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Shukriya bhai aap ki story kab aa rahi hai?Okk bhai jaisa AAP kahe ..
Shukriya bhai aap ki story kab aa rahi hai?Okk bhai jaisa AAP kahe ..
Bhai plot wagera sab soch leeya hai ... Bas characters set kar rahe hai uska baad update denga ...Shukriya bhai aap ki story kab aa rahi hai?
Story kis base pe hai fantasy, incest ya kya?Bhai plot wagera sab soch leeya hai ... Bas characters set kar rahe hai uska baad update denga ...
Thriller action hoga ...Story kis base pe hai fantasy, incest ya kya?
Romance ..Story kis base pe hai fantasy, incest ya kya?
Aree bro koi na update dete rho basAB SE WEEK MAI 4 UPDATES AAYENGE TAAKI UPDATE PROPER WAY MAI LIKH SAKU..
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Mujhe bhi raat ka time hi mil pata hai update likhne ke liye I hope aap sab bhi samajhenge
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Secret About Ring..
Raj abhi academy ke room mai betha hua tha yeh room zada bada nahi tha bas letne ki hi jagha thi yaha..
Raj apni aankhen band karta hai aur us ring pe concentrate karte kehta hai..
Raj -"Lilith....?"
Kabhi Raj ki soul us ring ke andar chali jati hai aur uske samne ek ladki jisne bahut tight kapde pehene hue the aur ek singhaasan pe bethi thi uske sar pe 2 seeng the..
Raj jese hi dekhte hai woh apna thuk nigal leta hai kyuki yeh abhi bahut zada kaamuk lag rahi thi aur Raj ko ispe bahut gussa bhi aa raha tha lekin iski khubsurti aur jism dekh kar woh ispe gussa bhi nahi kar pa raha tha..
Chalo ab iske baare mai jaan lete hai ka Raj Earth se gayab ho kar planet Eris pe aaya tha to Raj ki aatma uski body mai nahi thi es ring ke andar aa gayi thi..
Jab Raj apni aankhen kholta hai to usse bas andhera hi andhera dikhai de raha tha..
Raj yeh dekh kar bahut zada dar jata hai aur idhar udhar bhagne lagta hai chillata hai..
Raj -"veeeeerr, maaaaa koi hai mai kaha hu.."
Raj ki aankhon mai aansu the usse kuch samjh nahi aa raha tha woh abhi kaha hai usse esa lag raha tha ku woh mar gya hai..
Kabhi Raj ko ek bahut tez roshni ka ehsaas hota hai aur jab woh samne dekhta hai to waha apne aap ek singhaasan banne laga tha yeh dekh kar Raj hadbate hue khada ho jata hai aur piche hone lagta hai lekin 1 kadam piche lene ke baad Raj hil tak nahi paa raha tha usse esa lag raha tha ki uski body kisi ne freeze kardi hai..
Raj -"aakh.....aakhir yeh s.. sab kya ho raha hai..?"
Kabhi Raj ko singhaasan ke pass se kisi ladki ki awaaz aati hai aur jab Raj waha dekhta hai to waha koi nahi tha..
Awaaz -"yahi hum dono ki zindagi mai likha hai aur ab jo ho raha hai woh hona hi tha.."
Raj -"ko.. kon hai waha samn.. samne aao.."
Raj ke itne kehna hi tha ki us singhaasan pe ek bahut khubsurat ladki prakat hone lagti hai niche se lekr upar tak uska jism particles se bane ja raha tha..
Jese jese us ladki ka shareer bane ja raha tha Raj ke dil ki dhadkan bullet train se tez dhadak raha tha aakhir dhadke bhi kyu na aakhir uska shareer ban to raha tha lekin usne ek bhi kapde nahi pehene hue the woh ek dam nirvastra thi..
Hamaare hero ne to aaj tak porn bhi nahi dekhi thi aur yaha aaj itni khubsurat ladki ko bina kapdo ke dekh kar uske dil ki dhadkan tez hona to normal hi tha..
Ladki muskurate kehti hai..
Ladki -"esa kya dekh rahe ho kabhi kisi ladki ko bina kapdo ke nahi dekha..?"
Raj us ladki ke bolne se apne hosh mai aata hai aur side kai dekhne lagta hai uska dimaag to chalna hi band kar diya tha..
