Adultery बीवी के कारनामे (Completed)

[Chutiyadr]

Kaajal ne Malina ko uske biological baap jo ki don tha us se badla lene ke liye bahut pehle se hi planning kar li thi, Kaajal ko ye bhi pata tha ki wo us Retired senior police officer ki patni se paida hui beti hai....... to Kaajal ne bahut hi chalaki se saari planning ko anjaam dete hue 1 teer se 2 shikaar kiye.

preeti ji agar aapko yaad ho to jab Kaajal undercover agent thi to usko police wale Mishra ke saamne hi Roberto ne Kaajal aur Neha ka rape kiya tha aur police ke aane se pehle hi bhaag nikla tha magar kaajal ne use wada kiya tha ki wo bhi us se apne rape ka badla legi aur saath hi Mishra se bhi revenge pura kar liya Malina ke through aur saath hi apne pati Vikas ji ko ek virjin aur dil ki sacchi ladki ka pyaar dilwaya..... kyon ki Kaajal ko is baat ka guilt tha ki usko uska pati Vikas itna pyaar karta hai aur usne uske past ke baare mein bina puche hi use accept kar liya tha... so Kaajal jo Physical aur emotional taur par Vikas ji ko nahi de paayi thi to usne uske badle mein Malina ko Vikas se milwa kar past ki saari kamiya puri kar di thi...

bhai aapne sach me ise gahrai se padha hai .......

 

[firefox420]

bhai firefox mere khayal se ap ki yahi id to xp par bhi thi na ...???
main apne kisi bhi readers ko kabhi nahi bhulata jo ki story par regular comment karta ho ,aur rahi dusare ki story ki bat to yar us story ka naam tah adbhut jaal ,aur badi hi achchi story thi wo ...bas ham dono writers ke bich misunderstanding ho gayi thi ,kyoki us bandhe ne mujhe thoda galt samjh liya aur maine use thoda jayda achcha samjh kar update likh diya tha
khair bad me hamari dosti bhi ho gayi thi aur unhone apni ek story ka squeal likhne ke bhi kaha tha lekin mujhe purani bat yad aa gai gayi aur maine payar se mana kar diya tha ...
aur aapne pyar aur dhokha kyo chhod diya hai use bhi pad hi lo complet to ho hi chuki hai wo bhi ,ha wo jyda majedar nahi hai lekin utani bhi buri nahi hai ........

Dr. saab aapki saari kahani hi jabardast hoti hai..... par har kahani ka ek alag pehlu hota hai... muzhe to waise bhi variety ke topics par padhna pasand hai.... bas 'pyaar aur dhoka' ke liye kisi din shubh muhrat dekh kar use bhi chaat dalunga...

Ji ha Dr. saab main khubsoorat dakait par bhi regular comments karta tha aur wahi se muzhe aapke talent ka pata chala tha.... Xossip par muzhe Aapka aur Anspandit bhai ka hi naam yaad hai aur xossip band hone ke baad muzhe afsos bhi hua tha aap logo se bichadne ka... magar XF par aap to mil gaye magar Anspandit bhai se mulakaat nahi ho payi... unki Laadla devar bhi acchi story thi, jo adhuri reh gayi thi.....

Muzhe ye bhi aabhas hai ki jab aapki story 'khubsoorat Dakait' xossip par beech mein hi ruk gayi thi to uske baad aapne yaha par dobara se use continue kiya tha magar jo flow story ka waha tha aur uski story line bhi wo sab Xf par dobara shuru karne ke baad usme change aa gaya tha... muzhe pura yakeen hai agar aapki story beech mein nahi rukti to wo aur bhi acchi likhi jaati aur lambi bhi chalti...

Bhai agar wo 'adhbhut jaal' wale writer aapke sampark mein hai to unko bhi bol do ki wo yaha apni story ko continue kare... wo bhi mast story thi... usme hero ki chachi ka hotel ke bathroom wala scene mast tha...

