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main apni bat sahi manta hu kyoki main writer huinki sari stories isi tarah ki hoti hain................dhansu story ki chutiya ending
inke signature mein dekh ke padhte raho
lekin koi logical comment mat dena.................dr sahab chahe story se jyada page bhar dein .....clarification dekar
lekin apni bat ko hi sahi maneinge
aur creator hamesha sahi hota hai , kyoki usne jo bhi banaya hai uske dimag ke hisab se to wo sahi hi hai na ..
ager main dikhata hu ki ek ladki pati ko dhokha deti hai , yanha tak ki dil tod kar jan se marne ki bhi koshis karti hai , lekin fir bhi apne pati se pyar karti hai to ye bhi sahi hoga..
kyoki aisa hota bhi hai ...aur ager wo pati sab jante hue bhi ladki se pyar kare to ye bhi sahi hai , na kare to ye bhi sahi hai , ager fir se apna le to ye bhi sahi hai aur dutkaar kar bhaga de to ye bhi sahi hoga..
kyoki jivan me sab kuch ho sakta hai .. dimag ka koi bharosha nahi ki wo kis chij ko sahi maan lega ...
isliye har tarh ka conclusion sahi hota hai ya ho sakta hai ....
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my new old story
Incest - जिम्मेदारी (कुछ नयी कुछ पुरानी) (Completed)
अध्याय 1 शांत माहोल इतना भयावक की डर ही लग जाये,मानसून की हलकी फुहारे,भीगे हुए लोगो की भीड़ और भीगे हुए नयन,शमसान की सी शांति में कुछ सिसकते बच्चे और बिच में पड़ी हुई दो लाशे,ये वीर ठाकुर और उनकी पत्नी की लाश थी जो एक सडक हादसे का शिकार हो गये थे,वीर ठाकुर पुरे इलाके के सबसे ताकतवर और रुशुखदार...
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Hello, Ladies  & Gentleman, 
We are so glad to Introduce Ultimate Story Contest of this year.
Jaise ki aap sabhi Jante Hain is baar Hum USC contest chala rahe hain aur Kuch Din pahle hi Humne Rules & Thread ka announce kar diya tha aur ab Ultimate Story Contest ka Entry Thread air kar diya hai jo 10th, June 2020, 11:59 PM ko close hoga.
Khair ab main point Par Aate Hain Jaisa ki entry thread aired ho chuka hai isliye aap Sabhi readers aur writers se Meri personally request hai ki is contest mein aap Jarur participate kare aur Apni kalpnao ko shabdon ka rasta dikha ke yaha pesh kare ho sakta hai log use pasand kare.
Aur Jo readers nahi likhna chahte wo bakiyo ki story padhke review de sakte hai mujhe bahut Khushi Hogi agar aap is contest mein participate lekar apni story likhenge to.
Ye aap Sabhi Ke liye ek bahut hi sunhara avsar hai isliye Aage Bade aur apni Kalpanao ko shabdon Mein likhkar Duniya Ko dikha De.
Ye ek short story contest hai jisme Minimum 800 words se maximum 6000 words tak allowed hai itne hi words mein apni story complete Karni Hogi, Aur ek hi post mein complete karna hai aur Entry Thread mein post karna hai.
I hope aap mujhe niraash nahi Karenge aur is contest Mein Jarur participate Lenge.
Rules Check Karne k Liye Ye Thread Use karein :- Rules And Queries Thread
Entry Post Karne k Liye Ye thread Use Karein :- Entry Thread
Reviews Post Karne K liye Ye thread Use karein :- Reviews Thread
On Behalf of Admin Team
Regards :- Xforum Staff..
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dhanywad dost
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dosto nayi story shuru kiya hu read it 
Incest - Shikari Ki Bimari
dosto bahut dino se is story ko shuru karne ki koshis kar raha tha lekin khud ya to busy tha ya to likhne ka man hi nahi tha .. ab jakar ye nayi story shuru kar raha hu .. ye ek incest story hogi , jisme thoda fantasy , romance , suspense aur thrill ka tadka hoga .. aage aap log padh kar samjh...
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Haan.. chaahe khalnaayika sau khoon kar de kahani mein phir bhi maaf.. hai naDhanyawad sikari bhai...
Kahani ka end mere hisaab se tha bro, main thode naram dil ka adami hu kisi ko bhi badi aasani se maaf kar deta hu,dusara mujhe khud par bahut jyada bharosha hai isliye main maaf karne ka khatra bhi asani se utha leta hu...
Lekin adhiktar logo ki soch aisi nahi hoti isliye ending pasand nahi aati ...
Ye ending bahut logo ko pasand nahi aayi thi so don't worry about it...
Yeh kyun nahi kahte aap, khud ki story heroine ki moh maya ki jaal mein fansh jaate hain..
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thats secretHaan.. chaahe khalnaayika sau khoon kar de kahani mein phir bhi maaf.. hai na
Yeh kyun nahi kahte aap, khud ki story heroine ki moh maya ki jaal mein fansh jaate hain..
Naina
Nain11ster creation... a monter in me
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Kahe ki secret... sabko pata hai... ju heroine se opss sorry vamp se lagaav sa kar baithte hai.. uski moh maya mein fanshke bechare dev vikas pe julm dhate haithats secret
