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Update #13

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Scene 🖼️ #03

Bhanu puri tarah paseene main bheega hua tha.. subha ki thandak bhi uske behte paseene ko rok nahi pa rahi thi

Wo apne khet ki maid pe ughi hui ghass ko saaf kar raha tha, par uska hath kuch jada hi Joro se chal raha tha

Maano kisi baat ka ghussa kahi aur nikal raha ho

Bhanu hasiye ko joro se chalte hue ghass ko maano kaatne ki jagah uska gala rait raha ho

"Madarchod.. ye Jabbar mera pura khel bigad dega"

Bhanu ek pal k liye saans lene k liye rukta hai aur wahi maid pe baith k bagal ki naali main behte hue thande paani ko apne munh pe marte hue wapas apne ghusse ki aag ugalne lagta hai

"Ye Saala Jabbar na jane Kundan k ghar kiya karne gaya tha.. aur es behenchod ko Maalti pe hamla karne k liye kisne kaha tha

Kahi kuch aisa toh nahi hai.. jiske bare main mujhe pata hi na ho

Wo toh acha hai ki Maalti bach gayi.. qki uski jindagi barbad karne ka haq sirf mera hai

Par usse pehle uska wo haal karunga ki saali maut ki bheekh mangengi"

Bhanu ek Pal k liye rukta hai aur asman main udhti hui chidiya ko dekh k wapas badbadane lagta hai

"Jabbar ko es samay apna pura dhiyan Monu ko khatam karne pe lagana chahiye tha.. qki agar wo Sapola jaag gaya toh meri saalon ki mehnat barbad ho jayegi

Es madarchod Monu k karan pehle 'Anokhi' ko marwana pada aur ab ye saala Jabbar na jane q Maalti k peeche pad gaya hai.. aakhir baat kiya hai ?"

Bhanu jo hamesha shant aur apni buddhi aur sadhyantra pe barosha rakhne wala inshan hai wo es samay puri tarah baichan tha

Bhanu apni jagah se uthta hai aur pure khet main ek kone se dusre kone tak chaihal kadmi karte hue aisi thand main bhi aane waale paseene ko apne gamche se pouchte hue

"Kal se es Jabbar ka bhi kuch pata nahi chal raha.. na jane ye madarchod kaha gayab hai

Mil jaye toh eska gala apne hath se daba du, meri saalon ki mehnat barbad kar raha hai"

Bhanu na jane aise hi kabtak tehelta rehta hai.. aur antatah thak k wahi khet pe kinare lage emli k paid k neeche padi hui Charpai pe jake baith jata hai

Bhanu apna Phone nikalta hai aur use hath main liye hue kuch palon tak bus sochta hi rehta hai

Aur aakhir main ek nirnay pe pahuchte hue kisi ko Phone milata hai

Dusri taraf Phone received hota hai aur ek parichit si aawaz aati hai
"Bus Bhanu bhai.. thodi dair main hum Sundarpur Gaon k station pe pahuchne waale hai"

Bhanu ek lambi si saans leta hai.. jisse uski nirasha ka pata bhi chalta hai

Dusri taraf se
"Kiya Baat hai Bhanu Bhai.. koi pareshani hai, hum Sadhu banne ka pura saman leke aaye hai.. aap bus batao karna kiya hai ?"

Ab toh aap samajh hi gaye honge ki Phone pe dusri taraf aur koi nahi balki Panna hai.. aur uske sath Heera bhi

Shadayantr anusar Heera Panna ko Gaon aana tha.. jiske liye sari taiyariyan ho chuki thi, par Jabbar ne jo kand kiya hai uski wajah se kaafi kuch badalna pad raha hai Bhanu ko

Bhanu- (Kuch Palon tak sochne k baad) nahi abhi k liye tum dono es Gaon main mat aana..

Heera- Par hum toh Sundarpur Station pahuchne hi waale hai ?, achanak ye sab.. ?

Bhanu bina saans liye Jabbar ka Maalti pe hamla karne waali baat batata chala jata hai.. waise puri baat toh khud Bhanu bhi nahi janta tha

Heera- (Dusri taraf se Phone pe) Maine pehle hi kaha tha, ye Jabbar mujhe barosha ka aadmi nahi lagta ?

Bhanu- (Wapas apni jagah se uth k khet pe tehelte hue) Hmm.. par ab kuch kiya nahi ja sakta, qki Jabbar ki es harkat ki wajah se Mahendra ne apne pure pariwar ko aur sajag kar diya hai.. esliye abhi k liye tum dono es Gaon main mat aana

Heera- Phir ab..

Bhanu kuch sochne k baad
"Jis train pe abhi tum dono ho wo yaha sirf 2 Gaon pe rukti hai.. pehle hamare Sundarpur Gaon aur dusre ek aur Gaon 'Phulwa' me

Tum dono Sundarpur na utar k Phulwa Gaon main utarna.. waha ek aadmi milega uske sath chale jana, tumhari khatirdari main koi kami nahi aayegi

Baki main jaldi hi bataunga aage kiya karna hai ?"

Bhanu apni baat samjha k Phone kaat deta hai aur ek pal k liye rukta hai aur turant hi dusra Phone milata hai.. aur es baar wo jise Phone mila raha tha uske liye uski screen pe jo naam nazar aa raha tha wo tha
'Thakur Ji'
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Bhanu apni baat puri karke phone ko charpai pe faikta hai aur ghusse se Jabbar ko wapas gaali deta hai.. ki tabhi usko kisi k hasne aur taali bajane ka swar sunai padta hai

Pehle se hi ghusse se laal Bhanu jaise hi mudke us aadmi ko kuch sunane hi wala tha ki wo ruk padta hai

Qki uske samne khet pe maid pe khada hua wo aadmi jo haste hue taali baja raha tha wo aur koi nahi balki 'Tyagi' tha


Scene 🖼️ #04
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Theek esi samay dusri taraf Gaon se dur Station k pass ek tuti or kabhi bhi girne jaisi estithi main khadi hui Jhopdi k andar

Jabbar ulta hoke laita hua tha.. uski peet pe kisi prakar ki jadi buti ka laip gaya hua tha

Jabbar usi prakar se laite hue apna chehra utha k pass main hi mitti k chulhe pe chai banate hue aadmi se bolta hai

"Tumhara ye ehsaan main kabhi nahi bhulunga, samay aane pe aise hi tumhare bhi kaam jarur aaunga"

Chulhe k pass baitha hua wo aadmi Jabbar ki taraf dekh k muskura padta hai

"Are Jabbar Bhai, ye Jaggu tumhare kuch kaam aa saka ye badi baat hai.. waise bhi ek baar aapne bhi aise hi meri madad kari thi

waise ye itna gehra ghaav aaya kaise ?

