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Update #13

Scene #05

Monu ko leke pehle se hi vyakul Bhanu muskil se Heera Panna k liye koi jugad kar paya tha.. aur uski es pareshani main ghee dalne ka kaam karti hai us taali ki karkas aawaz

Bhanu ghusse se us aadmi ko kuch kehne k liye jaise hi peeche ki taraf mudta hai uske sabd bahar hi nahi aa paate qki uske samne taali bajane wala aur koi nahi apitu 'Tyagi' tha

Bhanu man hi man sochane pe majbur ho jata hai
'kahi esne kuch jada toh nahi sun liya'

Ye sochte hi Bhanu k jism main ek sard lehar si daud jaati hai.. ki kahi uske saalon ki mehnat pe paani toh nahi phir jayega

Thand toh waise bhi thi par aisa lagta hai jaise mausam aur jada sard hota chala ja raha ho

Thandi hawa patton ko hila rahi ho, maano kisi tez tufan se pehle ki shanti ho

Tyagi- (Maano jaiss kataksh si karta hai) Kaisa chal raha hai tumhara sadhyantra ?

Bhanu ko aisa laga jaise uske saalon ki mehnat pe sach main paani firne wala ho.. par wo itni asani se tut jaye, aisa inshan kaha

Par Tyagi aage bolta hai
"Anokhi.. phir Monu, aur sayad... Khalid ka baap bhi Gufran bhi.. 3 jaan, waah manna padega tumhe?"

Bhanu k kaano main padne waale ye sabd aise thay maano kisi ne uske kaan main jalta hua koyala bhar diya ho

Bhanu kuch bolna chahta hai par wo ruk jata hai aur ass pass dekhne lagta hai maano pakka kar raha ho waha un dono k alawa aur koi toh nahi.. aur jab use puri tarah yakin ho jata hai waha bus wahi dono hai toh wo apni nazron ko ghuma k khet ki maid k pass behne waali naali k pass rakhi hui apni kudal ki taraf dekhta hai aur maano kisi nishkarsh pe pahuchne ki koshish kar raha ho

Tyagi ne bhi Bhanu ki nazron ko bhaap liya tha esliye wo bhi muskura padta hai.. waise kahi na kahi use bhi ek pal k liye dar toh laga tha, qki wo ache se jaan chuka tha ki Bhanu kis prakar ka aadmi hai

Tyagi- (Muskurate hue) Kiya hua.. us kudal se mujhe marna chahte ho.. hmmm.. sayad waise hi jaise Anokhi, Monu.. aur Gufran ko mara hoga.. ek min sayad ye kaam tumne nahi...

Tyagi dar toh raha tha qki wo bhalibhanti janta tha ki wo Bhanu se saririk taqat main jeet nahi sakta, par dimag ka istemal karna wo bhi ache se janta tha
"Ye sab toh tumne apne aadmi Jabbar se karwaya hoga na.. hmm tabhi usne Maalti ko bhi marne ki koshish ki"

Bhanu- (Ek antim baar koshish karte hue) Ye sab kiya bakwas kar rahe hai.. aapko pata hai na main us ghar ka damad hu

Tyagi muskurate hue wahi emli k paid k neeche padi charpai ki taraf badta hai aur muskurate hue uspe baith jata hai aur haskar apni baat aage kehta hai
"Yakin maano.. mujhe jada mehnat nahi lagegi ye sab sabit karne main, aur agar kisi ko meri baat pe barosha nahi hua toh..

Monu hai na"

Bhanu ghusse se laal hone lagta hai, qki Tyagi ne Monu ka naam leke uske dar ko aur bada diya tha.. Bhanu ghusse se kudal ki taraf badne lagta hai

Bhanu ko yu kudal ki taraf badte hue dekh k ek pal k liye Tyagi bhi dar se kaanp jata hai par wo apne uper dar ko haavi nahi hone deta
"Monu sirf meri wajah se hosh main nahi aa raha.. warna wo toh kab ka theek ho chuka hai"

Tyagi ne maano koi dhamaka sa kiya ho, Bhanu k kadam bhi wahi k wahi ruk jate hai aur sawaliya nazron se Tyagi ki taraf dekhte hue
"Kiya matlab hai tumhara ?"

Bhanu k mukh se nikli ye baat Tyagi k liye Vijaypath pe chalne ka rasta sa tha

Tyagi- (Muskurate hue ek angdai sa leta hai, maano Bhanu ki halat ka bharpur maza le raha ho.. aur phir wo ek raaz kholta hai) tumhe kiya lagta hai.. mere jaisa vadiya sar ki ek jara si chaut ko ab tak theek nahi kar saka ?

Bhanu, Kudal ko bhool k Tyagi ki taraf kuch kadam aage badta hai
"Saaf saaf kaho"

Tyagi- Monu toh suru k 10 dino main hi theek ho gaya tha, kuch baat toh hai us ladke main jo itna jordar waar khane k baad bhi maut uska kuch bigad nahi paayi

Bhanu- Kiya kehna cha rahe ho.. maine kaha na mera in sab se koi lena dena nahi hai

Bhanu ek baar phir se sari baaton ko manne se puri tarah mana karte hue

Tyagi- (Has padta hai.. aur shant aawaz main aage kehta hai) Pata hai.. main jab chahu Monu ko hosh main la sakta hu, aur tumhe toh pata hi hai wo hosh main aate hi sabko kiya batayega

Tyagi apni jagah se uthta hai aur haste hue Bhanu k charo taraf aise ghumne lagta hai maano uski parikrama si kar raha ho aur aage kehta hai
"Waise manna padega, bade taqatwar malum padte ho.. par kiya tum Kundan se jeet paoge, itni taqat hai tumme"

Bhanu ka sabr ab puri tarah tut jata hai.. qki Tyagi ne uske Dushman ko usse jada bada bata diya tha

Bhanu- (Kisi saand ki tarah fufkarte hue) Tum mujhe jante nahi ho Tyagi.. apni had main raho warna..

Tyagi- (Wapas se muskura padta hai) warna kiya.. mujhe bhi marwa doge jaise Maalti ko warne ki koshish ki

Bhanu- Maine Maalti ko marwane ki koshish nahi ki.. qki use toh main apne ek hathon se marunga, wo bhi tadpa tadpa k

Bhanu ne apne antim sabd aise ghusse se kahe ki Tyagi k jism main bhi jhurjhuri si daud padi thi

Tyagi- (Khud ko sambhalte hue) hmm.. mujhe pata hai, tumhare chote Bhai k zehar khane ka sabab aur yaha tak tumhare Maa Baap k zinda jalne ki wajah wahi aurat 'Maalti' hai

Bhanu aisi hairani se Tyagi ko dekhta hai.. jaise uske Jeevan ka sabse bada sach usko pata chal gaya ho

Par Tyagi bina ruke aage kehta hai
"Par tum akele nahi ho jiska pariwar aur zindagi Maalti k pariwar ne barbad ki

Fark sirf itna hai ki tumhare Chote Bhai aur Maa Baap k sath jo hua uski wajah Maalti or uske dono Bhai.. or Maalti ki badi Bhabhi Premlata hai"

Esse Pehle hi Tyagi kuch aage bolta Bhanu ghusse se jalta hu bol padta hai
"Aur wo harami 'Murli Das' bhi"

Tyagi ha main sar hilate hue aage kehta hai
"Ha.. Murli Das, Kundan ka baap.. bhala use kaise bhool sakta hu"

Es baar aage bolne ka kaam Bhanu karta hai
"Tumhara kiya bigada hai Maalti ne"

Tyagi hairani se Bhanu ko dekhta hai maano puch raha hai..
'mera.. matlab'

Bhanu ab kaafi shant nazar aane laga tha wo asani se chalte hue us charpai pe baith jata hai aur pure shant swar main kehta hai

"Ab jab tumhe mere bare main itna sab pata hai.. par tumne ye sab apne dost Mahendra ko batane ki jagah yaha mere paas aaye ho, toh ye sab yuhi toh nahi ho sakta"

Asal main Bhanu ko thoda samay lagta hai par wo jaldi hi samajh chuka tha ki Tyagi ka yu use darana aur uske bare main itna sab pata hona.. par ab tak chup rehna, jarur uske peeche kuch toh raaz hai

Tyagi- (Ek Lambi si saans chorte hue, wahi Bhanu k pass Charpai pe baith jata hai aur kisi sunya main taakte hue kehta hai) 'Bela'.. Bela naam tha uska, mera prem aur mera jeevan thi wo.. par 'Murli Das' aur uske dono beton Mahendra or Kundan ne pure Gaon k aage us bechari ko Badchalan aur kulta bata k use khudkushi karne pe majbur kar kiya.. aur cheen liya meri Bela ko mujhse

Bela

Tyagi ki aankhon main paani bhar aaya tha aur gala rundha sa gaya tha.. wo ek pal k liye rukta hai aur aage kehta hai
"Pata hai.. jab meri Bela ne Gaon waalon k taano se pareshan hoke khudkushi ki toh wo akeli nahi mari thi, uske pait main mera bacha bhi tha

Us din Murli Das k dono beton ne sirf meri hone wali patni ko nahi, balki mere paida hone wale bache ko bhi mara tha

20 saalon se unse badla lene k liye tarap raha hu.. ek ek din kaisa kaata hai sirf main hi janta hu, meri in haddiyon main tumhari jaisi jaan nahi hai.. par jadi butiyon ka aisa gyan jarur hai jisse main unse badla leke rahunga"

Bhanu k liye ye sab bilkul naya tha.. waise usne ye naam 'Bela' suna hua tha

Apni Patni Sheela k mukh se.. par uske hisab se Kahani kuch aur hi thi aur ab Tyagi k hisab se kuch aur

Bhanu- (Sirf matlab ki baat pe aate hue) Phir meri kiya jarurat.. qki tum yaha aise toh nahi aaye hoge ?

Tyagi- (Bhanu ki taraf dekhta hai aur apni bhar aayi aankhon ko saaf karte hue) mere pass jadi butiyon ka gyan toh hai.. par main Murli Das k pure pariwar ko tadpa tadpa k marna chahta hu, chahta hu ki wo sab bhi wo dard mehsus kare jo meri Bela ne us din mehsus kiya hoga, esliye Budhi k sath sath mujhe tumhara bal bhi chahiye

Bhanu ab sab kuch samajh chuka tha.. par ab bhi uske man main kai sawal thay

Bhanu- Aaj achanak q.. pehle kabhi mere pass aane k bare main q nahi socha ?

