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Romance भंवर (पूर्ण)

nain11ster

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Der aaye durust aaye.... gr8 job.
Malhotra ji aap ke comment padhkar aisa lage hai ... Mera boss mujhe target achieve karne par ek chhota line formality wala complimentary de raha hai..

Aise thode na hota hai sahab. .. maine great job diya hai to kam se kam kaisa raha job uski charcha to kat hi jaye :D
 

nain11ster

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1 sitting me sare update padhe hain nain bhai aur beech me comment karta to lay toot jati... Itne jabardast updates aur har update me itna jabardast imagination create ho rha tha dimag me ki comment karna to bhoola so bhoola ye bhi bhool gya ki barish me bahar sookh rhe kapde bhi utarne hain...... Mind ko jaam kar ke rakh diya aapne... Salute to you for such a mind blowing creation......
Kya baat hai samri bhai ... Koi naujhe update par one by one comment chahiye hoga to main main one by one update deta :D ... Ek sath nahi dete update.. :D

Kahne ki baten thi ek ek update par comment ... Agar log aisa kar diye hote to meri himmat na hoti comment reply karne ki :D ..

Khair update pasand aaya wo badi baat hai
 

nain11ster

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sabse pehle to nain11ster bhai dhanyawaad intajar khatam karne aur in 19 updates ke sath hamara sunday funday banane ke liye pehle to socha abhi kuch update padhunga fir baki raat main padhunga par ek baar jab padhna chalu kiya to beech main chhod ne ka man hi na hua all thanks to your superb writing aur ab aate hai review pe to ye review update 120 se 135 ke liye hai 136-138 ka agle post main dunga

120 upate se jo final action suru hua wo sidhe 135 pe purn tarah se khatam hua matlab lokesh vikram aur prakash jo aashram lakar aur in 16 updates main kahi koi chiz off beat nahi lagi sab kuch ek sidhi dhara ki tarah behta chala gaya...ek baat to saaf hai ke hame kisi ko bhi kamjor nahi samajhna chahiye jo galti lokesh ne ki jab usne sabko marne ke liye apne aadmi bhiiwaye aur jab apasyu ne un sab koshisho ko nakam kar diya wo wahi never celebrate too early wali baat ho gayi, yaha samajhdaar megha nikli jise pehle ke update main ghamandi bataya gaya tha wahi is situation main uske dimag kiachi pehchan ho gayi jab usne ek jhatke main bhap liya ke apasyu kya chiz hai aur samajhdaar wahi hota hai to sattadhari paksh ka sath kabhi nahi chhodta wahi yaha megha ne kiya..

lokesh ki soch kafi achi thi un sabhi ko apne sath mila kar kaam karne ki par fir bhi wo apne ghamand aur lalach ok chhod nahi paya aur apne kukarmo ki saja paya.....

kaya se jab apasyu aur amy ki mulakat huyi tabhi samajh main aa gaya tha ke devil gang kitne gehrayi tak apne dushmano ko parkhe huye hai aur bhram jaal failana to unki khasiyat hai isiliye jab lokesh ne ajay ko apasyu par se survilence hatane kaha tabhi yaha wo chuk kar gaya waise agar wo aisa nahi karta tab bhi amy sab ache se manage kar leti....

ab tak apasyu kisi se is tarah direct fighting main nahi bhida tha agar bnglore aur us ke fight scene ko chhod diya jaye to par yaha is padav main uski asli kabiliyat dekhne mili aur jab pura devil gang fight kar raha tha use dekh kar avengers ki yaad aa gayi men

Apasyu bole to captain america purn santulit planning ke sath kaam karne wala kabhi haar na manne wala waise to cap ko uski kabiliyat experiment ser milithi par yaha apasyu ne apni mehnat se seekhi hai

Aarav matlab Iron Man direct maro baat baad main karenge (waise ye apna favouriye character hai is kahani ka )

drishya in sab ke sath hulk ki tarah tha ekdum balshali

amy yani captain marvel jiske bina team adhuri hai

parth aur swastika ko main hawkeye aur black widow kahunga apne kaam main mahir shatir jasoos

aksh is like maria hill jo is sab ko ladai ke waqt technical suport de aur nimmi yani wanda maximoff (scarlet witch) halanki wanda dimag control karti hai aur nimmi chaku

aur ant main kunjal yani kamala khan (miss marvel) jo is team ki sabse nayi sadasya hai aur abhi training period main hai

ek purn santulit team ke sath sochi samjhi ranneeti se yaha inlogo ne apne plan ko anjaam diya hai jisse kisi ke bhi paas bhagne ka koi mauka nahi bacha aur jo inlogo ke mujhya gunahgaar the unhe apne paas rok liya

parth ke liye dil se khushi ho rahi hai shayad ab use nimmi ke roop main apni jindagi main tehrav mil jaye aur ab to drishya bhi inke sath hai yani pariwaar pura ho gaya.....

behad hi jabardast updates :applause: :applause: :applause:

Aise kaise bich me uthkar chale jate .. maine bhi single sitting me update pura likha tha but wo alag baat hai ki bich bich me kaam aata gaya aur main uth kar aata jata raha tha :D

Megha aur Lokesh ke case me main sirf itna hi kahunga ki Lokesh aur Megha dono apni nitiyon me saaf the aur logon ki achi pachan thi... Haan logon ki pahchan thi isliye to usne maarne ka khyal drop karke apasyu ke sath milkar kaam karne ki socha... Haan wo alag baat hai ki wo Apasyu ko parakhne me purntah vifal raha... Aur uska natija usse mil chuka tha...

