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Mahi Maurya

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RASHMI KA DARD

Rasmi ki musibat shayad uska picha chodna hi nahi chahti thi bachpan me maa ka hath sir se hat gya or shadi ke 1.5 saal baad uski goad me ek ladki dekar uska pati bhi chood kar chala gya pati ke jaate to maano dukho ka pahaad toot pada uske sir per jaha kuch din pehle tak sab uski tarieef karte the wahi aaj use manhos kalmui keh kar taane maarte the bahut muskil se bechari ke jeevan kat raha tha mayike me bus uske baapu hi the jo ki kheto me majduri karke apna pait bharta tha rashmi ye baat jaanti thi ki kitni muskilo se uske baap ne uski shaadi ki thi esliye vo unhe sab bta kar dukhi nahi karna chahti thi

kailash singh- ( rashmi ka baapu)

age- 42 ( majduri karne ki wajah se jism abhi bhi majboot hai)


lund- 6.5 /2.2


rashmi -

age- 22 ( rang gora )

hight- 5.6

fig- 34/32/36 ( kul mila kar kaam devi ka roop thi)

ab kahani per aate hai

rashmi ke pati ko mare 2 mahine ho gye the or ye 2 mahine saalo ki tarah kat the rashmi ke liye wahi kailash bhi apni beti ka haal chaal lene ke liye uske sasural ke liye nikal chuka tha

R saas- are kutiya mere bete ko to khaa gayi ab kya hume bhukha maar ne ka iraada hai kya suraj nikal gya hai nasta nahi bna abhi tak

R- nasta taiyaar hai maa ji abhi laayi bus gudiya ro rahi thi to use doodh pila kar aayi hu

Rsaas- tu or teri manhoos beti ko to bus free ka khane ko chahiye

R- lijiye maa ji aapka nasta

Rsaas- aaatthhhuuuuu ye nasta hai ,( baal pakad kar ghasit ne lagi)

kailash singh- samdhan ji ye kya kar rahi hai aap meri phool si bachi ke sath chodiye

Rsaas- ohhh phool si bachhi hai to ise apne sath hi leja na waise bhi hume es manhoss ki jarurat nahi hai

ka- haa le jaunga abhi zinda hu me ( chal beti apne ghar chal )

r- per baapu mein kaise jaa sakti hu

rsaas- tu kya ab hume bhi maar ke jayegi kalmuhi

ka- bus ab ek shabd nahi warna bhul jaunga ki aap rashmi ki saas hai or tu chal meri gudiya apne ghar abhi tera baap itna to kaamata hi hai ki tujhe or teri beti ko khila sake

uske baad rashmi bhi kucj nahi boli or apna samaan or apni gudiya ko lekar apne baapu ke sath chal di apne ghar
ghar pahuchte - 2 unhe raat ho gayi thi to kailash singh padoos ki maalti kaaki ke paas gya or use sab bataya( malti kaaki ne hi rashmi ko paala tha maa ke baad)
kailash ki baat sunkar maalti ne jaldi se khaana banaya or kailash ke sath uske ghar agyi

R- ram ram kaaki kaisi ho tum

malti- me thik hu bitiya la gudiya mujhe de or tu apne baapu ko khaana de or khud bhi khaa le

aise hi malti kaaki se baat karte hue rashmi ne or uske baapu ne khana khaaya or phir sone chale gaye

rashmi ke ghar me ek kamra tha jis me ek hi khatiya thi to rashmi ne apna bistar niche hi lga liya or apni beti ko khud se chipkaye so gayi

subah kailash singh ki aankh pehle khuli or jaise hi niche nazar gayi to kuch pal dekhne ke baad vo bahar chala gya darsal raat ko gudiya ko dudh pilaane ke baad rashmi apni moti chuchi ko bina dhake hi so gayi jise dekh kar kailash singh ko ek jhatka lga or lagta bhi kyu na kitne barso baad itni haseen chuchiyo ke darsan kiye the vo bhi khud ki beti ki per rishte ko yaad karke vo chup chaap bahar nikal gya lekin barso se bujhi apne baapu ki aag ko rashmi ki khuli chuchiyo ne ek dabi si chingari to dikha di thi
bahar nikal kar kailash singh apne ghar per bane chote se bathroom me nahane laga bahar se aati awaazo se rashmi ki aankh bhi khul gayi or apni halat ko dekh kar soch ne lagi ki baapu ne dekha hoga to kya soch rahe honge aage se dhyaan rakhna hoga mujhe yahi sab sochte hue vo bitiya ko khatiya per sula ke angan me bane nal per chal di jaha uska baapu naha raha tha waha pahuch kar jaise hi muh dhone ke al chalaya to nal per jami kayi pe fisal gyi or sidha apne baapu ki goad me giri wahi rashmi ko sambhal ne ke chakkar me jaise hi apne hath badahye to rashmi ke sakht or mote chuche uske haath me aagye jinka ehsaas hote hi kailash ka barso se soya hua lund angadai lene lga or us per ghee ka kaam rashmi ke hath ne kiya jo ki uthne ke chakkar me apne baapu ka lund pakad bethi

R- aaaahhhhR- aaaahhhh baabu maaf karna mein kaayi me fisal gayi ( baapu ki goad se uthate hue boli) thi

per kailash ki nazar to uske gehre gale ke blouse me se jhakti hui gori gori chuchi per tiki hui thi jis ka asar ye hua ki rashmi ke hath me dabe uske baapu ke lund ne thumka maara apne hath per lund ka ehsaas hote hi 2 mahine se shant rashmi ki chut me citiya rengne lagi thi wahi ab tak kailash ka hath un moti moti chuchiyo ko apni mutthi me bharne lga tha ye sab itni jaldi hua ki dono kuch samjh hi nahi paye per aag to lag chuki thi bus ab jal ne ke baari thi abhi kuch or hota ki bahar se malti ki awaaz aane lagi jo kisi se baat karte hue unke ghar hi aa rahi thi dono ne jaise hi malti ki awaaz suni to hadbada kar khade hue kailash kapde pehan ne lga to wahi rashmi apni saree ko pakde tezi se ghar me ghus gayi tez tez saansein lene lagi

R-( man me) uuuuufffff ye kya ho gya aaj aaaaahhh baabu ko vo kitna mota or garam tha or baabu ke bus chune se hi meri ye chut itni geeli kyu ho gayi aaaahhhhh kitna acha lag raha tha or shayad baapu bhi pyaase hai tabhi to kaise meri chuchiya masal rahe the kitna mja aaya chhiiiiiiii ye mein kya sochne lagi vo mere baapu hai aahhhhhhhh
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wahi kapde pehan kar kailash bina chai piye hi kheto per chala gya or apni beti ke baare me soch ne laga

ka- kitni moti or shakt chuchi hai rashmi ki pure hath me bhi nahi aa rahi thi or uske hath se hi itna mja aaya to to uski chut me daal kar chod ne me kitna mja aayega uuffffff kya mast jawani chadhi hai usne to abhi dhang se chudai ka mja bhi nahi liya or apne baap ki tarah pyaasi ho gayi per ab or nahi
( per kailash vo teri beti hai ye galat hoga)
ka- kuch galat nahi agar jism ki aag me jalti rahi to khush bhi nahi reh payegi pehle hi itne dukh jhele hai ab or nahi agar vo sath degi to mein bhi piche nahi hatunga


yahi sab sochte hue shaam ho gayi or ghar aate 2 raat jaha rashmi apne baapu ka intzaar kar rahi thi kyuki vo subah se hi bhukha tha aaj or es waqt rashmi ko sirf yahi fikar thi
tabhi kailash aaya or sidha nal per jaa kar hath muh dhoke khaane ke liye baith gya