"Sach kahu toh mujhe lagta tha ki Mahendra or uske pariwar se main aur Vanraj akele hi badla le sakte thay.. par abhi kuch dino pehle Vanraj Gaon k bazar main Kundan se takraya tha aur tab wo badi muskil se apni jaan aur pehchan chupa k bhaag paya tha

Sidha sidha kabu toh es jung main Vanraj aur main.. kaafi nahi hai, hume tumhari taqat bhi chahiye

Waise bhi hamara dushman lagbhag ek hi hai"
Tyagi apni puri baat kehte hue, Bhanu ki taraf aise dekhne lagta hai jaise ab uske uttar ka intezar ho use

Bhanu- Vanraj ?

Par Bhanu alag hi sawal karta hai

Tyagi- (Jaise use apni galti ka ehsas hua ho) are ha.. main batana hi bhool gaya, Vanraj meri Bela ka Bhai hai

Bhanu- (Ab wapas sabse eham sawal pe aata hai) Tum keh rahe thay ki.. Monu ab tak sirf tumhari wajah se us behoshi ki halat main hai ?

Tyagi- (Muskura padta hai) ha.. main use jo jadi butiyan deta hu wo use theek karne k liye nahi.. balki use usi avastha main rakhne k liye hai

Bhanu- aur eski wajah ?

Tyagi- (Bhanu ki taraf dekh k Muskurate hue) kiya tum Maalti ki aulad ko itni asan aur shant maut dena chahte ho, jaha use dard ka pata tak na chale

Bhanu- (Maano ghusse ki aag bhadak uthi ho) bilkul nahi.. use toh aisi maut dunga ki Maalti or Kundan dekh k apni maut ki bheekh mangenge, par us din sab kuch meri soch se alag chal raha tha esliye use itni asan maut deni padi.. par meri kismat ki wo tab bhi nahi mara

Tyagi- Main phir se mauka de sakta hu.. es baar uska wo haal karo jo tum chahte ho

Bhanu- (Tyagi ki taraf dekhte hue) aisa kaise sambhav hai.. wo hosh main aate hi mera sach sabko bata dega

Tyagi- (Muskurate hue) jab use yaad rahega tab na.. main apni jadi butiyon se uske dimag main basi antim yaadon ko daba dunga, aur jab tak main nahi chahunga use behoshi se pehle ka kuch pal yaad nahi aayenge

Bhanu, Tyagi ki taraf aise dekhta hai maano aankhon hi aankhon main sawal kar raha ho

Tyagi- (Muskurate hue) ha.. tumhara sochna sahi hai, main un yaadon ko puri tarah bhi mita sakta hu.. par tab tum mujhe bhi toh maar sakte ho na.. ab tumhara kiya barosha, aakhir Anokhi bhi toh tumhare liye kaam karti thi.. dekho kiya haal kiya tumne uska

Waise Tyagi ne jo baatein kahi.. khas karke Anokhi aur Jabbar ko leke unpe ab tak wo khud pakka nahi tha, par uski in baaton se Bhanu ka ravayya dekh k wo samajh chuka tha ki wo jo soch raha hai.. wo sab sach hai

Bhanu daat peesh k reh jata hai.. qki Tyagi k hisab se Bhanu kabhi bhi uske viruddh nahi ja sakta tha, warna wo Monu ki yaadon ko jagrit bhi kar sakta hai

Kulmilakar Tyagi, Monu k bahane Bhanu pe apna kabu bana raha hai.. jo baat wo ache se samajh raha tha

Bhanu- Theek hai.. par yaad rahe, agar tumne mujhe dokha dene ki sochi bhi toh..

Tyagi- (Uski baat kaate hue) Aur tum bhi yaad rakhna.. agar tum mere khilaaf gaye toh.. Monu ko sab kuch yaad aa sakta hai

Tyagi ne Saaf sabdo main bata diya tha ki ab Bhanu bina uski marzi k kuch nahi sakta

Tyagi apni jagah se uthte hue
"Chalo phir kal ek chamatkar hoga.. kal Monu ko hosh aayega"

Tyagi apni baat kehte hue muskura padta hai aur waha se chal padta hai.. use jaate hue dekh k Bhanu kisi zehrili naag jaisa fufkar padta hai
"Ek baar main es Jabbar ka masla hal kar du, phir tujhe bhi teri aukat dikhaunga.. Madarchod Tyagi"

Wahi khet se dur nikal aane pe Tyagi lambi si saans lete hue muskura padta hai aur khud se kehta hai
"Bhanu.. ab tu wahi karega jo main chahunga, qki ab tere gale main Tyagi ka patta rahega

Mera Jadi butiyon ko leke itne saalon ka gyan ab kaam aayega.. waise bhi Monu k antim palon ki yaadein toh main kab ka daba chuka hu, logo ko andaza hi nahi ayurved kon kon se chamatkar kar sakta hai"


Yaha tak cheeze ab saaf ho chuki hai.. esliye wapas usi samay laut chalte hai jab Tyagi Monu k upchar karne wala hai, ya sirf ek natak matr


Scene #06

Tyagi ne Kamre ko andar se band kar rakha tha.. aur yaha har kisi ki nazren sirf aur sirf darwaje ki taraf atki hui thi

Savita, Maalti, Sheela aur Harshita charo aurte kabhi darwaje ki taraf dekhti toh kabhi ishvar se pradhana karne lagti

Wahi mardon ka bhi haal kuch alag nahi tha.. Jaha Mahendra baar baar sab acha hone ki kaamna karta wahi Monu ka baap Kundan, baar baar apne bache k sahi hone ki dua mang raha tha

Veeru, Sattu aur Sonu bhi apne bhai k jaldi se theek hone ki prathana karne main peeche nahi thay.. agar koi tha jise kisi baat ka fark nahi pad raha tha wo tha Satyam, qki uski nazren baar baar Maalti ki gathile jism pe naach rahi thi

Satyam man hi man
'Agar ye Monu theek ho gaya toh lagta nahi hum kabhi es Gaon ki gareebi ko chor k sehar ki khushal zindagi dekh payenge..

waise ye bhi hai ki jab tak Monu sahi nahi hoga mera Maalti chachi pe chadhne ka sapna bhi pura nahi hoga.. behenchod ajeeb mushibat hai'

Tabhi Savita ki aawaz sabhi ka dhiyan apni taraf kheechne main kamyab rehti hai
"Are ye itta sara dua kaise.. ?"

Kundan- Sayad Tyagi bhaiya ne us khas Himalayan jadi budi se Monu ka ilaj suru kar diya hai

Kundan sabhi ko tyagi ki kahi baatein yaad dilate hue

Samay yuhi beetta chala jata hai..10 min.. 15 min.. 20 min.. 1 ganta

Kamre ki band khidki aur darwaje k beeche se halka halka dhua ab bhi bahar aata ja raha tha par na Tyagi abhi tak bahar aaya tha na hi uska koi jawab

Jabki yaha mardo ka haal aisa tha ki kabhi Kundan pure aangan main chaihal kadmi karte hue dikhta toh kabhi Mahendra, ha Bhanu jarur kuch pareshan sa tha

Bhanu man hi man
'Kahi ye Tyagi mujhe dokha toh nahi dekha.. esne jo kaha hai ki Monu ki antim samay k kuch pal yaad nahi rahenge, kahi wo sab jhoot toh nahi.. ye madarchod kahi mera khel bigad na de'

Par tabhi Bhanu ki soch main vign pad jata hai qki darwaja halka sa khulta hai aur Tyagi ka paseene se bheega hua chehra bahar aata hai

Sabhi k sabhi uth k Tyagi ki taraf lagbhag bhaag se padte hai par Tyagi unhe rokte hue
"Wahi rukiye aap sabhi.. Monu ka upchar jitna saral samajh raha tha, utna hai nahi.. mujhe.. Savita Bhaujai se thodi madad chahiye"

Savita ye sunte hi aage badne main koi bhi vilamb nahi karti aur turant hi darwaje k pass pahuch jaati hai, Tyagi bina kuch kahe darwaje se hatte hue andar aane ka rasta deta hai aur phir wapas se darwaja band kar deta hai

Savita ab kamre k andar thi.. wo dekhti hai ki kamre main ek taraf lohe k tasle main aag jal rahi thi jiske pass hi Tyagi ka jhola rakha hua tha.. aur us aag se halka halka dhuwa nirantan nikalta ja raha tha

Wahi jab wo Monu ki taraf dekhti hai toh paati hai Monu k sar pe kisi jadi buti ka laip sa laga hua tha

Savita- (Vyakulta bhare swar main) Kiya baat hai.. Tyagi Bhaiya, hamara Monu theek toh ho jayega na ?

Tyagi ek pal k liye man hi man hasta hai aur sochta hai
'Monu toh kab ka theek ho chuka hai, par apne khel ko aage badane k liye abhi thoda aur natak karna hai mujhe, uske baad hi use hosh main launga

Waise bhi asli khel toh ab suru hoga'

Tyagi ye sochte hue Savita k bharibharkam jism ko badi hi piyasi nazron se dekhta hai

Tyagi wapas se apne chehre pe chinta ki lakire laate hue
"Bhaujai.. baat ye hai ki.. wo...ki.."

Savita- (Pareshan si hone lagti hai) Baat kiya hai bhaiya.. batayie na, kuch bhi kariye bus hamare Monu ko theek kar dijiye

Tyagi- (Ek lambi si saans chorte hue) Bhaujai baat ye hai ki.. meri jadi buti ko kaam karne k liye bahut si garmi ki jarurat hai.. aur wo.. main..

Savita- are toh esmain konsi badi baat hai, aap kahiye toh main abhi yaha aag jalwa deti hu

Tyagi- (Ek pal k liye rukta hai, wo jaan k mahole ko sanjida banane ki puri koshish karte hue aage kehta hai) aap samjhi nahi Bhaujai.. main.. kaise samjhau.. kuch samajh nahi pa raha.. kis munh se batau

"Tyagi Bhaiya jo bhi baat hai aap khul k saaf saaf kahiye na yu paheliyan q bhuja rahe hai..

main Maalti ka aisa bhuja hua chehra aur nahi dekh sakti..

