Fantasy 𝘾𝙧𝙚𝙖𝙩𝙞𝙤𝙣

[Mr Jerry]

Accha Next Update thoda Bada rakhu....?

Haa bhai thora long rakho next update .....

 

[Lite_end]

Chota bhi chalega...lekin jaldi...itna wait kon karega

done ..

Nice update m

Nice update.
Maar khaate bach gya, 2-4 belt toh lagni chahiye thi yaar. Birthday ka maza tab hi ata hai.

Bhai bas chor mat bana dena hero ko .
Bahut accha update tha

Bhai uske next update mai usse itna dard hua tha agar usse pehle belt se maar kha leta to story hi khtm ho jati (hero hi mar jata na)

Mene hero ko _______ banane ke baare mai socha hai ab pata laga lo es blank mai kya hai...

I

Isiliye toh double padega

Bechaara hamaara hero dhobi ghat ka kapda ban jayega....

Haa bhai

Haa bhai thora long rakho next update .....

Okay..

 

[Lite_end]

Guys yeh story mere dwara likhi hui pehli story hai and isme agar thodi galti ho to usse please ignore kar dena...

Iska update jld hi aayega...

And ees story mai love, adventure, action, fight, sab kuch hoga bas intezaar jld hi es story ke update ke sath milenge...

.....Index.....​

Update-001

Update-002

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Update-005

...Character... ​

S. No.​	Name​	Age​	Role​
1>	Raj​	18​	Hero​
2>	Sumita​	43​	Hero Mother​
3>	Aakash​	24​	Hero Bhai​
4>	Payal​	23​	Hero Bhabhi (Aakash Wife)​
5>	Aarohi​	22​	Hero 1st Sister​
6>	Piya​	20​	Hero 2nd Sister​
7>	Veer​	18​	Hero Best Friend​
8>	Dr. Vijay​	39​	Sumita ka muh bola bhai​

Guys story ke saare character yaha mention ho jaya karenge and aage ek aur index banaunga hero ki powers se related and update ke sath usse bhi update karta rahunga es thread ki 1st post bahut badi ho jayegi en sabse

 

[Dhakad boy]

Jabardast update Bhai

 

[Lite_end]

Jabardast update Bhai

Shukriya bhai..

 

[king1969]

Bahut hi mazedar update

 

[MrHandsome]

System based story achi hoti hai. Lekan har koi likh b ni sakta. 2 3 writers hai jin ki story achi hai system base. Ye 3 updates read kar k lag raha hai k ap ki story b achi ho gi... Baki sex na b ho story mai to chaly ga lekan fight or action ko achy se likhna.... Bs yahi kahna chahon ga.. Good luck for next updates....

 

[Lite_end]

Bahut hi mazedar update

Shukriya bhai..

 

[Lite_end]

System based story achi hoti hai. Lekan har koi likh b ni sakta. 2 3 writers hai jin ki story achi hai system base. Ye 3 updates read kar k lag raha hai k ap ki story b achi ho gi... Baki sex na b ho story mai to chaly ga lekan fight or action ko achy se likhna.... Bs yahi kahna chahon ga.. Good luck for next updates....

Thanks bhai..
Sex scenes mene bahut kam soche hai story base pe hi focus hai

 

[uday29]

Very good story and good start and nice concept.