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[Tiger 786]

UPDATE-11
Secret About Ring.. ​

Raj abhi academy ke room mai betha hua tha yeh room zada bada nahi tha bas letne ki hi jagha thi yaha..

Raj apni aankhen band karta hai aur us ring pe concentrate karte kehta hai..

Raj -"Lilith....?"

Kabhi Raj ki soul us ring ke andar chali jati hai aur uske samne ek ladki jisne bahut tight kapde pehene hue the aur ek singhaasan pe bethi thi uske sar pe 2 seeng the..

Raj jese hi dekhte hai woh apna thuk nigal leta hai kyuki yeh abhi bahut zada kaamuk lag rahi thi aur Raj ko ispe bahut gussa bhi aa raha tha lekin iski khubsurti aur jism dekh kar woh ispe gussa bhi nahi kar pa raha tha..

Chalo ab iske baare mai jaan lete hai ka Raj Earth se gayab ho kar planet Eris pe aaya tha to Raj ki aatma uski body mai nahi thi es ring ke andar aa gayi thi..

Jab Raj apni aankhen kholta hai to usse bas andhera hi andhera dikhai de raha tha..

Raj yeh dekh kar bahut zada dar jata hai aur idhar udhar bhagne lagta hai chillata hai..

Raj -"veeeeerr, maaaaa koi hai mai kaha hu.."

Raj ki aankhon mai aansu the usse kuch samjh nahi aa raha tha woh abhi kaha hai usse esa lag raha tha ku woh mar gya hai..

Kabhi Raj ko ek bahut tez roshni ka ehsaas hota hai aur jab woh samne dekhta hai to waha apne aap ek singhaasan banne laga tha yeh dekh kar Raj hadbate hue khada ho jata hai aur piche hone lagta hai lekin 1 kadam piche lene ke baad Raj hil tak nahi paa raha tha usse esa lag raha tha ki uski body kisi ne freeze kardi hai..

Raj -"aakh.....aakhir yeh s.. sab kya ho raha hai..?"

Kabhi Raj ko singhaasan ke pass se kisi ladki ki awaaz aati hai aur jab Raj waha dekhta hai to waha koi nahi tha..

Awaaz -"yahi hum dono ki zindagi mai likha hai aur ab jo ho raha hai woh hona hi tha.."

Raj -"ko.. kon hai waha samn.. samne aao.."

Raj ke itne kehna hi tha ki us singhaasan pe ek bahut khubsurat ladki prakat hone lagti hai niche se lekr upar tak uska jism particles se bane ja raha tha..

Jese jese us ladki ka shareer bane ja raha tha Raj ke dil ki dhadkan bullet train se tez dhadak raha tha aakhir dhadke bhi kyu na aakhir uska shareer ban to raha tha lekin usne ek bhi kapde nahi pehene hue the woh ek dam nirvastra thi..

Hamaare hero ne to aaj tak porn bhi nahi dekhi thi aur yaha aaj itni khubsurat ladki ko bina kapdo ke dekh kar uske dil ki dhadkan tez hona to normal hi tha..

Ladki muskurate kehti hai..

Ladki -"esa kya dekh rahe ho kabhi kisi ladki ko bina kapdo ke nahi dekha..?"

Raj us ladki ke bolne se apne hosh mai aata hai aur side kai dekhne lagta hai uska dimaag to chalna hi band kar diya tha..

Woh ladki apni singhaasan se uth kar dheere dheere Raj ke pass aane lagti hai esa lag raha tha woh hawa mai chal rahi hai kyuki yaha uske kadmo ki koi awaaz hi nahi aa rahi thi uske baal silver color ke the jo uski kamar tak aa rahe the Raj ko to uske pass aane ka ehsaas tak nahi hota..

Woh ladki Raj ke chehre pe apna ek hath rakhti hai aur badi manmohak awaaz mai kehti hai..

Ladki -"kya baat hai mai acchi nahi dikhti jo apna chehra niche kar liya.."

Raj itne pass se uski awaaz sun kar heraan ho jata aur kab samne dekhta hai to us ladki ka khubsurat chehra thik uske samne hi mojuud tha..

Raj hadbate hue piche hone ki koshish karta hai lekin uski puri body freeze si ho gayi thi..

Us ladki ko Raj ki esi haalat dekh kar bahut maza aa raha tha..

Woh apni hassi kaabu karke kehti hai..

Ladki -"janna nahi chahoge hum abhi kaha hai aur mai kon hu..?"

Raj yeh sun kar turant uski taraf dekhta hai aur puchta usse pehele hi uski nazar uske bahut bade vishaal sthano pe chali jati hai..

Yeh dekh kar us ladki ko bura nahi lagta hai aur woh apne kehti hai..

Ladki -"mera naam lilith hai aur tumhari aatma abhi ussi ring ke andar hai jo us cave mai mojuud thi.."

Raj yeh sunkar heraan ho jata hai aur uske sthano se apna dhyan hata kar uske chehre ki taraf dekh kar kehta hai..

Raj -"kyaaaaaaaaaaaa.....?"

Lilith -"han yaar ab isme itna chillane ki kya baat hai.."

Lilith apne kaan pe hath rakh kar kehti hai..

Raj -"me.. mer.. meri aatma ky.. kya mai mar gya hu..?"

Lilith apne sar pe hath rakh kar kehri hai..

Lilith -"nahi abhi to tum zinda ho bas mai tumhari aatma ko iske andar lekr aa gayi hu.."

Raj yeh sun kar sochta hai aakhir yeh kon hai aur woh ring kya thi..

Raj -"meri aatma ko tum ring ke andar lekr aayi ho lekin kyu.."

Lilith muskurakar kehti hai uske chehre pe muskurahat bahut zada khubsurat lag rahi thi..

Lilith -"tumse baat karne ke liye aur itni si baat pe tum itna chilla rahe ho jab tumhe pata chalega ki tum kaha ho to kitna chillaoge.."

Woh has kar kehti hai..

Raj yeh sun kar apni aankhen chhoti karke puchta hai..

Raj -"ma.. mai kaha hu America ya India se bahar.."

Lilith -"wo.. woh tum abhi prithvi pe nahi ho.."

Raj -"kya ma.. mai earth pe nahi hu to kaha.. kaha hu?"

Lilith gehri saans lekr kehti hai..