Aisa lag raha hai jaise kisi serni ne panja mara ho"

Jaggu ne muskurate hue chulhe ki taraf dekhte hue apni baat kahi, par uski baat main kahi na kahi ek kataksh bhi tha.. jise sayad Jabbar abhi k liye samajh nahi paya tha

Jabbar- (Jise abhi bhi dard mehsus ho raha tha) Kahe ki serni.. uski aukat toh main dikhaunga

Jaggu chulhe se Chai ka bartan utarte hue
"Kuch kaha kiya.. Jabbar Bhai"

Jabbar- (Jaise apne hosh sambhalta hai) nahi.. nahi Jaggu kuch nahi

Waise Sayad aapko Jaggu yaad nahi hoga.. esliye phir se ek baar thoda bata deta hu

40-42 Saal ka Jaggu asal main ek Chor hai

Pariwar k naam pe bus akela hai hai.. apne main mast rehta hai, logo se jada milna julna pasand nahi

Haal aisa hai ki Sundarpur main bahut se log toh jante tak nahi ki Jaggu namak koi vyakti bhi hai

Gaon k station k pass ek tuti si jhopdi.. aur yahi eska ghar sansar hai

Kaam k naam pe puri raat chori k liye ass pass k Gaon main firta hai aur din main sota rehta hai

Agar kisi cheez ka sauq hai toh bus 'Chut' ka

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Ek number ka tharki aur daru baaj hai.. nasa bhi khub karta hai, aur eske liye nase ki pudiya banane ka kaam Bankelal karta hai

Ghar ya Jhopdi ki estithi ki baat karu toh ye station Wale raste pe usse thoda pehle hai, Jhopdi k aage Jamun ka ek paid hai, aur piche bus ghass aur jungle jaisa hai

bahar hi jamun k paid 🌴 k pass ek paani ka handpump laga hua hai, jaha eska nahana aur kapde dhulne ka kaam hota hai

Waise ese dekh k lagta nahi.. ki ye kabhi nahata bhi hoga

Jhopdi k andar jameen pe hi ek gadda pada hai jo esne station se churaya tha.. aur es samay Jabbar esi pe pada hua hai

Kamre main ek purana TV hai aur batane ki jarurat toh hai nahi ki wo bhi chori ka hai.. waise Jaggu es TV pe jispe sirf gandi gandi filme dekhta hai DVD pe laga k

Kamre main ek kinare chulha hai, jispe aag jala k apne liye kabhi kabhi khana bana leta hai.. aur esi pe wo es samay Jabbar aur apne liye chai bana raha tha

Waise jadatar toh station k pass Wale theke se daru aur wahi ek dhaba hai usi pe khana kha leta hai

Jaggu Chai ko cup main daal chuka tha.. Jabbar jaise taise dard de tarapte hue uthta hai aur Jaggu k hath se chai ka cup le leta hai

Jaggu wahi ek taraf baithte hue
"Waise subha subha jab tum darwaje pe aisi halat main aaye toh mujhe yakin hi nahi hua ki koi tumhara bhi ye haal kar sakta hai.. waise bataya nahi ye itna gehra jhakm aaya kaise ?"

Jabbar Chai ka ghut bharte hue
"Wo.. ek kutiya ne hamla kar diya tha"

Jaggu- (Maze lete hue) Aap jaise sair ka ek jara si kutiya ne ye haal bana diya ?.. waise kiya apne Gaon ki thi wo kutiya?

Jabbar kuch bol nahi paata bus Jaggu ko kha jane waali nazron se dekh k khud ko shant kar leta hai

Jabbar- Mat bhulo ki ek baar aise hi tum chori karke bhaag rahe thay aur tab maine tumhe chakki main chupa k logo se bachaya tha.. wo bhi bina kisi sawal Jawab k

Jabbar, Jaggu ko ehsaas karwa deta hai ki uska yu baar baar sawal karna use pasand nahi aa raha hai

Par Jaggu toh hai hi mahaharami.. wo apne peele peele daat dikhate hue
"Are Bhai tum toh bura maan gaye, main toh bus esliye puch raha tha ki kismain itni himmat aa gayi jisne mere Jabbar bhai ko bheegi billi diya"

Jaggu bechare kuch bol nahi paata bus bejjeti ka kadwa ghut peeke reh jata hai.. par Jaagu ki baat se ek pal k liye uski aankhon k aage Maalti ka chehra jarur naach gaya tha

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Jaagu apni chai ka antim ghut peete hue
"Chalo main ek kaam karta hu, abhi thodi dair main Jake Kundan se milta hu.. taki wo kuch aur madad kar sake"

Jabbar jaise apni jagah se uchal padta hai, wo turant bol padta hai

"Nahi nahi.. Kundan ya uske pariwar main se kisi ko pata nahi chalna chahiye ki main kaha hu"

Jaggu man hi man muskura padta hai
'Yani mera sochna sahi tha.. Gaon main jo udhti hui kabar hai ki Jabbar ne hi Kundan k bete ko mara tha, jiski wajah se uski aisi halat hai

Us baat main kuch toh sachai hai'

Jaagu apni khushi chupate hue
"Theek hai.. Jabbar bhai aap jab tak chaho yaha aaram se raho

Kisi ko kabhi pata nahi chalega ki aap kaha ho

Aapka ye Bhai hai na"

Jaggu, Jabbar ko barosha toh dila raha tha.. par uske dimag main ek alag hi khichadi pakne lagi thi

Jaggu man hi man kuch sochte hue Jabbar ki taraf dekhta hai aur muskura padta hai
'Agar dimag se kaam lu.. toh sayad ye Jabbar us Maalti tak pahuchne ka rasta ban sakta hai'

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बहुत ही सुंदर लाजवाब और अद्भुत मनमोहक अपडेट हैं भाई मजा आ गया
ये भानु की बेचैनी बहुत कुछ कह जा रही हैं उसने हिरा और पन्ना को भी गाँव आने से रोक दिया है वही भानु की फोन पर की जा रही सारी बातें त्यागी ने सुन कर उसके सामने खडा हो गया तो क्या त्यागी और भानू मिले हुए हैं
दुसरी ओर जब्बार को गाँव का चोर जग्गू ने अपने झोपडी में छुपा रहा हैं और इलाज भी कर रहा हैं उसकी बातों से जग्गू समझ गया की गाँव में जो बातें जब्बार के बारें में चल रही हैं की उसने ही मोनु पर हमला किया वो सच हैं तो उस बात का फायदा उठाने के चक्कर में जग्गू हैं
खैर देखते हैं आगे क्या होता है
अगले रोमांचकारी धमाकेदार और चुदाईदार अपडेट की प्रतिक्षा रहेगी जल्दी से दिजिएगा
 
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These updates are absolutely stunning, amazing, and incredibly captivating, brother!
I had a blast reading them.
I'm eagerly awaiting the next thrilling, mind-blowing, and wild updates—please bring them on soon!
 

