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achchi kahani hai 
..umer aur suhan ne love marriage ki hai aur bhagkar alaska aa gaye .
aur unka ek beta bhi hai kabir .
kabir ka sabse achcha dost hai james...
samsher par hamla hua aur uska operation kiya umer ne ,,aur lagta hai samsher aur karishma ko dekhkar umer samajh gaya ki yaha rehna khatre se khali nahi
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par usne to doctor ka mask lagaya tha to usko pehechana kisne ?? .
aur alaska chhodte hi uske ghar gunde type koi aaye..
kisne bataya zoravar ya uske aadmiyo ko umer aur suhan ke baare me ???.
..umer aur suhan ne love marriage ki hai aur bhagkar alaska aa gaye .aur unka ek beta bhi hai kabir .
kabir ka sabse achcha dost hai james...
samsher par hamla hua aur uska operation kiya umer ne ,,aur lagta hai samsher aur karishma ko dekhkar umer samajh gaya ki yaha rehna khatre se khali nahi
..par usne to doctor ka mask lagaya tha to usko pehechana kisne ?? .
aur alaska chhodte hi uske ghar gunde type koi aaye
..kisne bataya zoravar ya uske aadmiyo ko umer aur suhan ke baare me ???.
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achchi kahani hai
aur unka ek beta bhi hai kabir .
kabir ka sabse achcha dost hai james...
samsher par hamla hua aur uska operation kiya umer ne ,,aur lagta hai samsher aur karishma ko dekhkar umer samajh gaya ki yaha rehna khatre se khali nahi
par usne to doctor ka mask lagaya tha to usko pehechana kisne ?? .
aur alaska chhodte hi uske ghar gunde type koi aaye
kisne bataya zoravar ya uske aadmiyo ko umer aur suhan ke baare me ???.
Oh leon bhai. Thenkx. For the coment
Bro jub umer hospital me entar huwa tub usne samne karishm ko khade huwe dekh liya tha
Is liye wo piche ke raste se hospital me gaya tha
Or karishma ne umer ko dekha nai he
Or pata kise chala or wo gunday kon the next update me clear ho jayga
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Thankx naina jiwow... ek aur shandar update..
Super se upar har ek pehlu, har ek mod... Sath hi kirdaaro ki bhumika bhi....
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills writer sahab
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UPDATE -3
Zoravar ko jisne call kiya tha alaska se wo ronak he tha
Umer ne ab khatra moad nahi lena chata tha is liye wo operations karke sidha apne office me gaya tha or jub apna kam khatam karke wo hospital ke piche wale raste se nikal raha tha tub had badi me wo ronak se tak ragaya tha
Or jese hi dono kinazar ek hoi dono shock hogaye lekin umer jaldi se waha se bhag nikla
Ronak jub shock se bahar aya to wo umer ke pich bhag na chata tha lekin ronak ko jaldi se shamsher ko lekar india waps jana chata tha or ek docter ki teem aranga karni thi i
Is liye na chate huwe bi wo umer ke piche bhag na saka or hospital me andar akar nurse se puch kar jis docter ne shamsher la operationon kiya he us docter ke office ke bare me puchne laga to nurse ne kaha dr umer abi apne gher jane ke liye nikal gaye
Dr umer ka name sunte hi ronak ki shakl dekh ne layak thi
Ronak ne puch dr umer kab se yaha kam
Kar rahe he
Nurse ne kaha dr umer yaha 5 salose kam kar rahe he
Wese unki family me kon kon he
Nurse...unki family me dr umer unki wife suhan or unka ek beta he kabir
Wese me jan jansakti hu ap dr umer ke bare me kyu puch rahe he
Ronak wo bus ese hi
Wo kyahe hamre sir ko emergency me india sift karna he to ek dr ke teem ki jarurat he muje is liye puch raha tha
Ronak mane me soch ye soch kar khus ho raha ke the uske suhan didi or jiju thik he or unka ek beta bi he kabir
Ronka apni soch se baher ata he or nurse dusra doctor arang karne ko kehta he or apne ek aadmi ko bula kar kuch kehta he uske bad chal deta he samsher ke paas jo abbi bi behosi ki halat me tha
Ronak shmasher ke bare me koi risk nahi lena chata tha is liye koi dusra docter arange karke india jane ke liye nikal gaya or apne kuch admiyo ko alska me dr umer ke address pata karke unke gher ki talasi lene ko kehta he