Anyway ye aapka thread hai to yaha to main aapko hi pareshaan karunga ..... he he

 

[Chutiyadr]

Dr. saab aapki saari kahani hi jabardast hoti hai..... par har kahani ka ek alag pehlu hota hai... muzhe to waise bhi variety ke topics par padhna pasand hai.... bas 'pyaar aur dhoka' ke liye kisi din shubh muhrat dekh kar use bhi chaat dalunga...

Ji ha Dr. saab main khubsoorat dakait par bhi regular comments karta tha aur wahi se muzhe aapke talent ka pata chala tha.... Xossip par muzhe Aapka aur Anspandit bhai ka hi naam yaad hai aur xossip band hone ke baad muzhe afsos bhi hua tha aap logo se bichadne ka... magar XF par aap to mil gaye magar Anspandit bhai se mulakaat nahi ho payi... unki Laadla devar bhi acchi story thi, jo adhuri reh gayi thi.....

Muzhe ye bhi aabhas hai ki jab aapki story 'khubsoorat Dakait' xossip par beech mein hi ruk gayi thi to uske baad aapne yaha par dobara se use continue kiya tha magar jo flow story ka waha tha aur uski story line bhi wo sab Xf par dobara shuru karne ke baad usme change aa gaya tha... muzhe pura yakeen hai agar aapki story beech mein nahi rukti to wo aur bhi acchi likhi jaati aur lambi bhi chalti...

Bhai agar wo 'adhbhut jaal' wale writer aapke sampark mein hai to unko bhi bol do ki wo yaha apni story ko continue kare... wo bhi mast story thi... usme hero ki chachi ka hotel ke bathroom wala scene mast tha...

Anyway ye aapka thread hai to yaha to main aapko hi pareshaan karunga ..... he he

wo writer mujhe ek dusare forum me mile the maine unhe yanha aane ko kaha tha lekin shayd unhone abhi likhna band kar diya hai ,adbhut jaal bhi complet nhi ki us forum me ,dekhta hu agar sampark ho paaye to,kyoki maine bhi wo forum chhod diya hai ...
aur pareshan karne ki kya bat hai yar aise bhi ye story complete ho chuki hai....

 

[Chutiyadr]

dosto apni purani story fir se shuru kar rha hu ...link niche hai ..
https://xforum.live/threads/रंडियो-का-घर.7438/

 

[Naina]

2017 se kuch sawal jo dil mein dabi huyi thi........... Kya mila Kajal ko.....
1.ek shidhe shadhe normal insaan bikas ko cuckold banake..
2. b**** banke.....
3.shaadi Suda jaisi pavitra bandhan pe daag lagake...
4. Dr chutiya ka baat sun, us pe amal karke..
5. ek bholi bhali ladki ki ijjat ko nestonaboot karke....
Bas jawab de dijiye....

 

[firefox420]

2017 se kuch sawal jo dil mein dabi huyi thi...........

pichle 2 - dhai saal se itna backup banane ki jarurat nahi thi .. aapka Naina Ji .. wo bhi Dr. saab ki story ke liye ...

Kya mila Kajal ko.....

first thing .. Dr. saab ki story mein kya aur kyu hota hai .. us par baat karna hee bekaar hai .. waise ye Dr. saab ki ab tak ki best work / story hai .. till date .. no question about it ...

1.ek shidhe shadhe normal insaan bikas ko cuckold banake..

Vikas simply apni wife ke pyaar mein andha tha .. so usko jo kuch bhi dikha aur dikhaya gaya .. usne wo sab apni wife ki khushi ke liye sahan kar liya ...

Kaajal bahut hi sundar ladki thi .. isi liye Vikas ne use dekhte hi pasand kar liya tha .. also she belongs to a rich and resourceful family .. well that's another thing .. but she was also beauty with brains .. aur ladko ko kya chahiye .. jab tak ki wo ladki ulta unko hi na ungli karne lag jaye .. well ye Dr. saab ki story hai to itna sab kuch to hona hi tha .. it's all predestined ...

3.shaadi Suda jaisi pavitra bandhan pe daag lagake...

and kaajal ne Vikas ko shuruaat mein hi hint de diya tha .. ki wo pehle bhi relationship mein reh chuki hai .. usne pehle hi Vikas ke saamne apni sacchai rakhni chahi taaki baad mein uska past jaan kar Vikas ki feelings hurt na ho .. magar Vikas ne bhi apni maturity dikhate hue .. usko uske present aur future basis par he apni wife banane ka faisla liya ...