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Update #13

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Scene 🖼️ #03

Bhanu puri tarah paseene main bheega hua tha.. subha ki thandak bhi uske behte paseene ko rok nahi pa rahi thi

Wo apne khet ki maid pe ughi hui ghass ko saaf kar raha tha, par uska hath kuch jada hi Joro se chal raha tha

Maano kisi baat ka ghussa kahi aur nikal raha ho

Bhanu hasiye ko joro se chalte hue ghass ko maano kaatne ki jagah uska gala rait raha ho

"Madarchod.. ye Jabbar mera pura khel bigad dega"

Bhanu ek pal k liye saans lene k liye rukta hai aur wahi maid pe baith k bagal ki naali main behte hue thande paani ko apne munh pe marte hue wapas apne ghusse ki aag ugalne lagta hai

"Ye Saala Jabbar na jane Kundan k ghar kiya karne gaya tha.. aur es behenchod ko Maalti pe hamla karne k liye kisne kaha tha

Kahi kuch aisa toh nahi hai.. jiske bare main mujhe pata hi na ho

Wo toh acha hai ki Maalti bach gayi.. qki uski jindagi barbad karne ka haq sirf mera hai

Par usse pehle uska wo haal karunga ki saali maut ki bheekh mangengi"

Bhanu ek Pal k liye rukta hai aur asman main udhti hui chidiya ko dekh k wapas badbadane lagta hai

"Jabbar ko es samay apna pura dhiyan Monu ko khatam karne pe lagana chahiye tha.. qki agar wo Sapola jaag gaya toh meri saalon ki mehnat barbad ho jayegi

Es madarchod Monu k karan pehle 'Anokhi' ko marwana pada aur ab ye saala Jabbar na jane q Maalti k peeche pad gaya hai.. aakhir baat kiya hai ?"

Bhanu jo hamesha shant aur apni buddhi aur sadhyantra pe barosha rakhne wala inshan hai wo es samay puri tarah baichan tha

Bhanu apni jagah se uthta hai aur pure khet main ek kone se dusre kone tak chaihal kadmi karte hue aisi thand main bhi aane waale paseene ko apne gamche se pouchte hue

"Kal se es Jabbar ka bhi kuch pata nahi chal raha.. na jane ye madarchod kaha gayab hai

Mil jaye toh eska gala apne hath se daba du, meri saalon ki mehnat barbad kar raha hai"

Bhanu na jane aise hi kabtak tehelta rehta hai.. aur antatah thak k wahi khet pe kinare lage emli k paid k neeche padi hui Charpai pe jake baith jata hai

Bhanu apna Phone nikalta hai aur use hath main liye hue kuch palon tak bus sochta hi rehta hai

Aur aakhir main ek nirnay pe pahuchte hue kisi ko Phone milata hai

Dusri taraf Phone received hota hai aur ek parichit si aawaz aati hai
"Bus Bhanu bhai.. thodi dair main hum Sundarpur Gaon k station pe pahuchne waale hai"

Bhanu ek lambi si saans leta hai.. jisse uski nirasha ka pata bhi chalta hai

Dusri taraf se
"Kiya Baat hai Bhanu Bhai.. koi pareshani hai, hum Sadhu banne ka pura saman leke aaye hai.. aap bus batao karna kiya hai ?"

Ab toh aap samajh hi gaye honge ki Phone pe dusri taraf aur koi nahi balki Panna hai.. aur uske sath Heera bhi

Shadayantr anusar Heera Panna ko Gaon aana tha.. jiske liye sari taiyariyan ho chuki thi, par Jabbar ne jo kand kiya hai uski wajah se kaafi kuch badalna pad raha hai Bhanu ko

Bhanu- (Kuch Palon tak sochne k baad) nahi abhi k liye tum dono es Gaon main mat aana..

Heera- Par hum toh Sundarpur Station pahuchne hi waale hai ?, achanak ye sab.. ?

Bhanu bina saans liye Jabbar ka Maalti pe hamla karne waali baat batata chala jata hai.. waise puri baat toh khud Bhanu bhi nahi janta tha

Heera- (Dusri taraf se Phone pe) Maine pehle hi kaha tha, ye Jabbar mujhe barosha ka aadmi nahi lagta ?

Bhanu- (Wapas apni jagah se uth k khet pe tehelte hue) Hmm.. par ab kuch kiya nahi ja sakta, qki Jabbar ki es harkat ki wajah se Mahendra ne apne pure pariwar ko aur sajag kar diya hai.. esliye abhi k liye tum dono es Gaon main mat aana

Heera- Phir ab..

Bhanu kuch sochne k baad
"Jis train pe abhi tum dono ho wo yaha sirf 2 Gaon pe rukti hai.. pehle hamare Sundarpur Gaon aur dusre ek aur Gaon 'Phulwa' me

Tum dono Sundarpur na utar k Phulwa Gaon main utarna.. waha ek aadmi milega uske sath chale jana, tumhari khatirdari main koi kami nahi aayegi

Baki main jaldi hi bataunga aage kiya karna hai ?"

Bhanu apni baat samjha k Phone kaat deta hai aur ek pal k liye rukta hai aur turant hi dusra Phone milata hai.. aur es baar wo jise Phone mila raha tha uske liye uski screen pe jo naam nazar aa raha tha wo tha
'Thakur Ji'
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Bhanu apni baat puri karke phone ko charpai pe faikta hai aur ghusse se Jabbar ko wapas gaali deta hai.. ki tabhi usko kisi k hasne aur taali bajane ka swar sunai padta hai

Pehle se hi ghusse se laal Bhanu jaise hi mudke us aadmi ko kuch sunane hi wala tha ki wo ruk padta hai

Qki uske samne khet pe maid pe khada hua wo aadmi jo haste hue taali baja raha tha wo aur koi nahi balki 'Tyagi' tha


Scene 🖼️ #04
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Theek esi samay dusri taraf Gaon se dur Station k pass ek tuti or kabhi bhi girne jaisi estithi main khadi hui Jhopdi k andar

Jabbar ulta hoke laita hua tha.. uski peet pe kisi prakar ki jadi buti ka laip gaya hua tha

Jabbar usi prakar se laite hue apna chehra utha k pass main hi mitti k chulhe pe chai banate hue aadmi se bolta hai

"Tumhara ye ehsaan main kabhi nahi bhulunga, samay aane pe aise hi tumhare bhi kaam jarur aaunga"

Chulhe k pass baitha hua wo aadmi Jabbar ki taraf dekh k muskura padta hai

"Are Jabbar Bhai, ye Jaggu tumhare kuch kaam aa saka ye badi baat hai.. waise bhi ek baar aapne bhi aise hi meri madad kari thi

waise ye itna gehra ghaav aaya kaise ?

