Romance रंडी से प्यार (Completed)

[Chutiyadr]

Nice update sir jee, aapki lekhni lawajab hai, apki story ka kuch update padh k hi mai aapka bahut bada fan ho gaya aisa lagta hi nhi hai ki story padh raha hu film ki trah sare scene apne aap hi dimag mai aane lagta hai,

Lawajab sir jeerr

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[Chutiyadr]

Nice

Dhanyawad kai

 

[Chutiyadr]

Gajab update

... Maja to aaya par samjh kuch na aaay

Dhanyawad lucky,kuch khas samjhne ko nahi tha dono dost the

 

[Chutiyadr]

Very good update bro...

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[Chutiyadr]

Super update hai bhai

Dhanyawad rajiv

 

[Chutiyadr]

Great twist n turn in story dactar sahib

kajal/priya aur avinash ka rishta akhir hai kya dpst ya premi ka ? tum koi bhi kahani seedhi nahi likh sakte ?

Dhanyawad sir ji....Adat ho gayi hai aisa likhne ki ,chalo next update sidha sadha wala deta hu

 

[Chutiyadr]

Nice updates...

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[Chutiyadr]

डॉ साब बहुत ही आनंदमयी अपडेट रहा कहानी बहुत ही रोमांचक स्थिति में पहुँच गयी है

Dhanyawad sandy

 

[Chutiyadr]

Superb update. लगता है डाक्टर साहब कहानी का अंत नजदीक है.

Dhanyawad janu,abhi se kyo khatm karwa rahe ho yar achhi nahi lag rahi ...kya

 

[Chutiyadr]

mast story hai.....just completed first page......

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