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बहुत ही सुंदर लाजवाब और अद्भुत मनमोहक अपडेट हैं भाई मजा आ गयाUpdate #13
Scene#03
Bhanu puri tarah paseene main bheega hua tha.. subha ki thandak bhi uske behte paseene ko rok nahi pa rahi thi
Wo apne khet ki maid pe ughi hui ghass ko saaf kar raha tha, par uska hath kuch jada hi Joro se chal raha tha
Maano kisi baat ka ghussa kahi aur nikal raha ho
Bhanu hasiye ko joro se chalte hue ghass ko maano kaatne ki jagah uska gala rait raha ho
"Madarchod.. ye Jabbar mera pura khel bigad dega"
Bhanu ek pal k liye saans lene k liye rukta hai aur wahi maid pe baith k bagal ki naali main behte hue thande paani ko apne munh pe marte hue wapas apne ghusse ki aag ugalne lagta hai
"Ye Saala Jabbar na jane Kundan k ghar kiya karne gaya tha.. aur es behenchod ko Maalti pe hamla karne k liye kisne kaha tha
Kahi kuch aisa toh nahi hai.. jiske bare main mujhe pata hi na ho
Wo toh acha hai ki Maalti bach gayi.. qki uski jindagi barbad karne ka haq sirf mera hai
Par usse pehle uska wo haal karunga ki saali maut ki bheekh mangengi"
Bhanu ek Pal k liye rukta hai aur asman main udhti hui chidiya ko dekh k wapas badbadane lagta hai
"Jabbar ko es samay apna pura dhiyan Monu ko khatam karne pe lagana chahiye tha.. qki agar wo Sapola jaag gaya toh meri saalon ki mehnat barbad ho jayegi
Es madarchod Monu k karan pehle 'Anokhi' ko marwana pada aur ab ye saala Jabbar na jane q Maalti k peeche pad gaya hai.. aakhir baat kiya hai ?"
Bhanu jo hamesha shant aur apni buddhi aur sadhyantra pe barosha rakhne wala inshan hai wo es samay puri tarah baichan tha
Bhanu apni jagah se uthta hai aur pure khet main ek kone se dusre kone tak chaihal kadmi karte hue aisi thand main bhi aane waale paseene ko apne gamche se pouchte hue
"Kal se es Jabbar ka bhi kuch pata nahi chal raha.. na jane ye madarchod kaha gayab hai
Mil jaye toh eska gala apne hath se daba du, meri saalon ki mehnat barbad kar raha hai"
Bhanu na jane aise hi kabtak tehelta rehta hai.. aur antatah thak k wahi khet pe kinare lage emli k paid k neeche padi hui Charpai pe jake baith jata hai
Bhanu apna Phone nikalta hai aur use hath main liye hue kuch palon tak bus sochta hi rehta hai
Aur aakhir main ek nirnay pe pahuchte hue kisi ko Phone milata hai
Dusri taraf Phone received hota hai aur ek parichit si aawaz aati hai
"Bus Bhanu bhai.. thodi dair main hum Sundarpur Gaon k station pe pahuchne waale hai"
Bhanu ek lambi si saans leta hai.. jisse uski nirasha ka pata bhi chalta hai
Dusri taraf se
"Kiya Baat hai Bhanu Bhai.. koi pareshani hai, hum Sadhu banne ka pura saman leke aaye hai.. aap bus batao karna kiya hai ?"
Ab toh aap samajh hi gaye honge ki Phone pe dusri taraf aur koi nahi balki Panna hai.. aur uske sath Heera bhi
Shadayantr anusar Heera Panna ko Gaon aana tha.. jiske liye sari taiyariyan ho chuki thi, par Jabbar ne jo kand kiya hai uski wajah se kaafi kuch badalna pad raha hai Bhanu ko
Bhanu- (Kuch Palon tak sochne k baad) nahi abhi k liye tum dono es Gaon main mat aana..
Heera- Par hum toh Sundarpur Station pahuchne hi waale hai ?, achanak ye sab.. ?
Bhanu bina saans liye Jabbar ka Maalti pe hamla karne waali baat batata chala jata hai.. waise puri baat toh khud Bhanu bhi nahi janta tha
Heera- (Dusri taraf se Phone pe) Maine pehle hi kaha tha, ye Jabbar mujhe barosha ka aadmi nahi lagta ?
Bhanu- (Wapas apni jagah se uth k khet pe tehelte hue) Hmm.. par ab kuch kiya nahi ja sakta, qki Jabbar ki es harkat ki wajah se Mahendra ne apne pure pariwar ko aur sajag kar diya hai.. esliye abhi k liye tum dono es Gaon main mat aana
Heera- Phir ab..
Bhanu kuch sochne k baad
"Jis train pe abhi tum dono ho wo yaha sirf 2 Gaon pe rukti hai.. pehle hamare Sundarpur Gaon aur dusre ek aur Gaon 'Phulwa' me
Tum dono Sundarpur na utar k Phulwa Gaon main utarna.. waha ek aadmi milega uske sath chale jana, tumhari khatirdari main koi kami nahi aayegi
Baki main jaldi hi bataunga aage kiya karna hai ?"
Bhanu apni baat samjha k Phone kaat deta hai aur ek pal k liye rukta hai aur turant hi dusra Phone milata hai.. aur es baar wo jise Phone mila raha tha uske liye uski screen pe jo naam nazar aa raha tha wo tha
'Thakur Ji'
Bhanu apni baat puri karke phone ko charpai pe faikta hai aur ghusse se Jabbar ko wapas gaali deta hai.. ki tabhi usko kisi k hasne aur taali bajane ka swar sunai padta hai
Pehle se hi ghusse se laal Bhanu jaise hi mudke us aadmi ko kuch sunane hi wala tha ki wo ruk padta hai
Qki uske samne khet pe maid pe khada hua wo aadmi jo haste hue taali baja raha tha wo aur koi nahi balki 'Tyagi' tha
Scene#04
Theek esi samay dusri taraf Gaon se dur Station k pass ek tuti or kabhi bhi girne jaisi estithi main khadi hui Jhopdi k andar
Jabbar ulta hoke laita hua tha.. uski peet pe kisi prakar ki jadi buti ka laip gaya hua tha
Jabbar usi prakar se laite hue apna chehra utha k pass main hi mitti k chulhe pe chai banate hue aadmi se bolta hai
"Tumhara ye ehsaan main kabhi nahi bhulunga, samay aane pe aise hi tumhare bhi kaam jarur aaunga"
Chulhe k pass baitha hua wo aadmi Jabbar ki taraf dekh k muskura padta hai
"Are Jabbar Bhai, ye Jaggu tumhare kuch kaam aa saka ye badi baat hai.. waise bhi ek baar aapne bhi aise hi meri madad kari thi
waise ye itna gehra ghaav aaya kaise ?