Aisa lag raha hai jaise kisi serni ne panja mara ho"

Jaggu ne muskurate hue chulhe ki taraf dekhte hue apni baat kahi, par uski baat main kahi na kahi ek kataksh bhi tha.. jise sayad Jabbar abhi k liye samajh nahi paya tha

Jabbar- (Jise abhi bhi dard mehsus ho raha tha) Kahe ki serni.. uski aukat toh main dikhaunga

Jaggu chulhe se Chai ka bartan utarte hue
"Kuch kaha kiya.. Jabbar Bhai"

Jabbar- (Jaise apne hosh sambhalta hai) nahi.. nahi Jaggu kuch nahi

Waise Sayad aapko Jaggu yaad nahi hoga.. esliye phir se ek baar thoda bata deta hu

40-42 Saal ka Jaggu asal main ek Chor hai

Pariwar k naam pe bus akela hai hai.. apne main mast rehta hai, logo se jada milna julna pasand nahi

Haal aisa hai ki Sundarpur main bahut se log toh jante tak nahi ki Jaggu namak koi vyakti bhi hai

Gaon k station k pass ek tuti si jhopdi.. aur yahi eska ghar sansar hai

Kaam k naam pe puri raat chori k liye ass pass k Gaon main firta hai aur din main sota rehta hai

Agar kisi cheez ka sauq hai toh bus 'Chut' ka

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Ek number ka tharki aur daru baaj hai.. nasa bhi khub karta hai, aur eske liye nase ki pudiya banane ka kaam Bankelal karta hai

Ghar ya Jhopdi ki estithi ki baat karu toh ye station Wale raste pe usse thoda pehle hai, Jhopdi k aage Jamun ka ek paid hai, aur piche bus ghass aur jungle jaisa hai

bahar hi jamun k paid 🌴 k pass ek paani ka handpump laga hua hai, jaha eska nahana aur kapde dhulne ka kaam hota hai

Waise ese dekh k lagta nahi.. ki ye kabhi nahata bhi hoga

Jhopdi k andar jameen pe hi ek gadda pada hai jo esne station se churaya tha.. aur es samay Jabbar esi pe pada hua hai

Kamre main ek purana TV hai aur batane ki jarurat toh hai nahi ki wo bhi chori ka hai.. waise Jaggu es TV pe jispe sirf gandi gandi filme dekhta hai DVD pe laga k

Kamre main ek kinare chulha hai, jispe aag jala k apne liye kabhi kabhi khana bana leta hai.. aur esi pe wo es samay Jabbar aur apne liye chai bana raha tha

Waise jadatar toh station k pass Wale theke se daru aur wahi ek dhaba hai usi pe khana kha leta hai

Jaggu Chai ko cup main daal chuka tha.. Jabbar jaise taise dard de tarapte hue uthta hai aur Jaggu k hath se chai ka cup le leta hai

Jaggu wahi ek taraf baithte hue
"Waise subha subha jab tum darwaje pe aisi halat main aaye toh mujhe yakin hi nahi hua ki koi tumhara bhi ye haal kar sakta hai.. waise bataya nahi ye itna gehra jhakm aaya kaise ?"

Jabbar Chai ka ghut bharte hue
"Wo.. ek kutiya ne hamla kar diya tha"

Jaggu- (Maze lete hue) Aap jaise sair ka ek jara si kutiya ne ye haal bana diya ?.. waise kiya apne Gaon ki thi wo kutiya?

Jabbar kuch bol nahi paata bus Jaggu ko kha jane waali nazron se dekh k khud ko shant kar leta hai

Jabbar- Mat bhulo ki ek baar aise hi tum chori karke bhaag rahe thay aur tab maine tumhe chakki main chupa k logo se bachaya tha.. wo bhi bina kisi sawal Jawab k

Jabbar, Jaggu ko ehsaas karwa deta hai ki uska yu baar baar sawal karna use pasand nahi aa raha hai

Par Jaggu toh hai hi mahaharami.. wo apne peele peele daat dikhate hue
"Are Bhai tum toh bura maan gaye, main toh bus esliye puch raha tha ki kismain itni himmat aa gayi jisne mere Jabbar bhai ko bheegi billi diya"

Jaggu bechare kuch bol nahi paata bus bejjeti ka kadwa ghut peeke reh jata hai.. par Jaagu ki baat se ek pal k liye uski aankhon k aage Maalti ka chehra jarur naach gaya tha

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Jaagu apni chai ka antim ghut peete hue
"Chalo main ek kaam karta hu, abhi thodi dair main Jake Kundan se milta hu.. taki wo kuch aur madad kar sake"

Jabbar jaise apni jagah se uchal padta hai, wo turant bol padta hai

"Nahi nahi.. Kundan ya uske pariwar main se kisi ko pata nahi chalna chahiye ki main kaha hu"

Jaggu man hi man muskura padta hai
'Yani mera sochna sahi tha.. Gaon main jo udhti hui kabar hai ki Jabbar ne hi Kundan k bete ko mara tha, jiski wajah se uski aisi halat hai

Us baat main kuch toh sachai hai'

Jaagu apni khushi chupate hue
"Theek hai.. Jabbar bhai aap jab tak chaho yaha aaram se raho

Kisi ko kabhi pata nahi chalega ki aap kaha ho

Aapka ye Bhai hai na"

Jaggu, Jabbar ko barosha toh dila raha tha.. par uske dimag main ek alag hi khichadi pakne lagi thi

Jaggu man hi man kuch sochte hue Jabbar ki taraf dekhta hai aur muskura padta hai
'Agar dimag se kaam lu.. toh sayad ye Jabbar us Maalti tak pahuchne ka rasta ban sakta hai'


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Update #13

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Scene 🖼️ #03

Bhanu puri tarah paseene main bheega hua tha.. subha ki thandak bhi uske behte paseene ko rok nahi pa rahi thi