Ek Maa pe apne bache ko es halat main dekh k uspe kiya beet rahi hogi.. main soch bhi leti hu toh mera kaleja phat padta hai

Tyagi- (Ek lambi si saans lete hue) Bhaujai main jo bolne ja raha hu.. use sunkar aap mujhe galat mat samajhana par aur koi rasta nahi hai, aur agar Monu ko jaldi hi hosh nahi laya gaya toh wo hamesha hamesha k liye esi avastha main fas jayega

Tyagi ki baat sunkar Savita kaanp si padti hai
"Are toh dair q kar rahe hai.. Monu ko bhale hi maine janm nahi diya hai, par main bhi uski Maa jaisi hu.. aap bus batayie karna kiya hai"

Tyagi- (Man hi man has padta hai apni chaal k safal hone pe) Asal main Bhaujai.. Monu ko jis garmi ki jarurat hai wo hai saririk garmi.. aap samajh rahi hai na.. main kaise samjhau.. wo

Savita ne duniya dekhi thi.. aur saririk garmi ka matlab bhi bhali bhati samajh chuki thi, par phir bhi dhimi si aawaz main kehti hai
"Aap.. aap kehna kiya cha rahe hai Bhaiya.. saaf saaf kahiye na"

Tyagi- Bhaujai.. Monu ko jaldi se hosh main laane k liye meri es jadi buti k sath sath use bahut si saririk garmi ki avashakta hai.. aur ye kaam sirf ek aurat kar sakti hai apne jism se.. aap samajh rahi hai na

Savita es baar kuch bol hi nahi paati, par ha main apna sar jarur hila deti hai

Tyagi- (aage bolte hue) Aur meri nazron main sirf aap hi hai jo Monu ko wo garmi de sakti hai.. waise maine pehle Maalti ko ye sab batane ka niryan liya tha par phir socha wo ek Maa hai.. uski kuch seema hai.. esliye

Tyagi apni baat kehte hue chup ho jata hai

Savita- (Kuch palon tak shant rehne k baad) aur koi rasta nahi..

Tyagi apna sar 'na' main sar hila deta hai, Savita kuch palon tak khadi khadi sochti hi rehti hai par jab wo Behsoh Monu k masum chehre ko dkehti hai toh uske andar ki mamta bhi uchal marne lagti hai

Savita- Mujhe manjur hai.. batayie kiya karna hai, par ye baat

Tyagi- (Apni khushi ko chupate hue) Main janta hu.. ye baat sirf hum dono tak hi rahegi.. balki Monu ko bhi kabhi es upchar ka bare main puri baat nahi pata chalegi

Savita- (Apni nazren neeche jhukaye hue) toh kiya yaha..

Tyagi- Nahi nahi Bhaujai.. ye sab itna saral bhi nahi.. eske liye pehle aapke sarir pe ek khas jadi buti se bana tail lagega, taki apne jism ki garmi aur jada bad sake aur uske baad.. main bataunga kaise..

Yani Tyagi ne saaf kar diya tha ki jab ye sab ho raha hoga.. wo khud bhi wahi hoga

Tyagi aage kehta hai
"Jungle k uttari hisse main ek purana mandir hua karta tha jaha ab sirf khandhar bache hai.. wo jagah sahi hai, waha hum thodi aag bhi jala sakte hai madad k liye aur waha koi ayega bhi nahi, aur sabase badi baat mujhe kuch aur jadi butiyon ki jarurat hai jo mujhe usi jagah mil jayengi.. par aap janti hai na mere kehne ka kiya matlab hai

Dekho Bhaujai main janta hu ki main kiya keh raha hu.. par kiya karu, aur koi rasta bhi nahi hai

Aur agar Monu jaldi se hosh main nahi aya toh wo hamesha hamesha k liye esi avastha main fas k reh jayega"

Savita- (Turant bol padti hai) nahi nahi.. aap jo chahte hai wo sab hoga, aap bus upchar kariye

Tyagi- toh theek hai main Mahendra aur sabhi se baat karke us jagah pe sare intizam karwata hu

Savita bus ha main apna sar hila k reh jaati hai aur phir Monu k sar k pass baith k bade hi sneh bhare hathon se uske baalon main apni ungliya chalane lagti hai.. par es samay uski aankhon main sirf mamta thi.. hawas nahi

Dusri taraf Tyagi bahar aake sabhi ko ye batata hai ki usko kuch tazi jadi butiyon ki jarurat hai jise woo turant tod k estimal karega aur jiske liye Jungle k uttari hisse main us khandar wali jagah pe aage ka upchar hoga

Aur wo ye bhi batata hai ki eske liye use Savita bhaujai ki jarurat padegi qki in sabhi main unhi ko sabse jada anubhav hai.. waise Tyagi ki es baat pe baki teeno aurte bhi apna sahyog dene ki baat kehti hai jispe Tyagi man hi man has padta hai.. qki unhe pata nahi tha ki aaj konsa sahyog hone wala hai

Kundan- (Tyagi ki baat sunkar apni sanka vyakt karte hue) Tyagi Bhaiya aapki sab baat theek hai, par aap toh jante hi hai.. ki es samay Monu ko khatra hai aise main use us ekant jagah pe aur aap keh rahe hai hum bhi waha nahi aa sakte ?

Tyagi- Ha kundan tumne sahi suna, qki yaha ek band kamra tha par waha pura khula vatavaran hoga aur us buti ka dhua dur tak ja sakta hai.. mere pass us buti ki kaat waali dawa sirf itni hi hai ki main use sirf kisi ek ko de sakta hu aur maine Savita Bhaujai ko de di taki unpe us duwe ka prabhav na pade.. aur rahi baat Monu pe khatre ki toh maana main tumhare jaisa jawan nahi.. par tumhse wada karta hu agar Monu pe kisi prakar ka koi khatra hua toh chahe mujhe apni jaan q na deni pade par main use kuch nahi hone dunga

Mahendra- nahi nahi Tyagi Bhai kaisi baat karte ho hum sabhi ko aap par pura barosha hai

Mahendra bari bari se sabhi ki taraf dekhta hai jaha har koi Mahendra se sehmat tha

Kareeb 40 min baad..

Jungle k uttari hisse main ek chatai bichi hui thi jispe Monu behoshi ki halat main laita hua tha aur uske sameep hi Tyagi aur Savita khade thay.. baki sabhi log waha se kareeb 500 meter dur ek choti si puliya k pass khade thay

Asal main har koi waha aana cha raha tha esliye Tyagi ne ki kaha tha ki wo sab aa sakte hai par kam se kam 500m unse dur rehna hoga taki us duwe ka galat prabhar un sabhi pe na pade

Edhar us purane khadar jaisi jagah pe khadi Savita pehle Monu aur phir Tyagi ki taraf dekhte hue
"Toh ab.."

Tyagi aane jhole se ek bottle nikalta hai jismain sarso jaisa koi tail bhara hua tha.. us bottle ko hath main lete hue
"Kapde utaro Bhaujai.."

Continue.. in Update #14

 

[Meri MAA Saali Chinar]

Update #13

Scene #05

Monu ko leke pehle se hi vyakul Bhanu muskil se Heera Panna k liye koi jugad kar paya tha.. aur uski es pareshani main ghee dalne ka kaam karti hai us taali ki karkas aawaz

Bhanu ghusse se us aadmi ko kuch kehne k liye jaise hi peeche ki taraf mudta hai uske sabd bahar hi nahi aa paate qki uske samne taali bajane wala aur koi nahi apitu 'Tyagi' tha

Bhanu man hi man sochane pe majbur ho jata hai
'kahi esne kuch jada toh nahi sun liya'

Ye sochte hi Bhanu k jism main ek sard lehar si daud jaati hai.. ki kahi uske saalon ki mehnat pe paani toh nahi phir jayega

Thand toh waise bhi thi par aisa lagta hai jaise mausam aur jada sard hota chala ja raha ho

Thandi hawa patton ko hila rahi ho, maano kisi tez tufan se pehle ki shanti ho

Tyagi- (Maano jaiss kataksh si karta hai) Kaisa chal raha hai tumhara sadhyantra ?

Bhanu ko aisa laga jaise uske saalon ki mehnat pe sach main paani firne wala ho.. par wo itni asani se tut jaye, aisa inshan kaha

Par Tyagi aage bolta hai
"Anokhi.. phir Monu, aur sayad... Khalid ka baap bhi Gufran bhi.. 3 jaan, waah manna padega tumhe?"

Bhanu k kaano main padne waale ye sabd aise thay maano kisi ne uske kaan main jalta hua koyala bhar diya ho

Bhanu kuch bolna chahta hai par wo ruk jata hai aur ass pass dekhne lagta hai maano pakka kar raha ho waha un dono k alawa aur koi toh nahi.. aur jab use puri tarah yakin ho jata hai waha bus wahi dono hai toh wo apni nazron ko ghuma k khet ki maid k pass behne waali naali k pass rakhi hui apni kudal ki taraf dekhta hai aur maano kisi nishkarsh pe pahuchne ki koshish kar raha ho

Tyagi ne bhi Bhanu ki nazron ko bhaap liya tha esliye wo bhi muskura padta hai.. waise kahi na kahi use bhi ek pal k liye dar toh laga tha, qki wo ache se jaan chuka tha ki Bhanu kis prakar ka aadmi hai

Tyagi- (Muskurate hue) Kiya hua.. us kudal se mujhe marna chahte ho.. hmmm.. sayad waise hi jaise Anokhi, Monu.. aur Gufran ko mara hoga.. ek min sayad ye kaam tumne nahi...

Tyagi dar toh raha tha qki wo bhalibhanti janta tha ki wo Bhanu se saririk taqat main jeet nahi sakta, par dimag ka istemal karna wo bhi ache se janta tha
"Ye sab toh tumne apne aadmi Jabbar se karwaya hoga na.. hmm tabhi usne Maalti ko bhi marne ki koshish ki"

Bhanu- (Ek antim baar koshish karte hue) Ye sab kiya bakwas kar rahe hai.. aapko pata hai na main us ghar ka damad hu

Tyagi muskurate hue wahi emli k paid k neeche padi charpai ki taraf badta hai aur muskurate hue uspe baith jata hai aur haskar apni baat aage kehta hai
"Yakin maano.. mujhe jada mehnat nahi lagegi ye sab sabit karne main, aur agar kisi ko meri baat pe barosha nahi hua toh..