Aisa lag raha hai jaise kisi serni ne panja mara ho"
Jaggu ne muskurate hue chulhe ki taraf dekhte hue apni baat kahi, par uski baat main kahi na kahi ek kataksh bhi tha.. jise sayad Jabbar abhi k liye samajh nahi paya tha
Jabbar- (Jise abhi bhi dard mehsus ho raha tha) Kahe ki serni.. uski aukat toh main dikhaunga
Jaggu chulhe se Chai ka bartan utarte hue
"Kuch kaha kiya.. Jabbar Bhai"
Jabbar- (Jaise apne hosh sambhalta hai) nahi.. nahi Jaggu kuch nahi
Waise Sayad aapko Jaggu yaad nahi hoga.. esliye phir se ek baar thoda bata deta hu
40-42 Saal ka Jaggu asal main ek Chor hai
Pariwar k naam pe bus akela hai hai.. apne main mast rehta hai, logo se jada milna julna pasand nahi
Haal aisa hai ki Sundarpur main bahut se log toh jante tak nahi ki Jaggu namak koi vyakti bhi hai
Gaon k station k pass ek tuti si jhopdi.. aur yahi eska ghar sansar hai
Kaam k naam pe puri raat chori k liye ass pass k Gaon main firta hai aur din main sota rehta hai
Agar kisi cheez ka sauq hai toh bus 'Chut' ka
Ek number ka tharki aur daru baaj hai.. nasa bhi khub karta hai, aur eske liye nase ki pudiya banane ka kaam Bankelal karta hai
Ghar ya Jhopdi ki estithi ki baat karu toh ye station Wale raste pe usse thoda pehle hai, Jhopdi k aage Jamun ka ek paid hai, aur piche bus ghass aur jungle jaisa hai
bahar hi jamun k paidk pass ek paani ka handpump laga hua hai, jaha eska nahana aur kapde dhulne ka kaam hota hai
Waise ese dekh k lagta nahi.. ki ye kabhi nahata bhi hoga
Jhopdi k andar jameen pe hi ek gadda pada hai jo esne station se churaya tha.. aur es samay Jabbar esi pe pada hua hai
Kamre main ek purana TV hai aur batane ki jarurat toh hai nahi ki wo bhi chori ka hai.. waise Jaggu es TV pe jispe sirf gandi gandi filme dekhta hai DVD pe laga k
Kamre main ek kinare chulha hai, jispe aag jala k apne liye kabhi kabhi khana bana leta hai.. aur esi pe wo es samay Jabbar aur apne liye chai bana raha tha
Waise jadatar toh station k pass Wale theke se daru aur wahi ek dhaba hai usi pe khana kha leta hai
Jaggu Chai ko cup main daal chuka tha.. Jabbar jaise taise dard de tarapte hue uthta hai aur Jaggu k hath se chai ka cup le leta hai
Jaggu wahi ek taraf baithte hue
"Waise subha subha jab tum darwaje pe aisi halat main aaye toh mujhe yakin hi nahi hua ki koi tumhara bhi ye haal kar sakta hai.. waise bataya nahi ye itna gehra jhakm aaya kaise ?"
Jabbar Chai ka ghut bharte hue
"Wo.. ek kutiya ne hamla kar diya tha"
Jaggu- (Maze lete hue) Aap jaise sair ka ek jara si kutiya ne ye haal bana diya ?.. waise kiya apne Gaon ki thi wo kutiya?
Jabbar kuch bol nahi paata bus Jaggu ko kha jane waali nazron se dekh k khud ko shant kar leta hai
Jabbar- Mat bhulo ki ek baar aise hi tum chori karke bhaag rahe thay aur tab maine tumhe chakki main chupa k logo se bachaya tha.. wo bhi bina kisi sawal Jawab k
Jabbar, Jaggu ko ehsaas karwa deta hai ki uska yu baar baar sawal karna use pasand nahi aa raha hai
Par Jaggu toh hai hi mahaharami.. wo apne peele peele daat dikhate hue
"Are Bhai tum toh bura maan gaye, main toh bus esliye puch raha tha ki kismain itni himmat aa gayi jisne mere Jabbar bhai ko bheegi billi diya"
Jaggu bechare kuch bol nahi paata bus bejjeti ka kadwa ghut peeke reh jata hai.. par Jaagu ki baat se ek pal k liye uski aankhon k aage Maalti ka chehra jarur naach gaya tha
Jaagu apni chai ka antim ghut peete hue
"Chalo main ek kaam karta hu, abhi thodi dair main Jake Kundan se milta hu.. taki wo kuch aur madad kar sake"
Jabbar jaise apni jagah se uchal padta hai, wo turant bol padta hai
"Nahi nahi.. Kundan ya uske pariwar main se kisi ko pata nahi chalna chahiye ki main kaha hu"
Jaggu man hi man muskura padta hai
'Yani mera sochna sahi tha.. Gaon main jo udhti hui kabar hai ki Jabbar ne hi Kundan k bete ko mara tha, jiski wajah se uski aisi halat hai
Us baat main kuch toh sachai hai'
Jaagu apni khushi chupate hue
"Theek hai.. Jabbar bhai aap jab tak chaho yaha aaram se raho
Kisi ko kabhi pata nahi chalega ki aap kaha ho
Aapka ye Bhai hai na"
Jaggu, Jabbar ko barosha toh dila raha tha.. par uske dimag main ek alag hi khichadi pakne lagi thi
Jaggu man hi man kuch sochte hue Jabbar ki taraf dekhta hai aur muskura padta hai
'Agar dimag se kaam lu.. toh sayad ye Jabbar us Maalti tak pahuchne ka rasta ban sakta hai'
Update #13
Scene#03
Bhanu puri tarah paseene main bheega hua tha.. subha ki thandak bhi uske behte paseene ko rok nahi pa rahi thi
Wo apne khet ki maid pe ughi hui ghass ko saaf kar raha tha, par uska hath kuch jada hi Joro se chal raha tha
Maano kisi baat ka ghussa kahi aur nikal raha ho
Bhanu hasiye ko joro se chalte hue ghass ko maano kaatne ki jagah uska gala rait raha ho
"Madarchod.. ye Jabbar mera pura khel bigad dega"
Bhanu ek pal k liye saans lene k liye rukta hai aur wahi maid pe baith k bagal ki naali main behte hue thande paani ko apne munh pe marte hue wapas apne ghusse ki aag ugalne lagta hai
"Ye Saala Jabbar na jane Kundan k ghar kiya karne gaya tha.. aur es behenchod ko Maalti pe hamla karne k liye kisne kaha tha
Kahi kuch aisa toh nahi hai.. jiske bare main mujhe pata hi na ho
Wo toh acha hai ki Maalti bach gayi.. qki uski jindagi barbad karne ka haq sirf mera hai
Par usse pehle uska wo haal karunga ki saali maut ki bheekh mangengi"
Bhanu ek Pal k liye rukta hai aur asman main udhti hui chidiya ko dekh k wapas badbadane lagta hai
"Jabbar ko es samay apna pura dhiyan Monu ko khatam karne pe lagana chahiye tha.. qki agar wo Sapola jaag gaya toh meri saalon ki mehnat barbad ho jayegi
Es madarchod Monu k karan pehle 'Anokhi' ko marwana pada aur ab ye saala Jabbar na jane q Maalti k peeche pad gaya hai.. aakhir baat kiya hai ?"