Wo apne khet ki maid pe ughi hui ghass ko saaf kar raha tha, par uska hath kuch jada hi Joro se chal raha tha

Maano kisi baat ka ghussa kahi aur nikal raha ho

Bhanu hasiye ko joro se chalte hue ghass ko maano kaatne ki jagah uska gala rait raha ho

"Madarchod.. ye Jabbar mera pura khel bigad dega"

Bhanu ek pal k liye saans lene k liye rukta hai aur wahi maid pe baith k bagal ki naali main behte hue thande paani ko apne munh pe marte hue wapas apne ghusse ki aag ugalne lagta hai

"Ye Saala Jabbar na jane Kundan k ghar kiya karne gaya tha.. aur es behenchod ko Maalti pe hamla karne k liye kisne kaha tha

Kahi kuch aisa toh nahi hai.. jiske bare main mujhe pata hi na ho

Wo toh acha hai ki Maalti bach gayi.. qki uski jindagi barbad karne ka haq sirf mera hai

Par usse pehle uska wo haal karunga ki saali maut ki bheekh mangengi"

Bhanu ek Pal k liye rukta hai aur asman main udhti hui chidiya ko dekh k wapas badbadane lagta hai

"Jabbar ko es samay apna pura dhiyan Monu ko khatam karne pe lagana chahiye tha.. qki agar wo Sapola jaag gaya toh meri saalon ki mehnat barbad ho jayegi

Es madarchod Monu k karan pehle 'Anokhi' ko marwana pada aur ab ye saala Jabbar na jane q Maalti k peeche pad gaya hai.. aakhir baat kiya hai ?"

Bhanu jo hamesha shant aur apni buddhi aur sadhyantra pe barosha rakhne wala inshan hai wo es samay puri tarah baichan tha

Bhanu apni jagah se uthta hai aur pure khet main ek kone se dusre kone tak chaihal kadmi karte hue aisi thand main bhi aane waale paseene ko apne gamche se pouchte hue

"Kal se es Jabbar ka bhi kuch pata nahi chal raha.. na jane ye madarchod kaha gayab hai

Mil jaye toh eska gala apne hath se daba du, meri saalon ki mehnat barbad kar raha hai"

Bhanu na jane aise hi kabtak tehelta rehta hai.. aur antatah thak k wahi khet pe kinare lage emli k paid k neeche padi hui Charpai pe jake baith jata hai

Bhanu apna Phone nikalta hai aur use hath main liye hue kuch palon tak bus sochta hi rehta hai

Aur aakhir main ek nirnay pe pahuchte hue kisi ko Phone milata hai

Dusri taraf Phone received hota hai aur ek parichit si aawaz aati hai
"Bus Bhanu bhai.. thodi dair main hum Sundarpur Gaon k station pe pahuchne waale hai"

Bhanu ek lambi si saans leta hai.. jisse uski nirasha ka pata bhi chalta hai

Dusri taraf se
"Kiya Baat hai Bhanu Bhai.. koi pareshani hai, hum Sadhu banne ka pura saman leke aaye hai.. aap bus batao karna kiya hai ?"

Ab toh aap samajh hi gaye honge ki Phone pe dusri taraf aur koi nahi balki Panna hai.. aur uske sath Heera bhi

Shadayantr anusar Heera Panna ko Gaon aana tha.. jiske liye sari taiyariyan ho chuki thi, par Jabbar ne jo kand kiya hai uski wajah se kaafi kuch badalna pad raha hai Bhanu ko

Bhanu- (Kuch Palon tak sochne k baad) nahi abhi k liye tum dono es Gaon main mat aana..

Heera- Par hum toh Sundarpur Station pahuchne hi waale hai ?, achanak ye sab.. ?

Bhanu bina saans liye Jabbar ka Maalti pe hamla karne waali baat batata chala jata hai.. waise puri baat toh khud Bhanu bhi nahi janta tha

Heera- (Dusri taraf se Phone pe) Maine pehle hi kaha tha, ye Jabbar mujhe barosha ka aadmi nahi lagta ?

Bhanu- (Wapas apni jagah se uth k khet pe tehelte hue) Hmm.. par ab kuch kiya nahi ja sakta, qki Jabbar ki es harkat ki wajah se Mahendra ne apne pure pariwar ko aur sajag kar diya hai.. esliye abhi k liye tum dono es Gaon main mat aana

Heera- Phir ab..

Bhanu kuch sochne k baad
"Jis train pe abhi tum dono ho wo yaha sirf 2 Gaon pe rukti hai.. pehle hamare Sundarpur Gaon aur dusre ek aur Gaon 'Phulwa' me

Tum dono Sundarpur na utar k Phulwa Gaon main utarna.. waha ek aadmi milega uske sath chale jana, tumhari khatirdari main koi kami nahi aayegi

Baki main jaldi hi bataunga aage kiya karna hai ?"

Bhanu apni baat samjha k Phone kaat deta hai aur ek pal k liye rukta hai aur turant hi dusra Phone milata hai.. aur es baar wo jise Phone mila raha tha uske liye uski screen pe jo naam nazar aa raha tha wo tha
'Thakur Ji'
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Bhanu apni baat puri karke phone ko charpai pe faikta hai aur ghusse se Jabbar ko wapas gaali deta hai.. ki tabhi usko kisi k hasne aur taali bajane ka swar sunai padta hai

Pehle se hi ghusse se laal Bhanu jaise hi mudke us aadmi ko kuch sunane hi wala tha ki wo ruk padta hai

Qki uske samne khet pe maid pe khada hua wo aadmi jo haste hue taali baja raha tha wo aur koi nahi balki 'Tyagi' tha


Scene 🖼️ #04
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Theek esi samay dusri taraf Gaon se dur Station k pass ek tuti or kabhi bhi girne jaisi estithi main khadi hui Jhopdi k andar

Jabbar ulta hoke laita hua tha.. uski peet pe kisi prakar ki jadi buti ka laip gaya hua tha

Jabbar usi prakar se laite hue apna chehra utha k pass main hi mitti k chulhe pe chai banate hue aadmi se bolta hai

"Tumhara ye ehsaan main kabhi nahi bhulunga, samay aane pe aise hi tumhare bhi kaam jarur aaunga"

Chulhe k pass baitha hua wo aadmi Jabbar ki taraf dekh k muskura padta hai

"Are Jabbar Bhai, ye Jaggu tumhare kuch kaam aa saka ye badi baat hai.. waise bhi ek baar aapne bhi aise hi meri madad kari thi

waise ye itna gehra ghaav aaya kaise ?

