Story:- AMULYA TOHFA
Writer:-
Milan2010
Kaafi taarifein suna hai Milan bhai aapka especially time travel story mein...Aaj future related ek story padhne ka mauka mila.
Aapne story mein human activities ko dikhaya hai...Jo unplanned urbanization aur modernization ke naam par deforestation aur natural resources ka exploitation hota hai...Aise activites progressive to lagte hai lekin kitne hadd tak destructive ho sakte hai ye future mein hi pata chalta hai.
Aur aapne ye bhi acche se dikhaya ki insaan ko akal tab hi aata hai jab unse sab kuch chheene lagta hai...Paani aur Haawa ka bhi mahatwa tab pata chalta hai jab uska kami mehsus hone lagta hai.
Story ka positives ki baat karu toh aapka detailed narration bahut accha laga...Kaise earth mein life ka shuruwat hua...Aur kaise earth mein life ke possibilty ke liye favourable condition bana...Itna complicated cheej ko bhi aapne acche se simple way mein present kiya.
Aur saath hi Sarthak ki wo koshish...Jis mein usne kabhi haar naa maante hue ek impossible sa project ko pura kiya...Aur sabhi ke liye fir se ek suitable environment banaya survival ke liye.
Aur ending mein jaise Sarthak ne uss bacchi ko bachaya usse dekh kar Spyder movie aur Asur web series yaad aaya...Jab har taraf negativity hota hai aur insaan laalach mein sirf apna sochta hai to unmein kuch aise incidents bhi hote hai jab kuch log apne jaan par khel kar dusro ko bachaata hai.
Aur kuch constructive ki baat karu to...Jaise aapne story mein life ka beginning ka explanation diya...Aise hi human activities jo prithvi ko barbaad kar rahe hai...Kuch aise examples thoda aur detailed mein likhte to shayad aur accha rehta.
Kul mila kar aapne bahut accha story likha hai...Jis mein ek deep meaning ke saath iss proverb ko bhi justify kiya..."Prevention is better than cure."
All the best for contest bhai.