Bhanu jo hamesha shant aur apni buddhi aur sadhyantra pe barosha rakhne wala inshan hai wo es samay puri tarah baichan tha
Bhanu apni jagah se uthta hai aur pure khet main ek kone se dusre kone tak chaihal kadmi karte hue aisi thand main bhi aane waale paseene ko apne gamche se pouchte hue
"Kal se es Jabbar ka bhi kuch pata nahi chal raha.. na jane ye madarchod kaha gayab hai
Mil jaye toh eska gala apne hath se daba du, meri saalon ki mehnat barbad kar raha hai"
Bhanu na jane aise hi kabtak tehelta rehta hai.. aur antatah thak k wahi khet pe kinare lage emli k paid k neeche padi hui Charpai pe jake baith jata hai
Bhanu apna Phone nikalta hai aur use hath main liye hue kuch palon tak bus sochta hi rehta hai
Aur aakhir main ek nirnay pe pahuchte hue kisi ko Phone milata hai
Dusri taraf Phone received hota hai aur ek parichit si aawaz aati hai
"Bus Bhanu bhai.. thodi dair main hum Sundarpur Gaon k station pe pahuchne waale hai"
Bhanu ek lambi si saans leta hai.. jisse uski nirasha ka pata bhi chalta hai
Dusri taraf se
"Kiya Baat hai Bhanu Bhai.. koi pareshani hai, hum Sadhu banne ka pura saman leke aaye hai.. aap bus batao karna kiya hai ?"
Ab toh aap samajh hi gaye honge ki Phone pe dusri taraf aur koi nahi balki Panna hai.. aur uske sath Heera bhi
Shadayantr anusar Heera Panna ko Gaon aana tha.. jiske liye sari taiyariyan ho chuki thi, par Jabbar ne jo kand kiya hai uski wajah se kaafi kuch badalna pad raha hai Bhanu ko
Bhanu- (Kuch Palon tak sochne k baad) nahi abhi k liye tum dono es Gaon main mat aana..
Heera- Par hum toh Sundarpur Station pahuchne hi waale hai ?, achanak ye sab.. ?
Bhanu bina saans liye Jabbar ka Maalti pe hamla karne waali baat batata chala jata hai.. waise puri baat toh khud Bhanu bhi nahi janta tha
Heera- (Dusri taraf se Phone pe) Maine pehle hi kaha tha, ye Jabbar mujhe barosha ka aadmi nahi lagta ?
Bhanu- (Wapas apni jagah se uth k khet pe tehelte hue) Hmm.. par ab kuch kiya nahi ja sakta, qki Jabbar ki es harkat ki wajah se Mahendra ne apne pure pariwar ko aur sajag kar diya hai.. esliye abhi k liye tum dono es Gaon main mat aana
Heera- Phir ab..
Bhanu kuch sochne k baad
"Jis train pe abhi tum dono ho wo yaha sirf 2 Gaon pe rukti hai.. pehle hamare Sundarpur Gaon aur dusre ek aur Gaon 'Phulwa' me
Tum dono Sundarpur na utar k Phulwa Gaon main utarna.. waha ek aadmi milega uske sath chale jana, tumhari khatirdari main koi kami nahi aayegi
Baki main jaldi hi bataunga aage kiya karna hai ?"
Bhanu apni baat samjha k Phone kaat deta hai aur ek pal k liye rukta hai aur turant hi dusra Phone milata hai.. aur es baar wo jise Phone mila raha tha uske liye uski screen pe jo naam nazar aa raha tha wo tha
'Thakur Ji'
Bhanu apni baat puri karke phone ko charpai pe faikta hai aur ghusse se Jabbar ko wapas gaali deta hai.. ki tabhi usko kisi k hasne aur taali bajane ka swar sunai padta hai
Pehle se hi ghusse se laal Bhanu jaise hi mudke us aadmi ko kuch sunane hi wala tha ki wo ruk padta hai
Qki uske samne khet pe maid pe khada hua wo aadmi jo haste hue taali baja raha tha wo aur koi nahi balki 'Tyagi' tha
Scene#04
Theek esi samay dusri taraf Gaon se dur Station k pass ek tuti or kabhi bhi girne jaisi estithi main khadi hui Jhopdi k andar
Jabbar ulta hoke laita hua tha.. uski peet pe kisi prakar ki jadi buti ka laip gaya hua tha
Jabbar usi prakar se laite hue apna chehra utha k pass main hi mitti k chulhe pe chai banate hue aadmi se bolta hai
"Tumhara ye ehsaan main kabhi nahi bhulunga, samay aane pe aise hi tumhare bhi kaam jarur aaunga"
Chulhe k pass baitha hua wo aadmi Jabbar ki taraf dekh k muskura padta hai
"Are Jabbar Bhai, ye Jaggu tumhare kuch kaam aa saka ye badi baat hai.. waise bhi ek baar aapne bhi aise hi meri madad kari thi
waise ye itna gehra ghaav aaya kaise ?