R- aap doupher me kyu nahi aaye baapu or subah bhi aise hi chale gaye

( subah ka zikar aate hi kailash singh ka lund angdai lene lga)

ka- kuch nahi vo kaam jayda tha na esliye nahi aaya bitiya so gayi

R- haaa baapu vo soo gayi hai

eske baad dono kuch nahi bole or chup chaap khaana khane ke apne 2 bistar per lait gaye lailtein ki roshni halki roshni us andhere me kaafi thi ye dekhne ke liye ki dono hi karwat badal rahe the per so koi nahi tha jaha rashmi ka hath apni chut ke upar tha wahi kailash subah ka darsya yaad karke apne lund ko masal raha tha ki achanak lailtain bujh gayi shayad tail khatam hone ki wajah se or kamre me ghor andhera ho gya ab bus dono ki saansein chalne ki awaaz gunz rahi thi hawas kailash ko majbur kar rahi thi ki vo chad jaye rashmi per lekin himmat nahi ho rahi thi kuch der yuhi kas makash me ghire rehne ke baad kailash utha or niche rashmi ki bagal me baith gya jiska ehsaas hote hi rashmi ki saanse tham si gayi wahi badi himmat karke kailash apni beti ki chuchi ko hath me thaame laita raha jab rashmi ki taraf se koi harkat nahi hui to ek hath se uski saree uthane laga rashmi ka to ye soch ke hi bura haal ho raha tha ki aage kya hoga saree jangho per aake aatak gayi kyuki baki uski moti gand ke niche dabi hui thi to kailash ne jor lagana thik nahi samjha or apna hath saree ke andar ghusa diya jo ki sidha rashmi ki baalo wali chut se takraya jo ki bahut ro rahi thi jiska ehsaas apne hath per hote hi kailash itna to samjh gya ki rashmi jaag rahi hai or vo bhi yahi chahti hai ye sab soch kar kailash khada hokar rashmi ki taango kee bich aaya or saree ko pakad kar kamar tak utha diya or apni dhoti khol ke apne lund ko apni beti ki chut pee ragad ne lga jis se rashmi pagal hoti jaa raahi thi per uski awaaz nahi nikal rahi thi wahi lund ko chut per ragadte hue
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uske blouse ko khol ne lga or blouse kholte hi kailash ne dudh se bhare us kalash ko apne muh me bhar liya or rashmi ki taango ko hawa me utha kar ek jordar parhaar kiya uski chut per jis se uska musal lund rashmi ki chut ki dewaro ko chirta hua garbhshye tak pahuch gya or es jhatke ko sehte hue rashmi ne bina awaaz kiye apne baapu ko kas ke apne se chipka liya or pagalo ki tarh use chumne or noch ne lagi kailash bhi bina kuch bole chup chaap tezi se lund ko andar bahar karta raha rashmi ki halat kharab ho chuki thi vo to bus sharam se muh dabaye bus leti padi thi apne baapu ke niche or aise hi ye be awaaz chudai karib 20 min chali jiske baad kailash wahi side me ludak gya jabki rashmi thodi der yuhi laiite rehne ke baad rashmi khadi ho bathroom gayi or khud ko saaf karke chup chaap apni beti se chipak kar so gayi
aaj use kayi dino baad sakoon ki neend aayi

subah uski aankh jald hi khul gayi to nasta bna kar vo gate ki kundi lagai or parda lga ke nahane lagi kailash so kar utha to use raat ki saari ghtna yaad agyi to vo muskurta hua khada hua or bahar angan me jaha use pani girne ki awaaz aayi to vo usi taraf jaa ke parde me se dekhne lga jaha rashmi puri nangi hokar naha rahi thi es waqt uski peeth uske baapu ki taraf thi jis se kailash ki ankho ke samne uski gori gaand agayi thi jo ki kailash per qahar dha rahi thi jiske chalte vo dhoti khol kar andar ghush gya or piche se rashmi ko pakad chumne lga rashmi es achanak hamle se ghabra gayi thi per vo kuch samjhpaati us se pehle uske baapu ka lund uski chut me sma chuka tha lund ka ehsaas apni chut me hote hi pehli bar rashmi ki awaaz aayi

R- aaaaahhhhh baapu ye kya kar rahe ho uuuuffffff kisi ne dekh liya to gazab ho jayega agar apko karna hi hai hai to andar chal kar lo ab me apki hi to hu

kailash ko bhi rashmi ki baat sahi lagi or vo aise hi rashmi ko uthaye andar le gya or bistar per lita ke jor jor se chod ne lga
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R- aaaaaahhhhhhhmaaaaaaaaa baapu araam se uuufffffff bahut mja aaraha hai aise hi chodo mujhe kal raat bahut dino baad itni achi neend aayi mujhe ohhhh mujhe hamesa aise hi pyar karna baapu me dobara dukhi nahi ho na chahti oooohhhhhh

Ka- aaa haa meri bachhi ab hum dono sath rahenge or aise hi pyar karunge hum ye gao bhi chodd denge uuuuufffffdd

R- aaaaahhhhhh baapu aise hi ooohhhhhhh me gayi uuuffffffffff

or kuch hi pal me sab shant ho gya or dono baap beti yuhi lete rahe

R- aaah baabu tum bahut ache ho tumne mujhe us narak se nikaal kar jo khushi di hai vo mein kabhi nahi bhulungi

ka- mein bhi bahut khush hu tumhe paa kar ab hum jald hi ye gaon chodd denge

aise hi baato me nasta khatam hua or dono baap beti apne kaam me lag gye

kuch mahino baad kailash ne vo gaon chodd diya or rashmi ke ke sath apna jeewan bitaane lga ek varsh baad rashmi ne ek ladke ko janam diya or apne baapu kam pati ke sath khushi 2 jeene lagi


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कहानी बहुत अच्छी है।

आखिर रश्मि की सास भी सास ही रही मां नहीं बन पाई रश्मि की।
अगर रश्मि की सास ने बेटा खोया था तो रश्मि ने अपना पति।

कैलाश अपनी बेटी को घर लाये उसे मुसीबत में देखकर। जो शायद हर बाप करता है।
बेटी पर पहले से ही कैलाश गर्म था बचा हुआ काम नल पर जमी काई ने कर दिया।

रात में कैलाश का सब्र जवाब दे गया और वो बेटी पर चढ़ गया। बेटी भी गर्म थी उसने भी कैलाश को अपने ऊपर चढ़ने से नही रोका।

और आखिर में कैलाश ने ठोक ही दिया रश्मि को।

बहुत बढ़िया।
 
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Rasmi ki musibat shayad uska picha chodna hi nahi chahti thi bachpan me maa ka hath sir se hat gya or shadi ke 1.5 saal baad uski goad me ek ladki dekar uska pati bhi chood kar chala gya pati ke jaate to maano dukho ka pahaad toot pada uske sir per jaha kuch din pehle tak sab uski tarieef karte the wahi aaj use manhos kalmui keh kar taane maarte the bahut muskil se bechari ke jeevan kat raha tha mayike me bus uske baapu hi the jo ki kheto me majduri karke apna pait bharta tha rashmi ye baat jaanti thi ki kitni muskilo se uske baap ne uski shaadi ki thi esliye vo unhe sab bta kar dukhi nahi karna chahti thi

kailash singh- ( rashmi ka baapu)

age- 42 ( majduri karne ki wajah se jism abhi bhi majboot hai)


lund- 6.5 /2.2


rashmi -

age- 22 ( rang gora )

hight- 5.6

fig- 34/32/36 ( kul mila kar kaam devi ka roop thi)

ab kahani per aate hai

rashmi ke pati ko mare 2 mahine ho gye the or ye 2 mahine saalo ki tarah kat the rashmi ke liye wahi kailash bhi apni beti ka haal chaal lene ke liye uske sasural ke liye nikal chuka tha

R saas- are kutiya mere bete ko to khaa gayi ab kya hume bhukha maar ne ka iraada hai kya suraj nikal gya hai nasta nahi bna abhi tak

R- nasta taiyaar hai maa ji abhi laayi bus gudiya ro rahi thi to use doodh pila kar aayi hu

Rsaas- tu or teri manhoos beti ko to bus free ka khane ko chahiye

R- lijiye maa ji aapka nasta

Rsaas- aaatthhhuuuuu ye nasta hai ,( baal pakad kar ghasit ne lagi)

kailash singh- samdhan ji ye kya kar rahi hai aap meri phool si bachi ke sath chodiye

Rsaas- ohhh phool si bachhi hai to ise apne sath hi leja na waise bhi hume es manhoss ki jarurat nahi hai

ka- haa le jaunga abhi zinda hu me ( chal beti apne ghar chal )

r- per baapu mein kaise jaa sakti hu

rsaas- tu kya ab hume bhi maar ke jayegi kalmuhi

ka- bus ab ek shabd nahi warna bhul jaunga ki aap rashmi ki saas hai or tu chal meri gudiya apne ghar abhi tera baap itna to kaamata hi hai ki tujhe or teri beti ko khila sake

uske baad rashmi bhi kucj nahi boli or apna samaan or apni gudiya ko lekar apne baapu ke sath chal di apne ghar
ghar pahuchte - 2 unhe raat ho gayi thi to kailash singh padoos ki maalti kaaki ke paas gya or use sab bataya( malti kaaki ne hi rashmi ko paala tha maa ke baad)
kailash ki baat sunkar maalti ne jaldi se khaana banaya or kailash ke sath uske ghar agyi