Aisa lag raha hai jaise kisi serni ne panja mara ho"

Jaggu ne muskurate hue chulhe ki taraf dekhte hue apni baat kahi, par uski baat main kahi na kahi ek kataksh bhi tha.. jise sayad Jabbar abhi k liye samajh nahi paya tha

Jabbar- (Jise abhi bhi dard mehsus ho raha tha) Kahe ki serni.. uski aukat toh main dikhaunga

Jaggu chulhe se Chai ka bartan utarte hue
"Kuch kaha kiya.. Jabbar Bhai"

Jabbar- (Jaise apne hosh sambhalta hai) nahi.. nahi Jaggu kuch nahi

Waise Sayad aapko Jaggu yaad nahi hoga.. esliye phir se ek baar thoda bata deta hu

40-42 Saal ka Jaggu asal main ek Chor hai

Pariwar k naam pe bus akela hai hai.. apne main mast rehta hai, logo se jada milna julna pasand nahi

Haal aisa hai ki Sundarpur main bahut se log toh jante tak nahi ki Jaggu namak koi vyakti bhi hai

Gaon k station k pass ek tuti si jhopdi.. aur yahi eska ghar sansar hai

Kaam k naam pe puri raat chori k liye ass pass k Gaon main firta hai aur din main sota rehta hai

Agar kisi cheez ka sauq hai toh bus 'Chut' ka

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Ek number ka tharki aur daru baaj hai.. nasa bhi khub karta hai, aur eske liye nase ki pudiya banane ka kaam Bankelal karta hai

Ghar ya Jhopdi ki estithi ki baat karu toh ye station Wale raste pe usse thoda pehle hai, Jhopdi k aage Jamun ka ek paid hai, aur piche bus ghass aur jungle jaisa hai

bahar hi jamun k paid 🌴 k pass ek paani ka handpump laga hua hai, jaha eska nahana aur kapde dhulne ka kaam hota hai

Waise ese dekh k lagta nahi.. ki ye kabhi nahata bhi hoga

Jhopdi k andar jameen pe hi ek gadda pada hai jo esne station se churaya tha.. aur es samay Jabbar esi pe pada hua hai

Kamre main ek purana TV hai aur batane ki jarurat toh hai nahi ki wo bhi chori ka hai.. waise Jaggu es TV pe jispe sirf gandi gandi filme dekhta hai DVD pe laga k

Kamre main ek kinare chulha hai, jispe aag jala k apne liye kabhi kabhi khana bana leta hai.. aur esi pe wo es samay Jabbar aur apne liye chai bana raha tha

Waise jadatar toh station k pass Wale theke se daru aur wahi ek dhaba hai usi pe khana kha leta hai

Jaggu Chai ko cup main daal chuka tha.. Jabbar jaise taise dard de tarapte hue uthta hai aur Jaggu k hath se chai ka cup le leta hai

Jaggu wahi ek taraf baithte hue
"Waise subha subha jab tum darwaje pe aisi halat main aaye toh mujhe yakin hi nahi hua ki koi tumhara bhi ye haal kar sakta hai.. waise bataya nahi ye itna gehra jhakm aaya kaise ?"

Jabbar Chai ka ghut bharte hue
"Wo.. ek kutiya ne hamla kar diya tha"

Jaggu- (Maze lete hue) Aap jaise sair ka ek jara si kutiya ne ye haal bana diya ?.. waise kiya apne Gaon ki thi wo kutiya?

Jabbar kuch bol nahi paata bus Jaggu ko kha jane waali nazron se dekh k khud ko shant kar leta hai

Jabbar- Mat bhulo ki ek baar aise hi tum chori karke bhaag rahe thay aur tab maine tumhe chakki main chupa k logo se bachaya tha.. wo bhi bina kisi sawal Jawab k

Jabbar, Jaggu ko ehsaas karwa deta hai ki uska yu baar baar sawal karna use pasand nahi aa raha hai

Par Jaggu toh hai hi mahaharami.. wo apne peele peele daat dikhate hue
"Are Bhai tum toh bura maan gaye, main toh bus esliye puch raha tha ki kismain itni himmat aa gayi jisne mere Jabbar bhai ko bheegi billi diya"

Jaggu bechare kuch bol nahi paata bus bejjeti ka kadwa ghut peeke reh jata hai.. par Jaagu ki baat se ek pal k liye uski aankhon k aage Maalti ka chehra jarur naach gaya tha

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Jaagu apni chai ka antim ghut peete hue
"Chalo main ek kaam karta hu, abhi thodi dair main Jake Kundan se milta hu.. taki wo kuch aur madad kar sake"

Jabbar jaise apni jagah se uchal padta hai, wo turant bol padta hai

"Nahi nahi.. Kundan ya uske pariwar main se kisi ko pata nahi chalna chahiye ki main kaha hu"

Jaggu man hi man muskura padta hai
'Yani mera sochna sahi tha.. Gaon main jo udhti hui kabar hai ki Jabbar ne hi Kundan k bete ko mara tha, jiski wajah se uski aisi halat hai

Us baat main kuch toh sachai hai'

Jaagu apni khushi chupate hue
"Theek hai.. Jabbar bhai aap jab tak chaho yaha aaram se raho

Kisi ko kabhi pata nahi chalega ki aap kaha ho

Aapka ye Bhai hai na"

Jaggu, Jabbar ko barosha toh dila raha tha.. par uske dimag main ek alag hi khichadi pakne lagi thi

Jaggu man hi man kuch sochte hue Jabbar ki taraf dekhta hai aur muskura padta hai
'Agar dimag se kaam lu.. toh sayad ye Jabbar us Maalti tak pahuchne ka rasta ban sakta hai'

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Superb bhai mind-blowing kya bht mast Sean create Kiya h
Ek trf bhanu dra hua h or usne hira panna ko gaon me aane se rok diya h.

to ek trf jaggu ko ka ilaj krke or jabar ke jariye malti tak pahuchne ka soch rha.
Dekhte h bhai aage kya kya hota h
 

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Update #13

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Scene 🖼️ #03

Bhanu puri tarah paseene main bheega hua tha.. subha ki thandak bhi uske behte paseene ko rok nahi pa rahi thi

Wo apne khet ki maid pe ughi hui ghass ko saaf kar raha tha, par uska hath kuch jada hi Joro se chal raha tha

Maano kisi baat ka ghussa kahi aur nikal raha ho

Bhanu hasiye ko joro se chalte hue ghass ko maano kaatne ki jagah uska gala rait raha ho