Woh ladki apni singhaasan se uth kar dheere dheere Raj ke pass aane lagti hai esa lag raha tha woh hawa mai chal rahi hai kyuki yaha uske kadmo ki koi awaaz hi nahi aa rahi thi uske baal silver color ke the jo uski kamar tak aa rahe the Raj ko to uske pass aane ka ehsaas tak nahi hota..
Woh ladki Raj ke chehre pe apna ek hath rakhti hai aur badi manmohak awaaz mai kehti hai..
Ladki -"kya baat hai mai acchi nahi dikhti jo apna chehra niche kar liya.."
Raj itne pass se uski awaaz sun kar heraan ho jata aur kab samne dekhta hai to us ladki ka khubsurat chehra thik uske samne hi mojuud tha..
Raj hadbate hue piche hone ki koshish karta hai lekin uski puri body freeze si ho gayi thi..
Us ladki ko Raj ki esi haalat dekh kar bahut maza aa raha tha..
Woh apni hassi kaabu karke kehti hai..
Ladki -"janna nahi chahoge hum abhi kaha hai aur mai kon hu..?"
Raj yeh sun kar turant uski taraf dekhta hai aur puchta usse pehele hi uski nazar uske bahut bade vishaal sthano pe chali jati hai..
Yeh dekh kar us ladki ko bura nahi lagta hai aur woh apne kehti hai..
Ladki -"mera naam lilith hai aur tumhari aatma abhi ussi ring ke andar hai jo us cave mai mojuud thi.."
Raj yeh sunkar heraan ho jata hai aur uske sthano se apna dhyan hata kar uske chehre ki taraf dekh kar kehta hai..
Raj -"kyaaaaaaaaaaaa.....?"
Lilith -"han yaar ab isme itna chillane ki kya baat hai.."
Lilith apne kaan pe hath rakh kar kehti hai..
Raj -"me.. mer.. meri aatma ky.. kya mai mar gya hu..?"
Lilith apne sar pe hath rakh kar kehri hai..
Lilith -"nahi abhi to tum zinda ho bas mai tumhari aatma ko iske andar lekr aa gayi hu.."
Raj yeh sun kar sochta hai aakhir yeh kon hai aur woh ring kya thi..
Raj -"meri aatma ko tum ring ke andar lekr aayi ho lekin kyu.."
Lilith muskurakar kehti hai uske chehre pe muskurahat bahut zada khubsurat lag rahi thi..
Lilith -"tumse baat karne ke liye aur itni si baat pe tum itna chilla rahe ho jab tumhe pata chalega ki tum kaha ho to kitna chillaoge.."
Woh has kar kehti hai..
Raj yeh sun kar apni aankhen chhoti karke puchta hai..
Raj -"ma.. mai kaha hu America ya India se bahar.."
Lilith -"wo.. woh tum abhi prithvi pe nahi ho.."
Raj -"kya ma.. mai earth pe nahi hu to kaha.. kaha hu?"
Lilith gehri saans lekr kehti hai..
Lilith -"us greh pe jispe mai kabhi nahi aana chahti thi lekin meri majboori dekho mujhe yaha waps aana pada.."
Yeh kehte hue usse aankhon mai dukh saaf dikhai de raha tha..
Raj -"mat.. matlb hum hai kaha..?"
Lilith -"Eris yeh bhi prithvi ki tarah hi ek greh hai.."
Raj chilla kar kehta hai..
Raj -"tumhaari himmat kese hui bina mujhse pucha mujhe kisi aur greh pe lekr aane ki.."
Lilith -"mene abhi tumhe bataya yeh meri majboori thi mujhe khud es greh pe kabhi nahi aana tha lekin, shyd meri aur mere saathiyon ki kismat mai yahi duniya likhi hui hai aur mujhe yaha tumhe bhi isliye lekr aana pada kyuki tumhi ek ho jo meri madad kar sakte ho.."
Raj -"mai tumhari madad aur tumhare saathi kon hai.."
Lilith gehri saans lekr kehti hai..
Lilith -"DEMONS..."
Bas yahi sunna baaki reh gya tha lekin kuch esa bhi tha ji abhi baaki tha Lilith aage kehti hai..