Lilith -"us greh pe jispe mai kabhi nahi aana chahti thi lekin meri majboori dekho mujhe yaha waps aana pada.."

Yeh kehte hue usse aankhon mai dukh saaf dikhai de raha tha..

Raj -"mat.. matlb hum hai kaha..?"

Lilith -"Eris yeh bhi prithvi ki tarah hi ek greh hai.."

Raj chilla kar kehta hai..

Raj -"tumhaari himmat kese hui bina mujhse pucha mujhe kisi aur greh pe lekr aane ki.."

Lilith -"mene abhi tumhe bataya yeh meri majboori thi mujhe khud es greh pe kabhi nahi aana tha lekin, shyd meri aur mere saathiyon ki kismat mai yahi duniya likhi hui hai aur mujhe yaha tumhe bhi isliye lekr aana pada kyuki tumhi ek ho jo meri madad kar sakte ho.."

Raj -"mai tumhari madad aur tumhare saathi kon hai.."

Lilith gehri saans lekr kehti hai..

Lilith -"DEMONS..."

Bas yahi sunna baaki reh gya tha lekin kuch esa bhi tha ji abhi baaki tha Lilith aage kehti hai..

"Aur mai demon queen hu.."

Yeh sunkar to Raj ki haalat marne jesi hi gayi thi matlab uske samne jo ladki nangi khadi hui hai woh ek queen hai aur woh bhi shaitanon ki queen

Lilith -"kya hua tumhe..?"

Raj -"tu.. aap mujhe yaha lekr kyu aayi hai plzzz mujhe mere ghar jane dijiye.."

Lilith -"mai tumhe tumhare hi ghar lekr aayi ho.."

Raj ki es baat ka matlab bilkul samjh nahi aata..

Raj -"mat.. matlb kya hai aapka?"

Lilith -"Tum bhi meri tarah Eris se hi ho tumhe ko mujhe shukriya kehna chaiye mai tumhe tumhare greh pe lekr aayi hu.."

Yeh baat sunkar Raj heraani se Lilith ko dekhne lagta hai...

Raj -"ma.. mai yaha se kese ho sakta hu?"

Lilith -"kya tumhe kabhi apni en ability ke baare mai dhyan se socha hai, jesi ability tumhare pass hai wese ability prithvi pe rehne wale insaano ke pass hona namumkin hai...."

Raj yeh sun kar khamosh ho jata hai kyuki es sawaal ka jawaab uske pass bhi nahi tha..

Lilith -"insaan apne matlab ke liye demons ka hadd se zada shikaar karne lage the jabki hum demons apne area mai rehkar shanti se rehte hai aur magicians demons ke magic core ke liye unka hadd se zada shikaar karne lage the.."

Raj -"Demon ka magic core yeh kya hota hai?"

Lilith emotional hokar bata to rahi thi lekin woh es baare mai bhul hi gayi ki es ladke ko magic ke baare mai kuch nahi pata isliye woh usse har ek chij batane lagti hai (mene pehele bata diya hai isliye isse skip karo.."

Raj pura heraan ho gya tha es baare mai jan kar..

Raj -"mujhe magic yeh sab nahi sikhna mujhe bas apni duniya wapas jana hai mujhe prithvi pe wapas bhejo.."

Lilith -"woh tum ab wapas nahi ja paoge yeh meri aatma hai aur jitni bhi mere pass energy thi usse mene tumhe yaha Eris peteleport kar diya, agar tumhe firse prithvi pe jana hai to tumhe meri baaki hisso ko bhi dhundna hoga.."

Raj -"kya.. konse hisse..?"

Lilith -"pehle meri puri kahani jaan lo insaano aur magician ke hadd se zada demons ka shikaar hone ki wajah se mene ek faisla liya tha apne sabhi demons ke sath Eris ko chhod kar ek dusri duniya mai jaane ka lekin agar hum demons Eris se chale jate to magician ko magic cores nahi mil pate jinse unhe magic weapons aur magic core bech sake, isliye har prajati ne hume roka aur us samay ek mahayuddh hua tha jisme ek taraf bas demons aur dusri taraf magician, knights, elfes, har ek sect ke powerful log mojuud the itne logo ke samne hum zada mahino tak nahi tik paye..

woh mahayuddh 6 mahine tak chala tha jisme dono taraf ke croro log maar gaye aur ant mai har ek sect ke powerful leaders, elfe kingdom ke king, human kingdom ke king, har group ke leader ne mujhe charo taraf se gher liya aur meri powers ko 13 alag alag ring mai daal diya jinme se ek ring ke andar meri aatma trap daal di jo abhi tumhare pass hai aur baaki 12 rings ke andar meri taaqatein daal di abhi Eris pe 3 ring hai aur baaki 9 ring alag alag 3 duniya pe rakhi gayi hai meri aatma ke bina mai firse zinda nahi ho sakti thi...

Isliye meri aatma ko prithvi pe rakha gya aur us ring ko koi le na sake isliye us ring ko tumhare khoon se sealed kara gya isliye koi bhi es ring ke pass nahi aa sakta tha shivaay tumhare..."

Raj -"mera..mera khoon se kyu?"

Lilith -"mujhe es baare mai zada nahi pata kyuki kab tak mai seal ho gayi thi..."

Raj -"to mujhe ab tumhari rings dhundni padegi taaki mai wapas prithvi pe ja saku...?"

Lilith -"han ab tumhare pass meri aatma hai isliye tumhe baaki rings ko es ring ke sath milana hoga aur pehli ring ke milne ke baad tum waps prithvi pe teleport ho paoge.."

Raj -"thik hai batao woh ring kaha hai..?"

Lilith -"mujhe kya pata.."

Raj -"tumhe nahi pata..?"

Lilith na mai apna sar hilati hai aur kehti hai..

Lilith -"bas mujhe apni taaqat ke 3 hisso ka Eris pe ehsaas ho raha hai lekin mai yeh nahi bata pa rahi woh hisse kaha hai shyd unki energy seal karo gayi hai lekin woh mera hi ek ansh hai isliye mujhe bas ehsaas ho raha hai.."

Raj -"to ab mai es duniya mai kya karu..?"

Lilith -"tumhe ek magus master banna chaiye unhe us ladaai ke baare mai aur mere hisso ke baare mai bahut kuch pata hoga shyd waha se tumhe kuch mil jaye.."