Monu hai na"

Bhanu ghusse se laal hone lagta hai, qki Tyagi ne Monu ka naam leke uske dar ko aur bada diya tha.. Bhanu ghusse se kudal ki taraf badne lagta hai

Bhanu ko yu kudal ki taraf badte hue dekh k ek pal k liye Tyagi bhi dar se kaanp jata hai par wo apne uper dar ko haavi nahi hone deta
"Monu sirf meri wajah se hosh main nahi aa raha.. warna wo toh kab ka theek ho chuka hai"

Tyagi ne maano koi dhamaka sa kiya ho, Bhanu k kadam bhi wahi k wahi ruk jate hai aur sawaliya nazron se Tyagi ki taraf dekhte hue
"Kiya matlab hai tumhara ?"

Bhanu k mukh se nikli ye baat Tyagi k liye Vijaypath pe chalne ka rasta sa tha

Tyagi- (Muskurate hue ek angdai sa leta hai, maano Bhanu ki halat ka bharpur maza le raha ho.. aur phir wo ek raaz kholta hai) tumhe kiya lagta hai.. mere jaisa vadiya sar ki ek jara si chaut ko ab tak theek nahi kar saka ?

Bhanu, Kudal ko bhool k Tyagi ki taraf kuch kadam aage badta hai
"Saaf saaf kaho"

Tyagi- Monu toh suru k 10 dino main hi theek ho gaya tha, kuch baat toh hai us ladke main jo itna jordar waar khane k baad bhi maut uska kuch bigad nahi paayi

Bhanu- Kiya kehna cha rahe ho.. maine kaha na mera in sab se koi lena dena nahi hai

Bhanu ek baar phir se sari baaton ko manne se puri tarah mana karte hue

Tyagi- (Has padta hai.. aur shant aawaz main aage kehta hai) Pata hai.. main jab chahu Monu ko hosh main la sakta hu, aur tumhe toh pata hi hai wo hosh main aate hi sabko kiya batayega

Tyagi apni jagah se uthta hai aur haste hue Bhanu k charo taraf aise ghumne lagta hai maano uski parikrama si kar raha ho aur aage kehta hai
"Waise manna padega, bade taqatwar malum padte ho.. par kiya tum Kundan se jeet paoge, itni taqat hai tumme"

Bhanu ka sabr ab puri tarah tut jata hai.. qki Tyagi ne uske Dushman ko usse jada bada bata diya tha

Bhanu- (Kisi saand ki tarah fufkarte hue) Tum mujhe jante nahi ho Tyagi.. apni had main raho warna..

Tyagi- (Wapas se muskura padta hai) warna kiya.. mujhe bhi marwa doge jaise Maalti ko warne ki koshish ki

Bhanu- Maine Maalti ko marwane ki koshish nahi ki.. qki use toh main apne ek hathon se marunga, wo bhi tadpa tadpa k

Bhanu ne apne antim sabd aise ghusse se kahe ki Tyagi k jism main bhi jhurjhuri si daud padi thi

Tyagi- (Khud ko sambhalte hue) hmm.. mujhe pata hai, tumhare chote Bhai k zehar khane ka sabab aur yaha tak tumhare Maa Baap k zinda jalne ki wajah wahi aurat 'Maalti' hai

Bhanu aisi hairani se Tyagi ko dekhta hai.. jaise uske Jeevan ka sabse bada sach usko pata chal gaya ho

Par Tyagi bina ruke aage kehta hai
"Par tum akele nahi ho jiska pariwar aur zindagi Maalti k pariwar ne barbad ki

Fark sirf itna hai ki tumhare Chote Bhai aur Maa Baap k sath jo hua uski wajah Maalti or uske dono Bhai.. or Maalti ki badi Bhabhi Premlata hai"

Esse Pehle hi Tyagi kuch aage bolta Bhanu ghusse se jalta hu bol padta hai
"Aur wo harami 'Murli Das' bhi"

Tyagi ha main sar hilate hue aage kehta hai
"Ha.. Murli Das, Kundan ka baap.. bhala use kaise bhool sakta hu"

Es baar aage bolne ka kaam Bhanu karta hai
"Tumhara kiya bigada hai Maalti ne"

Tyagi hairani se Bhanu ko dekhta hai maano puch raha hai..
'mera.. matlab'

Bhanu ab kaafi shant nazar aane laga tha wo asani se chalte hue us charpai pe baith jata hai aur pure shant swar main kehta hai

"Ab jab tumhe mere bare main itna sab pata hai.. par tumne ye sab apne dost Mahendra ko batane ki jagah yaha mere paas aaye ho, toh ye sab yuhi toh nahi ho sakta"

Asal main Bhanu ko thoda samay lagta hai par wo jaldi hi samajh chuka tha ki Tyagi ka yu use darana aur uske bare main itna sab pata hona.. par ab tak chup rehna, jarur uske peeche kuch toh raaz hai

Tyagi- (Ek Lambi si saans chorte hue, wahi Bhanu k pass Charpai pe baith jata hai aur kisi sunya main taakte hue kehta hai) 'Bela'.. Bela naam tha uska, mera prem aur mera jeevan thi wo.. par 'Murli Das' aur uske dono beton Mahendra or Kundan ne pure Gaon k aage us bechari ko Badchalan aur kulta bata k use khudkushi karne pe majbur kar kiya.. aur cheen liya meri Bela ko mujhse

Bela

Tyagi ki aankhon main paani bhar aaya tha aur gala rundha sa gaya tha.. wo ek pal k liye rukta hai aur aage kehta hai
"Pata hai.. jab meri Bela ne Gaon waalon k taano se pareshan hoke khudkushi ki toh wo akeli nahi mari thi, uske pait main mera bacha bhi tha

Us din Murli Das k dono beton ne sirf meri hone wali patni ko nahi, balki mere paida hone wale bache ko bhi mara tha

20 saalon se unse badla lene k liye tarap raha hu.. ek ek din kaisa kaata hai sirf main hi janta hu, meri in haddiyon main tumhari jaisi jaan nahi hai.. par jadi butiyon ka aisa gyan jarur hai jisse main unse badla leke rahunga"

Bhanu k liye ye sab bilkul naya tha.. waise usne ye naam 'Bela' suna hua tha

Apni Patni Sheela k mukh se.. par uske hisab se Kahani kuch aur hi thi aur ab Tyagi k hisab se kuch aur

Bhanu- (Sirf matlab ki baat pe aate hue) Phir meri kiya jarurat.. qki tum yaha aise toh nahi aaye hoge ?

Tyagi- (Bhanu ki taraf dekhta hai aur apni bhar aayi aankhon ko saaf karte hue) mere pass jadi butiyon ka gyan toh hai.. par main Murli Das k pure pariwar ko tadpa tadpa k marna chahta hu, chahta hu ki wo sab bhi wo dard mehsus kare jo meri Bela ne us din mehsus kiya hoga, esliye Budhi k sath sath mujhe tumhara bal bhi chahiye

Bhanu ab sab kuch samajh chuka tha.. par ab bhi uske man main kai sawal thay

Bhanu- Aaj achanak q.. pehle kabhi mere pass aane k bare main q nahi socha ?

"Sach kahu toh mujhe lagta tha ki Mahendra or uske pariwar se main aur Vanraj akele hi badla le sakte thay.. par abhi kuch dino pehle Vanraj Gaon k bazar main Kundan se takraya tha aur tab wo badi muskil se apni jaan aur pehchan chupa k bhaag paya tha

Sidha sidha kabu toh es jung main Vanraj aur main.. kaafi nahi hai, hume tumhari taqat bhi chahiye

Waise bhi hamara dushman lagbhag ek hi hai"
Tyagi apni puri baat kehte hue, Bhanu ki taraf aise dekhne lagta hai jaise ab uske uttar ka intezar ho use

Bhanu- Vanraj ?

Par Bhanu alag hi sawal karta hai

Tyagi- (Jaise use apni galti ka ehsas hua ho) are ha.. main batana hi bhool gaya, Vanraj meri Bela ka Bhai hai

Bhanu- (Ab wapas sabse eham sawal pe aata hai) Tum keh rahe thay ki.. Monu ab tak sirf tumhari wajah se us behoshi ki halat main hai ?

Tyagi- (Muskura padta hai) ha.. main use jo jadi butiyan deta hu wo use theek karne k liye nahi.. balki use usi avastha main rakhne k liye hai

Bhanu- aur eski wajah ?

Tyagi- (Bhanu ki taraf dekh k Muskurate hue) kiya tum Maalti ki aulad ko itni asan aur shant maut dena chahte ho, jaha use dard ka pata tak na chale

Bhanu- (Maano ghusse ki aag bhadak uthi ho) bilkul nahi.. use toh aisi maut dunga ki Maalti or Kundan dekh k apni maut ki bheekh mangenge, par us din sab kuch meri soch se alag chal raha tha esliye use itni asan maut deni padi.. par meri kismat ki wo tab bhi nahi mara

Tyagi- Main phir se mauka de sakta hu.. es baar uska wo haal karo jo tum chahte ho

Bhanu- (Tyagi ki taraf dekhte hue) aisa kaise sambhav hai.. wo hosh main aate hi mera sach sabko bata dega

Tyagi- (Muskurate hue) jab use yaad rahega tab na.. main apni jadi butiyon se uske dimag main basi antim yaadon ko daba dunga, aur jab tak main nahi chahunga use behoshi se pehle ka kuch pal yaad nahi aayenge

Bhanu, Tyagi ki taraf aise dekhta hai maano aankhon hi aankhon main sawal kar raha ho

Tyagi- (Muskurate hue) ha.. tumhara sochna sahi hai, main un yaadon ko puri tarah bhi mita sakta hu.. par tab tum mujhe bhi toh maar sakte ho na.. ab tumhara kiya barosha, aakhir Anokhi bhi toh tumhare liye kaam karti thi.. dekho kiya haal kiya tumne uska

Waise Tyagi ne jo baatein kahi.. khas karke Anokhi aur Jabbar ko leke unpe ab tak wo khud pakka nahi tha, par uski in baaton se Bhanu ka ravayya dekh k wo samajh chuka tha ki wo jo soch raha hai.. wo sab sach hai

Bhanu daat peesh k reh jata hai.. qki Tyagi k hisab se Bhanu kabhi bhi uske viruddh nahi ja sakta tha, warna wo Monu ki yaadon ko jagrit bhi kar sakta hai

Kulmilakar Tyagi, Monu k bahane Bhanu pe apna kabu bana raha hai.. jo baat wo ache se samajh raha tha

Bhanu- Theek hai.. par yaad rahe, agar tumne mujhe dokha dene ki sochi bhi toh..