Aisa lag raha hai jaise kisi serni ne panja mara ho"
Jaggu ne muskurate hue chulhe ki taraf dekhte hue apni baat kahi, par uski baat main kahi na kahi ek kataksh bhi tha.. jise sayad Jabbar abhi k liye samajh nahi paya tha
Jabbar- (Jise abhi bhi dard mehsus ho raha tha) Kahe ki serni.. uski aukat toh main dikhaunga
Jaggu chulhe se Chai ka bartan utarte hue
"Kuch kaha kiya.. Jabbar Bhai"
Jabbar- (Jaise apne hosh sambhalta hai) nahi.. nahi Jaggu kuch nahi
Waise Sayad aapko Jaggu yaad nahi hoga.. esliye phir se ek baar thoda bata deta hu
40-42 Saal ka Jaggu asal main ek Chor hai
Pariwar k naam pe bus akela hai hai.. apne main mast rehta hai, logo se jada milna julna pasand nahi
Haal aisa hai ki Sundarpur main bahut se log toh jante tak nahi ki Jaggu namak koi vyakti bhi hai
Gaon k station k pass ek tuti si jhopdi.. aur yahi eska ghar sansar hai
Kaam k naam pe puri raat chori k liye ass pass k Gaon main firta hai aur din main sota rehta hai
Agar kisi cheez ka sauq hai toh bus 'Chut' ka
Ek number ka tharki aur daru baaj hai.. nasa bhi khub karta hai, aur eske liye nase ki pudiya banane ka kaam Bankelal karta hai
Ghar ya Jhopdi ki estithi ki baat karu toh ye station Wale raste pe usse thoda pehle hai, Jhopdi k aage Jamun ka ek paid hai, aur piche bus ghass aur jungle jaisa hai
bahar hi jamun k paidk pass ek paani ka handpump laga hua hai, jaha eska nahana aur kapde dhulne ka kaam hota hai
Waise ese dekh k lagta nahi.. ki ye kabhi nahata bhi hoga
Jhopdi k andar jameen pe hi ek gadda pada hai jo esne station se churaya tha.. aur es samay Jabbar esi pe pada hua hai
Kamre main ek purana TV hai aur batane ki jarurat toh hai nahi ki wo bhi chori ka hai.. waise Jaggu es TV pe jispe sirf gandi gandi filme dekhta hai DVD pe laga k
Kamre main ek kinare chulha hai, jispe aag jala k apne liye kabhi kabhi khana bana leta hai.. aur esi pe wo es samay Jabbar aur apne liye chai bana raha tha
Waise jadatar toh station k pass Wale theke se daru aur wahi ek dhaba hai usi pe khana kha leta hai
Jaggu Chai ko cup main daal chuka tha.. Jabbar jaise taise dard de tarapte hue uthta hai aur Jaggu k hath se chai ka cup le leta hai
Jaggu wahi ek taraf baithte hue
"Waise subha subha jab tum darwaje pe aisi halat main aaye toh mujhe yakin hi nahi hua ki koi tumhara bhi ye haal kar sakta hai.. waise bataya nahi ye itna gehra jhakm aaya kaise ?"
Jabbar Chai ka ghut bharte hue
"Wo.. ek kutiya ne hamla kar diya tha"
Jaggu- (Maze lete hue) Aap jaise sair ka ek jara si kutiya ne ye haal bana diya ?.. waise kiya apne Gaon ki thi wo kutiya?
Jabbar kuch bol nahi paata bus Jaggu ko kha jane waali nazron se dekh k khud ko shant kar leta hai
Jabbar- Mat bhulo ki ek baar aise hi tum chori karke bhaag rahe thay aur tab maine tumhe chakki main chupa k logo se bachaya tha.. wo bhi bina kisi sawal Jawab k
Jabbar, Jaggu ko ehsaas karwa deta hai ki uska yu baar baar sawal karna use pasand nahi aa raha hai
Par Jaggu toh hai hi mahaharami.. wo apne peele peele daat dikhate hue
"Are Bhai tum toh bura maan gaye, main toh bus esliye puch raha tha ki kismain itni himmat aa gayi jisne mere Jabbar bhai ko bheegi billi diya"
Jaggu bechare kuch bol nahi paata bus bejjeti ka kadwa ghut peeke reh jata hai.. par Jaagu ki baat se ek pal k liye uski aankhon k aage Maalti ka chehra jarur naach gaya tha
Jaagu apni chai ka antim ghut peete hue
"Chalo main ek kaam karta hu, abhi thodi dair main Jake Kundan se milta hu.. taki wo kuch aur madad kar sake"
Jabbar jaise apni jagah se uchal padta hai, wo turant bol padta hai
"Nahi nahi.. Kundan ya uske pariwar main se kisi ko pata nahi chalna chahiye ki main kaha hu"
Jaggu man hi man muskura padta hai
'Yani mera sochna sahi tha.. Gaon main jo udhti hui kabar hai ki Jabbar ne hi Kundan k bete ko mara tha, jiski wajah se uski aisi halat hai
Us baat main kuch toh sachai hai'
Jaagu apni khushi chupate hue
"Theek hai.. Jabbar bhai aap jab tak chaho yaha aaram se raho
Kisi ko kabhi pata nahi chalega ki aap kaha ho
Aapka ye Bhai hai na"
Jaggu, Jabbar ko barosha toh dila raha tha.. par uske dimag main ek alag hi khichadi pakne lagi thi
Jaggu man hi man kuch sochte hue Jabbar ki taraf dekhta hai aur muskura padta hai
'Agar dimag se kaam lu.. toh sayad ye Jabbar us Maalti tak pahuchne ka rasta ban sakta hai'
Superb bhai mind-blowing kya bht mast Sean create Kiya hUpdate #13
Scene#03
Bhanu puri tarah paseene main bheega hua tha.. subha ki thandak bhi uske behte paseene ko rok nahi pa rahi thi
Wo apne khet ki maid pe ughi hui ghass ko saaf kar raha tha, par uska hath kuch jada hi Joro se chal raha tha
Maano kisi baat ka ghussa kahi aur nikal raha ho
Bhanu hasiye ko joro se chalte hue ghass ko maano kaatne ki jagah uska gala rait raha ho
"Madarchod.. ye Jabbar mera pura khel bigad dega"
Bhanu ek pal k liye saans lene k liye rukta hai aur wahi maid pe baith k bagal ki naali main behte hue thande paani ko apne munh pe marte hue wapas apne ghusse ki aag ugalne lagta hai
"Ye Saala Jabbar na jane Kundan k ghar kiya karne gaya tha.. aur es behenchod ko Maalti pe hamla karne k liye kisne kaha tha
Kahi kuch aisa toh nahi hai.. jiske bare main mujhe pata hi na ho
Wo toh acha hai ki Maalti bach gayi.. qki uski jindagi barbad karne ka haq sirf mera hai
Par usse pehle uska wo haal karunga ki saali maut ki bheekh mangengi"
Bhanu ek Pal k liye rukta hai aur asman main udhti hui chidiya ko dekh k wapas badbadane lagta hai
"Jabbar ko es samay apna pura dhiyan Monu ko khatam karne pe lagana chahiye tha.. qki agar wo Sapola jaag gaya toh meri saalon ki mehnat barbad ho jayegi
Es madarchod Monu k karan pehle 'Anokhi' ko marwana pada aur ab ye saala Jabbar na jane q Maalti k peeche pad gaya hai.. aakhir baat kiya hai ?"