R- ram ram kaaki kaisi ho tum

malti- me thik hu bitiya la gudiya mujhe de or tu apne baapu ko khaana de or khud bhi khaa le

aise hi malti kaaki se baat karte hue rashmi ne or uske baapu ne khana khaaya or phir sone chale gaye

rashmi ke ghar me ek kamra tha jis me ek hi khatiya thi to rashmi ne apna bistar niche hi lga liya or apni beti ko khud se chipkaye so gayi

subah kailash singh ki aankh pehle khuli or jaise hi niche nazar gayi to kuch pal dekhne ke baad vo bahar chala gya darsal raat ko gudiya ko dudh pilaane ke baad rashmi apni moti chuchi ko bina dhake hi so gayi jise dekh kar kailash singh ko ek jhatka lga or lagta bhi kyu na kitne barso baad itni haseen chuchiyo ke darsan kiye the vo bhi khud ki beti ki per rishte ko yaad karke vo chup chaap bahar nikal gya lekin barso se bujhi apne baapu ki aag ko rashmi ki khuli chuchiyo ne ek dabi si chingari to dikha di thi
bahar nikal kar kailash singh apne ghar per bane chote se bathroom me nahane laga bahar se aati awaazo se rashmi ki aankh bhi khul gayi or apni halat ko dekh kar soch ne lagi ki baapu ne dekha hoga to kya soch rahe honge aage se dhyaan rakhna hoga mujhe yahi sab sochte hue vo bitiya ko khatiya per sula ke angan me bane nal per chal di jaha uska baapu naha raha tha waha pahuch kar jaise hi muh dhone ke al chalaya to nal per jami kayi pe fisal gyi or sidha apne baapu ki goad me giri wahi rashmi ko sambhal ne ke chakkar me jaise hi apne hath badahye to rashmi ke sakht or mote chuche uske haath me aagye jinka ehsaas hote hi kailash ka barso se soya hua lund angadai lene lga or us per ghee ka kaam rashmi ke hath ne kiya jo ki uthne ke chakkar me apne baapu ka lund pakad bethi

R- aaaahhhhR- aaaahhhh baabu maaf karna mein kaayi me fisal gayi ( baapu ki goad se uthate hue boli) thi

per kailash ki nazar to uske gehre gale ke blouse me se jhakti hui gori gori chuchi per tiki hui thi jis ka asar ye hua ki rashmi ke hath me dabe uske baapu ke lund ne thumka maara apne hath per lund ka ehsaas hote hi 2 mahine se shant rashmi ki chut me citiya rengne lagi thi wahi ab tak kailash ka hath un moti moti chuchiyo ko apni mutthi me bharne lga tha ye sab itni jaldi hua ki dono kuch samjh hi nahi paye per aag to lag chuki thi bus ab jal ne ke baari thi abhi kuch or hota ki bahar se malti ki awaaz aane lagi jo kisi se baat karte hue unke ghar hi aa rahi thi dono ne jaise hi malti ki awaaz suni to hadbada kar khade hue kailash kapde pehan ne lga to wahi rashmi apni saree ko pakde tezi se ghar me ghus gayi tez tez saansein lene lagi

R-( man me) uuuuufffff ye kya ho gya aaj aaaaahhh baabu ko vo kitna mota or garam tha or baabu ke bus chune se hi meri ye chut itni geeli kyu ho gayi aaaahhhhh kitna acha lag raha tha or shayad baapu bhi pyaase hai tabhi to kaise meri chuchiya masal rahe the kitna mja aaya chhiiiiiiii ye mein kya sochne lagi vo mere baapu hai aahhhhhhhh
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wahi kapde pehan kar kailash bina chai piye hi kheto per chala gya or apni beti ke baare me soch ne laga

ka- kitni moti or shakt chuchi hai rashmi ki pure hath me bhi nahi aa rahi thi or uske hath se hi itna mja aaya to to uski chut me daal kar chod ne me kitna mja aayega uuffffff kya mast jawani chadhi hai usne to abhi dhang se chudai ka mja bhi nahi liya or apne baap ki tarah pyaasi ho gayi per ab or nahi
( per kailash vo teri beti hai ye galat hoga)
ka- kuch galat nahi agar jism ki aag me jalti rahi to khush bhi nahi reh payegi pehle hi itne dukh jhele hai ab or nahi agar vo sath degi to mein bhi piche nahi hatunga


yahi sab sochte hue shaam ho gayi or ghar aate 2 raat jaha rashmi apne baapu ka intzaar kar rahi thi kyuki vo subah se hi bhukha tha aaj or es waqt rashmi ko sirf yahi fikar thi
tabhi kailash aaya or sidha nal per jaa kar hath muh dhoke khaane ke liye baith gya

R- aap doupher me kyu nahi aaye baapu or subah bhi aise hi chale gaye

( subah ka zikar aate hi kailash singh ka lund angdai lene lga)

ka- kuch nahi vo kaam jayda tha na esliye nahi aaya bitiya so gayi

R- haaa baapu vo soo gayi hai

eske baad dono kuch nahi bole or chup chaap khaana khane ke apne 2 bistar per lait gaye lailtein ki roshni halki roshni us andhere me kaafi thi ye dekhne ke liye ki dono hi karwat badal rahe the per so koi nahi tha jaha rashmi ka hath apni chut ke upar tha wahi kailash subah ka darsya yaad karke apne lund ko masal raha tha ki achanak lailtain bujh gayi shayad tail khatam hone ki wajah se or kamre me ghor andhera ho gya ab bus dono ki saansein chalne ki awaaz gunz rahi thi hawas kailash ko majbur kar rahi thi ki vo chad jaye rashmi per lekin himmat nahi ho rahi thi kuch der yuhi kas makash me ghire rehne ke baad kailash utha or niche rashmi ki bagal me baith gya jiska ehsaas hote hi rashmi ki saanse tham si gayi wahi badi himmat karke kailash apni beti ki chuchi ko hath me thaame laita raha jab rashmi ki taraf se koi harkat nahi hui to ek hath se uski saree uthane laga rashmi ka to ye soch ke hi bura haal ho raha tha ki aage kya hoga saree jangho per aake aatak gayi kyuki baki uski moti gand ke niche dabi hui thi to kailash ne jor lagana thik nahi samjha or apna hath saree ke andar ghusa diya jo ki sidha rashmi ki baalo wali chut se takraya jo ki bahut ro rahi thi jiska ehsaas apne hath per hote hi kailash itna to samjh gya ki rashmi jaag rahi hai or vo bhi yahi chahti hai ye sab soch kar kailash khada hokar rashmi ki taango kee bich aaya or saree ko pakad kar kamar tak utha diya or apni dhoti khol ke apne lund ko apni beti ki chut pee ragad ne lga jis se rashmi pagal hoti jaa raahi thi per uski awaaz nahi nikal rahi thi wahi lund ko chut per ragadte hue
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uske blouse ko khol ne lga or blouse kholte hi kailash ne dudh se bhare us kalash ko apne muh me bhar liya or rashmi ki taango ko hawa me utha kar ek jordar parhaar kiya uski chut per jis se uska musal lund rashmi ki chut ki dewaro ko chirta hua garbhshye tak pahuch gya or es jhatke ko sehte hue rashmi ne bina awaaz kiye apne baapu ko kas ke apne se chipka liya or pagalo ki tarh use chumne or noch ne lagi kailash bhi bina kuch bole chup chaap tezi se lund ko andar bahar karta raha rashmi ki halat kharab ho chuki thi vo to bus sharam se muh dabaye bus leti padi thi apne baapu ke niche or aise hi ye be awaaz chudai karib 20 min chali jiske baad kailash wahi side me ludak gya jabki rashmi thodi der yuhi laiite rehne ke baad rashmi khadi ho bathroom gayi or khud ko saaf karke chup chaap apni beti se chipak kar so gayi
aaj use kayi dino baad sakoon ki neend aayi

subah uski aankh jald hi khul gayi to nasta bna kar vo gate ki kundi lagai or parda lga ke nahane lagi kailash so kar utha to use raat ki saari ghtna yaad agyi to vo muskurta hua khada hua or bahar angan me jaha use pani girne ki awaaz aayi to vo usi taraf jaa ke parde me se dekhne lga jaha rashmi puri nangi hokar naha rahi thi es waqt uski peeth uske baapu ki taraf thi jis se kailash ki ankho ke samne uski gori gaand agayi thi jo ki kailash per qahar dha rahi thi jiske chalte vo dhoti khol kar andar ghush gya or piche se rashmi ko pakad chumne lga rashmi es achanak hamle se ghabra gayi thi per vo kuch samjhpaati us se pehle uske baapu ka lund uski chut me sma chuka tha lund ka ehsaas apni chut me hote hi pehli bar rashmi ki awaaz aayi