Tyagi- (Uski baat kaate hue) Aur tum bhi yaad rakhna.. agar tum mere khilaaf gaye toh.. Monu ko sab kuch yaad aa sakta hai

Tyagi ne Saaf sabdo main bata diya tha ki ab Bhanu bina uski marzi k kuch nahi sakta

Tyagi apni jagah se uthte hue
"Chalo phir kal ek chamatkar hoga.. kal Monu ko hosh aayega"

Tyagi apni baat kehte hue muskura padta hai aur waha se chal padta hai.. use jaate hue dekh k Bhanu kisi zehrili naag jaisa fufkar padta hai
"Ek baar main es Jabbar ka masla hal kar du, phir tujhe bhi teri aukat dikhaunga.. Madarchod Tyagi"

Wahi khet se dur nikal aane pe Tyagi lambi si saans lete hue muskura padta hai aur khud se kehta hai
"Bhanu.. ab tu wahi karega jo main chahunga, qki ab tere gale main Tyagi ka patta rahega

Mera Jadi butiyon ko leke itne saalon ka gyan ab kaam aayega.. waise bhi Monu k antim palon ki yaadein toh main kab ka daba chuka hu, logo ko andaza hi nahi ayurved kon kon se chamatkar kar sakta hai"


Yaha tak cheeze ab saaf ho chuki hai.. esliye wapas usi samay laut chalte hai jab Tyagi Monu k upchar karne wala hai, ya sirf ek natak matr


Scene #06

Tyagi ne Kamre ko andar se band kar rakha tha.. aur yaha har kisi ki nazren sirf aur sirf darwaje ki taraf atki hui thi

Savita, Maalti, Sheela aur Harshita charo aurte kabhi darwaje ki taraf dekhti toh kabhi ishvar se pradhana karne lagti

Wahi mardon ka bhi haal kuch alag nahi tha.. Jaha Mahendra baar baar sab acha hone ki kaamna karta wahi Monu ka baap Kundan, baar baar apne bache k sahi hone ki dua mang raha tha

Veeru, Sattu aur Sonu bhi apne bhai k jaldi se theek hone ki prathana karne main peeche nahi thay.. agar koi tha jise kisi baat ka fark nahi pad raha tha wo tha Satyam, qki uski nazren baar baar Maalti ki gathile jism pe naach rahi thi

Satyam man hi man
'Agar ye Monu theek ho gaya toh lagta nahi hum kabhi es Gaon ki gareebi ko chor k sehar ki khushal zindagi dekh payenge..

waise ye bhi hai ki jab tak Monu sahi nahi hoga mera Maalti chachi pe chadhne ka sapna bhi pura nahi hoga.. behenchod ajeeb mushibat hai'

Tabhi Savita ki aawaz sabhi ka dhiyan apni taraf kheechne main kamyab rehti hai
"Are ye itta sara dua kaise.. ?"

Kundan- Sayad Tyagi bhaiya ne us khas Himalayan jadi budi se Monu ka ilaj suru kar diya hai

Kundan sabhi ko tyagi ki kahi baatein yaad dilate hue

Samay yuhi beetta chala jata hai..10 min.. 15 min.. 20 min.. 1 ganta

Kamre ki band khidki aur darwaje k beeche se halka halka dhua ab bhi bahar aata ja raha tha par na Tyagi abhi tak bahar aaya tha na hi uska koi jawab

Jabki yaha mardo ka haal aisa tha ki kabhi Kundan pure aangan main chaihal kadmi karte hue dikhta toh kabhi Mahendra, ha Bhanu jarur kuch pareshan sa tha

Bhanu man hi man
'Kahi ye Tyagi mujhe dokha toh nahi dekha.. esne jo kaha hai ki Monu ki antim samay k kuch pal yaad nahi rahenge, kahi wo sab jhoot toh nahi.. ye madarchod kahi mera khel bigad na de'

Par tabhi Bhanu ki soch main vign pad jata hai qki darwaja halka sa khulta hai aur Tyagi ka paseene se bheega hua chehra bahar aata hai

Sabhi k sabhi uth k Tyagi ki taraf lagbhag bhaag se padte hai par Tyagi unhe rokte hue
"Wahi rukiye aap sabhi.. Monu ka upchar jitna saral samajh raha tha, utna hai nahi.. mujhe.. Savita Bhaujai se thodi madad chahiye"

Savita ye sunte hi aage badne main koi bhi vilamb nahi karti aur turant hi darwaje k pass pahuch jaati hai, Tyagi bina kuch kahe darwaje se hatte hue andar aane ka rasta deta hai aur phir wapas se darwaja band kar deta hai

Savita ab kamre k andar thi.. wo dekhti hai ki kamre main ek taraf lohe k tasle main aag jal rahi thi jiske pass hi Tyagi ka jhola rakha hua tha.. aur us aag se halka halka dhuwa nirantan nikalta ja raha tha

Wahi jab wo Monu ki taraf dekhti hai toh paati hai Monu k sar pe kisi jadi buti ka laip sa laga hua tha

Savita- (Vyakulta bhare swar main) Kiya baat hai.. Tyagi Bhaiya, hamara Monu theek toh ho jayega na ?

Tyagi ek pal k liye man hi man hasta hai aur sochta hai
'Monu toh kab ka theek ho chuka hai, par apne khel ko aage badane k liye abhi thoda aur natak karna hai mujhe, uske baad hi use hosh main launga

Waise bhi asli khel toh ab suru hoga'

Tyagi ye sochte hue Savita k bharibharkam jism ko badi hi piyasi nazron se dekhta hai

Tyagi wapas se apne chehre pe chinta ki lakire laate hue
"Bhaujai.. baat ye hai ki.. wo...ki.."

Savita- (Pareshan si hone lagti hai) Baat kiya hai bhaiya.. batayie na, kuch bhi kariye bus hamare Monu ko theek kar dijiye

Tyagi- (Ek lambi si saans chorte hue) Bhaujai baat ye hai ki.. meri jadi buti ko kaam karne k liye bahut si garmi ki jarurat hai.. aur wo.. main..

Savita- are toh esmain konsi badi baat hai, aap kahiye toh main abhi yaha aag jalwa deti hu

Tyagi- (Ek pal k liye rukta hai, wo jaan k mahole ko sanjida banane ki puri koshish karte hue aage kehta hai) aap samjhi nahi Bhaujai.. main.. kaise samjhau.. kuch samajh nahi pa raha.. kis munh se batau

"Tyagi Bhaiya jo bhi baat hai aap khul k saaf saaf kahiye na yu paheliyan q bhuja rahe hai..

main Maalti ka aisa bhuja hua chehra aur nahi dekh sakti..

Ek Maa pe apne bache ko es halat main dekh k uspe kiya beet rahi hogi.. main soch bhi leti hu toh mera kaleja phat padta hai

Tyagi- (Ek lambi si saans lete hue) Bhaujai main jo bolne ja raha hu.. use sunkar aap mujhe galat mat samajhana par aur koi rasta nahi hai, aur agar Monu ko jaldi hi hosh nahi laya gaya toh wo hamesha hamesha k liye esi avastha main fas jayega

Tyagi ki baat sunkar Savita kaanp si padti hai
"Are toh dair q kar rahe hai.. Monu ko bhale hi maine janm nahi diya hai, par main bhi uski Maa jaisi hu.. aap bus batayie karna kiya hai"

Tyagi- (Man hi man has padta hai apni chaal k safal hone pe) Asal main Bhaujai.. Monu ko jis garmi ki jarurat hai wo hai saririk garmi.. aap samajh rahi hai na.. main kaise samjhau.. wo

Savita ne duniya dekhi thi.. aur saririk garmi ka matlab bhi bhali bhati samajh chuki thi, par phir bhi dhimi si aawaz main kehti hai
"Aap.. aap kehna kiya cha rahe hai Bhaiya.. saaf saaf kahiye na"

Tyagi- Bhaujai.. Monu ko jaldi se hosh main laane k liye meri es jadi buti k sath sath use bahut si saririk garmi ki avashakta hai.. aur ye kaam sirf ek aurat kar sakti hai apne jism se.. aap samajh rahi hai na

Savita es baar kuch bol hi nahi paati, par ha main apna sar jarur hila deti hai

Tyagi- (aage bolte hue) Aur meri nazron main sirf aap hi hai jo Monu ko wo garmi de sakti hai.. waise maine pehle Maalti ko ye sab batane ka niryan liya tha par phir socha wo ek Maa hai.. uski kuch seema hai.. esliye

Tyagi apni baat kehte hue chup ho jata hai

Savita- (Kuch palon tak shant rehne k baad) aur koi rasta nahi..

Tyagi apna sar 'na' main sar hila deta hai, Savita kuch palon tak khadi khadi sochti hi rehti hai par jab wo Behsoh Monu k masum chehre ko dkehti hai toh uske andar ki mamta bhi uchal marne lagti hai

Savita- Mujhe manjur hai.. batayie kiya karna hai, par ye baat

Tyagi- (Apni khushi ko chupate hue) Main janta hu.. ye baat sirf hum dono tak hi rahegi.. balki Monu ko bhi kabhi es upchar ka bare main puri baat nahi pata chalegi

Savita- (Apni nazren neeche jhukaye hue) toh kiya yaha..

Tyagi- Nahi nahi Bhaujai.. ye sab itna saral bhi nahi.. eske liye pehle aapke sarir pe ek khas jadi buti se bana tail lagega, taki apne jism ki garmi aur jada bad sake aur uske baad.. main bataunga kaise..