Raj -"ab yeh magus master kya hota hai..?"

Lilith -"magus master ek group ha jinke samne kisi rajya ke raja ko bhi jhukna padta hai inka kaam logo ko magic sikhana hi hota hai aur unhe guide karna aur tumhare pass jo ability hai usse tum shyd jld hi ek 9 grade magus master ban jao..."

Raj -"matlab meri mistakes dekhne wali ability...?"

Lilith -"han es ability ka rank to mujhe bhi samjh nahi aa raha kya hai aur esi ability shyd hi kisi aur ko mili ho..?"

Raj -"mai bas tumhari ek ring dhundunga uske baad mai kabhi es greh pe nahi aane wala.."

Lilith kuch soch kar han keh deti hai..

Raj -"kya tumhare pass kapde nahi hai..?"

Lilith -"nahi.."

Raj ki aatma Lilith se baat karke us ring se bahar aa jati hai....

Parvesh pariksha kal thi..

Raj abhi us kamre mai betha hua soch raha tha kya kare..

Aur woh Lilith se puchta hai..

Lilith -"tumhe yeh sehar ghum lena chaiye aur kitna ho sake iske baare mai jaan bhi lena chaiye kyuki yeh sab kuch tumhare liye ek dam naya hai.."

Raj ko bhi yeh sahi lagta hai aur woh academy se bahar chala jata hai academy mai sabko Raj bhi ek student lag raha tha jo yaha parvesh pariksha dene aaya tha Raj academy ke bahar aakr ese hi kahi bhi ghumne lagta hai..

Earth..

Mahendra abhi ek lab mai tha aur uske sath puri ek new team thi scientists ki aur es baar usne yeh apni company mai kara tha taaki koi us tak na pahuch sake..

Ek scientists Raj ke khoon ko study kar raha tha aur khoon ko study karke woh bahut zada heraani se Mahendra se kehta hai..

S -"sir yeh khoon insaan ka nahi hai infact yeh khoon bahut zada alag hai es khoon ke andar bahut small amount mai golden particles move ho rahe hai jo human blood mai kabhi nahi hote..."

Mahendra bhi yeh sunkar heraan ho jata hai aur kehta hai..

Mahendra -"agar hum iske khoon ke DNA se ek mutate banaye to woh kitna powerful hoga..?"

En sabhi ko mahendra ke experiment ke baare mai pata tha..

S -"sir hume yeh test karna hoga bina test kare hume kuch bhi nahi bata sakte.."

Mahendra jldi se test karo..

Eris..

Raj ghumta ghumta ek gaanv ke pass aa gya tha yaha sabhi was hi ghum rahe the Raj ne woh token apni pocket mai ek chhote se bag mai daala hua tha..

Yaha alag fruits beke ja rahe the Raj ko chalte chalte ehsaas hota hai ki usse us bag ka ehsaas nahi ho raha..

Raj jab check karta hai to uska woh bag uske piche nahi tha..

Raj -"fuck yaha bhi chori hoti hai.."

[Note - es update mai words mistakes hui hongi please abhi ke liye ignore kar dena abhi bahar hu aur bina dhan se padhe update post kar diya]

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UPDATE-11
Secret About Ring.. ​

Raj abhi academy ke room mai betha hua tha yeh room zada bada nahi tha bas letne ki hi jagha thi yaha..

Raj apni aankhen band karta hai aur us ring pe concentrate karte kehta hai..

Raj -"Lilith....?"

Kabhi Raj ki soul us ring ke andar chali jati hai aur uske samne ek ladki jisne bahut tight kapde pehene hue the aur ek singhaasan pe bethi thi uske sar pe 2 seeng the..

Raj jese hi dekhte hai woh apna thuk nigal leta hai kyuki yeh abhi bahut zada kaamuk lag rahi thi aur Raj ko ispe bahut gussa bhi aa raha tha lekin iski khubsurti aur jism dekh kar woh ispe gussa bhi nahi kar pa raha tha..

Chalo ab iske baare mai jaan lete hai ka Raj Earth se gayab ho kar planet Eris pe aaya tha to Raj ki aatma uski body mai nahi thi es ring ke andar aa gayi thi..

Jab Raj apni aankhen kholta hai to usse bas andhera hi andhera dikhai de raha tha..

Raj yeh dekh kar bahut zada dar jata hai aur idhar udhar bhagne lagta hai chillata hai..

Raj -"veeeeerr, maaaaa koi hai mai kaha hu.."

Raj ki aankhon mai aansu the usse kuch samjh nahi aa raha tha woh abhi kaha hai usse esa lag raha tha ku woh mar gya hai..

Kabhi Raj ko ek bahut tez roshni ka ehsaas hota hai aur jab woh samne dekhta hai to waha apne aap ek singhaasan banne laga tha yeh dekh kar Raj hadbate hue khada ho jata hai aur piche hone lagta hai lekin 1 kadam piche lene ke baad Raj hil tak nahi paa raha tha usse esa lag raha tha ki uski body kisi ne freeze kardi hai..

Raj -"aakh.....aakhir yeh s.. sab kya ho raha hai..?"

Kabhi Raj ko singhaasan ke pass se kisi ladki ki awaaz aati hai aur jab Raj waha dekhta hai to waha koi nahi tha..

Awaaz -"yahi hum dono ki zindagi mai likha hai aur ab jo ho raha hai woh hona hi tha.."

Raj -"ko.. kon hai waha samn.. samne aao.."

Raj ke itne kehna hi tha ki us singhaasan pe ek bahut khubsurat ladki prakat hone lagti hai niche se lekr upar tak uska jism particles se bane ja raha tha..

Jese jese us ladki ka shareer bane ja raha tha Raj ke dil ki dhadkan bullet train se tez dhadak raha tha aakhir dhadke bhi kyu na aakhir uska shareer ban to raha tha lekin usne ek bhi kapde nahi pehene hue the woh ek dam nirvastra thi..

Hamaare hero ne to aaj tak porn bhi nahi dekhi thi aur yaha aaj itni khubsurat ladki ko bina kapdo ke dekh kar uske dil ki dhadkan tez hona to normal hi tha..

Ladki muskurate kehti hai..

Ladki -"esa kya dekh rahe ho kabhi kisi ladki ko bina kapdo ke nahi dekha..?"

