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Fantasy 𝘾𝙧𝙚𝙖𝙩𝙞𝙤𝙣

dhparikh

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Sense and Ant Strength

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[Senses]

[Rank: F]

Jese hi Raj ko yeh awaaz sunai deti hai to woh dar jata hai aur khada ho jata hai aur charo taraf dekhne lagta hai ki yeh awaaz kaha se aayi thi..

Kabhi uski nazar bed pe giri hui spider pe padti hai aur ab usse woh awaaz bhi sunai nahi de rahi thi..

Raj ghabra kar us chhoti si spider ko dekhta hai aur kuch soch kar usse firse touch karne ki koshish karta hai lekin es baar us spider ne isse pehle hi sense kar liya tha aur woh waha se bhag jati hai..

Kyuki Raj ne bas us spider ko touch kara tha mara nahi tha aur woh spider bhi us samay apne sense mai nahi thi isliye Raj usse touch kar paya..

Raj -"aakhir yeh awaaz kya thi aur yeh sense ability esa kuch sunai diya tha aakhir yeh mere sath ho kya raha hai.."

Raj apna sar pakad kar bed pe beth jata hai aur jo bhi uske sath ho raha hai woh sab sochne lagta hai..

'Stealth yeh kya koi ability hai..? Lekin woh awaaz kya thi aur sense shyd.. '

Woh kab yeh soch hi raha tha kabhi uske mind mai kuch click hota hai aur woh apna phone nikal kar spider ke baare kai search karta hai to usse yeh pata chalta hai ki spider ke senses ek humans se bahut zada hota hai and woh khatre ko pehele hi sense kar leti hai..

Raj yeh padh kar chok jata hai kyuki abhi usse sense naam ki ability ko churane ka chance mila tha lekin chura kar kya hota kya woh sense ability uski khud ki ability ban jati hai woh yahi sab soch raha tha woh es baat to confirm karne ke liye us spider ko hi dekhne lagta hai..

Wese bhi ek teenage ladke ko new new chijen try karne mai maza hi aata hai..

Raj bed pe khada ho jata hai aur apne aas pass dekhne lagta hai wesa bhi uska room zada accha nahi tha aur safai bhi zada nahi thi woh room ke kone mai spider ke web dekhta hai jaha ek aur spider thi..



Raj ek jhadu uthata hai aur us kone mai jata hai jaha web bana hua tha aur jhadu ko hawa mai utha kar tezi se us spider pe maar deta hai mana spider ke senses tez hai lekin uski body bahut chhoti hai isliye woh zada duur nahi ja payi aur issi chij ka faida hamaare hero ne uthaya aur us spider ki body ab jameen pe giri hui thi..

Raj -"es bechaare spider ko maar to diya lekin ab tak mujhe koi awaaz sunai kyu nahi di?" woh kuch soch kar jameen pe jhukta hai aur us mare hue spider ko touch karta hai kabhi usse fir se woh awaaz sunai deti hai...

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[Senses]

[Rank: F]

Raj khush to hota hai lekin usse samjh nahi aa raha tha woh kya bole..

Raj kuch sochkar "STEAL" bol deta hai kabhi us spider ke andar se ek light red color ki chij nikalti hai aur uska size bhi marble jitna tha aur hawa mai float karne lagti hai wahk Raj ko yeh kisi film ki tarah lag raha tha woh apne hath aage karta hai aur us marble ko hath mai pakad leta hai..

Raj -"iWoooo... yeh chij kya hai kya yahi sense ability hai lekin mujhe abhi tak kuch feel kyu nahi hua ya yeh chij meri body mai absorb.. " Raj jese hi absorb bolta hai woh marble tezi se Raj ke dil mai sama jati hai..

Lekin es baar Raj ko koi dard nahi hota..

Raj jo abhi tak shocked mai khada tha usse kuch smjh nahi aa raha hota kabhi usse ek aur awaaz sunai deti hai..

[Your all senses increases 10×]

Yeh awaaz sunai dete hi Raj ko kuch alag feel hone lagta hai kyuki uske saare senses pehle se 10 guna zada tez ho gaye the matlab woh ab ek normal human se 10 guna zada tezi se react kar sakta tha jabki yeh skill rank F ki thi..

Raj -"yeh feeling bahut alag hai mujhe esa lag raha hai ki mai chijo ko thoda slow dekh raha hu kya yeh senses ki wajah se hai?" lekin uske pass abhi bhi koi jawaab nahi tha ki yeh kese aur kyu ho raha hai..

