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Incest वो तो है अलबेला (incest + adultery)
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Sanju@
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लगता है Hemantstar111 भाई का रात की बर्थडे पार्टी का हैंगओवर उतरा नही है 
Galat baat hai bhai sab ki personal aur professional life hota hai subah sab biji hote hai update raat ko aayega bhai hum readers ke liye 12- 1 baje raat tak jagta haiलगता है Hemantstar111 भाई का रात की बर्थडे पार्टी का हैंगओवर उतरा नही है
Sandhya ke 3 alag alag bayan aur Raman ka kahna ki tum itni asani se sab kuchh khatm nhi kar sakti aur abhay ke flashback me Raman ka confidence se Mujhe bhi ab lag raha hai ki stories adultery hai isme Sandhya Raman se kafi time se chud rahi hai
Yesi bahut si incest/adultery stories hai jise incest category me rakh diya jata hai aur incest lover jab stories padta hai to pata chalta hai ki stories to pura adultery hai
Is stories ke pahle update me dono ki chudai dikhaya ja chuka hai aur sirf flashback me ye janna baki hai ki Sandhya kaise Raman se chudi fir bhi dekhna dono ki chudai fir se writer dikhayega jo sabit karega ki stories adultery hi hai
Bhai hum kya kah sakte hai stories bhai ka hai chahe jo dikhaye
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Sandhya ne bhale hi raman ko bol diya ki jb mai apne bete se pyar ni kr payi to tu kis khet ki muli...jbki sandhya ki ye baat 100% jhut hai jb pyar ni tha chud kyu ri thi aur to aur apna laad aman pr kyu luta ri thi....jbki abhay uska apna khoon tha pr sandhya ne bhai kasm se pure story ki abhi tk maa chod kr rakh hai...story albela pr ni balki albeli pr honi chahiye...kyuki sandhya 10 jgh 10 tarike ki baat kr ri aur 10 trh ke vehwaar...raman se chudte time kitni khus...aman ke liye sneh...aur abhay ke liye ang mai aag...aur present time mai abhagan bani hui hai...randi to thi hi aage kya bane kuch kaha ni jaa skta..ye story full adultery hi hai...!!!
Studxyz
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अपडेट रात के 1 बजे आता है यानि कि कल आएगा कुछ समय में बदलाव करें अलबेला जी ?
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kamdev99008
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Real face of Sandhya
Jo writer ne hi dikhaya hai
Ab rone aur ansoo bahane ke drame ke alawa usne abhay ke sath huye galat ke liye na to khud ko koi saza di aur na hi munim, aman, raman ya kisi ko bhi
Sach bolne wale ki khal udhadwa di munim ne sandhya ke samne... Lekin munim ke gunah samne aane par bhi sandhya ne uski khal nahi udhadwayi
Ye dhurt, kameeni aur makkar aurat hai...
Jise raman se khatra laga to uske bete par pyar lutakar apne favour me karne lagi...
Jab abhay samne aya to ye aish, jaydad jane ke dar se uske samne bechari bankar, maafi mangkar use apne favour me karne lagi... Ab payal ko mohra banane ke liye uspar pyar lutane ka dhong kar rahi hai
Do batein clear hain :-
1- ab tak sandhya ne bakchodi ke alawa aisa kuchh bhi nahi kiya jo uska pachhtava ya galti me sudhar sabit kare
2- is sari jaydad ka waris akela abhay hai... Baki kisi ka bhi kuchh nahi, sandhya ka bhi nahi.. Uska jinda hona raman,aman ke liye khatra hai... Lekin sandhya ke liye umr ke is padav par ek sunahra mauka
Baaki dekhte hain... Hemantstar111 bhai kahani ko kis or modte hain
Bhai Maine ma beta ki nafrat wali incest/adultery stories bahut pada hai jisme ma kisi aur se sirf ek bar hi chudti hai aur hero hamesha beta hi rahta hai
Lekin Is stories me Sandhya ke 3 alag alag bayan aur Raman ka Sandhya ko ye kahana ki tum janti ho ki main tumse kitna pyar karta hu, tum yese sab kuchh inti aasani se khatm nhi kar sakti
Abhay ke flashback me Raman ka full confidence
Isse saaf ho gaya hai ki stories full adultery hai kyunki Sandhya Raman se kai baar chudwa chuki hai ise lekhak chah kar bhi ise jhooth sabit nhi kar sakta to yh stories kisi bhi haalt me incest nhi ho sakta
Aur is stories ka hero Raman hai na ki abhay kyoki story me main kirdar ko chodne wala hi stories ka hero hota hai
Is stories me abhay apne upar Sandhya ke dwara kiye gaye julm ka badla apni ma se gin gin kar jarur lega taki Sandhya ko pata chal sake ki usne abhay ke saath kya kya kiya tha aur
Jab abhay apne pita ke sawalo ka pata laga lega fir payal ko lekar shahar chala jayega aur Sandhya bhi Raman ke saath ho jayegi fir stories ka end ho jayega
Mujhe samjha me nhi aaya ki lekhak ne adultery category me na rakh kar incest category me kyu rakha hai
Shayad lekhak ne galti se incest category me dal dala ho
Lekin Is stories me Sandhya ke 3 alag alag bayan aur Raman ka Sandhya ko ye kahana ki tum janti ho ki main tumse kitna pyar karta hu, tum yese sab kuchh inti aasani se khatm nhi kar sakti
Abhay ke flashback me Raman ka full confidence
Isse saaf ho gaya hai ki stories full adultery hai kyunki Sandhya Raman se kai baar chudwa chuki hai ise lekhak chah kar bhi ise jhooth sabit nhi kar sakta to yh stories kisi bhi haalt me incest nhi ho sakta
Aur is stories ka hero Raman hai na ki abhay kyoki story me main kirdar ko chodne wala hi stories ka hero hota hai
Is stories me abhay apne upar Sandhya ke dwara kiye gaye julm ka badla apni ma se gin gin kar jarur lega taki Sandhya ko pata chal sake ki usne abhay ke saath kya kya kiya tha aur
Jab abhay apne pita ke sawalo ka pata laga lega fir payal ko lekar shahar chala jayega aur Sandhya bhi Raman ke saath ho jayegi fir stories ka end ho jayega
Mujhe samjha me nhi aaya ki lekhak ne adultery category me na rakh kar incest category me kyu rakha hai
Shayad lekhak ne galti se incest category me dal dala ho
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अभी तक के संध्या की अतीत से कुछ बहुत ज़्यादा नहीं निकला है सिर्फ एक की वो महा चुतियानी है और दूसरा कि वो हवस की मारी विधवा औरत है बाकी का सिर्फ पाठकों के अंदाज़ ही है
लेखक ने अलबेले के अगले ज़िंदगी के सफ़र के बारे में कोई भी खुलासा नहीं किया है और ना ही संध्या की पिछली जिंदगी का तो जब तक कुछ भी कहना जल्दबाजी होगी संध्या को अंदाज़, के हिसाब से एक छवि में ढाल देना लेखक पर दबाव जरूर डाल सकती है लेकिन उसको अपनी पटकथा बदलने को मजबूर नहीं कर सकती और यहीं लेखक की असली परीक्षा होगी की वो बिना दबाव में आये अपने अनुसार कहानी को आगे बढ़ाये
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