jarur koi bahut badi bajah hogi. Verna koi pagal hi hoga jo ye sab karega. Or is douraan Mera bhi ek sawal hai ki. Itne sare loop hole kyu rakhe the. Isko thoda muskil bhi bana sakte the tum.







Sameer- ha tumne sahi kaha. Lekin tumhari asli muskil ab suru hone wali hai. Tumhe kya lagta hai. Jo pari uper unhe chhudane gyi hai. Kya vo aisa karne me saksham hai. Ya kahi aisa na ho jaye ki vo mere jaal me fas jaye. Kya tum use bacha sakte ho.






Ye sunke meri dhadkane badna suru ho gyi. Mere haavbhav badalne lage.





Main- me use to kisi na kisi tarah bacha hi lunga lekin mujhe ye samaj me nahi aaraha hai ki tumhe mujhse kin bachayega.





Sameer- tumhe bakai aisa lagta hai ki mujhe kisi ki madad ki jarurat padegi.






Main- sayad pad jaye.



Ye bolke maine ekdum se udte hue uske pass gya or ek powerfull punch uski maarne ka prayas kiya. Lekin jaise hi me use touch karne wala tha. Mere hath ko usne rok liya. Jise dekhkar me kafi hairan reh gya. Mujhe samaj nahi aaraha tha ki ye akhir hai kon.





Sameer- achha prayas tha. Ek baar fir se karo.



Usne ye bola or mujhe jhatke se thodi dur fek diya.




Main jaldi se khada hua.



Main- tumhe nahi lagta ki is ladai ko sirf hath or pair tak hi seemit rakhna chahiye. Or agar shakti ka prayog karna hai to abhi bol do.






Sameer- haaa idea achha hai. Me bhi yahi chahta hu. Isko aisa hi banate hai. Me bhi to dekhu ki tumhare andar aisi kya khas baat hai.






Main- theek hai jaisa tum kaho.

Maine uski taraf aage bada or vo meri taraf. Jaise hi ham pass pahuche usne mujhe ek jabardast punch jad diya. Mujhe pata bhi nahi chala ki kab mujhe ye laga. And me isse sambhalta usse pehle hi dusra or uske baad to lagataar mere uper punches ki barsaat hone lagi. Mere hath uske prahaaro ko rokne ki kosis kar rahe the lekin nahi vo mujhse jyada takatvar tha. Ya is waqt ho gya tha. Uske karib rehte hi mujhe solid instinct aagyi thi ki ye asur hi hai. Lekin konsa ye mujhe nahi pata tha. Mere pure chehre per lagataar hamla karne ke baad vo mujhse dur hat gya.



Sameer- kya hua dev. Tum to bakai me kafi kamjor pad gye ho. Mere in sadharan hamlo ko bhi nahi rok pa rahe ho. Kya ho gya hai tumhe.




Ye sunke mera dimaag satak raha tha. Lekin me jaanta tha ki ye samay gussa karne ka nahi balki dikhane ka hai.


Main apni haalat ko sahi karta hua fir se khada hua. Mera chehra kai jagah se kat gya tha. Khoon behne laga tha. Isliye khade hote hi maine dher sara thoka jisme 98% khoon shamil tha. Or me jaanta tha ki ye is samay jyada takatvar hai. Jiski dusri bajah ye thi ki me is waqt ek mayabi jagah per hi jo usne banai hai. Or iska prabhav mujhper jyada padega. Lekin maine bhi than liya tha ki ab chahe kuch bhi ho jaye iski band bajaye bina me yaha se hilne nahi wala.





Sameer- kya hua. Himmat nahi bachi kya. Khamakha hi log tumse darne lage hai. Lekin sachhai to ye hai ki tum is shakti ke kabil ho hi nahi. Or ab me tumhare liye ise aasan bana deta hu. Mujhe dono ans de do. Or apni jindagi ko aasan bana lo.tumhari bahne or tumhare baki parivar ke logo ki jaan bachalo. Kyuki is samay mere se balwan is pore sansar me koi nahi hai or me chahu to isi pal tumhara ant kar sakta hu.





Main- ek baar kosis karke to dekho ki aisa kar sakte ho ya nahi. Me jaanta hu ki tumhe vo ans chahiye. Lekin ye tumhari badkismati hai ki tum mujhe maar nahi sakte. Lekin ha mere parivar ko nuksan jarur pahuncha sakte ho. Mujhe todne ke liye. Or me bas itna hi kahunga ki tumhe jo sahi lage tum vo karlo. Lekin akhir me tumhare hath kuch nahi lagega. Chahe mere pure parivar ka ant kar do. Chahiye to is pure sansaar ka ant kar do. Lekin tum mujhse vo ans kabhi nahi le paoge. Tum mujhe kabhi bhi itna majbur nahi kar sakte ki me tumhe khud vo ans de du. Ab faisala tumhe karna hai.