Raj ki hearing bhi normal se 10 guna badh gayi thi Raj ko kisi ke upar aane ki awaaz sunai deti hai..

Kyuki payal upar aa rahi thi Raj ko dekhne..

Raj soch hi raha tha ki kon aa raha hai ki usse payal ki awaaz aati hai jo ab normal thi matlab jese woh pehle sunta tha wese hi sunai de rahi thi agar 10 guna hoti to bechaare ke to kaan se hi khush aane lagta....

Payal -"Raj ab tumhari tabiyat kesi hai.. "

Raj abhi bhi us kone mai khada tha woh piche mud jata hai..

Payal to ab Raj mai kho hi gayi thi pehele uske dewar itna handsome tha ab uske dewar ki neeli aankhen mai to har ladki khone chahe wahi haal ab Payal ka tha Raj ko thoda ajeeb lag raha tha kyuki uski bhabhi bas usse dekh rahi thi bina kuch bole..

Raj -"bhabhi ab mai thik hu aur abhi to Veer ke sath school bhi jana hai NOC submit karwane.. "

Raj ne subhe hi apni maa se NOC pe sign karwa li thi..

Aur usne jo Veer ne kahani banai thi usne Raj ki bahut help kari jisse sabko laga Raj ne bas ek chemical use kara tha jiski wajah se uski aankhen Black se Blue ho gayi aur ab koi bhi usse Rajasthan jane se nahi rokega..

Payal Raj ki baat sun kar Raj mai se bahar aati hai aur hadbate hue kehti hai..

Payal -"ha... hann mai yeh kehne aayi thi ki jldi aa jana Veer ke sath zada mat ghumne.. "

Raj -"han bhabhi mai jldi aa jaunga bas NOC dekar VEER ke sath thoda ghum lunga.. "

Payal -"han yeh paise tumhare bhaiya ne mujhe diye the tumhe dene ke liye.. "

Payal 1000 rupee Raj ko dete hue kehti hai Aakash (Raj ka bhai) ek company mai job karta tha jaha uski salary ₹60k thi aur Sumita college mai lecturer thi woh doctor bhi hai lekin doctor ki job mai bahut kaam hota hai aur woh apne bacche se duur nahi rehna chahti thi isliye usne medical college mai lecturer banna psnd kara..

Pehle to sumita hi pure ghar ko handle karti thi lekin Aakash ke job karne se uska bundle thoda kam ho gya tha aur ab yeh dono milkar pure ghar ko maintain kar rahe the Payal bhi job karna chahti thi lekin abhi uski shadi hui thi lekin sumita ke ghar pe na hone se woh hi Raj ke liye khana banati thi sach kahe to Payal ki sabse zada Raj ke sath hi banti thi..

Raj -"bhabhi itne zada paise mat dijiye mere kaam to ₹500 mai ho jayega aap baki apne pass rakh lijiye kabhi jarurat padi to kaam aayenge.. "

Raj bhi apne ghar ki condition acche se janta tha isliye Aarohi, Piya aur Rak kabhi bhi kisi ne kisi chij ki demand nahi karte the..

Payal -"Raj yeh paise tumhare gift hau mujhe kuch nahi sunna chup chap paise rakho.. "

Yeh kehkar Payal Raj ke hath mai paise rakh deti hai aur uske baalo oe hath pherte hue kehti hai..

Payal -"tumhe abhi se paiso ki chinta karne ki jarurat nahi hai tumhe abhi bas apni school life acche se enjoy karo.. "

Raj ke baal bahut zasa silky the isliye Payal ko raj ke baal mai hath pherne mai bahut accha lag raha tha..

Kabhi Raj ka phone ring hota hai jisse payal jhatke se apna hath Raj ke baalo se hata deti hai aur bina aage kuch bole niche chali jati ha wahi Raj bechaara sochne lagta hai bhabhi ko kya hua..

Woh phone check karta hai to Veer ka hi call tha Raj call utha leta hai kabhi usse veer ki chillane ki awaaz aati hai...

Veer -"saale tujhe woh chemical ya pata nahi kya tha kisne diya mene pura area chhan mara mujhe koi bhi nahi hai mila.. "

Raj veer ko sab batane ke baare mai sochta hai kyuki Veer shyd uski kisi tarah madad kar sake aur uske dil mai abhi itna sab kuch chal raha tha kab tak woh yeh kisi ke sath share na kare to usse thoda relief hoga...