Raj us ladki ke bolne se apne hosh mai aata hai aur side kai dekhne lagta hai uska dimaag to chalna hi band kar diya tha..

Woh ladki apni singhaasan se uth kar dheere dheere Raj ke pass aane lagti hai esa lag raha tha woh hawa mai chal rahi hai kyuki yaha uske kadmo ki koi awaaz hi nahi aa rahi thi uske baal silver color ke the jo uski kamar tak aa rahe the Raj ko to uske pass aane ka ehsaas tak nahi hota..

Woh ladki Raj ke chehre pe apna ek hath rakhti hai aur badi manmohak awaaz mai kehti hai..

Ladki -"kya baat hai mai acchi nahi dikhti jo apna chehra niche kar liya.."

Raj itne pass se uski awaaz sun kar heraan ho jata aur kab samne dekhta hai to us ladki ka khubsurat chehra thik uske samne hi mojuud tha..

Raj hadbate hue piche hone ki koshish karta hai lekin uski puri body freeze si ho gayi thi..

Us ladki ko Raj ki esi haalat dekh kar bahut maza aa raha tha..

Woh apni hassi kaabu karke kehti hai..

Ladki -"janna nahi chahoge hum abhi kaha hai aur mai kon hu..?"

Raj yeh sun kar turant uski taraf dekhta hai aur puchta usse pehele hi uski nazar uske bahut bade vishaal sthano pe chali jati hai..

Yeh dekh kar us ladki ko bura nahi lagta hai aur woh apne kehti hai..

Ladki -"mera naam lilith hai aur tumhari aatma abhi ussi ring ke andar hai jo us cave mai mojuud thi.."

Raj yeh sunkar heraan ho jata hai aur uske sthano se apna dhyan hata kar uske chehre ki taraf dekh kar kehta hai..

Raj -"kyaaaaaaaaaaaa.....?"

Lilith -"han yaar ab isme itna chillane ki kya baat hai.."

Lilith apne kaan pe hath rakh kar kehti hai..

Raj -"me.. mer.. meri aatma ky.. kya mai mar gya hu..?"

Lilith apne sar pe hath rakh kar kehri hai..

Lilith -"nahi abhi to tum zinda ho bas mai tumhari aatma ko iske andar lekr aa gayi hu.."

Raj yeh sun kar sochta hai aakhir yeh kon hai aur woh ring kya thi..

Raj -"meri aatma ko tum ring ke andar lekr aayi ho lekin kyu.."

Lilith muskurakar kehti hai uske chehre pe muskurahat bahut zada khubsurat lag rahi thi..

Lilith -"tumse baat karne ke liye aur itni si baat pe tum itna chilla rahe ho jab tumhe pata chalega ki tum kaha ho to kitna chillaoge.."

Woh has kar kehti hai..

Raj yeh sun kar apni aankhen chhoti karke puchta hai..

Raj -"ma.. mai kaha hu America ya India se bahar.."

Lilith -"wo.. woh tum abhi prithvi pe nahi ho.."

Raj -"kya ma.. mai earth pe nahi hu to kaha.. kaha hu?"

Lilith gehri saans lekr kehti hai..

Lilith -"us greh pe jispe mai kabhi nahi aana chahti thi lekin meri majboori dekho mujhe yaha waps aana pada.."

Yeh kehte hue usse aankhon mai dukh saaf dikhai de raha tha..

Raj -"mat.. matlb hum hai kaha..?"

Lilith -"Eris yeh bhi prithvi ki tarah hi ek greh hai.."

Raj chilla kar kehta hai..

Raj -"tumhaari himmat kese hui bina mujhse pucha mujhe kisi aur greh pe lekr aane ki.."

Lilith -"mene abhi tumhe bataya yeh meri majboori thi mujhe khud es greh pe kabhi nahi aana tha lekin, shyd meri aur mere saathiyon ki kismat mai yahi duniya likhi hui hai aur mujhe yaha tumhe bhi isliye lekr aana pada kyuki tumhi ek ho jo meri madad kar sakte ho.."

Raj -"mai tumhari madad aur tumhare saathi kon hai.."

Lilith gehri saans lekr kehti hai..

Lilith -"DEMONS..."

Bas yahi sunna baaki reh gya tha lekin kuch esa bhi tha ji abhi baaki tha Lilith aage kehti hai..

"Aur mai demon queen hu.."

Yeh sunkar to Raj ki haalat marne jesi hi gayi thi matlab uske samne jo ladki nangi khadi hui hai woh ek queen hai aur woh bhi shaitanon ki queen

Lilith -"kya hua tumhe..?"

Raj -"tu.. aap mujhe yaha lekr kyu aayi hai plzzz mujhe mere ghar jane dijiye.."

Lilith -"mai tumhe tumhare hi ghar lekr aayi ho.."

Raj ki es baat ka matlab bilkul samjh nahi aata..

Raj -"mat.. matlb kya hai aapka?"

Lilith -"Tum bhi meri tarah Eris se hi ho tumhe ko mujhe shukriya kehna chaiye mai tumhe tumhare greh pe lekr aayi hu.."

Yeh baat sunkar Raj heraani se Lilith ko dekhne lagta hai...

Raj -"ma.. mai yaha se kese ho sakta hu?"

Lilith -"kya tumhe kabhi apni en ability ke baare mai dhyan se socha hai, jesi ability tumhare pass hai wese ability prithvi pe rehne wale insaano ke pass hona namumkin hai...."

Raj yeh sun kar khamosh ho jata hai kyuki es sawaal ka jawaab uske pass bhi nahi tha..

Lilith -"insaan apne matlab ke liye demons ka hadd se zada shikaar karne lage the jabki hum demons apne area mai rehkar shanti se rehte hai aur magicians demons ke magic core ke liye unka hadd se zada shikaar karne lage the.."

Raj -"Demon ka magic core yeh kya hota hai?"

Lilith emotional hokar bata to rahi thi lekin woh es baare mai bhul hi gayi ki es ladke ko magic ke baare mai kuch nahi pata isliye woh usse har ek chij batane lagti hai (mene pehele bata diya hai isliye isse skip karo.."

Raj pura heraan ho gya tha es baare mai jan kar..

Raj -"mujhe magic yeh sab nahi sikhna mujhe bas apni duniya wapas jana hai mujhe prithvi pe wapas bhejo.."