R- aaaaahhhhh baapu ye kya kar rahe ho uuuuffffff kisi ne dekh liya to gazab ho jayega agar apko karna hi hai hai to andar chal kar lo ab me apki hi to hu

kailash ko bhi rashmi ki baat sahi lagi or vo aise hi rashmi ko uthaye andar le gya or bistar per lita ke jor jor se chod ne lga
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R- aaaaaahhhhhhhmaaaaaaaaa baapu araam se uuufffffff bahut mja aaraha hai aise hi chodo mujhe kal raat bahut dino baad itni achi neend aayi mujhe ohhhh mujhe hamesa aise hi pyar karna baapu me dobara dukhi nahi ho na chahti oooohhhhhh

Ka- aaa haa meri bachhi ab hum dono sath rahenge or aise hi pyar karunge hum ye gao bhi chodd denge uuuuufffffdd

R- aaaaahhhhhh baapu aise hi ooohhhhhhh me gayi uuuffffffffff

or kuch hi pal me sab shant ho gya or dono baap beti yuhi lete rahe

R- aaah baabu tum bahut ache ho tumne mujhe us narak se nikaal kar jo khushi di hai vo mein kabhi nahi bhulungi

ka- mein bhi bahut khush hu tumhe paa kar ab hum jald hi ye gaon chodd denge

aise hi baato me nasta khatam hua or dono baap beti apne kaam me lag gye

kuch mahino baad kailash ne vo gaon chodd diya or rashmi ke ke sath apna jeewan bitaane lga ek varsh baad rashmi ne ek ladke ko janam diya or apne baapu kam pati ke sath khushi 2 jeene lagi


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achchi kahani hai ...rashmi ki shadi ho gayi aur 1 ladki ko janm hone ke baad uska pati marr gaya ..
rashmi ki saas usko nafrat karne lagi aur bewajah torcher bhi karti thi ..
jab rashmi ke baap ne ye dekha to wo rashmi ko apne saath lekar aa gaya ..
aur 2 pyaase jism ek ho gaye aur phir dusri jagah jakar apni life pati patni ki tarah bitane lage ....

aur ab dono khush hai ek dusre ka sahara bankar 😍.

rashmi ki saas ka bartaw bura tha ..
 
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Tital.......Porn Star Se Facebook per Dosti

Writer....... StoryLoverAbdul


(Ye Ak Real Story he umeed He ap sab ko passand ai to chaliya start karte he)

Main(Abdul) 21 Saal ka larka hun Mujhe Shuro se larkio se bat karne ka bhot shok tha kha bhi mile jaise bhi mil jis type ki bhi mile bat kar leta tha wo mujhe acha lagta tha un se bate karna

Phir Bate Karke Un ke sath sex ke uper bate karta to Kuch karti to kuch block kar dati thi jis waja se main bhot udass ho jata tha Maine internet per her jga larkiya dundta tha kha mile bus bate karna shuro kar deta tha sex videos bhi bhot passand the

phir ak din main apne dost ke pass gya jo mera khas dost tha us ka name rizwan tha main her baar us ke pass jaya karta tha to ak din us ke pass gya to wo facebook per kisi se bat karna rha tha ko Samantha name ki larki thi Russia ki to maine us se pucha

main..... bhai kis se bat kar rahe ho

rizwan..... yar koi angrez he bat kar rahi he to kar raha hun

main.... yar mari bhi sitting karwa de na yar

Rizwan.... is ma konsi bari bat he bat karlo ye lo id te bat karti he her kisi se

maine rizwan se id li aur reaquest bejta aur to us ne accept kar liya ma khish ho gya bhot aur msg kiya to us ne reply bhi kiya ma air zyda khush ho gya phir ase hy bate karte karte maine us ki id per dekha to pornHub likha howa he maine net per serch kiya to ye ak sex video ki site thi wo maine is larki ka name serch kiya to pata chala ye porn star he

phir maine us larki se pucha is bare ma to wo gosa ho gay mujhe per aur bat karna band kar diya usi ki id ma diana name ki larki thi use msg kiya to usne bhi reply kiya aur bat karne laga per wo Samantha se bilkul alag thi

aur usko sex ke bare ma bat karna passand tha is liya mujhe se sex chat karne lagi kuch dino ma hum dono ne ak dosre ke photo beja jaise us ne apne boobs choot gand ki pic baji to maine lund ki phir video call per sex chat karte the

ak mahine bad use video shooting per jana tha to us ne bat karna band kar di maine pbir Samantha ko msg kiya per wos ne bat karne se man kar diya tabi Kisi saleena name ki request ai bad ma pata chala ya Samantha ki bhen he to is ke sath bate chalti rahi per ye bhi chali gay

phir maine Samantha ko mnaya phir us ne bat karna start ki hista hista wo bhi sex chat karne lagi video chat bhi per tha ye sab ulta per gya maira sath

wo Samantha ne meri video call se mere nude photo aur video shoot kar liya tha us ke bad wo mujhe blackmail karne lagi roz mere liya muth maro jab bhi ma chao wahi karo

is bat se mujhe samjh aya ma kitna galat kar rha hun ma un sab ki saza mil rahi he maine jawab dena band kar diya bhot din howe bat nhi howi phir achnak se us ka msg aya to usne maira mobile ka

Samantha..... ager tumne mere liya muth na mari to ye jitne bhi tere mobile ma number save he sab per tumse video bej dungi

main..... nhi plzz asa na karna maine kiya kiya he ma wahi karta tha jo tum bolti thi

Samantha..... tumne mujhe bhot tang kiya he is liya ab jaldi jo bola wo karo werna acha nhi hoga

main...... plzzz asa na karo plzzz

Samantha...... karte ho ya ma bejo

main.... nhi nhi karta hun plzzz kisi ko video bejna mat

main rone jaise ho gya main der gya ab kiya hoga main phir us ke liya wo sab karta jo Samantha bolti ak nahi e tak ye chalta rha phir is ke msg ane band ho gay

3 mahine ho gaye kisi ka bhi msg nhi aya mai e jab check kiya to Samantha ne facebook id band kar di thi

Main..... shuker he band kar di werna meri halat hy buri kar dati

abi kuch hy din howe the to diana phir se a gay main nhi karna chata tha per usne phir ye sab kar waya qk us ne bhi meri id hack kar liya thi ma buri tarah se gas chuka tha ma kiya karo kiya nhi
.main roz unke liya video bna ta jis ma muth marta tha main nhi karna chata tha per zaberdasti karwai thi

tabi mujhe khayal aya ke ye hy meri saza he maine pata nhi kitni larkio ke sath sex per bat ki aj un sab ki saza mil rahi he is liya koi such bolta tha hamsha izzat ke sath raho her kisi ko izzat do kisi ke sath galat nhi karo

is sab se ak sabak mila mujhe ke larki ki izzat karo qk mare ghar ma bhi meri maa bhen he aj bhi wo diana mere sath ye sab karti he per hafte ma ak bar ma gya kar bhi kuch nhi kar pah tha hun

Ye jo bhi bola ye such he Main is story se yahi msg dena chata hun ke larkio ki izzat karo qk shadi ke bad hamri biwi bhi ak larki hogi aur hamri bati bhi

Mujhe nhi lagta ye story itni achi lage gi ap sab ko per bus mera dil kiya to maine likh liya koi bura comment na karna sorry



Story Writer..... StoryLoverAbdul ..
kahani achchi thi ..abdul ko sahi sabak mila ..
chat karna alag baat hai par jinko jaanta nahi unke saath video call kiya aur apne photos bhi bheje ye galat ho gaya ..
kahani me waise sahi message hai ki online site par apni information share nahi karni chahiye ..
abdul to har ladki se sex chat karta tha aur ab usko aurto ke ijjat ki ahamiyat pata chal gayi ..

dono ladkiya bhi galat thi abdul ko block karne ki jagah uske video ko record karke blackmail kiya ..
bhale paise nahi maange par muth to marwaya wo bhi abdul ke marji ke bina ..
2 sabak aurto ki respect karo aur online site par jinko jaante nahi unke saath apni information share mat karo ..
 