Bhanu jo hamesha shant aur apni buddhi aur sadhyantra pe barosha rakhne wala inshan hai wo es samay puri tarah baichan tha
Bhanu apni jagah se uthta hai aur pure khet main ek kone se dusre kone tak chaihal kadmi karte hue aisi thand main bhi aane waale paseene ko apne gamche se pouchte hue
"Kal se es Jabbar ka bhi kuch pata nahi chal raha.. na jane ye madarchod kaha gayab hai
Mil jaye toh eska gala apne hath se daba du, meri saalon ki mehnat barbad kar raha hai"
Bhanu na jane aise hi kabtak tehelta rehta hai.. aur antatah thak k wahi khet pe kinare lage emli k paid k neeche padi hui Charpai pe jake baith jata hai
Bhanu apna Phone nikalta hai aur use hath main liye hue kuch palon tak bus sochta hi rehta hai
Aur aakhir main ek nirnay pe pahuchte hue kisi ko Phone milata hai
Dusri taraf Phone received hota hai aur ek parichit si aawaz aati hai
"Bus Bhanu bhai.. thodi dair main hum Sundarpur Gaon k station pe pahuchne waale hai"
Bhanu ek lambi si saans leta hai.. jisse uski nirasha ka pata bhi chalta hai
Dusri taraf se
"Kiya Baat hai Bhanu Bhai.. koi pareshani hai, hum Sadhu banne ka pura saman leke aaye hai.. aap bus batao karna kiya hai ?"
Ab toh aap samajh hi gaye honge ki Phone pe dusri taraf aur koi nahi balki Panna hai.. aur uske sath Heera bhi
Shadayantr anusar Heera Panna ko Gaon aana tha.. jiske liye sari taiyariyan ho chuki thi, par Jabbar ne jo kand kiya hai uski wajah se kaafi kuch badalna pad raha hai Bhanu ko
Bhanu- (Kuch Palon tak sochne k baad) nahi abhi k liye tum dono es Gaon main mat aana..
Heera- Par hum toh Sundarpur Station pahuchne hi waale hai ?, achanak ye sab.. ?
Bhanu bina saans liye Jabbar ka Maalti pe hamla karne waali baat batata chala jata hai.. waise puri baat toh khud Bhanu bhi nahi janta tha
Heera- (Dusri taraf se Phone pe) Maine pehle hi kaha tha, ye Jabbar mujhe barosha ka aadmi nahi lagta ?
Bhanu- (Wapas apni jagah se uth k khet pe tehelte hue) Hmm.. par ab kuch kiya nahi ja sakta, qki Jabbar ki es harkat ki wajah se Mahendra ne apne pure pariwar ko aur sajag kar diya hai.. esliye abhi k liye tum dono es Gaon main mat aana
Heera- Phir ab..
Bhanu kuch sochne k baad
"Jis train pe abhi tum dono ho wo yaha sirf 2 Gaon pe rukti hai.. pehle hamare Sundarpur Gaon aur dusre ek aur Gaon 'Phulwa' me
Tum dono Sundarpur na utar k Phulwa Gaon main utarna.. waha ek aadmi milega uske sath chale jana, tumhari khatirdari main koi kami nahi aayegi
Baki main jaldi hi bataunga aage kiya karna hai ?"
Bhanu apni baat samjha k Phone kaat deta hai aur ek pal k liye rukta hai aur turant hi dusra Phone milata hai.. aur es baar wo jise Phone mila raha tha uske liye uski screen pe jo naam nazar aa raha tha wo tha
'Thakur Ji'
Bhanu apni baat puri karke phone ko charpai pe faikta hai aur ghusse se Jabbar ko wapas gaali deta hai.. ki tabhi usko kisi k hasne aur taali bajane ka swar sunai padta hai
Pehle se hi ghusse se laal Bhanu jaise hi mudke us aadmi ko kuch sunane hi wala tha ki wo ruk padta hai
Qki uske samne khet pe maid pe khada hua wo aadmi jo haste hue taali baja raha tha wo aur koi nahi balki 'Tyagi' tha
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Theek esi samay dusri taraf Gaon se dur Station k pass ek tuti or kabhi bhi girne jaisi estithi main khadi hui Jhopdi k andar
Jabbar ulta hoke laita hua tha.. uski peet pe kisi prakar ki jadi buti ka laip gaya hua tha
Jabbar usi prakar se laite hue apna chehra utha k pass main hi mitti k chulhe pe chai banate hue aadmi se bolta hai
"Tumhara ye ehsaan main kabhi nahi bhulunga, samay aane pe aise hi tumhare bhi kaam jarur aaunga"
Chulhe k pass baitha hua wo aadmi Jabbar ki taraf dekh k muskura padta hai
"Are Jabbar Bhai, ye Jaggu tumhare kuch kaam aa saka ye badi baat hai.. waise bhi ek baar aapne bhi aise hi meri madad kari thi
waise ye itna gehra ghaav aaya kaise ?