"Madarchod.. ye Jabbar mera pura khel bigad dega"

Bhanu ek pal k liye saans lene k liye rukta hai aur wahi maid pe baith k bagal ki naali main behte hue thande paani ko apne munh pe marte hue wapas apne ghusse ki aag ugalne lagta hai

"Ye Saala Jabbar na jane Kundan k ghar kiya karne gaya tha.. aur es behenchod ko Maalti pe hamla karne k liye kisne kaha tha

Kahi kuch aisa toh nahi hai.. jiske bare main mujhe pata hi na ho

Wo toh acha hai ki Maalti bach gayi.. qki uski jindagi barbad karne ka haq sirf mera hai

Par usse pehle uska wo haal karunga ki saali maut ki bheekh mangengi"

Bhanu ek Pal k liye rukta hai aur asman main udhti hui chidiya ko dekh k wapas badbadane lagta hai

"Jabbar ko es samay apna pura dhiyan Monu ko khatam karne pe lagana chahiye tha.. qki agar wo Sapola jaag gaya toh meri saalon ki mehnat barbad ho jayegi

Es madarchod Monu k karan pehle 'Anokhi' ko marwana pada aur ab ye saala Jabbar na jane q Maalti k peeche pad gaya hai.. aakhir baat kiya hai ?"

Bhanu jo hamesha shant aur apni buddhi aur sadhyantra pe barosha rakhne wala inshan hai wo es samay puri tarah baichan tha

Bhanu apni jagah se uthta hai aur pure khet main ek kone se dusre kone tak chaihal kadmi karte hue aisi thand main bhi aane waale paseene ko apne gamche se pouchte hue

"Kal se es Jabbar ka bhi kuch pata nahi chal raha.. na jane ye madarchod kaha gayab hai

Mil jaye toh eska gala apne hath se daba du, meri saalon ki mehnat barbad kar raha hai"

Bhanu na jane aise hi kabtak tehelta rehta hai.. aur antatah thak k wahi khet pe kinare lage emli k paid k neeche padi hui Charpai pe jake baith jata hai

Bhanu apna Phone nikalta hai aur use hath main liye hue kuch palon tak bus sochta hi rehta hai

Aur aakhir main ek nirnay pe pahuchte hue kisi ko Phone milata hai

Dusri taraf Phone received hota hai aur ek parichit si aawaz aati hai
"Bus Bhanu bhai.. thodi dair main hum Sundarpur Gaon k station pe pahuchne waale hai"

Bhanu ek lambi si saans leta hai.. jisse uski nirasha ka pata bhi chalta hai

Dusri taraf se
"Kiya Baat hai Bhanu Bhai.. koi pareshani hai, hum Sadhu banne ka pura saman leke aaye hai.. aap bus batao karna kiya hai ?"

Ab toh aap samajh hi gaye honge ki Phone pe dusri taraf aur koi nahi balki Panna hai.. aur uske sath Heera bhi

Shadayantr anusar Heera Panna ko Gaon aana tha.. jiske liye sari taiyariyan ho chuki thi, par Jabbar ne jo kand kiya hai uski wajah se kaafi kuch badalna pad raha hai Bhanu ko

Bhanu- (Kuch Palon tak sochne k baad) nahi abhi k liye tum dono es Gaon main mat aana..

Heera- Par hum toh Sundarpur Station pahuchne hi waale hai ?, achanak ye sab.. ?

Bhanu bina saans liye Jabbar ka Maalti pe hamla karne waali baat batata chala jata hai.. waise puri baat toh khud Bhanu bhi nahi janta tha

Heera- (Dusri taraf se Phone pe) Maine pehle hi kaha tha, ye Jabbar mujhe barosha ka aadmi nahi lagta ?

Bhanu- (Wapas apni jagah se uth k khet pe tehelte hue) Hmm.. par ab kuch kiya nahi ja sakta, qki Jabbar ki es harkat ki wajah se Mahendra ne apne pure pariwar ko aur sajag kar diya hai.. esliye abhi k liye tum dono es Gaon main mat aana

Heera- Phir ab..

Bhanu kuch sochne k baad
"Jis train pe abhi tum dono ho wo yaha sirf 2 Gaon pe rukti hai.. pehle hamare Sundarpur Gaon aur dusre ek aur Gaon 'Phulwa' me

Tum dono Sundarpur na utar k Phulwa Gaon main utarna.. waha ek aadmi milega uske sath chale jana, tumhari khatirdari main koi kami nahi aayegi

Baki main jaldi hi bataunga aage kiya karna hai ?"

Bhanu apni baat samjha k Phone kaat deta hai aur ek pal k liye rukta hai aur turant hi dusra Phone milata hai.. aur es baar wo jise Phone mila raha tha uske liye uski screen pe jo naam nazar aa raha tha wo tha
'Thakur Ji'
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Bhanu apni baat puri karke phone ko charpai pe faikta hai aur ghusse se Jabbar ko wapas gaali deta hai.. ki tabhi usko kisi k hasne aur taali bajane ka swar sunai padta hai

Pehle se hi ghusse se laal Bhanu jaise hi mudke us aadmi ko kuch sunane hi wala tha ki wo ruk padta hai

Qki uske samne khet pe maid pe khada hua wo aadmi jo haste hue taali baja raha tha wo aur koi nahi balki 'Tyagi' tha


Scene 🖼️ #04
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Theek esi samay dusri taraf Gaon se dur Station k pass ek tuti or kabhi bhi girne jaisi estithi main khadi hui Jhopdi k andar

Jabbar ulta hoke laita hua tha.. uski peet pe kisi prakar ki jadi buti ka laip gaya hua tha

Jabbar usi prakar se laite hue apna chehra utha k pass main hi mitti k chulhe pe chai banate hue aadmi se bolta hai

"Tumhara ye ehsaan main kabhi nahi bhulunga, samay aane pe aise hi tumhare bhi kaam jarur aaunga"

Chulhe k pass baitha hua wo aadmi Jabbar ki taraf dekh k muskura padta hai

"Are Jabbar Bhai, ye Jaggu tumhare kuch kaam aa saka ye badi baat hai.. waise bhi ek baar aapne bhi aise hi meri madad kari thi

waise ye itna gehra ghaav aaya kaise ?