Lilith -"woh tum ab wapas nahi ja paoge yeh meri aatma hai aur jitni bhi mere pass energy thi usse mene tumhe yaha Eris peteleport kar diya, agar tumhe firse prithvi pe jana hai to tumhe meri baaki hisso ko bhi dhundna hoga.."

Raj -"kya.. konse hisse..?"

Lilith -"pehle meri puri kahani jaan lo insaano aur magician ke hadd se zada demons ka shikaar hone ki wajah se mene ek faisla liya tha apne sabhi demons ke sath Eris ko chhod kar ek dusri duniya mai jaane ka lekin agar hum demons Eris se chale jate to magician ko magic cores nahi mil pate jinse unhe magic weapons aur magic core bech sake, isliye har prajati ne hume roka aur us samay ek mahayuddh hua tha jisme ek taraf bas demons aur dusri taraf magician, knights, elfes, har ek sect ke powerful log mojuud the itne logo ke samne hum zada mahino tak nahi tik paye..

woh mahayuddh 6 mahine tak chala tha jisme dono taraf ke croro log maar gaye aur ant mai har ek sect ke powerful leaders, elfe kingdom ke king, human kingdom ke king, har group ke leader ne mujhe charo taraf se gher liya aur meri powers ko 13 alag alag ring mai daal diya jinme se ek ring ke andar meri aatma trap daal di jo abhi tumhare pass hai aur baaki 12 rings ke andar meri taaqatein daal di abhi Eris pe 3 ring hai aur baaki 9 ring alag alag 3 duniya pe rakhi gayi hai meri aatma ke bina mai firse zinda nahi ho sakti thi...

Isliye meri aatma ko prithvi pe rakha gya aur us ring ko koi le na sake isliye us ring ko tumhare khoon se sealed kara gya isliye koi bhi es ring ke pass nahi aa sakta tha shivaay tumhare..."

Raj -"mera..mera khoon se kyu?"

Lilith -"mujhe es baare mai zada nahi pata kyuki kab tak mai seal ho gayi thi..."

Raj -"to mujhe ab tumhari rings dhundni padegi taaki mai wapas prithvi pe ja saku...?"

Lilith -"han ab tumhare pass meri aatma hai isliye tumhe baaki rings ko es ring ke sath milana hoga aur pehli ring ke milne ke baad tum waps prithvi pe teleport ho paoge.."

Raj -"thik hai batao woh ring kaha hai..?"

Lilith -"mujhe kya pata.."

Raj -"tumhe nahi pata..?"

Lilith na mai apna sar hilati hai aur kehti hai..

Lilith -"bas mujhe apni taaqat ke 3 hisso ka Eris pe ehsaas ho raha hai lekin mai yeh nahi bata pa rahi woh hisse kaha hai shyd unki energy seal karo gayi hai lekin woh mera hi ek ansh hai isliye mujhe bas ehsaas ho raha hai.."

Raj -"to ab mai es duniya mai kya karu..?"

Lilith -"tumhe ek magus master banna chaiye unhe us ladaai ke baare mai aur mere hisso ke baare mai bahut kuch pata hoga shyd waha se tumhe kuch mil jaye.."

Raj -"ab yeh magus master kya hota hai..?"

Lilith -"magus master ek group ha jinke samne kisi rajya ke raja ko bhi jhukna padta hai inka kaam logo ko magic sikhana hi hota hai aur unhe guide karna aur tumhare pass jo ability hai usse tum shyd jld hi ek 9 grade magus master ban jao..."

Raj -"matlab meri mistakes dekhne wali ability...?"

Lilith -"han es ability ka rank to mujhe bhi samjh nahi aa raha kya hai aur esi ability shyd hi kisi aur ko mili ho..?"

Raj -"mai bas tumhari ek ring dhundunga uske baad mai kabhi es greh pe nahi aane wala.."

Lilith kuch soch kar han keh deti hai..

Raj -"kya tumhare pass kapde nahi hai..?"

Lilith -"nahi.."

Raj ki aatma Lilith se baat karke us ring se bahar aa jati hai....

Parvesh pariksha kal thi..

Raj abhi us kamre mai betha hua soch raha tha kya kare..

Aur woh Lilith se puchta hai..

Lilith -"tumhe yeh sehar ghum lena chaiye aur kitna ho sake iske baare mai jaan bhi lena chaiye kyuki yeh sab kuch tumhare liye ek dam naya hai.."

Raj ko bhi yeh sahi lagta hai aur woh academy se bahar chala jata hai academy mai sabko Raj bhi ek student lag raha tha jo yaha parvesh pariksha dene aaya tha Raj academy ke bahar aakr ese hi kahi bhi ghumne lagta hai..

Earth..

Mahendra abhi ek lab mai tha aur uske sath puri ek new team thi scientists ki aur es baar usne yeh apni company mai kara tha taaki koi us tak na pahuch sake..

Ek scientists Raj ke khoon ko study kar raha tha aur khoon ko study karke woh bahut zada heraani se Mahendra se kehta hai..

S -"sir yeh khoon insaan ka nahi hai infact yeh khoon bahut zada alag hai es khoon ke andar bahut small amount mai golden particles move ho rahe hai jo human blood mai kabhi nahi hote..."

Mahendra bhi yeh sunkar heraan ho jata hai aur kehta hai..

Mahendra -"agar hum iske khoon ke DNA se ek mutate banaye to woh kitna powerful hoga..?"

En sabhi ko mahendra ke experiment ke baare mai pata tha..

S -"sir hume yeh test karna hoga bina test kare hume kuch bhi nahi bata sakte.."

Mahendra jldi se test karo..

Eris..

Raj ghumta ghumta ek gaanv ke pass aa gya tha yaha sabhi was hi ghum rahe the Raj ne woh token apni pocket mai ek chhote se bag mai daala hua tha..

Yaha alag fruits beke ja rahe the Raj ko chalte chalte ehsaas hota hai ki usse us bag ka ehsaas nahi ho raha..

Raj jab check karta hai to uska woh bag uske piche nahi tha..

Raj -"fuck yaha bhi chori hoti hai.."