Aisa lag raha hai jaise kisi serni ne panja mara ho"
Jaggu ne muskurate hue chulhe ki taraf dekhte hue apni baat kahi, par uski baat main kahi na kahi ek kataksh bhi tha.. jise sayad Jabbar abhi k liye samajh nahi paya tha
Jabbar- (Jise abhi bhi dard mehsus ho raha tha) Kahe ki serni.. uski aukat toh main dikhaunga
Jaggu chulhe se Chai ka bartan utarte hue
"Kuch kaha kiya.. Jabbar Bhai"
Jabbar- (Jaise apne hosh sambhalta hai) nahi.. nahi Jaggu kuch nahi
Waise Sayad aapko Jaggu yaad nahi hoga.. esliye phir se ek baar thoda bata deta hu
40-42 Saal ka Jaggu asal main ek Chor hai
Pariwar k naam pe bus akela hai hai.. apne main mast rehta hai, logo se jada milna julna pasand nahi
Haal aisa hai ki Sundarpur main bahut se log toh jante tak nahi ki Jaggu namak koi vyakti bhi hai
Gaon k station k pass ek tuti si jhopdi.. aur yahi eska ghar sansar hai
Kaam k naam pe puri raat chori k liye ass pass k Gaon main firta hai aur din main sota rehta hai
Agar kisi cheez ka sauq hai toh bus 'Chut' ka
Ek number ka tharki aur daru baaj hai.. nasa bhi khub karta hai, aur eske liye nase ki pudiya banane ka kaam Bankelal karta hai
Ghar ya Jhopdi ki estithi ki baat karu toh ye station Wale raste pe usse thoda pehle hai, Jhopdi k aage Jamun ka ek paid hai, aur piche bus ghass aur jungle jaisa hai
bahar hi jamun k paidk pass ek paani ka handpump laga hua hai, jaha eska nahana aur kapde dhulne ka kaam hota hai
Waise ese dekh k lagta nahi.. ki ye kabhi nahata bhi hoga
Jhopdi k andar jameen pe hi ek gadda pada hai jo esne station se churaya tha.. aur es samay Jabbar esi pe pada hua hai
Kamre main ek purana TV hai aur batane ki jarurat toh hai nahi ki wo bhi chori ka hai.. waise Jaggu es TV pe jispe sirf gandi gandi filme dekhta hai DVD pe laga k
Kamre main ek kinare chulha hai, jispe aag jala k apne liye kabhi kabhi khana bana leta hai.. aur esi pe wo es samay Jabbar aur apne liye chai bana raha tha
Waise jadatar toh station k pass Wale theke se daru aur wahi ek dhaba hai usi pe khana kha leta hai
Jaggu Chai ko cup main daal chuka tha.. Jabbar jaise taise dard de tarapte hue uthta hai aur Jaggu k hath se chai ka cup le leta hai
Jaggu wahi ek taraf baithte hue
"Waise subha subha jab tum darwaje pe aisi halat main aaye toh mujhe yakin hi nahi hua ki koi tumhara bhi ye haal kar sakta hai.. waise bataya nahi ye itna gehra jhakm aaya kaise ?"
Jabbar Chai ka ghut bharte hue
"Wo.. ek kutiya ne hamla kar diya tha"
Jaggu- (Maze lete hue) Aap jaise sair ka ek jara si kutiya ne ye haal bana diya ?.. waise kiya apne Gaon ki thi wo kutiya?
Jabbar kuch bol nahi paata bus Jaggu ko kha jane waali nazron se dekh k khud ko shant kar leta hai
Jabbar- Mat bhulo ki ek baar aise hi tum chori karke bhaag rahe thay aur tab maine tumhe chakki main chupa k logo se bachaya tha.. wo bhi bina kisi sawal Jawab k
Jabbar, Jaggu ko ehsaas karwa deta hai ki uska yu baar baar sawal karna use pasand nahi aa raha hai
Par Jaggu toh hai hi mahaharami.. wo apne peele peele daat dikhate hue
"Are Bhai tum toh bura maan gaye, main toh bus esliye puch raha tha ki kismain itni himmat aa gayi jisne mere Jabbar bhai ko bheegi billi diya"
Jaggu bechare kuch bol nahi paata bus bejjeti ka kadwa ghut peeke reh jata hai.. par Jaagu ki baat se ek pal k liye uski aankhon k aage Maalti ka chehra jarur naach gaya tha
Jaagu apni chai ka antim ghut peete hue
"Chalo main ek kaam karta hu, abhi thodi dair main Jake Kundan se milta hu.. taki wo kuch aur madad kar sake"
Jabbar jaise apni jagah se uchal padta hai, wo turant bol padta hai
"Nahi nahi.. Kundan ya uske pariwar main se kisi ko pata nahi chalna chahiye ki main kaha hu"
Jaggu man hi man muskura padta hai
'Yani mera sochna sahi tha.. Gaon main jo udhti hui kabar hai ki Jabbar ne hi Kundan k bete ko mara tha, jiski wajah se uski aisi halat hai
Us baat main kuch toh sachai hai'
Jaagu apni khushi chupate hue
"Theek hai.. Jabbar bhai aap jab tak chaho yaha aaram se raho
Kisi ko kabhi pata nahi chalega ki aap kaha ho
Aapka ye Bhai hai na"
Jaggu, Jabbar ko barosha toh dila raha tha.. par uske dimag main ek alag hi khichadi pakne lagi thi
Jaggu man hi man kuch sochte hue Jabbar ki taraf dekhta hai aur muskura padta hai
'Agar dimag se kaam lu.. toh sayad ye Jabbar us Maalti tak pahuchne ka rasta ban sakta hai'
Daaaaya ra daaaaya......Update #13
Scene#03
Bhanu puri tarah paseene main bheega hua tha.. subha ki thandak bhi uske behte paseene ko rok nahi pa rahi thi
Wo apne khet ki maid pe ughi hui ghass ko saaf kar raha tha, par uska hath kuch jada hi Joro se chal raha tha
Maano kisi baat ka ghussa kahi aur nikal raha ho
Bhanu hasiye ko joro se chalte hue ghass ko maano kaatne ki jagah uska gala rait raha ho
"Madarchod.. ye Jabbar mera pura khel bigad dega"
Bhanu ek pal k liye saans lene k liye rukta hai aur wahi maid pe baith k bagal ki naali main behte hue thande paani ko apne munh pe marte hue wapas apne ghusse ki aag ugalne lagta hai
"Ye Saala Jabbar na jane Kundan k ghar kiya karne gaya tha.. aur es behenchod ko Maalti pe hamla karne k liye kisne kaha tha
Kahi kuch aisa toh nahi hai.. jiske bare main mujhe pata hi na ho
Wo toh acha hai ki Maalti bach gayi.. qki uski jindagi barbad karne ka haq sirf mera hai
Par usse pehle uska wo haal karunga ki saali maut ki bheekh mangengi"
Bhanu ek Pal k liye rukta hai aur asman main udhti hui chidiya ko dekh k wapas badbadane lagta hai
"Jabbar ko es samay apna pura dhiyan Monu ko khatam karne pe lagana chahiye tha.. qki agar wo Sapola jaag gaya toh meri saalon ki mehnat barbad ho jayegi
Es madarchod Monu k karan pehle 'Anokhi' ko marwana pada aur ab ye saala Jabbar na jane q Maalti k peeche pad gaya hai.. aakhir baat kiya hai ?"