Raj -"veer mujhe tujhe kuch batana hai ti jldi se park aa waha mil tujhse bahut important baat karni hai...."

Veer yeh sun kar thoda shant ho jata hai aur Raj ki baat ki important samjh kar turant park ke liye apni bike pe nikal jata hai sur Raj bhu ghar se nikal jate hai jate time usse Payal bhabhi kahi nahi dikhi thi shyd apne room mai ho aur rahi baat Aarohi aur Piya ki to woh college chale gaye the aur Sumita college lecturer thi na..

Raj ke pass bike nahi thi lekin Woh veer ki bike chala liya karta tha ya yeh kahu Veer ne hi usse bike chalana sikhaaya tha aur ghar mai jo bike thi woh Aakash ki thi lekin woh abhi servicing ke liye gayi thi..

Rah pedal hi park ke liye nikal jata hai aur 10 min ke andar park aa bhi jata hai 11 ya 12 baj rahe the aur es samay kon hi park mai hota hai isliye park ek dam khali tha lekin waha Veer khada hua tha..

Raj sidha jakr pehele veer ko hug karta hai..

Veer ko Raj ke hug se hi samajh aa jata hai Raj ke dil mai bahut kuch hai yeh dono dost se zada ek dusre ke bhai the isliye bina bole ek dusre ki problem samjh jate the...

Veer Raj ko thoda shant karne ke liye kehta hai..

Veer -"saale mai gay nahi hu duur ho mujhse.. "

Raj ye sun kar Veer se alag hota hai aur kehta hai..

Raj -"to saale mai konsa gay hu bas kuch samjh nahi aa raha tha kya ho raha mere sath subhe se ajeeb se chijen ho rahi hai.. "

Veer -"esa kya ajeeb ho raha hau batayega bhi ussi chij pe baat karne ke liye tune bulaya hoga na.. "

Raj -"han mai tujhe subhe se batata hu.. "

Fir Raj subhe se hui har ek chij Veer ko wese hu bata deta hai uski baatein sun kar to Veer ka muh bhu khula ka khula tha...

Veer -"matlab tere senses ab bahut zada acche ho gaye ha aur tujhe duur ki awaazein bhi acche se sunai de rahi hai aur ek ajeeb awaaz sunai deti hai tujhe aur teri yeh aankhen bina kisi chemical ke yuhi blue ho gayi?"

Raj apna sar han mai hilata hai jese hi Raj han karta ha Veer jor jor se hasne lagta hai..

Veer -"hahahahhahaha...bhai nice story esi story ke liye to tujhe OSCAR milna chaiye.."

Raj -"saale sach keh raha hu mai agar tujhe bharosa nahi to test karle..."

Veer haste hue hi kehta hai..

Veer -"kesa test..hahaha.."

Raj kuch soch kar kehta hai..

Raj -"mai apni aankhen band karunga aur tu mujh pe kisi bhi direction se attack kariyo mai usse easily dodge kar lunga.. "

Veer -"Oye zada hawa mai mat ud mere ek punch se dher hi jayega tu.. "

Raj -"to aaram se maariyo fir tujhe kabhi bharosa hoga.. "

Yeh kehkar Raj apni aankhen band kar leta ha wahi Veer bhi Raj ko uske sapne se bahar aane ke liye apni position mai aa jata hai kyuki Veer ko yeh bhi Raj ka sapna hi lag raha tha...

Veer Raj ko halka se punch marta hai..

Lekin Raj ke senses pehele se tez ho gaye the isliye usse Raj ke punch ki awaaz pehle hi sunai deti hai aur uski body apne aap hi thodi si left ho jati hai..

Veer yeh dekh kar heran ho jata hai aur ek aur punch marne ko hota hai lekin Raj usse bhi dodge kar leta hai..

Ese hi Raj ne Veer ke aankhen band hone ke baad bhi 7 punch dodge kar diye lekin last punch Veer ne bahut tez maara tha flow mai hone ki wajah se usse apni force pe kaabu nahi hua aur wahi Raj ke sense to acche ho gaye the lekin itne bhi acche nahi jo isse es punch ko handle kar pate aur yeh punch Raj ke pat pe lag jata hai..