[Note - es update mai words mistakes hui hongi please abhi ke liye ignore kar dena abhi bahar hu aur bina dhan se padhe update post kar diya]

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Toh Raj originally Eris se hai...fir woh human toh nhi hai...lekin wahan earth pe humans ke saath kese reh rha tha. Definitely Raj...aage Chalke Spiderman se ab Clark Kent banane wala hai.

(Ek choti se suggestion...jo bhi naye characters aaye unko...1st page mein intro mein add kar do...aur chaihe toh main unko design bhi kar skte hoon)

 

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Majboori...​

6 September 2006...(EARTH)

Aaj bahut tez baarish ho rahi thi aur esa lag raha tha jese aaj bahut bada tufaan aane wala hai lekin kisi ko kuch nahi pata tha aakhir yeh sab ho kya ho raha hai..

Wahi dusri taraf jameen se lagbhag 500 se 600 km andar 2 insaan khade hue the un dono ki hi haalat bahut zada acchi nahi thi aur un dono ka pehnava bhi bahut alag tha..

Woh do insaan jinme se ek dikhne mai 30 se 34 saal ka ladka tha dikhne mai wahi woh ladki ki umar bhi ussi ke aas pass lag rahi thi..

Ladka - "Hume jld se jld isse yaha par chhod kar wapas jana hoga.."

Jese hi usne yeh kaha uske muh se thoda khoon nikalne laga shyd woh abhi kisi ladaai se yaha aaya tha..

Aur woh uske shareer pe mojuud ghavo se pata bhi chal raha tha..

Wahi us ladki ke hath mai ek 1 ya 2 hafte ka baccha tha jiske chehre bahut zada khubsurat aur pyara lag raha tha lekin jis ladki ne usse pakda hua tha uski bhi haalat us ladke jese hi thi..

Ladki - "aap plz isse jldi kijiye mai aur der yaha nahi ruk sakti aur yeh konsi jagah hai hum isse waha bhi rakh to sakte the na fir aap sab ne isse kisi aur duniya mai rakhne ke baare mai kyu socha...?" us ladki ke chehre aur hatho pe bhi khoon laga hua tha lekin usne apne bacche ko apne seene se lagaya hua tha..

Ladka us ladki ki taraf dekhta hai aur usse itna dara hua dekhkar uske dil mai bhi dard bhad..

Ladka -"_________ tum bhi iska jawaab janti ho agar woh saare hisse ek ho jate to hamaari puri duniya tabah wahi tabahi fir se jehlegi aur hum sabne har ek hissa ko ek alag duniya mai rakha hai aur 3 hisse apni duniya mai lekin yeh hissa bahut zada powerful hai kyuki.."

Woh aage kuch bol pata usse pehle hi un dono ko ek bhadi matra mai ek energy mehsoos hoti hai es energy ko mehsoos karte hi ladki ki aankhon mai aansu aa jate hai woh apne bacche ko aur tightly pakad leti hai..

Ladka -"unhe es jagah ke baare mai kese pata chala hume jld hi yeh karna hoga..." yeh kehte hue us ladke ke chehre pe dard aur uski aankhon mai aansu aa gaye the..

Ladki yeh sun kar uske aansu aur tezi se behne lagte hai..

Ladki -"Koi aur rasta hoga na hamaare bacche ko yaha mai nahi chhor sakti.."

Yeh kehte hue bhi uski aankhon se aansu pani ki tarah beh reh the aur woh baccha shyd bahut gehri neend mai tha ya kuch aur kyuki woh esa lag raha tha jese behosh ho..

Ladka -"Agar hume sabki jaan bachani hai to hume yeh karna hi hoga aur jldi hi karna hoga woh sab agar yaha aa gaye to hum hum ek sath itno se ladne ki condition mai nahi rahenge.. " usse bhi yeh nahi karna tha lekin uske pass aur koi rasta nahi tha usse apni duniya ko bachane ke liye apne bete ko yahi issi duniya mai chhodna tha..

Yeh kehte hue woh apne hatho mai thami hui hui ek black ring ko dekhta hai aur ek khoon ki drop jisme thoda sa golden color ke particles the us ring pe daal deta hai jisse woh ring 5 ya 6 min tak chamakne lagti hai..

Jese hi woh blood drop us ring se jud jati hai uska thoda effect us bacche pe bhi hota hai aur uska sundar aur pyara chehre thoda muljha jata hai lekin woh abhi tak apni behoshi mai hi tha..

Ladki jese hi yeh dekhti hai uski aankhon se aansu pani ki tarah behne lagte hai..

Ladka aage badh kar ladki ko aur apne bete ko tightly hug kar leta hai..

Ladka -"Es jung mai croro log maare gaye hai sabki zindagi khtm hui hai ab puri duniya ko bachane ke liye hume apne bacche ko yahi chhodna hoga.." yeh bolte hue uski awaaz kat rahi thi esa lag raha tha jese woh yeh nahi bolna chahta lekin yeh ek majboori thi uski..

Ladki kuch nahi bolti aur us ladke ko aur tightly hug kar leti hai dono ko hi woh energy aur zada feel hone lagti hai..

Ladka -"hum-hume jld hi kahi aur jana hoga woh log es ring ko nahi le payenge ring ke ass pass ka 100m ka radius ab seal ho gya hai.. "

Ladki kuch nahi bolti aur apne bacche ko abhi tak apne seene se lagaye hue thi shyd woh bas ab apne bacche ke sath jitna ho sake utna time bitana chahti thi..

Woh dono jane se pehle ek last baar us ring ko dekhte hai jiske charo taraf us blood drop ki wajah se ek barrier ban gya tha lekin us ladke ke hath mai abhi bhi us jese blood ki 10 drops aur thi..

Ladka us ladki ka hath pakadta hai aur waha se ek dusri jagah teleport ho jata hai..

Un dono ke waha se jane ke thodi der baad hi jameen ke us hisse ke upar se patthar tutne ki awaaz aane lagti hai..

Jese hi woh awaaz kam hoti hai koi chij bahut tez speed mai jameen pe aakr girti hai aur girti hi rehta hai..

Woh sabhi skeletons the aur un sab ki heights kisi giraf jitni thi aur woh bhi hazaaron ki gintiyon mai aur puri ki puri woh gufa skeleton se bhad chuki thi..



(Abhi ke liye mai skeletons ko S1 ya S2 karke denotes karunga..)

