Incest ♡ एक नया संसार ♡ (Completed)

[Ristrcted]

The_InnoCent bhai ap bar bar mujhe chadhakar sharminda kar dete hain................mein bhi ap sab se hi seekh raha hoon..........

SANJU ( V. R. ) bhai mere favourite writers mein se hain aapki hi tarah........... aur
Naina ji.............. wo meri hi nahin............is forum ki sabse badi reader critic hain............ kabhi-kabhi to mein ye sochta hu ki wo kahani kyon nahin likhti...............kitna gazab ka imagination hota hai unka reviews mein.......kya-kya soch leti hain..........aur batane ka andaj to sabse nirala hai hi........ samne wala padhne ke bad behosh nahin hota to kam se kam chakkar to ane hi lagte honge.....
firefox420 bhai............ ye thehre james bond se bhi 2 kadam aage.............sherlock holmes ........mein inhein hamari forum ka cheer-faad visheshagya (surgeon) manta hoon........... p-ata nahin kitni gahri khudai karte hain............ 4 line ke update ka 10 line mein review......... reader bechare update ko bhoolkar review ko yaad rakhte hain
aur Ristrcted bhai.............inke to post ki ginti hi meri padhi hui total posts se jyada lagti hai mujhe............. yani jitna meine padha bhi nahin...........utna to ye likh chuke hain ............. great

ab ap sab dhurandharon ke beech rahkar mein bhi ........kaddu mein teer maar hi leta hoon

Wo to apan lounge mein hota hai humesa isliye posts jyada hai.... Waise Ispammer kahne ka sahi tarika hai ye

 

[The_InnoCent]

ab batao aise aise reviews padhkar reader kya writer bhi behosh ho jate hain..........

Unke man me aaj kal kuch aur chal raha hai bade bhaiya,,,,,

 

[SANJU ( V. R. )]

Bilkul sahi kaha aapne aur main is baat se sahmat bhi hu ki sabka apna alag style hota hai review dene ka. Main to bas bhai se hasi mazaak me kah raha tha waisa. Khair kayakalp ko to likhuga hi ye pakki baat hai magar meri ichha hai ki devnagiri me hi likhu. Dusri baat main hamesha mobile me likhta hu aur mujhe mobile me hi typing karne me easy feel hota hai. Uska ek faayda ye bhi hota hai ki aap kahi bhi raho magar jab bhi time milta hai to aap likhna shuru kar sakte hain jabki pc me to tabhi likh sakte hain jab ham ghar me honge. Mere paas laptop hai magar main kabhi bhi usme likhne ka nahi sochta. Mobile me likhna zyada better aur easy lagta hai. Khair apne jis software ke bare me bataya hai use bhi check karuga,,,,,

Same to me ?

 

[Naina]

Unke man me aaj kal kuch aur chal raha hai bade bhaiya,,,,,

Pehle baat jab viraj aur ritu ek ho sakte to pratima mein bhi koi burai nahi... aakhir uski galti hi kya hai..yahin na ki aankh kaan naak muh bandh karke pati ka sath diya.....isi pehlu ko dekhi jaaye toh us hisab se socho jab viraj se shaadi karti... toh uske liye kitni wafadar hoti...
dusri baat.... Kuch nahi chaling yaar .. bas kuch adhure kahaniya likhne wale, jarurat se zyada late update dene wale kuch aalsi writers nahi balki unki creations (story characters) ko sabak sikhane ki firak mein hoon.... aur is kadar ki baaki ke readers ko bhi sochne pe majboor ho jaaye ki haan agar kahani mein kirdaar aisa karta toh kahani zyada aachi hoti...

 

[SANJU ( V. R. )]

The_InnoCent bhai ap bar bar mujhe chadhakar sharminda kar dete hain................mein bhi ap sab se hi seekh raha hoon..........

SANJU ( V. R. ) bhai mere favourite writers mein se hain aapki hi tarah........... aur
Naina ji.............. wo meri hi nahin............is forum ki sabse badi reader critic hain............ kabhi-kabhi to mein ye sochta hu ki wo kahani kyon nahin likhti...............kitna gazab ka imagination hota hai unka reviews mein.......kya-kya soch leti hain..........aur batane ka andaj to sabse nirala hai hi........ samne wala padhne ke bad behosh nahin hota to kam se kam chakkar to ane hi lagte honge.....
firefox420 bhai............ ye thehre james bond se bhi 2 kadam aage.............sherlock holmes ........mein inhein hamari forum ka cheer-faad visheshagya (surgeon) manta hoon........... p-ata nahin kitni gahri khudai karte hain............ 4 line ke update ka 10 line mein review......... reader bechare update ko bhoolkar review ko yaad rakhte hain
aur Ristrcted bhai.............inke to post ki ginti hi meri padhi hui total posts se jyada lagti hai mujhe............. yani jitna meine padha bhi nahin...........utna to ye likh chuke hain ............. great

ab ap sab dhurandharon ke beech rahkar mein bhi ........kaddu mein teer maar hi leta hoon

शुभम भाई एक बेहतरीन राइटर है......No doubt
नैना जी.... सबसे बेहतरीन रिभियू देने वाली.....No doubt
कामदेव भाई...हम सभी में सबसे ज्यादा इंटेलिजेंट.....No doubt
फ़ायरफ़ॉक्स भाई...... यदि ये नहीं होते तो मैं बहुत पहले ही कहानी लिखना छोड़ कर भाग गया होता । मेरे सबसे फेवरेट ।
रिस्टरक्टेड भाई..... कमेन्ट तो बहुतेरे देखें है लेकिन जो भी थे वो सच में बेहतरीन थे । लेकिन अभी तक आमना सामना नहीं हुआ है ।

कामदेव भाई की तरह मेरी भी गुजारिश है कि नैना जी को भले दो चार पेज की हो.... एक कहानी तो लिखनी ही चाहिए । ?