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RASHMI KA DARD

I read it twice, don't know why. In my opinion its not a story. It's just a intimate scene between two characters. Other thing is incest is very popular genre these days writer chose it to cash it but there is one important thing which is must consider to write this kind of scene which is seduction, and that main ingredient is missing in recipe
Story indicate rashmi who is widow and full of sorrows and that's it. Coz i think its just a described sex scene so what was logic to add that emotional drama, sex happened suddenly 🤣🤣 oh yaar,
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Rashmi ka dard

Sasural me pati ki mrityu ke bad aksar esaa dekha jata hai bhartiya samaz me bahu ko kosha jata hai ya prtadit kiya jata hai. Rashmi bhi unme se ek hai. Bs itna sa drd tha Rashmi ka aur wo mayke akar khush ho jati hai apne dad ke sath.
Bs itni si thi ye kahani.
 

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Chunnu Mama Ki Love Story



Uth jaa kumbhkaran 10 baj gaye par abhi bhi uthne ka naam hi nahi le raha hai…mere kano mein meri maa ki awaaz aate hi saala pura sapna hi tut gaya. pata nahi kyu subah subah maa ki awaaz besuri si lagti hai jab wo chilla kar uthati hai.aur yeh sirf mere sath nahi aap sab ke sath bhi hota hoga.



Maa to utha kar sorry chilla kar chali gayi thi aur mera sapna bhi tut gaya tha to an-mane mann se utha aur fresh hone ke liye washroom ki taraf chal pada. Aap soch rahe honge ki main hu kaun. To bata du ki mera naam raaj hai. DDLJ wala raaj nahi hu aur waise bhi pyaar vyaar wala chutiyapa meri samaj se pare hai. Aisa nahi hai ki mujhe pyaar se nafrat hai par yeh jo pyaar ke naam pe filmon mein aur aaj kal raayta failaya hua hai usase se bahut nafrat hai. Haal hi mein meri college ki exam khatam huyi hai aur abhi vacation chal raha hai.



Khair, main fresh ho kar brush karte huye ghar ki bahar aaya aur jhule par baith gaya. brush karte huye meri nazar pados mein rahte chunnu mama ke upar padi. Wo abhi yoga kar rahe the. saala subah 10 baje kaun yoga karta hai maine man hi man socha aur unko dekhne laga. Chunnu mama ki umar kuchh 42 saal ke aas pass ki rahi hogi. Yoga karte huye unka badha hua pet unko dikkat paida kar raha tha par phir bhi apna kaam vah kiye jaa rahe the.



Waise chunnu mama pure mahallo ke bachho aur yuva ke mama the aur saari mahila o ke bhai. Hamare ghar ke paas hi wah rahte the to mera kuchh achha bondig tha unke sath aur maa bhi unko apna saga bhai hi manti thi. unke ghar mein vah akele hi rahte the, unhone shadi nahi ki thi. unke maa baap gaon mein unke bhai ke sath hi rehte the. yaha pe unka khud ka kiraane ka dukaan tha.



Meri chunnu mama ke sath achhi banti thi matlab bahut hi achhi kyuki ek to unko bhi babu shone baby wale pyaar se nafrat thi aur ekdum zinda dil insaan the to unke sath koi bhi baat share bhi kar sakte the. aur paise ki zarurat rahi to vo bhi mil jaate the. waise vo koi paise udane walo mein se nahi the. jaha tak muft ka kuchh mil jaaye to apni jeb mein hath nahi daalte the. par mera unke sath achha khasa yaarana tha to vo help kar dete the.



agar in short kahu to kanjus type aadmi the chunnu mama. Hamare ya kisi dusre mohalle mein bhandara ho ya kisi ki shaadi ho chunnu mama ko date and time ke sath pura schedule pata rehta tha. Vo kya hai na bahar khane ka zugaad ho jaata hai to ghar pe khana nahi banana padega, sabji aur kiraana ka kharcha bhi nahi hoga aur cylinder ki bhi bachat hogi aur akele the to bartan bhi nahi dhone padenge yeh sab calculation ke sath unka khane ka shauk bhi unko bahar ke khane se rok nahi sakta tha.



Main apne vicharo main khoya hua tha tabhi chunnu mama ki nazar mujh par padi aur bole, ‘’uth gaya kumbh karan…dekh meri tarah yoga karna chalu karde sehat bani rahegi warna bhains jaisa ho jaayega”



Maine unko upar se neeche tak dekha aur kaha, ‘waise sehat banane ki zarurat aapko hai mama’.



“arre isko kam karna to daahine hath ka khel hai,” chunnu mama ne apne badhe huye pet ki taraf ishara karte huye kaha.



Maine apna sar naa main hilaya aur unke sath subah subah bahas nahi karna hai aisa soch kar kaha,”to aaj Sunday off dukaan main mama’.



‘‘beta,dukaan ka off hai par ghar ka to kaam karna hi hai. Jhadu, pochha, aur bartan wait kar rahe hai” chunnu mama ne muh sikodate huye kaha.



“kam wali rakhlo aur shadi kyu nahi kar lete aap, dikhne main bhi jawan hi lag rahe ho bas pet bahar aa gaya hai.” maine unki chutki lete huye kaha.



“Tumko bhi pata hai shadi kyun nahi kar raha aur mujhko hi puchh raha hai, chalo baad min milte hai gali ke naake par abhi thoda kaam kar leta hu” boolkar mama pane yoga ka aasan utha kar andar ki ore jaane lage.



Chunnu mama ko jallate huye dekh kar meri hasi chhut gayi waise mama apne jawaani ke dino mein kaafi ashiq mizaz the. unhone hi mujhe bataya tha aur kisi ko ye baat nahi pata thi ki unko jawani mein total teen baar saccha wala pyaar hua tha, par teeno ladkiyon ne pyaar to unse kiya par shaadi kisi aur se kar li. Tab se unka pyaar se vishwas uth gaya tha.



Jab main unko unke ishq mizaz ke bare mein puchata tha to wo bolte ki beta titanic jab ban rahi thi tab james Cameron ko main mil gaya hota to ‘my heart will go on’ gaane mein Leonardo di caprio ki jagah main chunnilal mishra kate winslet ke sath romance karta aur leo ka patta kat chuka hota.



Chunnu mama ki saari khufiya baate mujhe aur mere langot yaar Vicky dono ko hi pata thi aur mama ko hum dono par bharosa bhi tha ki hum kisiko nahi batayenge.



Jab main naha dho kar bahar nikla to ghar ke aangan mein jhule par Vicky jhul raha tha aur koi gaana gaa raha tha. Waise vo uske ghar kam mere ghar par jyaada rehta tha.



“kya subah subbah aa gaya, kaam dhandha nahi hai kuchh” maine jhule par uske pass baith kar puchha.



“tujhe 11.00 baje subah lag rahi hai. Shukar kar tera wait kiya” Vicky ne muh bigadkar kaha.



“to bc tu kya karodo ka business sambhal raha hai to wait nahi kar sakta” maine bhi jawab diya.



“chal chhod na, tujhe kuchh batana hai” Vicky ne kaha.



“kya?” maine puchha



‘wo neha hai na yaar aaj subah subah usko dekh liya, kya lag rahi thi yaar. Soch raha hu aaj hi propose kar du” vikcy ne apne seene ko malte huye kaha.



“chutiye main pyaar se dur bhaagta hu taaki koi mera kaat na lein, aur tu ladkiyo ko dekh kar jaan bujh kar apna katwane part tula hua hai” maine usko ghurte huye kaha.



Tabhi chunnu mama apne ghar se bahar nikle aur unko dekh kar Vicky se main bola “chunni mama se seekh kuchh’’



Aur hum dono khade ho kar unke sath gali ke naake par jaane lage.



‘kya seekhne ki baat kar rahe ho humse” chunni mama ne mujhe dekh kar puchha.



“mama yeh balak dekho na pyaar ke chakkar main pada hua hai, neha ko propose karne ki soch raha hai to maine kaha chunni mama se seekho kuchh” maine garm joshi se kaha.



Apni tareef sunkar chunni mama ke chehre par muskaan aa gayi aur Vicky ko pelne lage aur batane lage ki pyaar karne se kya nukshan hota hai usmein unhone apni teen girl friend ke peeche gawaye huye paiso ka bhi hisaab ginaa liya.



Chunni mama ka bhasan sunn kar Vicky ko aatm gyaan hua aur emotional hokar wo unke pairo par padne laga. Vo to mama ne badappan dikhaya aur bhare bazaar mein aisa karne se rok liya.