Raj -"aaaaaahhhhhhh.... " pat oe hath rakhte hue kehta hai.. "saale mene tujhse zada tez marne ko nahi kaha tha yeh ability abhi bhi rank F pe hai mai spider man nahi hu jiske pass itni strength ho.. "

Veer ko bahut bura lag raha tha woh aage badh ksr Raj ko handle karta hai..

Veer -"so... sorry bhai galti se ho gya.."

Raj -"aha.. han pata hai mujhe tu kabhi mujhe hurt nahi karega..

Ab to tujhe bharosa hua ki mai sach keh raha hu.. "

Raj ki baat sunkar Raj ko apne aap pe bahut gussa aa raha tha kyuki usne Raj ki baat pe bharosa nahi kara jiski wajah se yeh Raj ko test dena pada jisme usse lag gayi..

Veer lekin khush es baat pe tha ki uske bhai ke pass esi powers hai aur issi khushi mai woh Raj ko utha leta hai aur ghumne lagta hai..

Veer -"saale tu ro super hero ban gya hai ab mujhe bhul mat jaiyo.. "

Raj jo abhi bhi soch raha tha ki Veer pagal to nahi ho gya usse ab samjh aata hai..

Raj -"saale mai koi super hero nahi hu mai to tera ep punch se hu dher ho gya.. "

Veer Raj ko niche utarte hue kuch sochte hue kehta hai...

Veer -"jese tune mujhe bataya ki jab tune spider ko touch kara tha to tujhe usse yeh ability mili thi lek.. "

Veer bolte hue ruk jata hai kyuki woh kuch esa dekhta hai jo aur bhi ajeeb tha..

Veer -"Ra... Raj ter.. teri aankhon ka color firse change ho gya hai.. "

Jab Veer yeh bolta hai to uske samne hi firse Raj ki aankhon ka color apne aap change hokar light yellow ho gya tha aur ab firse change hokar night red se Blue ho jata hai..

Raj ki aankhon ka color to kabhi change ho gya tha jab uspe attack hue the lekin aankhen band hone ki wajah se kisi ko pata nahi chala..

Raj bhi yeh sunkar turant phone mai check karta hai to usse apni aankhen blue hi dikhti hai lekin Raj ko Veer ki baat ka bharosa tha kyuki usne Light Red kaha tha jo us marble jesi chij ka color tha..

Wahi veer aankhon ka color change hota dekh itna dar jata hai ki jameen pe gir jata hai..

Aur Raj ko aankhen phad kar dekhne lagta hai...

Raj aage badh kar Veer ko uthata hai aur thodi der Veer ko shant karta hai..

Veer -"bhai mai sach keh raha hu teri aankhon ka color.. "

Raj veer ki baat ko kaatte hue kehta hai..

Raj -"mujhe bharosa hau tu sach keh raha hai aur mene bhi to bataya tha us marble jesi chij ka color light red tha.. "

Veer yeh sun kar thoda shant hota hai Raj ki taraf dekhte hue kehta hai...

Veer -"spider ke senses bahut tez hote hai aur tujhe spider se Senses mile.. "

Raj apna sar haa mai hilata hai veer kuch soch kar aage kehta hai..

Veer -"tune ek baar ant pe try kara ant pe try kara..?"

Raj haste hue kehta hai..

Raj -"ant ke pass esa kya hoga woh itni si to hoti hai.. "

Veer apna sar na mai hilata aur kehta hai..

Veer -"saale isliye tu last aate hai class mai ek ant apne shareer se 50× guna zada weight carry kar sakti hai aur scientists to yeh bhi kehta hai agar ek ant ka size ek human jitna hi gya to 2 din ke andar puri duniya khtm ho jayegi.. "

Raj ki yeh sun kar phat jati hai usse asli mai nahi pata tha esa bhi kuch hota hai..

Veer -"ab ant pe try kar Shyd usse tujhe uski strength mil jaye aur teri body bhi meri jesi ho jaye.. "

Raj hadbate hue kehta hai...

Raj -"ah.. ha chal kisi chiti ko dhundhte hai.. "

Veer ka dil mar raha tha apna sar phod de...

Veer -"bhai.. hum park mai hai niche dekh pehele hu hamari chalne ki wajah se bahut si ant mar gayi hai bas unhe touch kar.. "

Raj yeh sun kse niche dekhta hai to veer sach hi keh raha tha woh haste hue niche jhukta hai aur ek ant ki body ko touch karta hai..

Veer bhi usse bahut dhyan se dekh raha hota hai..

Raj ko firse wahi awaaz sunai deti hai..

