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Incest ♡ एक नया संसार ♡ (Completed)
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Naina
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Kuch bhi toh nahiKya hua aapko,,,,
Naina
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waise story insects thi.... toh viraj ki shaadi pratima se honi chahiye... waise bhi viraj ke wajah se pratima ab akeli par gayi hai... toh usse shaadi karke uske tanhaiyo ko dur karna viraj ka farz hai
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Pratima khojne par mili hi nahi to koi kya kar sakta hai,,,,,waise story insects thi.... toh viraj ki shaadi pratima se honi chahiye... waise bhi viraj ke wajah se pratima ab akeli par gayi hai... toh usse shaadi karke uske tanhaiyo ko dur karna viraj ka farz hai
Naina
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Woh apni mann ki baat viraj ke sammukh rakh na paayi aur na hi viraj samajh paaya... Agar pehle hi viraj usse shaadi kar leta toh woh aise ghar chhod ke nahi jaatiPratima khojne par mili hi nahi to koi kya kar sakta hai,,,,,
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Woh apni mann ki baat viraj ke sammukh rakh na paayi aur na hi viraj samajh paaya... Agar pehle hi viraj usse shaadi kar leta toh woh aise ghar chhod ke nahi jaati
kamdev99008
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Bahut bahut shukriya sanju bhai aapke is khubsurat review ke liye. Yakeenan padh kar behad khushi huyi aur sath hi aisa bhi laga jaise ye sara majmoon kamdev99008 bhai ke dwara likha gaya ho. Mere aisa is liye kaha kyo ki ek to devnagiri me likhna dusre andaaz bhi waisa hi. Halaaki isme teekhe athwa byang jaise shabdo ka prayog nahi tha is liye aisa bhi kaha ja sakta hai ki kamdev bhai aur firefox bhai ki chhaya abhi aap par thik se nahi padi hai,,,,
Khair joke sapaat ko darkinaar karte huye aapke review me diye gaye suggestion ki baat karte hain. Jagdish ne viraj ke naam bhale hi sab kuch kar diya kintu kaaryabhaar wahi dekh raha tha, kyo ki viraj ek to college me padhne wala tha aur dusre wo apni family ke sath huye atyachaar ka badla lene par uljha hua tha. Dusri baat jagdish ne use aur uski family ko apna maan liya tha...use heart ki bimaari thi. Do baar use heart attack aa chuka tha is liye usne apna sab kuh viraj ke naam kar diya tha. Ye soch kar ki jane kab bhagwan ka bulawa aa jaye. Lekin jab tak zinda hai tab karobaar use hi dekhna tha aur sath hi viraj jab apne taau se badla le kar fursat ho jata to wo use karobaar ki baarikiya bhi sikhata. Ab kyo ki is part me badla lene tak ki hi story dikhaayi gayi hai is liye aage kya hua iska kisi ko bhala kaise kuch pata chalega.????
Vidhi jab viraj se alag huyi aur usne suraj ka sath kiya to starting me use nahi pata tha ki suraj kaisa ladka hai. Uske dimaag me to bas ye tha ki use kisi bbhi tarah se viraj se door hona hai aur viraj ke dil me apne liye nafrat bharna hai taaki wo uski taraf dekhe bhi na aur usse door chala jaye. Aksar insaan aise mauko par galtiya hi kar baithta hai aur baad me use us galti ke liye bahut kuch bhugatna padta hai. Yahi vidhi ke sath hua tha. Police me complain uske baap ne nahi ki kyo ki use pata tha ki complain karne se kuch hone wala nahi tha balki ulta uski rahi sahi ijjat ka bhi khachra hi hoga. Ritu ko bhi ye baat samajh me aa gayi thi tabhi to usne dusra raasta chuna tha vidhi ke sath kukarm karne walo ko saza dene ke liye,,,,,
Khair is part me to itna hi tha. Baaki iske baad kya hua wo sab iske next part me dekhne ko milega. Ummid hai aapko mere jawaabo se santusti mil gayi hogi,,,,,
Bahut bahut shukriya Ristrcted bhai aapke is khubsurat review ke liye,,,,,
Maine to pahle hi bola tha bhai ki agar aapko review kaise diya jata hai ye seekhna hai to Naina ji, firefox420 bhai aur kamdev99008 bhai in teeno se contact karna chahiye. Khair koi baat nahi...is review se bhi mujhe behad khushi huyi hai bhai,,,,
Jab main ye story likh raha tha aur iske update likhta tha tab devnagiri me update likhne me kafi time lagta tha aur upar se soch soch kar likhna. Kyo ki is story me jo maahaul tha aur jo chal raha tha usme dimaag lagane wale kayi kirdaar the. Un sabhi kirdaaro ke sath nyaay karna bada mushkil kaam tha. Ek taraf khud ajay singh aur uski shaatir dimaag biwi yaani ki pratima to dusri taraf viraj aur ritu. Mantri wala matter juda to usme bhi wahi haal. Last me abhay aur ajay singh ke beech phone dwara sauda hona. Usi saude ke bare me phone dwara pratima ka sun lena, uske baad pratima ka sach ka sath dete huye viraj ko phone se sab kuch bata dena. Ye sab aisa tha jo khud mere hi dimaag ko chakar ghinni banaye huye tha. Kabhi kabhi aisa hota ki aage kuch samajh hi na aata ki kaise kya likhu magar fir sochta aur aakhir likhta hi,,,,
Ye meri pahli kahani thi aur ye sach hai ki is kahani ko likhne me jo mushkile mere saamne aayi thi uske bare me sochta hu to ek ajeeb sa ahsaas hota hai. Uske baad jab ye kahani complete huyi to bahut khushi bhi huyi. Wo khushi hi thi ki maine iske 2nd part ko start karne me zara bhi deri na ki thi. Khair aage jo hua wo to ab beeti baate hain. Iska 2nd part bhi devnagiri me likha hua hai is liye abhi use likhna mjmkin nahi hai bhai. Man me kuch alag likhne ki chaahat jagi to new story start ki. Dekhte hain aage kya hota hai. Sabka sath aur sahyog milega to zarur likhuga,,,,,
The_InnoCent bhai ap bar bar mujhe chadhakar sharminda kar dete hain................mein bhi ap sab se hi seekh raha hoon..........