“suno tum dono ko pata hai naa aaj raat sharmaji ki beti ki shadi hai aur khaana khane jaana hai.” Hum teeno jab hamare adde yaani ki naake par khade huye to chunni mama ne achanak se kaha.



“kahe nahi pata hoga unki beti ke pichhe 2 saal se fielding kar rahe the. par chhod diya humne…apne aapko heroin samajhti thi” Vicky ne kaha.



“tune chhoda nahi hai…usne bhaav nahi diya tujhe bc” maine kaha



“ek hi baat huyi na” Vicky bola



“abbe chhodo tumhara randi rona ab , raat ko aa rahe ho na shaadi mein dono” chunni mama gusse mein bole.



Maine aur Vicky ne dono ne haa mein sar hilaaya aur hum phir se idhar udhar ki baat karne mein vyast ho gaye.



Raat ko chunnu mama sham ke pehle se hi mere ghar aa gaye the aur lagbhag 10 baar bata chuke the ki aaj raat menu kya ho sakta hai. Maine Vicky ko call karke jaldi aane ko bola taki mama mera dimaag chatna chhode aur hum khane ke liye I mean shadi mein jaaye.



Jab hum shadi mein pahuche to chunnu mama ki nazar food counter par hi thi ki kab khana chalu ho aur wo waha par pahuche. Jaise hi khana chalu hua to na aav dekha na taav lagbhag daudate huye vah pahuch gaye khana khane aur mujhe aur Vicky ko sath mein chalne ke liye bhi nahi kaha.



Thodi hi der mein main aur Vicky bhi khana khane chale gaye. Maine dekha gents aur ladies sab sath mein hi the bas counter alag alag the.



main aur Vicky dono humara dish lene jaa hi rahe the tab meri nazar chunnu mama ke upar padi jo waha par apna muh khole huye khade the aur unke muh se laar hothon tak aa gayi thi.mujhe laga ki shayad gulab jamun ko dekh kar chunnu mama usmein kho gaye hoge par jab meri nazar samne ki taraf padi to main chaunk gaya. maine do baar meri ankho ko saaf kiya par koi fark nahi pada.kyuki samne ka drishya hi kuchh aisa tha jo ki kisi ko bhi vishwas na aaye.



Darasal chunnu mama kisi mahila jo ki umra mein kuch 37-38 saal ki rahi hogi unko ek tak dekhe jaa rahe hai. Maine Vicky ko ishara karke dikhaya to vo bhi apni aankhein malne laga. Main samay ki nazakat ko samjhte huye seedha chunnu mama ke pass gaya aur unka hath pakad kar kone mein le jaane laga.



“kya kar rahe ho nalayak, chain se khane bhi nahi de rahe ho” Achanak se mera aise unko le jaane se wo thode chaunk gaye aur baad mein gussa karte huye bole.



“mama yeh aap jo kar rahe the laga raha tha pura ka pura x-ray nikal rahe ho uss mahila ka. Kisine dekh liya hota to yaha se seedha hospital ya police station jaate aur aapka character dheela hone mein bhi der nahi lagti.” Maine mama ko jawab diya.



“subah to bade chacha chudhary ban rahe the ladkiyo ke pichhe padne ka profit & loss acc. Bata rahe the par yaha to aapka pura ka pura balance sheet hil gaya uska kya” Vicky ne bhi mama ko jhadne ka mauka nahi chhoda.



“abe kamino, main sirf dekh hi raha tha tumhari nazar theek nahi hai” mama jhallate huye bole.



“chunnu mama dekh nahi rahe the pura ka pura ghus chuke the uss mahila ke darshan karne mein”, Vicky bola.



“pehle khana kha lete hai baad mein bheed ho jaayegi chalo”, maine kaha.



“mujhe bhukh nahi hai ab, tum jaao main ghar jaa raha hu” hum kuchh kehte uske pehle mama ghar chal diye.



Aaj pehli baar aisa hua tha ki mama ne khana nahi khaya tha. Baat sach mein bahut hi serious lag rahi thi



Dusre din subah main aur Vicky dono chunnu mama ki dukaan par chale gaye.



Mama ka rang udd gaya tha kuchh vichar mein lag rahe the.



“kaise ho mama, aur kal khana kyu nahi khaya”, maine jaate hi puchha.



Chunnu mama ka muh utara hua tha aur lag raha tha ki raat ko theek se so bhi nahi pay hai.



“arre main ek baat batana chahta hu tum logon ko. Ekdum secret hai. Kisi ko batana mat” chunnu mama dheere se bole.



“kya?”,main aur Vicky dono sath mein hi bole.



“kal jis mahila ko hum dekh rahe the na vo humen pasand aa gayi hai” chunnu mama nayi naveli dulhan ki tarah bole.

“pagal ho gaye ho kya. Shadi shuda hogi.. umara nahi dekhi kam se kam 37-38 ki to hogi hi” maine kaha.



“nahi hogi shadi shuda. Sindoor nahi tha” mama sharmate huye bole.



“ho sakta hai bhul gayi ho yaa na kiya ho sindoor”, maine turant hi kaha.



Meri baat sun kar chunnu mama ka chehra safed padne laga.



“waise maine puri kundali nikal li hai aapke khayalo ke mallika ki”, Vicky ne chunnu mama ke samne dekhte huye kaha aura ankh mari.



“kaun hai wo batao jaldi, shadi shuda to nahi”, chunnu mama bhavnao mein bah kar vikcy ka collar pakadte huye bole.



“arre kyu seedha main course ka khana khane ki soch rahe ho, pehle bitingwagerah ho jaaye tab aate hai main course par. shanti rakho bata rahe hai”, Vicky ne kaha aur usne kahani chalu ki.



Vo mahila ka nam menka hai. Aur vo Sharma ji ki saali hai. Kanpur ki rehne wali hai. 5 saal pehle Divorce ho chuke hai. Dusri bar shadi nahi ki hai. Shayad ab shadi karna bhi nahi chahti hai.. Aur ha koi bachha bhi nahi hai. Matlab aapse setting ho gaya to kharcha bachega aapka.



Vicky ka itna hi kehna tha aur chunnu mama ne uske chehre ko pakad ke dono gaalo pe pappi de di. Aur kursi mein baith ke sapne dekhnelage.



“ab to menka hamari ho kar hi rahegi dekhna” mama ne kaha.



Dusre din se hi mama ne naye kapde khareede jo ki apne apmein ek record tha. Hair cutting karwake clean shave kar ke hero ki tarah chamkne lage.

“mama aaj to shakti kapoor se shammi kappor bann gaye ho aap” maine kaha.



“bas ye sab tumhari mami ke liye hai” chunnu mama ne apne baalo mein hath fairte huye kaha.



“kaun mami” Vicky ne sawaliya nazro se puchha.



“chhote jiska pura bio data tumne hamare saamne rakha tha vo ….menka” chunnu mama ne menka bolte waqt shararat bhari awaz mein kaha.



“vo sab to theek hai par aapka naam badalna padega pehle” maine kaha.



Kyu bhai, kya kharabi hai hamare naam mein” chunnu mama bole.



“agar aapka naam zor se bole to lagta hai gaali di aur dheere se bole to lagta hai kisi bachhe ko bula rahe hai. Aise naam se thodi na impress hogi menka” maine kaha.



Mami..menka mami bolo…izzat do thodi badi hai tumse” chunnu mama ne kaha.



“par naam kya rakhenge aapka” maine puchha.



“dekho mujhe koi bhi naam chalega,bas acchha hona chahiye”mama bole



“mama mujhe lagta hai hai ki ‘ch’ se hi aapka naam hona chahiye….jyotish ke hisaab se aapki raashi se naam rakhte hai to faayda ho sakta hai aapko”,Vicky bola.







Mama ko Vicky kayeh idea pasand aa gaya aur maan bhi gaye.



Kai naam par maine aur Vicky ne soch vichar kiya jo naam mama ko achha lagta vo humein nahi pasand aata aur jo mujhe ya Vicky ko pasand aata vo mama nahi rakhna chahte the. aakhir mein mama ko gussa aa gaya aur bole ek kaam karo ‘ch’ se ‘chutiya’ hi rakh do.



“kaisi baat kar rahe ho mama, kaisa lagega yeh naam jab menka ji bulayegi…ae chutiya ji suno…aey chutiya ji yeh leke aana mele chutiya babu ne thana thaya ki nahi aur ham aapko chutiya mama keh ke bulayenge kaisa lagega, sorry mama meri taraf se naa hai,” Vicky ne apna gyaan dete huye kaha.