Bhanu jo hamesha shant aur apni buddhi aur sadhyantra pe barosha rakhne wala inshan hai wo es samay puri tarah baichan tha
Bhanu apni jagah se uthta hai aur pure khet main ek kone se dusre kone tak chaihal kadmi karte hue aisi thand main bhi aane waale paseene ko apne gamche se pouchte hue
"Kal se es Jabbar ka bhi kuch pata nahi chal raha.. na jane ye madarchod kaha gayab hai
Mil jaye toh eska gala apne hath se daba du, meri saalon ki mehnat barbad kar raha hai"
Bhanu na jane aise hi kabtak tehelta rehta hai.. aur antatah thak k wahi khet pe kinare lage emli k paid k neeche padi hui Charpai pe jake baith jata hai
Bhanu apna Phone nikalta hai aur use hath main liye hue kuch palon tak bus sochta hi rehta hai
Aur aakhir main ek nirnay pe pahuchte hue kisi ko Phone milata hai
Dusri taraf Phone received hota hai aur ek parichit si aawaz aati hai
"Bus Bhanu bhai.. thodi dair main hum Sundarpur Gaon k station pe pahuchne waale hai"
Bhanu ek lambi si saans leta hai.. jisse uski nirasha ka pata bhi chalta hai
Dusri taraf se
"Kiya Baat hai Bhanu Bhai.. koi pareshani hai, hum Sadhu banne ka pura saman leke aaye hai.. aap bus batao karna kiya hai ?"
Ab toh aap samajh hi gaye honge ki Phone pe dusri taraf aur koi nahi balki Panna hai.. aur uske sath Heera bhi
Shadayantr anusar Heera Panna ko Gaon aana tha.. jiske liye sari taiyariyan ho chuki thi, par Jabbar ne jo kand kiya hai uski wajah se kaafi kuch badalna pad raha hai Bhanu ko
Bhanu- (Kuch Palon tak sochne k baad) nahi abhi k liye tum dono es Gaon main mat aana..
Heera- Par hum toh Sundarpur Station pahuchne hi waale hai ?, achanak ye sab.. ?
Bhanu bina saans liye Jabbar ka Maalti pe hamla karne waali baat batata chala jata hai.. waise puri baat toh khud Bhanu bhi nahi janta tha
Heera- (Dusri taraf se Phone pe) Maine pehle hi kaha tha, ye Jabbar mujhe barosha ka aadmi nahi lagta ?
Bhanu- (Wapas apni jagah se uth k khet pe tehelte hue) Hmm.. par ab kuch kiya nahi ja sakta, qki Jabbar ki es harkat ki wajah se Mahendra ne apne pure pariwar ko aur sajag kar diya hai.. esliye abhi k liye tum dono es Gaon main mat aana
Heera- Phir ab..
Bhanu kuch sochne k baad
"Jis train pe abhi tum dono ho wo yaha sirf 2 Gaon pe rukti hai.. pehle hamare Sundarpur Gaon aur dusre ek aur Gaon 'Phulwa' me
Tum dono Sundarpur na utar k Phulwa Gaon main utarna.. waha ek aadmi milega uske sath chale jana, tumhari khatirdari main koi kami nahi aayegi
Baki main jaldi hi bataunga aage kiya karna hai ?"
Bhanu apni baat samjha k Phone kaat deta hai aur ek pal k liye rukta hai aur turant hi dusra Phone milata hai.. aur es baar wo jise Phone mila raha tha uske liye uski screen pe jo naam nazar aa raha tha wo tha
'Thakur Ji'
Bhanu apni baat puri karke phone ko charpai pe faikta hai aur ghusse se Jabbar ko wapas gaali deta hai.. ki tabhi usko kisi k hasne aur taali bajane ka swar sunai padta hai
Pehle se hi ghusse se laal Bhanu jaise hi mudke us aadmi ko kuch sunane hi wala tha ki wo ruk padta hai
Qki uske samne khet pe maid pe khada hua wo aadmi jo haste hue taali baja raha tha wo aur koi nahi balki 'Tyagi' tha
Scene#04
Theek esi samay dusri taraf Gaon se dur Station k pass ek tuti or kabhi bhi girne jaisi estithi main khadi hui Jhopdi k andar
Jabbar ulta hoke laita hua tha.. uski peet pe kisi prakar ki jadi buti ka laip gaya hua tha
Jabbar usi prakar se laite hue apna chehra utha k pass main hi mitti k chulhe pe chai banate hue aadmi se bolta hai
"Tumhara ye ehsaan main kabhi nahi bhulunga, samay aane pe aise hi tumhare bhi kaam jarur aaunga"
Chulhe k pass baitha hua wo aadmi Jabbar ki taraf dekh k muskura padta hai
"Are Jabbar Bhai, ye Jaggu tumhare kuch kaam aa saka ye badi baat hai.. waise bhi ek baar aapne bhi aise hi meri madad kari thi
waise ye itna gehra ghaav aaya kaise ?