Hahaha ... Itna bada avenger ki team bana diye lekin ek baat main kahe deta hun ... Refresh kuch nahi tere bin story kyonki 3 kahani ke super star sath milkar avenger jaisi team nirman karnge.. hint pahle mil gaya tha uspar kaam bhi shuru ho gaya hai... Isliye kaisa ye ishq hai ajab sa risk hai bhi padh lijiyega ... :D .. aur wahan classification kar dijiyeha (ek request) :D

Baki aage dekhte hain .. kya vichar diya hai aapne ..
 

nain11ster

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jab 135 wa update padha tab laga ki maksad pura ho gaya hai aur ab shayad ye kahani apne antim padav par hai aur ab bas happy ending baki hai par jab ye teen update padhe tab samajh aaya ki picture abhi baki hai mere dost!!

in sab mamlo main itna jyada paisa involve tha ke jiski koi samanya insaan kalpana bhi nahi kar sakta aur jo raaj vikram aur prakash ne khole hai usne kafi had tak mamla saaf ho gaya hai chandrabhan raghuvanshi ko kisi ne hawala main nahi joda tha balki ye to khud uske dimag ki planning thi aur paisa use itna andha kar gaya ke ki 160 masumo ki jaan usne le li aur sath hi apne pariwaar ko bhi us aag main jhok diya par baat itni hai ke jako rakhe saiya maar sake na koi isiliye us raat wahi log bache jo in sabko khatam kar sakte the aur chandrabhan ko to uske karmo ki saja khud apasyu apne hatho se us raat de chuka tha aur ab yaha inlogo ko chhod diya taki jab tak jiye maut ke intajar main maut se bhi buri jindagi jiye aur in sab planning ki mastermind hai anupriya jiska kirdaar sabse ahem hokar bhi ab tak sabse chupa hua tha aur mahideep jisme baribari ka bhagidaar tha

yudh ka bigul to baj hi chuka hai aur wo log bhi itna bada nuksaan sehne ke baad chup nahi baithenge...

Kuch bate abhi khulna baki hai, Ek antim padav abhi baki hai.....

behtarin updates :applause: claps2: :applause:

Ye paise ki maya thi... Haalanki raaj aur homework apasyu ki uss ore bhi puri hai... Yahan Vikram aur prakash jindal se sabhi baten puchhne ka ek sidha maksad tha... Jo khyal usse baar baar aa raha tha... "Kya chandrbhan aur Sunanda ke pariwar ko ye log jante the, ya chandrbhan ne apne iss pariwar ki baat chhipa rakhi thi".... Aur dusra bada sawal ... Kya Anupriya ne koi pressure dala tha jis wajah se usne apne pariwar ko mara ya fir chandrbhan ne khud ye faisala liya tha..

Baki Anupriya ke vishay me usse purntah pata hai... Yahan se wo pura sure ho chuka hai ki chandrbhan ne videsh me rah rahi pariwar ke bare me sirf itna hi bataya tha ki wahan uska sirf 1 ladka hai aur wo bhi mara gaya... Apasyu ab apni planning ko Vikram aur prakash ke baton ke base par purn hawa dega.. jo ki aap ko aage dekhne ko mil jayega...

Baki itne pyare revooo ka shukriya .. sath bane rahen
 

nain11ster

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vese in update ko ant he shuruaat hogi aye sa mere ko shuru se he laga tha.
kyu ki tum kahe baar bich main is ki hint bhi de chuke the :D

ye to bas shuruaat the :D
ye bhuta he alg kar gai tum story ki shuruaat ka ant ko likhane ke liye 134 updates likha mare :D
KNTB main bhi kuch aye sa he kiya tha.
bus yaha tum main target ko pahele se jan te huai uski mamuli se kadi ko toda hai.
ya u kahu ki main target ko jaan ne or samaj ne ke baad he.
uski lanka main aag lagi hain.
or vaha bechare drish ko uska main target ke hato ki katputli bana ke nachane ke baad usko safa karna pada tha.
ab dekhana ye hai ki tum main target udane ke liye or kitne papad belate ho.
lagata hai drish or apsayu ki ek or baar satha mil kar kaam karne ka time bhi jaldi aaye ga.



jo log sochate the ki KNTB ka dusara part bhi aana chahe hain tha.
tum un ki vo baat maan kar uska dusara part bhi likha liya or jin reader no bola tha un masoom ko pata he nahi ki uska dura part unke samane he likha jaa raha hain :D

Kuch bhi calculation RG... Aise to kisi bhi kahani se compare kar dete... :D ..

Kitni baar kahun uss kahani ka mood aur taste alag hai iska mood aur taste alag hai aur haan Lokesh chhoti kadi nahi thi .. iska pata aane wale update me pata chal jayega..

Lokesh akela equal target tha... Aur pahle iss ore dhyan dene ka specific karan tha usse crack kar gaye to thik warna main to bata hi dunga..

Waise itne vishleshan ka shukriya rg .. aur ye anth 2.0 hai .. jaldi hi usko bhi anjaam tak pahuncha dunga .. but ju kitthe gayab hui gaye ho :bat:
 
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