Chutiyadr
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subhamwaAre TheBlackBlood bhai kidher ho...aa bhi jao ab...
subhamwaAre TheBlackBlood bhai kidher ho...aa bhi jao ab...
uska narration bada tagda tha us story meDono ki style me fark hai.. Tere paas alag style hai uske paas language par pakad majboot hai..
okkies broAre itni fursat nahi he hamare paas...ham to bas apne kuch karibiyo tak hi seemit he...
uska narration bada tagda tha us story me
Maine ek story padhi thi uski baba ki pahadi....accha likhta hai woDono ki style me fark hai.. Tere paas alag style hai uske paas language par pakad majboot hai..
dusari usse acchi hai but wahi love story hai ...narration ke mamle me badiya hai lekin plot wahi purana haiMaine ek story padhi thi uski baba ki pahadi....accha likhta hai wo
Love story se chidh apun kodusari usse acchi hai but wahi love story hai ...narration ke mamle me badiya hai lekin plot wahi purana hai
kya bat to kab se shuru kar rahe ho likhnaसोचती हूँ मैं भी एक प्रेम कहानी लिख दूँ ,
मीरा नहीं तो मीरा जैसी एक दीवानी लिख दूँ.