Aisa lag raha hai jaise kisi serni ne panja mara ho"
Jaggu ne muskurate hue chulhe ki taraf dekhte hue apni baat kahi, par uski baat main kahi na kahi ek kataksh bhi tha.. jise sayad Jabbar abhi k liye samajh nahi paya tha
Jabbar- (Jise abhi bhi dard mehsus ho raha tha) Kahe ki serni.. uski aukat toh main dikhaunga
Jaggu chulhe se Chai ka bartan utarte hue
"Kuch kaha kiya.. Jabbar Bhai"
Jabbar- (Jaise apne hosh sambhalta hai) nahi.. nahi Jaggu kuch nahi
Waise Sayad aapko Jaggu yaad nahi hoga.. esliye phir se ek baar thoda bata deta hu
40-42 Saal ka Jaggu asal main ek Chor hai
Pariwar k naam pe bus akela hai hai.. apne main mast rehta hai, logo se jada milna julna pasand nahi
Haal aisa hai ki Sundarpur main bahut se log toh jante tak nahi ki Jaggu namak koi vyakti bhi hai
Gaon k station k pass ek tuti si jhopdi.. aur yahi eska ghar sansar hai
Kaam k naam pe puri raat chori k liye ass pass k Gaon main firta hai aur din main sota rehta hai
Agar kisi cheez ka sauq hai toh bus 'Chut' ka
Ek number ka tharki aur daru baaj hai.. nasa bhi khub karta hai, aur eske liye nase ki pudiya banane ka kaam Bankelal karta hai
Ghar ya Jhopdi ki estithi ki baat karu toh ye station Wale raste pe usse thoda pehle hai, Jhopdi k aage Jamun ka ek paid hai, aur piche bus ghass aur jungle jaisa hai
bahar hi jamun k paidk pass ek paani ka handpump laga hua hai, jaha eska nahana aur kapde dhulne ka kaam hota hai
Waise ese dekh k lagta nahi.. ki ye kabhi nahata bhi hoga
Jhopdi k andar jameen pe hi ek gadda pada hai jo esne station se churaya tha.. aur es samay Jabbar esi pe pada hua hai
Kamre main ek purana TV hai aur batane ki jarurat toh hai nahi ki wo bhi chori ka hai.. waise Jaggu es TV pe jispe sirf gandi gandi filme dekhta hai DVD pe laga k
Kamre main ek kinare chulha hai, jispe aag jala k apne liye kabhi kabhi khana bana leta hai.. aur esi pe wo es samay Jabbar aur apne liye chai bana raha tha
Waise jadatar toh station k pass Wale theke se daru aur wahi ek dhaba hai usi pe khana kha leta hai
Jaggu Chai ko cup main daal chuka tha.. Jabbar jaise taise dard de tarapte hue uthta hai aur Jaggu k hath se chai ka cup le leta hai
Jaggu wahi ek taraf baithte hue
"Waise subha subha jab tum darwaje pe aisi halat main aaye toh mujhe yakin hi nahi hua ki koi tumhara bhi ye haal kar sakta hai.. waise bataya nahi ye itna gehra jhakm aaya kaise ?"
Jabbar Chai ka ghut bharte hue
"Wo.. ek kutiya ne hamla kar diya tha"
Jaggu- (Maze lete hue) Aap jaise sair ka ek jara si kutiya ne ye haal bana diya ?.. waise kiya apne Gaon ki thi wo kutiya?
Jabbar kuch bol nahi paata bus Jaggu ko kha jane waali nazron se dekh k khud ko shant kar leta hai
Jabbar- Mat bhulo ki ek baar aise hi tum chori karke bhaag rahe thay aur tab maine tumhe chakki main chupa k logo se bachaya tha.. wo bhi bina kisi sawal Jawab k
Jabbar, Jaggu ko ehsaas karwa deta hai ki uska yu baar baar sawal karna use pasand nahi aa raha hai
Par Jaggu toh hai hi mahaharami.. wo apne peele peele daat dikhate hue
"Are Bhai tum toh bura maan gaye, main toh bus esliye puch raha tha ki kismain itni himmat aa gayi jisne mere Jabbar bhai ko bheegi billi diya"
Jaggu bechare kuch bol nahi paata bus bejjeti ka kadwa ghut peeke reh jata hai.. par Jaagu ki baat se ek pal k liye uski aankhon k aage Maalti ka chehra jarur naach gaya tha
Jaagu apni chai ka antim ghut peete hue
"Chalo main ek kaam karta hu, abhi thodi dair main Jake Kundan se milta hu.. taki wo kuch aur madad kar sake"
Jabbar jaise apni jagah se uchal padta hai, wo turant bol padta hai
"Nahi nahi.. Kundan ya uske pariwar main se kisi ko pata nahi chalna chahiye ki main kaha hu"
Jaggu man hi man muskura padta hai
'Yani mera sochna sahi tha.. Gaon main jo udhti hui kabar hai ki Jabbar ne hi Kundan k bete ko mara tha, jiski wajah se uski aisi halat hai
Us baat main kuch toh sachai hai'
Jaagu apni khushi chupate hue
"Theek hai.. Jabbar bhai aap jab tak chaho yaha aaram se raho
Kisi ko kabhi pata nahi chalega ki aap kaha ho
Aapka ye Bhai hai na"
Jaggu, Jabbar ko barosha toh dila raha tha.. par uske dimag main ek alag hi khichadi pakne lagi thi
Jaggu man hi man kuch sochte hue Jabbar ki taraf dekhta hai aur muskura padta hai
'Agar dimag se kaam lu.. toh sayad ye Jabbar us Maalti tak pahuchne ka rasta ban sakta hai'