"Aur mai demon queen hu.."
Yeh sunkar to Raj ki haalat marne jesi hi gayi thi matlab uske samne jo ladki nangi khadi hui hai woh ek queen hai aur woh bhi shaitanon ki queen
Lilith -"kya hua tumhe..?"
Raj -"tu.. aap mujhe yaha lekr kyu aayi hai plzzz mujhe mere ghar jane dijiye.."
Lilith -"mai tumhe tumhare hi ghar lekr aayi ho.."
Raj ki es baat ka matlab bilkul samjh nahi aata..
Raj -"mat.. matlb kya hai aapka?"
Lilith -"Tum bhi meri tarah Eris se hi ho tumhe ko mujhe shukriya kehna chaiye mai tumhe tumhare greh pe lekr aayi hu.."
Yeh baat sunkar Raj heraani se Lilith ko dekhne lagta hai...
Raj -"ma.. mai yaha se kese ho sakta hu?"
Lilith -"kya tumhe kabhi apni en ability ke baare mai dhyan se socha hai, jesi ability tumhare pass hai wese ability prithvi pe rehne wale insaano ke pass hona namumkin hai...."
Raj yeh sun kar khamosh ho jata hai kyuki es sawaal ka jawaab uske pass bhi nahi tha..
Lilith -"insaan apne matlab ke liye demons ka hadd se zada shikaar karne lage the jabki hum demons apne area mai rehkar shanti se rehte hai aur magicians demons ke magic core ke liye unka hadd se zada shikaar karne lage the.."
Raj -"Demon ka magic core yeh kya hota hai?"
Lilith emotional hokar bata to rahi thi lekin woh es baare mai bhul hi gayi ki es ladke ko magic ke baare mai kuch nahi pata isliye woh usse har ek chij batane lagti hai (mene pehele bata diya hai isliye isse skip karo.."
Raj pura heraan ho gya tha es baare mai jan kar..
Raj -"mujhe magic yeh sab nahi sikhna mujhe bas apni duniya wapas jana hai mujhe prithvi pe wapas bhejo.."
Lilith -"woh tum ab wapas nahi ja paoge yeh meri aatma hai aur jitni bhi mere pass energy thi usse mene tumhe yaha Eris peteleport kar diya, agar tumhe firse prithvi pe jana hai to tumhe meri baaki hisso ko bhi dhundna hoga.."
Raj -"kya.. konse hisse..?"
Lilith -"pehle meri puri kahani jaan lo insaano aur magician ke hadd se zada demons ka shikaar hone ki wajah se mene ek faisla liya tha apne sabhi demons ke sath Eris ko chhod kar ek dusri duniya mai jaane ka lekin agar hum demons Eris se chale jate to magician ko magic cores nahi mil pate jinse unhe magic weapons aur magic core bech sake, isliye har prajati ne hume roka aur us samay ek mahayuddh hua tha jisme ek taraf bas demons aur dusri taraf magician, knights, elfes, har ek sect ke powerful log mojuud the itne logo ke samne hum zada mahino tak nahi tik paye..
woh mahayuddh 6 mahine tak chala tha jisme dono taraf ke croro log maar gaye aur ant mai har ek sect ke powerful leaders, elfe kingdom ke king, human kingdom ke king, har group ke leader ne mujhe charo taraf se gher liya aur meri powers ko 13 alag alag ring mai daal diya jinme se ek ring ke andar meri aatma trap daal di jo abhi tumhare pass hai aur baaki 12 rings ke andar meri taaqatein daal di abhi Eris pe 3 ring hai aur baaki 9 ring alag alag 3 duniya pe rakhi gayi hai meri aatma ke bina mai firse zinda nahi ho sakti thi...
Isliye meri aatma ko prithvi pe rakha gya aur us ring ko koi le na sake isliye us ring ko tumhare khoon se sealed kara gya isliye koi bhi es ring ke pass nahi aa sakta tha shivaay tumhare..."
Raj -"mera..mera khoon se kyu?"
Lilith -"mujhe es baare mai zada nahi pata kyuki kab tak mai seal ho gayi thi..."
Raj -"to mujhe ab tumhari rings dhundni padegi taaki mai wapas prithvi pe ja saku...?"