 

[Naina]

ab batao aise aise reviews padhkar reader kya writer bhi behosh ho jate hain..........

isme hasne ki kya baat hai.... kuch changes aaye kahani mein... kuch aisa ho kahani mein joh soch se bhi pare ho.... like kahani ki ant mein jo mar gaya tha woh ajay nahi tha... baad mein pata chala sabhi kirdaaro ko including viraj ko bhi... ki gouri ne ajay sang shaadi kar li....

 

[Naina]

The_InnoCent bhai ap bar bar mujhe chadhakar sharminda kar dete hain................mein bhi ap sab se hi seekh raha hoon..........

SANJU ( V. R. ) bhai mere favourite writers mein se hain aapki hi tarah........... aur
Naina ji.............. wo meri hi nahin............is forum ki sabse badi reader critic hain............ kabhi-kabhi to mein ye sochta hu ki wo kahani kyon nahin likhti...............kitna gazab ka imagination hota hai unka reviews mein.......kya-kya soch leti hain..........aur batane ka andaj to sabse nirala hai hi........ samne wala padhne ke bad behosh nahin hota to kam se kam chakkar to ane hi lagte honge.....
firefox420 bhai............ ye thehre james bond se bhi 2 kadam aage.............sherlock holmes ........mein inhein hamari forum ka cheer-faad visheshagya (surgeon) manta hoon........... p-ata nahin kitni gahri khudai karte hain............ 4 line ke update ka 10 line mein review......... reader bechare update ko bhoolkar review ko yaad rakhte hain
aur Ristrcted bhai.............inke to post ki ginti hi meri padhi hui total posts se jyada lagti hai mujhe............. yani jitna meine padha bhi nahin...........utna to ye likh chuke hain ............. great

ab ap sab dhurandharon ke beech rahkar mein bhi ........kaddu mein teer maar hi leta hoon

firefox420 masoom reader hai... aur yahin aakhiri sach bhi hai

 

[The_InnoCent]

Pehle baat jab viraj aur ritu ek ho sakte to pratima mein bhi koi burai nahi... aakhir uski galti hi kya hai..yahin na ki aankh kaan naak muh bandh karke pati ka sath diya.....isi pehlu ko dekhi jaaye toh us hisab se socho jab viraj se shaadi karti... toh uske liye kitni wafadar hoti...
dusri baat.... Kuch nahi chaling yaar .. bas kuch adhure kahaniya likhne wale, jarurat se zyada late update dene wale kuch aalsi writers nahi balki unki creations (story characters) ko sabak sikhane ki firak mein hoon.... aur is kadar ki baaki ke readers ko bhi sochne pe majboor ho jaaye ki haan agar kahani mein kirdaar aisa karta toh kahani zyada aachi hoti...

Agar aisa hai to mera bas yahi kahna hai ki kamdev bhai ko sabak sikhaiye. Kyo ki apni kahani me update dene me yahi sabse zyada manmaani kar rahe hain. Main to masoom hu, mujhe sabak sikhane agar aapne socha hai to fir ye mujh par ghor atyachaar se kam nahi hai,,,,,,

 

[Naina]

शुभम भाई एक बेहतरीन राइटर है......No doubt
नैना जी.... सबसे बेहतरीन रिभियू देने वाली.....No doubt
कामदेव भाई...हम सभी में सबसे ज्यादा इंटेलिजेंट.....No doubt
फ़ायरफ़ॉक्स भाई...... यदि ये नहीं होते तो मैं बहुत पहले ही कहानी लिखना छोड़ कर भाग गया होता । मेरे सबसे फेवरेट ।
रिस्टरक्टेड भाई..... कमेन्ट तो बहुतेरे देखें है लेकिन जो भी थे वो सच में बेहतरीन थे । लेकिन अभी तक आमना सामना नहीं हुआ है ।

कामदेव भाई की तरह मेरी भी गुजारिश है कि नैना जी को भले दो चार पेज की हो.... एक कहानी तो लिखनी ही चाहिए । ?

Main masoom reader masoomiyat se bhari huyi mah revos

 

[The_InnoCent]

शुभम भाई एक बेहतरीन राइटर है......No doubt
नैना जी.... सबसे बेहतरीन रिभियू देने वाली.....No doubt
कामदेव भाई...हम सभी में सबसे ज्यादा इंटेलिजेंट.....No doubt
फ़ायरफ़ॉक्स भाई...... यदि ये नहीं होते तो मैं बहुत पहले ही कहानी लिखना छोड़ कर भाग गया होता । मेरे सबसे फेवरेट ।
रिस्टरक्टेड भाई..... कमेन्ट तो बहुतेरे देखें है लेकिन जो भी थे वो सच में बेहतरीन थे । लेकिन अभी तक आमना सामना नहीं हुआ है ।

कामदेव भाई की तरह मेरी भी गुजारिश है कि नैना जी को भले दो चार पेज की हो.... एक कहानी तो लिखनी ही चाहिए । ?

Naina ji kahani likhne ki galti nahi karengi bhai. Kyo ki unhe bhi pata hai ki jin jin ko unhone ab tak sabak sikhaya hai wo sab raashan paani le kar unhe bhi sabak sikhane lag jayenge aur ye unke liye bhaari pad jayega,,,,,,