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[Ant Strength]

[Rank: F]

Raj firse wahi kehta ha jo usne spider ke time pe kaha tha..

Raj -"STEAL"

Firse wahi hota hai ant ke andar se ek light red color ka marble nikalta hai jo es baar bhi Raj ke hath mai aa jata hai..

Veer chokte hue kehta hai..

Veer -"Raj yeh to kisi magic se kam nahi lag raha.."

Raj bhi apna sar han mai hilata hai aur us marble ko apne andr lene ke baare mai sochta hai aur woh light red chij Raj ke dil mai sama jati hai..

Isse Raj ki body mai koi change nahi hua tha usse samjh nahi aaya ki kuch hua hau bhu ya nahi..

Veer -"kya hua kuch feel ho raha hai? jese us time hua tha?"

Raj -"nahi kuch bhi alag feel nahi ho raha.. "

Veer kuch soch kar kehta hai..

Veer -"chal arm wrestling karte shyd isse kuch pata chale.."

Raj ko bhi yeh sahi lagta hai woh bhi park pe kisi bench pe arm wrestling ke liye jameen pe beth jata hai ahe apna arm bench pe rakh deta hai..

Veer jo school mai arm wrestling ka champion tha woh bhi wese hi beth jata hai aur dono dost arm wrestling karne lagte hai..

Veer jaan lagane ki sochta hai lekin Raj ka hath uski jagha se hila bhi nahi tha jab won Raj ko dekhta hai to uski firse phat jati hai..

Kyu? kyuki Raj ki aankhen firse blue se change hokar Light red hi gayi thi..

Raj -"Veer tu shuru to kar?"

Raj ko abhi tak yeh bhi pata nahi chala tha ki Raj ne jaan lagayi hai ya nahi..

Wahi Veer to raj ko aankhen phad kar dekh raha tha uski body wese hi thi lekin Raj ki strength normal se 50 guna badh gayi thi uska gala sukhne lagta hai aur woh Raj se uska hath chhodne ke liye bolta ha Raj ko lagta hai ki uska hath dhan se settle nahi hua tha isliye woh chhod deta hai aur veer turant do kadam piche hat jata hai aur tez tez saansein lene ke lagta hai..

Raj -"oye ab tujhe kya hua?" Raj ko samjh nahi aaya abhi to kuch hua bhi nahi aur yeh saansein kyu le raha tha..

Veer -"saale tu mujhse ab duur hi rahiyo mene apni puri jaan lagayi lekin tujhe pata tak nahi chala.. "

Raj bhi yeh sun kar khud shocked tha usse to laga tha ki veer bas apni pakad majboot kar raha hai usse kya pata tha ki veer ne woh apni puri jaan lagayi thi..

Raj yahi sab soch raha tha ki uski nazar firse ussi jagah jati hai jaha aur ants thi Veer kab yeh dekhta hai to usse smjh nahi aata ki raj ab waha Kyu dekh raha hai..

Raj waha jakr ek aur ant ki body ko touch karta hai aur uske andar se bhi wahi light red marble nikal jata hai..

Veer ko lagta hai ki Raj isse bhi absorb kar lega taaki aur powerful ho sake lekin uski soch ke ulat Raj veer ke paas aakar woh light red marble Veer ke hath mai rakh deta hai..

Raj -"dekh kya raha hai tu try kar shyd yeh marble tere andar bhi sama jaye.."

Veer to khud shocked mai tha matlab agar yeh marble uske andar aa gya to shyd uske pass bhi esi hi powers aa jaye woh yahi soch mai tha..

Raj -"saale kya soch raha hai bas isse absorb karne ke baare mai soch mene bhi wahi kara tha.. "

Veer turant wahi karta hai aur heraani ki baat yeh thi ki woh light red marble uske andar absorb ho jata hai lekin uski body bhi wesi hi thi lekin uski eye's ka color change ho kar light red ho gya tha..

Veer khushi mai Raj ko jor se gale laga leta hai..

Veer ko khud samjh nahi aa raha tha ki woh Raj ko thanks kese bole...

Raj -"saale chhod mujhe mai koi gay nahi hu
...." Shuru mai Veer ne Raj se yeh kaha tha ab Raj ne apna badla pura kar liya 😈

Veer mazak mai uske chest pe marta hai jiski wajah se ek second ke liye Raj ki aankhen blue se change hokar Light red ho jati hai..