“Ek thappad lagaunga seedhe apne ghar jaa kar girega….chunnu naam hi sahi hai humara. Full n final,” mama ne apna nirnay suna diya.



Dusre din jab main subah ghar ke aangan main aaya to chunnu mama ashiqui film ka gaana ‘main duniya bhula dunga’ gaa rahe the.



“kya mama romantic mood main ho aaj kal…rahul roy bane huye ho.” maine pass jaate huye kaha.



“anu aggarwal ko impress jo karna hai” mama ne ankh marte huye kaha.



“mama kyu tharki ban rahe ho….menka ji ke sath abhi taaka nahi bheeda hai aur aap ye anu aggarwal ko patane ki baat kar rahe ho. Waise hai kaun ye mahila” Vicky ne bahar se aate huye puchha.





“un-padh wo ashiqui film ki heroine hai example de raha tha main” chunnu mama bole.



Vicky ne yeh sunkar rahat ki saans li aur apni khufiya baat batayi ki menkaji aur 15-20 din rehne wali hai yaha aur chunnu mama ke pass unko impress karne keliye sirf 2-3 weeks hi hai.

“aur unka divorce kyun hua uski jaankari bhi hai humare pass”, Vicky apni ankhein chhoti karte huye bola



“kyun?”,chunnu mama ne utsukta se puchha.



“darsal unka pati sharab peeta tha aur menka ji ko bilkul pasand nahi tha”,Vicky ne bolna chalu kiya.



“hum to nahi pee rahe hai”,chunnu mama tapak se beech mein bole.



“vo menka ji ko pyaar nahi karta tha” Vicky ne fir se bolna chalu kiya.



“par hum to karte hai”,chunnu mama iss baar bhi beech mein bole.



Vicky ko aise beech mein se kaat te huye mama ka aisa bolna pasand nahi aaya aur jhallate huye bola “unke pati ka affair bhi tha kisi ke sath aisa sunane mein aaya hai”



“affair to hamara bhi nahi kisi ke sath”, phir se Vicky ki baat ko kaat-te huye mama bole.



“vo pura mard tha”, Vicky ko ab gussa aaya aur bol pada.



“bhai mard to hum bhi nahi hai….kya kaha. main pura ka pura mard hu. Bas vo menka ji ko hi saboot denge. Aur tum jyada detective mat bano”, chunnu mama jaise sapne se bahar aaye aur Vicky ko pelne lage.



Agle hi din se chunnu mama khud Sharma ji ke waha ration wagerah ki list banana aur dene ke liye jaane lage wo bhi bhari discount ke sath. Menka ji ke sath unki acchhi khasi batein bhi ho jaati thi aisa vo bata rahe the. aaj kal mama bade khush lag rahe the. menka ji ka swabhav, unki sundarta aur smile ke bare mein ghanto baat karte rahte aur shayari bhi likhne lage the. hadd to tab ho gayi ki vo urdu mein bhi shayari likhte the.vo baat alag thi ki unki shayari dhinchak pooja ke gaane ke lyrics se bhi ghatiya hoti thi.

Abhi kuchh din huye honge unka aur menka ji ki baat cheet chalu huye main aur Vicky unki dukaan par pahuch gaye.



“mama aapko mami mil gayi to humko to bhul hi gaye”, maine kaha.



“raaj, aisa nahi hai vo to thoda busy chal rahe hai. Menka ji chali jaaye uske pehle shadi ki baat bhi to karni hai”,mama muskurate huye bole.



‘waise kal sharma ji ke waha koi party thi suan tha apko bhi invite kiya tha…aap gaye the ki nahi”, Vicky ne puchha.



“ji bilkul vo mrs. Sharma ne invite kiya tha…pakka menka ke kehne par hi kiya hoga”, mama bole.



“aapko lagta hai vo aapko pasand karti hai,mujhe to shaq hai.” Maine sar hilaate huye puchha

“pakka karti hai, kal party mein hass rahi thi mere samne dekh kar maine notice bhi kiya.” Mama confidence ke sath bole.



“mama, vo aapke saamne dekh kar nahi aapko dekh kar hass rahi hogi”, Vicky ne kaha aur hum dono zor zor se hasne lage.



Hamara yeh mazak mama ko pasand nahi aaya aur bole ki dekhna tum dono main meri aur menka ji ki shadi mein tum dono ko cold drinks serve karwaunga tab jaa kar tumko pata chalega mama kya cheez hai.



Mama ko to apne pyaar par pura yakeen tha aur unka yakeen vishwas mein tab badal gaya jab menka ji jaane wali thi uske agle din unhone mama ko bataya ki main aapke ghar aapko milne kal aaungi.



Menka ji ki baat sunkar mama to itne khush huye ki kal hi unki shadi hai.

Dusre din vo kisi hero ki tarah taiyar huye aur menkaji ka wait karne lage. Vo thode nervous the isliye mujhe aur Vicky ko bhi unke ghar bitha diya. tay hua ki menka ji aayegi to hum dono yaha waha ki baate karke nikal lenge.



Menka ji ke aane ka time hote hote chunnu mama teen baar toilet bhi jaa chuke the. vo bata rahe the ki jab jyada tension aur utsukata hoti hai to unko kabz ho jaati hai.



Thodi der mein menka ji bhi aa gayi….yellow saree pehne huye bahut hi sundar lag rahi thi aur mama ka muh khula ka khula tha unko dekh kar. Maine unko kohni markar unki galti ka ahsaas karaya.mujhe aur Vicky ko vo jaanti thi. mama ne hi bataya tha unko. Thodi der hamne yaha waha ki batein ki aur jaise hum jaane ke liye khade huye to menka ji ne rok liya.



“kaha jaa rahe ho, bahut important kaam ke liye aayi hu yaha..baitho”, menka ji ne kaha.



Hum dono ne mama ki taraf dekh unhone baithne ka ishara kiya to hum wapis baith gaye.



Menka ji ne chunnu mama ke samne dekh kar kaha.



“apko pata hai aapse baat karke mujhe bahut acchha lagta hai. Aap jaante hi ho ki mera divorce ho gaya hai aur uss wajah se sare mard mujhe kisi object ki tarah hi dekhte hai. Darsal ghurte hi rehte hai.par aap unn logo mein se nahi ho. Maine hamesha aapki aannko mein pavitrata hi dekhi hai.



Menka ji ka aisa bolne se Vicky ki hasi chhut gayi par usne khasne ka naatak chalu kar diya aur menka ji ko bolne ka ishara kar diya.



Menka ji ne bolna chalu kiya.



Mujhe lagta hai ki aap suljhe huye insaan ho jo sabki izzat karta hai aur uss wajah se hi saare mohalle ke bacche aapko mama aur saari mahilaye aapko bhai manti hai.

Main aapo kuchh batana chahti hu aisa kah kar menka ji khadi huyi aur unki bag mein se kuchh nikalte huye chunnu mama ke pass aa gayi.



Chunnu mama ki dhadakane tez ho gayi thi, chehre pe paseena aa gaya tha. Main aur Vicky chunnu mama aur menka ji ko dekhe jaa rahe the.



Menka ji mama ke pass aate hi vo khade ho gaye. Aakhirkar menka ji ne apne purse mein se vo cheez dhundh hi li jisko vo khoj rahi thi.



Unke hathon meinjo cheez thi vo dekh kar main Vicky aur chunnu mama teeno chaunk gaye. Humein apni aankhon par vishwas nahi ho raha tha.



Darsal menka ji ke hatho mein ‘raakhi’ thi.



“arre aap ye dono ke liye laayi hai raakhi. Waise hai to chhote aapse par rishte to aise hi ban jaate hai,” chunnu mama apne sar se paseena pochhte huye bole.



“accha mazak kar lete ho aap, ye raakhi aap ke liye hai chnnu bhaiya”, menka ji boli.



Bhaiya shabd sun kar chunnu mama ki to saansein hi atak gayi par unhone apne aapko sambhal kar rakha tha.

Raakhi ko dekh kar chunnu mama ne dheere se apne dono hatho ko pichhe kar diya.



“pure mohalle ki mahilaye aapko bhai maanti hai, aur agar main aapko bhai nahi maanti to aapka apmaan hota chunnu bhai”, menka ji boli.



‘agle hafte raakhi ka din hai aur main kal hi jaa rahi hu to maine socha aapko aaj hi raakhi bandh du”, menka ji boli.



