Romance भंवर (पूर्ण)

[nain11ster]

Running Story....

Read The Fantasy Drama Menia
Kaisa Ye Ishq Hai~Ajab Sa Risk Hai~Reload


Real All My Completed Stories....

Enjoy The Emotions And Thriller Journey..
100 Encounter:- The Journey Of An Innocent Girl

Read The Thrill In Romance...
Bhanvar

Read Crazy Fantasy Romance Drama
Kaisa Ye Ishq Hai..... Ajab Sa Risk Hai....​

 

[nain11ster]

In the morning Apasyu is in full romantic mood, he has become even more naughty after the wedding is fixed. I am very happy to see both of them happy together. The scene of India Gate was very charming and amazing, I liked this way of expressing love. I am happy to see both of them happy after a long time.
Megha is coming to India, will enjoy on the pretext of work. Give both Pradeep and Guffy any work is always messed up. After the romance scene, suddenly the action scene, wow, now lets see what happens next.
As always the update was great, You are writing very well, Till then waiting for the next part of the story.
Thank You...
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Koi na aakash... Abhi to daur shuru hi hua hai... Action aur romance se aage ki puri kahani hai... So dhyan barkarar rakhiye ..


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[Samri]

बहुत ही जबरदस्त लेखन भाई...... रोंगटे खड़े कर देने वाले अपडेट.... शब्दों के माध्यम से सभी दृश्य दिमाग में फिल्म की तरह दिखाई देते है.... Keep it up Nain Bhai....??????

 

[nain11ster]

Now Apasyu also suddenly disappears like Nischal and kills enemies at full speed. But Apasyu's attention is always in the right place, how suddenly his attention has gone astray today. Amy is no less than anyone, she is beaten with a stick so terrible that the eater will always remember.
Well the target was Amy, now Apasyu took revenge in his style and I liked it. Shreya's condition was worth seeing, she was red with anger, yet her plan was successful, meaning Apasyu did it wrong.
As always the update was great, You are writing very well, Now let's see what happens next, Till then waiting for the next part of the story.
Thank You...
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Nischal ki tarah kahan gayab hua tha ... Likha to tha ek gadi ke piche se dusre wur fir teesre gadi tak chhipte huye pahuncha tha .. Khair

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[nain11ster]

बहुत ही जबरदस्त लेखन भाई...... रोंगटे खड़े कर देने वाले अपडेट.... शब्दों के माध्यम से सभी दृश्य दिमाग में फिल्म की तरह दिखाई देते है.... Keep it up Nain Bhai....??????

maza aa gaya aapke vichar sunkar .. it's like sweet

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[nain11ster]

Goosebumps update

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[nain11ster]

Nice update mitr.

Bemisaal update hai mitr.

Dard bhari dastan.

Nice update.

Drama queen le ke aayi hai ek aur update.

Jabardast update mitr.

Aap ka ati aabhar aur kahani ke prati Ruchi dil ko vibhor kar jati hai

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[nain11ster]

Dil kush kar diya update ne

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[nain11ster]

4 update please

Muh dho kar aao

 

[nain11ster]

Romance aur Action Se bhara behatarin update...
Pahle pradip apane sath le jana kucch Hajam nhi hua...
Dusra propose karna wo bhi us flower ko deke jo rare hai (aisa mera manana hai) jo ki ussi ashram ke pass milta hoga...
baki jo apasyu aur ami ke bich ki chemistry hai na wo alag hi level ki hai...
keep posting...

Pradeep ko sath le jane ka maksad bus itna tha ki apasyu bahut casual hai wo dikhana tha... Sath me wo din bhar kya karta hai wo bhi ... Dhima sur slow process but plan ka hissa..

Nahi wo flower kewal aashram ke pass nahi milta hai balki ... Naintal ke bahut se pahadiyo par mitla hoga na.. ..

Baki thanks aap ko romace pasand aaya ..

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[nain11ster]

aage kuch na kahuga is line ke bare me itna aaj padh liya fir aage ka kal

Wo kal aaj tak na aaya