Jese hi sab logo ki nazar us ring pe padti hai sab apne ghutno pe aakr us ring ke samne rispect show karte hai..

Aur respect show karne ke baad ek skeleton aage jake jo shyd en sabhi skeletons ka leader tha woh us ring ko lene ke liye aage badhta hai.

Lekin woh aage badh pata usse pehle hi woh us barrier ko touch kar leta hai jiski wajah se uska shareer ek second mai hi dhul ban jata hai us bechaare ko to kuch smjhne aur bolna ka tak samay nahi mila..

Yeh dekh kar sabhi skeletons ek kadam piche hat jate hai..

S1 - "yeh konsa barrier hai itna powerful jo ek Emperor rank me skeleton ko bhi ese dhul bana de?"

Kisi bhi skeleton ke pass iska jawaab nahi tha...

S2 - "hum ring ke bina agar apni duniya mai gaye to.. "

Jese hi yeh sab sunte hai chhup ho jate hai..

S1 -"Yeh magic bhi hum bas abhi hi dhan se use kar sakte the ab hume bhi nahi pata humne agar yeh magic firse kara to hum kaha teleport honge?"

S2 -"us magic ka asar thodi der mai khtm ho jayega hume jld hi kuch karna hoga?"

Un sabhi skeletons ki skins ya kuch nahi tha, tha to bas ek haddi ka dhancha aur yaha mojuud har ek skeletons kisi shehar ko 1 ya 2 din mai khtm rakhne ki taaqat rakhta hai aur us Emperor rank ka leader uska to chhod hi do woh akele 25% duniya ki population ko ek 1 din ke andar khtm kar sakta tha khtm kar sakta tha lekin woh aaj khud dhul ban kar hawa mai ghul gya..

S1 -"jo yaha ring rakhne aaye honge hume unhe dhundna chaiye.. "

S2 -"pehel hi aadhe se zada skeletons unhe pakadne ke liye chale gaye hai lekin woh dono log ____ aur _____ hai.."

Jese hi har ek skeleton un dono ka naam sunta hai unki haddiyon tak mai thodi kanpan hone lagti hai...

S1 -"abhi tak hamaare kitne saathi mare gaye hai?" un dono ke baare mai pata chalne ke baad sabhi ko yeh to pata tha ki woh log jeet nahi rahe honge..

S1 aage apni baat continue karta hai.

S1 -"hume apne sath aur powerful demons ko lekar aana chaiye tha.. "

Koi kuch nahi bolta iske upar..

Wahi dusri taraf us ladka ki haalat pehle se zada kharab ho rai thi aur ab en skeletons se ladne ki wajah se woh aur zada mushkil mai tha usse apni patni aur apne bacche ki jaan bachani thi jiske liye usse en sabhi skeletons ko maarna padta lekin ek jung se ladne ke baad ab uske andar itni taaqat nahi bachi thi aur woh ab mentally and physically dono tarah se weak ho chuka tha physically to aap sabhi ko pata chal hi gya hoga aur mentally isliye kyuki woh apni life ka sabsa bada decision lene wala tha jo shyd majboori nahi hoti to woh kabhi nahi leta..

Wahi woh ladki ek jungle ke pass thi aur yeh ladaai ek jungle ke andar chal rahi thi andhere aur tufaan hone ki wajha se dhan se kuch dikhai nahi de raha tha lekin woh ladki apne bacche ko apne seene se lagate hue bhagti hai taaki woh apne bacche ko koi surakshit jagha chhod sake bhagne ki wajah se paani mai uske paau bahut tez awaaz kar rahe the jo wou skeletons bhi sense kar lete hai aur uske piche aane lagte hai..

Chhhhap.. chhhhap ki awaaz aa rahi thi jab woh pani mai bhag rahi thi..

Baarish padne ke baad bhi woh bacche apni nind se nahi jag raha tha aur ab woh thoda kamzor bhi dikh raha tha..

Ladki us bacche ko ek ped ke niche rakh deti hai aur uske pass hi gaanv se connect ho rahi ek sadak bhi thi ..

Ladki -" beta plz apni maa ka maaf kar do mai ek esi maa hu jo apne bacche ko hi apne aap se duur kar rahi hu plz beta mujhe maar kar de.. "

Woh ladki ghutno ke bal beth kar rote hue yeh sab keh rahi rhi aur uska hath apne bete ke chote aur pyare chehre ke gaalo ko thame hua the...

Aur woh baccha bhi behoshi mai hone ke baavjood apne chhote hatho ko apni maa ke hath pe rakh deta hai..

Shyd woh bhi apni maa aur pita se duur nahi hona chahta tha..

Yeh dekh kar us ladki ke chehre pe ek muskan to aati hai lekin woh muskan jld hi mayusi mai badal jati hai aur woh shyd aakhiri baar apne bacche ke pure chehre ko chumne lagti hai gaalo ko uske chhote aur mulaayam hatho ko...

Us ladki ko apne mind mai ek awaaz sunai deti hai yeh awaaz kisi aur ki nahi ussi ladke ki thi..

Ladka -"jld hi hume yaha se chalna hoga agar inhe hamaara baccha dikh gya to woh isse khtm kare bina yaha se nahi jayenge.. " yeh kehkar woh thodi der rukta aur kehta hai.. " mai aakhiri baar bhi apne bacche se nahi mil saka.... " woh yeh apne man mai keh raha th aur sath mai apni golden sword se ek ke baar ek skeletons ko giraye ja raha tha..

Ladki -"hamaari kismat mai hi apne bete ka sath nahi hai.. "yeh kehte hue woh apne bacche ke chehre pe hath pher rahi thi kabhi usse kuch abhaas hota hai aur woh ek second se bhi kam samar mai apni storage ring se ek sword nikal kar ek skeleton ke aar paar kar diya tha..

Ladke ko jese hi yeh smjh aata ahi woh turant kehta hai..

Ladka -"tumhe jld se jld waha se nikalna hoga aur bhi skeletons waha aate hi honge aur portal bhi jld ji close ho jayega.."

Jese hi ladka yeh kehte hai uske aur us lakdi ke sar ke upar ek chota s kaala badal sa kuch banne lagta hai jiski speed thodi kam thi lekin shyd 4 ya 5 min mai woh kaala badal ek insaan ko jane laayak ho jata..