2. b**** banke.....

aur agar aapne dhyaan diya ho to actually Kaajal ne fully kabhi bhi Vikas ko cheat nahi kiya .. ha time to time usne dusre logo ke saath flirt jarur kiya .. aur vo bhi is liye .. kyon ki usko pata tha .. ki uska husband .. ye sab teasing enjoy karta hai ...

4. Dr chutiya ka baat sun, us pe amal karke..

Well this is the most important factor of the story .. he (Chutiyadr) the most unwanted person .. every one hates him .. including readers, lead characters of the story, and he himself ...

but this is also the fact ki bina is Ch***ya ke story mein maza bhi nahi aata .. he is like namak (Salt) .. agar thoda jyaada ho jaaye to khaane (food) ka naash kar deta hai .. but agar na ho ya kum ho to maza bhi nahi aata ...

he is a emotional atyachaar .. jisko jhelna majboori hai .. ab has ke enjoy karo ya iske vipreet keelaste raho ...

5. ek bholi bhali ladki ki ijjat ko nestonaboot karke....

yaha par Kaajal ne bahut chalaki ke se kaam liya .. agar dekhya jaaye to .. usne ek teer se 2 nahi balke kayi shikaar kiye .. pehle to usne Malina ke do harami baapo se apne past ke liye badla liya .. Dusra usne apne dear loving pati ke liye ek sweet aur innocent + beautiful ladki se affair karwaya .. jo ki dono (Malina aur Vikas) ek dusre se pyaar karte the .. Kaajal ne na hi to Vikas ko andhere mein rakha aur na hi Malina ko .. Kyon ki dono ko he ek dusre ki situation ka pata tha .. and saath mein Malina ko bhi safe outlet mil gaya tha .. Vikas ke roop mein .. aur ek baat Kaajal ko hamesha ye feel hota tha ki wo apne Pati ko apna komarye (virginity) nahi de payi .. so apni guilt aur apne pyaar ki khaatir usne Vikas ji ko Malina se milwaya tha .. and one more thing Malina ko bhi apne dono baap se kind of nafrat thi .. becoz she never get to have a family love ...

this was the master stroke of the story ...

Bas jawab de dijiye....

iska jawaab ye kya denge .. inko aadhi cheezo ka pata hee nahi hota .. bhai saab ne 12 saal ki umar se hi kaand karne shuru kar diye the .. kyo wo pata nahi .. bas mann kiya .. kar liya .. wo bhi bina soche samjhe .. kya aur kyu ...

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[Naina]

pichle 2 - dhai saal se itna backup banane ki jarurat nahi thi .. aapka Naina Ji .. wo bhi Dr. saab ki story ke liye ...



first thing .. Dr. saab ki story mein kya aur kyu hota hai .. us par baat karna hee bekaar hai .. waise ye Dr. saab ki ab tak ki best work / story hai .. till date .. no question about it ...



Vikas simply apni wife ke pyaar mein andha tha .. so usko jo kuch bhi dikha aur dikhaya gaya .. usne wo sab apni wife ki khushi ke liye sahan kar liya ...

Kaajal bahut hi sundar ladki thi .. isi liye Vikas ne use dekhte hi pasand kar liya tha .. also she belongs to a rich and resourceful family .. well that's another thing .. but she was also beauty with brains .. aur ladko ko kya chahiye .. jab tak ki wo ladki ulta unko hi na ungli karne lag jaye .. well ye Dr. saab ki story hai to itna sab kuch to hona hi tha .. it's all predestined ...



and kaajal ne Vikas ko shuruaat mein hi hint de diya tha .. ki wo pehle bhi relationship mein reh chuki hai .. usne pehle hi Vikas ke saamne apni sacchai rakhni chahi taaki baad mein uska past jaan kar Vikas ki feelings hurt na ho .. magar Vikas ne bhi apni maturity dikhate hue .. usko uske present aur future basis par he apni wife banane ka faisla liya ...



aur agar aapne dhyaan diya ho to actually Kaajal ne fully kabhi bhi Vikas ko cheat nahi kiya .. ha time to time usne dusre logo ke saath flirt jarur kiya .. aur vo bhi is liye .. kyon ki usko pata tha .. ki uska husband .. ye sab teasing enjoy karta hai ...