Ronak ko pata tha ke umer ne abi tak apna gher kya desh bi chhoad chuka hoga lekin
Usne apne aadmiyo se kaha tha ke gher me se
Koi bi kam ki chij mile use apne pass rakhke
Jub tak ronak ke bheje huwe aadmi umer ke gher tak phoch te umer apni fAmily ke sath nikal chuka tha
Idhar brazil me subho ho chuki thi
Breakfast karne ke bad umer ne kaha me baher taxi arang karta hu tab tak tum log apna samn lekar niche ajao or tum kabir abi jub tak me kahu nahi tab tak james ke sath contact karne ki kosis mat karna thik he
Kabir...thik he papa
Braizl ke fames Rio de Janeiro saher me umer ne kisi or ke names se ek gher kharida tha
Umer ne sub kuch apne emergency ke hisab se sub kuch pehle se sat kar ke rakha huw tha
Kabir apnei family ke sath apne new gher me antry karta he jaha ek holl 2 room ek kichan tha
Kabir apne papa ka dikhaye huwe room me chala jata he or dusre room me kabir ke mumy papa
Room me ate he
Suhan umer se puch ti he
Hub muje bi btaoge ye sub kya ho raha he
Umer.....are santi se pehle beth ne to do
Ha to bat ye he ke kal jis emergency kam ke liye me hospital gaya tha or waha mene ek operations kar raha tha pata he wo kon tha
Suhan ......kon tha
Umer .....tumara bada bhai shamsher khan
Ye name sunte hi suhan chok jati or puch ne lagti he kya
Umer ....ha wo shamsher hi tha use 2 goliya lagi thi or hub wo thik he
Suhan ne jess hi suna ke uske bhai shmsher ko goli lagi thi to rone lagti he
Umer suhan me pas me aakar usko gale laga leta he or uske sher par hat fair ne lagta he
Suhan dekho tumhar bhai ek dum thik he or hub wo khatre se baher he
Me jub hospital se baher nikal raha tha tum me pata he me kis se takra gaya tha
Suhan...Apna Ashu puchte huwe kis se takra gaye the
Umer ....ronak se
Ye nam sunte hi suhan ka chera khil jata he
Or puch ti he kesa he ronak or kesa dikh ta he
Umer...are tumara muh bola bhai ronak hub ek hatta or gabru jawan lag raha he kaffi acchi body sodi bania he usne me to usse takra kar niche hi gir gaya tha
Lakin wo sal jage pe se hila bi nahi
Suhan .....akhir bhai kiska he
Umer .....ha pata he wo to muje dekh kar ese shock hogaya tha jese bhut dekh liya ho
Agar me uske samne or khada rehta to
Pakka mune pakad kar meri haddi pasli ek kardeta
Suhan.....nahi esa nahi karta ronak ek hi to jija he uske tum kese marta wo tumhe
Ha ghuuse me hota to jaru pit jate aap ye khe kar smile karne lagti he
Umer .....ha pata he muje or ye keh kar umer ne suhan ko baho me pakad kar kiss kar ne laga
Idher
Kabir apni socho me hi gum tha ke ye kya ho raha he
Kyu ese hame achank US choad ke yaha ana pada jarur koi badi bat hogi
Muje mom se bat karni padegi
Ye keh kar apne mumy papa ke room ki tarf chal deta he
Or jub wo room me ke darvahe tak phoch ta he to dekh ta he uske mumy papa kiss karne me lage huwe he ye dekh kar kabir muskura deta he or
Waps mud kar apne kamre me aajate he
Bus aaj ke liya itna hi
Zoravar ko jisne call kiya tha alaska se wo ronak he tha
Umer ne ab khatra moad nahi lena chata tha is liye wo operations karke sidha apne office me gaya tha or jub apna kam khatam karke wo hospital ke piche wale raste se nikal raha tha tub had badi me wo ronak se tak ragaya tha
Or jese hi dono kinazar ek hoi dono shock hogaye lekin umer jaldi se waha se bhag nikla
Ronak jub shock se bahar aya to wo umer ke pich bhag na chata tha lekin ronak ko jaldi se shamsher ko lekar india waps jana chata tha or ek docter ki teem aranga karni thi i
Is liye na chate huwe bi wo umer ke piche bhag na saka or hospital me andar akar nurse se puch kar jis docter ne shamsher la operationon kiya he us docter ke office ke bare me puchne laga to nurse ne kaha dr umer abi apne gher jane ke liye nikal gaye
Dr umer ka name sunte hi ronak ki shakl dekh ne layak thi
Ronak ne puch dr umer kab se yaha kam
Kar rahe he
Nurse ne kaha dr umer yaha 5 salose kam kar rahe he
Wese unki family me kon kon he
Nurse...unki family me dr umer unki wife suhan or unka ek beta he kabir