Ladki -"mai apne bete ko yaha chhod kar kahi nahi ja - woh apni baat puri kar pati usse aur skeletons hona ka sense hone lagta hai..

Ladka -"______ jldi se mere pass aao abhi tum bahut zada weak ho akele itne skeletons se nahi lad paogi.. "

*slash* *slash* woh ladki un dono skeletons ko apni blue sword se ek ek slash se maar deti hai lekin fir woh apni talwaar ko jameen pe tika kar tez tez saanse lene lagti hai aur kab woh thodi normal hoti hai to rote hue kehti hai..

Ladki -"ma..mai..." woh aage kuch nahi bol pati ek nazar apne bacche ko dekhti hai jo abhi bhi gehri neend mai soya hua tha aur bahut masoom lag raha tha aur woh skeletons jinhe abhi us ladki ne maare the dhul ban kar gayab ho jate hai aur wah kuch saman pada hua tha ab jo agar es duniya mai kahi nahi milta tha lekin ladki us saman ko yaha nahi chhod sakti thi isliye woh usse touch karke apni storage ring mai rakh leti hai aur jaha se yaha aayi thi waps apne pati ki taraf jane lagti hai jate hue uske dil mai dard ho raha tha aakhir ek maa apne bacche ko akela kese chhod sakti thi lekin woh bhi kismat ke hatho majboor thi..

18 saal baad (23 October 2024)...

"Nahiiiiiiiiiiiiii..... "


Ek ladka ek bhayank sapna dekh kar apni neend se uthh jata hai jese hi woh uthta hai to uske side mai leti hui ladki bhi uski awaaz sunkar turant uth jati hai..

Ladki -"Raj aap thik to hai na?" yeh kehkar woh us ladke jiska naam Raj tha uska chehre ko apne seene se laga leti hai....

Ladki -"aapne aaj firse wahi sapna dekha jo bachpan se dekh rahe ho aap?"

Raj abhi bhi dara hua tha aur woh apne aap ko normal karne ki koshish kar raha tha aur jab woh thoda normal hota hai to woh aas pass dekhta hai to uske bed ke ass pass red roses ki petals bacchi gayi thi aur pura room candels aur red roses se decorated tha aur uske bed bhi phulo se sazaya gya tha..




Aur ek bahut khubsurat aur pyaari ladki ne usse apni baaho mai pakda hua tha..

Raj ko jese hi yeh ehsaas hota hai woh usse duur ho jata hai..

Raj - "dii please mujhse duur rahiye.. "

Dii matlab Raj abhi apni behen ke sath ek hi room mai suhaagraat mana raha tha..

Woh ladki jiska naam Naina tha usse bahut accha lag raha tha Raj ko apni baaho mai paa kar lekin jhatke se alag hone se woh Raj ko kha jane wali nazaro sed dekh rahi thi lekin fir bhi apne aap ko thoda control karke woh Raj ke chehre pe apna hath rakh kar puchti hai..




Naina -"kya aaj bhi tumhe wahi sapna aaya? jo har din aata tha?"

Raj kuch nahi bolta aur apni nazarein nichi kar leta hai isliye nahi ki woh jawaab nahi dena chahta tha balki isliye kyuki woh uski dii abhi ek silky nighty mai uske pass bethi hui thi aur thoda Raj ke gaal pe hath rakhne ki wajah se woh thodi jhuki hui thi jiski wajah se uska gehra cleavage reveal ho raha tha...

Raj jhatke se waha se uth jata hai aur hadbate hue kehta hai..

Raj -" di.. dii ma.. mai washroom se aata hu.. " yeh kehkar woh apne Washroom ki taraf bhag jata hai wahi Naina apne pati ko ese baccho ki tarah harkat karta dekh uske chehre pe ek pyaari si muskan aa jati hai aur woh wahi bethi apne bhai jo ab uska pati tha uska intezaar karne lagti hai..

Raj hadbate hue bathroom mai aata hai aur washbasin ke samne aakr apna muh baar baar dhone lagta hai taaki agar yeh koi sapna hai to wou es sapne se jldi se jldi uth jaye..

Lekin yeh koi sapna nahi tha usne lagbhag 10 ya 15 baar apne chehre ko pani se dhoya tha ab woh apne chehre ko mirror mai dekhne lagta hai ek 18 se 19 saal ka ladka jiski aankhen blue thi aur chehre bahut dikhne mai bahut zada handsome height 6 foot thi..

Muh dhone ki wajah se abhi woh thoda jhuka hua tha jisse uski shirt bhi thodi kash gayi thi matlab acchi khasi body bhi thi lekin ek chij uske chehre pe acchi nahi lag rahi thi thoda gussa tha aur uska chehre thoda muljhaya hua sa lag raha tha..

Kyuki aaj uski shadi hui thi woh bhi apni diiii se jo usse 2 saal badi thi arre wahi Naina, kabhi uski nazar apne hath mai pehni hui us black ring pe padti hai jisne uski puri zindagi badal ke rakh di thi...

Ab yeh jaana hai ki shadi aur yeh ring hero ki zindagi mai kese aaye to uske liye hum sabko kuch mahine piche jana hoga zada nahi bas 2 mahine piche...And ees story mai love, adventure, action, fight, sab kuch hoga bas intezaar jld hi es story ke update ke sath milenge..

Back in 20 September 2024...

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[Note : Ab shadi kese hui aur ring kese mili uske liye to aage ke updates padhne honge and plz batana kesa laga and 1st update ha agar koi mistake ho to plzz ignore kar dena...]

 

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Awesome update!

Toh Raj originally Eris se hai...fir woh human toh nhi hai...lekin wahan earth pe humans ke saath kese reh rha tha. Definitely Raj...aage Chalke Spiderman se ab Clark Kent banane wala hai.

(Ek choti se suggestion...jo bhi naye characters aaye unko...1st page mein intro mein add kar do...aur chaihe toh main unko design bhi kar skte hoon)

Human jesa dikhta hai uski inner body alag hai aur khoon bhi and uske parents ne usse waha kyu chhoda woh aage pata chal jayega..

1st page pe add kare to hai Konsa reh gya daily update de raha tha to design mai pic main problem ho rahi thi ab dekh kar upload karunga

 

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Kidhar hai update

Kal aayega

 

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Superb update

Amazing bro

Thanks bro...

 

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Kal aayega

intezaar rahega....