Romance रंडी से प्यार (Completed)

[Chutiyadr]

तो ये कहानी खत्म सर बढा मजा आया. आप शुध्द हिन्दी मे लीखते हो मजा उसी मे है. hinglish ओर हिन्दी मतलब एक सायकल दुसरा मरझीडीज. ऐसे ही लीखते रहीये.

dhanywad kaka dost

 

[Chutiyadr]

my new old story

Incest - जिम्मेदारी (कुछ नयी कुछ पुरानी) (Completed)

अध्याय 1 शांत माहोल इतना भयावक की डर ही लग जाये,मानसून की हलकी फुहारे,भीगे हुए लोगो की भीड़ और भीगे हुए नयन,शमसान की सी शांति में कुछ सिसकते बच्चे और बिच में पड़ी हुई दो लाशे,ये वीर ठाकुर और उनकी पत्नी की लाश थी जो एक सडक हादसे का शिकार हो गये थे,वीर ठाकुर पुरे इलाके के सबसे ताकतवर और रुशुखदार...

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[Coolraj839]

Superb story bhai maza aagaya

 

[Chutiyadr]

Superb story bhai maza aagaya

dhanywad raj bhai

 

[Coolraj839]

Waiting

 

[Mathur]

Hello, Ladies  & Gentleman, 
We are so glad to Introduce Ultimate Story Contest of this year.

Jaise ki aap sabhi Jante Hain is baar Hum USC contest chala rahe hain aur Kuch Din pahle hi Humne Rules & Queries Thread ka announce kar diya tha aur ab Ultimate Story Contest ka Entry Thread air kar diya hai jo 10th, June 2020, 11:59 PM ko close hoga.

Khair ab main point Par Aate Hain Jaisa ki entry thread aired ho chuka hai isliye aap Sabhi readers aur writers se Meri personally request hai ki is contest mein aap Jarur participate kare aur Apni kalpnao ko shabdon ka rasta dikha ke yaha pesh kare ho sakta hai log use pasand kare.
Aur Jo readers nahi likhna chahte wo bakiyo ki story padhke review de sakte hai mujhe bahut Khushi Hogi agar aap is contest mein participate lekar apni story likhenge to.

Ye aap Sabhi Ke liye ek bahut hi sunhara avsar hai isliye Aage Bade aur apni Kalpanao ko shabdon Mein likhkar Duniya Ko dikha De.

Ye ek short story contest hai jisme Minimum 800 words se maximum 6000 words tak allowed hai itne hi words mein apni story complete Karni Hogi, Aur ek hi post mein complete karna hai aur Entry Thread mein post karna hai.
I hope aap mujhe niraash nahi Karenge aur is contest Mein Jarur participate Lenge.

Rules Check Karne k Liye Ye Thread Use karein :- Rules And Queries Thread

Entry Post Karne k Liye Ye thread Use Karein :- Entry Thread
Reviews Post Karne K liye Ye thread Use karein :- Reviews Thread
On Behalf of Admin Team
Regards :- Xforum Staff..

 

[Jasvir]

So nice

 

[Chutiyadr]

So nice

dhanywad dost

 

[Chutiyadr]

dosto nayi story shuru kiya hu read it

Incest - Shikari Ki Bimari

dosto bahut dino se is story ko shuru karne ki koshis kar raha tha lekin khud ya to busy tha ya to likhne ka man hi nahi tha .. ab jakar ye nayi story shuru kar raha hu .. ye ek incest story hogi , jisme thoda fantasy , romance , suspense aur thrill ka tadka hoga .. aage aap log padh kar samjh...

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[The Professor]

It was a great story Doctor. One of the greatest point i liked about this story is that you have shown the reality ...i mean most of the stories on this site don't show..or i guess don't know about the real world..how hard it is to survive out there. But in this story you have expressed it in a very good manner i would say about the poverty factors! Other than that the emotions are expressed well. Good job
Btw
I mean i was a silent reader from 2015 but then i thought why not open an account and express my reviews about the stories written!
Keep it up!