Veer yeh baat notice karta hai aur kehta hai..

Veer -"shyd yeh marble ke color power ki rank batate hai jese tune bataya yeh ek F rank ability hai aur tune 1 rank F ability spider se li thi jiska color Light red tha aur ant se bhi 2 F rank ki ability mili hai jiska color bhi Light red tha.. "

Raj -"han ab mujhe bhi esa lag raha hai aur jab bhi mai us ability ka use karta hu to meri aankhon ka color automatic change ho jata hai.. "

Veer kuch soch kar kehta hai..

Veer -"teri aankhon ka color blue hai yeh konsi rank hogi jesi teri ability hai shyd yeh S rank ho.. " Gaming mai S sabse upar hota tha isliye Veer ko esa lag raha tha aur Raj ne bhi usse nahi bataya tha ki yeh konsi rank ki hai kyuki usse khud yaad nahi tha..

Raj yeh sun kar sochta hai to aur kab usse yaad aata hai to uski aankhen heraani se bahut badi ho jati hai..

Raj apna thuk nigalte hue kehta hai..

Raj -"yeh blue color SSS+ rank ki ability ko represent karta hai.. "

Yeh sunkar to Veer ka dil ek second ke liye dhadakna hi bhul jata hai usse lagta tha S hi sabse zada hota hai lekin SSS+ iski power kya hogi aur dekha jaye jesi Raj ki ability thi woh kisi ki bhi ability chura sakta tha esi skill ke liye SSS+ hi hona chaiye lekin agar itni badi rank hai to es ability ka kaam bas kisi ki ability churana hi nahi hoga..

Veer yahi sab soch raha tha ki usse Raj ki awaaz aati hai..

Raj -"chal aaja tere senses bhi badha deta hu uske liye pehle koi spider dhundte hai.. "

Veer -"mere senses acche hai mujhe iski koi jarurat nahi hai.. "

Raj -"yeh tere senses ko 10 guna badha degi jese mere senses ko badhaya tha.. "

Veer bhi es chij ke liye maan jata hai lekin abhi to unhe school jakr NOC deni thi isliye dono dost Veer ki bike pe beth kar apne school ke liye nikal jate hai..

Sant Valley school mai Raj padhta tha..

Unknown planet...

Raat ke samay mai mein ek khali maidaan mai 4 log khade hue the aur kisi baare mai baat kar rahe the un sabki hi umar 19 se 20 saal ke bich mai thi aur un sab ki aankhen alag alag colors ki thi waha abhi 3 ladke aur 1 ladki the..

(abhi ke liye mai ladko ko ladka 1 ese denote karunga..)

Ladka 1 -"woh kab tak aayegi....?"

Ladki -"woh apne ghar se bhag kar aa rahi hai time to lagta hi hai isme.. "

Ladka 2 -"yarr jldi karo mujhe bahut bhukh lag rahi hai sabse pehle kahi jakr khana khaunga.. "

Ladka 3 -"khana baad mai kha lenge pehle yeh batao hum log jayenge kaha aur bina hamaari families ki powers se hume koi dhan ka teacher bhi nahi milega jo hume sikha sake?"

Ladka 1 -"hume sabse pehle Devpur chalna chaiye...?"

Ladka 3 -"yeh konsi jagah ka naam hai?"

Ladki -"mujhe bhi nahi pata...?"

Ladka 1-"yeh yaha se 1,000,000 km jitna duur to hona hi chaiye... "

Yeh sunkar baki teeno usse aankhen phade dekhne lagte hai...

Ladka 1 -"Arre agar hum aas pass ke kisi rajya ya shehar mai gaye to hum sabki family hume ek din mai hi dhund lengi.. "

Woh teeno es baat pe kuch bol pata kabhi unhe aasmaan mai ek dragon ki awaaz aati hai..

"Roooaaaarrrr.. "

Jab sab aasmaan mai dekhte hai to us dragon ke upar ek ladki khadi hui thi jiske baal kandhe tak aa rahe the aur chand ki roshni mai uska chehra bahut zada khubsurat lag raha tha upar se upar se woh dragon ke upar khadi hui thi aur uski aankhen blue color ki thi..



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Unknown Location in Earth..

Ek lab mai kareeb 20 se 30 Earth ke best scientists kaam kar rahe the lekin unke experiment DNA ke upar tha...