SANJU ( V. R. ) bhai mere favourite writers mein se hain aapki hi tarah........... aur
Naina ji.............. wo meri hi nahin............is forum ki sabse badi reader critic hain............ kabhi-kabhi to mein ye sochta hu ki wo kahani kyon nahin likhti...............kitna gazab ka imagination hota hai unka reviews mein.......kya-kya soch leti hain..........aur batane ka andaj to sabse nirala hai hi........ samne wala padhne ke bad behosh nahin hota to kam se kam chakkar to ane hi lagte honge.....
firefox420 bhai............ ye thehre james bond se bhi 2 kadam aage.............sherlock holmes ........mein inhein hamari forum ka cheer-faad visheshagya (surgeon) manta hoon........... p-ata nahin kitni gahri khudai karte hain............ 4 line ke update ka 10 line mein review......... reader bechare update ko bhoolkar review ko yaad rakhte hain
aur Ristrcted bhai.............inke to post ki ginti hi meri padhi hui total posts se jyada lagti hai mujhe............. yani jitna meine padha bhi nahin...........utna to ye likh chuke hain
............. great ab ap sab dhurandharon ke beech rahkar mein bhi ........kaddu mein teer maar hi leta hoon
kamdev99008
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waise story insects thi.... toh viraj ki shaadi pratima se honi chahiye... waise bhi viraj ke wajah se pratima ab akeli par gayi hai... toh usse shaadi karke uske tanhaiyo ko dur karna viraj ka farz hai
Woh apni mann ki baat viraj ke sammukh rakh na paayi aur na hi viraj samajh paaya... Agar pehle hi viraj usse shaadi kar leta toh woh aise ghar chhod ke nahi jaati
ab batao aise aise reviews padhkar reader kya writer bhi behosh ho jate hain..........
Pratima khojne par mili hi nahi to koi kya kar sakta hai,,,,,
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Mera irada sharminda karne ka hargiz nahi tha bade bhaiya. Maine to aap teeno ki dil se taarif hi ki hai. Baaki aap kaddu me kitne teer maarte hain ye ham sab jaante hain. Is liye ye batane ka aapne bewajah hi kast kiya hai. Khair jane dijiye...moksh ki raah par fasa diye hain to meharbaani karke update bhi dijiye. Is tarah goli dena ab band kar dijiye,,,,,The_InnoCent bhai ap bar bar mujhe chadhakar sharminda kar dete hain................mein bhi ap sab se hi seekh raha hoon..........
SANJU ( V. R. ) bhai mere favourite writers mein se hain aapki hi tarah........... aur
Naina ji.............. wo meri hi nahin............is forum ki sabse badi reader critic hain............ kabhi-kabhi to mein ye sochta hu ki wo kahani kyon nahin likhti...............kitna gazab ka imagination hota hai unka reviews mein.......kya-kya soch leti hain..........aur batane ka andaj to sabse nirala hai hi........ samne wala padhne ke bad behosh nahin hota to kam se kam chakkar to ane hi lagte honge.....
firefox420 bhai............ ye thehre james bond se bhi 2 kadam aage.............sherlock holmes ........mein inhein hamari forum ka cheer-faad visheshagya (surgeon) manta hoon........... p-ata nahin kitni gahri khudai karte hain............ 4 line ke update ka 10 line mein review......... reader bechare update ko bhoolkar review ko yaad rakhte hain
aur Ristrcted bhai.............inke to post ki ginti hi meri padhi hui total posts se jyada lagti hai mujhe............. yani jitna meine padha bhi nahin...........utna to ye likh chuke hain
ab ap sab dhurandharon ke beech rahkar mein bhi ........kaddu mein teer maar hi leta hoon