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Adultery बीवी के आशिक(Completed)

Chutiyadr

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Shikari_golu said:
Bahut khoob bhai...

Jaisa ki kaha tha....mona randi hi nikli...

Dukh hai ki kahani puri ho gai...thoda aur kaarnaame hote to maza bad jata...

Well.....mere liye ye kahani lajawaab thi...ek lagaav tha..

But....

mona ko maaf kar ke kahani ki maa behan kar di yaar.....

Aur jo lagaav is kahani se tha...wo nafrat me badal gaya...now i hate this....

Good luck for new stories....
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Dhanyawad sikari bhai...
Kahani ka end mere hisaab se tha bro,main thode naram dil ka adami hu kisi ko bhi badi aasani se maaf kar deta hu,dusara mujhe khud par bahut jyada bharosha hai isliye main maaf karne ka khatra bhi asani se utha leta hu...
Lekin adhiktar logo ki soch aisi nahi hoti isliye ending pasand nahi aati ...
Ye ending bahut logo ko pasand nahi aayi thi so don't worry about it...:)
 
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Shikari_golu

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Chutiyadr said:
Dhanyawad sikari bhai...
Kahani ka end mere hisaab se tha bro,main thode naram dil ka adami hu kisi ko bhi badi aasani se maaf kar deta hu,dusara mujhe khud par bahut jyada bharosha hai isliye main maaf karne ka khatra bhi asani se utha leta hu...
Lekin adhiktar logo ki soch aisi nahi hoti isliye ending pasand nahi aati ...
Ye ending bahut logo ko pasand nahi aayi thi so don't worry about it...:)
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I m not worrying abt it...i m just express my feeling...

Aur bhai...soft heart wale galti maaf karte hai..main manta hu...par ye galti nhi thi...

Galti use kahte hai jo ek baar ho ya anjane me ho...

But iska ye roop to saadi ke pahle se tha...aur ek ke sath ho to bhi maan lu...ye saali to kaiyon kd sath soti rahi...to kya real life me aap aise kisi saksh ko maaf kar payge...mujhe nhi lagta...

Well..story aapki ...hum to bas padh rahe hai...baki story kamaal thi...great thought nd great writting skill...

 
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Shikari_golu said:
I m not worrying abt it...i m just express my feeling...

Aur bhai...soft heart wale galti maaf karte hai..main manta hu...par ye galti nhi thi...

Galti use kahte hai jo ek baar ho ya anjane me ho...

But iska ye roop to saadi ke pahle se tha...aur ek ke sath ho to bhi maan lu...ye saali to kaiyon kd sath soti rahi...to kya real life me aap aise kisi saksh ko maaf kar payge...mujhe nhi lagta...

Well..story aapki ...hum to bas padh rahe hai...baki story kamaal thi...great thought nd great writting skill...
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:thanks: bro ..:)
apni apni soch hoti hai dost ...aise sahi kaha ki wo galti nhi thi dhokha tha wo bhi bada wala , lekin ager abhi ne use maaf kiya hai to uske pichhe koi bada karn bhi to ho sakta hai na , jaise ager deep me dekho to wo janta tha ki mona kya kar rahi hai aur kya kar rahi hai fir bhi usne uska sath diya ..aur badhawa bhi diya ..
kyoki use kuch bada karna tha aur desh se niklna tha , yani usne bahut pahle se sab plan kiya tha ..
aur isliye last me maine un dono ko sath dikha diya ise ek tarh se aise dekhiye ki dono hi ek hi level ke log hai ..
aise ye apni apni soch hai ..
aur thanks ki aapko meri writng skill achhi lagi dusari stories me bhi padhariye, abhi ek new story running hai bhabhi maa , link mere signature me mil jayega , waha bhi padhariye
 
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brego4 said:
bhai dactar sahib agar har pati abhi jaisa dildaar ho jaye to duniya mein chinaal patniyo ki line hi lag jayegi :partyjump:
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sar wo story ke hisab se mujhe sahi lagi , sabhi story me aisa nahi ho sakta na hi asal jivan me ..
asal jivan me to abhi ko abdul maar kar hi fek deta , kon apne dushamn ko itane din tak jinda rakhta hai , ya fir abhi uska anconter kar deta :lol1:
 
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Chutiyadr said:
:thanks: bro ..:)
apni apni soch hoti hai dost ...aise sahi kaha ki wo galti nhi thi dhokha tha wo bhi bada wala , lekin ager abhi ne use maaf kiya hai to uske pichhe koi bada karn bhi to ho sakta hai na , jaise ager deep me dekho to wo janta tha ki mona kya kar rahi hai aur kya kar rahi hai fir bhi usne uska sath diya ..aur badhawa bhi diya ..
kyoki use kuch bada karna tha aur desh se niklna tha , yani usne bahut pahle se sab plan kiya tha ..
aur isliye last me maine un dono ko sath dikha diya ise ek tarh se aise dekhiye ki dono hi ek hi level ke log hai ..
aise ye apni apni soch hai ..
aur thanks ki aapko meri writng skill achhi lagi dusari stories me bhi padhariye, abhi ek new story running hai bhabhi maa , link mere signature me mil jayega , waha bhi padhariye
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Well...maine isi ans ki ummeed ki thi...ki abhi ne uska use kiya....chalo maan lete hai ki istemaal kiya...

But aap ye bhi to yaad rakhe ki abhi sirf use relation banane ko bolta tha...illigal kaam karne ko kabhi nhi...wo to abdul ke sath ladkiyon ko bhej kar dekh se jane wali hi thi...to clear hai ki use abhi se koi pyaar nhj rah gaya tha...

Well...ending aap likh chuke...story khatm...

So...no need for any furture discusdion abt the story...we should stop it..ok.

Ha..maine bhabhi wali kahani dekhi hai...ek din time nikaal kar paduga...

Ok...ho sake to isi tarah ki aur story likhe....

Thanks.....
 
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Amazing story dr sahab,
last mein story ne aapki har kahaani ki tarah 360° turn liya hai,
lekin mona ko abhi ne thodi si saza dekar hi maaf kar diya hai,
aur mona ne jaise abhi ko dhoka diya vaise hi use abdul se dhoka mila,
rohit ko bhi abhi ne mona ke changul se bacha liya,
aur sab logo ka reunion miami mein shandaar tha,
bahot hi shandaar ending hai dr sahab
 
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Shikari_golu said:
Well...maine isi ans ki ummeed ki thi...ki abhi ne uska use kiya....chalo maan lete hai ki istemaal kiya...

But aap ye bhi to yaad rakhe ki abhi sirf use relation banane ko bolta tha...illigal kaam karne ko kabhi nhi...wo to abdul ke sath ladkiyon ko bhej kar dekh se jane wali hi thi...to clear hai ki use abhi se koi pyaar nhj rah gaya tha...

Well...ending aap likh chuke...story khatm...

So...no need for any furture discusdion abt the story...we should stop it..ok.

Ha..maine bhabhi wali kahani dekhi hai...ek din time nikaal kar paduga...

Ok...ho sake to isi tarah ki aur story likhe....

Thanks.....
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inki sari stories isi tarah ki hoti hain................dhansu story ki chutiya ending :D
inke signature mein dekh ke padhte raho

lekin koi logical comment mat dena.................dr sahab chahe story se jyada page bhar dein .....clarification dekar
lekin apni bat ko hi sahi maneinge
:lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol:
 
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Chutiyadr

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Rahul said:
wonderfull story doctor bhai:applause:
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dhanwyad rahul bhai :)
 
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