Abhi bhi mama ke hath peeche hi the. shayad mama soch rahe the ki saiyaa ban-ne nikale the yeh to bhiaya bana rahi hai.





Vicky ne samay ki najakat ko samjhte huye unka hath aage kiya aur bola, ‘menka ji vo kya hai na mohalle ki sab mahilaye inko bhai maanti hai par kabhi kisine raakhi nahi baandhi to emotional ho gaye hai. Dekho inki aankhon mein ansu bhi hai’



“mama thoda smile karo. Menka ji raakhi baandh rahi hai. Laao main photo kheench leta hu”,maine kaha aur mobile se photo kheenchne laga.



Dusri taraf Vicky “bhaiya mere rakhi ke bandhan ko nibhana” wala gaana gaa kar mausam ko pavitra karne ki koshish kar raha tha. Aur chunnu mama man hi man hum dono ko gaali de rahe the.



Menka ji raakhi bandh kar nikal gayi aur ghar mein main Vicky, chunnu mama aur sannata reh gaya.



Chunnu mama ka chehra dekh kar maine bata sakta tha ki unko aaj tak maine itna dukhi nahi dekha…..ha dekha hai jab bhandare mein muft ka khana khane keliye kisi wajah se jaa nahi paaye ho yaa to phir shadi mein invitation na mila ho par iss wajah se to kabhi dukhi nahi dekha tha. Pyaar ki wajah se.



Thodi der khamoshi ke baad Vicky apni aadat ke anusar beech mein bola, “ mama ji aap rahul roy banana ke sapne dekh rahe the aur rajpal yadav bana ke chhod diya”.



Vicky ki baat sun kar mama thodi der chup rahe aur bole, “menka ji bhi kaha anu aggarwal thi, theek thak hi dikhti thi, achha hua unke sath relation aage nahi badha warna unke ahsaan tale dab jaata aur ‘ humein unko ‘haa’bolna padta”



“aapke jaisa bada wala koi nahi hai…mahapurush…aapne apne pyaar ka balidaan jo diya hai,” main bola



Menka ji to apne ghar chali gayi thi aur mama humse mil ne se katra rahe the. kuchh din baad humne unko milne ke liye socha. Hum dono unke gar pahuche aur mohalle ke naake par jaane keliye mana liya.



main Vicky aur mama hamare adde par pahuche,kuchh der se hum do lukkhe ladkon ki baaate sun rahe the jo ki kisi ladki ko patane ki baatein kar rahe the.unki baat sunkar chunnu mama ki aankhon se angaarey barsane lage….pyaar ke naam se unki nafrat aur badh gayi thi.main aur Vicky dono ko pata tha ki aaj yeh dono ke kaan se khoon nikalne wala hai.



Chunnu mama unn dono ke pass pahuche jo ki hass rahe the aur kisi ladki ke bare mein baat kar rahe the aur idhar main aur Vicky dono ne countdown start kiya….chuunu mama ne ani bhadas nikalni chalu ki.



Kya ye pyaar pyaar kar rahe ho….pata hai kya hota hai pyaar karne ke baad. Mujhe dekho..aaj tak jitney paise gawayein hai utna main bachake rakhta to khud ka well furnished ghar hota, khud ki gaadi hoti, aur yeh sab hota to ek acchhi biwi bhi hoti. Par nahi hum to nihayati chutiya the. paise to gawayein par saala akhari baar pyaar kiya tab beizzati bhi huyi. Pehle inke upara kharcha karo baad mein koi aur mil jaayega to jiske pass jyada paisa hoga to usase shadi kar legi aur jab shadi ke liye aur koi nahi hai to bhai banake nikal jaayegi. Parek baat pakki hai ki aapka katega jarur.



Abhi tum kya bol rahe the..chunnu mama ne ek ladke ke kandhe par hath rakh kar bola…haan wo mil jaaye to swarg hi yahi milega. Beta ji swarg ka to pata nahi par par tumhara EMI aisa badhega ki gaand fatt ke hath mein aa jaayegi. Tum log sirf fielding hi bharte rehna , bike ka petrol jalate rehna….aur uske baad wo kisi aur se shadi karegi ya tumko apna bhai banayegi tab tumhara pichhwada aisa jalega ki tumhare bika fuel bhi utna nahi jala hoga. Jab tak sath hogi tab tak babu, shona, baby karegi aur jab tum kisi kaam ke nahi rahoge to tumhara loda, lahsun banake chali jaayegi.



Aur pyaar karne wale ladko ka aisa haal hone mein tumhare jaise lafangeaur bhosad pappu o ka hath hai jo ladkiyon ko pyaar to nahi kar sakte par unko apni personal secretary banana ho aise behave karte hai. Tumhare jaise kamino ki wajah se ladko ko bhugatna padta hai aur saari ladkiya sochne lagti hai ki ladke jo hai saare harami hote hai aur usmein mere jaise log mera matlab hai ye raaj aur Vicky jaise log bali ka bakra ban jaate hai. Hath ki lakeere mitt jati hai ladkiyon ko yaad kar kar ke par tum jaiso ki wajah se ladkiya apna hath hamare matlab inke hath mein nahi rakhti hai.



Chunnu mama ne dono ko barabar jhad diya tha. Vo dono apna sar neeche kare huye khade the , dono ko waha par hi chhod kar mama ne hamari taraf dekha aur neeche thook kar aage badh gaye.



“aapne to jhad hi diya matlab maza aa gaya.par aapki jagah hamara example kyu diya, pyaar karo aap aur bill hamare naam pe fadte ho. Gazab ho aap bhi.,” main bola.



“hamari koi izzat hai yaha par..kya aisa bol dete ki menka ji ka paar khone ka gham hai,” mama nirash hote huye bole



“koi baat nahi par maza aaya sach mein,”maine unka utara hua chehra dekh kar kaha.



“mama, aaj bhandare mein jaana hai kya do gali chhodkar hai..”, Vicky bola.



“kyun nahi chalege yaar…ab to inki behen menka ji bhi nahi hai..hai na mama,” maine kaha.



“ab tum dono bhi gaand maar lo, ha hum chalne wale hai aur aaj ke baad mere saamne pyaar vyaar ki baatein mat karna,matlab thodi bahut kar sakte ho” mama bole.



Itna bolne ke baad mama muskuraye aur bole ladkiyaan itni kharab bhi nahi hoti hai par yeh dono lukkho ko uski aukaat dikhani thi.



“Aur haa agar koi acchi mahila dikhe to bhi bolna…tumhari mami ban-ne ke laayak ho aisi,” aankh marte huye mama bole.



Aisa lag raha tha ki mama ne abhi jo bhashan diya tha vo sirf apni bhadas nikalne ke liye hi diya tha…aakhir mein mama bole, “ suno aaj hi ek sher likha hai.”



Maine aur Vicky ne apna muh bigada aur mama ka ghatiya sher sunane ke liye taiyaar ho gaye.


Mama ne kisi professional shayar ki tarah bolna chalu kiya.




“chaand ko mod dunga,

Suraj ko tod dunga,

Agar dusri wali mil jaaye,

To pehli wali ko chhod dunga”






:)The End:)
nice story
 

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RASHMI KA DARD

I read it twice, don't know why. In my opinion its not a story. It's just a intimate scene between two characters. Other thing is incest is very popular genre these days writer chose it to cash it but there is one important thing which is must consider to write this kind of scene which is seduction, and that main ingredient is missing in recipe
Story indicate rashmi who is widow and full of sorrows and that's it. Coz i think its just a described sex scene so what was logic to add that emotional drama, sex happened suddenly 🤣🤣 oh yaar,
Don't know what to say
Hahaha ... Hahahaha ... Wapas dekhkar achha laga... :hug:...

Hilerious and 100% true... Baki abhi aur baki hain under pipe line honge
 

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Rashmi ka dard

Sasural me pati ki mrityu ke bad aksar esaa dekha jata hai bhartiya samaz me bahu ko kosha jata hai ya prtadit kiya jata hai. Rashmi bhi unme se ek hai. Bs itna sa drd tha Rashmi ka aur wo mayke akar khush ho jati hai apne dad ke sath.
Bs itni si thi ye kahani.
Itna daba kuchla sa revooo :lotpot: ...
 

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Kya Uske Liye Itna kafi nahi :p:
mujhe laga kafi h
No comments ... Writer ki puri mehnat ko surwat ki durghatna se aapne dho dala... Itni baat to shayad hi writer ke dimag me bhi ho :D
 
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