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Jese ek insaan ke andar ANIMAL DNA daalne ke upar sunne mai atpata lagta hai lekin ek janwar ki taaqat insaan se kayi zada hoti hai ab agar yeh experiment successful ho gya to kon jane yeh log iska use kis tarah se karenge..

(Abhi ke liye Scientists ko S1 karke denote karunga..)

S1 -"sir yeh formula ban to gya hai lekin isse subject mushkil se 1 min hi zinda reh paya aur hamaare baki saare subjects test mai khtm ho gaye hai.. "

S1 ek insaan ke piche khade ho kar yeh keh raha tha kyuki abhi woh aadmi apne subject matlab ek insaan ko dekh raha tha jiske andar bat matlab chamkadar ka DNA daala gya tha taaki uski sunne ki shakti bahut zada badh jaye lekin hua kuch ulta un insaan ka shareer es bahut bade change ko handle nahi kar paya aur dono alag alag DNA ek insaan ki body mai bhala kese reh sakte hai lekin aaj thoda alag hua aur 1 min se kam samay tak dono DNA balance the bas ab es time limit ko badhana tha..

Boss -"tumhe jo karna hai karo lekin mujhe bas result ke liye hi yaha bulaya karo aur ab aur subjects dhundna shuru kardo... "

Lekin unme se ek Scientists esa tha jiske dimaag mai ek esa idea aaya tha jo bahut bura tha aur woh es baare mai apne boss ko batane ke baare mai sochta hai..

Scientists -"boss mere pass ek idea hai.. "

Aur woh apna idea sabko batata hai..

S1 -"tum pagal to nahi ho gaye ho ye.. yeh bahut bekaar chij hai jo tumne sochi hai.. "

Boss -"abhi humans pe hi try karo agr jab bhi koi accha result na mile to kab yeh test karna... "

Yeh bolkar boss waha se chale jate hai aur sab us scientists ko ajeeb nazaron se dekhne lagte hai..

[Note : Aakhir us scientists ka esa kya idea tha jisse sunkar sab log hi itna dar gaye jinke liye humans bas 1 subject tha aur woh paancho kyu apne ghar se bhage hai ab en sabse hamaara hero kese connect hoga dekhne wali baat hogi aur aap sabhi ko kya lagta hai STEALTH ability aur kya kya kar sakti hai.. ]
Nice update....
 
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This ability is a cheat! 🙃...lag nhi rha koi bhi villian hamare hero ke aage tikne wala hai.

Shayd scientist log humanoid monsters bana rhe ho?

Btw bechare Akash Bhaiya bahut pachtane wale hai🥲
SSS+ ability hai and abhi to ed ability ka bahut kuch hai..

Humanoid..

Hamaara hero to kuch na kar raha Payal hi attract ho rahi hai..
 

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Good update... But 1 cheez thori ajeeb lagi. Raj ability chura k veer ko b de deta hai. System Raj k under hai to sub powers Raj hi ko milni chahye. Haa thore time k liye kisi ko de de to thik jesy aksir movies mai hota hai. Wese writer ap ho to ap apne hisaab se hi story continue karo gay. Lekn hero 1 hi hona chahye.. Or powers b usi k pas.... And good luck for next updates ❤️❤️❤️
 

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Good update... But 1 cheez thori ajeeb lagi. Raj ability chura k veer ko b de deta hai. System Raj k under hai to sub powers Raj hi ko milni chahye. Haa thore time k liye kisi ko de de to thik jesy aksir movies mai hota hai. Wese writer ap ho to ap apne hisaab se hi story continue karo gay. Lekn hero 1 hi hona chahye.. Or powers b usi k pas.... And good luck for next updates ❤️❤️❤️
Bro woh ability Raj kisi ko bhi de sakta hai and aage aane wale updates mai jo villan hoga matlab enemy uske liye Raj kaafi nahi hoga aur rahi baat veer ko powers dene ki to Raj ek hi ability ko baar baar absorb nahi kar sakta isliye usne es ability ko veer ko dene ke baare mai socha..
 
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Good update... But 1 cheez thori ajeeb lagi. Raj ability chura k veer ko b de deta hai. System Raj k under hai to sub powers Raj hi ko milni chahye. Haa thore time k liye kisi ko de de to thik jesy aksir movies mai hota hai. Wese writer ap ho to ap apne hisaab se hi story continue karo gay. Lekn hero 1 hi hona chahye.. Or powers b usi k pas.... And good luck for next updates ❤️❤️❤️
Hero 1 hi hoga..
 
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