Adultery प्यार या धोखा (Completed)

[Chutiyadr]

Tum ne abhi tak is Baat ka karan nahi diya hai ki purvi ne aisa kyun kaha tha ki wo yani rafik sach bol gaya hai

Jab tak tum is Baat ka sahi se jawab nahi dedete main yeh bilkul nahi kaha sakta ki kahani kaisi hai.

Aapko abhi bhi samjh nahi aaya mujhe laga last update pad kar ye clear ho jayega...
Purvi ne aisa isliye kaha kyoki use lag raha tha ki gourav use dhokha de raha hai...

 

[Chutiyadr]

bhai story to super suspense thriller rahi lekin kuch kasak si baki reh gayi

Mujhe bhi thodi kasak si baki lagi lekin thik hai jab story trak se hat jaati hai to use end kar dena hi sahi hota hai,warna jabardasti ka khichna ho jata hai...

 

[Reverse]

Jis hisab se first to second last update ki speed thi mujhe laga kuch aur updates bhi ayenge Lekin last update kuch lagraha jaise aap story ko jaldi khatam karna chahte the
Last update k bareme Aisa lagraha hai jaise ki ek script ho
Point to point jaise ki science k answer

Ist to 33rd update i can give 10 out of 10
Last update k not sure I am satisfied

 

[Reverse]

Aapko abhi bhi samjh nahi aaya mujhe laga last update pad kar ye clear ho jayega...
Purvi ne aisa isliye kaha kyoki use lag raha tha ki gourav use dhokha de raha hai...

Maine padha wo Dr
But aisa laga ki jaldbazi me the tum
Aisa koi explain karta hai kya
Jis Baat se y batangad hua uske liye 100 words aur aur answer 10 words

Ye toh pahli bar dekha hai maine question itna bada aur answer itna chota

 

[Reverse]

Koi nahi Dr
You are still good author
With excellent writing skills

Jaldi se nayi story chalu karna
Kyunki xforum pe jyada Stories achi nahi hai jo story lage except yours

 

[Naina]

Aapko abhi bhi samjh nahi aaya mujhe laga last update pad kar ye clear ho jayega...
Purvi ne aisa isliye kaha kyoki use lag raha tha ki gourav use dhokha de raha hai...

chunnilal ne jab dayan purvi ko bhadkaya gaurab ke khilaf .. tab.... hai na...

 

[Chutiyadr]

Maine padha wo Dr
But aisa laga ki jaldbazi me the tum
Aisa koi explain karta hai kya
Jis Baat se y batangad hua uske liye 100 words aur aur answer 10 words

Ye toh pahli bar dekha hai maine question itna bada aur answer itna chota

Ha actually main ise likhte likhte pak gaya tha,janha se shuru kiya wanha se bhi bhatak gaya tha ,isliye ek hi update me samet diya....Aur kuch update likhe ja sakte the but jaldi sametna sahi laga

 

[Chutiyadr]

Koi nahi Dr
You are still good author
With excellent writing skills

Jaldi se nayi story chalu karna
Kyunki xforum pe jyada Stories achi nahi hai jo story lage except yours

Dhanyawad dost...Ek story already running hai randi se pyar ,mere signature me link mil jayega padiye use achhi story ban rahi hai...

 

[Chutiyadr]

chunnilal ne jab dayan purvi ko bhadkaya gaurab ke khilaf .. tab.... hai na...

Ha uska explanation thoda aur details me ho sakta tha lekin maine jaldi se samet diya use...

 

[Reverse]

Dhanyawad dost...Ek story already running hai randi se pyar ,mere signature me link mil jayega padiye use achhi story ban rahi hai...

Agar tune use bhi aise khatam kiya toh mai xforum pe aane ka koi matlab nahi banta