Lilith -"han ab tumhare pass meri aatma hai isliye tumhe baaki rings ko es ring ke sath milana hoga aur pehli ring ke milne ke baad tum waps prithvi pe teleport ho paoge.."
Raj -"thik hai batao woh ring kaha hai..?"
Lilith -"mujhe kya pata.."
Raj -"tumhe nahi pata..?"
Lilith na mai apna sar hilati hai aur kehti hai..
Lilith -"bas mujhe apni taaqat ke 3 hisso ka Eris pe ehsaas ho raha hai lekin mai yeh nahi bata pa rahi woh hisse kaha hai shyd unki energy seal karo gayi hai lekin woh mera hi ek ansh hai isliye mujhe bas ehsaas ho raha hai.."
Raj -"to ab mai es duniya mai kya karu..?"
Lilith -"tumhe ek magus master banna chaiye unhe us ladaai ke baare mai aur mere hisso ke baare mai bahut kuch pata hoga shyd waha se tumhe kuch mil jaye.."
Raj -"ab yeh magus master kya hota hai..?"
Lilith -"magus master ek group ha jinke samne kisi rajya ke raja ko bhi jhukna padta hai inka kaam logo ko magic sikhana hi hota hai aur unhe guide karna aur tumhare pass jo ability hai usse tum shyd jld hi ek 9 grade magus master ban jao..."
Raj -"matlab meri mistakes dekhne wali ability...?"
Lilith -"han es ability ka rank to mujhe bhi samjh nahi aa raha kya hai aur esi ability shyd hi kisi aur ko mili ho..?"
Raj -"mai bas tumhari ek ring dhundunga uske baad mai kabhi es greh pe nahi aane wala.."
Lilith kuch soch kar han keh deti hai..
Raj -"kya tumhare pass kapde nahi hai..?"
Lilith -"nahi.."
Raj ki aatma Lilith se baat karke us ring se bahar aa jati hai....
Parvesh pariksha kal thi..
Raj abhi us kamre mai betha hua soch raha tha kya kare..
Aur woh Lilith se puchta hai..
Lilith -"tumhe yeh sehar ghum lena chaiye aur kitna ho sake iske baare mai jaan bhi lena chaiye kyuki yeh sab kuch tumhare liye ek dam naya hai.."
Raj ko bhi yeh sahi lagta hai aur woh academy se bahar chala jata hai academy mai sabko Raj bhi ek student lag raha tha jo yaha parvesh pariksha dene aaya tha Raj academy ke bahar aakr ese hi kahi bhi ghumne lagta hai..
Earth..
Mahendra abhi ek lab mai tha aur uske sath puri ek new team thi scientists ki aur es baar usne yeh apni company mai kara tha taaki koi us tak na pahuch sake..
Ek scientists Raj ke khoon ko study kar raha tha aur khoon ko study karke woh bahut zada heraani se Mahendra se kehta hai..
S -"sir yeh khoon insaan ka nahi hai infact yeh khoon bahut zada alag hai es khoon ke andar bahut small amount mai golden particles move ho rahe hai jo human blood mai kabhi nahi hote..."
Mahendra bhi yeh sunkar heraan ho jata hai aur kehta hai..
Mahendra -"agar hum iske khoon ke DNA se ek mutate banaye to woh kitna powerful hoga..?"
En sabhi ko mahendra ke experiment ke baare mai pata tha..
S -"sir hume yeh test karna hoga bina test kare hume kuch bhi nahi bata sakte.."
Mahendra jldi se test karo..
Eris..
Raj ghumta ghumta ek gaanv ke pass aa gya tha yaha sabhi was hi ghum rahe the Raj ne woh token apni pocket mai ek chhote se bag mai daala hua tha..
Yaha alag fruits beke ja rahe the Raj ko chalte chalte ehsaas hota hai ki usse us bag ka ehsaas nahi ho raha..
Raj jab check karta hai to uska woh bag uske piche nahi tha..
Raj -"fuck yaha bhi chori hoti hai.."
[Note - es update mai words mistakes hui hongi please abhi ke liye ignore kar dena abhi bahar hu aur bina dhan se padhe update post kar diya]
Thriller action hoga ...
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Romance ..
Nice update
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