Incest "मांगलिक बहन " (Completed)

[SANJU ( V. R. )]

Bhai

Ye Story me kuch bhi Feelings/Pyar ka koi matlab nahi hai,

isme Writer bas Chudai hi dikha rahe hai, faltu ke TARK dete hue, ki koi kabhi bhi Bahak sakta hai,

Kya itna hi Bahakna hota to Ajay ki Maa, itne din Widwa hokar bhi itne saal tak kisi se nahi chudi,
bas shadab ko dekhkar Chudne lag gayi ?

Shadab to pahle se hi KUTTA tha hi jo Sahnaz se Saccha Pyar ka dawa karte hue bhi Dusri Ladkiyo/Aurato se Chudai karta tha,

par Sahnaz to Saccha Pyar karti thi, phir bhi Aaram se Roj Chudai karwa rahi hai,

Kuch Mahan Reader ye bhi bol rahe hai ki Soundarya ko bhi Ajay aur Shadab se Chudwao,
Kya Soundarya ka Charector is Story me kisi Randi ka hai, jo kuch din ke liye Apne Ghar aaye Bhai ke Dost se Chudne lagegi,

ya use 1 se Chudne me Santusti nahi hoga, Dono Chodenge ya Pura Gaw ke log milkar Chodenge tabhi Santusti hogi ?

is Story me koi bhi Sex Pyar/Feeling ke karan hua hi nahi,

Sirf Chudai dikhani hai to bina matlab sirf Chudai dikhayi ja rahi hai,

aur ye Writer Special PANDIT hai jo aise Mandir/Puja me Nangi hokar puja karna, Chudai karna etc dikha rahe hai,

Had hai, Writer ke CHUTIYEPANE ki.

Criticism sabhya shabdon se bhi ki jaa sakti hai. Koi jaruri nhi ki ham kahani ke pratyek update ki wahwahi kare. Jab pasand nahi ho to maryada ke andar rah kar aalochana bhi ki jaa sakti hai.
Main phir se kah raha hu. Maryada ke dayre me rah kar.

Waise koshish hamesha writer ko motivate karne ke liye honi chahiye . Demotivate nahi.

Jyada problem ho to wo update skip bhi kar sakte hai. Aur jyada problem ho to puri story hi skip kar sakte hai.

 

[Funworld]

Criticism sabhya shabdon se bhi ki jaa sakti hai. Koi jaruri nhi ki ham kahani ke pratyek update ki wahwahi kare. Jab pasand nahi ho to maryada k

Criticism sabhya shabdon se bhi ki jaa sakti hai. Koi jaruri nhi ki ham kahani ke pratyek update ki wahwahi kare. Jab pasand nahi ho to maryada ke andar rah kar aalochana bhi ki jaa sakti hai.
Main phir se kah raha hu. Maryada ke dayre me rah kar.

Waise koshish hamesha writer ko motivate karne ke liye honi chahiye . Demotivate nahi.

Jyada problem ho to wo update skip bhi kar sakte hai. Aur jyada problem ho to puri story hi skip kar sakte hai.

मैं वैसे भी इस कहानी पर ध्यान नही देता हूँ

ये लेखक पहले कुछ बेहतर कहानी लिखते थे, अब तो बस चुतियापंती ही कर रहा है।

किसी के कुछ कमेंट के कारण इस थ्रेड को आज देखा तो प्रतिक्रिया दे दी,

बाकी कुछ बेहतर लेखक है, उनकी ही कहानी को देख लेता हूँ।

 

[Dhansu2]

Bahut hi jabardast update

 

[Gul Ahmed]

Bhai

Ye Story me kuch bhi Feelings/Pyar ka koi matlab nahi hai,

isme Writer bas Chudai hi dikha rahe hai, faltu ke TARK dete hue, ki koi kabhi bhi Bahak sakta hai,

Kya itna hi Bahakna hota to Ajay ki Maa, itne din Widwa hokar bhi itne saal tak kisi se nahi chudi,
bas shadab ko dekhkar Chudne lag gayi ?

Shadab to pahle se hi KUTTA tha hi jo Sahnaz se Saccha Pyar ka dawa karte hue bhi Dusri Ladkiyo/Aurato se Chudai karta tha,

par Sahnaz to Saccha Pyar karti thi, phir bhi Aaram se Roj Chudai karwa rahi hai,

Kuch Mahan Reader ye bhi bol rahe hai ki Soundarya ko bhi Ajay aur Shadab se Chudwao,
Kya Soundarya ka Charector is Story me kisi Randi ka hai, jo kuch din ke liye Apne Ghar aaye Bhai ke Dost se Chudne lagegi,

ya use 1 se Chudne me Santusti nahi hoga, Dono Chodenge ya Pura Gaw ke log milkar Chodenge tabhi Santusti hogi ?

is Story me koi bhi Sex Pyar/Feeling ke karan hua hi nahi,

Sirf Chudai dikhani hai to bina matlab sirf Chudai dikhayi ja rahi hai,

aur ye Writer Special PANDIT hai jo aise Mandir/Puja me Nangi hokar puja karna, Chudai karna etc dikha rahe hai,

To mat pad

 

[Gul Ahmed]

Mat pad

 

[Gul Ahmed]

Mat pad

 

[Gul Ahmed]

Nice story kisi ki bat pe mat dhyan de khani likhte rah pyar me hwas hi na ho to wo pyar kis kam ka jaunse ya gyani ban rhe hai ki khani me hwas hai sirf to we suhagrat pe apni biwi se pyar karna sex nhi

 

[Gul Ahmed]

Is bhai ka kahna hai ki ki jo saundrya ek se jyada se chud le gi to wo randi ho jaayegi ar jo hero ek se jyada chod lega wo kya hoga fer

 

[Seen@12]

Bhai update do Unique star

 

[Jay1990]