Well this is the most important factor of the story .. he (Chutiyadr) the most unwanted person .. every one hates him .. including readers, lead characters of the story, and he himself ...

but this is also the fact ki bina is Ch***ya ke story mein maza bhi nahi aata .. he is like namak (Salt) .. agar thoda jyaada ho jaaye to khaane (food) ka naash kar deta hai .. but agar na ho ya kum ho to maza bhi nahi aata ...

he is a emotional atyachaar .. jisko jhelna majboori hai .. ab has ke enjoy karo ya iske vipreet keelaste raho ...



yaha par Kaajal ne bahut chalaki ke se kaam liya .. agar dekhya jaaye to .. usne ek teer se 2 nahi balke kayi shikaar kiye .. pehle to usne Malina ke do harami baapo se apne past ke liye badla liya .. Dusra usne apne dear loving pati ke liye ek sweet aur innocent + beautiful ladki se affair karwaya .. jo ki dono (Malina aur Vikas) ek dusre se pyaar karte the .. Kaajal ne na hi to Vikas ko andhere mein rakha aur na hi Malina ko .. Kyon ki dono ko he ek dusre ki situation ka pata tha .. and saath mein Malina ko bhi safe outlet mil gaya tha .. Vikas ke roop mein .. aur ek baat Kaajal ko hamesha ye feel hota tha ki wo apne Pati ko apna komarye (virginity) nahi de payi .. so apni guilt aur apne pyaar ki khaatir usne Vikas ji ko Malina se milwaya tha .. and one more thing Malina ko bhi apne dono baap se kind of nafrat thi .. becoz she never get to have a family love ...

this was the master stroke of the story ...



iska jawaab ye kya denge .. inko aadhi cheezo ka pata hee nahi hota .. bhai saab ne 12 saal ki umar se hi kaand karne shuru kar diye the .. kyo wo pata nahi .. bas mann kiya .. kar liya .. wo bhi bina soche samjhe .. kya aur kyu ...

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Alle aapne woh bataya hi nahi us kalmuhi kamini Kajal ko actually kya mila yeh sab karke .
Aur us Dr chunnilal ko kya mila .....

 

[Naina]

Pata nahin ye dr sahab hum readers ko aise situation pe dalte ki.... Jee kare unki hi gala daba du.... Haan nahi toh

 

[Naina]

pichle 2 - dhai saal se itna backup banane ki jarurat nahi thi .. aapka Naina Ji .. wo bhi Dr. saab ki story ke liye ...



first thing .. Dr. saab ki story mein kya aur kyu hota hai .. us par baat karna hee bekaar hai .. waise ye Dr. saab ki ab tak ki best work / story hai .. till date .. no question about it ...



Vikas simply apni wife ke pyaar mein andha tha .. so usko jo kuch bhi dikha aur dikhaya gaya .. usne wo sab apni wife ki khushi ke liye sahan kar liya ...

Kaajal bahut hi sundar ladki thi .. isi liye Vikas ne use dekhte hi pasand kar liya tha .. also she belongs to a rich and resourceful family .. well that's another thing .. but she was also beauty with brains .. aur ladko ko kya chahiye .. jab tak ki wo ladki ulta unko hi na ungli karne lag jaye .. well ye Dr. saab ki story hai to itna sab kuch to hona hi tha .. it's all predestined ...



and kaajal ne Vikas ko shuruaat mein hi hint de diya tha .. ki wo pehle bhi relationship mein reh chuki hai .. usne pehle hi Vikas ke saamne apni sacchai rakhni chahi taaki baad mein uska past jaan kar Vikas ki feelings hurt na ho .. magar Vikas ne bhi apni maturity dikhate hue .. usko uske present aur future basis par he apni wife banane ka faisla liya ...



aur agar aapne dhyaan diya ho to actually Kaajal ne fully kabhi bhi Vikas ko cheat nahi kiya .. ha time to time usne dusre logo ke saath flirt jarur kiya .. aur vo bhi is liye .. kyon ki usko pata tha .. ki uska husband .. ye sab teasing enjoy karta hai ...