Yani Tyagi ne saaf kar diya tha ki jab ye sab ho raha hoga.. wo khud bhi wahi hoga

Tyagi aage kehta hai
"Jungle k uttari hisse main ek purana mandir hua karta tha jaha ab sirf khandhar bache hai.. wo jagah sahi hai, waha hum thodi aag bhi jala sakte hai madad k liye aur waha koi ayega bhi nahi, aur sabase badi baat mujhe kuch aur jadi butiyon ki jarurat hai jo mujhe usi jagah mil jayengi.. par aap janti hai na mere kehne ka kiya matlab hai

Dekho Bhaujai main janta hu ki main kiya keh raha hu.. par kiya karu, aur koi rasta bhi nahi hai

Aur agar Monu jaldi se hosh main nahi aya toh wo hamesha hamesha k liye esi avastha main fas k reh jayega"

Savita- (Turant bol padti hai) nahi nahi.. aap jo chahte hai wo sab hoga, aap bus upchar kariye

Tyagi- toh theek hai main Mahendra aur sabhi se baat karke us jagah pe sare intizam karwata hu

Savita bus ha main apna sar hila k reh jaati hai aur phir Monu k sar k pass baith k bade hi sneh bhare hathon se uske baalon main apni ungliya chalane lagti hai.. par es samay uski aankhon main sirf mamta thi.. hawas nahi

Dusri taraf Tyagi bahar aake sabhi ko ye batata hai ki usko kuch tazi jadi butiyon ki jarurat hai jise woo turant tod k estimal karega aur jiske liye Jungle k uttari hisse main us khandar wali jagah pe aage ka upchar hoga

Aur wo ye bhi batata hai ki eske liye use Savita bhaujai ki jarurat padegi qki in sabhi main unhi ko sabse jada anubhav hai.. waise Tyagi ki es baat pe baki teeno aurte bhi apna sahyog dene ki baat kehti hai jispe Tyagi man hi man has padta hai.. qki unhe pata nahi tha ki aaj konsa sahyog hone wala hai

Kundan- (Tyagi ki baat sunkar apni sanka vyakt karte hue) Tyagi Bhaiya aapki sab baat theek hai, par aap toh jante hi hai.. ki es samay Monu ko khatra hai aise main use us ekant jagah pe aur aap keh rahe hai hum bhi waha nahi aa sakte ?

Tyagi- Ha kundan tumne sahi suna, qki yaha ek band kamra tha par waha pura khula vatavaran hoga aur us buti ka dhua dur tak ja sakta hai.. mere pass us buti ki kaat waali dawa sirf itni hi hai ki main use sirf kisi ek ko de sakta hu aur maine Savita Bhaujai ko de di taki unpe us duwe ka prabhav na pade.. aur rahi baat Monu pe khatre ki toh maana main tumhare jaisa jawan nahi.. par tumhse wada karta hu agar Monu pe kisi prakar ka koi khatra hua toh chahe mujhe apni jaan q na deni pade par main use kuch nahi hone dunga

Mahendra- nahi nahi Tyagi Bhai kaisi baat karte ho hum sabhi ko aap par pura barosha hai

Mahendra bari bari se sabhi ki taraf dekhta hai jaha har koi Mahendra se sehmat tha

Kareeb 40 min baad..

Jungle k uttari hisse main ek chatai bichi hui thi jispe Monu behoshi ki halat main laita hua tha aur uske sameep hi Tyagi aur Savita khade thay.. baki sabhi log waha se kareeb 500 meter dur ek choti si puliya k pass khade thay

Asal main har koi waha aana cha raha tha esliye Tyagi ne ki kaha tha ki wo sab aa sakte hai par kam se kam 500m unse dur rehna hoga taki us duwe ka galat prabhar un sabhi pe na pade

Edhar us purane khadar jaisi jagah pe khadi Savita pehle Monu aur phir Tyagi ki taraf dekhte hue
"Toh ab.."

Tyagi aane jhole se ek bottle nikalta hai jismain sarso jaisa koi tail bhara hua tha.. us bottle ko hath main lete hue
"Kapde utaro Bhaujai.."

Continue.. in Update #14

Waaah ji Story writing kiya hoti hai koi aapse seekhe, bilkul Reema Bharti ki novels jaisi romanchak kahani hai

 

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Update #13

Scene #05

Monu ko leke pehle se hi vyakul Bhanu muskil se Heera Panna k liye koi jugad kar paya tha.. aur uski es pareshani main ghee dalne ka kaam karti hai us taali ki karkas aawaz

Bhanu ghusse se us aadmi ko kuch kehne k liye jaise hi peeche ki taraf mudta hai uske sabd bahar hi nahi aa paate qki uske samne taali bajane wala aur koi nahi apitu 'Tyagi' tha

Bhanu man hi man sochane pe majbur ho jata hai
'kahi esne kuch jada toh nahi sun liya'

Ye sochte hi Bhanu k jism main ek sard lehar si daud jaati hai.. ki kahi uske saalon ki mehnat pe paani toh nahi phir jayega

Thand toh waise bhi thi par aisa lagta hai jaise mausam aur jada sard hota chala ja raha ho

Thandi hawa patton ko hila rahi ho, maano kisi tez tufan se pehle ki shanti ho

Tyagi- (Maano jaiss kataksh si karta hai) Kaisa chal raha hai tumhara sadhyantra ?

Bhanu ko aisa laga jaise uske saalon ki mehnat pe sach main paani firne wala ho.. par wo itni asani se tut jaye, aisa inshan kaha

Par Tyagi aage bolta hai
"Anokhi.. phir Monu, aur sayad... Khalid ka baap bhi Gufran bhi.. 3 jaan, waah manna padega tumhe?"

Bhanu k kaano main padne waale ye sabd aise thay maano kisi ne uske kaan main jalta hua koyala bhar diya ho

Bhanu kuch bolna chahta hai par wo ruk jata hai aur ass pass dekhne lagta hai maano pakka kar raha ho waha un dono k alawa aur koi toh nahi.. aur jab use puri tarah yakin ho jata hai waha bus wahi dono hai toh wo apni nazron ko ghuma k khet ki maid k pass behne waali naali k pass rakhi hui apni kudal ki taraf dekhta hai aur maano kisi nishkarsh pe pahuchne ki koshish kar raha ho

Tyagi ne bhi Bhanu ki nazron ko bhaap liya tha esliye wo bhi muskura padta hai.. waise kahi na kahi use bhi ek pal k liye dar toh laga tha, qki wo ache se jaan chuka tha ki Bhanu kis prakar ka aadmi hai

Tyagi- (Muskurate hue) Kiya hua.. us kudal se mujhe marna chahte ho.. hmmm.. sayad waise hi jaise Anokhi, Monu.. aur Gufran ko mara hoga.. ek min sayad ye kaam tumne nahi...

Tyagi dar toh raha tha qki wo bhalibhanti janta tha ki wo Bhanu se saririk taqat main jeet nahi sakta, par dimag ka istemal karna wo bhi ache se janta tha
"Ye sab toh tumne apne aadmi Jabbar se karwaya hoga na.. hmm tabhi usne Maalti ko bhi marne ki koshish ki"

Bhanu- (Ek antim baar koshish karte hue) Ye sab kiya bakwas kar rahe hai.. aapko pata hai na main us ghar ka damad hu

Tyagi muskurate hue wahi emli k paid k neeche padi charpai ki taraf badta hai aur muskurate hue uspe baith jata hai aur haskar apni baat aage kehta hai
"Yakin maano.. mujhe jada mehnat nahi lagegi ye sab sabit karne main, aur agar kisi ko meri baat pe barosha nahi hua toh..

Monu hai na"

Bhanu ghusse se laal hone lagta hai, qki Tyagi ne Monu ka naam leke uske dar ko aur bada diya tha.. Bhanu ghusse se kudal ki taraf badne lagta hai

Bhanu ko yu kudal ki taraf badte hue dekh k ek pal k liye Tyagi bhi dar se kaanp jata hai par wo apne uper dar ko haavi nahi hone deta
"Monu sirf meri wajah se hosh main nahi aa raha.. warna wo toh kab ka theek ho chuka hai"

Tyagi ne maano koi dhamaka sa kiya ho, Bhanu k kadam bhi wahi k wahi ruk jate hai aur sawaliya nazron se Tyagi ki taraf dekhte hue
"Kiya matlab hai tumhara ?"

Bhanu k mukh se nikli ye baat Tyagi k liye Vijaypath pe chalne ka rasta sa tha

Tyagi- (Muskurate hue ek angdai sa leta hai, maano Bhanu ki halat ka bharpur maza le raha ho.. aur phir wo ek raaz kholta hai) tumhe kiya lagta hai.. mere jaisa vadiya sar ki ek jara si chaut ko ab tak theek nahi kar saka ?

Bhanu, Kudal ko bhool k Tyagi ki taraf kuch kadam aage badta hai
"Saaf saaf kaho"

Tyagi- Monu toh suru k 10 dino main hi theek ho gaya tha, kuch baat toh hai us ladke main jo itna jordar waar khane k baad bhi maut uska kuch bigad nahi paayi

Bhanu- Kiya kehna cha rahe ho.. maine kaha na mera in sab se koi lena dena nahi hai

Bhanu ek baar phir se sari baaton ko manne se puri tarah mana karte hue

Tyagi- (Has padta hai.. aur shant aawaz main aage kehta hai) Pata hai.. main jab chahu Monu ko hosh main la sakta hu, aur tumhe toh pata hi hai wo hosh main aate hi sabko kiya batayega

Tyagi apni jagah se uthta hai aur haste hue Bhanu k charo taraf aise ghumne lagta hai maano uski parikrama si kar raha ho aur aage kehta hai
"Waise manna padega, bade taqatwar malum padte ho.. par kiya tum Kundan se jeet paoge, itni taqat hai tumme"

Bhanu ka sabr ab puri tarah tut jata hai.. qki Tyagi ne uske Dushman ko usse jada bada bata diya tha

Bhanu- (Kisi saand ki tarah fufkarte hue) Tum mujhe jante nahi ho Tyagi.. apni had main raho warna..