Wese me jan jansakti hu ap dr umer ke bare me kyu puch rahe he
Ronak wo bus ese hi
Wo kyahe hamre sir ko emergency me india sift karna he to ek dr ke teem ki jarurat he muje is liye puch raha tha
Ronak mane me soch ye soch kar khus ho raha ke the uske suhan didi or jiju thik he or unka ek beta bi he kabir
Ronka apni soch se baher ata he or nurse dusra doctor arang karne ko kehta he or apne ek aadmi ko bula kar kuch kehta he uske bad chal deta he samsher ke paas jo abbi bi behosi ki halat me tha
Ronak shmasher ke bare me koi risk nahi lena chata tha is liye koi dusra docter arange karke india jane ke liye nikal gaya or apne kuch admiyo ko alska me dr umer ke address pata karke unke gher ki talasi lene ko kehta he
Ronak ko pata tha ke umer ne abi tak apna gher kya desh bi chhoad chuka hoga lekin
Usne apne aadmiyo se kaha tha ke gher me se
Koi bi kam ki chij mile use apne pass rakhke
Jub tak ronak ke bheje huwe aadmi umer ke gher tak phoch te umer apni fAmily ke sath nikal chuka tha
Idhar brazil me subho ho chuki thi
Breakfast karne ke bad umer ne kaha me baher taxi arang karta hu tab tak tum log apna samn lekar niche ajao or tum kabir abi jub tak me kahu nahi tab tak james ke sath contact karne ki kosis mat karna thik he
Kabir...thik he papa
Braizl ke fames Rio de Janeiro saher me umer ne kisi or ke names se ek gher kharida tha
Umer ne sub kuch apne emergency ke hisab se sub kuch pehle se sat kar ke rakha huw tha
Kabir apnei family ke sath apne new gher me antry karta he jaha ek holl 2 room ek kichan tha
Kabir apne papa ka dikhaye huwe room me chala jata he or dusre room me kabir ke mumy papa
Room me ate he
Suhan umer se puch ti he
Hub muje bi btaoge ye sub kya ho raha he
Umer.....are santi se pehle beth ne to do
Ha to bat ye he ke kal jis emergency kam ke liye me hospital gaya tha or waha mene ek operations kar raha tha pata he wo kon tha
Suhan ......kon tha
Umer .....tumara bada bhai shamsher khan
Ye name sunte hi suhan chok jati or puch ne lagti he kya
Umer ....ha wo shamsher hi tha use 2 goliya lagi thi or hub wo thik he
Suhan ne jess hi suna ke uske bhai shmsher ko goli lagi thi to rone lagti he
Umer suhan me pas me aakar usko gale laga leta he or uske sher par hat fair ne lagta he
Suhan dekho tumhar bhai ek dum thik he or hub wo khatre se baher he
Me jub hospital se baher nikal raha tha tum me pata he me kis se takra gaya tha
Suhan...Apna Ashu puchte huwe kis se takra gaye the
Umer ....ronak se
Ye nam sunte hi suhan ka chera khil jata he
Or puch ti he kesa he ronak or kesa dikh ta he
Umer...are tumara muh bola bhai ronak hub ek hatta or gabru jawan lag raha he kaffi acchi body sodi bania he usne me to usse takra kar niche hi gir gaya tha
Lakin wo sal jage pe se hila bi nahi
Suhan .....akhir bhai kiska he
Umer .....ha pata he wo to muje dekh kar ese shock hogaya tha jese bhut dekh liya ho
Agar me uske samne or khada rehta to
Pakka mune pakad kar meri haddi pasli ek kardeta
Suhan.....nahi esa nahi karta ronak ek hi to jija he uske tum kese marta wo tumhe
Ha ghuuse me hota to jaru pit jate aap ye khe kar smile karne lagti he
Umer .....ha pata he muje or ye keh kar umer ne suhan ko baho me pakad kar kiss kar ne laga
Idher
Kabir apni socho me hi gum tha ke ye kya ho raha he
Kyu ese hame achank US choad ke yaha ana pada jarur koi badi bat hogi
Muje mom se bat karni padegi
Ye keh kar apne mumy papa ke room ki tarf chal deta he
Or jub wo room me ke darvahe tak phoch ta he to dekh ta he uske mumy papa kiss karne me lage huwe he ye dekh kar kabir muskura deta he or
Waps mud kar apne kamre me aajate he
Bus aaj ke liya itna hi
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nice update ..to umer ko ronak ne dekh liya tha isliye umer ko wo desh yaa city chhodna pada ..
ronak ne chehra dekh liya tha umer ka ..
aur ronak muhbola bhai hai suhan ka ....
..ronak ne chehra dekh liya tha umer ka ..
aur ronak muhbola bhai hai suhan ka ....