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Shukriya Leon bhai,,,,romanchak update ..to sahukar log natak kar rahe hai thakuro se dosti ka aur pith pichhe saajish kar rahe hai aisa lagta hai ..
rupchandra ne anuradha ne saamne pichhali baate bolkar apne pair pe kulhadi maar li ..
sabkuch detail me bataya aur vaibhav ne sab sun liya ..
Roopchandra apni kamyaabi par itna khush tha ki wo sab kuch ugalta chala gaya. Mand buddhi isi ko kahte hain,,,,
Roopchandra ko maine bhi nahi dekha waha par aur muskaan kiske hotho par aayi thi ye main kaise jaan sakta hu. Main Mamuli sa lekhak hu koi antaryaami nahi,,,,to kya jab vaibhav ne sahukaro ke beto ko pita tab rupchandra wo insaan tha jiske chehre pe kamini muskan aayi thi ..par tab wo waha tha ya nahi pata nahi ..
Sab kuch abhi bata duga to kahani me suspense kis baat ka rakhuga,,,,murari ki hatya sahukaro ne nahi ki hogi aisa lagta hai warna rupchandra ka waha hona sambhav nahi hota ..
Roopchandra ne raasleela pahle dekhi thi aur Murari ki hatya baad me huyi thi, theek se kahani padha karo,,,,kisi aur ne ki hogi hatya ,,,par rupchandra kaise pahuch gaya waha aur vaibhav ki rasleela dekhi ..
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