Tyagi- (Wapas se muskura padta hai) warna kiya.. mujhe bhi marwa doge jaise Maalti ko warne ki koshish ki

Bhanu- Maine Maalti ko marwane ki koshish nahi ki.. qki use toh main apne ek hathon se marunga, wo bhi tadpa tadpa k

Bhanu ne apne antim sabd aise ghusse se kahe ki Tyagi k jism main bhi jhurjhuri si daud padi thi

Tyagi- (Khud ko sambhalte hue) hmm.. mujhe pata hai, tumhare chote Bhai k zehar khane ka sabab aur yaha tak tumhare Maa Baap k zinda jalne ki wajah wahi aurat 'Maalti' hai

Bhanu aisi hairani se Tyagi ko dekhta hai.. jaise uske Jeevan ka sabse bada sach usko pata chal gaya ho

Par Tyagi bina ruke aage kehta hai
"Par tum akele nahi ho jiska pariwar aur zindagi Maalti k pariwar ne barbad ki

Fark sirf itna hai ki tumhare Chote Bhai aur Maa Baap k sath jo hua uski wajah Maalti or uske dono Bhai.. or Maalti ki badi Bhabhi Premlata hai"

Esse Pehle hi Tyagi kuch aage bolta Bhanu ghusse se jalta hu bol padta hai
"Aur wo harami 'Murli Das' bhi"

Tyagi ha main sar hilate hue aage kehta hai
"Ha.. Murli Das, Kundan ka baap.. bhala use kaise bhool sakta hu"

Es baar aage bolne ka kaam Bhanu karta hai
"Tumhara kiya bigada hai Maalti ne"

Tyagi hairani se Bhanu ko dekhta hai maano puch raha hai..
'mera.. matlab'

Bhanu ab kaafi shant nazar aane laga tha wo asani se chalte hue us charpai pe baith jata hai aur pure shant swar main kehta hai

"Ab jab tumhe mere bare main itna sab pata hai.. par tumne ye sab apne dost Mahendra ko batane ki jagah yaha mere paas aaye ho, toh ye sab yuhi toh nahi ho sakta"

Asal main Bhanu ko thoda samay lagta hai par wo jaldi hi samajh chuka tha ki Tyagi ka yu use darana aur uske bare main itna sab pata hona.. par ab tak chup rehna, jarur uske peeche kuch toh raaz hai

Tyagi- (Ek Lambi si saans chorte hue, wahi Bhanu k pass Charpai pe baith jata hai aur kisi sunya main taakte hue kehta hai) 'Bela'.. Bela naam tha uska, mera prem aur mera jeevan thi wo.. par 'Murli Das' aur uske dono beton Mahendra or Kundan ne pure Gaon k aage us bechari ko Badchalan aur kulta bata k use khudkushi karne pe majbur kar kiya.. aur cheen liya meri Bela ko mujhse

Bela

Tyagi ki aankhon main paani bhar aaya tha aur gala rundha sa gaya tha.. wo ek pal k liye rukta hai aur aage kehta hai
"Pata hai.. jab meri Bela ne Gaon waalon k taano se pareshan hoke khudkushi ki toh wo akeli nahi mari thi, uske pait main mera bacha bhi tha

Us din Murli Das k dono beton ne sirf meri hone wali patni ko nahi, balki mere paida hone wale bache ko bhi mara tha

20 saalon se unse badla lene k liye tarap raha hu.. ek ek din kaisa kaata hai sirf main hi janta hu, meri in haddiyon main tumhari jaisi jaan nahi hai.. par jadi butiyon ka aisa gyan jarur hai jisse main unse badla leke rahunga"

Bhanu k liye ye sab bilkul naya tha.. waise usne ye naam 'Bela' suna hua tha

Apni Patni Sheela k mukh se.. par uske hisab se Kahani kuch aur hi thi aur ab Tyagi k hisab se kuch aur

Bhanu- (Sirf matlab ki baat pe aate hue) Phir meri kiya jarurat.. qki tum yaha aise toh nahi aaye hoge ?

Tyagi- (Bhanu ki taraf dekhta hai aur apni bhar aayi aankhon ko saaf karte hue) mere pass jadi butiyon ka gyan toh hai.. par main Murli Das k pure pariwar ko tadpa tadpa k marna chahta hu, chahta hu ki wo sab bhi wo dard mehsus kare jo meri Bela ne us din mehsus kiya hoga, esliye Budhi k sath sath mujhe tumhara bal bhi chahiye

Bhanu ab sab kuch samajh chuka tha.. par ab bhi uske man main kai sawal thay

Bhanu- Aaj achanak q.. pehle kabhi mere pass aane k bare main q nahi socha ?

"Sach kahu toh mujhe lagta tha ki Mahendra or uske pariwar se main aur Vanraj akele hi badla le sakte thay.. par abhi kuch dino pehle Vanraj Gaon k bazar main Kundan se takraya tha aur tab wo badi muskil se apni jaan aur pehchan chupa k bhaag paya tha

Sidha sidha kabu toh es jung main Vanraj aur main.. kaafi nahi hai, hume tumhari taqat bhi chahiye

Waise bhi hamara dushman lagbhag ek hi hai"
Tyagi apni puri baat kehte hue, Bhanu ki taraf aise dekhne lagta hai jaise ab uske uttar ka intezar ho use

Bhanu- Vanraj ?

Par Bhanu alag hi sawal karta hai

Tyagi- (Jaise use apni galti ka ehsas hua ho) are ha.. main batana hi bhool gaya, Vanraj meri Bela ka Bhai hai

Bhanu- (Ab wapas sabse eham sawal pe aata hai) Tum keh rahe thay ki.. Monu ab tak sirf tumhari wajah se us behoshi ki halat main hai ?

Tyagi- (Muskura padta hai) ha.. main use jo jadi butiyan deta hu wo use theek karne k liye nahi.. balki use usi avastha main rakhne k liye hai

Bhanu- aur eski wajah ?

Tyagi- (Bhanu ki taraf dekh k Muskurate hue) kiya tum Maalti ki aulad ko itni asan aur shant maut dena chahte ho, jaha use dard ka pata tak na chale

Bhanu- (Maano ghusse ki aag bhadak uthi ho) bilkul nahi.. use toh aisi maut dunga ki Maalti or Kundan dekh k apni maut ki bheekh mangenge, par us din sab kuch meri soch se alag chal raha tha esliye use itni asan maut deni padi.. par meri kismat ki wo tab bhi nahi mara

Tyagi- Main phir se mauka de sakta hu.. es baar uska wo haal karo jo tum chahte ho

Bhanu- (Tyagi ki taraf dekhte hue) aisa kaise sambhav hai.. wo hosh main aate hi mera sach sabko bata dega

Tyagi- (Muskurate hue) jab use yaad rahega tab na.. main apni jadi butiyon se uske dimag main basi antim yaadon ko daba dunga, aur jab tak main nahi chahunga use behoshi se pehle ka kuch pal yaad nahi aayenge

Bhanu, Tyagi ki taraf aise dekhta hai maano aankhon hi aankhon main sawal kar raha ho

Tyagi- (Muskurate hue) ha.. tumhara sochna sahi hai, main un yaadon ko puri tarah bhi mita sakta hu.. par tab tum mujhe bhi toh maar sakte ho na.. ab tumhara kiya barosha, aakhir Anokhi bhi toh tumhare liye kaam karti thi.. dekho kiya haal kiya tumne uska

Waise Tyagi ne jo baatein kahi.. khas karke Anokhi aur Jabbar ko leke unpe ab tak wo khud pakka nahi tha, par uski in baaton se Bhanu ka ravayya dekh k wo samajh chuka tha ki wo jo soch raha hai.. wo sab sach hai

Bhanu daat peesh k reh jata hai.. qki Tyagi k hisab se Bhanu kabhi bhi uske viruddh nahi ja sakta tha, warna wo Monu ki yaadon ko jagrit bhi kar sakta hai

Kulmilakar Tyagi, Monu k bahane Bhanu pe apna kabu bana raha hai.. jo baat wo ache se samajh raha tha

Bhanu- Theek hai.. par yaad rahe, agar tumne mujhe dokha dene ki sochi bhi toh..

Tyagi- (Uski baat kaate hue) Aur tum bhi yaad rakhna.. agar tum mere khilaaf gaye toh.. Monu ko sab kuch yaad aa sakta hai

Tyagi ne Saaf sabdo main bata diya tha ki ab Bhanu bina uski marzi k kuch nahi sakta

Tyagi apni jagah se uthte hue
"Chalo phir kal ek chamatkar hoga.. kal Monu ko hosh aayega"

Tyagi apni baat kehte hue muskura padta hai aur waha se chal padta hai.. use jaate hue dekh k Bhanu kisi zehrili naag jaisa fufkar padta hai
"Ek baar main es Jabbar ka masla hal kar du, phir tujhe bhi teri aukat dikhaunga.. Madarchod Tyagi"

Wahi khet se dur nikal aane pe Tyagi lambi si saans lete hue muskura padta hai aur khud se kehta hai
"Bhanu.. ab tu wahi karega jo main chahunga, qki ab tere gale main Tyagi ka patta rahega

Mera Jadi butiyon ko leke itne saalon ka gyan ab kaam aayega.. waise bhi Monu k antim palon ki yaadein toh main kab ka daba chuka hu, logo ko andaza hi nahi ayurved kon kon se chamatkar kar sakta hai"


Yaha tak cheeze ab saaf ho chuki hai.. esliye wapas usi samay laut chalte hai jab Tyagi Monu k upchar karne wala hai, ya sirf ek natak matr


Scene #06

Tyagi ne Kamre ko andar se band kar rakha tha.. aur yaha har kisi ki nazren sirf aur sirf darwaje ki taraf atki hui thi

Savita, Maalti, Sheela aur Harshita charo aurte kabhi darwaje ki taraf dekhti toh kabhi ishvar se pradhana karne lagti

Wahi mardon ka bhi haal kuch alag nahi tha.. Jaha Mahendra baar baar sab acha hone ki kaamna karta wahi Monu ka baap Kundan, baar baar apne bache k sahi hone ki dua mang raha tha

Veeru, Sattu aur Sonu bhi apne bhai k jaldi se theek hone ki prathana karne main peeche nahi thay.. agar koi tha jise kisi baat ka fark nahi pad raha tha wo tha Satyam, qki uski nazren baar baar Maalti ki gathile jism pe naach rahi thi

Satyam man hi man
'Agar ye Monu theek ho gaya toh lagta nahi hum kabhi es Gaon ki gareebi ko chor k sehar ki khushal zindagi dekh payenge..

waise ye bhi hai ki jab tak Monu sahi nahi hoga mera Maalti chachi pe chadhne ka sapna bhi pura nahi hoga.. behenchod ajeeb mushibat hai'

Tabhi Savita ki aawaz sabhi ka dhiyan apni taraf kheechne main kamyab rehti hai
"Are ye itta sara dua kaise.. ?"