Ye sunke uske chehre ke haavbhav puri tarah se badal gye. Use samaj nahi aaya ki ab aage vo kya kahe. Or isi confusion ka Maine uthaya fayeda. Or bijli ki tezi se uske thobde per ek chamakta punch jad diya. Vo gira neeche or uske baad vo sambhalta Main uchhal kar apne pure sarir ka bajan leke gira uske pet per. Or iska asar ye hua ki ham direct 10th se 9th floor per aagye. Uski haalat ab kharab hone lagi. Or maine bina koi mouka use diye uske hath ko majbuti se pakda or ghuma diya. Ek hi jhatke me uska hath toot gya.or fir maine baitha uske seene per or lagadiye uske uper punches ki jhadi. Mere punches bijli ki tezi se uspe hamla kar rahe the.uski aankh naak muh sab for diya maine.

Tabhi mere seene per ek sath do baar hue lato ke. Or me udta hua ek deewar se ja laga. Deewar tut kar bikher gayi and me patharo me dab gya.













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[Rahul0087@]

good update

Nice update

Awesome update bhai

awesome

Superb Update Bro...
Waiting For Next

Nice update bhai ???

Fantastic update bhai ji ab kya hoga dekhna parega

Thanks Bhai log apna sath banaye rakhne ke liye..........






Aaj ka UPDATE post kar diya hai. Ummid hai pasand aayega sabhi ko. Jisme dekhiye ki dev kaise apni bahno tak pahuchta hai or baha uske samne konsi nai musibat samne aati hai.....







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[Rahul0087@]

wese I think yeh akele dev ko hi nahin balki teenon ko saabit karna hai ki ki asli power insaan ki khud ki spirit yani uske deduction care love wisdom and determination mein hoti hai

Agar aapke kehne ko main sahi se samajh raha hoon toh ismein kisi mahashakti ka haath hai sadharan shaktiyon ka nahin ho sakti ismein

May be aisa ho sakta hai. Ya fir ye bas koi asur hi ho. Jo is baar koi nai yojna bana kar aaye ho. Lekin jo bhi hai iska khulasa next update me ho jayega.. and rahi baat teeno ki to ha teeno ko hi sabit karna hai ki unki main shakti ye hai ki vo ek achhe insan hai. Unke pass Jo power hai usse vo achhe nahi bane hai. Baki dekhte hai kya hota hai aage.......








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[Rahul0087@]

Nice update

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very nice update bhai maza aa gya ab dekhte hai ki aage kya hota hai

Behatareen update brother........

nice update

Nice update keep updating the contents

बहुत ही खूबसूरत अपडेट भाई

Awesome updates

Thanks Bhai log apna sath banaye rakhne ke liye .......





aaj ka UPDATE post kar diya hai. Ummid hai pasand aayega sabhi ko. Isme dekhiye ki dev apni bahno tak pahuch pata hai ya nahi. Or uske samne kon konsi musibate ab aati hai.







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[Raja thakur]

Awesome updates

 

[Rahul0087@]

Awesome dude is update me only brain use Kiya hai apne hero ne

Nice update

Awesome update bhai ????

Amazing update

Awesome

Thanks Bhai log apna sath banaye rakhne ke liye. ...




aaj ka UPDATE post kar diya hai. Ummid hai pasand aayega sabhi ko... Aaj dekhiye ki dev kaise pahuchta hai apni bahno tak or baha uska samna kisse hota hai. Or dev use harapayega ya nahi ye janne ke liye sath bane rahe ......






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Can someone tell how to delete my account

 

[Aj1980]

बहुत ही खूबसूरत अपडेट भाई

 

[Akil]

May be aisa ho sakta hai. Ya fir ye bas koi asur hi ho. Jo is baar koi nai yojna bana kar aaye ho. Lekin jo bhi hai iska khulasa next update me ho jayega.. and rahi baat teeno ki to ha teeno ko hi sabit karna hai ki unki main shakti ye hai ki vo ek achhe insan hai. Unke pass Jo power hai usse vo achhe nahi bane hai. Baki dekhte hai kya hota hai aage.......








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Aapka kehna bilkul thik hai bhai ki powers kisi ko achha ya bura nahin banaati alabatta jiske paas powers hon woh khud agar tan mann karam aur vachan se achchha ho toh woh powers achchhai ki Kehlayengi aur achchhai ko badhaane mein madad karengi aur agar woh khud bura ho toh uski sabhi powers kabhi na kabhi uska saath chhod hi dengi ?