Well this is the most important factor of the story .. he (Chutiyadr) the most unwanted person .. every one hates him .. including readers, lead characters of the story, and he himself ...

but this is also the fact ki bina is Ch***ya ke story mein maza bhi nahi aata .. he is like namak (Salt) .. agar thoda jyaada ho jaaye to khaane (food) ka naash kar deta hai .. but agar na ho ya kum ho to maza bhi nahi aata ...

he is a emotional atyachaar .. jisko jhelna majboori hai .. ab has ke enjoy karo ya iske vipreet keelaste raho ...



yaha par Kaajal ne bahut chalaki ke se kaam liya .. agar dekhya jaaye to .. usne ek teer se 2 nahi balke kayi shikaar kiye .. pehle to usne Malina ke do harami baapo se apne past ke liye badla liya .. Dusra usne apne dear loving pati ke liye ek sweet aur innocent + beautiful ladki se affair karwaya .. jo ki dono (Malina aur Vikas) ek dusre se pyaar karte the .. Kaajal ne na hi to Vikas ko andhere mein rakha aur na hi Malina ko .. Kyon ki dono ko he ek dusre ki situation ka pata tha .. and saath mein Malina ko bhi safe outlet mil gaya tha .. Vikas ke roop mein .. aur ek baat Kaajal ko hamesha ye feel hota tha ki wo apne Pati ko apna komarye (virginity) nahi de payi .. so apni guilt aur apne pyaar ki khaatir usne Vikas ji ko Malina se milwaya tha .. and one more thing Malina ko bhi apne dono baap se kind of nafrat thi .. becoz she never get to have a family love ...

this was the master stroke of the story ...



iska jawaab ye kya denge .. inko aadhi cheezo ka pata hee nahi hota .. bhai saab ne 12 saal ki umar se hi kaand karne shuru kar diye the .. kyo wo pata nahi .. bas mann kiya .. kar liya .. wo bhi bina soche samjhe .. kya aur kyu ...

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firefox420 ji aap boliye kya mila Kajal ko yeh sab karke

 

[firefox420]

Alle aapne woh bataya hi nahi us kalmuhi kamini Kajal ko actually kya mila yeh sab karke .
Aur us Dr chunnilal ko kya mila .....

well dr. chutiya actually Vikas ka friend tha .. jo ki Kaajal nahi jaanti thi .. wo ek tarah se Vikas ki madad kar raha tha .. kyon ki kameene dosto ki aadat hoti hai .. dost ke jale par namak chidakne ki .. ab doctor apne friend ki help bhi kar raha tha aur saath mein apni Dosti bhi .. wo alag baat hai ki uske help karne ka tareeka thoda ch***yo wala hai .. magar ise padh kar Readers ko .. khas kar likhne wale mahaCH***ya Dr. ko maza aata hai ...

aur kaajal ne ye sab isliye kiya tha .. kyon ki wo jab college mein padhti thi .. tab Mishra ne usko apne pyaar mein fasa kar undercover bana kar underworld ke don ke paas bheja tha .. aur waha par Malina ke biological father Robert ne Kaajal ka apne aadmiyo aur Malina ke mooh bole baap Mishra ke saamne hee kiya tha .. aur usko saath mein Robert ne sex ko psychologically badhane ka injection diya tha .. jiski wajah se Kaajal hamesha hi itna jyaada sexually frustrated rehti thi ...

so usne apna revenge lene ke liye ye sab kiya tha .. magar wo kabhi nahi chahti thi ki uska pati .. iss sab jhamele mein involve ho .. magar Vikas thehra saccha aashik .. to wo apni wife ko bachane ke liye .. doctor chutiya ki help li .. par dr. Chutiyadr thehra harami aadmi usne behti Ganga mein apne haath dho liye ...