Kundan- Sayad Tyagi bhaiya ne us khas Himalayan jadi budi se Monu ka ilaj suru kar diya hai

Kundan sabhi ko tyagi ki kahi baatein yaad dilate hue

Samay yuhi beetta chala jata hai..10 min.. 15 min.. 20 min.. 1 ganta

Kamre ki band khidki aur darwaje k beeche se halka halka dhua ab bhi bahar aata ja raha tha par na Tyagi abhi tak bahar aaya tha na hi uska koi jawab

Jabki yaha mardo ka haal aisa tha ki kabhi Kundan pure aangan main chaihal kadmi karte hue dikhta toh kabhi Mahendra, ha Bhanu jarur kuch pareshan sa tha

Bhanu man hi man
'Kahi ye Tyagi mujhe dokha toh nahi dekha.. esne jo kaha hai ki Monu ki antim samay k kuch pal yaad nahi rahenge, kahi wo sab jhoot toh nahi.. ye madarchod kahi mera khel bigad na de'

Par tabhi Bhanu ki soch main vign pad jata hai qki darwaja halka sa khulta hai aur Tyagi ka paseene se bheega hua chehra bahar aata hai

Sabhi k sabhi uth k Tyagi ki taraf lagbhag bhaag se padte hai par Tyagi unhe rokte hue
"Wahi rukiye aap sabhi.. Monu ka upchar jitna saral samajh raha tha, utna hai nahi.. mujhe.. Savita Bhaujai se thodi madad chahiye"

Savita ye sunte hi aage badne main koi bhi vilamb nahi karti aur turant hi darwaje k pass pahuch jaati hai, Tyagi bina kuch kahe darwaje se hatte hue andar aane ka rasta deta hai aur phir wapas se darwaja band kar deta hai

Savita ab kamre k andar thi.. wo dekhti hai ki kamre main ek taraf lohe k tasle main aag jal rahi thi jiske pass hi Tyagi ka jhola rakha hua tha.. aur us aag se halka halka dhuwa nirantan nikalta ja raha tha

Wahi jab wo Monu ki taraf dekhti hai toh paati hai Monu k sar pe kisi jadi buti ka laip sa laga hua tha

Savita- (Vyakulta bhare swar main) Kiya baat hai.. Tyagi Bhaiya, hamara Monu theek toh ho jayega na ?

Tyagi ek pal k liye man hi man hasta hai aur sochta hai
'Monu toh kab ka theek ho chuka hai, par apne khel ko aage badane k liye abhi thoda aur natak karna hai mujhe, uske baad hi use hosh main launga

Waise bhi asli khel toh ab suru hoga'

Tyagi ye sochte hue Savita k bharibharkam jism ko badi hi piyasi nazron se dekhta hai

Tyagi wapas se apne chehre pe chinta ki lakire laate hue
"Bhaujai.. baat ye hai ki.. wo...ki.."

Savita- (Pareshan si hone lagti hai) Baat kiya hai bhaiya.. batayie na, kuch bhi kariye bus hamare Monu ko theek kar dijiye

Tyagi- (Ek lambi si saans chorte hue) Bhaujai baat ye hai ki.. meri jadi buti ko kaam karne k liye bahut si garmi ki jarurat hai.. aur wo.. main..

Savita- are toh esmain konsi badi baat hai, aap kahiye toh main abhi yaha aag jalwa deti hu

Tyagi- (Ek pal k liye rukta hai, wo jaan k mahole ko sanjida banane ki puri koshish karte hue aage kehta hai) aap samjhi nahi Bhaujai.. main.. kaise samjhau.. kuch samajh nahi pa raha.. kis munh se batau

"Tyagi Bhaiya jo bhi baat hai aap khul k saaf saaf kahiye na yu paheliyan q bhuja rahe hai..

main Maalti ka aisa bhuja hua chehra aur nahi dekh sakti..

Ek Maa pe apne bache ko es halat main dekh k uspe kiya beet rahi hogi.. main soch bhi leti hu toh mera kaleja phat padta hai

Tyagi- (Ek lambi si saans lete hue) Bhaujai main jo bolne ja raha hu.. use sunkar aap mujhe galat mat samajhana par aur koi rasta nahi hai, aur agar Monu ko jaldi hi hosh nahi laya gaya toh wo hamesha hamesha k liye esi avastha main fas jayega

Tyagi ki baat sunkar Savita kaanp si padti hai
"Are toh dair q kar rahe hai.. Monu ko bhale hi maine janm nahi diya hai, par main bhi uski Maa jaisi hu.. aap bus batayie karna kiya hai"

Tyagi- (Man hi man has padta hai apni chaal k safal hone pe) Asal main Bhaujai.. Monu ko jis garmi ki jarurat hai wo hai saririk garmi.. aap samajh rahi hai na.. main kaise samjhau.. wo

Savita ne duniya dekhi thi.. aur saririk garmi ka matlab bhi bhali bhati samajh chuki thi, par phir bhi dhimi si aawaz main kehti hai
"Aap.. aap kehna kiya cha rahe hai Bhaiya.. saaf saaf kahiye na"

Tyagi- Bhaujai.. Monu ko jaldi se hosh main laane k liye meri es jadi buti k sath sath use bahut si saririk garmi ki avashakta hai.. aur ye kaam sirf ek aurat kar sakti hai apne jism se.. aap samajh rahi hai na

Savita es baar kuch bol hi nahi paati, par ha main apna sar jarur hila deti hai

Tyagi- (aage bolte hue) Aur meri nazron main sirf aap hi hai jo Monu ko wo garmi de sakti hai.. waise maine pehle Maalti ko ye sab batane ka niryan liya tha par phir socha wo ek Maa hai.. uski kuch seema hai.. esliye

Tyagi apni baat kehte hue chup ho jata hai

Savita- (Kuch palon tak shant rehne k baad) aur koi rasta nahi..

Tyagi apna sar 'na' main sar hila deta hai, Savita kuch palon tak khadi khadi sochti hi rehti hai par jab wo Behsoh Monu k masum chehre ko dkehti hai toh uske andar ki mamta bhi uchal marne lagti hai

Savita- Mujhe manjur hai.. batayie kiya karna hai, par ye baat

Tyagi- (Apni khushi ko chupate hue) Main janta hu.. ye baat sirf hum dono tak hi rahegi.. balki Monu ko bhi kabhi es upchar ka bare main puri baat nahi pata chalegi

Savita- (Apni nazren neeche jhukaye hue) toh kiya yaha..

Tyagi- Nahi nahi Bhaujai.. ye sab itna saral bhi nahi.. eske liye pehle aapke sarir pe ek khas jadi buti se bana tail lagega, taki apne jism ki garmi aur jada bad sake aur uske baad.. main bataunga kaise..

Yani Tyagi ne saaf kar diya tha ki jab ye sab ho raha hoga.. wo khud bhi wahi hoga

Tyagi aage kehta hai
"Jungle k uttari hisse main ek purana mandir hua karta tha jaha ab sirf khandhar bache hai.. wo jagah sahi hai, waha hum thodi aag bhi jala sakte hai madad k liye aur waha koi ayega bhi nahi, aur sabase badi baat mujhe kuch aur jadi butiyon ki jarurat hai jo mujhe usi jagah mil jayengi.. par aap janti hai na mere kehne ka kiya matlab hai

Dekho Bhaujai main janta hu ki main kiya keh raha hu.. par kiya karu, aur koi rasta bhi nahi hai

Aur agar Monu jaldi se hosh main nahi aya toh wo hamesha hamesha k liye esi avastha main fas k reh jayega"

Savita- (Turant bol padti hai) nahi nahi.. aap jo chahte hai wo sab hoga, aap bus upchar kariye

Tyagi- toh theek hai main Mahendra aur sabhi se baat karke us jagah pe sare intizam karwata hu

Savita bus ha main apna sar hila k reh jaati hai aur phir Monu k sar k pass baith k bade hi sneh bhare hathon se uske baalon main apni ungliya chalane lagti hai.. par es samay uski aankhon main sirf mamta thi.. hawas nahi

Dusri taraf Tyagi bahar aake sabhi ko ye batata hai ki usko kuch tazi jadi butiyon ki jarurat hai jise woo turant tod k estimal karega aur jiske liye Jungle k uttari hisse main us khandar wali jagah pe aage ka upchar hoga

Aur wo ye bhi batata hai ki eske liye use Savita bhaujai ki jarurat padegi qki in sabhi main unhi ko sabse jada anubhav hai.. waise Tyagi ki es baat pe baki teeno aurte bhi apna sahyog dene ki baat kehti hai jispe Tyagi man hi man has padta hai.. qki unhe pata nahi tha ki aaj konsa sahyog hone wala hai

Kundan- (Tyagi ki baat sunkar apni sanka vyakt karte hue) Tyagi Bhaiya aapki sab baat theek hai, par aap toh jante hi hai.. ki es samay Monu ko khatra hai aise main use us ekant jagah pe aur aap keh rahe hai hum bhi waha nahi aa sakte ?

Tyagi- Ha kundan tumne sahi suna, qki yaha ek band kamra tha par waha pura khula vatavaran hoga aur us buti ka dhua dur tak ja sakta hai.. mere pass us buti ki kaat waali dawa sirf itni hi hai ki main use sirf kisi ek ko de sakta hu aur maine Savita Bhaujai ko de di taki unpe us duwe ka prabhav na pade.. aur rahi baat Monu pe khatre ki toh maana main tumhare jaisa jawan nahi.. par tumhse wada karta hu agar Monu pe kisi prakar ka koi khatra hua toh chahe mujhe apni jaan q na deni pade par main use kuch nahi hone dunga

Mahendra- nahi nahi Tyagi Bhai kaisi baat karte ho hum sabhi ko aap par pura barosha hai

Mahendra bari bari se sabhi ki taraf dekhta hai jaha har koi Mahendra se sehmat tha

Kareeb 40 min baad..

Jungle k uttari hisse main ek chatai bichi hui thi jispe Monu behoshi ki halat main laita hua tha aur uske sameep hi Tyagi aur Savita khade thay.. baki sabhi log waha se kareeb 500 meter dur ek choti si puliya k pass khade thay

Asal main har koi waha aana cha raha tha esliye Tyagi ne ki kaha tha ki wo sab aa sakte hai par kam se kam 500m unse dur rehna hoga taki us duwe ka galat prabhar un sabhi pe na pade

Edhar us purane khadar jaisi jagah pe khadi Savita pehle Monu aur phir Tyagi ki taraf dekhte hue
"Toh ab.."

Tyagi aane jhole se ek bottle nikalta hai jismain sarso jaisa koi tail bhara hua tha.. us bottle ko hath main lete hue
"Kapde utaro Bhaujai.."

Continue.. in Update #14

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