Aisa lag raha hai jaise kisi serni ne panja mara ho"

Jaggu ne muskurate hue chulhe ki taraf dekhte hue apni baat kahi, par uski baat main kahi na kahi ek kataksh bhi tha.. jise sayad Jabbar abhi k liye samajh nahi paya tha

Jabbar- (Jise abhi bhi dard mehsus ho raha tha) Kahe ki serni.. uski aukat toh main dikhaunga

Jaggu chulhe se Chai ka bartan utarte hue
"Kuch kaha kiya.. Jabbar Bhai"

Jabbar- (Jaise apne hosh sambhalta hai) nahi.. nahi Jaggu kuch nahi

Waise Sayad aapko Jaggu yaad nahi hoga.. esliye phir se ek baar thoda bata deta hu

40-42 Saal ka Jaggu asal main ek Chor hai

Pariwar k naam pe bus akela hai hai.. apne main mast rehta hai, logo se jada milna julna pasand nahi

Haal aisa hai ki Sundarpur main bahut se log toh jante tak nahi ki Jaggu namak koi vyakti bhi hai

Gaon k station k pass ek tuti si jhopdi.. aur yahi eska ghar sansar hai

Kaam k naam pe puri raat chori k liye ass pass k Gaon main firta hai aur din main sota rehta hai

Agar kisi cheez ka sauq hai toh bus 'Chut' ka

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Ek number ka tharki aur daru baaj hai.. nasa bhi khub karta hai, aur eske liye nase ki pudiya banane ka kaam Bankelal karta hai

Ghar ya Jhopdi ki estithi ki baat karu toh ye station Wale raste pe usse thoda pehle hai, Jhopdi k aage Jamun ka ek paid hai, aur piche bus ghass aur jungle jaisa hai

bahar hi jamun k paid 🌴 k pass ek paani ka handpump laga hua hai, jaha eska nahana aur kapde dhulne ka kaam hota hai

Waise ese dekh k lagta nahi.. ki ye kabhi nahata bhi hoga

Jhopdi k andar jameen pe hi ek gadda pada hai jo esne station se churaya tha.. aur es samay Jabbar esi pe pada hua hai

Kamre main ek purana TV hai aur batane ki jarurat toh hai nahi ki wo bhi chori ka hai.. waise Jaggu es TV pe jispe sirf gandi gandi filme dekhta hai DVD pe laga k

Kamre main ek kinare chulha hai, jispe aag jala k apne liye kabhi kabhi khana bana leta hai.. aur esi pe wo es samay Jabbar aur apne liye chai bana raha tha

Waise jadatar toh station k pass Wale theke se daru aur wahi ek dhaba hai usi pe khana kha leta hai

Jaggu Chai ko cup main daal chuka tha.. Jabbar jaise taise dard de tarapte hue uthta hai aur Jaggu k hath se chai ka cup le leta hai

Jaggu wahi ek taraf baithte hue
"Waise subha subha jab tum darwaje pe aisi halat main aaye toh mujhe yakin hi nahi hua ki koi tumhara bhi ye haal kar sakta hai.. waise bataya nahi ye itna gehra jhakm aaya kaise ?"

Jabbar Chai ka ghut bharte hue
"Wo.. ek kutiya ne hamla kar diya tha"

Jaggu- (Maze lete hue) Aap jaise sair ka ek jara si kutiya ne ye haal bana diya ?.. waise kiya apne Gaon ki thi wo kutiya?

Jabbar kuch bol nahi paata bus Jaggu ko kha jane waali nazron se dekh k khud ko shant kar leta hai

Jabbar- Mat bhulo ki ek baar aise hi tum chori karke bhaag rahe thay aur tab maine tumhe chakki main chupa k logo se bachaya tha.. wo bhi bina kisi sawal Jawab k

Jabbar, Jaggu ko ehsaas karwa deta hai ki uska yu baar baar sawal karna use pasand nahi aa raha hai

Par Jaggu toh hai hi mahaharami.. wo apne peele peele daat dikhate hue
"Are Bhai tum toh bura maan gaye, main toh bus esliye puch raha tha ki kismain itni himmat aa gayi jisne mere Jabbar bhai ko bheegi billi diya"

Jaggu bechare kuch bol nahi paata bus bejjeti ka kadwa ghut peeke reh jata hai.. par Jaagu ki baat se ek pal k liye uski aankhon k aage Maalti ka chehra jarur naach gaya tha

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Jaagu apni chai ka antim ghut peete hue
"Chalo main ek kaam karta hu, abhi thodi dair main Jake Kundan se milta hu.. taki wo kuch aur madad kar sake"

Jabbar jaise apni jagah se uchal padta hai, wo turant bol padta hai

"Nahi nahi.. Kundan ya uske pariwar main se kisi ko pata nahi chalna chahiye ki main kaha hu"

Jaggu man hi man muskura padta hai
'Yani mera sochna sahi tha.. Gaon main jo udhti hui kabar hai ki Jabbar ne hi Kundan k bete ko mara tha, jiski wajah se uski aisi halat hai

Us baat main kuch toh sachai hai'

Jaagu apni khushi chupate hue
"Theek hai.. Jabbar bhai aap jab tak chaho yaha aaram se raho

Kisi ko kabhi pata nahi chalega ki aap kaha ho

Aapka ye Bhai hai na"

Jaggu, Jabbar ko barosha toh dila raha tha.. par uske dimag main ek alag hi khichadi pakne lagi thi

Jaggu man hi man kuch sochte hue Jabbar ki taraf dekhta hai aur muskura padta hai
'Agar dimag se kaam lu.. toh sayad ye Jabbar us Maalti tak pahuchne ka rasta ban sakta hai'

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Daaaaya ra daaaaya......
Aab Chudagi Bhanu ki Maaya...
Agar Jag jaya Monu Bhaya...
Tab kiya kara ga, aa Sheela ka Saiya...
Kundan bilkul vi nhi karaga der...
Pela ga isko, caha kuw na ho jaya Andher...
Maalti Mummy nikalagi apni Gussa...
Kat ka is ka Lund, karagi do hissa...
Roya gi bahut Sheela...
Boli gi Matherchod, mera Bhatija ko kuw Pela...
Akhir kiya tha uska Bhul...
Jo leta diya Usko marka....
You Bloody fool....


Aa Tyagi Matherchod ko to pata chal gaya akhir kon ha Monu ki Coma jana ka picha.....
Aa jarur koi naya sariyarnat karaga Bhanu ka sath milka....

Sala Bhadba Jabbar, avi vi fudak raha ha....
Is ka to Game Bajana padaga...
Or kahi aa Jaggu Chor hi na koi bandobas karda iska, Monu ki Maa ki Chakkar ma...

Par aa Thakur ka Bhanu or Maalti Mummy ka paribar sa kiya sambhand.....
Aa to mujha samaj nhi aa raha ha...
Lagta ha koi bada khel chal raha ha....


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