Romance मोक्ष : तृष्णा से तुष्टि तक .......

[DARK WOLFKING]

Sarvesh ke sath vikram/ranvijay gaya tha.... Ravindr ke noida wale flat par.... Aur anuj ko apne sath delhi le gaya

Vikram ke alawa kisi ke 2 nam nahi.... Full/short ho sakte hain.... Jaise mera ravi/ravindr/ranaji... Full name rana ravindra pratap singh

dobara padhkar edit kar diya tha maine ..abhi sushila ke pati ka naam dhund raha hu 1st page par ..ki kaun gayab ho gaya hai ..

 

[DARK WOLFKING]

sushila aur mamta ki jaankari nahi hai family ke naam me ..

 

[kamdev99008]

dobara padhkar edit kar diya tha maine ..abhi sushila ke pati ka naam dhund raha hu 1st page par ..ki kaun gayab ho gaya hai ..

Sushila ke pati ko to vikram, ragini, dev pahle hi dhoondh rahe hain......
Aap bhi unke sath ho gaye

sushila aur mamta ki jaankari nahi hai family ke naam me ..

Sushila..... Ravindr/ravi ki patni hai.... Bhanu aur vaidehi ki maa

Mamta vimla bua ke bade bete deepak ki wife hai.... Anuradha aur anuj ki maa

 

[DARK WOLFKING]

itne saare log hai to naam yaad rakhna bahut mushkil hai ..isliye check kiya yaad aane par ..

bas kuch naam aur rishte ( jo shuru me padhe the ) yaad rehte hai jaise ragini ,,,aur unka beta ,beti ..anuradha aur prabal .vikram ..ab ritu ka bhi samajh raha hu dhire dhire ..

 

[kamdev99008]

itne saare log hai to naam yaad rakhna bahut mushkil hai ..isliye check kiya yaad aane par ..

bas kuch naam aur rishte ( jo shuru me padhe the ) yaad rehte hai jaise ragini ,,,aur unka beta ,beti ..anuradha aur prabal .vikram ..ab ritu ka bhi samajh raha hu dhire dhire ..

Bhai abhi to pura pariwar flashback me ayega....
Hamari family ka hi pura gaon hai... Ek hi pariwar ka... 31 makan hain
Hamare khet abhi tak shamil me hain... Khet ki fard/land records me abhi 23 nam darj hain hissedaron ke, ek hi khate me....aur bujurgo ke marne ki speed aisi hi bani rahi to agli 5 sal me 50+ nam ho jayeinge hissedaro ke.... Ek-ek bujurg ke 8-10 naati hain

 

[DARK WOLFKING]

aapke 4 chacha hai aur 2 bua ...
ab dadaji kitne bhai the ye bhi dekhna hoga ..
sirf balraj chacha unmarried hai ..

poori tarah bikhra hua tha pariwar isliye samajhne me thodi kathinaai ho rahi hai ...baaki family ke naam dekh dekhkar samajh me aa raha hai ..

 

[The_InnoCent]

itne saare log hai to naam yaad rakhna bahut mushkil hai ..isliye check kiya yaad aane par ..

bas kuch naam aur rishte ( jo shuru me padhe the ) yaad rehte hai jaise ragini ,,,aur unka beta ,beti ..anuradha aur prabal .vikram ..ab ritu ka bhi samajh raha hu dhire dhire ..

Leon bhai bade bhaiya ji ki ye real story hai is liye inhe story ke characters ke bare me confuse hone ka sawaal hi nahi hai magar jo is story ko as a reader padh rahe hain unka bheja fry ho jata hai. Main to ye maanta hu ki agar is story ke characters yaad rahe to hi badi baat hai aur story ko samajhna usse bhi badi baat hai. Halaaki samajhne me asaani tabhi hoti hai jab characters yaad rahe. Jab ki problem yahi ki itne characters hain jo ek to yaad nahi hote aur agar yaad ho bhi gaye to bade bhaiya ji ek mahine ka antar kar ke bhulwa dete hain,,,,,

Yaha par FF bhai aur sanju bhaiya hi aise hain jinhe is story ke bare me sab kuch achhe se yaad bhi rahta hai aur samajh me bhi aa jata hai. Itni khatarnaak memory is umar me hai to sochiye jab ye meri umar me rahe honge tab kya haal raha hoga,,,,,

Aisi mahaan hastiyo ko,,,,,

 

[The_InnoCent]

Bhai abhi to pura pariwar flashback me ayega....
Hamari family ka hi pura gaon hai... Ek hi pariwar ka... 31 makan hain
Hamare khet abhi tak shamil me hain... Khet ki fard/land records me abhi 23 nam darj hain hissedaron ke, ek hi khate me....aur bujurgo ke marne ki speed aisi hi bani rahi to agli 5 sal me 50+ nam ho jayeinge hissedaro ke.... Ek-ek bujurg ke 8-10 naati hain

Aapke kahne ka matlab hai ki ek gaon sirf apki hi family ka.??? Baaki dusra us gaon me koi hai hi nahi.?? Agar aisa hi hai to ye mere liye bade ashcharya ki baat hai aur ab to mere man me aise gaon ko apni aankho se dekhne ki utsukta jaagrit ho gayi hai bade bhaiya ji,,,,

 

[The_InnoCent]

dobara padhkar edit kar diya tha maine ..abhi sushila ke pati ka naam dhund raha hu 1st page par ..ki kaun gayab ho gaya hai ..

Hahaha
Dhudho dhudho leon bhai, main bhi aise hi dhudhne lagta tha. Ye story aisi hi hai ki aap ghanchakkar huye bina nahi rah payenge. Iske baavjud story me kuch to baat hai ki ab tak ham sab is story se chipke huye hain aur bade bhaiya ji se update ki guhaar lagate rahte hain. Ye alag baat hai ki aisi guhaar ki awaaz sunte hi ye mahaanubhaav apne kaano me ruyi daal ke baith jate hain,,,,,

 

[SANJU ( V. R. )]

itne saare log hai to naam yaad rakhna bahut mushkil hai ..isliye check kiya yaad aane par ..

bas kuch naam aur rishte ( jo shuru me padhe the ) yaad rehte hai jaise ragini ,,,aur unka beta ,beti ..anuradha aur prabal .vikram ..ab ritu ka bhi samajh raha hu dhire dhire ..

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